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The Love You Take
Subversa1,365 Reviews | 6.59/10 (1,365 Ratings, 0 Likes, 977 Favorites )
Now Complete! ~Winner Rd 3 Quill to Parchment for Best Fanon Het, Best AU, Best WIP!~ Hermione is cursed by the Death Eaters, and Dumbledore believes Professor Snape is the only one who can help her and keep her safe. Hermione is 18 years old in this story, but she is still a student.
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Ohh, Ohh, Ohh!Wonderful next chapter!To have Hermione deal with so much trauma and turmoil and then close the chapter on such a gentle scene...Genius!I can't wait for more.
Response from Subversa (Author of The Love You Take)
It has been a tough few chapters, hasn't it? I'm so glad you're enjoying it, Shanana - thanks!
Response from Subversa (Author of The Love You Take)
It has been a tough few chapters, hasn't it? I'm so glad you're enjoying it, Shanana - thanks!
OMG! Great turn around and wonderfully action packed chapter. I am panting!So HG was impacted by the death of Bellatrix. HMMM that's interesting. Morgan is in deep doo-doo. Wonder what is going to happen to her. (replace her, perhaps?)
Response from Subversa (Author of The Love You Take)
*pants with you*It was a wild chapter. Battles are always hard to write ... for me, at least. Morgan is indeed in deep doo doo with the Dark Mod Lord. More to come soon, Drox, and all questions will eventually be answered!
Response from Subversa (Author of The Love You Take)
*pants with you*It was a wild chapter. Battles are always hard to write ... for me, at least. Morgan is indeed in deep doo doo with the Dark Mod Lord. More to come soon, Drox, and all questions will eventually be answered!
w0w. That was amazing. I cannot wait for more!
Response from Subversa (Author of The Love You Take)
Thanks! More to come soon.
Response from Subversa (Author of The Love You Take)
Thanks! More to come soon.
A response to RedOrchid's comment about him calling Hermione 'petal' - it is a regional endearment (North Derbyshire?) that might easily slip out of the mouth of someone from a fairly humble background when under stress. Severus is (we presume) a northerner, as am I, and I know that despite my middle-class parentage and academic occupation I get thoroughly regional under the influence of alcohol. I'm sure that post-battle stress works the same way!
Response from Subversa (Author of The Love You Take)
Wow, I love it when I luck into something real! A regional endearment, eh? I think I was inspired by the 2005 movie version of Pride & Prejudice, in which Mr Bennett calls Mrs Bennett "blossom." Good to know,
Response from Subversa (Author of The Love You Take)
! Thanks!
Response from Subversa (Author of The Love You Take)
Wow, I love it when I luck into something real! A regional endearment, eh? I think I was inspired by the 2005 movie version of Pride & Prejudice, in which Mr Bennett calls Mrs Bennett "blossom." Good to know,
Response from Subversa (Author of The Love You Take)
! Thanks!
That would make an excellent film-scene. I'm glad to see this updated (and Bellatrix getting hers!).
Response from Subversa (Author of The Love You Take)
It would have been an exciting film scene, but would have been over so quickly! It takes so much longer to tell than to do.Thanks!
Response from Subversa (Author of The Love You Take)
It would have been an exciting film scene, but would have been over so quickly! It takes so much longer to tell than to do.Thanks!
Ohhhhh. Now that was a chapter worth waiting for. I can't wait to see what the Dark Lord does with Morgen.And poor Hermione. I love how Severus calls her "Petal", though.
Response from Subversa (Author of The Love You Take)
Thanks, Peppermint! I'm glad you didn't mind the wait too much. More to come soon!
Response from Subversa (Author of The Love You Take)
Thanks, Peppermint! I'm glad you didn't mind the wait too much. More to come soon!
I surmise that the curse on Hermione broke with Bella's death...So glad to see a new chapter. It's been a while!
Response from Subversa (Author of The Love You Take)
Thanks for the note! The new chapter is already being written, and may answer some questions - so, more to come soon.
Response from Subversa (Author of The Love You Take)
Thanks for the note! The new chapter is already being written, and may answer some questions - so, more to come soon.
Great stuff! I had wondered about exactly what Snape argued for - how Hermione could possibly be handed over to someone else without it reflecting badly on him (even if Dumbledore would probably just shrug and talk of necessary losses), so I was glad to see his line of argument, here.I didn't expect Bella's death, specially by Morgen's wand - a bit of an oops, there! The sharp pain Hermione experienced when it happened makes me curious though, the timing seemed too precise for that to be a random coincidence.Looking forward to more! ~Kribu
Response from Subversa (Author of The Love You Take)
Thank you for approving Snape's line of argument; SubHub and I worked on that to make it creditable. Yes, Morgen effed up royally, I'm afraid, when she was honestly trying to help, for once.More to come soon, I think!
Response from Subversa (Author of The Love You Take)
Thank you for approving Snape's line of argument; SubHub and I worked on that to make it creditable. Yes, Morgen effed up royally, I'm afraid, when she was honestly trying to help, for once.More to come soon, I think!
Absolutely brilliant!!! After so much high tension, hight strung emotion to end it with Snape's comments of "Well played" and "Ah, petal" - To have it brought down so gently and so neatly while still maintaining Hermione's vulnerability and honoring her trauma but keeping the comments true to your Snape... So rarely seen and (to barrow the phrase from our dear Severus) well played. Did I mention that this was an absolutely brilliant chapter?What wonderful transition and movement on the pathos. Congratulations and you truly deserve to take a bow.P.S.Will we be getting a peak at Grandmother Price's reaction to the evening event?
Response from Subversa (Author of The Love You Take)
Thank you, love! I felt that the last three paragraphs were the most important in the chapter, in order to convey the closure and the tone I wanted. Your insightful comments soothe the writer's soul, I promise you!I have begun writing chapter the next, and more than that I will not say of what is to come!*takes bow cuz I can*
Response from Subversa (Author of The Love You Take)
Thank you, love! I felt that the last three paragraphs were the most important in the chapter, in order to convey the closure and the tone I wanted. Your insightful comments soothe the writer's soul, I promise you!I have begun writing chapter the next, and more than that I will not say of what is to come!*takes bow cuz I can*
Ugrh. I hate it when he calls her 'Petal'. It just puts a big neon OoC sign over his head for me. Other than that, loved the chapter. Great action, smooth-talking Snaped, and you killed off Bellatrix! Yey you! Seriously great work.
Response from Subversa (Author of The Love You Take)
Thanks so much! I do love me some smooth-talking Snape ;)
Response from Subversa (Author of The Love You Take)
Thanks so much! I do love me some smooth-talking Snape ;)
Wow, really great chapter. I have been thinking about an update to this story for about a week and even reread the last chapter in preparation. This was even better than everything I had expected and I'm already looking forward to the next chapter.Great work!!gab
Response from Subversa (Author of The Love You Take)
Hi, Gabi! Wow, that's terrific praise for a writer to read! It pleases me more than you know to think that you're pondering the story between updates. Thank you so much for your support!
Response from Subversa (Author of The Love You Take)
Hi, Gabi! Wow, that's terrific praise for a writer to read! It pleases me more than you know to think that you're pondering the story between updates. Thank you so much for your support!
Ah, wonderful! Not only did Severus get Hermione out of this predicament, but Morgan backed herSELF into an (I hope) inescapable corner! Hurray! Couldn't happen to a nicer B****!Let me get this straight---Hermione felt a piercing pain---when BELLATRIX died? Hmmm.....Ho-kay....so when are we going to find out (iow, who's going to tell Hermione) how one "activates" the Nexus for her to make clear her Choice of the wizard she wants to be with? (I have a feeling that will be very necessary, very soon...)
Response from Subversa (Author of The Love You Take)
I am grinning like a fool, my dear. Nothing makes an author happier than when a reader remembers a detail from chapters back and mentions it - especially a story that's been a WIP for ten months, with sometimes long stretches between updates!Thanks for the note, CountryMouse! More to come soon - and perhaps some of your questions will be answered :)
Response from countrymouse (Reviewer)
You're most welcome, Subversa my dear! My husband tells me I never forget anything, but he's wrong, of course---I can remember things like details in stories, and forget to turn off the stove where I left water boiling for my coffee (sheesh). Don't know if that is encroaching Alzheimer's or just the "absent-minded proferssorin" I've always been...I didn't want to be "too" detailed, though it is SO tempting to be predictive and say, "Does this clue and this clue and this clue mean THIS is where you're story's going???", but I'll try to curb my impatience and not ruin everyone's enjoyment by attempting to run ahead of your spinning out of the tale in your own way and time. I do LOVE your writing!
Response from Subversa (Author of The Love You Take)
I am grinning like a fool, my dear. Nothing makes an author happier than when a reader remembers a detail from chapters back and mentions it - especially a story that's been a WIP for ten months, with sometimes long stretches between updates!Thanks for the note, CountryMouse! More to come soon - and perhaps some of your questions will be answered :)
Response from countrymouse (Reviewer)
You're most welcome, Subversa my dear! My husband tells me I never forget anything, but he's wrong, of course---I can remember things like details in stories, and forget to turn off the stove where I left water boiling for my coffee (sheesh). Don't know if that is encroaching Alzheimer's or just the "absent-minded proferssorin" I've always been...I didn't want to be "too" detailed, though it is SO tempting to be predictive and say, "Does this clue and this clue and this clue mean THIS is where you're story's going???", but I'll try to curb my impatience and not ruin everyone's enjoyment by attempting to run ahead of your spinning out of the tale in your own way and time. I do LOVE your writing!
Yea! The evil witch is dead! One of them at least... but Voldemort probably won't let Morgen live much longer after what she did to Bella... What a shame that would be. Snape really is a smooth-talker. Good thing for both him and Hermione in this case. Love this fic! Looking forward to the next!
Response from Subversa (Author of The Love You Take)
Buh-bye, Bellatrix. Nope, not sorry to see her go! I have to agree that Voldie is gonna be a bit miffed that Morgen killed his sycophant.You have to admire Snape and his smooth-talking ways. Bella always hated him for talking his way out of stuff - he's a slippery character.Thanks for the support, Aura!
Response from Subversa (Author of The Love You Take)
Buh-bye, Bellatrix. Nope, not sorry to see her go! I have to agree that Voldie is gonna be a bit miffed that Morgen killed his sycophant.You have to admire Snape and his smooth-talking ways. Bella always hated him for talking his way out of stuff - he's a slippery character.Thanks for the support, Aura!
Powerful chapter. I liked how everything was described from Hermione's point of view. I'm also wondering if something happened to Hermione when Bellatrix died. (That, by the way, was a shocker). Were they connected in some way by the curse? Is Hermione free of it? Looking forward to finding out.
Response from Subversa (Author of The Love You Take)
I'm so glad you thought it was a powerful chapter! I try to alternate their points of view, but it doesn't always work out that way for me. Thank goodness you found it shocking that Bellatrix died - I don't think anyone else has much noticed it! There will be more to come soon. Thank you!
Response from Subversa (Author of The Love You Take)
I'm so glad you thought it was a powerful chapter! I try to alternate their points of view, but it doesn't always work out that way for me. Thank goodness you found it shocking that Bellatrix died - I don't think anyone else has much noticed it! There will be more to come soon. Thank you!
My goodness, what an ordeal for Hermione to endure! As always, exceptionally well written and worth all the accolades it receives.
Response from Subversa (Author of The Love You Take)
It really was a Terrible, Horrible, No Good, Very Bad Day for poor Hermione! Thank you for the lovely compliment.
Response from Subversa (Author of The Love You Take)
It really was a Terrible, Horrible, No Good, Very Bad Day for poor Hermione! Thank you for the lovely compliment.
Well I was almost sure Severus would argue his way out of Morgan's set-up, but I was still nervous. Nice twist getting rid of Bellatrix and saving Tonks at the same time. I'm crossing my fingers in hopes that Voldemort will put Morgan under the compulsion as his own sex toy seeing that she killed off compulsion-cursed Bellatrix and I can't think of a better way to punish her! She'd be properly humbled (and horrified) and would stop lusting after Severus. Please?
Response from Subversa (Author of The Love You Take)
It's a fabulous idea, Ellie, truly! But since Voldie pretty much has to give over his "duties" to Nagini ... because he's no longer a "man" in the traditional way ... I can't imagine he could BEAR having Morgen desiring him 24/7.
Response from Subversa (Author of The Love You Take)
It's a fabulous idea, Ellie, truly! But since Voldie pretty much has to give over his "duties" to Nagini ... because he's no longer a "man" in the traditional way ... I can't imagine he could BEAR having Morgen desiring him 24/7.
Whew! At last I can exhale!Oh, I SO hope Morgen takes the rap for Bella's murder.
Response from Subversa (Author of The Love You Take)
*passes oxygen mask*I don't think Voldie is gonna so happy with her, do you?*evil smile*
Response from Subversa (Author of The Love You Take)
*passes oxygen mask*I don't think Voldie is gonna so happy with her, do you?*evil smile*
very very good. Thanks.
Response from Subversa (Author of The Love You Take)
Thank you!
Response from Subversa (Author of The Love You Take)
Thank you!
I loved the action in this chapter, and I especially loved the last few lines. You've managed to convey so much emotion into that last bit -- amazing. Fantastic job!
Response from Subversa (Author of The Love You Take)
Thanks, Chrissy. I really wanted him to show her some tenderness after her horrible ordeal. I appreciate the note!
Response from Subversa (Author of The Love You Take)
Thanks, Chrissy. I really wanted him to show her some tenderness after her horrible ordeal. I appreciate the note!
Morgen gonna be in trouble Haha! the bitch deserves it. Mind you as a character she is brilliant! Great chapter, and the last bit... so sweet. :)
Response from Subversa (Author of The Love You Take)
I love how much you all HATE Morgen - it makes my heart sing. *evil smile* I loved the last bit; I melt when he calls her "petal". Thank you!
Response from Subversa (Author of The Love You Take)
I love how much you all HATE Morgen - it makes my heart sing. *evil smile* I loved the last bit; I melt when he calls her "petal". Thank you!
i was okay until "ah, petal," and then i teared up myself. that was so intense, i hardly know what to say. i almost (almost!) felt sorry for morgen when i thought she might suffer voldy's wrath, but she very quickly helped me to get over it. and i guess it's good i'm over it, because i suspect the wrath will be even worse after this mess. mostly, i'm just relieved that they got out of there more or less okay!
Response from Subversa (Author of The Love You Take)
It took a long time to work out the battle in my mind, but I knew about "ah, petal" all along. I'm so very glad that I kept it in, for it was definitely a hit with the readers. Thanks for the support, kitty!
Response from Subversa (Author of The Love You Take)
It took a long time to work out the battle in my mind, but I knew about "ah, petal" all along. I'm so very glad that I kept it in, for it was definitely a hit with the readers. Thanks for the support, kitty!
I love Severus's comment to Wormtail, and the way you handled the battle was brilliant:)Superbly written, I salute you:){{hugs}}Fizzabella
Response from Subversa (Author of The Love You Take)
I was pleased with Severus' snide comments to Dolohov and Wormtail - thank you!
Response from Subversa (Author of The Love You Take)
I was pleased with Severus' snide comments to Dolohov and Wormtail - thank you!
Wow, an amazing chapter. What was that blinding pain? Did Hermione send that magic wave, or did Snape? And this will do for Morgen, I think. Yay!
Response from Subversa (Author of The Love You Take)
Hermione had no wand, and was too weak, I think to do wandless magic. She felt Severus casting spells; the spell that knocked Tonks off her feet and saved her life was cast by him. Thanks!
Response from Subversa (Author of The Love You Take)
Hermione had no wand, and was too weak, I think to do wandless magic. She felt Severus casting spells; the spell that knocked Tonks off her feet and saved her life was cast by him. Thanks!
Anonymous
Bella -- mothballs and ambergris. That makes me want to vomit.
Excellent chapter. I am feeling so disgustingly victorious right now about Morgen... I cannot wait to see what befalls that conniving little wench. But what about the compulsion? You're making us wait until next chapter? (perhaps because she has to brush her teeth first. I understand)
Author's Response: (perhaps because she has to brush her teeth first. I understand)
You're *killing* me. Hee!
Geez, and I thought that last cliffy was evil. You just took evil it to new heights. I hope more is coming really soon.