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Right Here In My Arms
Hanagasume182 Reviews | 7.72/10 (182 Ratings, 0 Likes, 111 Favorites )
After her messy divorce, Hermione Granger finds that someone is trying to destroy her reputation. She seeks out the help of Severus Snape to help her find out who it is. Will their past relationship affect how they work together?
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Hanagasume
Member Since 2008 | 31 Stories | Favorited by 246 | 119 Reviews Written | 1,704 Review Responses
I write fan fiction: I am a big SS/HG shipper, but I also like RL/HG, DM/LL and tastefully written Dramione or Lumione on occasion.
I photoshop: I use photoshop an awful lot to create my own banners and edit photos - I love my DSLR.
I am a bibliophile: Paperback, hardcover, graphic novel, fiction or non-fiction. You name it, I read it and collect it.
SEVERUS SNAPE IS MY ONE TRUE LOVE!!!
Reviews for Right Here In My Arms
Its lovely how you ended this chapter! Glad to see they're finding their way back to each other "the way it used to be"...
Response from Hanagasume (Author of Right Here In My Arms)
YES! Thats a cool comparison - never would have thought of that! I am glad you like it so far! Thanks! A~
Such a lovely chapter, was lovely to see Severus take the lead holding her hand in the hall and being so caring in his quarters. I like how they are progressing, but guess there got to be a hitch somwhere before they find their happy ending (and ours too).
Response from Hanagasume (Author of Right Here In My Arms)
Thanks so much :) I like hand holding, and I thought it was fitting without being too rushed... Thanks! A~
Hourray!! He admitted he loves her. He even said the words aloud. Alright, it was to a sleeping Hermione, but for him that's a big step. And the last scene was so peaceful a moment. Just perfect.
Response from Hanagasume (Author of Right Here In My Arms)
Heheh, yep. In his own, sneaky, round-about way he has. Now he just has to say it to her face. Thanks so much! A~
Oh, how I hope Hermine hear Severus' declaration of love for her. This has been such a sweet and calm time for them, I can't help but worry that something awful is just around the corner. Like, who is using Hermione's hair and what terrible things are they planning to do to make her look very bad. I still can't get the thoughts Polyjuice out of my mind.I loved the tenderness they've shared in this chapter. You made me smile. Thanks.Beth
Response from Hanagasume (Author of Right Here In My Arms)
Thanks Beth :) I am glad to have made you smile. I realise you have a lot of questions going through your mind, and hopefully these will be answered for you soon. I figured giving the couple some lovin' friendly time would be a nice breather, if only for a little while. Thanks! A~
This is a very sweet chapter. Things between them are progressing nicely. I am very worried about who will be using Hermiones hair.
Response from Hanagasume (Author of Right Here In My Arms)
Thanks so much :) I am glad you don't think I'm rushing this too much... I was afraid I might have been. We'll soon find out the rest!
Is it too much to hope that she wasn't really sleeping?? Very sweet chapter! Any new leads on the mysterious kidnapper?
Response from Hanagasume (Author of Right Here In My Arms)
Heheh, unfortunately I think we all know that she really was asleep :p More kidnapper news on the way! Thanks! A~
Why is it that any time we hear the words "I love you" only one or the other is awake. They need to coordinate better :) This was such a nice, calm chapter. I am sure that means there is some drama right around the corner!
Response from Hanagasume (Author of Right Here In My Arms)
Heheheh, 'tis the way of the world to play nasty tricks on everyone. I am sure you are right about the drama :) Thanks! A~
Wonderful update, so touching. I hope they find their way back to each other fully in the next chapter.
Response from Hanagasume (Author of Right Here In My Arms)
Thanks so much :) Touching is my middle name in more ways than one :p Lol. Okay so I make lame jokes. Thanks for reviewing! A~
what a scary thing to wake up to! wonderful update. thanks muchly
Response from Hanagasume (Author of Right Here In My Arms)
Thanks so much :) I am glad you liked it, and I agree - it would be scary.
This chapter is filled with crosscurrents of emotions! Severus has been knocked out, hexed and beaten, Obliviated, and left out in the snow. Thank goodness Professor Flitwick found him before he froze to death.Hermione was abducted, blindfolded and forced to hear all the letters her tormentors had sent to her, been left in utter silence, and had her hair harvested. What are they trying to do? Is this only to make her feel more fear? Or perhaps they intend to to Polyjuice themselves and do unspeakable things to make it seem like Hermione is running amok?I'm very worried by what has happened and can't get it out of my mind that this is only the beginning of the escalation of the attacks on her.But I am also extremely happy that Hermione has told Severus that she loves him, and I had a big smile on my face when Severus called her name and smiled... while dreaming about her!Yes, they will have a happy ending after all of the problems are sorted, but I have a feeling that there are more difficult times ahead of them before all the sorting is done. At least they have each other to hold on to, and I'll bet Severus will make the Death Eaters pay dearly for harming his Hermione!Well done, m'dear.Beth
Response from Hanagasume (Author of Right Here In My Arms)
Ahhh Beth, I love getting reviews from you :) They are always so long and filled with questions! I know it seems a lot like there is more to come, and there is. And hopefully I will be able to deliver it sooner rather than later. I am so glad you like it, and grateful that you don't beg for chapters, but rather, that you tell me what you liked about my chapters instead :) Thank you so much! A~
I glad that they both seem to be okay considering their ordeal. This will be a good thing to bring them closer to one another. I love this story :)
Response from Hanagasume (Author of Right Here In My Arms)
Yes, it should do that :) I am glad you like this... The next chapter should be along soon! Thanks!A~
Beautiful ending to this chapter :) I can see that they are definately meant to be!
Response from Hanagasume (Author of Right Here In My Arms)
Thank you :) I am glad it is coming across that way. Next chapter along soon! A~
Good chapter, revealing but still tantalisingly lacking in information! Can't be good if they've harvested Hermione's hair...
Response from Hanagasume (Author of Right Here In My Arms)
Heheh, nope - hairloss in that fashion is usually deeply concerning. Thanks for reviewing :) A~
I melted when he said Hermione with a smile on his face. Hopefully this incident will make them realise how much they need each other. Great chappie.
Response from Hanagasume (Author of Right Here In My Arms)
Heheh, yeah that was a fluffy moment. I am glad you like it :) Thanks so much! A~
Who are these miscreants?? I suppose if Severus' memory of the man's voice was erased it's because he can recognize it. I hope someone can help him remember so the bad guys go to prison and the love birds can solve their issues and get back to their happy life together.
Response from Hanagasume (Author of Right Here In My Arms)
Everything will unfold soon enough :) And then, as you say, the lovebirds can get back to their happy lives. Thanks for reviewing! A~
Well, I'm glad they're safe! Great work, I'm looking forward to more already!
Response from Hanagasume (Author of Right Here In My Arms)
Thank you so much :) I look forward to posting more. A~
The plot thickens. Hopefully their shared traumatic experience will jump start their relationship although it seems they were starting down that road before they were attacked anyway. Looking forward to more!
Response from Hanagasume (Author of Right Here In My Arms)
Heheh, yeah they had been starting down that road, and hopefully this will help them along. Thanks!A~
Very sweet chapter, but if they're harvesting her hair, that can't be a good thing!
Response from Hanagasume (Author of Right Here In My Arms)
Harversting hair is never a good sign. I am glad you liked the chapter though :) Thanks!A~
It sounds like whoever Severus and Hermione's captors were, they put the pair of them through seven layers of hell. I'm still thinking it's a woman Severus was seeing after his breakup with Hermione that is the one behind all this... she probably realized she was getting nowhere with Severus because his heart still belonged to Hermione, and with the breakup of Hermione's marriage, figured that the former lovers might reunite. She was probably fixated on just punishing Hermione until Severus re-entered the picture, which is likely what set her off on both of them. I'm curious to learn who this woman is... perhaps Narcissa? Judging by the robes and tactics used, she's at the very least connected to the Death Eaters. Very intriguing story and a really great read!
Response from Hanagasume (Author of Right Here In My Arms)
Yes, they are trying to put them through a lot, but hopefully this will only serve to cement their slowly rebuilding relationship. All in due time, their tormentors will be revealed! Thanks!A~
‘We won’t fail a second time…’*wibbles* *cries* *loves it*
Response from Hanagasume (Author of Right Here In My Arms)
Awwww I like that line too :) Proud. Thanks so much lovie! A~
more and more intriguing! thanks muchly
Response from Hanagasume (Author of Right Here In My Arms)
Thanks :)
You are really keeping us on our toes, aren't you? Great work!
Response from Hanagasume (Author of Right Here In My Arms)
Hehehe yep :) Thats what I was trying to do. Glad to see it's working! Thanks for reviewing! A~
A silly idea just struck me. What if Sev himself send those letters to have her seek his help? That good be a good way for him to know if she still feel something for him and try to have her back. I know it's silly but...
Response from Hanagasume (Author of Right Here In My Arms)
Hehehe, well you will just have to wait and see who it is. More will be on the way soon! Thanks for reviewing! A~
This is getting interesting! I'm looking forward to seeing what happens next!
Response from Hanagasume (Author of Right Here In My Arms)
Awwww thanks so much :) I am glad you find it interesting, and hope you find the next few just as.Thanks for reviewing! A~
I love the chemistry between these two. I can't think of any other stories with a past relationship between the two where one of them got married. Very interesting!
Response from Hanagasume (Author of Right Here In My Arms)
Hehe thanks so much :) I am glad you like that perspective. Thanks for reviewing! A~