Second paragraph in and you're already insulting Remus.  I know I'm going to enjoy this story!

He's got her where he wants her. *grin* But what if he sleeps past the time the cage opens. Won't she run away again? ^_^

Aha!  The handkerchief makes its appearance, and we can be sure who this visitor from the future is, even if we can't yet understand, at this point,  why she's unknown to the future Severus.

I've just read this in one go, and it's awesome.  Such intricate plotting.  I have to go back and trace how Remus got the handkerchief.  I love to see events in the books turned a few degrees in a different direction.  And so beautifully written!

Well I actually thought we were going to be treated to a picture of Sev's arse in that chapter, Quaffie. Now at least they are TALKING. But he needs to do it quickly before she body-swerves again. I had gathered that Remus probably swung both ways but not surprised that Sev didn't. Great stuff. Best wishes,Love Ali xxxxx. 

Fancy forgetting the full moon.  Luna-tic! :)

Well, it would have been better if they'd talked tonight, but I get it.  Glad he found her at least.  I think she's wrong about the mate thing.  Dead wrong.  LOL

excellent!  I love this story.  It's so sad that Remus is gone but I'm glad Severus has some of his memories back.

They need to work on their communication skills, Quaffie. Good old fashioned honesty is the only thing that works in matters like this. But to be honest he has been quite careless in losing her again hasn't he? In my sometimes insomniac hours I ponder things like if HP characters like say Percy Weasley or Sirius Black or even the lovely Lucius Malfoy were so up their own arses might they not one day Apparate up there never to be seen again. I mean it's just a thought......Oh Christ...I'm having a Benylin moment. Got bad 'flu....I could be your twin Quaffsbenylinavidly. Brilliant writing as always. Best wishes, Love (feeling very sorry for herself) Ali xxxxx. 

Grrr, not the way this was supposed to go!  I hope he can find her.  I hope he'll think to find her instead of wallowing in 'woe-is-me-she-doesn't-want-me'    Thanks for the update!

I swear I don't know what to think of these two at this minute.  Arrrggghhh!  They were "this close" to being able to pick up the lives they wanted.  This close!  And it all fell apart because Madam Megansdochter’s timing was so inconvenient.I hope Hermione didn't splinch herself and that Severus can find her soon before she hurts herself.Damn!  This Close!Thanks for another fabulous chapter.  8^)Beth

"...You picked up fag-ends of a conversation, and you’re smoking them the wrong way round."Yes!  He stayed calm and listened.

Okay, can't you even give them an even break? Where did Hermione go? And, as weak as she is, will she splinch herself? Sev's supervisor has got impeccable timing, hasn't she? Keep up the good work. ^_^

What have you done, woman?  Haven't you abused the poor man enough?  I hope you were kind enough to have her go to St. Mungo's, or home, or Hogwarts, or anywhere that he would think to look for her.  These two are seriously due for some happiness.  On the other hand, they are both so quick to jump to conclusions, they seem to cause a large amount of their misfortune by being impulsive and ridiculous.  You certainly can't be blamed for them in that respect, can you?  I hope the next chapter is coming soon!

Geez, woman, give the poor man a break, will ya? :P

Love that the Unicorn blood is a blessing for poor Severus, not a curse (*puts the valium, untaken, back*)... enjoy Severus' feelings and thoughts being distracted by someone else in front of snitty utterly wrong-for-him Evans... this is the first story I've read with the concept of someone from the future directly involved /guiding Sev's life (yes, I live under a rock... and rarely come out from under it) - reading on!

Snape’s voice penetrated the brain fog which enveloped her. It was so familiar and soothing, but the timbre had changed. There was a deeper, huskier quality. What was wrong with him?Nothing is wrong with him!  Nothing at all!  Except he is likely overcome with relief and emotion.I like the way that the blaze the unicorn gave Severus caused silver-white to blaze through his mind at the same time his younger self slipped the Portkey into Charmaine's hand and activated it sending her back to him... in the present Department of Mysteries.  This is great imagery and illustrates what a wonderful gift the unicorn had bestowed on him and her.I cheered when Severus felt Hermione breathe softly against his neck.  After he had healed her as much as he could and sat with her to watch over her, I liked how you described the way his memories fully returned and sorted themselves into their rightful order.  He spoke, she smiled, and he smiled in return.  What a great chapter!Beth

oh....  thanks for the update

The Forbidden Forest & Unicorns - love Severus being drawn in and included in with all the magical creatures & more intimacies implied with him and Charmaine.

Ah, so close... enjoy the delectable teasing! Love the banter and that it was Remus himself who revealed the truth of the matter to Severus. Reading on!

Oh... it's all so sad, and some days just too much to re-live, so unfair... poor Severus always misunderstanding and/or being misunderstood on such drastic altering levels - well done - 'lovely'/striking chapter.

She's back, he remembers.  That's got to be good, right? :)

Love how Severus natural talents are being recognised and appreciated; love the banter, and building suspense with professor Charmaine!

Good for Severus! Looking forward to where, maybe, this first kiss leads them... Love the mystique around professor Charmaine!

Have I mentioned that I've always really loathed James and Sirius - enjoy seeing their true colours shown here, but so very frustrated about Potter getting away with things (again) and Severus having to take the heat... lovely poignant moment at the end; I've always felt Sev & Remus had so much more in common, including sensibilities & talents, than Remus had with any of the others -- really lovely story exploring this possibility - thank you!