Chapter Eleven: A Little Sweet on You
Chapter 11 of 32
MMADfanSiofre ponders Johannes, but a conversation with Lydia shifts her perspective.
Features Siofre, Lydia, and Johannes.
Chapter Eleven: A Little Sweet on You
Siofre drew out her watch and looked at it. A little after two. Whatever Lydia might think about her Apparition skills, Siofre was feeling the effects of several long-distance Apparitions that day. She didn't make a habit of lying down during the day, though, and she wasn't about to start now. She would walk down to the lodge and double-check everything. Morgan and his family would be arriving in the morning, and all the house-elves in both households had been enlisted to shift everything from their house in Inverness to their new home there at the estate.
The lodge was large, and Siofre remembered when the Mackenzies had lived there, many years ago now. Jake Mackenzie had been a schoolfriend of her grandfather's, and he, his wife, his children, and eventually, their grandchildren, had lived in that lodge, and Jake had done all manner of work for Séaghán Tyree. Jake and Emma's daughter, Grace, had moved away when she married...an event that Siofre only remembered as a fact, though she retained no clear recollection of it herself...but Jamie, the Mackenzies' son, and his wife Sarah had stayed on for a number of years. Siofre had played with their children, Norma, Alice, and Marigold, until finally they moved away at the birth of their fourth daughter, Oona. Older than her brother Murdoch by almost six years, Siofre had missed having playmates closer to her own age, but not for long, since she soon started at Hogwarts, landing in the same House as Norma and Alice.
There would be plenty of room for the McGonagalls, with some to spare, Siofre thought as she looked into the large, partially furnished nursery. For convenience's sake, until they were a little older, the quads would share a single bedroom, but there were six bedrooms in the house, plus the nursery, so there would be more than enough room even if the couple changed their minds and decided to have more children.
Siofre looked into each room, some of which were already furnished...or partially furnished...with things from the main house. It would be good to have some life in the place again, and good to have children running about, too.
Over the years, various Tyrees, McGonagalls, Marshes, Mackintoshes, and other relatives had stayed in the lodge, occasionally for several months at a time, but now it was to be a real home again, and Siofre felt it was almost as though the old lodge knew this and was quivering with impending life. Of all the houses on the grounds, this was the one closest to the main house, and Siofre had felt its emptiness keenly, particularly after she had returned permanently to the estate after Herbert died. It seemed sad, sitting there empty, especially at dusk, when the windows were blank and the building slowly merged with the shadows until it disappeared. Soon, though, there would be lights in those windows again, and the lodge would come alive.
Siofre left the lodge and walked around the outside of the house, admiring the gardens that Johannes had planted. He had done a lot very little time, and yet it all looked lovely. The man had a good eye. He had even planted a little kitchen garden for the lodge, though the McGonagalls could help themselves to any of the vegetables from the main gardens. It was convenient, though, to have culinary herbs and salad vegetables growing close to the kitchen. Fiona had been pleased when she had come by earlier in the week and seen the results of Johannes's efforts. She had declared him an absolute treasure, which had left Johannes blushing.
Siofre smiled. Johannes did blush rather sweetly at times, often out of modest embarrassment, but occasionally, she had elicited a blush from him herself, and although she had scolded herself for it later, it had been amusing to see how he had blushed at the touch of her fingers on his hand down at the machair, and then later to tease him just a bit, tickling his skin with her magic and to see him blush and fight a stutter. After all, Lydia was not the only witch in the world who enjoyed a little flirting.
Now, though, Siofre felt a slight twinge. She ought not play with the poor man so. He was kind and good, and she did enjoy both his company and his attention . . . but to flirt with him so as not to seem to be flirting was unfair to the man, really, although he was certainly old enough to look after himself. Still, she should not tease him that way, as sweet to see as his blushing was.
She had the impression from Malcolm that Johannes had rather fancied the Gamp witch at one time, but that he had no special lady friend, as such. Malcolm had said that the date he'd set Johannes up with a couple weeks before hadn't turned into anything, though it hadn't been a disaster. She would have to tell Malcolm to invite the witch to the bonfire, if he liked. Perhaps in a festive atmosphere, another exposure to her might draw Johannes out a bit more.
Such a handsome, intelligent, skilled, and kind wizard should not be alone as he was, Siofre thought. It was sad to imagine him leaving the Tyree estate when his work was finally completed, returning to his empty little Hogsmeade flat. But then he might have more opportunities to meet other witches, living in town rather than there in the hills with two old witches. He seemed shy, but surely there would be some discerning witch who would see him, recognise his value, and then have him win her heart . . . A man who valued family as much as Johannes obviously did deserved to have a family of his own, and not be so alone in the world as he seemed.
Siofre thought of the various unmarried witches whom she knew. Surely there would have to be a few who would enjoy meeting this handsome, gentlemanly wizard. If she were younger, she would certainly have appreciated an introduction to him, and she would have made sure that no other witches could compete with her for him.
None of her friends or acquaintances seemed likely candidates, though. Siofre wasn't certain what sort of witch would interest Johannes, although if Professor Gamp had held his attention, he obviously valued intelligence. Of her relatives . . . Lydia was too old, and besides, as much as she might pretend to flirt with him, Siofre could tell that both she and Johannes saw it as an enjoyable diversion, but neither was serious. Yet if Lydia were to become serious about him, and if the two did grow closer, Siofre would have nothing negative to say about it...although she did think that Johannes should marry someone young enough so that he could become a father again, and Lydia was a good thirty years beyond her childbearing time. Johannes would be a wonderful father, and he deserved children.
Of Siofre's relatives, most of the unmarried ones were either too young or too old or not at all suitable...if Siofre couldn't imagine sharing living quarters with a witch, then she certainly wouldn't wish her on a wizard as a wife...but there were two who might be acceptable. Although Maisie had her peculiarities and Malcolm had never got along very well with her, she was actually quite bright and had a strong maternal streak. Siofre thought that Malcolm had never quite outgrown his childhood jealousy of Siofre's marriage to Herbert. He had been very close to his grandmother when he was a young boy, and it had been difficult for him to see her remarry and then have a daughter.
In addition to her daughter, Siofre thought that Lachina, one of her more distant Tyree cousins, might be a good match for Johannes. Better, perhaps, than Maisie would be, although she was a fair bit younger, closer to Minerva's age. But that would mean many years for her and Johannes to have children. A large house filled with Tyree children. Birnbaum children, Siofre amended, as some might be boys. They could even live there at the estate. Lachina was from the island, but she worked at a jeweller's in Aberdeen; she would have no objection to moving . . .
Siofre could see it in her mind's eye now. Lachina could Apparate each day to her job, if she wished to continue in it, and Johannes could continue working the Tyree gardens, have his own gardens and greenhouse, and she and Johannes could still see each other daily. Perhaps he and Lachina would even stay on in the main house. It was certainly large enough. Although the number of bedrooms varied depending on how the rooms were being used, there were easily a few dozen rooms from which they could choose their bedroom. In fact, they could even have the entire North Tower, if they wished. That was the oldest part of the house, but it had been refurbished completely in the eighteen-fifties when she was a girl, and Murdoch and Lydia had always kept it well, thinking that perhaps either Connor or Phoebe might like it when they were grown and married. The tower had several rooms, and it could easily accommodate a small family.
Siofre chuckled to herself. She already had Johannes and Lachina married and surrounded by a brood of children, and they hadn't even met yet. Still, she would make sure that Lachina came to the Beltane celebration and stayed for young Murdoch's birthday party. If she and Johannes became acquainted, that was a first step. A witch would have to be completely blind not to see what a very attractive wizard Johannes was, and what a very good man.
Siofre walked back up to the house. There was still more than a half hour before Johannes would be there to fetch her...he was probably suffering at the Melliflua manor at that moment...so perhaps she could write her letter to Murdoch about the potion she wanted him to prepare for her to give to Gwyneth Terwilliger. She had found the formula for it the night before, but she had been too tired to stay up and copy it out. It wasn't a standard potion, by any means, but Siofre had remembered seeing it in one of the Tyree family books, and was glad when she'd been able to find it fairly quickly.
With the charms she had cast on the rooms in the Terwilliger home the previous afternoon, this potion would help maintain an atmosphere of peace and tranquillity. That would encourage Cadoc to behave more like his better self...which Gwyneth insisted existed. Siofre hoped, for the sake of both Gwyneth and her unborn child, that the witch was right about that. And if Gwyneth was right, then good for Cadoc, too. It would be good if Cadoc could reach his potential and truly experience and enjoy his life.
Siofre entered the house through the conservatory. Lydia was at the piano again. It sounded to Siofre as though she was working on the same piece as she had for the last few days. She walked through the conservatory, pausing a moment to sniff a few of the flowers. She didn't think that it was only her imagination that even the plants in the conservatory seemed more vibrant and colourful now that Johannes was overseeing their care. She was sure that anything in Johannes's care would flourish.
"Oh! You startled me!" Lydia exclaimed as Siofre entered the music room from the conservatory. "I didn't hear you come in. I didn't even know you were back." She nodded toward the sheet music. "I've been rather absorbed."
"I got back about an hour ago," Siofre replied. "I was out at Morgan and Fiona's, just walking through one more time before tomorrow. I saw that the house-elves have stocked the kitchen and pantry."
Lydia nodded. "I asked Multry to see to that. She is wonderful. I'm glad you brought her with you. I think Shoolie enjoys sitting in the corner of the kitchen, sipping her tea and entertaining the wee bairns."
"After close to two centuries of service, she deserves to put her feet up and 'supervise,'" Siofre said. "I have to say, I wasn't sure when we first moved back whether she and Multry would get along together in the kitchen, but Multry makes her feel valued, not extraneous, so it's worked out well."
"Yes, it has. So tell me, did you see Phoebe?"
"Aye. She received a letter from Sally yesterday. She is excited, naturally, and would like to be here on the twenty-ninth. Since we aren't certain whether they'll arrive a day early or a day late, I told her to come stay at the house for a few days. So she'll be arriving on the twenty-seventh, coming straight from work, and staying through the weekend."
"And Declan?"
"I didn't see him, but Phoebe said he'd probably not be able to come until the twenty-ninth. He has some commitments, apparently. But he'll join us later, and he'll definitely be here for the weekend."
"I'll prepare their usual rooms, then."
"I thought we could put them in the Capercaillie Suite, or one of the other suites, this time instead...with all the weekend guests to accommodate, it might make more sense."
"He always joins her through the door between their rooms, anyway," Lydia said with a laugh.
"Aye, which is why I give them adjoining rooms." Siofre sighed. "But do have the daybed made up in the dressing room. Just in case he snores."
Lydia laughed heartily at that. "Connor and Liz are waiting until they get word that they've arrived, then they and Liam will come up. I thought we could send Sorrel or Gweller with the news."
"We'll have Multry prepared to fix a nice meal when they get here. We'll be . . ." Siofre paused to count.
"Ten," Lydia said quickly. "Twelve if Morgan and Fiona join us."
"You say maths gives you rash," Siofre scoffed.
"I never claimed not to be able to add and subtract. I just hate it. It makes me feel all squirmy," Lydia said.
"We'll still be in the family dining room, then. Multry will just have the table extended a bit."
"I sent out letters this morning, but haven't heard back yet from anyone except Philomena. She was quite happy for us. She looks forward to seeing them at the bonfire."
"You invited Philomena?"
"Yes. Her husband is supposed to be in Madrid or Majorca or someplace that week, so he won't be here, but Philly is coming. She loves a good party, you know. She gets tired of all the Ministry functions, I'm sure."
"She's probably numb after all these years," Siofre said. "You don't head up a Ministry department that long without going numb...or barking mad!" She cackled.
"Speaking of rooms . . . I've put Malcolm and Gertrude in one room. I think everyone knows by now that she spends weekends with him. And all last summer, I think."
"Ask her. Or Malcolm. We should go by their wishes. There will be children there, after all. No Hogwarts students, but they still may wish to be more discreet."
"Right. And Minerva will be staying down with Morgan if she can manage to get away for the bonfire, she said in her owl. If she does come, it will be quite late."
"Dumbledore coming, too?"
"She didn't say, and I haven't heard from him."
"Well, there's room enough down at the lodge. We can let them sort it out if he shows up," Siofre said.
"Are you going to tell her about the cottage?" Lydia asked.
"Nay, this is Murdoch's weekend. It's his birthday. Bertrand and Sally's return will already draw attention from it. Besides, you know that I want to have the work done down there before I give it to her."
"Have you found a plumber yet?"
"I'm hiring Brian Mackintosh to do it. It will mean Apparating him back and forth daily until the work is done...or arranging Portkeys for the man...but he's family, more-or-less, and his pipe-charming is quite good, I understand, even if his Apparition is a bit weak. He did all the new plumbing for the Meath Tyrees, Kathleen's and Kieran's families, a few years ago, and they're happy with it."
"You said he was expensive."
"More expensive to have it done wrong," Siofre said briskly. "And 'tisn't worth the worry to hire someone we dinna know, have to watch his every move."
"Brian might give us a family discount..." Lydia began.
"The man deserves to be paid his worth. Besides, most of his work is for some manner of family. He'd starve if he gave a discount to everyone he was remotely related to," Siofre said practically. "I'll just dip into the estate's primary account, that's all. The magister is finding a market for some of our produce. That will help replenish it."
"I could give lessons again," Lydia offered, "if money is tight. They were asking about me down in Cardiff again. Not to teach at MAMA itself, but to tutor a few of their students. And I could pick up a few Galleons accompanying some of the voice students."
"If you want to do that, that would be fine, hen. I know how much you've enjoyed your association with the music academy, but don't feel you have to take students. It's hardly as though we're broke."
"I feel a bit like Shoolie some days . . . just sent to sit in the corner by the fire . . ."
"Dinna be ridiculous, Lydia. You are very valuable. You take so much off my mind...I always know that when I leave things in your hands here at the house, I needn't worry about them at all." Siofre gestured toward the piano. "What have you been working on lately?"
Lydia shrugged. "Oh, just a bit of something that I'd started years ago and then . . . just lost interest in, I suppose. I thought I might pick it up again."
"A composition, then?"
"Yes. I played something of mine for Johannes one afternoon last week...it was raining and you were at the Smethwycks' final arbitration meeting, remember? Anyway, he really enjoyed it. He said it reminded him of Mahler." Lydia blushed. "So I played him a few other pieces that I'd written years ago, and that reminded me of how much I used to enjoy composing my little bits of things. I found this unfinished piece, and Johannes said he liked it and urged me to work on it again. I think it's coming along. He's been very encouraging. This morning, he left me a flower on the piano with a note of support. He said I had a true gift. It was very sweet." She picked up a little card and fingered its corner.
"Play it for me this evening, then? I've only heard parts of it as you've been composing," Siofre said, "but it is lovely, what I've heard."
"I'd love to! It's not near finished yet," Lydia said apologetically, "but I hope to have it done before Bertie and Sally arrive. I hadn't been sure what to title it, but now I'm thinking, 'Homecoming.' It would suit it, I think."
"Aye, it..." Siofre stopped, startled by the sound of Apparition coming from the drive. "Oh, my, Johannes is here, and I'm not ready." She looked down at herself. "I wanted to freshen up."
"I'm sure that he won't mind," Lydia said. She smiled. "He'll think you look beautiful, I know he will. He's rather sweet on you, our gardener is."
"Ah, ah, nay. Nay. Nay, he is not."
"He is. More than a little. And from the blush on your own cheeks right now and the twinkle you get in your eye whenever he steps into a room, I'd say you're a bit sweet on him, too."
"Never..."
"Oh, don't fuss, Siofre dear. I'd be sweet on him, myself, if I didn't see the way he looks at you."
"Lydia!"
"Hush, he's coming." Lydia turned back to the piano and picked out a few notes, the primary melody of her new composition.
Siofre cast a quick breath-freshening charm. She was smoothing her hair as Johannes stepped into the music room.
"Ah, my ladies," Johannes said, making a short bow. "It is good to find you together, and both looking so lovely. You are playing your new composition, yes?"
Lydia paused. "Yes. Thank you for your note this morning. And the flower. They helped me find my inspiration."
Johannes nodded and smiled. "That is good. I am glad." He turned to Siofre. "You look lovely, may I say. It is a pleasure."
"Thank you." Johannes was wearing his sapphire blue robes that brought out the colour of his eyes. Siofre wished she had had time to freshen up, though the tartan robes she was wearing were fine, and she hadn't planned to change. "Shall we go?"
Johannes inclined his head. "If you are ready now, yes. We have a reservation...they said they would hold a table for us, anyway."
"Good." Siofre turned to Lydia. "We will see you later, then."
"Have fun, you two!"
Johannes offered Siofre his arm. "Shall we? I will Apparate us."
"Down to the drive, then, or I'll stay put, and your arm with me...we'd be paying a visit to St. Giles and missing our table and our tea!"
Johannes chuckled as they walked toward the door. "I do like my arm attached as it is. And I have never Splinched, and would be very happy if I were never in my life to experience that."
"Aye, I rather fancy your arm right where it is, too," Siofre replied, a twinkle in her eye. She gave his arm a little squeeze and was pleased to see the wizard's cheeks blush pink. Lydia was very silly...Johannes sweet on her, indeed! But perhaps he might be, just a little . . .
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Latest 25 Reviews for Charming the Scottish Garden
126 Reviews | 8.24/10 Average
Dear MMADfan, I love this story! Do you plan to write more chapters in the future? I would love to see it finished.
I really hope you update soon, you write such wonderful fanfiction and I find myself rereading some of the old ones hopefully your next update will be near in the future for this as well as LVS
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
Thank you! I do hope to update both stories soon!
I really hope you update soon, you write such wonderful fanfiction and I find myself rereading some of the old ones hopefully your next update will be near in the future for this as well as LVS
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
Thank you very much,
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
!I will definitely try to get a few chapters of Charming the Scottish Garden and LVS posted this autumn. I'm sorry for the wait. It's very good to know that people are still reading them and will be here to read the new chapters when I (finally!) get them written. (Life's not been conducive to writing in the last couple years, sadly.)I really appreciate the note! I will do my best to get a new chapter up very soon.
Response from uma (Reviewer)
Yes I have been keeping up with your stories. I especially liked RAM itself , although I should let you know or perhaps you do know. But I read on ff.net and I usually keep with the newest MMAD fiction, I recently came across one that had taken a parts of your story and added it to theirs, I commented saying I read it before to which the author promptly deleted my comment. Just thought you should know as even though I am no writer I felt bad about something like that. However I shall eagerly await your next update :)
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
Would you mind emailing me or messaging me through ffnet to let me know which story it is, if you remember the title? I would appreciate it. I'm very glad that you like RAM!
Response from uma (Reviewer)
i do not have an account on FF.net :/ sorry, i usually just go as a guest i already signed up on alot of new pages. And i could read the stories just as easily, But the Name of the Story is Even in Death by Albus P.W.BDumbledore1891. You take a good look at chapter 5
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
Thanks very much! :-) I appreciate the tip!
First a new chapter of LVS and then CSG- I am in heaven! As much as I want to see Siofre and Johannes admit their feelings for each other, I enjoyed the "push-pull" of this chapter. The way the talk of age differences turned to them, Siofre wanting to take his hand but not, sitting close on the bench- all of it a wonderful buildup. 5 stars!
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
I'm glad it made you happy and you're liking the "push-pull"!I'm hoping to update at least two chapters a month -- more if I can -- alternating amongst the WIPs I have going. I am resisting the sudden onslaught of plot bunnies that are begging me to write more RaMverse fics set during the immediate post-RaM time period, like CSG is.Thanks for the review! It's encouraging!
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
I'm glad it made you happy and you're liking the "push-pull"!I'm hoping to update at least two chapters a month -- more if I can -- alternating amongst the WIPs I have going. I am resisting the sudden onslaught of plot bunnies that are begging me to write more RaMverse fics set during the immediate post-RaM time period, like CSG is.Thanks for the review! It's encouraging!
Best birthday present, ever!!! An update for this and it's a very shippy Siofre/Johannes chapter. woooo hoooI think this line was absolutely brilliant:Siofre found herself smiling back, and her heart beating faster at the sight of him. Could she really give him up to another witch?NOPE, she can't give him up to another because her heart already belongs to him and he holds hers as well. I wasn't too fond of the ADMM discussion. Siofre unnerves me when she speaks of Minerva and Albus's relationship, especially in this context. I know Malcolm is her favorite but it almost felt like she wasn't thrilled with Albus marrying Minerva, even though it's what makes her happiest and clearly they adore one another. sigh. Oh well ... I'm still happy for Siofre and Joannes, awwww.
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
Hi! Glad to give you a good birthday prezzie! :-)What Siofre is not thrilled with is Albus not marrying Minerva. It's not that she has objections to their not being married, but she's afraid that Minerva wants marriage & Albus ain't askin' -- and she's right, at this point. But Minerva is being Stoic and sensible, and since she won't talk to Siofre about it, Siofre's not about to give her advice. She's also just plain worried that Minerva will end up having a broken heart or have some other sadness in her life because of the relationship. She loves Minerva and doesn't want to see her hurt -- she cares about Albus, but Minerva's her granddaughter, so she's Siofre's priority in her heart, not Albus, even if she doesn't feel it's her place to bring up her worries with Minerva.As you know from LVS, Siofre and Johannes will eventually be happy together -- Johannes's policy of being steadfast and patient pay off, and Siofre will never have any worries that he did not come to her freely, or that he might have been better off with someone else. But there's a bit of story between now & then, so I'd better say no more -- I'm afraid I'll leak spoilers! LOL!Thanks for the review!
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
Hi! Glad to give you a good birthday prezzie! :-)What Siofre is not thrilled with is Albus not marrying Minerva. It's not that she has objections to their not being married, but she's afraid that Minerva wants marriage & Albus ain't askin' -- and she's right, at this point. But Minerva is being Stoic and sensible, and since she won't talk to Siofre about it, Siofre's not about to give her advice. She's also just plain worried that Minerva will end up having a broken heart or have some other sadness in her life because of the relationship. She loves Minerva and doesn't want to see her hurt -- she cares about Albus, but Minerva's her granddaughter, so she's Siofre's priority in her heart, not Albus, even if she doesn't feel it's her place to bring up her worries with Minerva.As you know from LVS, Siofre and Johannes will eventually be happy together -- Johannes's policy of being steadfast and patient pay off, and Siofre will never have any worries that he did not come to her freely, or that he might have been better off with someone else. But there's a bit of story between now & then, so I'd better say no more -- I'm afraid I'll leak spoilers! LOL!Thanks for the review!
I didn't realize until just now how much I have truly missed this story. But I will be patient and constant. Also, yaaaaaaaaaaaaaay! CFP
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
Thank you! I'm glad you liked it. I've actually missed it, too.Thanks for ... um, I mean, CFR!
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
Thank you! I'm glad you liked it. I've actually missed it, too.Thanks for ... um, I mean, CFR!
YAY!!! I couldn't believe it when I got the message for the update, it's really here! A new chapter! :) Thank you! I loved it, the long wait was more than worth it because this chapter is just perfect. I always love when these two have their little moments, it's so cute. I loved getting to know a little more about Siofre's thoughts and feelings, I love that she's just as anxious and ready as Johannes is, I can't wait to see how they finally come together. I loved that he was firm about wanting to spend the afternoon with her and didn't let her get away with working alone. I can't wait for the next chapter, I hope it won't be too long a wait :)
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
Hi! I'm so glad you enjoyed it!Yes, Johannes is becoming gradually more assertive, but without being pushy or aggressive about it, and always with Siofre's good in his mind. I, too, hope it will not be too long a wait for another chapter of CSG! Thanks for letting me know you enjoyed the chapter!
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
Hi! I'm so glad you enjoyed it!Yes, Johannes is becoming gradually more assertive, but without being pushy or aggressive about it, and always with Siofre's good in his mind. I, too, hope it will not be too long a wait for another chapter of CSG! Thanks for letting me know you enjoyed the chapter!
I'm not quite sure if Lydia has three children or only one - Bertrand - are her others Conner and someone else? I got a bit confused when Soifre was explaining her children - seemed to me she miscarried a lot and that Bertrand was the only child - but then you said he was the youngest, so I got confused.
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
I need to reread the chapter & make sure that I haven't mis-typed something. If I have, I'll go in and make a correction! Thanks!Lydia has one child, Bertrand, and he has two children, Phoebe and Conner. Conner's married to Elisabeth and they have one boy, Liam (who grows up to be Eoghan's father).
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
I think the plethora of children, grandchildren, and other relatives may simply have overwhelmed the synapses. hee! In the previous chapter, Siofre does say that Bertrand was Lydia & Malcolm Tyree's only child, and then in this chapter, she speaks of Bertrand being married to Sally (Longbottom) and the two of them having Connor & Phoebe. Charles Prince is Bertrand's cousin (Charles's father was Bertrand Prince, Lydia's brother, for whom she named her son), and Charles is married to Sally's sister Louisa. (And this is why Severus is related to Eogan in two ways -- through the Princes & the Longbottoms. Bertrand's cousin and Sally's sister are Eileen Prince's grandparents, thus Severus's great-grandparents, and Bertrand and Sally themselves are Eoghan's great-grandparents.) Yeah, can get confusing!
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
I'll just take your word for it and go forward - it was confusing - whew! Thanks for explaining in simple terms - you know sometimes I need a map. *smirks*
*snip*“I may need to take additional measures,” Siofre said. “And the spells I cast will only be effective as long as they are in the house. From what I understand, he drinks, then comes home mean. On good nights, he passes out before he does more than shout and make a scene. The nosy neighbour turns a blind eye to the husband’s behaviour, though he surely must know of it. Any road, I did what I could to make sure that if he does come home drunk, he passes out straightaway upon crossing the threshold. If he tries to take a drink at home, he’ll become ill. Gwyneth claims that when he’s not drinking, he’s moody, but otherwise fine. Most of the spells I cast were aimed at his drinking—making the consequences miserable for him. I cast a few protective spells around Gwyneth, and I gave her an emergency Portkey, as well. If Cadoc becomes violent or frightens her in any way, she can Portkey to her brother and sister-in-law’s home.”“Why would she stay with such a brute?” Johannes asked.“She does love him, or the man she remembers marrying,” Siofre replied, “but she is expecting a baby. It was partly for her baby’s sake that I tried to persuade her to leave the man, but she . . . she has her reasons, I suppose.”“He hits her or hexes her and she is pregnant?” Johannes asked, even more appalled than he had been. “The man should be . . . he should be . . . I do not know a suitable punishment, but he does not deserve the family if he cannot treat them with the love and respect that he should. He should be their protector!”Siofre twitched a slight smile. “Perhaps a lecture in gentlemanly behaviour might do him some good . . . in a few weeks, after the man has ceased drinking. If we can manage that.” I hate to say it, but nothing fixes an abuser unless the abuser WANTS to be fixed - only THEY can truly heal themselves - all the abusee can do is leave - and the woman, in my opinion, is being foolish and selfish - and abusive to her unborn child. I can not STAND lazy, selfish women like this that would rather live in hell than do something better for their kids.
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
Okay, since we know that Lydia is Slytherin, and Johannes is Ravenclaw - I simply MUST know what our Siofre is, my guess, Ravenclaw or Gryffindor - or perhaps Slytherin.... but I'm putting my coin on Ravenclaw.
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
Yes, she's a Ravenclaw. :-)You're right about abusers. Siofre's trying to address some of the underlying causes of his drinking, hoping that that will help, as well as doing something about the drinking itself. We shall see what happens with that.Let's see . . . here's the passage from RaM ("A Spree") where Siofre and Johannes meet:Johannes laughed as the three witches all agreed that every wizard still had a little boy in him. Siofre looked up at the tall, sandy-haired wizard.“Don’t know you. You’re foreign, aren’t you?” The words were blunt, but her tone friendly.“I am from Germany, ma’am,” Johannes said in his friendly manner. “Johannes Birnbaum, at your service.”“Ah, the Herbology wizard. Ravenclaw Head of House, aren’t you? Heard good things about you. Siofre Tyree, Ravenclaw myself,” she said, holding out her hand, which Johannes took and bent over in a formal bow.As Johannes straightened, Minerva apologised. “I am sorry, Grandmother. I hadn’t realised that you two hadn’t met.”
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
Ah, I should have remembered this - well then, my coin was well placed - Ravenclaw indeed.
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
Indeed! You're a good 'claw spotter! ;-)
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
Am I? Seems I've been spoiled with a few good ones in my life. *winks*
*snip*A few moments later, the two stepped out into the sunshine, and Johannes saw that they had arrived at a gabled cottage of three stories. Unlike the main house with its towers and turrets, this house was not all stone. It was a combination of half-timbering and uncut natural stone of different colours—quite unusual for Scotland, in Johannes’s experience—but very lovely on this woody hill. It seemed half-grown from the land and the surrounding woods.Ok that right there is freaking AWESOME!
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
*snip*“Hmph. Still, it is not hers, and it is desolate.” She looked around her. “This is . . . isolated and private, but not set apart the way that island is. And that other, that is Dumbledore’s island. Do you know its name? Eilean Tèarmunn. It means ‘Refuge Island.’ A sanctuary from the wizarding world. Not even a Post Owl can get through to it. That is fine as far as it goes, but for Minerva, I would like her to have a place she could come that is hers if she needs it, and not just that island of Dumbledore’s. She can use the cottage or not, as she likes—and bring Dumbledore with her if she wishes.”Ahhhhh, NOW I am starting to understand the Tyree witches... forward thinking, ahead of their time, true Gaelic women of power - equal power - no woman should rely on a man - yes, now I am seeing the true Soifre. Besides all that, I'm glad she is looking out for Minerva - though I know Dumbledore wouldn't dream of hurting his love, but still, Minerva should have her own place.... and if Soifre has the space, and buildings, why not? Makes perfect sense. I wish I could live here! I'm insainly jealous!
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
*snip*“You think Minerva might not want it? Even if she uses it seldom, it will be here for her. It can be a holiday cottage for now, if she likes, but she will want a family one day and a home to raise her children."*winces*
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
The shell house is amazing, really amazing!
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
Hi,
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
! I'm glad you liked the cottage and the shell house. :-)Yes, typical of Tyree witches is that sense of independence, and Siofre has it in spades. She wants to help give Minerva opportunities and that home just of her own. As you say, she has the space, so why not?Yes, Siofre has no crystal ball to see into the future, and she does envision one with Minerva having children of her own. It's a wistful sort of moment for those of us who know what the future does hold for Minerva.
*snip*I hate maths. Maths makes me sleepy and I itch all over. I think I’m allergic,” Lydia said.Siofre barked a laugh. “And that is why I will do the calculations, as always. You’d think we didn’t do this every month.”“I do my very best to forget,” Lydia said pitifully.I can so relate to Lydia here... hate math... haaaaaaaate it.
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
*snip*“I am keeping much rushes, though, here and along the edge opposite,” Johannes said, pointing. “They are good for the animals, for the fowl and fishes, to have them here.”He is absolutely correct - far too many people cut all the natural vegetation out of a pond and kill it, even putting up cement walls around it - turns the water into piss pea soup and basically kills it - thank you for keeping him realistic and knowledgable - a real herbologist! A naturalist!
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
LOL! Yes, I'm allergic to math, too -- but sadly have had to work for many years in jobs that required me to sit there and "itch" while using it. Unfortunately, although I hate it, I'm still not abysmal at it. Although I suppose that's good . . . to a point!Glad you like Johannes and his care for the natural balance and all the living things, plant and animal. One of the things he enjoys is knowing how plants fit into an ecosystem, and what plants can do for various critters. He loves to encourage life, so he certainly wouldn't deaden a pond by cutting out all the vegetation and putting in concrete! I'm glad you appreciate this aspect of the story. :-)
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
I've seen far too many gardeners that remind me of some Wal-Mart version of a garden - potted plants that attract NO insects and some concrete and plastic fountain sitting on asphalt - and these 'gardens' are so alien to the natural surroundings and support no life and take up so .... here I am ranting - sorry - anyway, glad to see Johannes is a REAL naturalist/gardener.I also love the explanation of the alarm charms or wards that they are going to put around the pond to keep the babies from drowning - very cool!
Okay - so - lets see, I loved seeing Gertie again, and had to roll my eyes too at Malcolm's silliness - she's a good sport, putting up with him I think - and as usual, I always get embarassed when folks at the table have kissed others at the table but aren't with those at the table - as you know, so I had even more respect for Gertie for sitting through all that as Mal and Katherine talked about his kissing - eh... what else ... Katherine was interesting and I'd like to have learned more about her role in Grindelwald's defeat - as well as her work with Dumbledore but I know that's a minor thing here.I liked how Johannes stumbles around with his English and makes silly errors - chip off the old brick and such - and I like how you've made his speach a bit odd, which it should be, since English isn't his first language.I admit, I'd like to know more about why Grindelwald was after him - recruiting him, but perhaps we'll learn more about that as the story progresses.But most importantly, I'd really curious about WHY Siofre has captured his attention - its a bit of a puzzle to me - I guess I just don't see much of her personality yet or something - besides that she's a very commanding witch - got that alpha personality - perhaps that's it? At any rate, I'm sure I'll learn more as the story progresses.And as always, enjoying your writing, but then again I'd never have started reading Scottish Garden if I wasn't already completely taken with your writing - so no surprises there!
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
Yes, you'll eventually learn more about what happened to Johannes's family & why.It's partly the commanding personality, and partly just "chemistry" -- or maybe it's "magic," or magical resonance. Malcolm can be a trial, but usually in a funny way, so Gertrude actually enjoys it when he's "exasperating." haha!Glad you're enjoying it!
Oh dear, Malcolm is meddling already...
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
haha! His heart's in the right place!
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
Seems most of your characters, OC or Canon, are meddlesome! HAHA! I love EEET! For once it isn't Dumbledore meddling - thankfully - though I suppose right now he's too busy with Minerva to think about much else. *grins*
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
Yes, Dumbledore is busy between Minerva, Hogwarts, Minerva, the Ministry, Minerva . . . well, you get the idea!
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
Mmmmhmmmm - might have to go back and read RaM just to see how busy he is!
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
This is a bit post-RaM, but you're right: if you reread the end of RaM, you'll get an idea of what may be still be keeping him busy these days!
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
All good stuff if I remember correctly.
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
Oh, very good, indeed!
Morgan and Fiona had quads? What on earth? Magical fertility treatment or something? You simply MUST explain that!I am liking this, loving the timid flirtation from Johannes and the direct flirtation or demands of his time, from Siofre - pretty cute. I love romance in the RamVerse - I don't have to worry about rejection!
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
Yes, indeed! And everyone suspects they used potions or a spell or something, but they claim not. Minerva calls them "the litter." (Gareth mentioned that tidbit about Minerva's humor to Severus back in LVS somewhere. Severus liked it. hee!)I'm glad you're enjoying the romance. Johannes is rather smitten, and Siofre isn't indifferent, either! Thanks!
A very nice introduction and very cute to see Johannes having an eye on Siofre - looking forward to more Dumbledore and McGonagall!
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
Thanks! Glad you enjoyed it. Albus & Minerva will eventually make "personal appearances" in the fic, but not for a while yet -- although Minerva shows up by reference fairly frequently. And there's one of your favorite HP characters coming up soonish, too! :-)
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
Ooooh - Gertie???
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
Ah, she's a RaMverse character, but yes, she does, indeed, show up! And relatively soon, actually -- sooner than the canon HP character I was thinking of. In fact, there are two canon characters appearing together in that chapter who I'm pretty sure are among your faves. :-)
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
Ooooh! I'm so excited!!!!!
I was very happy to see an update to this story! And what a fun chapter it was. Apparently Minerva isn't the only one who doubts Malcolm's stories. Poor Malcolm. I think Malcolm was holding back in the fight or he would have taken all of the other wizards out easily:). BTW-go Johannes! Loved the spell with the wood. I think he should have left Cam up on the wall. I imagine these lads are in trouble if Gertrude and/ Siofre hear about it. Thanks for a fun read.
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
Hi! Glad you enjoyed it! Yes, Malcolm could have easily taken them, but it wasn't until it got "serious" that he went ahead and took 'em out. Yes, Johannes might not be much with the traditional defensive spells, hexes, jinxes, and the like, but he's got some imagination and skill with wood, so he didn't do too badly!Thanks!
Well, that certainly wasn't how I was expecting the evening to end. Action packed for sure!!I loved the details you put in about the African dragons. It amazes me how you always come up with new and interesting ideas to add to the RaM universe.I can't believe how quickly the little bar conversation turned ugly. Cam certainly was a nasty bugger and I'm glad Johannes was the one to pin him to the wall. Poor Aberforth, though. I pity him having to clean up all that mess. hahaWonder what Siofre would think if she heard about all that drama??? lol
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
I do wonder what Siofre would think, too! Johannes and Malcolm don't want to find out, that's for sure! Somehow, I can imagine that that story might make its way to her ears, whether the "lads" want it to or not! Yes, Cam was just ready for a confrontation there, wasn't he? And pretty nasty in his comments and innuendos, too. Glad you liked Johannes's trick with the wood. He might not be much at fighting, but he is a clever wizard, nonetheless -- and experienced with wood, as well. Glad you liked the African dragons. I've been looking for an opportunity to stick those into a chapter with Malcolm since I wrote his "application letter" to Dumbledore back in RaM, so it was really fun to finally give them a bit of space and hear a small portion of the story of Malcolm's first dragon ride. Thanks very much for the review!
OMG!! an update!! I was so happy when I saw the email in my inbox! Thanks!I loved this chapter, Malcolm is always so much fun, poor Johannes I don't think he likes the kind of fun Malcolm brings lol. This was a very nice chapter, so funny! I can't wait to read more Siofre and Johannes, they are getting closer by the chapter! LOL.thank you for updatingSam
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter! You're right: Johannes doesn't have the same idea of "fun" that Malcolm does!Thanks for the review! (I was glad to finally be able to write & update! )
I had been holding off reading this chapter and "saving it" since you had mentioned your muse had left you, but tonight I caved in and I'm so glad I did. Johannes' vision of Siofre and his confession to Lydia was breath-taking. How apropos that the jerk that used and left Lydia was a Lockhart. She did much better with her Murdoch. It was a little jarring to read the name Severus back in this time period. I hope you find your muse again. I really miss the updates. Take care.
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
I am currently struggling with writing a gift exchange fic that's finally beginning to sort of come together. I hope that once I have that written, maybe my muse will come back for the other stories. I miss them, too.I am glad that you enjoyed the chapter! Your review brought the characters back into my mind, and Lydia's story, so maybe that will help grease the wheels of the fanfic section of my brain! I figured that a Lockhart would be very good at cutting and running when the going got tough even back then. I thought it might be an interesting reminder of Severus' pureblooded side of the family, too, to have mention of the Prince relative he was named after, as well as the Princes' earlier tangles with the Tyree clan. We will also hear more about Eileen and her father in an upcoming chapter -- hmm, do I hear my muse tiptoeing about? LOL!Anyway, thank you very much for your review. I'm glad you enjoyed it -- and sorry that you haven't got another one to look forward to immediately, but I haven't vanished, and I do hope to continue with both this and LVS very soon. :-)
I'm really enjoying your story. Thank you for sharing your talent :)
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
Hi,
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
! Thank you for your note! I appreciate it, and I'm really glad you're enjoying the story.
Ooo lovely chapter. I like the way you are building the sexual tension and bonds between them. Fascinating ritual; I'm curious about the artifact. I'm assuming/hoping it has greater meaning than is usual.
I see Malcolm is in the next chapter - thank you!
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
Thanks,
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
!The next chapter has a bit more about the artifact -- and Siofre's curious about it, as well.I'm glad you're looking forward to seeing Malcolm again. I hope you enjoy it. He'll be popping in and staying for a couple chapters. :-)Thanks for the review!
LOL God Malcolm is amazing! lol, that tale and the show lol, he's great! I'm so glad he's back and I love it that Siofre calls Gertrude his witch! that's so sweet.
Now the most important part, OMG!! that was sooooo romantic, Johannes is very very romantic, his words to Siofre, the kiss, the pledge! oooohhhh I'm soooo happy right now!!! and Siofre! her reaction was amazing, I'm so pleased! lol. I loved it that she went from Magister to Honnie in less than a minute, she's giving in!
I really think his own private pledge to her has alot to do with the shape, color and markings of the artifact, I can't wait to find out! I'm so excited! Can't wait for the next chapter. GREAT, WONDERFUL writing!
Sam
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
Thank you! I enjoy writing Malcolm -- he seems to write himself -- and it's really fun to be able to step back into that period.I'm glad you enjoyed the romantic bits, as well. They are growing ever closer.Thank you very much for reviewing!
Fun chapter, indeedy!!!The conversation with Siofre and Bridie and then the one with her and Johannes warmed my heart fully. His declarations to her about his pledges, both verbal and in his heart, were very sweet. I'm sure she must know by now that he is truly enamoured with her. However, I can still see her giving him the time and space to come to her fully.LOVE, LOVE, LOVE MALCOLM!! He has me grinning from ear to ear with his tales to the wizard and his retelling of his meeting with him. He's such a hoot. And I'd have to agree with Siofre that his witch caught him well. haha.
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
I'm glad you enjoyed both the romance and the humor in this chapter. I think that Siofre is very aware now of his increasingly strong feelings for her. We'll see where that knowledge might lead.I'm glad that you found Malcolm and his tales a hoot. He's fun -- he practically writes himself.Thanks for the review!
Such an awesome chapter! I looooove it!!! The ceremony performed by Siofre was very special and I'm glad they didn't need any witnesses. I think some of the "magic" of the moment would have been lost if others had been around. And the artifact sounds very intriguing. I do hope we'll learn more about that as the story progresses. We are one step closer to having Siofre and Johannes together. SWEEEEET!!!!!Thanks for the update!
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
You're welcome! I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter! They are, indeed, closer now!
thank you, thank you, thank you!! I loved loved this chapter, it's very sweet and so interesting to learn all of this about Siofre and Tyree Clan. It was very funny that he was unsure about her wanting to adopt him lol, and I can't wait to find out what does the artifact mean, I'm sure it has to do something with their bond, I hope so at least!. I'm sooo glad Malcolm is going to be in the next chapter, I miss him! lol. Can't wait to read more, thanks!Sam
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
Yeah, he sure didn't want her thinking of him as her son! LOL! And she was glad that he was happy that he'd be closer to her than to any others in the clan. (Yay -- my javascript emoticons are working again! LOL!)It's been fun writing Malcolm in this coming chapter, so I hope you'll enjoy it.Thanks for the review!