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Care of Magical Creatures

1: Proposed

2: Sealed

3: Defended

4: Shamed

5: Mea Culpa

6: Punished

7: Wet

8: Gifted

9: Discovered

10: Rejected

11: Lists

12: Observed

13: Claimed

14: Hurt

15: Trusted

16: Marked

17: Lorded

18: Simply

19: Don't Look

20: Awakening

21: Revelation

22: Brewing

23: Tea

24: Bothered

25: Home

26: Bludgeoned

27: Rings

28: Sweetly

29: Tested

30: Friday

31: Cauldron

32: Potion

33: Miss Granger, What Have You Done?

34: Shattered

35: Unreal

36: Empty

37: Lies

38: Drowning

39: Obey

40: Disobey

41: Sinking

42: Lost, Then Found

43: Compromising Positions

44: Hogwarts: A History

45: Soul Mates?

46: Birthday

47: Something Happens

48: The Dark

49: Howling

50: The Hospital Wing

51: Names

52: Betrayed

53: Red

54: Scented

55: Vows

56: Instinct

57: Battle Plans

58: Godric's Hollow

59: Care

60: Leap of Faith

61: In Sin and Error Pining

62: Winter's End

63: Bearing Witness

64: April Fool

65: Rest, Unrest and Revolution

66: Stuff of Nightmares

67: So Long As We Both Shall Live

Care of Magical Creatures

mia madwyn

2,762 Reviews   |   2,762 Ratings, 0 Likes, 1,039 Favorites )

Humor Angst Romance Potions Under Duress 287,804 Words 92 Chapters WIP
Hermione Granger Severus Snape

Voted Best New Author (Lumos), Best SS/HG Romance (Amortentia) and Best SS/HG Angst
(Diffindo) in The New Library Awards.

Seventh-year student Hermione Granger decides to marry the one eligible wizard who did not ask for her--the horrid but powerful Severus Snape. All is not sweetness and light. Be careful what you ask for. Or, as has been said by many a wise witch, "Marry in haste; repent in leisure." MLC

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Chapters (67)

Chapter 1: Proposed

Chapter 2: Sealed

Chapter 3: Defended

Chapter 4: Shamed

Chapter 5: Mea Culpa

Chapter 6: Punished

Chapter 7: Wet

Chapter 8: Gifted

Chapter 9: Discovered

Chapter 10: Rejected

Chapter 11: Lists

Chapter 12: Observed

Chapter 13: Claimed

Chapter 14: Hurt

Chapter 15: Trusted

Chapter 16: Marked

Chapter 17: Lorded

Chapter 18: Simply

Chapter 19: Don't Look

Chapter 20: Awakening

Chapter 21: Revelation

Chapter 22: Brewing

Chapter 23: Tea

Chapter 24: Bothered

Chapter 25: Home

Chapter 26: Bludgeoned

Chapter 27: Rings

Chapter 28: Sweetly

Chapter 29: Tested

Chapter 30: Friday

Chapter 31: Cauldron

Chapter 32: Potion

Chapter 33: Miss Granger, What Have You Done?

Chapter 34: Shattered

Chapter 35: Unreal

Chapter 36: Empty

Chapter 37: Lies

Chapter 38: Drowning

Chapter 39: Obey

Chapter 40: Disobey

Chapter 41: Sinking

Chapter 42: Lost, Then Found

Chapter 43: Compromising Positions

Chapter 44: Hogwarts: A History

Chapter 45: Soul Mates?

Chapter 46: Birthday

Chapter 47: Something Happens

Chapter 48: The Dark

Chapter 49: Howling

Chapter 50: The Hospital Wing

Chapter 51: Names

Chapter 52: Betrayed

Chapter 53: Red

Chapter 54: Scented

Chapter 55: Vows

Chapter 56: Instinct

Chapter 57: Battle Plans

Chapter 58: Godric's Hollow

Chapter 59: Care

Chapter 60: Leap of Faith

Chapter 61: In Sin and Error Pining

Chapter 62: Winter's End

Chapter 63: Bearing Witness

Chapter 64: April Fool

Chapter 65: Rest, Unrest and Revolution

Chapter 66: Stuff of Nightmares

Chapter 67: So Long As We Both Shall Live


About mia madwyn

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Care of Magical Creatures recently received two awards on "Secrets of the Dark Vaults," a Russian fanfic site. Best NC-17 and Best Maxi Translation. The Nine-Year Plan was awarded Best Mini-Fic! I'm delighted to be in translation and to please the readers in Russia!





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About Mia

I came to the world of Harry Potter relatively early, after first resisting it because it just seemed too trendy. But when the first book came out in paperback in the US I picked it up at the airport when I was about to catch a flight, and two chapters in knew I would be ordering the original from amazon.co.uk in hardcover as soon as I landed.

 

I came to fanfic late, waiting until after I'd read DH. That means I've been totally obsessed with the fanfic world of Harry Potter, and most specifically the SS/HG ship, since August of '07.

I'm helplessly and hopelessly hooked.

 

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Reviews for Care of Magical Creatures

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10/10

vdemon_96

Oh wow.Sounds like quite an outfit!

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

I hope so!

10/10

Hope24

"There are those who only participate in revels, though. Women whose only desire is to please…." She looked up at that. His eyes pierced through her. "With the use of Polyjuice Potion. And Heart's Desire. And lust potions." She felt sick rising in her throat. "Because all they want to do is please… and there are those who are very willing and eager to be pleased in such a manner, and I am not one of those men."

Snape needs to come down from his moral high horse for a minute and wonder why Hermione felt that she would need to resort to polyjuice and other potions to make herself attractive to her husband.  Has he forgotten seeing his own 'look of dismay' at Hermione's body when he performed legilimency on her, or has he not fully realised the repercussions that look would have on her self-image?  He needs to make some amends.

I like your idea of how Voldemort controls his followers, feeding their desire rather than making them fear him. 

Hmm, what was Hermione up to with the ring? 

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

Because he's Snape, he's not at all cognizant of the effect his words are having.  He's simply explaining his own bitter experience, and informing her.

Thanks for noticing that.  I wondered if anybody would remember.  

One of these chapters I may actually get around to explaining what Heart's Desire is.

Response from Hope24 (Reviewer)

Even though he's a spy, he can be typically male in his lack of preceptiveness! ;)

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

I'm not sure he's ever been a between-the-sheets-needs-to-be-sensitive-to-others'-feelings spy.  Heh.

0/10

nightshift

Amazing how the absolute right clothing can enhance and mature someone. I'm not talking so much "designer" clothes as "correct" clothes (taking into account occasion, body type and coloration). I don't think Severus had any clue what was going to walk out of that bathroom when he had her dress up.

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

No, he had NO idea.

0/10

Mint Stick

Lots of loveliness in this chapter! And I did like the explanation on Voldemort - and that Severus still wouldn't tell her everything. Looking forward to seeing what all this business with the rings was, too!

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

More about the rings will come!

10/10

Maddie

Interesting perspective on the Dark Lord. I haven't read about him using that approach on his followers before. It makes more sense than constantly torturing them.

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

Thanks.  I'm glad you liked it.

10/10

JumbleBee

A dark conversation... a cashmere dress... ostentatious rubies vs. gifted rings... decoy thongs; goodness me it's like a particularly extravagant Hollywood production. And to think, that's just the one chapter!As always, I'm immensely enjoying the story, and I wanted to comment that I particularly like the way you have painted Voldemort and the way he controls his followers. It's a different (and perhaps more realistic) method of control than that which seems to be favoured--keeping those proud purebloods cowed through fear alone. Yet the point is made that everything, and everyone is secondary to the Dark Lord and his wishes.

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

Thank you so much.  I'm glad you found so much of interest in the chapter!

10/10

Arabella Bloodgood

What a tease!   Oh how I love this story.

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

Thanks, I'm glad you like it!

10/10

sinbad

Great chapter, I wish I had the talent to take characrers, make them AU, but still have them 'in character' so to speak.  I'm willing to bet that is difficult!

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

Thank you!  For me, the first chapter was the most difficult because I knew what Hermione was going to be like, but I wasn't sure if I could capture Snape.  I think I could go back and rewrite the first two chapters and make them better now that I've been with the characters this long, but I intend to leave them the way they are, anyway!  Once I got into the story, though, the characters have pretty much dictated their own actions/reactions and I'm just trying to keep up with them!

0/10

tinytexans

I'm enjoying this story so much! I can't wait to see what happens next!! Thank you for updating so often. 

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

Thank you for reviewing often!

0/10

abyt42

I'm so very happy you update regularly-- can hardly wait patiently for tea at the Malfoys. (And I'm really curious about the research regarding the circumvention of the Ministry rings.)

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

Thank you!  I update regularly because I have to keep writing so that I can find out what happens next, too! 

And the ministry rings -- now, that's going to be fun!

0/10

ofelia

What's spellwork is she doing with that ring???????? I bet we are not going to find out until after tea! I hope she pulls off a fab preformance at the tea... I am cheering really hard and loud for her!

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

You're right -- we won't find out about the ring yet....

10/10

Arabella Bloodgood

Oh boy here comes trouble. LOL  I love this story.

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

Thank you!

10/10

firefly124

What in the world has she done with that ring?  Good job distracting him with the knickers switch. *g*

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

Time will tell what the ring will do (or at least what it's supposed to do).

9/10

beaweasley2

Oh, why not wear the rubies? I'd have loved to see Narcissa's face when she showed up in rubies!I can understand the guys and the dress - but still a little glitter  wouldn't have hurt?

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

I really did want her to wear the rubies, but somehow it just didn't work out that way, alas!

9/10

Anonymous

I really like some of the images you paint in this story. Can't wait for the Malfoys!

Author's Response: Thank you!

10/10

Lkmaide

oo  I loves a good update, i does  (taken from the woman who loved a god hanging in Robin Hood, Prince of Thieves because THAT would be one SEXY! Snarky! Snape)

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

LOL!  You crack me up!

And thank you! 

10/10

Hope24

I think the reader can understand how Hermione has assumed that Snape would be reasonably unaffected by her proximity in bed.  She seems fairly convinced that he does not find her attractive, so it makes sense that she wouldn't think of him being aroused by her.

I do love Hermione's mum.   Very no-nonsense.

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

Plus -- Hermione read in a book that for a male to wake up with an erection is physiological and not sexual, so if it's in a book....

I'm glad you understood and accepted that.  Sometimes I wonder if I'm pushing her innocence too far, but this simply isn't an area of experience that she's explored. 

And I love her mum, too! 

Response from Hope24 (Reviewer)

I don't think you're pushing her innocence too far.  She's young, inexperienced and in a relationship with a man who has difficulty vocalising his feelings and has some emotional problems.  Her bemusement at some of his behaviour is understandable.  Hermione being Hermione, she resorts to a book to try and figure out what's going on.  Totally in-character. 

10/10

Hope24

I'm pleased that Snape and Hermione now have a mutual friend/confidante - of sorts -  who seems to have good insight into both of their characters.

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

Yes, I think Hooch has remained outside of faculty politics which makes her an interesting friend for them.

9/10

beaweasley2

Oh this was sweet. I loved the tea at Hagrid's  - but what'd she do to Harry?

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

You shall see...

10/10

beaweasley2

OOooooh a Malfoy tea?  If it were me - I'd pull a Moody! Bring Your Own Tea!

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

Good idea!

10/10

Maddie

I am wondering if the point of the lesson--other than assessing Hermione's wandless ability and providing information for her to ponder--is to have her emotionally wound up? However, I cannot figure out why that would be advantageous. For the rest of my review I totally agree with Reviewer signed:  aeron, and so I say "Ditto."

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

She learned how to (in an emergency) release the magic without exploding into a hex or worse.

Although the solution isn't all THAT much better than a hex.

(wink)

But you're right, it was more of an assessment for Hooch to figure out how to help her.  More will come later. 

0/10

orm irian

Is anything good ever going to happen?  The story just seems to go from angst to angst to more angst...What happened to the promised Friday night brewing of that "special potion" and their anticipated "Preparing. Bursting. Releasing." several chapters back?

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

Bludgeoned is Wednesday.

Tea with the Malfoys is Thursday.

And then... oh yes, Friday.

It is coming.  The calendar does not lie!

10/10

blue artemis

I really do like your Hooch.  That was good.  I still have these great hopes for Hermione and Severus. 

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

I have hopes for them, too.  But they are running me ragged, trying to get them together.

10/10

Charmaine

Awesome, finally a Hooch character which is good. You made her real and not a plot device.

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

Thanks.  As I said in an earlier response, Zoe Wannamaker's Hooch was so vivid to me, it makes it fun to work with her.

10/10

beaweasley2

Bwahahaha - Oh, poor Sev! I - ah... Another great chapter and I'm too stunned to even write a decent review to say how good this story really is! Out Dark Lord the Dark Lord! HAHAHAHA!

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

::squeeeee!::

Ahem.

Thank you.

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