New Chapter for The Love You Take
The Love You Take
Subversa1,365 Reviews | 6.59/10 (1,365 Ratings, 0 Likes, 977 Favorites )
Now Complete! ~Winner Rd 3 Quill to Parchment for Best Fanon Het, Best AU, Best WIP!~ Hermione is cursed by the Death Eaters, and Dumbledore believes Professor Snape is the only one who can help her and keep her safe. Hermione is 18 years old in this story, but she is still a student.
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Wanting to see Voldie, Bella and Morgen get into a threesome, that'll teach the lot of 'em! Please rescue Severus and Hermione soon!
WHAT?! It REALLY ends here? OHMYGOD! This is the Mother-of-All-Evil-Cliffies! Nooooooooo! You are killing me... Merlin's white beard! I wish I could have an Elder Wand and RE-kill the Dark Lord. Ooh, I am squirming in my seat, refraining from eating all my nails to see what Snape and Hermione will have to go through next!
That was brilliant writing!
I think I have been holding my breath for the last five minutes! OH MY OH MY How is he going to get out of this????? What a brillant set you have created with Voldy!! I am terrified completely!
No words could possibly describe my reaction when Snape appealed to Voldemort, man to man. You, however, I easily announce, are fantastic.
SO, SO, GOOD!!!evil, evil, cliffhanger :(*panting for next chapter*
You hate us, don't you? You and Morgan are both evil... oh wait, if I want you to update soon I shouldn't say that (even if it is true).Um, wonderful story, amazing plot twists, my absolute favorite story ever. More soon, please? PLEASE!
Oh! What an evil cliffhanger! Great chapter, I am looking forward to more! Thank you.
Another extraordinary cliffie! How on earth are they going to get themselves out of this pickle? And when will Morgen get her just deserts?
Amazing storytelling, as always.
Severus has GOT to find a way to finagle his way into being the imprint receiver! Either of the two options totally disgust me and probably Hermione too. It would be too cruel to do that to her. So work your author-magic and get those two together already! Great story by the way, sorry for not reviewing earlier.
OMG.....................must remember to breathe!That was brilliant, I was on tenterhooks the whole chapter. How on earth do you do it? Poor Hermione..............Wormtail or Dolohov..........Morgen needs a blooming good slap!I bow down to your brilliance.
Oh no! *screams and swoons*How could you! *kicks painfully in the shins* I must admire you for the wonderfully implemented plot twist. . . but I'm still mad at you! *kicks again* Okay. . . maybe I'm not that mad. . . thank you thank you thank you thank you so so so so so much for the amazing chapter! But please, please, please please please PLEASE update soon! I don't think I can live, thinking about that. . . *sobs*~Katie
Yay! an update. How can Severus get himself out of this? You weave a wonderful tale here. Keep up the great work.
WHAT A HORRIBLE PLACE TO LEAVE US HANGING!!!!!! Oh my gosh, this is an amazing story.There aren't words, so I won't try to tell you how good this is, but you have GOT to take mercy on us and get us OFF the edge of this cliff:)Superbly done,Fizzabella
*in terror* I am on tenterhooks wondering what's going to happen now. This has to be the most Evil Cliffie you've graced us with to date! Hope our wait for answers won't be long. Hermione still is wearing the Nexus is she not? Can't Voldy and the others see it? I keep thinking it's the key for her and Severus getting out of this pickle alive and whole.
No no no no no no no! Argh, what a cliffie! This is Voldie's idea of a joke, right? Yes? *bites nails*~Kribu
holy moly this chapter has left me breathless! what will happen next? i can hardly wait. this story has been such a wonderful compilation of hotness, touching emotion and twisty plot. thanks so much!
Voldemort seems eager to have Severus profess that he cares for Hermione. I wonder what he would do if he heard that admission. Would he let Severus keep Hermione or would he still try to hurt Severus through Hermione? I hope that Hermione won't be upset by the way that Severus is treating her. After all, he doesn't really have a choice. I am quite eager to hear Severus's response to the question posed by Voldemort.
AHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!! No! This cannot be happening!......... *sobbs* I loved the chappie, though...
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAUUUUGH!Oh, this is the cruelest cliffie ever!
OMG! You're getting way too good at writing these cliff-hangers. I only hope you have more time to spend on this story because I'm desperate to know what happens next.
Wow...poor Severus...got to read the next chapter!
Fantastico, as usual! Brava, Subversa!Am I remembering correctly that Hermione would need to be in continuarl contact and with close and easy access to "whomever" she was imrpinted upon? Which is what made Severus so very convenient---he was right there, in the school, where Hermione was as well. And I remember that the DL was VERY unhappy that his original goal, of humiliating Dumbledore, via Hermione, was thwarted, and that Severus did a "save" by convincing the DL of the "usefulness" of his (ahem) position now with Hermione, and the access it gave him into continued spying on the Order and on Harry, as well as assuring him of Dumbledore's trust. "If" Hermione is imprinted on either of the others, then they would either have to be present with her continually at Hogwarts (impossible!), or, she would be kept in some other location as their sex-slave and never return to Hogwarts. However, if Hermione is lost, then Severus' position as a spy is destroyed as well--right?And of course the DL knows this, and doesn't (apparently) want Severus as yet to reveal his 'true' loyalites and retire from his position as the DL's spy at Hogwarts.So....is all this just some sort of odd....test?....from the DL?And whom, exactly, is he testing? Severus? Morgan? Hermione?Can't wait for more of your EXCELLENT writing! Please hurry and don't make us wait as long as last time!
aaaagggghhhhh!!!! that was absolutely THE MOST EVIL CLIFFIE EVER! *places gaudy crown on subversa's head* please don't make us wait too long for the next! PLEEAAASSEEEE!!! okay, aside from that, i loved that hermione was able to behave so well under all that pressure. of course, we expect that from severus, but it was interesting and excruciating to have his internal dialog as it all transpired. and - i can't wait until that b*tch morgen gets what's coming to her, because she sure has earned it. in short, excellent as always. and i repeat - please please please update soon!!!
oh my! the drama! The thought of Hermione with either Dolohov or Wormtail, I have to say, is quite sickening. Especially Wormtail. Ick.However, I cant see Severus talking his way smoothly out of this one.But this is Snape we are talking about here. Im waiting eagerly for another update!
OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!how could you end with a cliff like that?!terrible terrible tease!!!!you're going to post soon, aren't you???anyway....Morgen is sooo going to be ass-kicked!I hate her, even if I find the D.Lord a bit stupid: this is the 3°time he favours one of his servants...and she isn't all that special either. How come he calls Severus everytime she goes to cry bloody murder to Him???Godd job all the same...just please, don't make us wait so much like last time, ok????^_^