New Chapter for The Love You Take
The Love You Take
Subversa1,365 Reviews | 6.59/10 (1,365 Ratings, 0 Likes, 977 Favorites )
Now Complete! ~Winner Rd 3 Quill to Parchment for Best Fanon Het, Best AU, Best WIP!~ Hermione is cursed by the Death Eaters, and Dumbledore believes Professor Snape is the only one who can help her and keep her safe. Hermione is 18 years old in this story, but she is still a student.
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Yay! Hermione gets a backbone! LOL Can't wait to read the next chapter!
You have created a such a rich wonderful story for these two - writing them so well so bloody well ...I will have to again collect myself from the liquid form I have become again and again reading your wonderful story ...I am SOO glad you started this story and ran head long into this delightful world!
His entering her mind like that was the single most erotic thing I've ever read... I literally jumped back in my chair!
ok cat is out of the bag will serveus fight or flee now i am waiting to see i am fast becomming engrossed in this whole story you have but will it have a happy ending i sure hope so
and what is with the mirror it shows your hearst desire will sev come clean about his feelings
sigh. . . . . . update soon please!!
Wonderful story! Thank you for telling it. I really enjoy your command of language, and appreciate your attention to the smallest detail. Interesting plot, too.
Just wondering, though - when are Hermione and Prof. Snape going to start working on getting rid of the curse? No matter how much in love she is (they are?), it has still taken away her free will.
Isn't there a saying something like "becareful what you wish for (look for in this case!) ...because you may just find it."
he loves her = mirror; she loves him = duhhh...
You weave a wonderful web with your words, that bewitch the minds and ensnare the senses of your humble readers.
you are a wonderful story teller...yes- you should be paid; re-read all your super reiews!
Oh! I can hardly wait to see how he reacts to that revelation. Thank you for another wonderful chapter!
I just had to read this chapter again. It's nice to see Hermione exerting herself and learning to negotiate with Severus. I wonder why Severus performed Legilimens to begin with, was he looking for what happened between Hermione and Krum?I'm way too fond of this story, and I hope your muse will continue to flow and there'll be many more chapters to come.
Awwww, why'd you have to end it right there!?
It was really good, though. I'm glad they both worked out their differences, and that Severus finally got those fluffy pink socks off his floor. I would have been ashamed of them, and I have been known to wear fluffy socks of my own.
Thank you!
It was wonderful!
~Katie
Arrrrg! Cliffie! Oh, so evil!
Tell Severus that he had better not be rash when he responds
to Hermione’s newly-discovered feelings. :( As always, it was a great chapter.
it is so like Severus to try and take avantage of Hermione. He wanted to know her mind and now, i'm sure he knows more than he would like... But how will they cope with this new revelation (espacially Severus who is so determined to keep things unemotional)?
this chapter was really great, update soon please
NOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!! You are evil! :(
Take what you want, say God, but pay for it. I do believe Severus got a bit more than what he bargained for.
Excellent chapter, I loved how they are learning the give and take part of relationships and how they danced around issues.
I love the way she was so determined to make him listen to her. About time he treated her properly!
The revelation is intriguing - just what is his reaction going to be?
Which rates more on the suspense scale, emotional cliffies or action cliffies? What do you do when a story is littered with both? Look around desperately for another chapter, that's what you do. Then realize there isn't one. Then spend a fruitless 15 minutes writing your own next chapter in your head. Then decide maybe it'll save your sanity to just forget you're reading this story for the time being ... until the next chapter is up, that is.
oh! i fear the ending of this chapter has driven from my brain all that went before, and i can't remember anything i wanted to say. not only does she know, but he knows she loves him. or thinks she does - he might figure her brain is clouded from the curse, i suppose.
even before the declaration, the relationship was moving ahead in leaps and bounds: all that delicious tenderness, and honesty, and communication! (in between the necessary misunderstandings and such, of course.)
in other words, another great chapter of a fantastic story.
Well, Severus finally found out Hermiones' feelings for him. I wonder how he will react. I can't wait to find out.
I loved the warm, fuzzy parts of this chapter: their closeness and harmony in the wake of thier agreement were beautifully portrayed. Tricky Severus has left himself in a real conundrum. On the one hand, every one of his carefully cultivated self-protective instincts will tell him to withdraw from her. On the other hand, he has promised not to push her away again. So he's stuck--he has no choice but to deal with the frightening emotional intimacy of love. Hmm, I wonder what he will do. Bad author! Leaving us hanging like this.
Beautiful. What a heartbreaking end to this chapter (to say nothing of it being another evil cliffy).
What is he going to do next? Pull away, telling himself it's for her own good? ~bites finger nails in anticipation of another lap of the roller coaster~
Love this fic so much. XXX
My goodness, what a chapter! I'm in awe, you certainly know how to make the plot work for you...
Hmm . . . I wonder what Severus will think of her revelation. He probably thinks she's affected by the curse and so cannot truly love him.
I am so glad that they have been getting along much better. Hopefully her revelation doesn't ruin too much. It was, after all, his fault that he found out. I wonder what he was trying to find in her mind. Did he want to know her feelings for him, or something else? I am quite eager for the next chapter!
Mmmmmmm so, so GOOD!!!! Can't wait for more. ^.^
*squeeeeeeeeeeeeees* I CANNOT wait for the next chap! :)