Archways
Chapter 22 of 33
Ariadne AWSSeven years after the final battle: Severus is neither here nor there - and is apparently unwanted, dead or alive, until a small black kitten pins his cloak to a cobblestone. Hermione learns that now and then life rests on the flip of a friendly coin. Does love have the power to cancel time? Only the cats know for sure, and they can't talk.
ReviewedSummary: Severus is angry, Hermione is determined, and Mimi is all about the shiny.
A/N: My thanks, as always, to my alpha- and beta-readers, Anastasia, AnnieTalbot, Lady Karelia, Machshefa, and Melenka. And a heartfelt thanks to all of you for reading and enjoying the story. *blows kiss.
Demetrios and Mimi are thrilled to have been honoured with an Order of Merlin, First Class, for "Best Original Character(s) in the 2009 OWL Awards. They send their thanks, too :)
The Petulant Poetess Edition of this chapter is dedicated to Lady Karelia and Blue Paris - may their journey bring them where they long to be.
~ Ari
22: Archways
"Yes. No. It doesn't matter! This can work. This will work."
Raising the coin in her fist in cheerful salute, she turned and headed for the Floo.
Demetrios exhaled softly, his translucent face dimpling as he beamed after her. "Well, yes, my dear, of course it will," he mused, "but which 'this,' I wonder? Ah, well, Athena, in all her bright wisdom..."
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Hermione arrived home breathless and exultant. "Profes- Severus!" she called, only to jump out of her skin when he answered far too close to her ear.
"Miss Granger, what the bloody hell do you think you are doing?"
She took a step backward, only to be met with a cry from underfoot.
Mimi darted under the lounge.
"I beg your pardon?" Hermione's eyes flashed as she stepped neatly away from the wall.
She heard Severus's boots creak and surmised he was drawing himself taller. Uh-oh.
"I do not enjoy having my memory tampered with. But that's rather your specialty, isn't it?"
She blushed furiously. "Wha my parents? How did you kn"
"Phineas," he said dryly.
"How did he"
"You talk in your sleep."
"The old relic," she spat as the adrenalin, which had so recently coursed through her at her certainty that their plan would succeed, flowed into a different path. "My parents are perfectly well, thank you very much."
Severus's boots creaked again. "I'm so glad to hear it," he said softly, his voice carrying a current of growing anger. "Do let us stay on topic, Doctor."
"You were the one who oh, what is your issue?"
"What were you doing in the forest?"
She sniffed. "Following you, of course."
The empty space near her front door said nothing.
Hermione waited, her eyes narrowing.
She didn't need to hear his eyebrow rise.
"Oh, don't go raising your eyebrow at me; you know I can't see it. Try to save your life... death... whichever..." she muttered, going over to the lounge to try to coax Mimi out from under it. "I'm sorry, sweetheart. Just because he surprised me, I trod on your poor tail..."
The tail in question twitched, affronted, and Hermione burst out laughing. "You two really are a pair."
"Meee," Mimi complained, turning around to blink at Hermione.
"Oh, for pity's sake. Do come out." Hermione sat cross-legged on the floor, her back to where she assumed Severus was still standing.
Only then did she bite her lip.
"As gratifying as that particular expression is, I repeat what are you playing at?"
She glanced up toward his voice. "Playing..." She shook her head. "I took the opportunity for a control trip to confirm Demetrios's assertion that history can be altered, at least slightly, if one works around the edges."
"You," he drawled derisively.
Mimi poked her head out from under the lounge. "Meee?"
"Not you, her."
Hermione extended a finger toward Mimi's ears. The kitten stared toward Severus for a moment, but soon was arching the rest of her body out to lean awkwardly into Hermione's hand. Hermione exhaled. "What about me?"
Severus exhaled softly. "You, Miss Granger, felt you had to confirm Demetrios's 'assertion'?"
Hermione blushed.
"Fetching," Severus murmured.
Her blush deepened. "Oh, do stop... well, no, don't; I rather like it but I... oh, I know, it sounds ridiculous, me cross-checking Demetrios's eons of experience, but he's not the one who will have, oh, point-oh-four seconds whilst Harry is distracted by receiving your memories to try to save your life. I had to be certain, for myself, that the coin works the way Demetrios said it would."
An indeterminate muttering as he crossed the room.
Mimi's eyes tracked him toward the window, and Hermione turned. "Severus, I imagine it must be disconcerting to suddenly feel your memories... erm..."
"The word you seek is 'doubling.'"
"Doubling, then, but..."
"It is. That is not the problem."
"Then what is... oh! You were brewing, weren't you? Oh, I am sorry; is the potion..."
A soft snort. "My concentration was sufficient to the task."
"Then I don't understand."
A burst of anger from in front of the window: "Your behavior in the forest was most unseemly."
Hermione blinked. "Unseemly?" She held her breath. Surely she hadn't betrayed... well... that.
"For a first-year to display such..."
As he sought the next word, Hermione swallowed carefully. She could only imagine the sneer that was building.
"... such concern for a teacher is... was? ... most unseemly."
Hermione rolled her eyes. "I wasn't really twelve, Severus."
"I know that now. I didn't then."
"And I was lying."
"That I knew."
"Liar."
A soft hiss as his robes moved closer to her.
Mimi lifted her head at the sound, the tip of her tail starting to twitch.
"'Liar'? You use that word very casually."
"If you'd known I was lying," she shot back, "you'd've taken far more points from Gryffindor, sir." She shook her head. "Severus, I mean."
The silence roiled.
"Just out of curiosity, why did you take so few points?"
The roiling quality fled, leaving the silence baffled in its absence.
She instinctively pressed the point. "An out-of-bounds violation should have been fifteen, at least, plus a detention."
"I was and am aware of Hogwarts' rules, Miss Granger."
She opened her hands curtly. "Enough of this 'Miss Granger,' really."
"We are talking about your first year; you were 'Granger' to me then..."
She nodded. "When I wasn't 'Potter's swotty sidekick'?"
"Nothing that complimentary, I assure you."
Hermione ignored that. "Why so few points?"
He said nothing.
"Do you even know why?"
After a moment, he rumbled. "I do not. And I find that disturbing. Very disturbing, indeed. I should have taken far more."
"You knew something was off."
He rumbled, confirming without conceding ground. "You should not have dared follow me, Miss Granger. Or to speak so to a teacher. Especially not to me."
"Granted, but, if you recall, I did neither when I actually was twelve. Besides on whom should I have tested the coin's abilities, then, as your history is precisely the one we're trying to affect? Really, Severus popping up behind you to ask if you'd ever heard of Athena's owl would have given the game away entirely "
He interrupted, muttering, "I doubt I'd've heard you."
"Regardless; I think I did rather well."
"You should not have done it, Hermione!"
At his tone, Mimi started.
"Whyever not? I was testing the process, and it worked. It's not as though I altered the course of the war."
"You were a first-year!"
She felt his glare and pressed her fingers to her temples. "I didn't choose to go back to first year, Severus. The coin took me there."
"I should not..."
"Should not what?"
A wordless silence threatened to explode between them.
"What, Severus?" She glared a challenge toward the window.
He bit his next words: "I've memories of a twenty-six year old woman lurking in the eyes of a child."
"Did you know that then?"
"What matters is that I know it now. Whatever you may have thought at the time, you rarely registered as more than..."
"Harry's swotty sidekick."
"That will serve. I would prefer not to remember your childhood any better than I already do."
Hermione turned that over in her mind for a moment, and a dimple appeared in her cheek.
"Stop smiling," he snarled.
"No, Severus, I don't think I want to."
He said nothing for a while, then, "It's bloody awkward."
Hermione longed to laugh, but bit her tongue. "Try being stuck as a twelve-year-old, admiring your arse as she set it on fire."
A strangling noise.
"I assume you figured out it was me eventually," she said, tilting her head.
At her movement, Mimi batted at her necklace, drawing it into her mouth with her paw.
A crisp rustle indicated his sharp nod. "Afterwards, yes. Not then."
Hermione removed the necklace from Mimi's mouth. "I was terrified you'd discover it was me."
A soft snort.
"Well, you were rather scary, Severus, especially first year."
"I intended to be." A sound that she assumed indicated his leaning against the windowsill. "Perhaps your lack of fear is why I deducted so few points."
"I should think that'd've had the opposite effect Harry's courage lost Gryffindor more points than I can count."
"His, yes. Yours, no; that was not your hallmark."
"Perhaps you were surprised less by my courage than by my compassion."
The silence froze, and she knew she'd hit the mark.
Compliment him quickly. "Oh, do sit down. Even now, you're a bit intimidating when you loom about like that."
He rumbled again, but she saw the lounge cushion yield as he complied. She refused to show the smile she was feeling. Wizards.
"In my experience, Hermione," he began quietly, and something in his tone dispelled any thought of smiling, "compassion and courage were always synonymous, and never directed toward..." He coughed.
His hand came to rest on her shoulder, and her throat tightened.
"Never..."
She covered his hand with her own and nodded. "I know."
They sat that way until Mimi, in the absence of Hermione's stroking, reached again for necklace, catching a claw in one of its links.
"Poor thing," Hermione crooned, sorting out the tangle.
"Meee," the kitten responded, reaching determinedly for the necklace with her other paw.
"No, Mimi."
Mimi's eyes stayed locked on the necklace as Severus's hand left Hermione's shoulder.
Hermione felt him reach down, saw Mimi's fur compress slightly, then heard him lean back.
"And I dislike having my thoughts altered for any reason."
He left Dumbledore's and Voldemort's names unsaid, but she nodded quietly. "I quite understand. I am sorry, Severus."
She heard him exhale and then a soft rustle she assumed was a nod. She continued, "But "
A sigh from the lounge.
"I am sorry to go on, but it's too important, because well I am planning to 'alter' a great deal more than your thoughts, after all..." Her voice trailed away.
"Indeed but not without with my prior knowledge and consent nor without my assistance." A soft rustle as his invisible gesture indicated the kitchen arch, through which Hermione saw the hazy pink steam from the potion hovering near the ceiling.
"Of course."
The silence between them eased into smoother lines.
Hermione leaned back against the lounge. "Now that we know slight changes to history are possible without any ill effects in the future... erm... present, I mean, saving perhaps to your temper, I've no need to go back again until you've finished brewing the potion." She shifted Mimi in her lap and fished the coin from her pocket. "Here, you keep it. We'll call it earnest mon "
As the coin flashed in the sunlight, Mimi pounced, batting the coin from Hermione's hand.
"Mimi, no!"
The coin spun upwards, and Hermione lunged to catch it.
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From one of the shelves back in the ever-expanding Hogwarts section of the Archive, Demetrios heard a soft, tentative guitar melody.
He stopped twirling the rose and listened.
The melody repeated, this time with increasing self-assurance as another shelf joined in counterpoint, providing a steadying but somehow wistful harmonic line.
At the sound of two file-boxes falling in quick succession to the floor, his eyes sparkled.
The melody began a third time, and he drifted through the Archive, eyes closed, head back, singing, " 'On a dark desert highway...'"
---
"Mimi, no!"
As Severus watched, Hermione rose, spilling Mimi out of her lap as she reached for the tumbling coin.
Her fingers closed around it.
He saw her eyes lose focus the moment before she collapsed facedown into his lap.
Demetrios's soundtrack for this chapter is "Hotel California," by The Eagles. Because Ari is wise and listens to Ana.
~ A.
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So, I read this story quite a long time ago, and for some reason remembered it as being finished. Rather startled when I couldn't continue on after this chapter. I hope you haven't given up on it entirely. I have enjoyed your writing more than anything I've read in quite a long time. I love the interaction in our two favorite swots. You bring them to life so close to how I imagine them myself. If you ever need any encouragement or assistance please let me know. I'd be happy to do anything to help this story find its ending...
For the love of Snape, please update this! It's A brillant story and I'm dying to see it completed.
Please continue this fanfic!! I would really love to know what happens to Mee and if Hermione gets back to herself.!!!!?
Best. Fic. Ever!!!!
I keep on wanting to review, then I just have to read the others first, and they say it all so well.
All I'm left with, is: I love Meemee, the two not -quite ghosts, with their wonderous physicality , -ties ..??
Hermione's faith and brilliant mind, and the transparent,happy texture in the writing.
It is so good. Satisfying, like Impressionists, or Bach.
Favouriting it, obviously.
Sighing quietly:please let him live, with her.
What an utterly brilliant, enthralling story! Please finish it, I can't stand not knowing how it ends!
How did I ever miss these updates? I am so glad that I came across them now! Wow, over two years since the last updates that I saw, and I still remember so clearly what was happening in this story. That just goes to show how memorable and intriguing your writing is. I so very much enjoy this story, and I just love Mimi. And the detail of the hourglass turning in the fireplace - as someone who wrestles with inadequate and infuriating technology, I love this!
Woohoo! New chapters. Excellent as always. I love the two different and yet similar Snapes. So much fun to read. I'm looking forward to future chapters. Thank you.
“She will do as she is bidden.”
Hermione laughed shortly. “You don’t have much experience with cats, do you?”
Nor much with personal interactions either...
Love the humour!
Great developments and revelations!
Too funny!
Ooh, love hanging in the balance.
Hmm, interesting development.
The letters on the table scraped almost silently into “Wtf?”
To Mimi, of course, that meant “Whut that forr?” – but Severus didn’t see it, and Mimi couldn’t have explained it to him if he had.
It amounted to much the same thing, regardless.
Too funny and way above his head. :)
Demetrios is great! I love the little insular world you've created for Hermione in this story!
Love the cereal, too funny!
Mimi is too cute!
Glad to see this posted and updated! Off to re-read!
Ok, I am in the middle of my first reading of this story, but I just had to comment. I love some of the concepts in this story so very much, and even all the references and connections to philosophy and history and such. Demetrios is awesome. Ahhh...I love it! *rushes to continue*
I was so delighted to see the updates for this story that I went back and re-read it from the beginning! I can only echo all of the other well-deserved compliments here and sit back to wait anxiously for the next update.
Oh, I'm hooked on this story! Thank you so much, and I look forward to more!
OMG, she is going to bring him back, so she can kill him.
Aha!! A breakthrough! At least I think so. And I'm so glad the kitten was found. Please don't make us wait too long for the next update?
The potion emitted a single bubble and turned a sullen shade of blue.
When enumerating your many strengths, did I remember to mention that you are unparalleled in WHIMSY????
"Oh, do go on grasping at that straw, for as long as you can..."
~permits self small shiver of delight~
"When I know your guilt, your despair, your self-imposed hair-shirt of heroic self-sacrifice? Fighting through the broken glass of your words, trying to find one elusive moment when you can actually hear me? When your insults and sarcasm make my teeth ache even as my heart breaks for you?"
Well, there's your whimsy, and then there's your lyricism. Your poetry. Lovely, dearest.
But best of all ...
MEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
A kitten in the Library? The books will never be the same. ^_^