New Chapter for The Love You Take
The Love You Take
Subversa1,365 Reviews | 6.59/10 (1,365 Ratings, 0 Likes, 977 Favorites )
Now Complete! ~Winner Rd 3 Quill to Parchment for Best Fanon Het, Best AU, Best WIP!~ Hermione is cursed by the Death Eaters, and Dumbledore believes Professor Snape is the only one who can help her and keep her safe. Hermione is 18 years old in this story, but she is still a student.
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Now that you have come back to this again, albeit slowly (damn your other obligations!), I have decided to go back to the beginning and re-read this wonderful piece, hoping to take enough time for there to be more new stuff by the time I get back there.I apologize for not having started to review as I was reading (though I may have done so on Ashwinder, I find no evidence of my previous visit here). Your writing is lovely, rich, and nuanced, and quite erotic, as well. And this is a great beginning to what I already know is a terriic piece.Looking forward to the return visit, and to more good stuff to come!
You have an awesome imagination. I hope something wicked happens to morgen. Evil woman makes the rest of us look bad. I have a feeling that hermione is going to be on the brink of needing and severus won't be able to help her. i hope i am proved wrong.. Hi SubHub (waves)
the Prince boys sound almost like the Beatles *g* . I like the verve of Madam Prince; she's much more spirited than her daughter. I know I wish I had a ladys-maid house elf!!! Oh oh--the Nexus is trouble. That Morgen bitch sounds like she looks too much like Lily Evans. *grr*
it's a good sign for the two of them that hermione's memories show both of them in non-sexual activities predominantly, that she sees them as a viable couple worth much much more than their undeniable sexual chemistry. Plus her mistletoe med gift idea is very thoughtful and loving.
Hermione thinks it's a good thing that she's attracted to Snape w/out the compulsion, but he doesn't sound too sure (characteristically). *sigh*
Excellent!! Love Scampy. Love Morgan getting put in her place.Great suspense.I can't wait for more.
OMG! That is such an evil cliffee, how could you!Brilliant chapter, please update soon!!
OMG! How can you leave it there. How the hell is he going to get them out of this one? Fantastic chapter. I love that Scampy says that master knows now ;-)
Sweet!
ok I'm ready for Sev to take Volly out -- if he tries to lay one skinny bony finger on Hermoine and then Hermoine can scratch out Morgen's eyes!
I LOVE that he took up for her too!!!
Just curious did you do any research for the desk scence? Sounds all to very real.
margan is sooo perfectly biatchy! loving this story and i look forward to more. thank so much. ps i love those shoes!
Go, Hermione! It was enjoyable to see her put Morgen put in her place. I love Snape's grandmother in this. She's quite formidable, but likeable. Now, about that summons...
Damn that Morgen! Brilliant chapter, thank you!
Bloody brilliant!Morgen is a bitch who needs to be taught a serious lesson by Hermione................she should have just hexed her."Shoes on or off?" - sheer brilliance.Evil cliffee though!
Morgen is definitely unhinged. Although, I was expecting her to pull some stunt. I can't wait to see what happens next.
uh oh..... god I hope this is resolved soon! aarg! more story!
‘Scampy knows her business, Miss,’ Hell yes Scampy is not to be trifled with. I wonder if she has met Nanny? I think they would get along well. 10 points to you for giving John’s girlfriend a lovely witchy name. Elspeth! I giggled several times during this chapter: when Tiberius moved out of hexing range in the parlor before dinner, Hermione asking Severus if he wants her shoes on or off etc… What a cliff hanger subversa! IMPERIO: post the next chapter today!
Morgan really seems to have gone off the deep end this time. Cant the silly cow realise she has been beaten for good and all? I can only hope Severus has an ace up his sleeve.
oh my God!!!!how could you think to stop there!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!POST ANOTHER CHAPTER AT ONCE!!!!!!pleeeeease....you're the worst writer in the world and I hate you....kidding!!I've loved this story from the start and each chapter was a new perspective in the complicated reletionship between Snape and Hermione. I didn't really appreciate the V.Krum part, and I despise Morgen even more, but how could Severus fail to prevent something like that??it was clear the ungrateful bitch was planning something!!!anyway, I really hope you'll have time enough to finish the next chapter as soon as possible...say...next week?good luck with your writing^_^
I was cheering on Hermione for winning the cat fight, but Morgen most certainly couldn't let that rest, now could she. Whoa, that woman is giving Bellatrix a run for her money. And VERY EVIL CLIFFIE! Update soon, oh please!
Well Morgen is a stupid little thing, isn't she? How many times before she learns Voldemort does not work for her?You are delightful. A most depraved premise becomes, in your hands, a very delicate, and even classy (hee!) story about realistic emotions. The curse of course both brings them together and holds them apart, but I love how expressively it performs that function. Hermione's first experience with sex is extreme, of course, but it's also, on some level, fundamentally normal. We feel consumed and compelled by our first experiences, and it is often a such difficult journey to learn how to combine sex and emotion into a healthy relationship.So I think that old Grams hit the nail on the head. Hermione's growth and maturity really resonates with me. It makes each of her victories over Morgen successively more satisfying, the distinction between them ever more marked. Thank you for such a lovely story! I cannot wait to see what Voldemort does. It should be Snape's pov, right? Such a treat that will be!
I'm loving you for updating and hating you for the cliff hanger all at the same time. Can't wait for more!
Finally, an update to one of my favorite stories, and there's a cliffie?!?!?! Brilliant as always and now I'm on the edge of my seat. I can't wait for the next chapter!
LOL sneaky Slytherin, one way of winning a bet and all while he was satisfying Hermione.. very clever!
What a masterful way to end a chapter. And I just adore Scampy! This story just gets better and better (and it was outstanding to begin with!)!! Thank you! :)