Right Here In My Arms
Hanagasume182 Reviews | 7.72/10 (182 Ratings, 0 Likes, 111 Favorites )
After her messy divorce, Hermione Granger finds that someone is trying to destroy her reputation. She seeks out the help of Severus Snape to help her find out who it is. Will their past relationship affect how they work together?
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Hanagasume
Member Since 2008 | 31 Stories | Favorited by 246 | 119 Reviews Written | 1,704 Review Responses
I write fan fiction: I am a big SS/HG shipper, but I also like RL/HG, DM/LL and tastefully written Dramione or Lumione on occasion.
I photoshop: I use photoshop an awful lot to create my own banners and edit photos - I love my DSLR.
I am a bibliophile: Paperback, hardcover, graphic novel, fiction or non-fiction. You name it, I read it and collect it.
SEVERUS SNAPE IS MY ONE TRUE LOVE!!!
Reviews for Right Here In My Arms
Very sweet story!
I always love a happy ending! Thanks for sharing such a nice story with us.
yes, but i always liked my cabernet at cellar room temperature! this was a facinating story and with the lovliest happy ending. thanks for sharing your time talent and vision. christmas and holiday smoochies
my sweetie makes hamburger casserole rather than quail but the thought is the same. lovely update. thanks and christmas and holiday smoochies
Response from Hanagasume (Author of Right Here In My Arms)
My sweetie can't cook - I dont make quail either though :p Thanks for the review :)
i really enjoyed this story, but i must say... why pomphrey? i've always thought it would be dumbledore and mcgonagall.
Response from Hanagasume (Author of Right Here In My Arms)
Thanks. My only answer to your question is, why not Madam Pomfrey? Why does it HAVE to be McGonagall?
Wonderful ending, to a wonderful story. Thanks for sharing.
Response from Hanagasume (Author of Right Here In My Arms)
Thanks so much :) I am pleased that it was enjoyable!
Loved this one. It goes on my favorites list. Encore!
Response from Hanagasume (Author of Right Here In My Arms)
Thank you very much :) I am very flattered :D
He he he, the sneaky devil! Would like to see their reaction to finding out about Dumbledore's tricks, but I think that's its own story to be told. ;)
Response from Hanagasume (Author of Right Here In My Arms)
Heheh, yes, but there are no guarantees that there will be any sort of sequel to this story. Thanks for reviewing!
That was a fantactic story and the end is just perfect. Maybe now you'llbe ready to post the sequel of The Headmaster... *puppy dog eye*
Response from Hanagasume (Author of Right Here In My Arms)
Thanks so much :) I am glad that you enjoyed it. I'm afraid that the sequel to the Headmaster is not yet ready to post, but it is in the works. I can only promise to post it on its completion - I do not like to post stories that I can't complete - its unfair to the readers. Thanks again!
Way to go, Angela. What a delightful story this has been from beginning to end! And of course Albus would have done everything within his power to bring Severus and Hermione back together. I would have expected no less of him. LOL!Severus' proposal and Hermione's stunned silence put a smile on my face, and I chuckled when the other patrons in the restaurant had to remind her that she needed to answer him.I liked the simplicity of their wedding, and Albus' gift was spectacularly generous. Living in Hogsmeade was the perfect answer for them since it allowed them their privacy without either of them having to make too long a journey to get to work.It's so wonderful to know that they have a baby on the way, and the way you have written this final chapter wraps this story up very nicely, but also leaves room for a sequel if your muse ever leads you this way again.Thank you for so much reading pleasure, m'dear. It was splendid!
Hugs, Beth
Response from Hanagasume (Author of Right Here In My Arms)
Dumbledore is well known for his meddling, so I couldn't resist including that as a little bit of the plot. Lol. I laughed a little when I wrote the proposal too. I realised that after 'The Headmaster' I was going to have to do a better job of wrapping this one up if I wasn't going to have to write a sequel, and so it is unlikely that I will. Although there is always the chance that I'll write a future snapshot or a one-shot later on. It wont be long until I will be posting more stories :) Thanks for all of the reviews and support :D
Just a wonderful last chapter - I feel sad it's all over. I htink I'll have to read it again from the start!
Response from Hanagasume (Author of Right Here In My Arms)
Thanks so much :) I am glad that you enjoyed it enough to read it all over again :D Thanks for reading and reviewing this fic for me!
Beautiful story! Such a sweet... yet wicked! ...ending! Sequel perhaps?? I'm so glad I took the time to read! Definitely a favorite! :)
Response from Hanagasume (Author of Right Here In My Arms)
Heheh, yes I thought I would finish with a nice and lemony bang :) I have no intentions at present to write a sequel for this, however, I may be tempted into writing a Christmas one-shot, but no promises. Thanks so much for reading and leaving a review!
This chapter is filled with all the love and intimacy and promise of good things to come! Just the way I like it. 8^) But before I say anything further, I want to tell you that I like Sophie. She is so much like Hermione that I can see them working very well together. She is bright, thoughtful, and possesses an instinct for knowing how others are feeling. She may not know why, but she is intuitive enough to be able to read the emotions of others. She will make a fine healer.Knowing that your story is almost over makes me excited on the one hand and sad on the other. I'm looking forward to seeing what you do with this final chapter (I'll bet my socks that it's all lovey and lovely!), but I'll be sad for it to come to an end. I have enjoyed this story immensely, but then I like everything you write!'I love you, and I will be here for you, no matter what." Severus' declaration of love to Hermione was just what she needed to hear.I can picture Severus' rooms in my mind's eye with the softly flickering candles and the red rose placed there just for her. This romantic dinner can only lead to one thing: very romantic afters!Well done.Beth
Response from Hanagasume (Author of Right Here In My Arms)
Mmmm, well with much of the story coloured with mystery and drama, it was only fitting to have a nice, romantic ending :) I'm sad to see it end here also, but with the ending of one story comes the beginning of another. I am so glad you've liked it! Thanks for reviewing!
yay! i'm glad it was skeeter! i never liked her, never! wonderful update. thanks and much smoochies
Response from Hanagasume (Author of Right Here In My Arms)
Hahahah yeah I like evil Skeeter too :p Thanks for reviewing! *hugs* A~
ohhh! yay! they caught the bad guys! i wonder how the scarab tattoo plays into the story.. hmm...you've definitaly crafted a wonderful tale here.
Response from Hanagasume (Author of Right Here In My Arms)
Heheh, yeah not sure I remember what the deal was with the beetle either :p Thanks for reviewing! A~
I love Hermione's boldness at kissing him like that...you made the build up between them so slow....it was torture! I loved how they fell right back into their old habits with one another...it shows the depth of their previous relationship very well. I'm thoroughly enjoying it! :)
Response from Hanagasume (Author of Right Here In My Arms)
Hahah, thank you... Slow Torture is my middle name :p A~
Fabulous! Read all 15 chapters in couple of days and am looking fwd to the next one :) Excellent work! SG x
Response from Hanagasume (Author of Right Here In My Arms)
Thanks so much! I am glad you liked it! Only two more chapters to go before the end! A~
Too funny with Rita Skeeter! Poor guy being knocked out for 3 days, guess we'll have to wait to see what comes next!
Response from Hanagasume (Author of Right Here In My Arms)
Heheh indeed you shall have to wait, but hopefully not too long! Thanks :)
Good for you! I would never have guessed Rita Skeeter as the diabolical witch behind all the misery and mayhem. She was pretty darned fast to get the better of Severus, and the force she used must have been tremendous to do so much damage. But at least all four of them have been taken into custody and will spend the rest of their days in Azkaban.With the spell Molly found it will only be a short time before Hermione's ex-husband is returned to health, and then Severus and Hermione can follow their hearts. Yay! Now, why is Severus so concerned about being out of commission for the last three days? Just what has he got planned? Whatever it is, I hope it's not too late. Thanks for the great chapter, brandy.Beth
Response from Hanagasume (Author of Right Here In My Arms)
Heh, yeah I thought I would throw a curve ball in there and make it someone nobody would suspect :p I think that throwing herself at him would have rocked him enough to fall over, but the main damage was caused by the staircase me thinks.. And yes, we are drawing to a close very shortly, now that they have been captured. As for the rest, you'll simply have to wait and see :) Thanks Beth! A~
I am SO happy he told her he loved her! It was a beautiful interlude.Livvy
Response from Hanagasume (Author of Right Here In My Arms)
Thank you :) I am glad that you thought so! A~
Well! That was a score for Hermione! I really like how you have developed shut a rich story right from the start. Can't wait to see where they go from here!Livvy
Response from Hanagasume (Author of Right Here In My Arms)
Thanks so much :) And indeed, score one for Hermione! I hope to post the next chapter soon! A~
That's so sweet. At least Severus is learning he has to actually TELL her how he feels.
Response from Hanagasume (Author of Right Here In My Arms)
Heheheh, yup he is a slow learner, as with many men. Thanks for reviewing! A~
I think Mad-Eye was right about the need to act that night, but I'm glad that Arthur said what he did about not going off half-cocked. The last thing they need is to inspire more Death Eaters to come out of hiding and begin attacking people.
I knew from the "get-go" that Alastor's statement about "the girl" not needing to get involved wasn't going to go unchallenged, and I loved it when Hermione told him where he could get off that little train. Good for her!
Severus didn't get everything that he wanted either. She did promise to be with the group that would wait outside, but I have a feeling that it won't take long for her to go inside the building to make sure Severus is not hurt – or worse. One thing is certain though, they are very much in love, and if anything happened to the other, they would have a very difficult time dealing with it.
Great update! I can't wait to see what happens next.Beth
Response from Hanagasume (Author of Right Here In My Arms)
Heheh, yeah good thing Arthur provided the voice of reason :p And as for the Hermione "girl" issue, I mostly added that due to the common portrayal of Mad-eye as a bit of a chauvinist in fan fiction. Lol. Anyway, more to come soon! A~
moving along more quickly now. great update. thanks muchly
Response from Hanagasume (Author of Right Here In My Arms)
Yep, it's time to get the ball rolling a little more quickly. Thanks so much! A~
I hope they don't have to explain to all and sundry why they are so tired that night, when they had ample opportunity to go home and sleep ;) This was a nice chapter. I'm glad that she can appreciate how sweet it is that he doesn't want to lose her, and that is why he is insistent on getting his way where the plans are concerned. Otherwise, it might have turned into an ugly battle of wills. Looking forward to some ass kickin' in the next chapter. I secretly think that the second time around, the Order of the Phoenix probably still meets regularly even though Voldemort is gone. In times of peace, I suppose they just have movie night or something. It is a good thing that your story is providing them with something else to do as a group. Just can't see them all agreeing on what to watch...
Response from Hanagasume (Author of Right Here In My Arms)
Hahahah, well I'm sure everyone would have guessed why :p And yes, the battle is fast approaching. Hope to have the next chapter back from my beta soon! And I agree - I imagine more of a world where the Order is still close after the final battle. Thanks! A~