Chapter Thirty: Coming Competition
Chapter 30 of 32
MMADfanJohannes meets another Tyree, and he learns more about Sorley Mòr. Chapter features Johannes Birnbaum, Siofre Tyree, and Jacob Tyree.
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Tuesday proceeded much as Monday had, Johannes leading Lachina and Phoebe on a tour of the gardens and then showing them the new bere field. Lachina had decided to stay for the garden tour that morning and go into Aberdeen in the afternoon to spend a few hours working in the shop. Malcolm joined them all for a while, but then left for the afternoon, Apparating to the McGonagall Cliffs to fetch his bodhran and to have lunch with his parents. Lachina and Phoebe were having lunch at the lodge with the McGonagalls, so they Disapparated from the bere field directly to the lodge. Johannes, however, decided to walk a while before Apparating to the main house.
He had seen Siofre only briefly at breakfast, when she ate a bowl of porridge and drank a few cups of tea before leaving for the morning. He'd had the impression that she would return at midday but would likely still need to work the entire afternoon. Johannes wished that he could lend her a hand with her work, but he knew almost nothing about British wizarding law, and he had the sense that he probably did not want to know too much about what Siofre was doing to get Drusus arrested and sent away to Azkaban. He trusted her and her judgment, and he believed that she would never manufacture evidence outright...she had said, after all, that if Drusus had changed his ways, then she would be unable to send him to prison...but he knew that even she was uneasy with the idea of meddling so thoroughly in someone else's life. Likely Siofre felt freer to do so because of the Prince connection to the Tyree family, as well as out of concern for young Eileen. It would be good for the girl if she could escape the influence of her overbearing father for at least a time, particularly now at the start of her new life as an adult witch with a fiancé and plans to marry him soon.
The best way he could help Siofre, Johannes decided, was to continue to look after things at the estate for her, and to give garden tours to her various kin when they were interested. Of course, Johannes had the distinct impression that Siofre was also trying to avoid him...not avoid him, precisely, but to encourage him to socialise more with the guests and less with her. After what Lydia had told him in their private chat in the kitchen a few days before, he also imagined that Siofre hoped to have him find one of her young relatives attractive enough to draw him away from her. Or perhaps she wasn't hoping for it to happen, but only wished to see it happened if it made him happy. Johannes certainly hoped that Siofre didn't wish to be rid of him, and it seemed unlikely that she did.
No doubt that Lachina was a witty and attractive witch, and much like Siofre in some ways, but she was not Siofre, and Johannes was quite certain that he would meet no witch whose charms could cause him to cease feeling the pull toward Siofre. The force that drew him to Siofre was elemental; it was more than a mere sexual attraction or intellectual interest. It was not the sort of interest that could be easily distracted by some witty, attractive young witch...it would not be distracted at all, as far Johannes was concerned, let alone easily.
If Siofre's feelings for him did not reflect his own for her, if her affection were simply the warmth of a sister or an aunt ... then he would find a way to cope with that position in her life. But he did not believe that her feelings for him were of that sort. She did react to him as a woman interested in something more than friendship with him, and for a witch who was as reserved as she normally was, even toward those whom she loved deeply, the fact that she touched him as she did, and as often as she did, was very telling. He still felt his pulse quicken as he remembered the sensation of her hand slipping down his chest from his shoulder, coming to rest over his heart. The mere memory of it caused him almost to forget to breathe.
He would be polite and friendly toward all of Siofre's relatives and friends, witches and wizards alike, but he would return always to her. She would surely come to see that his affection for her was not some short-lived infatuation. And when she did, then he would offer to court her. She was a traditional witch in many ways, and she would respond to courtship, he thought. As for his position in the household as the "gardener," he doubted that would be an obstacle...at least, he doubted that it would matter at all to Siofre. And he would not forget that although he had not the property or station that Siofre possessed, he was an Herbology master and a respected academic. What others might think of it ... Johannes shrugged to himself. He would not concern himself with that. What others thought could hardly affect them there on the estate.
He had reached the artist's cottage, which was to be Minerva's, before he decided to Apparate to the house lest he miss lunch or keep others waiting for it. First, though, he took a quick look at the cottage gardens. They would need a bit of tending that week, guests or no guests. That afternoon might be the best time for it.
Johannes glanced up at the quaint stone-and-timber house, now with fresh curtains in the windows, and wondered what Minerva would think of her gift. It was a fine present, no doubt, but when he had taught with her, it had seemed to him that Minerva preferred to distance herself somewhat from her Tyree heritage, though he didn't understand why. She was certainly as independent and strong-willed as any Tyree witch, and she had a deep love of the Highlands and her own home. Johannes shrugged. Perhaps he was wrong, and she would welcome having a home here on the estate of Raven's Ring...Johannes had given up trying to pronounce the word for "raven" in Gaelic, though Lydia had repeated it for him a few times. To his ears, it sounded more like something a raven would croak than an actual word.
He Apparated to the drive in front of the house out of habit, and he smiled to see Siofre emerging from the opening in the hedgerow that led to the pond and the new water gardens he had created. She wasn't alone, though. A short, grey-haired wizard with a stubbly beard, wearing a kilt and white blouse, a plaid slung over his shoulder, was speaking intently to her, gesturing slightly, drawing a thread in the air, it appeared, then reaching over his head as if to grasp at some hanging fruit, but all the while, his gaze on Siofre's face. Johannes wondered whether this man were the Sorley Mackintosh whom he'd heard about. Not a very prepossessing-looking wizard, but looks could be deceiving, as he was well aware.
Siofre saw Johannes, and she smiled, nodding. The other wizard's attention was drawn to him, and a friendly smile crossed his face, making him look much younger, an open warmth in his bright blue eyes. Johannes could not help but smile more broadly in return.
"Johannes, come meet my cousin Jacob," Siofre called. As Johannes approached, Siofre said, "This is Johannes Birnbaum, our estate Herbologist."
"Aye, Pr'fess'r Birnbaum!" Jacob greeted him. "We're hearing much about you." The older man held out his hand.
Johannes shook hands, noting the man's strength and the callouses on his palm...the man did not shirk from manual labour despite being a wizard, and Johannes immediately approved of the man. "How do you do, Mr Tyree."
Jacob laughed at that. "No 'mister,' lad! And 'deed, not once there are more Tyrees around...you'll have every man turnin' his head t' see an yer wantin' him!"
"Or not," Siofre said with a cackle. "Doubt many are used to such an address."
Jacob nodded. "I be 'Young Jacob,' and me great-uncle, he's 'Big Jacob.' His gran'son, he's 'Jacob, Maire's boy.'"
"No need for you to remember any of that, though, Honnie," Siofre said, slipping her hand round his elbow as they walked up the drive to the front door. "It just helps keep the family sorted a bit when there's many named alike."
"Besides," Jacob added, "they'll likely not be usein' English, neither."
"It is like Sorley Mòr," Johannes said. "Malcolm told me that 'Mòr' just means that someone's older, or perhaps larger, than another one of the same name. I had thought it was a middle name."
The two Tyrees chuckled slightly at that, but Jacob nodded, "I'm glad yer interested in our language."
"I shall never master it, but I hope to remedy some of my ignorance of it," Johannes said, "and to learn at least some common words. It has a strength and beauty to it, though it seems sometimes impenetrable in its unfamiliarity."
Siofre gave his elbow a gentle, warm squeeze, and he looked down and smiled at her.
"Eh, does this mean that Sorley will be here this week?" Jacob asked.
"Aye," Siofre responded. "Lydia said he will arrive for the bonfire and stay through for young Murdoch's birthday."
"Hmm ... hmm." Jacob seemed to give Siofre an appraising glance, but said nothing more.
"Come," Siofre said briskly as they reached the front doors, "we must freshen up for lunch and not keep Lydia and Zoe waiting!"
"After lunch, P'rfess'r, an you have the time, I'd like to take a look at that corn you planted."
"It would be my pleasure to show you the bere field, and you might have some advice for me. And you must call me 'Johannes' if I am to call you 'Jacob,'" Johannes added.
Perhaps Jacob could tell him more of this Sorley Mòr than Malcolm had. Even the night before when he'd asked his friend more about the man, he'd heard little of value...though he had the distinct impression that Siofre had chosen her quiet, retiring Herbert McKenna over Sorley Mòr, to Malcolm's puzzlement. Malcolm apparently thought him a fine fellow and was looking forward to seeing him.
Johannes hadn't been able to tell at all what Siofre felt for the man. She had seemed ... not surprised precisely that Sorley was coming that week, but she hadn't anticipated it, and despite what Lachina had said about Sorley being often on Tiree when she was there, Siofre had not said whether or not she had seen much of him recently. She didn't appear to dislike him, however...Johannes doubted that she would have laughed at Lydia's joke about him being a sobering influence on the Mackenzie boys if she disliked the wizard.
He wished he knew precisely what Siofre's relationship with Sorley Mackintosh was, and how she felt about him. Given Malcolm's affection for his grandmother, Johannes couldn't imagine him being so enthusiastic about seeing Sorley if his grandmother disliked him...at least not so openly enthusiastic right there in front of her, simply out of respect for her feelings. It could be that he didn't have much insight into his grandmother's relationship with Sorley; after all, he'd been just a boy when Siofre had married Herbert, and he'd know Sorley as a mentor, the man who had taught him the old songs and helped him make his first bodhran.
Lydia probably knew the state of affairs better. She and Siofre were close, and Siofre had spent much time at the Tyree estate both before and after her marriage to Herbert. Lydia could probably tell him something of their history. Whether she had any more insight into Siofre's current feelings for the man was another matter. She had, however, announced his attendance as though it would have some meaning for Siofre, and despite the fact that the man was a fairly close relative, and one of the older ones, as well, he was being housed in the gatehouse rather than in the main house. Perhaps that was simply a matter of organisation; that may have been the only place with a comfortable bed for the older wizard by the time he had told Lydia he was coming. Johannes had noted that there had been no mention of a wife, either.
Johannes was looking forward to meeting this Sorley Mackintosh almost more than he was to meeting Lydia's son and daughter-in-law, though his anticipation of meeting the wizard was less pleasurable. If the wizard had once been a suitor, he might think that now that Herbert had been decently buried and mourned, he could take up his cause with Siofre again. It seemed slightly absurd on the surface to think that a man may have carried a torch for Siofre for four decades, but given his own feelings for Siofre, Johannes could easily imagine such a thing. He would certainly never fall out of love with Siofre no matter how much time passed.
Yes, he would have to learn more of Mackintosh, and something beyond him being a singer of the old songs. It would be awkward to ask Lydia any direct questions, though, and she was astute enough to know why he was asking them, and that might colour her responses to him. Jacob, though he was younger than Siofre and Lydia, likely knew more of the man, and from his laconic response to the news of Sorley's attendance at the bonfire, Johannes believed he also had some knowledge of Siofre's relationship with him. He would be one to ask a few casual questions of, perhaps as they surveyed the corn field. Johannes nodded to himself. He would be prepared for the arrival of this man.
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Johannes found Jacob a canny wizard with an excellent feel for the soil and for the bere. Jacob recommended planting peas and beans on one-third of the field every three years, rotating which portion of the field was planted each year. If the estate began farming in earnest, Jacob thought that the fields could easily be six or seven times the size of the one small experimental plot that Johannes had begun.
"Ye'll be sellin' to Muggles then, too, no doubt," Jacob said. "'Tis a bit trickier dealing with them, but if yer wanting any help, the Tiree council has good markets for fish, corn, cheese, an' wool. For a share, we'll use our connections to sell it for you."
"I would need to consult Siofre," Johannes said. "And although I do not know her long-term plans for the future of the bere field or for the estate, I believe she wishes to have the estate more self-sufficient than it has recently been."
"Aye. Though for it to be 'self-sufficient,' it will need work, an' hard work, but you seem equal to it. Get a few more Tyree families to move here, and you'll be in good shape, if they're of the farming and fishing sort and not like the McGonagalls with their printing presses and potions, or Shennachie like young Malcolm. House-elves are fine for the work, but 'tain't the same, is it? Don't know house-elves meself, but seems to me that they serve well but don't have much foresight or ... or what's it ... enterprise," Jacob said with a nod. "Aye, you'll get the estate in shape, laddie."
"I do not know how long I will be here, although I will be glad to continue to oversee the gardens, at least, as long as Siofre wishes."
"You dinna know ..." Jacob looked puzzled. "Siofre speaks in terms of years when she talks of the gardens, the coppices, the corn. I thought you were staying on a while."
"As long as she will have me."
"An' yer a Tyree now, I hear," Jacob said, seeming to ignore Johannes's statement, "so you'll always have ties to us, and to Siofre 'specially. You may be called 'pon e'en an you leave the estate."
"I will always return if I must leave. If I may stay, I will not leave."
"Aye, you love the land, too, I can see it. And the estate needs you. Dinna look further for work. 'Tis here for you." Jacob shrugged. "O' course, I canna tell you what to do. But the only place better than this is me ain farm, smaller though it be, but 'tis on Tiree, and the island's mine as much as our farm is, and I'd not leave Tiree. You oughtn't leave here, not when yer needed and you love it. Why seek aught else?" Jacob asked, gesturing broadly at the surrounding fields, hills, and sea. "What more could you want?"
"Nothing more than what is here," Johannes said softly. "You are right."
"See how things go with the crops," Jacob said, beginning to walk down from the field toward the skirt of the shore, where the land met the sea. "If you think you'd like more families livin' here as they once did, up north of here on the shore there, speak t' Siofre. She can let word out that there's homes to be had here. There are still some as would prefer t' live on Tyree land than live amongst Muggles, e'en over in Meath. There's only so much land on the island, yet there's aye a family wantin' t' return home to live an' raise their childer. A smidge trickier here than on the island, with that Ministry o' the English, but Siofre knows how t' deal with them, an' how to let our childer be raised up independent of them."
"Siofre attended Hogwarts," Johannes said.
"Aye, an' she learned enough of the English to be a good shield for us an' all, as did her father and grandfather before her. Her mother, too, was a Hogwarts student for some few years, I think. Lovely woman. Did you ever know Brigid? Nay? A pity. She was a beautiful, gentle woman to her dyin' day. Part English herself, somewhere. Her gran'daddy, I think."
"I believe Lydia's grandson's family lives among Muggles happily, and they live in England, as well," Johannes said, wondering what Jacob's thoughts were on that.
"Oh, aye, but Elisabeth's parents are both Muggles and live nearby," Jacob said. "'Tis only right to respect her parents and have Liam come to know them, too. Someday, the lad will return here, though, and he'll marry and have childer, himself, and they'll know and love this place and all that is Tyree. There will be a strong new generation here. Come back in fifty years...nay, stay here and watch...and you'll see. You can help to prepare for it, lad. Yer doin' fine now. We Tyree are lucky you joined us."
"Even though I am foreign?" Johannes asked with a smile and a twinkle in his eye.
Jacob laughed. "Aye, you just bring us some new ideas, an' that's not aye a bad thing. But you're Tyree now, whether you'll ever be Scottish, it doesn't matter. You're Tyree and becomin' a Highlander an' all. An' if any try to tell you aught else"...Jacob shook his head..."they be the fools, man, and better that Siofre doesn't hear it!"
Johannes laughed. "And what of this Sorley Mackintosh?" he asked. "Will he dispute whether I am truly Tyree?"
"Nay, never! Not when 'twas Siofre herself who brought you into our clan. He may sometimes be a bit contrary, Sorley Mòr might be, but he is no fool. An Siofre joined you to the clan, he'll honour it and be friendly to you on her account." Jacob quirked a grin and winked. "Even an she be not as friendly toward him as he would like."
"How so? They are well-acquainted, I have thought, and Malcolm calls him one of the cousins."
Jacob chuckled. "Oh, aye, he's a cousin, and he and his family were close to Siofre's when they were children. People thought they'd marry, I understand, but Siofre was away at that school, and Sorley was here...on the island...and they never did. I was just a bairn when Siofre's husband died...Collum McGonagall...but me brother's older, and he says that Sorley tried again then, but Siofre had a wee one, herself, me cousin Merwyn, and dinna want to marry again yet."
"Malcolm spoke as though Siofre married Herbert in preference to Sorley when she did remarry."
"Did he say that ... P'raps 'twould seem so to a boy. Aye. But I think Malcolm would have preferred her to marry Sorley, himself, rather than Herbert, if she had to marry. Malcolm was attached to his gran, and he had little in common with Herbert, and Sorley was the sort of man a lad would look up to, especially an active, adventurous lad like Malcolm. But Siofre knew what she wanted from her life."
"And she wanted Herbert."
"Mmmm ... I oughtn't say more, but ... nay, I'd never have said that she wanted Herbert. She wanted a life with Herbert, and Herbert loved her. And she got her daughter with him. P'raps 'twasn't a love match as the stories tell of, but 'twas, I think, a good life for them both."
"It was a pragmatic match?" Johannes asked, a peculiar feeling coming over him.
"Dinna think, lad, that Siofre was cold toward Herbert. She repaid his devotion with her own, and more she received from him than she would have ... than she would have from some who might be more eager but less constant. She may have sacrificed some in her marriage, but she gained from it, too."
"And this Sorley Mòr, he was more eager but less constant?"
Jacob smiled. "The bere will do well here, and yer wards and charms are good ones. There's none I'd add. But an you could show me that bird ward, I would like to learn it."
"Aye, you will learn it before you leave, then," Johannes said, accepting the change in topic, sensing that Jacob had already said more than he had thought he should, and not wanting himself to press or to seem unduly interested in sordid gossip.
"Good, cousin," Jacob replied. "An' I may teach it to me brother?"
"Of course! To anyone, but especially to any Tyree," Johannes said, still distracted by the thought that Sorley may have some thought of wooing Siofre a third time...and three times is the charm, they say. Perhaps Sorley hoped for success this time; once he courted her as a youth, then as a young man, and now as an older one. He would be more constant with age, though perhaps no less ardent. The thought of Sorley courting Siofre with passion and gallantry made Johannes go cold. He looked over at Jacob. "If there is any knowledge I may share with you, I will be happy to do so."
Jacob smiled. "Siofre did find us a good Tyree. Thank you. We might find ways to take advantage of that...you taught at Hogwarts. Could you teach some of our young witches and wizards some of the charms you taught at the school?"
"I taught only a few charms, more knowledge of different magical plants. Much memorisation and some practical work with the plants. Only the older students, the ones who took the advanced examinations, learned many charms. But yes, I can teach the children on Tyree some things, if there is anything of value that I have to teach. No doubt your children are already well taught."
"Aye, I'd not say yer wrong there, Johannes, but there's aye new things to learn, and good for us to add them. Siofre may have ideas. She's a great one for teaching when she comes to stay on Tyree, or even visiting just to take them for a day."
"I will speak with her about it, then." And, Johannes thought, he would also speak to Lydia about Sorley Mòr Mackintosh and find out whether he needed to worry about the man or not. He would not wish Siofre unhappiness, nor another marriage such as the one with Herbert, however comfortable it had been...he did not want her to take him out of some sort of pragmatism simply because he was good for the estate...and yet he would not want to lose her to this Sorley Mòr, however eager the other wizard might be. No, he would be ardent and he would be constant, and he wished to win her. If Sorley Mòr wished to court Siofre, he would find it a contest, whether he knew it or not. And Johannes was ready.
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Dear MMADfan, I love this story! Do you plan to write more chapters in the future? I would love to see it finished.
I really hope you update soon, you write such wonderful fanfiction and I find myself rereading some of the old ones hopefully your next update will be near in the future for this as well as LVS
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
Thank you! I do hope to update both stories soon!
I really hope you update soon, you write such wonderful fanfiction and I find myself rereading some of the old ones hopefully your next update will be near in the future for this as well as LVS
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Thank you very much,
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
!I will definitely try to get a few chapters of Charming the Scottish Garden and LVS posted this autumn. I'm sorry for the wait. It's very good to know that people are still reading them and will be here to read the new chapters when I (finally!) get them written. (Life's not been conducive to writing in the last couple years, sadly.)I really appreciate the note! I will do my best to get a new chapter up very soon.
Response from uma (Reviewer)
Yes I have been keeping up with your stories. I especially liked RAM itself , although I should let you know or perhaps you do know. But I read on ff.net and I usually keep with the newest MMAD fiction, I recently came across one that had taken a parts of your story and added it to theirs, I commented saying I read it before to which the author promptly deleted my comment. Just thought you should know as even though I am no writer I felt bad about something like that. However I shall eagerly await your next update :)
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Would you mind emailing me or messaging me through ffnet to let me know which story it is, if you remember the title? I would appreciate it. I'm very glad that you like RAM!
Response from uma (Reviewer)
i do not have an account on FF.net :/ sorry, i usually just go as a guest i already signed up on alot of new pages. And i could read the stories just as easily, But the Name of the Story is Even in Death by Albus P.W.BDumbledore1891. You take a good look at chapter 5
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Thanks very much! :-) I appreciate the tip!
First a new chapter of LVS and then CSG- I am in heaven! As much as I want to see Siofre and Johannes admit their feelings for each other, I enjoyed the "push-pull" of this chapter. The way the talk of age differences turned to them, Siofre wanting to take his hand but not, sitting close on the bench- all of it a wonderful buildup. 5 stars!
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
I'm glad it made you happy and you're liking the "push-pull"!I'm hoping to update at least two chapters a month -- more if I can -- alternating amongst the WIPs I have going. I am resisting the sudden onslaught of plot bunnies that are begging me to write more RaMverse fics set during the immediate post-RaM time period, like CSG is.Thanks for the review! It's encouraging!
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
I'm glad it made you happy and you're liking the "push-pull"!I'm hoping to update at least two chapters a month -- more if I can -- alternating amongst the WIPs I have going. I am resisting the sudden onslaught of plot bunnies that are begging me to write more RaMverse fics set during the immediate post-RaM time period, like CSG is.Thanks for the review! It's encouraging!
Best birthday present, ever!!! An update for this and it's a very shippy Siofre/Johannes chapter. woooo hoooI think this line was absolutely brilliant:Siofre found herself smiling back, and her heart beating faster at the sight of him. Could she really give him up to another witch?NOPE, she can't give him up to another because her heart already belongs to him and he holds hers as well. I wasn't too fond of the ADMM discussion. Siofre unnerves me when she speaks of Minerva and Albus's relationship, especially in this context. I know Malcolm is her favorite but it almost felt like she wasn't thrilled with Albus marrying Minerva, even though it's what makes her happiest and clearly they adore one another. sigh. Oh well ... I'm still happy for Siofre and Joannes, awwww.
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Hi! Glad to give you a good birthday prezzie! :-)What Siofre is not thrilled with is Albus not marrying Minerva. It's not that she has objections to their not being married, but she's afraid that Minerva wants marriage & Albus ain't askin' -- and she's right, at this point. But Minerva is being Stoic and sensible, and since she won't talk to Siofre about it, Siofre's not about to give her advice. She's also just plain worried that Minerva will end up having a broken heart or have some other sadness in her life because of the relationship. She loves Minerva and doesn't want to see her hurt -- she cares about Albus, but Minerva's her granddaughter, so she's Siofre's priority in her heart, not Albus, even if she doesn't feel it's her place to bring up her worries with Minerva.As you know from LVS, Siofre and Johannes will eventually be happy together -- Johannes's policy of being steadfast and patient pay off, and Siofre will never have any worries that he did not come to her freely, or that he might have been better off with someone else. But there's a bit of story between now & then, so I'd better say no more -- I'm afraid I'll leak spoilers! LOL!Thanks for the review!
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
Hi! Glad to give you a good birthday prezzie! :-)What Siofre is not thrilled with is Albus not marrying Minerva. It's not that she has objections to their not being married, but she's afraid that Minerva wants marriage & Albus ain't askin' -- and she's right, at this point. But Minerva is being Stoic and sensible, and since she won't talk to Siofre about it, Siofre's not about to give her advice. She's also just plain worried that Minerva will end up having a broken heart or have some other sadness in her life because of the relationship. She loves Minerva and doesn't want to see her hurt -- she cares about Albus, but Minerva's her granddaughter, so she's Siofre's priority in her heart, not Albus, even if she doesn't feel it's her place to bring up her worries with Minerva.As you know from LVS, Siofre and Johannes will eventually be happy together -- Johannes's policy of being steadfast and patient pay off, and Siofre will never have any worries that he did not come to her freely, or that he might have been better off with someone else. But there's a bit of story between now & then, so I'd better say no more -- I'm afraid I'll leak spoilers! LOL!Thanks for the review!
I didn't realize until just now how much I have truly missed this story. But I will be patient and constant. Also, yaaaaaaaaaaaaaay! CFP
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
Thank you! I'm glad you liked it. I've actually missed it, too.Thanks for ... um, I mean, CFR!
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
Thank you! I'm glad you liked it. I've actually missed it, too.Thanks for ... um, I mean, CFR!
YAY!!! I couldn't believe it when I got the message for the update, it's really here! A new chapter! :) Thank you! I loved it, the long wait was more than worth it because this chapter is just perfect. I always love when these two have their little moments, it's so cute. I loved getting to know a little more about Siofre's thoughts and feelings, I love that she's just as anxious and ready as Johannes is, I can't wait to see how they finally come together. I loved that he was firm about wanting to spend the afternoon with her and didn't let her get away with working alone. I can't wait for the next chapter, I hope it won't be too long a wait :)
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
Hi! I'm so glad you enjoyed it!Yes, Johannes is becoming gradually more assertive, but without being pushy or aggressive about it, and always with Siofre's good in his mind. I, too, hope it will not be too long a wait for another chapter of CSG! Thanks for letting me know you enjoyed the chapter!
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
Hi! I'm so glad you enjoyed it!Yes, Johannes is becoming gradually more assertive, but without being pushy or aggressive about it, and always with Siofre's good in his mind. I, too, hope it will not be too long a wait for another chapter of CSG! Thanks for letting me know you enjoyed the chapter!
I'm not quite sure if Lydia has three children or only one - Bertrand - are her others Conner and someone else? I got a bit confused when Soifre was explaining her children - seemed to me she miscarried a lot and that Bertrand was the only child - but then you said he was the youngest, so I got confused.
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
I need to reread the chapter & make sure that I haven't mis-typed something. If I have, I'll go in and make a correction! Thanks!Lydia has one child, Bertrand, and he has two children, Phoebe and Conner. Conner's married to Elisabeth and they have one boy, Liam (who grows up to be Eoghan's father).
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I think the plethora of children, grandchildren, and other relatives may simply have overwhelmed the synapses. hee! In the previous chapter, Siofre does say that Bertrand was Lydia & Malcolm Tyree's only child, and then in this chapter, she speaks of Bertrand being married to Sally (Longbottom) and the two of them having Connor & Phoebe. Charles Prince is Bertrand's cousin (Charles's father was Bertrand Prince, Lydia's brother, for whom she named her son), and Charles is married to Sally's sister Louisa. (And this is why Severus is related to Eogan in two ways -- through the Princes & the Longbottoms. Bertrand's cousin and Sally's sister are Eileen Prince's grandparents, thus Severus's great-grandparents, and Bertrand and Sally themselves are Eoghan's great-grandparents.) Yeah, can get confusing!
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I'll just take your word for it and go forward - it was confusing - whew! Thanks for explaining in simple terms - you know sometimes I need a map. *smirks*
*snip*“I may need to take additional measures,” Siofre said. “And the spells I cast will only be effective as long as they are in the house. From what I understand, he drinks, then comes home mean. On good nights, he passes out before he does more than shout and make a scene. The nosy neighbour turns a blind eye to the husband’s behaviour, though he surely must know of it. Any road, I did what I could to make sure that if he does come home drunk, he passes out straightaway upon crossing the threshold. If he tries to take a drink at home, he’ll become ill. Gwyneth claims that when he’s not drinking, he’s moody, but otherwise fine. Most of the spells I cast were aimed at his drinking—making the consequences miserable for him. I cast a few protective spells around Gwyneth, and I gave her an emergency Portkey, as well. If Cadoc becomes violent or frightens her in any way, she can Portkey to her brother and sister-in-law’s home.”“Why would she stay with such a brute?” Johannes asked.“She does love him, or the man she remembers marrying,” Siofre replied, “but she is expecting a baby. It was partly for her baby’s sake that I tried to persuade her to leave the man, but she . . . she has her reasons, I suppose.”“He hits her or hexes her and she is pregnant?” Johannes asked, even more appalled than he had been. “The man should be . . . he should be . . . I do not know a suitable punishment, but he does not deserve the family if he cannot treat them with the love and respect that he should. He should be their protector!”Siofre twitched a slight smile. “Perhaps a lecture in gentlemanly behaviour might do him some good . . . in a few weeks, after the man has ceased drinking. If we can manage that.” I hate to say it, but nothing fixes an abuser unless the abuser WANTS to be fixed - only THEY can truly heal themselves - all the abusee can do is leave - and the woman, in my opinion, is being foolish and selfish - and abusive to her unborn child. I can not STAND lazy, selfish women like this that would rather live in hell than do something better for their kids.
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Okay, since we know that Lydia is Slytherin, and Johannes is Ravenclaw - I simply MUST know what our Siofre is, my guess, Ravenclaw or Gryffindor - or perhaps Slytherin.... but I'm putting my coin on Ravenclaw.
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Yes, she's a Ravenclaw. :-)You're right about abusers. Siofre's trying to address some of the underlying causes of his drinking, hoping that that will help, as well as doing something about the drinking itself. We shall see what happens with that.Let's see . . . here's the passage from RaM ("A Spree") where Siofre and Johannes meet:Johannes laughed as the three witches all agreed that every wizard still had a little boy in him. Siofre looked up at the tall, sandy-haired wizard.“Don’t know you. You’re foreign, aren’t you?” The words were blunt, but her tone friendly.“I am from Germany, ma’am,” Johannes said in his friendly manner. “Johannes Birnbaum, at your service.”“Ah, the Herbology wizard. Ravenclaw Head of House, aren’t you? Heard good things about you. Siofre Tyree, Ravenclaw myself,” she said, holding out her hand, which Johannes took and bent over in a formal bow.As Johannes straightened, Minerva apologised. “I am sorry, Grandmother. I hadn’t realised that you two hadn’t met.”
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Ah, I should have remembered this - well then, my coin was well placed - Ravenclaw indeed.
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Indeed! You're a good 'claw spotter! ;-)
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Am I? Seems I've been spoiled with a few good ones in my life. *winks*
*snip*A few moments later, the two stepped out into the sunshine, and Johannes saw that they had arrived at a gabled cottage of three stories. Unlike the main house with its towers and turrets, this house was not all stone. It was a combination of half-timbering and uncut natural stone of different colours—quite unusual for Scotland, in Johannes’s experience—but very lovely on this woody hill. It seemed half-grown from the land and the surrounding woods.Ok that right there is freaking AWESOME!
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*snip*“Hmph. Still, it is not hers, and it is desolate.” She looked around her. “This is . . . isolated and private, but not set apart the way that island is. And that other, that is Dumbledore’s island. Do you know its name? Eilean Tèarmunn. It means ‘Refuge Island.’ A sanctuary from the wizarding world. Not even a Post Owl can get through to it. That is fine as far as it goes, but for Minerva, I would like her to have a place she could come that is hers if she needs it, and not just that island of Dumbledore’s. She can use the cottage or not, as she likes—and bring Dumbledore with her if she wishes.”Ahhhhh, NOW I am starting to understand the Tyree witches... forward thinking, ahead of their time, true Gaelic women of power - equal power - no woman should rely on a man - yes, now I am seeing the true Soifre. Besides all that, I'm glad she is looking out for Minerva - though I know Dumbledore wouldn't dream of hurting his love, but still, Minerva should have her own place.... and if Soifre has the space, and buildings, why not? Makes perfect sense. I wish I could live here! I'm insainly jealous!
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*snip*“You think Minerva might not want it? Even if she uses it seldom, it will be here for her. It can be a holiday cottage for now, if she likes, but she will want a family one day and a home to raise her children."*winces*
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The shell house is amazing, really amazing!
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
Hi,
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
! I'm glad you liked the cottage and the shell house. :-)Yes, typical of Tyree witches is that sense of independence, and Siofre has it in spades. She wants to help give Minerva opportunities and that home just of her own. As you say, she has the space, so why not?Yes, Siofre has no crystal ball to see into the future, and she does envision one with Minerva having children of her own. It's a wistful sort of moment for those of us who know what the future does hold for Minerva.
*snip*I hate maths. Maths makes me sleepy and I itch all over. I think I’m allergic,” Lydia said.Siofre barked a laugh. “And that is why I will do the calculations, as always. You’d think we didn’t do this every month.”“I do my very best to forget,” Lydia said pitifully.I can so relate to Lydia here... hate math... haaaaaaaate it.
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*snip*“I am keeping much rushes, though, here and along the edge opposite,” Johannes said, pointing. “They are good for the animals, for the fowl and fishes, to have them here.”He is absolutely correct - far too many people cut all the natural vegetation out of a pond and kill it, even putting up cement walls around it - turns the water into piss pea soup and basically kills it - thank you for keeping him realistic and knowledgable - a real herbologist! A naturalist!
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LOL! Yes, I'm allergic to math, too -- but sadly have had to work for many years in jobs that required me to sit there and "itch" while using it. Unfortunately, although I hate it, I'm still not abysmal at it. Although I suppose that's good . . . to a point!Glad you like Johannes and his care for the natural balance and all the living things, plant and animal. One of the things he enjoys is knowing how plants fit into an ecosystem, and what plants can do for various critters. He loves to encourage life, so he certainly wouldn't deaden a pond by cutting out all the vegetation and putting in concrete! I'm glad you appreciate this aspect of the story. :-)
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I've seen far too many gardeners that remind me of some Wal-Mart version of a garden - potted plants that attract NO insects and some concrete and plastic fountain sitting on asphalt - and these 'gardens' are so alien to the natural surroundings and support no life and take up so .... here I am ranting - sorry - anyway, glad to see Johannes is a REAL naturalist/gardener.I also love the explanation of the alarm charms or wards that they are going to put around the pond to keep the babies from drowning - very cool!
Okay - so - lets see, I loved seeing Gertie again, and had to roll my eyes too at Malcolm's silliness - she's a good sport, putting up with him I think - and as usual, I always get embarassed when folks at the table have kissed others at the table but aren't with those at the table - as you know, so I had even more respect for Gertie for sitting through all that as Mal and Katherine talked about his kissing - eh... what else ... Katherine was interesting and I'd like to have learned more about her role in Grindelwald's defeat - as well as her work with Dumbledore but I know that's a minor thing here.I liked how Johannes stumbles around with his English and makes silly errors - chip off the old brick and such - and I like how you've made his speach a bit odd, which it should be, since English isn't his first language.I admit, I'd like to know more about why Grindelwald was after him - recruiting him, but perhaps we'll learn more about that as the story progresses.But most importantly, I'd really curious about WHY Siofre has captured his attention - its a bit of a puzzle to me - I guess I just don't see much of her personality yet or something - besides that she's a very commanding witch - got that alpha personality - perhaps that's it? At any rate, I'm sure I'll learn more as the story progresses.And as always, enjoying your writing, but then again I'd never have started reading Scottish Garden if I wasn't already completely taken with your writing - so no surprises there!
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Yes, you'll eventually learn more about what happened to Johannes's family & why.It's partly the commanding personality, and partly just "chemistry" -- or maybe it's "magic," or magical resonance. Malcolm can be a trial, but usually in a funny way, so Gertrude actually enjoys it when he's "exasperating." haha!Glad you're enjoying it!
Oh dear, Malcolm is meddling already...
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haha! His heart's in the right place!
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
Seems most of your characters, OC or Canon, are meddlesome! HAHA! I love EEET! For once it isn't Dumbledore meddling - thankfully - though I suppose right now he's too busy with Minerva to think about much else. *grins*
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
Yes, Dumbledore is busy between Minerva, Hogwarts, Minerva, the Ministry, Minerva . . . well, you get the idea!
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Mmmmhmmmm - might have to go back and read RaM just to see how busy he is!
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
This is a bit post-RaM, but you're right: if you reread the end of RaM, you'll get an idea of what may be still be keeping him busy these days!
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All good stuff if I remember correctly.
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
Oh, very good, indeed!
Morgan and Fiona had quads? What on earth? Magical fertility treatment or something? You simply MUST explain that!I am liking this, loving the timid flirtation from Johannes and the direct flirtation or demands of his time, from Siofre - pretty cute. I love romance in the RamVerse - I don't have to worry about rejection!
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Yes, indeed! And everyone suspects they used potions or a spell or something, but they claim not. Minerva calls them "the litter." (Gareth mentioned that tidbit about Minerva's humor to Severus back in LVS somewhere. Severus liked it. hee!)I'm glad you're enjoying the romance. Johannes is rather smitten, and Siofre isn't indifferent, either! Thanks!
A very nice introduction and very cute to see Johannes having an eye on Siofre - looking forward to more Dumbledore and McGonagall!
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Thanks! Glad you enjoyed it. Albus & Minerva will eventually make "personal appearances" in the fic, but not for a while yet -- although Minerva shows up by reference fairly frequently. And there's one of your favorite HP characters coming up soonish, too! :-)
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Ooooh - Gertie???
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
Ah, she's a RaMverse character, but yes, she does, indeed, show up! And relatively soon, actually -- sooner than the canon HP character I was thinking of. In fact, there are two canon characters appearing together in that chapter who I'm pretty sure are among your faves. :-)
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Ooooh! I'm so excited!!!!!
I was very happy to see an update to this story! And what a fun chapter it was. Apparently Minerva isn't the only one who doubts Malcolm's stories. Poor Malcolm. I think Malcolm was holding back in the fight or he would have taken all of the other wizards out easily:). BTW-go Johannes! Loved the spell with the wood. I think he should have left Cam up on the wall. I imagine these lads are in trouble if Gertrude and/ Siofre hear about it. Thanks for a fun read.
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Hi! Glad you enjoyed it! Yes, Malcolm could have easily taken them, but it wasn't until it got "serious" that he went ahead and took 'em out. Yes, Johannes might not be much with the traditional defensive spells, hexes, jinxes, and the like, but he's got some imagination and skill with wood, so he didn't do too badly!Thanks!
Well, that certainly wasn't how I was expecting the evening to end. Action packed for sure!!I loved the details you put in about the African dragons. It amazes me how you always come up with new and interesting ideas to add to the RaM universe.I can't believe how quickly the little bar conversation turned ugly. Cam certainly was a nasty bugger and I'm glad Johannes was the one to pin him to the wall. Poor Aberforth, though. I pity him having to clean up all that mess. hahaWonder what Siofre would think if she heard about all that drama??? lol
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I do wonder what Siofre would think, too! Johannes and Malcolm don't want to find out, that's for sure! Somehow, I can imagine that that story might make its way to her ears, whether the "lads" want it to or not! Yes, Cam was just ready for a confrontation there, wasn't he? And pretty nasty in his comments and innuendos, too. Glad you liked Johannes's trick with the wood. He might not be much at fighting, but he is a clever wizard, nonetheless -- and experienced with wood, as well. Glad you liked the African dragons. I've been looking for an opportunity to stick those into a chapter with Malcolm since I wrote his "application letter" to Dumbledore back in RaM, so it was really fun to finally give them a bit of space and hear a small portion of the story of Malcolm's first dragon ride. Thanks very much for the review!
OMG!! an update!! I was so happy when I saw the email in my inbox! Thanks!I loved this chapter, Malcolm is always so much fun, poor Johannes I don't think he likes the kind of fun Malcolm brings lol. This was a very nice chapter, so funny! I can't wait to read more Siofre and Johannes, they are getting closer by the chapter! LOL.thank you for updatingSam
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Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter! You're right: Johannes doesn't have the same idea of "fun" that Malcolm does!Thanks for the review! (I was glad to finally be able to write & update! )
I had been holding off reading this chapter and "saving it" since you had mentioned your muse had left you, but tonight I caved in and I'm so glad I did. Johannes' vision of Siofre and his confession to Lydia was breath-taking. How apropos that the jerk that used and left Lydia was a Lockhart. She did much better with her Murdoch. It was a little jarring to read the name Severus back in this time period. I hope you find your muse again. I really miss the updates. Take care.
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I am currently struggling with writing a gift exchange fic that's finally beginning to sort of come together. I hope that once I have that written, maybe my muse will come back for the other stories. I miss them, too.I am glad that you enjoyed the chapter! Your review brought the characters back into my mind, and Lydia's story, so maybe that will help grease the wheels of the fanfic section of my brain! I figured that a Lockhart would be very good at cutting and running when the going got tough even back then. I thought it might be an interesting reminder of Severus' pureblooded side of the family, too, to have mention of the Prince relative he was named after, as well as the Princes' earlier tangles with the Tyree clan. We will also hear more about Eileen and her father in an upcoming chapter -- hmm, do I hear my muse tiptoeing about? LOL!Anyway, thank you very much for your review. I'm glad you enjoyed it -- and sorry that you haven't got another one to look forward to immediately, but I haven't vanished, and I do hope to continue with both this and LVS very soon. :-)
I'm really enjoying your story. Thank you for sharing your talent :)
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Hi,
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! Thank you for your note! I appreciate it, and I'm really glad you're enjoying the story.
Ooo lovely chapter. I like the way you are building the sexual tension and bonds between them. Fascinating ritual; I'm curious about the artifact. I'm assuming/hoping it has greater meaning than is usual.
I see Malcolm is in the next chapter - thank you!
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Thanks,
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!The next chapter has a bit more about the artifact -- and Siofre's curious about it, as well.I'm glad you're looking forward to seeing Malcolm again. I hope you enjoy it. He'll be popping in and staying for a couple chapters. :-)Thanks for the review!
LOL God Malcolm is amazing! lol, that tale and the show lol, he's great! I'm so glad he's back and I love it that Siofre calls Gertrude his witch! that's so sweet.
Now the most important part, OMG!! that was sooooo romantic, Johannes is very very romantic, his words to Siofre, the kiss, the pledge! oooohhhh I'm soooo happy right now!!! and Siofre! her reaction was amazing, I'm so pleased! lol. I loved it that she went from Magister to Honnie in less than a minute, she's giving in!
I really think his own private pledge to her has alot to do with the shape, color and markings of the artifact, I can't wait to find out! I'm so excited! Can't wait for the next chapter. GREAT, WONDERFUL writing!
Sam
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
Thank you! I enjoy writing Malcolm -- he seems to write himself -- and it's really fun to be able to step back into that period.I'm glad you enjoyed the romantic bits, as well. They are growing ever closer.Thank you very much for reviewing!
Fun chapter, indeedy!!!The conversation with Siofre and Bridie and then the one with her and Johannes warmed my heart fully. His declarations to her about his pledges, both verbal and in his heart, were very sweet. I'm sure she must know by now that he is truly enamoured with her. However, I can still see her giving him the time and space to come to her fully.LOVE, LOVE, LOVE MALCOLM!! He has me grinning from ear to ear with his tales to the wizard and his retelling of his meeting with him. He's such a hoot. And I'd have to agree with Siofre that his witch caught him well. haha.
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I'm glad you enjoyed both the romance and the humor in this chapter. I think that Siofre is very aware now of his increasingly strong feelings for her. We'll see where that knowledge might lead.I'm glad that you found Malcolm and his tales a hoot. He's fun -- he practically writes himself.Thanks for the review!
Such an awesome chapter! I looooove it!!! The ceremony performed by Siofre was very special and I'm glad they didn't need any witnesses. I think some of the "magic" of the moment would have been lost if others had been around. And the artifact sounds very intriguing. I do hope we'll learn more about that as the story progresses. We are one step closer to having Siofre and Johannes together. SWEEEEET!!!!!Thanks for the update!
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You're welcome! I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter! They are, indeed, closer now!
thank you, thank you, thank you!! I loved loved this chapter, it's very sweet and so interesting to learn all of this about Siofre and Tyree Clan. It was very funny that he was unsure about her wanting to adopt him lol, and I can't wait to find out what does the artifact mean, I'm sure it has to do something with their bond, I hope so at least!. I'm sooo glad Malcolm is going to be in the next chapter, I miss him! lol. Can't wait to read more, thanks!Sam
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Yeah, he sure didn't want her thinking of him as her son! LOL! And she was glad that he was happy that he'd be closer to her than to any others in the clan. (Yay -- my javascript emoticons are working again! LOL!)It's been fun writing Malcolm in this coming chapter, so I hope you'll enjoy it.Thanks for the review!