Right Here In My Arms
Hanagasume182 Reviews | 182 Ratings, 0 Likes, 111 Favorites )
After her messy divorce, Hermione Granger finds that someone is trying to destroy her reputation. She seeks out the help of Severus Snape to help her find out who it is. Will their past relationship affect how they work together?
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Hanagasume
Member Since 2008 | 31 Stories | Favorited by 246 | 119 Reviews Written | 1,704 Review Responses
I write fan fiction: I am a big SS/HG shipper, but I also like RL/HG, DM/LL and tastefully written Dramione or Lumione on occasion.
I photoshop: I use photoshop an awful lot to create my own banners and edit photos - I love my DSLR.
I am a bibliophile: Paperback, hardcover, graphic novel, fiction or non-fiction. You name it, I read it and collect it.
SEVERUS SNAPE IS MY ONE TRUE LOVE!!!
Reviews for Right Here In My Arms
I'd love to see him confessing his feelings to Poppy. The woman's advices would maybe help him to find the strengh to tell Hermione oh his undying love for her.
Response from Hanagasume (Author of Right Here In My Arms)
Hehe, but that would just be too easy if he did. He has to be a difficult man :) Thanks for reviewing! More on the way! A~
Another great chapter. Look forward to how they progress.
Response from Hanagasume (Author of Right Here In My Arms)
Thanks so much for that :) Next chapter up soon! Thanks for reviewing! A~
Severus just blew off the one person he needs to talk to the most. Sad, but typical. And he also succeeded in further convincing Hermione that he completely hates her. Talk about being his own worst enemy!
Response from Hanagasume (Author of Right Here In My Arms)
Severus always does what he shouldn't :p Only time will tell if he improves upon this particular fault. Thanks for reviewing! A~
Great chapter!!!
Response from Hanagasume (Author of Right Here In My Arms)
Thanks so much! Next one will be up soon! A~
Sometimes I want to strangle both of them, but since "pride goeth before a fall," perhaps both of them, being the prideful folk that the are, will soon "fall" in love all over again... although I don't' think they ever fell out of love to begin with!This is a wonderful story, Angela, and I can't help begging for another update soon! (I really do try not to put pressure on an author to update quickly, but I like this so much I've had to make an exception. LOL!)Beth
Response from Hanagasume (Author of Right Here In My Arms)
Sometimes I would love to strangle both characters myself (particularly Hermione for marrying Michael :p). I'll try to be as consistent as I can with the updates! I'll be adding chapter 6 to the queue soon. Thanks for reviewing, Beth! A~
"She missed those times with him a lot." It would have suited me just fine if Severus had chosen to take a peek into her mind, but I think she would have been upset if he had.
I almost jumped for joy when he told her that perhaps it would be a good idea to take a leave of absence from her job and that his time for assisting her would be limited.... "to afternoons, nights that I am not on patrol and weekends." Yes! And with any luck, Hermione will stay at Hogwarts for the duration of their search for her tormentor.
But then she had to kick up a little storm by telling him that she thought he was still behaving like a prick, left his office, AND allowed the door to slam shut after she walked out. Not good.
I can't tell you how much I love this story. It's got everything that a great and engaging tale should have: tension, latent passions, hurt feelings, confusion, an underlying certainty that a great attraction between the two of them still exists, and an evil ne'er-do-well who is determined to take revenge on one of the protagonists.Very nicely done!!!Beth
Response from Hanagasume (Author of Right Here In My Arms)
Lol, interesting thought, but I think he has a lot of respect for her mind, so he would never :) And certainly spending more time together would help them on the way to perhaps starting again! But yeah - Hermione walking off in a snit was a tad immature :p I am really flattered that you like this story! More should be along soon! *hugs* A~
'You had better explain when she comes, Severus Snape.' So, Severus and Hermione were lovers as well as friends before she married Michael. What on earth could have caused her to abandon her relationship with Severus to marry that blond-haired fellow who can't be bothered to pay his bills. Something just ain't right about this...And now that Minerva knows Hermione is on the way to Hogwarts, she wants an explanation when she arrives. Explain? Explain what? Another tantalizing chapter filled with new information and more questions. Well done!Beth
Response from Hanagasume (Author of Right Here In My Arms)
Hhehe, they were indeed lovers. Hopefully I will be able to explin more why she made the choice to marry Michael in the future. Minerva just happens too be a curious cat :P Thanks for reviewing! A~
Great lord, what a mess. Has Michael been cursed by someone to whom he owes money? Or is it the mystery woman who is out to get Hermione?What a great tension builder! You really know how to muddy the waters, dear. I'm off to the next chapter.Beth
Response from Hanagasume (Author of Right Here In My Arms)
Well, you will have to wait and see... I'll give you a hint - everything is connected somehow. Thanks, dear! A~
Yay, Angela! I've finally caught up on enough things that I could start another WIP!!!This first chapter is so good! And as usual with your writing, you got me hooked right away! Now I wonder who the mystery woman is who is out to smear our Miss Granger's good name... so many names come to mind, but I will content myself with reading this delicious story and just keep my own counsel for now.Good job! 
Beth
Response from Hanagasume (Author of Right Here In My Arms)
Yay for catching up! Hoping to post this this story along as quickly as I can so I don't keep you all waiting forever. I am glad I hooked you first chapter :p Time to real them in...Thanks for reviewing! A~
WHAT AN ARSEHOLE!!! Sev what a jerk he is being to both of them from denying her his love. I would hex him seven ways to Sunday! Awesome chapter, but grrrr! Lol.
Response from Hanagasume (Author of Right Here In My Arms)
Arsehole indeed. It's very similar to a situation I once went through, although I did not to that extent! Thanks for reviewing! A~
Who would have thought Harry would be the one trying to push them together? And wow - Severus is such a jerk. I don't blame Hermione at all. Great chapter!
Response from Hanagasume (Author of Right Here In My Arms)
Hehe I thought that was a nice touch :) And who could blame her really? Thanks for reviewing! A~
Great! I love the way we always get only bits and pieces!! Really good work!
Response from Hanagasume (Author of Right Here In My Arms)
Hehe, awesome! Coz I love only giving you little bits and pieces so you stay interested. Glad you liked it! Thanks for reviewing! A~
haha that's spot on Severus Snape. He knows what a good thing he has but he's not going to reveal any emotional connection because that opens him up to get hurt more. Poor guy. I hope some sense gets knocked into both of them :)
Response from Hanagasume (Author of Right Here In My Arms)
Hehe, isn't it just? It's always the way with males - don't see a good thing when it's staring them in the face screaming. Hopefully the next few chapters will tell more.Thanks! A~
So he is in in love with her more a decade and never said a word, even after she told him. WHAT.A.PRICK !! On that regard she's absolutely right. I hope he'll find the courage to tell her this time.I can't wait hte next: the two of them, alone, in a freezing castle...
Response from Hanagasume (Author of Right Here In My Arms)
Yeah, he is a bit of a jerk - not only is he hurting himself, but he hurt her as well. We'll have to wait and see if he's going to let her slip away again! Thanks for reviewing! A~
so that's why they broke up. at least he's going to help (or there wouldn't be a story!) thanks so much for the terrific update.
Response from Hanagasume (Author of Right Here In My Arms)
Heh, yeah that is why they parted ways :P Of course he's going to help. Thanks for reviewing! Glad you're liking it.A~
Sounds as if they both need a good kick, actually. But maybe by now we know Severus better than Hermione did at the time. Great story in the making, I suspect.
Response from Hanagasume (Author of Right Here In My Arms)
Well its likely that we do, considering WE know he loves her and SHE doesn't yet :P Thanks for leaving a review!A~
Severus you damn fool, why didnt't he tell her when she said she loved you, but thats Severus, plus we wouldn't have this wonderful story haha. By the looks of things he is going to be a right 'prick' using Hermione's words, trying to keep his emotions hidden. Great update, can't wait for more.
Response from Hanagasume (Author of Right Here In My Arms)
Well, only time, and more chapters will tell Severus' side to the story. Thanks for reviewing! A~
What do I think? I love it! You know what they say? Love and hate aren't that far apart. That's some pretty cold treatment Severus was giving Hermione. I think he still cares for her. Hmm?
Response from Hanagasume (Author of Right Here In My Arms)
Hehe, I am glad you like it so far. It says as much in chapter 3 that he loves her still, but we'll have to wait and see where it goes. Thanks for reviewing! A~
I knew there had to be a really good reason for Hermione to leave Severus... him being unable to say that he loved her back certainly qualifies. No self-respecting woman is going to want to spend her life with a lover who isn't able to return her feelings or offer her much of a future. At the end of last chapter, Minerva mentioned that Severus had better "explain" when she comes, I look forward to reading Severus' side of things. Superb update as always, BTW. :-)
Response from Hanagasume (Author of Right Here In My Arms)
There was a good reason :) I don't think I could have been in an unrequited love situation either. More is on the way soon! Thanks for leaving a review! A~
what by all that's holy would make her choose a blond airhead over our seviekins??!! i'm sure thereby hangs quite a tale. great begining. thanks so much
Response from Hanagasume (Author of Right Here In My Arms)
Who really knows why she would... All will be revealed in due time. Thanks for the review! A~
So they have a past history. I hope spending time together will help her discover she's still in love with him... *wink* After all, that's where she belong: right here in his arms.
Response from Hanagasume (Author of Right Here In My Arms)
Heheh, hopefully they will come to some sort of arrangement :) Lol. Thanks for reviewing! A~
A break between scene change would help. I was a bit confused at first reading. So...Mighty Hermione, in control of her destiny. It sounds like someone wants to muck it up... Maybe Ms Rita Skeeter, perhaps?Livvy
Response from Hanagasume (Author of Right Here In My Arms)
Hahahaha I shall never tell :D But mayhaps you are right... Thanks for reviewing! A~
I'm glad they got the bad guys and that Severus and Hermione got back together....good job
Response from Hanagasume (Author of Right Here In My Arms)
Thanks so much :) Just one last little snippet of peaceful times to go and then thats all for this one :)
A bit of a sickly-sweet bridging chapter, but still nice to see. I guess the wine was an oversight.Can't wait for last chapter!
Response from Hanagasume (Author of Right Here In My Arms)
Not an oversight, but I will explain in the next chapter. Thanks for reviewing :)
Nice chapter! Only thing is - he told her to choose red, and she chose Sauvignon Blanc, a white wine. Was that deliberate?
Response from Hanagasume (Author of Right Here In My Arms)
Lol yes it was deliberate - everyone seems to be asking about it, and I will explain my reasoning at the end of the last chapter :p Thanks for reviewing!