New Chapter for The Love You Take
The Love You Take
Subversa1,365 Reviews | 6.59/10 (1,365 Ratings, 0 Likes, 977 Favorites )
Now Complete! ~Winner Rd 3 Quill to Parchment for Best Fanon Het, Best AU, Best WIP!~ Hermione is cursed by the Death Eaters, and Dumbledore believes Professor Snape is the only one who can help her and keep her safe. Hermione is 18 years old in this story, but she is still a student.
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OH GOD, NO!!!!!
Oh my gosh! This is terrible! How are they going to get out of this mess- and what a mess it is! Damn Morgan, that bitter old cow. Please don't keep us waiting long! I love this fic!Livvy
OMG! What a horrible situation you've put Severus in! What do you have planned for them Subversa? I can't wait to read!
Oh my! That's just mean to leave it like that *lol* Hope we get to see what happens soon.
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How can Morgen even think that Severus would be a good husband to her now? If her plan works and she gets him, he'll despise her. She's an idiot.
I'll make a deal with you. Kill off Morgen next chapter, and I'll make sure the "Potions groupie" from AUM dies an equally horrible death.
(and if Hermione has to be imprinted on one of those, please, for the love of Merlin, not Wormtail!)
Oh my fucking dog.I'm speechless.
Ack! That is one evil cliffy. I think you should give her Wormtail, she can go back to school with a pet rat and Crookshanks can have light lunch.
Oh, God! This is just horrible. But fantastically written! Go you! How will Snape get out of this one, I wonder?
OMG! How about we kill Morgen instead. I cannot imagine how Severus will get them out of this and yet another evil cliffy. Irish
Agh! You end the suspense only to leave us dangling on a more precarious cliff?Evil. Pure evil.Please update soon and end the agony!
And I thought the previous cliffie was evil!How are they going to get out of this one? I'm sure you have something up your sleeve.Very much looking forward to more, and dreading it at the same time!
oh. no. *is freaking out*Fix soon? Please?
Response from Lariope (Reviewer)
Ok, now that the freaking out has passed:I was thinking how amazing it is that you've gotten me to be attached to a curse. In the lines before the horrible decision Snape's been given, when it just seemed as if the curse would be lifted, I actually felt a sense of loss. Perhaps because I can imagine how Snape would be about that, or perhaps I would have just missed all the lemons? But actually, neither of those things occurred to me in the moment--I just felt sad that they would lose that demand for closeness.Your Hermione is tough as nails, and I really admire her.
oh my! First of all, thank you for the update! But, if the previous cliffhanger was evil, there is no word to describe this one; this cliffhanger is beyond evil..... (so do update soon:-)
I hope Severus will find a way round that last question, how ever much I respect and admire his strength and ability to be the spy he is, I don't think my heart will manage to forgive the betrayal it would be (for me) if he states one of their names. He will get plenty of stars in my book for his remark/question about not wanting other mens leftovers in regards to Morgan though, I liked that one:-))Hermione deserves more than one Order of Merlin, first class for her performance here: She is in a room so close to hell as any person could be, being muggleborn in a room filled with Voldidork and his crazy followers, and at the same time (even if she has been told that he has to act so) the man you love and trust betrays you with words and shows intimate "pictures" of you to his derranged Master. Still she manages to follow up on his performance. One is so often focused upon Severus and his bravity, courrage and loyalty, and he deserves every praise, but while he pays a high price for his own, youthful, stupidity, Hermiones crime is to be born to the wrong parents, having the wrong blood, being to smart and being at the wrong place at the wrong time.
You evil, evil, evil, evil cliffie monster!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Don't leave us hangin!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
[does the Happy Dance of Returning Story Recognition]An update! An update![reads the Shiny New Chapter]Wow, that Morgen is REALLY a bitch, isn't she?[keeps reading]Oh boy, the curse is going to be lifted! But...but ... this is Voldemort, after all. Is there a catch?[refills coffee, keeps reading]Yes there is. OH, what a catch. Why does Subversa DO this sort of thing? Why does she PUT us through this?[does Anguished Dance of the Evil Cliffie]That Subversa is REALLY good.
You blew my mind . I nearly have a hartattack after I read the last sentence . I wrealy , wrealy hope that Severus will solve this situation well. Either solution is pure horrur . I hope Morgan will pool the terible consequence. Plaes update soon .
No, No, NO! Don't leave me hanging like that. You know its not good to do that to somebody!!I can't believe Snape must make a choice like that. And all because of that interfereing twit Morgan. Will she ever accept that Severus does not and never will want her????
Oh, you are cruel! That's two huge, cliff hangers in a row. ::head/desk::I was fully expecting Hermione to offer Voldemort a chance at Harry in exchange for Severus. ::head/desk/head/desk/head/desk::Please, please, please update soon. Please.
AHH!!! Nasty cliffie! I can not wait for an update! I hope that Severus can salvage this and get out of marrying Morgen! Update soon!
WHAT?? YOU HAVE TO STOP HERE!!! ARGH!!I think I'm going to be sick ... oh dear God. This is way way too deep for them to come out alive now ... what else can Severus do now? What else can he say now?*sick* I need smut now. Preferably one that is one-shot and with happy ending. Yeah ...But update quick!! I nearly drop my hot mug of coffee on my lap when I saw the email update alert.
Erm, answering the question the Dark Lord asked (for one should never be so insolent as to not!), I vote for Dolohov, because I don't think that the Dark Lord will actually give her to Dolohov (although he might, which would probably be altogether horrid, even more so than Wormtail, who is more likely to be intimidated by her), but also because Wormtail=ick! and Dolohov . . . well, have you read "Need the Dark"? (It's not hosted here).However, having said that, I still think Snape is going to answer that which is most likely to have her released back into his care.I think the Dark Lord is playing with Morgen, myself.
Evil cliffie! You have a lot of tension in this seen which is very clever considering all the dialogue. This story is a lot of fun. Thanks for writing!
Oh, that's really not good. Excellent twist though.
Amazing chapter as always, but...EVIL CLIFFIE!!!
Oh, that is just so not nice.I am dying from anticipation. This story is wonderful, and it makes me happy every time I read it. It's wonderfully written, and now... the suspense! Please update, soon!