That is great! makes me want to delete whats on my computer. (kowtows) More,please!!The wedding night was very well written and very surprising, in that Hermione knew exactly what was going on without being told. Wow.

oh, yes, I am very sure I like this story. I Love it! Aren't they the most adorable couple in the world? (if one might be so bold as to apply such a word as "adorable" to the Master of Snark) And I look forward to all the other chapters already. Than you for sharing!!

I love the "I have to do the right thing even though it may suck for me and I resent every choice I am makling" Snape.  It is very true to form.  I can't wqait for the next chapter!!!

Wow - that was just a roller coaster ride and you're leaving us hanging!  I actually held my breath as I sped through the chapter, well done on the pacing, the suspense was rolling beautifully!

Can't wait for the next chapter! 

Ohhhhhhhh LORD.

Well, they're truly in it now, aren't they? This bond can't be ruptured except by death, and I'm going to make a wild guess that the bond somehow protects Severus from the wrath of the Dark Lord &c. &c.

I am hoping for some, er, gentler lemons later on...?

Compelling and sad, & a bit like Robin McKinley in parts.

That was pretty much a nightmare of a wedding and consummation.  I can't wait to see where you take this. 

Hardly an ideal wedding night, but it looks like they had little choice.  I like how you captured the conflict in him and Hermione's completely unexpected (to him) response.

I'm also an admitted MLC fic junkie, so your twist on the concept naturally got my attention.  Oh boy.  Oh man--I also hope that a bit of happiness will be in store for this strong, but rather star-crossed, duo.

Wow.

Wow! I love MLC stories and this is absolutely great - I'm looking forward to reading more soon.

I really like the way the you have taken a look at things from Severus' point of view; it really makes for a different story from most of them and I love hearing things from his point of view.

Wow, that was an excellent chapter.  They've got a lot to deal with in the aftermath, though.

Looking forward to the next instalment. 

Wow!  What an amazing chapter!  There's really nothing else to say.  That was...just, whoa.

Ah, a new look at the not-so-new Marriage Law Challange. I like your idea and the way you write - a dynamic, lively style.  Oh, and great move with McGonnagal - she felt protective of Snape instead of Hermione (the way it should be, I think). I can't wait for the next chapter!

OMG! I wanted to cry for both of them. Gut-wrenching and... ugh.

Those types of wedding nights in theses MLC fics always kill me. But, in some situations, they seem so much more realistic. 

Though, her last thoughts of feeling safe bode somewhat well. I hope that is truly the case. 

I am speacless and breathless . I chan t wait next update. Pleas hury.

I dearly hope they will have happier moments.

very good chapter. I am not mad or anything, she understood. I am interested to see what happens next. Why did you decide not to use lj afterall?

ohh, not the best of wedding nights.  I'm sure he'll make it up to her! *wink*

Most interesting. Hermione is a bit too naive, but the others make up for it more than enough.

I went away for a while and when I came back I found three whole chapters and another one in the queue; it's rather like Christmas! Ah, I love the way you're looking at the fact that poor dear Severus is in fact stretched very thin. And to have McGonagall point it out, then show up at the end! Pure bliss. I adore the mix of wit/ humour with the more serious elements--and having read the previous comments and your response I'm terribly glad you aren't involved in any of the secret Hermione hating competitions.That being said, what's the next miscalculation on the long list of 'Oh I shouldn't have done that' actions? And let's not forget the ever sexy possessive qualities of our favourite enigma...Waiting with baited breath!

I like the tightrope-like balance you've struck between Hermione's smartness and her naivete and the intriguing hints of what's really going on in Severus' mind.  Looking forward to more already!

*bites nails*

Oh, Severus, Severus... what are you thinking, man? If only she knew what? I have dreadful feeling starting to form in the pit of my stomach... but I can't help but want to keep reading. :) Tell me one thing, please... is he telling her the truth? Not all of the information, I know, but...

*sighs*

*Stares at inbox to wait for update notification* 

are you going to keep updating livejournal? If the next chapter is done, I want it! :) - maevenmeghan

great story line - just love the let me do that for you (bitting/lip) hope there's more coming!

It's been a long time but the result is more than worth the wait. And I'm wondering what else could be said about those two. Not that I want this to be the end. I'm too much a happy-ending sucker for that.