There is something so sweet about the way Severus is talking to the unicorn, soothing and encouraging him.  It's so sweet in fact, that if I were the unicorn, I'd probably impale him with my horn.  What the hell?  I guess we'll find out all in good time.  Another great chapter!

I love how the tables are turned and Hermione is now the incredibly talented witch teaching Severus a thing or two.  Now, what was that stab from the Unicorn for, I wonder?  Lovely chappie as always.  Truly one of my favorite stories right now.

omg.  The unicorn certainly knows something.

Is that unicorn's name Charlie, by any chance? :)

Holy frak! Why did the unicorn do that?In regards to Sirius, is he going to end up remembering what Charmaine told him and regretting that he didn't listen? My guess would be yes, but that's only my guess.

Interesting - it's as if the Unicorn could foresee what would someday be there and wanted to prevent it somehow. Or perhaps he took offense and wanted Snape to know in no uncertain terms.Did Hagrid give away Charmaine's true identity with the shortening of her name? I've had my suspicions for a while, now.

Great chapter!!!  I loved the scene where Hagrid catches Severus peeking through the keyhole.  Miss Charmaine had to speak quickly to save him from the half-giant.  However my favorite scene is when Severus and Charmaine are in the forest taking care of the unicorn.  It was brilliant that the creature could understand what Severus had said.  I cracked up when the stallion rolled his eyes at the words of clear longing Severus said about having her work her magic with him. As for the unicorn's horn driven into Severus' left forearm, I hope that the magical creature was placing his protection on the young man.  It must be that.  Severus will need all the protection he can get.Thanks for the quick update!  BTW, Sirius and James are a couple of beige jobbies, aren't they?Beth

Lupin being interested in the Death Eaters?  Nice twist!!!  He seems such a gentle and caring character, I can't imagine him being drawn to Voldemort's politics.I'm glad that Remus was able to explain what was really happening when Severus overheard what was said in the Shrieking Shack.  I like them being friends and working together on the Wolfsbane Potion, but I wonder how all this is going to work out after the Hogsmeade weekend.  Mademoiselle Bien-Aimée/Hermione is having a more difficult time coping with what she knows is going to happen.  I hope she will be able to gather her wits and her courage to be able to help Severus.  It's very clear that there is a story behind the story where Severus is concerned.  His life depends on her being able to carry through on her mission.  There are so many directions you can take this story, and I can't wait to see what you have in store for these characters.  I adore your Severus and Hermione.  Heck, I adore the entire story!Well done.Beth

I would suppose Severus is still a virgin at this point if the unicorn would let him near? Or are these like the unicorns of "The Problem With Purity" who accept non-virgins whose conscious is clear? And what's with the horn jab all of a sudden? If it's not Hermione (and I still think it is), she's still got insider information about the future which could only be because she is from the future. Good story, btw. Can't wait for the next chapter. ^_^

still laughing about the wee beige jobby.  And OUCH on the unicorn getting his arm.  Perhaps it will deter a dark mark????

great great chapter....loving this story..and such a skillful Hermione:)

mmmm, chocolate!  Very, very good.  Of course I've had my suspicions about this potions mistress from a while back.  LOL.

OMG, poor Severus.  What AWFUL timing.

oh no!  Poor Severus.  It's not fair he should have to endure so much.

Stupid bullies.  Love the story so far.  I like the differences between this and the original.  I'm okay with alternate universe stories.

oh dear, what have we here?Very good.

sad sad sad.  Good start, though.  I will be reading more.

Lupin in the Death eaters???

Hermione what have you done?

loved it more please

You're very good at alluding to something, yet not telling us a thing about what's going on....  very good...I am glad that Remus nipped Severus' jealousy in the butt but now I'm sure he'll be quite confused about all that rambling on by bien aimee.    Haha, I just got the reference to her name.  Call me slow, but I do catch on eventually.

I'm really digging young Snape and Lupin as friends.  And while Lupin is actually also friends with the enemy, he seems the type who can be neutral and make it work.  Interesting that he has an early interest in Voldemort.  And then there is Charmaine.  She was getting ready to explain things to Severus.  Was she really going to tell him everything?  Is she supposed to?  It doesn't seem like she was necessarily the right choice for this task.  I say all of that as if I actually know what is going on, LOL!  Still loving this!

Remus - the one who was originally interested in joining the death eaters?   what an interesting twist.thanks for all your time and efforts, I look forward to your next posting

Chili flavored chocolate? *shudder* As I am allergic to most peppers, I will pass on tasting. Besides I prefer dark chocolate with almonds (or plain M&Ms). ^_~   Good chapter. It's nice to see that my theories are playing out. *grin*

Ha! Got in first.  Only because you don't review yourself!Poor Charmaine is losing control, best she ups her game before she gives it all away. :0

Well that overheard conversation is going to go a long way towards building a friendship between Severus and Remus, huh?  I hope he doesn't sulk for too long, and is able to forget about Lily and James and get back to pursuing things with Charmaine.  Oh, and nice version of the Mudblood incident

That was a disturbing chapter.  James is really a terrible person. I hope that Severus canfigure out what he heard from Hermione.  Poor guy.  He's always getting the short end of the stick.