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Potions Under Duress In Spirit
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In Spirit

1: Ceilings

2: Windows

3: Entrees and Exits

4: Locks

5: Pathways

6: Walls

7: Thresholds

8: Connections

9: Openings

10: Tables

11: Exchanges

12: Foundations

13: Limits

14: Displacement

15: Corners

16: Reflections

17: You are here...

18: Curtains

19: Margins

20: Nexus

21: To Learn...

22: Archways

23: The Exact Art...

24: And Subtle Science...

25: Of Potion Making.

26: He Began

27: Barely More Than a Whisper

28: Caught

29: Every Word

30: The Gift

31: Keeping

32: Silent Without Effort

33: As There Is

In Spirit

Ariadne AWS

373 Reviews   |   373 Ratings, 0 Likes, 189 Favorites )

Humor Angst Romance Potions Under Duress 79,387 Words 33 Chapters WIP
Hermione Granger Severus Snape

Seven years after the final battle: Severus is neither here nor there - and is apparently unwanted, dead or alive, until a small black kitten pins his cloak to a cobblestone. Hermione learns that now and then life rests on the flip of a friendly coin. Does love have the power to cancel time? Only the cats know for sure, and they can't talk.

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Chapters (33)

Chapter 1: Ceilings

Chapter 2: Windows

Chapter 3: Entrees and Exits

Chapter 4: Locks

Chapter 5: Pathways

Chapter 6: Walls

Chapter 7: Thresholds

Chapter 8: Connections

Chapter 9: Openings

Chapter 10: Tables

Chapter 11: Exchanges

Chapter 12: Foundations

Chapter 13: Limits

Chapter 14: Displacement

Chapter 15: Corners

Chapter 16: Reflections

Chapter 17: You are here...

Chapter 18: Curtains

Chapter 19: Margins

Chapter 20: Nexus

Chapter 21: To Learn...

Chapter 22: Archways

Chapter 23: The Exact Art...

Chapter 24: And Subtle Science...

Chapter 25: Of Potion Making.

Chapter 26: He Began

Chapter 27: Barely More Than a Whisper

Chapter 28: Caught

Chapter 29: Every Word

Chapter 30: The Gift

Chapter 31: Keeping

Chapter 32: Silent Without Effort

Chapter 33: As There Is


About Ariadne AWS

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Ariadne AWS

Member Since 2006  |  10 Stories  |  Favorited by 205  |  34 Reviews Written  |  445 Review Responses

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Reviews for In Spirit

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0/10

sunny33

Where did he find that sense of mischief? :)

0/10

sunny33

Better get your mischief done quickly before the kitty gives you away! :)

0/10

sunny33

"Close your eyes, Snape. Close them. Eyes. Closed. Now." LOL. like that's going to happen! :)

0/10

sunny33

But is he really a ghost?

10/10

ClayPotter

So his subconscious mind is willing to admit that he wants her... Interesting.

She can hear him and feel him. Perhaps, if she closes her eyes it would be as if he were there, whole and alive. Maybe before she tosses the coin they could give it a try?

0/10

sunny33

Demterios is awesome. :D

10/10

MuseAmusant

About time Severus decided to give life a chance. He's had so little choice before his "death", I'm glad he has at least a theoretical second chance.


If cats allegedly get nine lives, surely a brilliant Potions master/spy deserves at least two?

10/10

sinbad

The reference to Noah's Ark and the flood added a bit of spice to the chapter for me.

10/10

sinbad

I guess Severus will have to make a decision soon...

10/10

makaem

This is  a wonderful story.

10/10

neelix

Wonderful chapter! I love their interection and the cat's observations affecting Severus! Maybe one day the 'Skyn' will be his on hers...

10/10

Anonymous

Does Severus really know what he wants? ;o)
Great chapter!

10/10

debjunk

Hmm, I wonder what he will have her do. 

Can't blame the bloke for going ballistic.  He's a powerful ghost... whatever. 

Again, love the kitty talk.

10/10

remy

Viva Voce - besides being Latin 'live voice' (or something along those lines, been ages since Latin class!) is also a great band that you should check out!

I feel for Severus - he's so stuck in this in-between world and he doesn't really know what he wants.

Will we know what he wants? I do hope somehow that our couple will be together, but a part of me fears this won't occurr since he's...dead?

Danke for such quick updates!

10/10

indigo_rose

Hermione will have a tough path if she hopes to fix things using the Owl, it seems!  If people will only hear what they want to hear, it will be difficult for her to get any messages across...  On the other hand, she is brilliant and can probably out-Slytherin a Slytherin if she really needs to, so maybe she'll be able to "tweak" things just enough to make a difference.

But will the difference made be in the direction that she wants, that's the question!

10/10

debjunk

Sage advice.  Not quite sure what it means, but...I'm a little less confused, but not quite sure what she'll see and how she can do anything about it if she can't really change anything.

Response from Ariadne AWS (Author of In Spirit)

Well, there's no changing the sweeping forces of history, to be sure, but perhaps she hopes to work around the edges just a bit :)  Thanks for reviewing!Cheers,~ Ari

10/10

makaem

Cool story.

10/10

Anonymous

“Research has never changed history, my dear; it only changes how we perceive it." - True words, true words indeed.

10/10

remy

This fic is brilliant. Brilliance with funny writing and the addition of LolCatz speak, which is hilarious in its own right!

Response from Ariadne AWS (Author of In Spirit)

Thank you so much,

Response from Ariadne AWS (Author of In Spirit)

!  :)  I'm glad you're enjoying the story so far...Cheers,~ Ari

10/10

sinbad

If his body wasn't buried, perhaps it was preserved?  If so since he's neither dead nor alive perhaps he will choose to come back.

9/10

sinbad

Things are getting interesting.  I'm wondering what Hermione is going to do.  It would be fun if she went back in time to save Severus... or even give him the opportunity to make a choice on whether to stay or go.

10/10

indigo_rose

And the plot thickens!  One of the (many) things I love about reading your work is that it always makes me think, and I'm never quite entirely certain of what's going to happen next.  It's never predictable, and it's certainly never boring!  Loved Severus' commentary regarding Poe.  I also prefer his poetry to his prose, although I must say I really liked the Alan Parsons Project album Tales of Mystery and Imagination based on Poe's works.

Another Demetrios chapter!  Yay!  He continues to rock.  I'm also hoping for a future meeting between Crookshanks and Mimi, although having to deal with a human baby is probably more than enough hardship for Crookshanks to have to endure without adding a little kitten into the mix as well...

10/10

Anonymous

Another gread chapter. The owl  is cool *wide grin* - and so very helpful for Hermione! I can imagine all kind of things still going to happen to her now.
Can you please help me with some Mimi speak? "Baffs nyce" eludes me.

Author's Response: Hi Alcina.. Thank you!  "Baffs nyce" = "Baths [are] nice."  :)

*waves*

Glad you like the story so far!

~ Ari

Alcina vom Steinsberg's response: Thanks!

10/10

Anonymous

Awkward indeed... poor things! Great chapter. And what IS that owl doing?

10/10

ClayPotter

Ah, poor Snape. His torture has gone on too long. I so hope that Hermione can help him put an end to it.

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