Right Here In My Arms
Hanagasume182 Reviews | 7.72/10 (182 Ratings, 0 Likes, 111 Favorites )
After her messy divorce, Hermione Granger finds that someone is trying to destroy her reputation. She seeks out the help of Severus Snape to help her find out who it is. Will their past relationship affect how they work together?
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Hanagasume
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I write fan fiction: I am a big SS/HG shipper, but I also like RL/HG, DM/LL and tastefully written Dramione or Lumione on occasion.
I photoshop: I use photoshop an awful lot to create my own banners and edit photos - I love my DSLR.
I am a bibliophile: Paperback, hardcover, graphic novel, fiction or non-fiction. You name it, I read it and collect it.
SEVERUS SNAPE IS MY ONE TRUE LOVE!!!
Reviews for Right Here In My Arms
slow and steady wins the race! lovely update. thanks muchly
Response from Hanagasume (Author of Right Here In My Arms)
Yes indeed it does :) Thanks for reviewing! A~
I love the romance in this chapter. Seeing them quietly spending time together and sharing little thoughts and touches made me smile. I especially liked when Severus awoke from his nap to find that he was stretched out on the lounge and Hermione was lying on top of him. Woohoo!
When he asked her to accompany him to Prince Manor I wanted to cheer. YES!!! They have a chance to start over and really make a wonderful life together, and I hope there aren't too many stumbling blocks in their path. Of course, I can't shake the feeling that something horrid will happen to cause desention... but hopefully all will be well in the end.And there's still that nasty business about Hermione's tormentors having taken some of her hair when she was abducted. Every time I recall it, all I can think about is Polyjuice Potion. I'm afraid that one of her tormentors will use it to impersonate her and cause a big problem between her and Severus.Another great chapter, brandy! Thank you. 
Beth
Response from Hanagasume (Author of Right Here In My Arms)
Yes, I thought that our couple deserved a little romance and love time with each other. Heheh, and yes, the lying on top of him thing was very deliberate. Going to Prince manor will hopefully do some good for the couple. And I know you worry, but there will be a small break before anything dramatic happens! Thanks, Beth! :) A~
Ohhhh... romance!!!! Wonderfully written. I was there in the room... wanting to kick Hermione into touch, granted... but I was there, wanting him to snog her face off!!!! More... please!
Response from Hanagasume (Author of Right Here In My Arms)
Heheh, yeah romance indeffinately in the air. There will be more to come soon! Thanks so much! A~
This is so cute that he made me forget there is a threat outside. And there'a that nagging feeling that she wasn't kidnapped just for a few hours. Something must have happened during those hours.
Response from Hanagasume (Author of Right Here In My Arms)
Heheh, yes there is lots of things going on in the background. But there needs to be a nice, loving moment for them before things go crazy. A~
I think Hermione couldn't quite decide whether Severus called her 'love'. I love the interactions, hopefully they will find the words soon. Lovely chapter.
Response from Hanagasume (Author of Right Here In My Arms)
Heh, thanks so much :) I am glad you like it, and hopefully things will move along between the two of them sooner! A~
Very sweet, I'm so glad he doesn't push her away and I really hope their holiday is going to be great.
Response from Hanagasume (Author of Right Here In My Arms)
Heh, yes hopefully their holiday will be good. Thanks so much! A~
There is progress between them. How lovely! Asking her to Price Manor is a pretty big step for Severus, I should think. Lovely chapter, and I'm looking forward to the next. :)
Response from Hanagasume (Author of Right Here In My Arms)
Yes, it is a big step for him to take considering the length of time since they were last together. Thanks so much! I am glad it was enjoyable! A~
It will be good for them to be able to get away for awhile. Of course last time they tried to leave together it didn't go so well. Another nice chapter.
Response from Hanagasume (Author of Right Here In My Arms)
Yes, a holiday away from the castle will do them a lot of good. Hopefully this time it will be less eventful than the last. Thanks so much! A~
wow! what a terrific update. just when they were making progress, too. i can't wait for the next chapter! thanks muchly
Response from Hanagasume (Author of Right Here In My Arms)
Heheh, yeah it is a shame :( The next chapter will be along soon! Thanks for reviewing! A~
I can't help but think that the Malfoys are behind this somehow. I really did enjoy this chapter, especially Severus and Hermione finally talking. Please update soon. :)
Response from Hanagasume (Author of Right Here In My Arms)
Heheh, that seems to be quite a popular opinion amongst the readers here :) But I will let you read and find out on your own.Thanks for reviewing! A~
DRACO! IT HAS TO BE DRACO! AM I RIGHT??? PUHLEEEEEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!
Response from Hanagasume (Author of Right Here In My Arms)
Hehehe, I can't say I'm afraid. You will have to wait and see. I will post again as soon as I receive my chapters back from my beta. Thanks for reviewing! A~
Ohhhh I know its weird, but I love this cliffie! It'll build the anticipation, which I suppose is why you put it there :) Great chapter, and I love the Hermione/Severus talking action part. Thanks!
Response from Hanagasume (Author of Right Here In My Arms)
Hehehe, that is weird. I don't think anyone has ever said that they have liked a cliffie before :) Thanks for reviewing! A~
Oh who are these people that are trying to harm Hermione and Severus?!?!??!! I get that one of them is Evan Rosier, but who else? Who is the woman? Evil Cliffie!!! Loved this chapter though!
Response from Hanagasume (Author of Right Here In My Arms)
Ohhhhh I'd like to say, but I won't... You'll just have to wait and see :D I am glad you liked it! A~
Nice twist at the end of this chapter. It caught me off guard.
Response from Hanagasume (Author of Right Here In My Arms)
Heh, thank you :) I am glad you liked it.Thanks for reviewing! A~
I really hope he will keep opening up to her. This may be the first step to a renewed relationship between the two.
Response from Hanagasume (Author of Right Here In My Arms)
It might be ;D Thanks for reviewing! A~
I loved their conversation.........but oh no!
Response from Hanagasume (Author of Right Here In My Arms)
Hehehe, well I do what I can to keep you coming back for more :) Lol.Nah I don't mean it, but thanks for reviewing! A~
What do I think? I think you left us with an evil cliffie! I'm guessing that it must have been Rosier who knocked Severus out cold and spoke to Hermione calling her "Mudblood." Who ever it is, he must have come to kidnap her and take her away to whereever his partner in crime is waiting.Just when Severus had admitted that he had never stopped caring for her, that accursed man showed up and we must wait for the next chapter.Fabulous chapter, this is!Beth
Response from Hanagasume (Author of Right Here In My Arms)
Ahhh Beth, you always know exactly the right way to scold me and flatter me all at the same time :) As for what is to come... well that is a mystery, and hopefully I will be able to shock all of you with something totally different to what you are thinking :p Thanks so much for reviewing!A~
Aaargh, what now??? Don't leave us hanging there for too long!! Great chapter, but I don't think that Snape would be this open so soon...
Response from Hanagasume (Author of Right Here In My Arms)
I'll try not to leave it too long before the next update. My chapters are currently with my beta. Thanks for reviewing! A~
I am glad Severus has opened up a little now. But that cliffie Argh!
I have a thought who it may be.
Response from Hanagasume (Author of Right Here In My Arms)
Hehehehe, I seem to have stumped quite a few people already with that cliffhanger of mine. I didn't WANT to, you see, but I HAD to :) Thanks for leaving a review! A~
oh my goodness! A little romance and then, Drama... don't keep us waiting too long, will you?
Response from Hanagasume (Author of Right Here In My Arms)
Hehehe, yes that was kind of the point :D I'll try not to keep you hanging! Thanks for leaving a review! A~
What do I think? Argh! Evil cliffie?! That's not like you, Brandy.I liked how Severus opened up to Hermione a little bit, not a full confession of love, but it's a lot for him.And then... darkness. Who is that man? Malfoy? I just don't know. Can't wait for the update.
Response from Hanagasume (Author of Right Here In My Arms)
Hehehe, I didn't mean to have to do that to all of you, but it was necessary for the mystery :) I am glad that Severus' pace is not too fast for you.As for the rest, you'll have to wait and see! Thanks for reviewing! A~
Gulp!But let's see now... the attacker outside the gates called Hermione 'Mudblood', and in the taunting note she was addressed as 'Granger'. And the tone of the note made it seem as though the person considered her a rival of sorts... could it possibly be Draco behind all this?Whoever this person(s) is, the attacks have all been personal in nature... while Draco - or Lucius - could indeed hold a personal grudge, I was wondering if the grudge could maybe be romantic in nature. If a woman is orchestrating all this, it could be that she has accomplices that are doing her dirty work. Severus mentioned that he had not been able to feel for anyone since Hermione, which implies that he tried to move on. Maybe there is a woman who holds Hermione personally responsible for her romantic failure?*Ahem* I guess I had best keep reading if I want to find out, eh? 
Something was niggling at me so I re-read a pertinent chapter... I am definitely leaning toward the latter theory now. And my number one suspect is a certain blonde. Hermione's dream makes me suspect she may harbor ill feeling towards Severus as well... 
Response from Hanagasume (Author of Right Here In My Arms)
Hehehehe, well, speculate as much as you like - I'm not going to say a word. It'll be interesting to see what theories people will come up with throughout the posting of this story. Thanks for reviewing! And I'll try not to leave it too long before the next chapter.A~
He's trying so hard to hide the truth. It's so painful that it's sad. Then he's cruel to Hermione, too.You're gonna make me cry, Brandy. Love the chapter!
Response from Hanagasume (Author of Right Here In My Arms)
He's playing some serious hard-to-get is what :p And he is being cruel, but Hermione can take care of herself. She is a strong, independent woman :) Thanks for reviewing! A~
what a superb update. our sevie is a storng one. thanks so much
Response from Hanagasume (Author of Right Here In My Arms)
Thanks so much! I am glad you liked it! A~
OH NOOO, I need more chapters! Excellent story. very very well written.
Response from Hanagasume (Author of Right Here In My Arms)
Hehe, more is on the way in the near future. Thanks for reviewing! A~