Chapter Twenty-Three: Hill-Walkers’ Breakfast
Chapter 23 of 32
MMADfanMalcolm joins his grandmother for an early breakfast and they discuss Johannes, then he and Johannes leave for their hike.
Includes Malcolm McGonagall, Siofre Tyree, and Johannes Birnbaum.
Chapter Twenty-Three: Hill-Walkers' Breakfast
Malcolm rolled over onto his left side and groaned. He had opened the draperies on his east-facing windows before he'd gone to bed, and now he regretted it. Dawn light was shimmering gently through the many diamond panes of the windows, and he closed his eyes tightly against it. He remembered the hill-walking, though, and the glorious feeling of the cool, damp, fresh air entering his lungs, and the early morning sun making every blade, leaf, and petal stand out, bright and vibrant. Rolling over onto his back, Malcolm stretched, reaching his arms above his head and grasping the headboard as he stretched out his legs and wiggled his toes.
Throwing off the covers, he bounded from the bed and, shivering slightly as the cool air hit his naked body, he crossed the room, unlatched the window, and leaned out. Frost glittered across the grounds, and Malcolm grinned. It was a clear, magnificent morning. By the time he and Johannes left for their walk, the sun would have brought the frost to a sparkling dew. He could tell the areas where Johannes had cast strong microclimate charms, protecting the gardens from the cold night air, since they lacked the frosty sheen of the rest of the grounds.
Shivering even more from the cold breeze, Malcolm closed the window and Summoned his heavy, dark-green terrycloth robe from the wardrobe. Shoving his arms through the sleeves, he shucked on the slippers he kept in his room at the estate. He grabbed his kilt, a fresh shirt and waistcoat, and a pair of socks, and set off for a hot shower.
The shower was not as hot as he would have liked, and the pressure kept changing...he would be glad when Siofre got the pipes on this side of the house taken care of...but it refreshed him, and he whistled happily as he trotted down the stairs to the morning room, hopeful that the house-elves already had breakfast underway.
"Lydia's tune stuck in your head, eh, laddie?" Siofre asked as he bounced into the room, his dark curls still damp.
"Has it? Yeah, I guess it has! You're up early." Malcolm bent and gave his grandmother a peck on the cheek.
"Aye. I have work to finish. Breakfast's on the sideboard this morning. Multry spoils us when you're in the house," Siofre said.
Malcolm turned to look at the sideboard. Bacon, both thin-sliced smoked and fried crispy, potato scones, hard rolls, sliced cheese, grilled tomato wedges, sauteed mushrooms, bangers, soft-cooked eggs...no doubt kept at the perfect state by house-elf magic...kippers, salty porridge, fruit, and even a covered dish of kedgeree.
"How many people does Multry think she's feeding?" Malcolm asked, helping himself to the kedgeree, some grilled tomatoes, and a bowl of sauteed mushrooms. "And do you often have kedgeree for breakfast?"
"Never. Seemed a whim of hers. And when I asked, she said that Master Honnie and Little Collie would need a good breakfast for their hill-walking, especially after all they drank last night."
Malcolm opened his mouth to protest, but Siofre interrupted, holding up her hand. "I am merely reporting what Multry told me." She looked at the kedgeree on his plate. "Seems the kedgeree wasn't the odd dish I thought it was."
Malcolm shrugged. "Smelled good to me. And I've had it for breakfast before. Just never thought it would be something you'd ask for, that's all." He gestured toward her plate. "Besides, you're eating kippers and porridge. Not much difference."
Siofre shook her head but didn't contradict him.
"And is that a pot of coffee?" Malcolm asked, sniffing. He poured a cup and smiled. "Good coffee, too."
"I canna drink coffee until at least ten in the morning," Siofre said as she watched him pour cream into the cup.
"I know, that's what you've been telling me for fifty years." He took a sip of his creamy coffee. "But early in the morning after a late night, it's just the thing to clear out the cobwebs."
"So Lydia claims," Siofre said drily, watching as Malcolm squeezed lemon over his fish and rice. "But the magister prefers coffee in the mornings, so we always have a pot now. I have become used to its aroma. Or inured to it."
"Mmm, great breakfast," Malcolm said, swallowing a mouthful of kedgeree. "Really. I ought to stay the night more often."
"You're always invited, always welcome, you know that."
"I know. I know you'd wanted me to move back here when I was finished with my contract at Hogwarts, too, but you know that I wanted to be close to Gertrude and have a place of my own to have her come whenever she can get away from the school."
Siofre nodded. "And I am very glad that you are so happy, Malcolm. This summer, you and Gertrude must come and stay for a few weeks. Or a week or two, anyway. However long you wish. I would enjoy getting to know her better. The magister speaks highly of her."
"The magister . . . you know, Grandmother, about Johannes . . . I know it was a disappointment when I didn't move in here, and I know you miss having more family about, but things are changing now. Morgan and Fiona and their kids are here, Bert and Sally are coming back to Scotland, and whether they live here on the estate or not, they'll be in and out all of the time."
"Aye, 'tis good to have more family near," Siofre agreed, "and very good to have the wee bairns growing up here, too. The magister has begun a special garden for them, you know. Filled with plants they can safely put in their mouths, as wee ones are wont to do, and many surfaces, textures, and colours. He even has a tree picked out for them to have a fort in when they are older. This is a good place for them to grow up."
"Aye . . . the 'magister' does have plans for them..."
"Wonderful plans for the entire estate. Sometimes, I think he looks out across the land and sees not what is there, but what he will bring into being. Has he asked you about helping with the greenhouse?"
Malcolm shook his head. "Nay. He mentioned only that there will be one, and I helped him get acquainted with Caroline so he could order the glass from her."
"We're doing it together, building the greenhouse. Morgan's helping, although he's not very good with things like that, and I think that Lachina plans to help...she'd be good with her metal-charming and Lapidomagic talents...and I'm going to ask Loran, Tell, Maire, and Hamish from the island. I haven't asked your parents yet, but I think if we get enough people working on it, we can finish the structure in no time. Have you seen the plans? It is more than a greenhouse. Honnie's designed a work of art. Cupolas, bays, a fountain right inside the greenhouse, and all sorts of things. It will be beautiful as well as practical."
"About Johannes, Grandmother . . ."
"Aye?" Siofre pulled her small plate of fruit toward her. "What about Johannes? Was he ill last night after the apple brandy?" She frowned and started to push away from the table. "P'raps I should peek in on him, or have one of the house-elves check on him."
"Nay, nay, he wasn't ill. Just a wee bit squiffy. But he seemed fine after we had some coffee."
"Ah, very good." Siofre pulled closer to the table again. She looked at the fruit, then looked at the sideboard. "Tattie scone, Malcolm?" she asked as she Summoned one for herself.
"Um, that would be good," Malcolm said with a nod. He cut off a large knob of butter, put it on the still-warm scone, and let it melt.
"Mmm, Shoolie did these, I think," Siofre said, Summoning another fat round scone, "or it's her recipe. Multry's are more like ordinary griddle cakes. I could make a meal off of these."
"As I was saying, Grandmother, about Johannes..."
"I'm sure he'll be down soon. He's never a late sleeper."
"But, Grandmother . . ." Malcolm sighed. "As I said, I know that you've felt that the Tyree estate was a bit empty, that our family here is . . . dispersed. But you know that we're all really here for you. Whenever you need us."
"So you will help with the greenhouse. Very good," Siofre said with a nod.
"Aye, of course I will, but I'm talking about something different," Malcolm said.
"Well then, laddie, spit it out, dinna dance about it so!"
"I'm not, that is, I am trying to. Why on earth did you join Johannes to the clan?"
Siofre finished the last bite of her scone and looked at him. "Ah, he mentioned that, did he?" She licked a dribble of butter from her finger, then used her napkin. She picked up her teacup and took a sip.
"Aye, after I asked him about it," Malcolm replied. "I'm trying to understand it, Grandmother. But as much as I like Johannes...and I do...I don't understand why you joined a near-stranger to the clan."
"'Tisn't for you to understand or to judge, Malcolm," Siofre said firmly. "But aside from whatever reason went into my inviting him to join the Tyrees, you must be able to think of some good reasons, yourself. You say you're his friend. He is no stranger to you, laddie. Why would you invite him?"
"I wouldn't," Malcolm began. He sighed and reached for his coffee cup. "All right, if I were to invite him to join the clan . . . I suppose he's quite magically talented. His talents are in areas that might help the Tyrees. If he marries one, he could pass that on to his children, I suppose."
"An' for him, though? D'you think we only bring in wizards or witches for the benefit of the clan?"
"Nay. But usually it's because they're marrying a Tyree. It's for the couple. But for Johannes . . . I suppose . . . he did say that he had a place now, a sense of belonging. He lost his family. He's felt quite rootless, I think, especially after he decided not to return to Germany right away and decided instead to see what kind of life he could have here. I suppose that if I were to invite him, it might be to give him a sense of family here. And he is a decent man."
"Aye, and that's faint praise you give the man, laddie," Siofre admonished.
Malcolm shrugged. "You might know him in ways I don't, Grandmother. Talk about different sorts of things together. He is a fine wizard, but I don't think it's fair of you to . . . to let him think he has more of a home here than he does. Once his work here's done, he still has the rest of his life to live, you know. It's fine for now that he has a sense of belonging, but don't let it become a crutch for him that keeps him from getting on with his life."
"Nay, never...though you are wrong about one thing. If ever he needs a home, the man has one here. He is of the Clan Tyree now, and he is my kin. 'Twas my blood and magic that brought him into the clan, and as long as I breathe, he is welcome here, and not as a mere guest. But you are right that Johannes mustn't neglect his own life, however he may choose for it to proceed. So encourage him to visit you in Hogsmeade and to do all the things he may have done before he came here to live with us. He must remember all the options in life, the many opportunities he may have."
"It seemed to me last night as if you'd hired a general estate manager in Honnie, not just a gardener and Herbologist. That's never anything I'd have thought him well-suited to, but it sounds as though he does have some good ideas to contribute."
"Aye, he does, and he has been doing more than planning gardens and planting vegetables and flowers. He's going to manage the coppice again, and that's not been done in twenty years, at least, he's bringing all the orchards back into good shape...some have been neglected for decades, but he's hopeful for them...and he even has plans for the bogs eventually, everything from medicinal plants to Droobleberries. He has helped with a number of projects that are not even tangentially related to the gardens, and always to our benefit. His work...and his value, both to me and to the estate...goes far beyond the four corners of his contract."
"If he stays on here, if he's here more than the matter of months you'd originally planned," Malcolm said, "you might want to have him in his own house somewhere on the grounds. There are a few other than the lodge...and then there are those wee cottages near the northern edge of the estate by the sea...he might like to have a real place of his own, or at least, if it's not his, at least, it's a house he's not sharing with others."
"Those wee cottages by the sea, laddie, they've not been tended since you were in school, I think, and not a soul has lived there in even longer. If there's a one of them with a roof left, I'd be surprised. Nay . . . and as for any of the other houses . . . we shall see."
Malcolm shrugged. "As you wish. I'm sure that when this living arrangement becomes cramped for him, he'll find some way of . . . accommodating it or changing his situation."
"The magister is aye welcome to have guests and to make whatever arrangements he deems appropriate for them...in consultation with Lydia and Multry, of course...and he knows this."
"Speaking of arrangements, Lydia said that Trudie and I are to have the Capercaillie Suite this weekend."
"Aye...unless you'd prefer to share your usual bedroom, but I thought that a wee bit small, and you might prefer the suite."
Malcolm quirked a grin. "So, no separate bedrooms this time."
"It seemed a pointless waste of a bed unless your witch wanted them for the sake of discretion. Have you consulted her?"
"Nay...but I will ask her, and in time for Lydia to change arrangements if for some peculiar reason Trudie wants separate bedrooms."
"I believe she plans to put Lachina in your room, an you've no objections to that."
Malcolm shook his head. "She already told me. I don't keep much here, anyway, and the elves will move all my personal things, my robe and whatever, to the suite. It's fine for her to use that room...after all, I have a very good reason to want the suite, instead!" He grinned.
"If ye both like it, then 'tis yours whenever you and Gertrude visit. Just tell Lydia. And if you don't mind giving up your boyhood room, you could always stay in the Capercaillie suite, e'en when Gertrude canna be here with you."
"That sounds fine. In fact, if I stay again tonight, I may just move over there right away. The plumbing's bound to be better on that side of the house."
"Brian will be working on the plumbing next week, but I dinna know an he'll be done before everyone descends on the estate. What problem did you have? Skretchin?"
"Nay, no ghoulish sounds this time. Just the pressure wasn't good and it seemed that the hot water got cold again before it reached me."
Siofre shook her head and frowned. "That should not be."
"I can see if there's anything I can do for it before I leave, if you want."
"Nay, that's fine. Honnie's not complained at all about the water in his suite, and although Lachina will be arriving in a couple days, she can use a different bathroom if that one isn't working yet. We'll cope until Brian is here."
"And Lydia?"
"She's fine. She has developed her own solution," Siofre said discretely.
"She uses a bathroom on the other side of the house when she wants a hot bath?" Malcolm asked with a grin.
"Aye." Siofre returned his grin.
"Not Honnie's?" Malcolm asked, eyebrows raised.
"Heavens, no! Where do you get your ideas, laddie?"
"I don't know...it just popped into my head and out of my mouth," Malcolm said. "She does seem very fond of Honnie."
"Aye, she is. He is good to her."
"I hope she doesn't become silly about him, though," Malcolm said. "Not at her age. I'm sure that Honnie would be kind about it, but it could be embarrassing for her."
Siofre raised her eyebrow. "I am older than Lydia, remember, so do not bring up her age. And she has a warm and open nature, which I am sure that Johannes appreciates. She is unlikely to embarrass herself in any way. They have become friends."
"Lydia does know how to loosen up and have a good time," Malcolm said appreciatively. "I think living with her is loosening you up, too, Grandmother. You seem more enthusiastic about the ceilidh this year than last...all these guests, a four-day party! You're becoming positively sociable."
Siofre laughed and shook her head. "Ah, well, this is an easier year for me than last, and I thought that with Murdoch's birthday on Friday, we could have a party for him on Saturday, and it seemed sensible to combine the bonfire night with his party and give the family a few days of celebration."
"You were missing Herbert last year," Malcolm said.
"I still miss him," Siofre said softly. "And Mother. Especially . . ."
"That's right, she and Murdoch shared a birthday. I remember when Murdoch was little, how he loved sharing a birthday with Grammy Bridget."
"Aye, I remember," Siofre said with a smile. "Anyway, most of the planning, I've left to Lydia and the house-elves. The case with Butterworth and his winged horses does not come at an opportune time, but I can give him a good defence, so it's a worthy use of my time."
"Don't you know someone else who can do it? Point them in the right direction and let them have at it?" Malcolm asked. "Then you could come out with us today, too...at least come on our picnic for lunch."
Siofre shook her head. "Nay, I canna. There's another factor, one I plan to take advantage of. The neighbour who reported the Butterworths' horses, it was Drusus."
"Drusus? You mean Drusus Prince, Charles's son?" He asked. When Siofre nodded, he said, "He's one miserable son-of-a-Crup. Does Lydia know?"
"Aye, I told her last night. She said not to treat him any differently than I would anyone else."
"Poor Lydia. It's hard to believe such a sweet lady came from such a nasty pureblood family."
"Lydia?" Johannes's voice came from the doorway. "Is she all right?"
Siofre smiled up at him. "Oh, aye, she is fine, Honnie. Dinna worry. 'Twas one of her relatives we were speaking of."
"Ah, good. Lydia is a sweet witch, as you say, Malcolm," Johannes said, picking up a plate and helping himself to rolls, thinly sliced bacon, and cheese. Siofre was already pouring his coffee for him when he pulled out a chair and took a seat at her right, across from Malcolm. "She seems to have little contact with her relatives."
"She doesn't," Malcolm said, pushing the cream pitcher toward him. "I actually think they're one reason that Bert and Sally were gone for so long, why they left in the first place. Louisa picked up her husband's family's airs."
"Ach, laddie, it's not that simple, but you are right, Sally and Louisa's relationship was strained when Sally and Bertrand left. And this hearing won't help the Tyrees and Princes become any closer."
"Hearing?" Johannes asked, confused. He broke open a roll and folded some ham and cheese into it. "What hearing?"
"The Butterworth case," Malcolm replied. "The miserable neighbour is Drusus Prince."
"Ah, Eileen's father. That is unfortunate," Johannes said with a sad shake of his head. "Poor girl."
"Aye...not that she's much better, from what I saw of her at Hogwarts."
"She is not so bad," Johannes said. "She is sad . . . withdrawn."
"That's what you saw; what I saw was a haughty girl who wouldn't speak to anyone she considered lesser than her...including Mudbloods..."
Siofre reached over and rapped his knuckles lightly with her teaspoon in a gesture of reproval. "That word is forbidden in this house, an' you know it."
"I wasn't calling anyone that, Grandmother! I was demonstrating what Prince thought of so many of her classmates. You know that I'd never call anyone that."
"It was an unnecessary use of the word, Malcolm. The words we choose to use are important; they can shape our thoughts and the thoughts of others...and how others perceive you, as well, laddie," Siofre admonished, though gently.
"I paired Eileen with a Muggleborn in her fourth and fifth years," Johannes said, avoiding the familial squabble. "They did not become friends, but I never saw any tension between them. They both did equally well. Eileen did not attempt to sabotage her classmate's work...and I have seen some students try to do that, for whatever reasons they may have."
"Hmph." Malcolm shrugged. "She still isn't a pleasant girl. And I don't think she knows anything about how to have fun. You should have seen the glower on her face whenever I tried to introduce a little levity into the classes. You'd think that someone'd told her once that a smile would crack her face, and she believed them."
"You'll need more than those sandwiches, Honnie," Siofre said, changing the subject. "I think Malcolm will be leading you on quite the ramble today. Have some porridge. It will stick with you."
Johannes looked dubious, but got up from the table and ladled a spoonful of porridge into a bowl.
"Grandmother Siofre would not look askance if you added sugar," Malcolm said with a laugh. "Would you Grandmother?"
"He may eat it in whatever fashion he prefers. Or have some of that curried rice and fish you had," Siofre said with a thinly disguised expression of disgust.
Malcolm laughed. "It was good. In fact, I'm going to have some more. You should try some," Malcolm said, standing and bringing his dish back over to the sideboard.
"Nay, I am glad Multry made it for you to enjoy, though."
Malcolm sat down and ate a forkful. "Mmm-mm! Here, have some. Just try it. Then you can dislike it all you want!" He held out his fork to her. "It's got some very nice haddock in it!" he wheedled.
As Johannes looked on, smiling, Siofre took the fork and brought it to her mouth, a dubious expression on her face. She sniffed. Then she tasted it. She chewed, swallowed, and handed Malcolm his fork back.
"Well?" Malcolm asked.
"I would not choose to eat it for breakfast, but it was not entirely disgusting," Siofre said.
"Maybe it's like coffee," Malcolm said with a grin, "best after ten in the morning!"
Johannes chuckled, evidently having heard Siofre's opinion of drinking coffee first thing on waking.
"I think we should bring some of these rolls and the cheese with us," Johannes said, "and a few bananas."
"Good idea, Honnie. It will help us to last until Lydia's picnic!"
"I am ready to leave as soon as you have finished your kedgeree," Johannes said.
"So'm I," Malcolm said. He quickly finished the last bit of his breakfast. "Ready right now."
The two wizards stood, and Malcolm bent and kissed Siofre's cheek. "Have a good day, Grandmother! Save Butterworth's bacon!"
"Do not exhaust the magister, lad!"
"Nay, he'll be fine. We'll have a grand time, right, Magister?" Malcolm asked, turning to Johannes.
"Aye," Johannes agreed with a nod. "It is a beautiful day. I hope you do not spend the entire day indoors," he added to Siofre.
Siofre smiled up at him. "I will get out for a while after lunch, I am sure."
"Come have lunch with us, Siofre," Johannes said impulsively. "You must eat. A picnic after a hard morning's work, that would be a good reward for you. Please. Bitte. We would enjoy your company."
"I dinna know . . ."
"Please join us for lunch," Johannes repeated, taking Siofre's hand lightly in his. "You can return to your work as soon as you wish, but give us the pleasure of your company for a little while."
Siofre smiled and shook her head. "All right, Honnie. I will, unless I am in the midst of something. Come find me when you're ready for lunch. I'll probably be in my study or in the library."
"Very good." He bowed and released her hand. "I will see you later today, then."
As the two wizards left the morning room, Malcolm said, "How'd you do that, man? Is it the accent? The bow? All those Continental manners? I wanted her to join us, and she just ignored me." He shook his head. "And I thought I was the charmer around here...are you muscling in? Must be that accent. Aye, the accent."
Johannes's laughter echoed back into the morning room, and Siofre grinned.
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Dear MMADfan, I love this story! Do you plan to write more chapters in the future? I would love to see it finished.
I really hope you update soon, you write such wonderful fanfiction and I find myself rereading some of the old ones hopefully your next update will be near in the future for this as well as LVS
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Thank you! I do hope to update both stories soon!
I really hope you update soon, you write such wonderful fanfiction and I find myself rereading some of the old ones hopefully your next update will be near in the future for this as well as LVS
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Thank you very much,
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
!I will definitely try to get a few chapters of Charming the Scottish Garden and LVS posted this autumn. I'm sorry for the wait. It's very good to know that people are still reading them and will be here to read the new chapters when I (finally!) get them written. (Life's not been conducive to writing in the last couple years, sadly.)I really appreciate the note! I will do my best to get a new chapter up very soon.
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Yes I have been keeping up with your stories. I especially liked RAM itself , although I should let you know or perhaps you do know. But I read on ff.net and I usually keep with the newest MMAD fiction, I recently came across one that had taken a parts of your story and added it to theirs, I commented saying I read it before to which the author promptly deleted my comment. Just thought you should know as even though I am no writer I felt bad about something like that. However I shall eagerly await your next update :)
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Would you mind emailing me or messaging me through ffnet to let me know which story it is, if you remember the title? I would appreciate it. I'm very glad that you like RAM!
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i do not have an account on FF.net :/ sorry, i usually just go as a guest i already signed up on alot of new pages. And i could read the stories just as easily, But the Name of the Story is Even in Death by Albus P.W.BDumbledore1891. You take a good look at chapter 5
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Thanks very much! :-) I appreciate the tip!
First a new chapter of LVS and then CSG- I am in heaven! As much as I want to see Siofre and Johannes admit their feelings for each other, I enjoyed the "push-pull" of this chapter. The way the talk of age differences turned to them, Siofre wanting to take his hand but not, sitting close on the bench- all of it a wonderful buildup. 5 stars!
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I'm glad it made you happy and you're liking the "push-pull"!I'm hoping to update at least two chapters a month -- more if I can -- alternating amongst the WIPs I have going. I am resisting the sudden onslaught of plot bunnies that are begging me to write more RaMverse fics set during the immediate post-RaM time period, like CSG is.Thanks for the review! It's encouraging!
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I'm glad it made you happy and you're liking the "push-pull"!I'm hoping to update at least two chapters a month -- more if I can -- alternating amongst the WIPs I have going. I am resisting the sudden onslaught of plot bunnies that are begging me to write more RaMverse fics set during the immediate post-RaM time period, like CSG is.Thanks for the review! It's encouraging!
Best birthday present, ever!!! An update for this and it's a very shippy Siofre/Johannes chapter. woooo hoooI think this line was absolutely brilliant:Siofre found herself smiling back, and her heart beating faster at the sight of him. Could she really give him up to another witch?NOPE, she can't give him up to another because her heart already belongs to him and he holds hers as well. I wasn't too fond of the ADMM discussion. Siofre unnerves me when she speaks of Minerva and Albus's relationship, especially in this context. I know Malcolm is her favorite but it almost felt like she wasn't thrilled with Albus marrying Minerva, even though it's what makes her happiest and clearly they adore one another. sigh. Oh well ... I'm still happy for Siofre and Joannes, awwww.
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Hi! Glad to give you a good birthday prezzie! :-)What Siofre is not thrilled with is Albus not marrying Minerva. It's not that she has objections to their not being married, but she's afraid that Minerva wants marriage & Albus ain't askin' -- and she's right, at this point. But Minerva is being Stoic and sensible, and since she won't talk to Siofre about it, Siofre's not about to give her advice. She's also just plain worried that Minerva will end up having a broken heart or have some other sadness in her life because of the relationship. She loves Minerva and doesn't want to see her hurt -- she cares about Albus, but Minerva's her granddaughter, so she's Siofre's priority in her heart, not Albus, even if she doesn't feel it's her place to bring up her worries with Minerva.As you know from LVS, Siofre and Johannes will eventually be happy together -- Johannes's policy of being steadfast and patient pay off, and Siofre will never have any worries that he did not come to her freely, or that he might have been better off with someone else. But there's a bit of story between now & then, so I'd better say no more -- I'm afraid I'll leak spoilers! LOL!Thanks for the review!
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Hi! Glad to give you a good birthday prezzie! :-)What Siofre is not thrilled with is Albus not marrying Minerva. It's not that she has objections to their not being married, but she's afraid that Minerva wants marriage & Albus ain't askin' -- and she's right, at this point. But Minerva is being Stoic and sensible, and since she won't talk to Siofre about it, Siofre's not about to give her advice. She's also just plain worried that Minerva will end up having a broken heart or have some other sadness in her life because of the relationship. She loves Minerva and doesn't want to see her hurt -- she cares about Albus, but Minerva's her granddaughter, so she's Siofre's priority in her heart, not Albus, even if she doesn't feel it's her place to bring up her worries with Minerva.As you know from LVS, Siofre and Johannes will eventually be happy together -- Johannes's policy of being steadfast and patient pay off, and Siofre will never have any worries that he did not come to her freely, or that he might have been better off with someone else. But there's a bit of story between now & then, so I'd better say no more -- I'm afraid I'll leak spoilers! LOL!Thanks for the review!
I didn't realize until just now how much I have truly missed this story. But I will be patient and constant. Also, yaaaaaaaaaaaaaay! CFP
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Thank you! I'm glad you liked it. I've actually missed it, too.Thanks for ... um, I mean, CFR!
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
Thank you! I'm glad you liked it. I've actually missed it, too.Thanks for ... um, I mean, CFR!
YAY!!! I couldn't believe it when I got the message for the update, it's really here! A new chapter! :) Thank you! I loved it, the long wait was more than worth it because this chapter is just perfect. I always love when these two have their little moments, it's so cute. I loved getting to know a little more about Siofre's thoughts and feelings, I love that she's just as anxious and ready as Johannes is, I can't wait to see how they finally come together. I loved that he was firm about wanting to spend the afternoon with her and didn't let her get away with working alone. I can't wait for the next chapter, I hope it won't be too long a wait :)
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
Hi! I'm so glad you enjoyed it!Yes, Johannes is becoming gradually more assertive, but without being pushy or aggressive about it, and always with Siofre's good in his mind. I, too, hope it will not be too long a wait for another chapter of CSG! Thanks for letting me know you enjoyed the chapter!
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
Hi! I'm so glad you enjoyed it!Yes, Johannes is becoming gradually more assertive, but without being pushy or aggressive about it, and always with Siofre's good in his mind. I, too, hope it will not be too long a wait for another chapter of CSG! Thanks for letting me know you enjoyed the chapter!
I'm not quite sure if Lydia has three children or only one - Bertrand - are her others Conner and someone else? I got a bit confused when Soifre was explaining her children - seemed to me she miscarried a lot and that Bertrand was the only child - but then you said he was the youngest, so I got confused.
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
I need to reread the chapter & make sure that I haven't mis-typed something. If I have, I'll go in and make a correction! Thanks!Lydia has one child, Bertrand, and he has two children, Phoebe and Conner. Conner's married to Elisabeth and they have one boy, Liam (who grows up to be Eoghan's father).
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
I think the plethora of children, grandchildren, and other relatives may simply have overwhelmed the synapses. hee! In the previous chapter, Siofre does say that Bertrand was Lydia & Malcolm Tyree's only child, and then in this chapter, she speaks of Bertrand being married to Sally (Longbottom) and the two of them having Connor & Phoebe. Charles Prince is Bertrand's cousin (Charles's father was Bertrand Prince, Lydia's brother, for whom she named her son), and Charles is married to Sally's sister Louisa. (And this is why Severus is related to Eogan in two ways -- through the Princes & the Longbottoms. Bertrand's cousin and Sally's sister are Eileen Prince's grandparents, thus Severus's great-grandparents, and Bertrand and Sally themselves are Eoghan's great-grandparents.) Yeah, can get confusing!
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
I'll just take your word for it and go forward - it was confusing - whew! Thanks for explaining in simple terms - you know sometimes I need a map. *smirks*
*snip*“I may need to take additional measures,” Siofre said. “And the spells I cast will only be effective as long as they are in the house. From what I understand, he drinks, then comes home mean. On good nights, he passes out before he does more than shout and make a scene. The nosy neighbour turns a blind eye to the husband’s behaviour, though he surely must know of it. Any road, I did what I could to make sure that if he does come home drunk, he passes out straightaway upon crossing the threshold. If he tries to take a drink at home, he’ll become ill. Gwyneth claims that when he’s not drinking, he’s moody, but otherwise fine. Most of the spells I cast were aimed at his drinking—making the consequences miserable for him. I cast a few protective spells around Gwyneth, and I gave her an emergency Portkey, as well. If Cadoc becomes violent or frightens her in any way, she can Portkey to her brother and sister-in-law’s home.”“Why would she stay with such a brute?” Johannes asked.“She does love him, or the man she remembers marrying,” Siofre replied, “but she is expecting a baby. It was partly for her baby’s sake that I tried to persuade her to leave the man, but she . . . she has her reasons, I suppose.”“He hits her or hexes her and she is pregnant?” Johannes asked, even more appalled than he had been. “The man should be . . . he should be . . . I do not know a suitable punishment, but he does not deserve the family if he cannot treat them with the love and respect that he should. He should be their protector!”Siofre twitched a slight smile. “Perhaps a lecture in gentlemanly behaviour might do him some good . . . in a few weeks, after the man has ceased drinking. If we can manage that.” I hate to say it, but nothing fixes an abuser unless the abuser WANTS to be fixed - only THEY can truly heal themselves - all the abusee can do is leave - and the woman, in my opinion, is being foolish and selfish - and abusive to her unborn child. I can not STAND lazy, selfish women like this that would rather live in hell than do something better for their kids.
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
Okay, since we know that Lydia is Slytherin, and Johannes is Ravenclaw - I simply MUST know what our Siofre is, my guess, Ravenclaw or Gryffindor - or perhaps Slytherin.... but I'm putting my coin on Ravenclaw.
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
Yes, she's a Ravenclaw. :-)You're right about abusers. Siofre's trying to address some of the underlying causes of his drinking, hoping that that will help, as well as doing something about the drinking itself. We shall see what happens with that.Let's see . . . here's the passage from RaM ("A Spree") where Siofre and Johannes meet:Johannes laughed as the three witches all agreed that every wizard still had a little boy in him. Siofre looked up at the tall, sandy-haired wizard.“Don’t know you. You’re foreign, aren’t you?” The words were blunt, but her tone friendly.“I am from Germany, ma’am,” Johannes said in his friendly manner. “Johannes Birnbaum, at your service.”“Ah, the Herbology wizard. Ravenclaw Head of House, aren’t you? Heard good things about you. Siofre Tyree, Ravenclaw myself,” she said, holding out her hand, which Johannes took and bent over in a formal bow.As Johannes straightened, Minerva apologised. “I am sorry, Grandmother. I hadn’t realised that you two hadn’t met.”
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
Ah, I should have remembered this - well then, my coin was well placed - Ravenclaw indeed.
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
Indeed! You're a good 'claw spotter! ;-)
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
Am I? Seems I've been spoiled with a few good ones in my life. *winks*
*snip*A few moments later, the two stepped out into the sunshine, and Johannes saw that they had arrived at a gabled cottage of three stories. Unlike the main house with its towers and turrets, this house was not all stone. It was a combination of half-timbering and uncut natural stone of different colours—quite unusual for Scotland, in Johannes’s experience—but very lovely on this woody hill. It seemed half-grown from the land and the surrounding woods.Ok that right there is freaking AWESOME!
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
*snip*“Hmph. Still, it is not hers, and it is desolate.” She looked around her. “This is . . . isolated and private, but not set apart the way that island is. And that other, that is Dumbledore’s island. Do you know its name? Eilean Tèarmunn. It means ‘Refuge Island.’ A sanctuary from the wizarding world. Not even a Post Owl can get through to it. That is fine as far as it goes, but for Minerva, I would like her to have a place she could come that is hers if she needs it, and not just that island of Dumbledore’s. She can use the cottage or not, as she likes—and bring Dumbledore with her if she wishes.”Ahhhhh, NOW I am starting to understand the Tyree witches... forward thinking, ahead of their time, true Gaelic women of power - equal power - no woman should rely on a man - yes, now I am seeing the true Soifre. Besides all that, I'm glad she is looking out for Minerva - though I know Dumbledore wouldn't dream of hurting his love, but still, Minerva should have her own place.... and if Soifre has the space, and buildings, why not? Makes perfect sense. I wish I could live here! I'm insainly jealous!
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
*snip*“You think Minerva might not want it? Even if she uses it seldom, it will be here for her. It can be a holiday cottage for now, if she likes, but she will want a family one day and a home to raise her children."*winces*
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
The shell house is amazing, really amazing!
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
Hi,
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
! I'm glad you liked the cottage and the shell house. :-)Yes, typical of Tyree witches is that sense of independence, and Siofre has it in spades. She wants to help give Minerva opportunities and that home just of her own. As you say, she has the space, so why not?Yes, Siofre has no crystal ball to see into the future, and she does envision one with Minerva having children of her own. It's a wistful sort of moment for those of us who know what the future does hold for Minerva.
*snip*I hate maths. Maths makes me sleepy and I itch all over. I think I’m allergic,” Lydia said.Siofre barked a laugh. “And that is why I will do the calculations, as always. You’d think we didn’t do this every month.”“I do my very best to forget,” Lydia said pitifully.I can so relate to Lydia here... hate math... haaaaaaaate it.
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
*snip*“I am keeping much rushes, though, here and along the edge opposite,” Johannes said, pointing. “They are good for the animals, for the fowl and fishes, to have them here.”He is absolutely correct - far too many people cut all the natural vegetation out of a pond and kill it, even putting up cement walls around it - turns the water into piss pea soup and basically kills it - thank you for keeping him realistic and knowledgable - a real herbologist! A naturalist!
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
LOL! Yes, I'm allergic to math, too -- but sadly have had to work for many years in jobs that required me to sit there and "itch" while using it. Unfortunately, although I hate it, I'm still not abysmal at it. Although I suppose that's good . . . to a point!Glad you like Johannes and his care for the natural balance and all the living things, plant and animal. One of the things he enjoys is knowing how plants fit into an ecosystem, and what plants can do for various critters. He loves to encourage life, so he certainly wouldn't deaden a pond by cutting out all the vegetation and putting in concrete! I'm glad you appreciate this aspect of the story. :-)
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
I've seen far too many gardeners that remind me of some Wal-Mart version of a garden - potted plants that attract NO insects and some concrete and plastic fountain sitting on asphalt - and these 'gardens' are so alien to the natural surroundings and support no life and take up so .... here I am ranting - sorry - anyway, glad to see Johannes is a REAL naturalist/gardener.I also love the explanation of the alarm charms or wards that they are going to put around the pond to keep the babies from drowning - very cool!
Okay - so - lets see, I loved seeing Gertie again, and had to roll my eyes too at Malcolm's silliness - she's a good sport, putting up with him I think - and as usual, I always get embarassed when folks at the table have kissed others at the table but aren't with those at the table - as you know, so I had even more respect for Gertie for sitting through all that as Mal and Katherine talked about his kissing - eh... what else ... Katherine was interesting and I'd like to have learned more about her role in Grindelwald's defeat - as well as her work with Dumbledore but I know that's a minor thing here.I liked how Johannes stumbles around with his English and makes silly errors - chip off the old brick and such - and I like how you've made his speach a bit odd, which it should be, since English isn't his first language.I admit, I'd like to know more about why Grindelwald was after him - recruiting him, but perhaps we'll learn more about that as the story progresses.But most importantly, I'd really curious about WHY Siofre has captured his attention - its a bit of a puzzle to me - I guess I just don't see much of her personality yet or something - besides that she's a very commanding witch - got that alpha personality - perhaps that's it? At any rate, I'm sure I'll learn more as the story progresses.And as always, enjoying your writing, but then again I'd never have started reading Scottish Garden if I wasn't already completely taken with your writing - so no surprises there!
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
Yes, you'll eventually learn more about what happened to Johannes's family & why.It's partly the commanding personality, and partly just "chemistry" -- or maybe it's "magic," or magical resonance. Malcolm can be a trial, but usually in a funny way, so Gertrude actually enjoys it when he's "exasperating." haha!Glad you're enjoying it!
Oh dear, Malcolm is meddling already...
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
haha! His heart's in the right place!
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
Seems most of your characters, OC or Canon, are meddlesome! HAHA! I love EEET! For once it isn't Dumbledore meddling - thankfully - though I suppose right now he's too busy with Minerva to think about much else. *grins*
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
Yes, Dumbledore is busy between Minerva, Hogwarts, Minerva, the Ministry, Minerva . . . well, you get the idea!
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
Mmmmhmmmm - might have to go back and read RaM just to see how busy he is!
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
This is a bit post-RaM, but you're right: if you reread the end of RaM, you'll get an idea of what may be still be keeping him busy these days!
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
All good stuff if I remember correctly.
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
Oh, very good, indeed!
Morgan and Fiona had quads? What on earth? Magical fertility treatment or something? You simply MUST explain that!I am liking this, loving the timid flirtation from Johannes and the direct flirtation or demands of his time, from Siofre - pretty cute. I love romance in the RamVerse - I don't have to worry about rejection!
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
Yes, indeed! And everyone suspects they used potions or a spell or something, but they claim not. Minerva calls them "the litter." (Gareth mentioned that tidbit about Minerva's humor to Severus back in LVS somewhere. Severus liked it. hee!)I'm glad you're enjoying the romance. Johannes is rather smitten, and Siofre isn't indifferent, either! Thanks!
A very nice introduction and very cute to see Johannes having an eye on Siofre - looking forward to more Dumbledore and McGonagall!
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
Thanks! Glad you enjoyed it. Albus & Minerva will eventually make "personal appearances" in the fic, but not for a while yet -- although Minerva shows up by reference fairly frequently. And there's one of your favorite HP characters coming up soonish, too! :-)
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
Ooooh - Gertie???
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
Ah, she's a RaMverse character, but yes, she does, indeed, show up! And relatively soon, actually -- sooner than the canon HP character I was thinking of. In fact, there are two canon characters appearing together in that chapter who I'm pretty sure are among your faves. :-)
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
Ooooh! I'm so excited!!!!!
I was very happy to see an update to this story! And what a fun chapter it was. Apparently Minerva isn't the only one who doubts Malcolm's stories. Poor Malcolm. I think Malcolm was holding back in the fight or he would have taken all of the other wizards out easily:). BTW-go Johannes! Loved the spell with the wood. I think he should have left Cam up on the wall. I imagine these lads are in trouble if Gertrude and/ Siofre hear about it. Thanks for a fun read.
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
Hi! Glad you enjoyed it! Yes, Malcolm could have easily taken them, but it wasn't until it got "serious" that he went ahead and took 'em out. Yes, Johannes might not be much with the traditional defensive spells, hexes, jinxes, and the like, but he's got some imagination and skill with wood, so he didn't do too badly!Thanks!
Well, that certainly wasn't how I was expecting the evening to end. Action packed for sure!!I loved the details you put in about the African dragons. It amazes me how you always come up with new and interesting ideas to add to the RaM universe.I can't believe how quickly the little bar conversation turned ugly. Cam certainly was a nasty bugger and I'm glad Johannes was the one to pin him to the wall. Poor Aberforth, though. I pity him having to clean up all that mess. hahaWonder what Siofre would think if she heard about all that drama??? lol
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
I do wonder what Siofre would think, too! Johannes and Malcolm don't want to find out, that's for sure! Somehow, I can imagine that that story might make its way to her ears, whether the "lads" want it to or not! Yes, Cam was just ready for a confrontation there, wasn't he? And pretty nasty in his comments and innuendos, too. Glad you liked Johannes's trick with the wood. He might not be much at fighting, but he is a clever wizard, nonetheless -- and experienced with wood, as well. Glad you liked the African dragons. I've been looking for an opportunity to stick those into a chapter with Malcolm since I wrote his "application letter" to Dumbledore back in RaM, so it was really fun to finally give them a bit of space and hear a small portion of the story of Malcolm's first dragon ride. Thanks very much for the review!
OMG!! an update!! I was so happy when I saw the email in my inbox! Thanks!I loved this chapter, Malcolm is always so much fun, poor Johannes I don't think he likes the kind of fun Malcolm brings lol. This was a very nice chapter, so funny! I can't wait to read more Siofre and Johannes, they are getting closer by the chapter! LOL.thank you for updatingSam
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter! You're right: Johannes doesn't have the same idea of "fun" that Malcolm does!Thanks for the review! (I was glad to finally be able to write & update! )
I had been holding off reading this chapter and "saving it" since you had mentioned your muse had left you, but tonight I caved in and I'm so glad I did. Johannes' vision of Siofre and his confession to Lydia was breath-taking. How apropos that the jerk that used and left Lydia was a Lockhart. She did much better with her Murdoch. It was a little jarring to read the name Severus back in this time period. I hope you find your muse again. I really miss the updates. Take care.
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
I am currently struggling with writing a gift exchange fic that's finally beginning to sort of come together. I hope that once I have that written, maybe my muse will come back for the other stories. I miss them, too.I am glad that you enjoyed the chapter! Your review brought the characters back into my mind, and Lydia's story, so maybe that will help grease the wheels of the fanfic section of my brain! I figured that a Lockhart would be very good at cutting and running when the going got tough even back then. I thought it might be an interesting reminder of Severus' pureblooded side of the family, too, to have mention of the Prince relative he was named after, as well as the Princes' earlier tangles with the Tyree clan. We will also hear more about Eileen and her father in an upcoming chapter -- hmm, do I hear my muse tiptoeing about? LOL!Anyway, thank you very much for your review. I'm glad you enjoyed it -- and sorry that you haven't got another one to look forward to immediately, but I haven't vanished, and I do hope to continue with both this and LVS very soon. :-)
I'm really enjoying your story. Thank you for sharing your talent :)
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
Hi,
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
! Thank you for your note! I appreciate it, and I'm really glad you're enjoying the story.
Ooo lovely chapter. I like the way you are building the sexual tension and bonds between them. Fascinating ritual; I'm curious about the artifact. I'm assuming/hoping it has greater meaning than is usual.
I see Malcolm is in the next chapter - thank you!
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
Thanks,
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
!The next chapter has a bit more about the artifact -- and Siofre's curious about it, as well.I'm glad you're looking forward to seeing Malcolm again. I hope you enjoy it. He'll be popping in and staying for a couple chapters. :-)Thanks for the review!
LOL God Malcolm is amazing! lol, that tale and the show lol, he's great! I'm so glad he's back and I love it that Siofre calls Gertrude his witch! that's so sweet.
Now the most important part, OMG!! that was sooooo romantic, Johannes is very very romantic, his words to Siofre, the kiss, the pledge! oooohhhh I'm soooo happy right now!!! and Siofre! her reaction was amazing, I'm so pleased! lol. I loved it that she went from Magister to Honnie in less than a minute, she's giving in!
I really think his own private pledge to her has alot to do with the shape, color and markings of the artifact, I can't wait to find out! I'm so excited! Can't wait for the next chapter. GREAT, WONDERFUL writing!
Sam
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
Thank you! I enjoy writing Malcolm -- he seems to write himself -- and it's really fun to be able to step back into that period.I'm glad you enjoyed the romantic bits, as well. They are growing ever closer.Thank you very much for reviewing!
Fun chapter, indeedy!!!The conversation with Siofre and Bridie and then the one with her and Johannes warmed my heart fully. His declarations to her about his pledges, both verbal and in his heart, were very sweet. I'm sure she must know by now that he is truly enamoured with her. However, I can still see her giving him the time and space to come to her fully.LOVE, LOVE, LOVE MALCOLM!! He has me grinning from ear to ear with his tales to the wizard and his retelling of his meeting with him. He's such a hoot. And I'd have to agree with Siofre that his witch caught him well. haha.
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
I'm glad you enjoyed both the romance and the humor in this chapter. I think that Siofre is very aware now of his increasingly strong feelings for her. We'll see where that knowledge might lead.I'm glad that you found Malcolm and his tales a hoot. He's fun -- he practically writes himself.Thanks for the review!
Such an awesome chapter! I looooove it!!! The ceremony performed by Siofre was very special and I'm glad they didn't need any witnesses. I think some of the "magic" of the moment would have been lost if others had been around. And the artifact sounds very intriguing. I do hope we'll learn more about that as the story progresses. We are one step closer to having Siofre and Johannes together. SWEEEEET!!!!!Thanks for the update!
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
You're welcome! I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter! They are, indeed, closer now!
thank you, thank you, thank you!! I loved loved this chapter, it's very sweet and so interesting to learn all of this about Siofre and Tyree Clan. It was very funny that he was unsure about her wanting to adopt him lol, and I can't wait to find out what does the artifact mean, I'm sure it has to do something with their bond, I hope so at least!. I'm sooo glad Malcolm is going to be in the next chapter, I miss him! lol. Can't wait to read more, thanks!Sam
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
Yeah, he sure didn't want her thinking of him as her son! LOL! And she was glad that he was happy that he'd be closer to her than to any others in the clan. (Yay -- my javascript emoticons are working again! LOL!)It's been fun writing Malcolm in this coming chapter, so I hope you'll enjoy it.Thanks for the review!