Chapter Twelve: The Primrose Room
Chapter 12 of 32
MMADfanJohannes and Siofre have tea at the Primrose Room.
Features Johanne and Siofre, with Philomena Yaxley.
Chapter Twelve: The Primrose Room
Siofre smiled as she saw where they had arrived. The Clypeum was bustling with Saturday shoppers. Glasgow's wizarding district was comprised of a nest of three main streets arranged in concentric circles and joined by several narrower alleys, and she and Johannes were in its heart, a circular park right at the Clypeum's centre. A fountain splashed nearby, and a bronze statue of a bearded, long-haired wizard stood overlooking the park, holding a staff and wearing an old-style kilt wrapped around his waist with one long end drawn up and over his shoulder. The wizard also had a round shield slung over his back.
"I thought we would go to the Primrose Room," Johannes said, gesturing across the green toward the tearoom.
"That would be lovely," Siofre said. "I didn't know that they took reservations there."
"The witch I spoke with said that they would hold a table for us." He drew out his watch. "We are a little early. Would you care to walk?"
"By the fountain there are benches," Siofre said.
Johannes nodded, and the two walked over to the closest bench and sat down. "Who is the statue?"
"Kentigern," Siofre said. "Kentigern Mackintosh, not St. Kentigern. He designed the Clypeum and cast the first wards. It's older than Diagon Alley, you know. The oldest guarded magical district in a Muggle city in Britain, in fact."
"London's an old city, though. It must have always been a centre of wizarding life, just as it has of Muggle life," Johannes said.
"Aye, of course it has been. But Diagon Alley itself and the surrounding side streets were laid down and warded in sixteen sixty-seven, after the Great Fire. It actually created an opportunity for the magical community, that fire did, because until then, there were a number of small, unconnected wizarding neighbourhoods scattered throughout the city. There are still some small wizarding neighbourhoods in London, of course, and a few major institutions that never relocated to Diagon Alley, such as St. Mungo's, but Diagon Alley gave a boost to the English wizarding community when it created a warded centre for commerce and social life."
"When was the Clypeum created?"
"It was established in twelve ninety-eight. There are many more buildings now than there were when Kentigern founded it, but the three major roads are the same as they were then." She pointed at the statue. "The shield on his back represents the Clypeum itself and the protection it provides."
"There must have been magical communities in England and Scotland before that. And in Wales. Cardiff. Edinburgh. York. London. Other cities."
"Of course, but they weren't planned, and most of them were very small and gradually grew over the years, through happenstance rather than by plan. The district in York might be influential, but it's tiny and had clear boundaries and wards only from sometime in the sixteenth century. McTavish Street became the centre of the magical community in Edinburgh very gradually. It grew slowly over the years, until eventually there were no more Muggles for the entire length of the street. Many wizarding districts in Britain, especially the smallest, most scattered ones, were only warded against Muggles in sixteen ninety-two, after the Secrecy Treaty. That treaty encouraged communities to consolidate. It's quite complicated for a magical family to maintain secrecy when they're living in a community surrounded by Muggles. Much easier when you have a neighbourhood that's got protections in place, even if they aren't completely hidden and segregated from the Muggles, like McTavish Street and the Clypeum are."
"That is true, I am sure," Johannes said with a nod. He looked around. "This is a very pleasant park. The fountain is nice."
"In the summer, the children play in it."
"You are hiring Brian Mackintosh to do the plumbing at the house?" At Siofre's nod, Johannes said, "I would like to put the fountain in good working order again. There is some work I can do, but it would be a good thing if he looked at it. When we install the greenhouse, we will need irrigation, sprays, and such. I do Charmed misters, but some of the work should be done by a plumber, unless you have a house-elf who could do it."
"Have you found someone to install the greenhouse?"
Johannes hesitated.
"You have? Or you cannot find one?"
"I thought we could do the work ourselves. With the house-elves and some help from Malcolm, I think we could do it. I don't know whether Morgan or Bertrand are handy that way...or Sally and Fiona...but between us, I believe we could manage. I have found a source for the glass. Mayfield Charmed Glassworks. They can also obtain the framing for us and do some final charms on the glass after we have completed the work."
Siofre nodded in approval. "I know Caroline Mayfield. She is one of Egeria's cousins. Competent witch. And I like keeping things in the family when we can. Good work, Johannes."
Johannes smiled. "I also have a new buyer for some of our herbs and produce. Two new buyers, in fact. Kyle Flatiron and Madam Puddifoot are our first customers. With the greenhouse, we will be able to continue to supply them right through the winter. We will maintain their custom."
"Excellent. Well done. And the bere?"
"Planted and fertilised. I was conservative in the charms I cast, however. I want to see how it grows, what it needs."
"I will visit it next week. I will also show you some other areas of the grounds that you likely have not seen yet. I will be home most of the week."
"It is time now for our tea, I believe," Johannes said. He stood and extended his hand to Siofre. "Your sister-in-law told me that you like the Primrose Room."
"I do," Siofre replied. She took his hand as she stood, then slipped her arm through his. "I prefer it to any other, in fact. In general, I am not fond of going out for dinner, as some folk are, but I do enjoy taking tea in the Primrose Room. Their scones are particularly good. I must warn you, however, that I have quite an appetite today. I do not believe that a single scone will suffice."
"I am glad that I have chosen well, then," Johannes said with a smile.
They entered the busy tearoom. Johannes removed his hat and spied the witch who had promised to hold a table for them. He smiled at her, and she came over.
"Mr Birnbaum, I saved you a corner table by the window. Will that suit you?" the wait-witch asked.
"That will be lovely, thank you very much, Miss Dunn," Johannes said, remembering her name. "It is very good of you."
Miss Dunn blushed and smiled. "Not at all."
She led them over to the table and plucked a small card from it on which she had written "Reserved." Johannes held Siofre's chair for her, giving her the one with the best view of both the park and the rest of the restaurant. As he sat, the wait-witch handed them each a menu.
When the witch had described the soups they were serving that afternoon and had left, Siofre smiled at Johannes. "I see now why you were able to reserve a table," she said, a teasing sparkle in her eye.
Johannes looked at her in puzzlement.
"You're a charmer, and you do not even know it." Her smile grew as Johannes looked baffled. "She thinks you're a bonny one, laddie."
Johannes glanced over his shoulder and saw Miss Dunn across the room going over an order. She looked up at that moment and saw him. She smiled, blushed, and lowered her eyes before looking up at him again.
Johannes turned back to Siofre. "I was only polite," he said, his cheeks pink. "I did not attempt to charm her for the table."
Siofre's grinned. "You do not need to." It was quite sweet, she thought, that Johannes had no idea how very good-looking and charming he was. She was sure that he hadn't flirted with the witch, but just been himself. Her grandson Malcolm, now, he wasn't above a bit of flirting to get a good table in a restaurant, she was sure. Malcolm had been that way from the time he could walk, she thought.
A different witch came and took their orders, and Johannes also ordered sandwiches.
"The scones smell very good, but I, too, have an appetite this afternoon," Johannes said.
"They do lovely little cakes here, too," Siofre said. "They have some that are filled with wonderful cream. They are light seeming, but rich. We can have those after."
"As you recommend!" Johannes agreed with a nod. "You had a very busy morning?"
"Aye, and the afternoon was, as well. To Tiree first, then to Ireland, then home this afternoon."
"You saw Phoebe?"
Siofre nodded. "We had lunch together. She will be coming to stay at the house a day or two before Bertrand and Sally said they might arrive. Her . . . friend, Declan Tyree, will be arriving a few days later, and they will both be staying for the weekend, as well. She is looking forward to seeing them, naturally."
"Declan Tyree?" Johannes asked curiously.
"Aye, he is a kinsman, too. Tyrees often marry Tyrees or other kin. Not close kin, of course." Siofre sighed. "I do wish those two particular Tyrees would either marry or move on and find others."
"They have been close friends for long?"
"Several years," Siofre said with a nod. "And they were close in school, too, but then later, after Hogwarts, they each were with others. Phoebe had been engaged to marry Bobby Fitzgerald, but he was killed in . . . I think it was thirty-five, quite a long time ago, now. Bobby was an Auror, and he was killed in the line of duty. She didn't see anyone seriously after that for a long time. But then she ran into Declan at Murdoch's funeral, and that rekindled their romance."
"You do not approve?"
Siofre was quiet for a moment. "I did not at first. Declan was engaged at the time...or at least the witch he was with believed they were going to marry. She was rather stunned when he broke off their relationship so suddenly two days after we buried Murdoch. So I thought that Declan did not behave as well as he should have, although it was preferable to drawing it out, I suppose. And I was uncertain whether he would not also treat Phoebe similarly if something more appealing came along. It does not appear so, however."
"She is happy now?"
"Aye, it seems so...and I do not criticise to her. Understand that. I worry. I simply . . . worry."
"I understand. What does Lydia think?"
"She wants the two to marry and brings it up every time she see them, either of them. She doesn't fuss about it. She simply becomes . . . enthusiastic."
Johannes chuckled. "I can see this. She has great enthusiasms."
Siofre smiled. "Aye. And Phoebe and Declan treat it with good humour."
Their tea arrived, rapidly followed by their plates of various little sandwiches.
"It was good of you to leave Lydia the flower and the note this morning. I believe the note meant a lot to her."
Johannes shook his head. "Not at all. That is, I am glad that she liked it. Yesterday your story of her early years saddened me."
"That was many years ago. She has had a happy life, Johannes."
"Ja, I know that. But it touched me. She has brought me much pleasure with her music. I wished to express appreciation and to encourage her."
"It did encourage her." She took a sip of her tea. "These sandwiches were what I needed, but your company has also been very refreshing."
Johannes went slightly pink. "Thank you."
"Are you returning to Hogsmeade this evening?"
Johannes nodded. "I had thought I would. After seeing you home, of course."
"Morgan and his family are moving in tomorrow, and we will be having a big family dinner in the afternoon, all of us together. It would be nice if you were there, too."
"Ah, well, it is a family dinner. I would not wish to intrude upon such an occasion."
Siofre shook her head. "I am inviting you because it would not be an intrusion. Of course, if you prefer not to join us, I dinna wish to press you."
"If you do not think that Morgan and Fiona would prefer it to be family only..."
"They will not think of it that way. And Lydia was saying the other day how much we have become accustomed to your company."
Johannes smiled. "I am honoured to be included in a family occasion."
"I should warn you before you commit to it that the four babies will also be eating with us. They are not old enough to be said to 'dine,'" Siofre said with a smile, "but they do eat. Messily. And David likes to throw his food at Aiden, but he always misses. So it may not be such an honour."
"It is. And I like babies. I will come to dinner. Will you need help with the removal?"
Siofre shook her head. "The house-elves have that all in hand. Fiona is coordinating it, and the elves are carrying out most of it. It should go smoothly."
"And the babies while the parents are busy?"
"Shoolie will watch them in the nursery at the main house. She is good with the bairns."
"There is a nursery in the main house?" Johannes asked curiously.
"Aye, of course there is. In the west tower. It has not seen much use in recent years, but now that the quads are so nearby, it will be used more, I am sure. I will show it to you. There's also a room for lessons. I dinna know what plans Morgan and Fiona have for the bairns' education, but p'raps they'd like to use the schoolroom in the main house, at least at times."
"Sheffy! Sheffy!" A plump witch waved rather enthusiastically from across the room.
Siofre looked up. "Mrs Campbell, née Flint," she whispered to Johannes. She focussed on Mrs Campbell and raised her hand slightly. She nodded, and a smile flitted across her face. "We were in school together," she added sotto voce.
Mrs Campbell approached their table. "Oh, Sheffy! How very good to see you out! Why, I was just saying to Roberta the other day, 'Roberta,' I said, 'Roberta, we just never see our dear little Sheffy anymore. Hiding away up there in those hills of hers,' I said, 'or popping around the country, earning a bit of silver, but never popping 'round to see us anymore,' and here you are!"
"It is very nice to see you again, too, Florrie," Siofre said as the other witch took her hand in both of hers. "Florrie, I'd like to introduce Professor Johannes Birnbaum. Professor Birnbaum, this is Mrs Florence Campbell."
Johannes rose in his seat and took Florrie's offered hand, bending over it. "Mrs Campbell. Honoured to meet you."
"Pleased to meet you, too, Professor," Florrie said, smiling and squeezing his fingers. Johannes thought the number of rings she wore created a danger to anyone she shook hands with. "You must be Siofre's new garden wizard!" She looked down at Siofre. "I'd thought he was some ancient Herbology teacher. Lydia didn't say he was so..."
"We are fortunate to have Professor Birnbaum using his talents on our estate," Siofre said briskly. "He is making great strides with it."
"Quite different from Drew's grandmother," Florrie replied. She looked back at Johannes. "Have you known my husband's grandmother, Professor? Professor Zoe Campbell? She was our Herbology teacher."
"I did not have the pleasure," Johannes said.
"She wouldn't have taught you, anyway," Florrie said. "She retired back in the eighties, I think." She looked him up and down. "You likely weren't even a twinkle in your daddy's eye then."
"I did not attend Hogwarts, ma'am. I grew up in Germany."
"Really?" Florrie seemed astonished. "But Lydia said that you had been Head of Ravenclaw...there was something in the papers about that, but I don't remember what."
"I was Sorted into Ravenclaw after I began teaching at Hogwarts," Johannes said.
"What brings you here, Florrie?" Siofre asked.
"I'm meeting Philomena here. She's another one who's never out...all that silly Ministry business of hers!"
"Philomena is Head of the Department for International Magical Cooperation," Siofre said sharply. "Hardly silly business."
"But she could make more time for her cousin," Florrie said.
"I am sure she does what she can," Siofre said.
"There she is now," Florrie said, looking over at the door as the cheerful bells rang and Philomena Yaxley came in. Florrie looked at Siofre. "Would you like us to join you?"
"Ah, we are almost finished with our tea. And we have some business yet to discuss. Tyree estate business," Siofre said, plainly discouraging Florrie. "And as you have so little time with your cousin, I am sure you want to have her to yourself whilst you may."
Philomena came over. "Siofre! Good to see you...and Professor Birnbaum. No, no, don't stand. How are you enjoying your new business venture, Professor?"
"It is most satisfying," Johannes said. "There are new challenges. It is different from teaching at Hogwarts."
"I think our table is ready, Florrie," Philomena said. As Florrie turned to look toward the table the wait-witch had prepared for them, Philomena leaned close to Siofre and said, "See you soon, Siofre." She squeezed her shoulder and winked.
The two witches took their leave of Siofre and Johannes, Johannes rising respectfully.
When he had sat back down and rearranged his napkin on his lap, Siofre asked, "Would you be having a taste for some of their cream cakes now?"
"As you recommend them so highly, I have left space for them," Johannes said.
Siofre smiled, her eyes sparkling. "Good to leave room for the sweet today."
Johannes gained the attention of their wait-witch, and he requested some cream cakes and a fresh pot of Darjeeling for them both.
"Do people often call you 'Sheffy'?" Johannes asked. "I haven't heard Lydia call you that."
"Nay. They do not. Florrie has insisted on that . . . that nickname since we met when she was a silly first-year, and she persists in using it more than one hundred years on. I used to try to correct her, but then I realised she found it amusing to hear my protests, so I ceased providing her with amusement. She does occasionally introduce me that way, and I try a gentle correction at that time, but I do not press the point."
Johannes smiled up at the wait-witch when she set down their teapot, fresh cups, and their plate of cream cakes. "Thank you."
The wait-witch bobbed a quick curtsy. "Very welcome, sir. Would sir or ma'am like anything else?"
Johannes looked at Siofre, and after the slight movement of her head, he replied, "No, thank you very much."
Siofre reached for the pot and poured their tea into their fresh teacups.
"Thank you...Sheffy," Johannes said with a teasing smile.
Siofre laughed. "From you, with your accent, it sounds rather nice."
"I do believe I prefer your full name, however," Johannes said, accepting the milk pitcher. "Although until I saw the contract with your name spelled out, I thought it was 'S-h-e-e-f-f-r-a-h,' I admit. I had never heard the name before."
"It is a variation of my mother's sister's name, which was 'Siofra.'"
"I hear no difference," Johannes said.
"Her name ended with an 'a.'"
"Ah. I see. Does it have meaning?"
"'Changeling.' It is a common name in my mother's family."
"Very interesting. Siofre . . ." He smiled softly. "The first year that I taught at Hogwarts, I had a Connolly in my fifth-year class. Her name was 'Siobhan.' You may imagine the giggles from the students when I read the class roll and pronounced her name 'See-oh-bahn.' I likewise mispronounced 'Sean.' Called the boy, 'Seen.' 'Aoibheann' completely baffled me. The spelling of these names is even more peculiar than most English orthography, which I confess often makes little sense to me."
"Mm. I imagine so. Lydia says that reading German and Italian is easy in part because a word is always pronounced just as it's spelt."
"She is correct. I have only a little Italian, but that is my experience of it. Minerva assisted me in recognising the Scottish and Irish names and how the different combinations of letters give different sounds, such as the 's-e' and 's-i' do. So now when I see them, I can usually read them."
"So no more embarrassing titters when you call out 'Seen,' 'See-oh-bahn,' or 'Sin-need,'" Siofre teased.
"No, although I do say that my pronunciation is not always correct. I have worked more on it since teaching, however."
"I thought your English was remarkably good," Sioffre said, "with a most charming accent, but well-pronounced."
"Thank you. You flatter me," Johannes said with a slight blush.
"Not at all. I've heard English who murder their own mother tongue, so it is pleasant to listen to you speak. How did you learn it?"
"My Charms master was English, and I lived with him for almost two years, speaking only English. He lived in Oxford. Deceased now, since three years. But I studied it to read when I was a child. English, Latin, and Greek, although only a little Greek. Then I have French cousins, and I learned that to speak, as well."
"Very good," Siofre said approvingly. "I speak Scottish Gaelic and Irish, and I can make my way a bit in Welsh, and, of course, I speak English and Scots."
"I confess that sometimes when I am in Edinburgh, I hear people speaking, and I think it is English, but I cannot understand a word of it," Johannes said. "It is a very unusual dialect."
Siofre smiled. "Aye, each area has a different dialect. Even in England, they do, as you have noticed, I'm sure."
"It was a challenge for me when I first started teaching," Johannes said. "Some children seem to drop half the letters in more than half their words. But my ear developed, I think, and they learned to speak clearer if they wanted me to understand them."
"Did they laugh then, too?"
"Sometimes, but not often. And I would laugh, too. We laugh together. I liked the students . . . I did enjoy teaching, very much. I could see the children change and grow, make new discoveries and realisations. It was very satisfying in its way."
"You miss it, then?"
"Only a little. I would not mind taking an apprentice one day, when I have the . . . the capacity."
"Or if you have your own children, teaching them for the years before you send them to school."
Johannes nodded. "Perhaps."
"Connor and Elisabeth are sending Liam to Muggle school for the first five years. I will be interested to see whether that lasts."
"How old is Liam?"
"Almost six. He's been in kindergarten this year. I daresay his teacher thinks he comes from a peculiar family."
"His grandparents are Muggles, though," Johannes said.
"Aye, and that will make it easier for him to blend in, they think. He knows enough not to talk about certain things, but you know children. They can be forgetful...and quite literal. Someday, he will say something that he shouldn't, I am sure. Or have a magical accident. That could take some explaining."
"That is true," Johannes said. "You were schooled at home, I presume."
Siofre nodded. "Half the time at home at the estate and half the time on Tiree Beag with the cousins. Most of them stayed on the island for all their schooling, but I went to Hogwarts as both of my parents had, even my father, though he attended back in the nineties, when it was very rare to see any Tyree go to Hogwarts to school."
"The nineties . . . the seventeen-nineties?" Johannes asked rhetorically, doing the math.
Siofre chuckled. "Aye. It's no spring chicken you're looking at now, laddie, but my dad, he was older than my mother by a good many years...indeed, by more than four decades. He worked for the Irish wizarding patrol guard, you see, and was living in County Meath with the other Tyree cousins...he'd had a few problems with a few of the English pureblood families, so he couldn't get a job with the British Ministry law enforcement...and he met my mother when he was on duty. He was with a few others who had been sent to negotiate with some clauricorns who were living too close to a Muggle village and drawing attention to themselves. My mother was just eighteen, a country lass. My father caught sight of her and was struck by her beauty. He fell in love with her at first sight. She thought him a fine, strong wizard, gallant and well-spoken, she said, and so my father wasted no time. They married a year later, they returned here to live, and then the next year, I was born."
"It sounds very romantic."
"His mates teased him that the clauricorns had enchanted him to fall in love so to distract him from his work. But aye, 'twas romantic enough, and my mother was beautiful. I will show you her portrait in the gallery when we return to the house...if you are staying for dinner?"
"I hadn't thought I would . . . I have things in my flat in Hogsmeade, a few books, that I need to fetch. I was going to see you home and return to the flat for the night."
"We could fetch them together, then," Siofre said. "An you want to come back to the house today. Otherwise, we will see you tomorrow afternoon?"
"Ah . . . we could fetch them. It's just a few things. And you can see that my flat is quite cosy and not at all barren and empty, as you say...though it is not a castle. Simply a humble apartment."
"Just between us, sometimes at the end of a long day, I could wish for a humble apartment," Siofre said. "The castle brings many responsibilities, and not simply the care and upkeep of the house and grounds. But they are good, too, these responsibilities. Just occasionally . . . wearying. Keeping this between us."
"Of course."
"I would not want Lydia to feel a burden...she offered to go back to teaching piano again, and accompanying voice students. She hated accompanying voice students. An she took a few private piano students because she wanted to, because she enjoyed it, that would be fine, but I don't want her to think she has to . . . to chip in, you know?"
"Indeed. I understand."
"And it's not as though I do find it a burden, not usually, and I certainly don't find Lydia one, but it is a lot to think about. I worry, too, about my family on Tiree, and about my responsibilities toward them, and I worry about my clients, even ones from years ago."
"You must miss your husband," Johannes said. "Someone to share it with."
Siofre nodded and shrugged. "Herbert was a sweet wizard, a very dear man, and clever, too. Wrote histories of oracles, of discoveries, of great teachers . . . didn't write about wars, though. Never liked to write about . . . violent conflicts. Intellectual heroes, though, heroes of peace and wisdom, they interested him. He was a good man. And an emotional support to me, that too."
"But not . . . practical?" Johannes asked tentatively.
Siofre smiled wryly. "You are a sharp one, Magister. Aye, not very practical. But I didn't marry him to marry a practical man."
"Many have said I am not a practical man. Professor Dumbledore has said it."
Siofre snorted a laugh. "That man . . . he is a great wizard, and don't mistake me, I respect him, but he isn't unfailingly correct. You're practical enough. You got us customers for our produce, after all. And you saw the potential to grow bere again."
Johannes blushed. He would not tell her how difficult he found that side of his work...selling was quite a different thing from growing plants and casting charms, or from writing and research. He knew its necessity, after all, and at least people seemed to be willing to listen to him...he also liked people, and he knew that he had good potions ingredients, or good produce, to offer them.
"I hope that the bere is good," Johannes said.
"I spoke with Young Jacob this morning. He will look at the field when he is here for Beltane."
"You know, Siofre, if you wish to talk . . . to have someone to talk to, I am not family, but I would listen and be discreet, as you wish," Johannes said.
"I have found you to be a good listener," Siofre replied. "I enjoy your company. In fact, this has been a lovely afternoon. Thank you."
"I have enjoyed it. You were right about the cream cakes. Lecker."
"Pardon?"
"Very delicious. Tasty," he said with a nod.
"Aye, they are gusty," Siofre said with a laugh. "Now to Hogsmeade and your humble abode?" she asked as the wait-witch brought Johannes the bill.
"Aye," Johannes echoed. "To Hogsmeade."
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Dear MMADfan, I love this story! Do you plan to write more chapters in the future? I would love to see it finished.
I really hope you update soon, you write such wonderful fanfiction and I find myself rereading some of the old ones hopefully your next update will be near in the future for this as well as LVS
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Thank you! I do hope to update both stories soon!
I really hope you update soon, you write such wonderful fanfiction and I find myself rereading some of the old ones hopefully your next update will be near in the future for this as well as LVS
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!I will definitely try to get a few chapters of Charming the Scottish Garden and LVS posted this autumn. I'm sorry for the wait. It's very good to know that people are still reading them and will be here to read the new chapters when I (finally!) get them written. (Life's not been conducive to writing in the last couple years, sadly.)I really appreciate the note! I will do my best to get a new chapter up very soon.
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Yes I have been keeping up with your stories. I especially liked RAM itself , although I should let you know or perhaps you do know. But I read on ff.net and I usually keep with the newest MMAD fiction, I recently came across one that had taken a parts of your story and added it to theirs, I commented saying I read it before to which the author promptly deleted my comment. Just thought you should know as even though I am no writer I felt bad about something like that. However I shall eagerly await your next update :)
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Would you mind emailing me or messaging me through ffnet to let me know which story it is, if you remember the title? I would appreciate it. I'm very glad that you like RAM!
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i do not have an account on FF.net :/ sorry, i usually just go as a guest i already signed up on alot of new pages. And i could read the stories just as easily, But the Name of the Story is Even in Death by Albus P.W.BDumbledore1891. You take a good look at chapter 5
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Thanks very much! :-) I appreciate the tip!
First a new chapter of LVS and then CSG- I am in heaven! As much as I want to see Siofre and Johannes admit their feelings for each other, I enjoyed the "push-pull" of this chapter. The way the talk of age differences turned to them, Siofre wanting to take his hand but not, sitting close on the bench- all of it a wonderful buildup. 5 stars!
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I'm glad it made you happy and you're liking the "push-pull"!I'm hoping to update at least two chapters a month -- more if I can -- alternating amongst the WIPs I have going. I am resisting the sudden onslaught of plot bunnies that are begging me to write more RaMverse fics set during the immediate post-RaM time period, like CSG is.Thanks for the review! It's encouraging!
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I'm glad it made you happy and you're liking the "push-pull"!I'm hoping to update at least two chapters a month -- more if I can -- alternating amongst the WIPs I have going. I am resisting the sudden onslaught of plot bunnies that are begging me to write more RaMverse fics set during the immediate post-RaM time period, like CSG is.Thanks for the review! It's encouraging!
Best birthday present, ever!!! An update for this and it's a very shippy Siofre/Johannes chapter. woooo hoooI think this line was absolutely brilliant:Siofre found herself smiling back, and her heart beating faster at the sight of him. Could she really give him up to another witch?NOPE, she can't give him up to another because her heart already belongs to him and he holds hers as well. I wasn't too fond of the ADMM discussion. Siofre unnerves me when she speaks of Minerva and Albus's relationship, especially in this context. I know Malcolm is her favorite but it almost felt like she wasn't thrilled with Albus marrying Minerva, even though it's what makes her happiest and clearly they adore one another. sigh. Oh well ... I'm still happy for Siofre and Joannes, awwww.
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Hi! Glad to give you a good birthday prezzie! :-)What Siofre is not thrilled with is Albus not marrying Minerva. It's not that she has objections to their not being married, but she's afraid that Minerva wants marriage & Albus ain't askin' -- and she's right, at this point. But Minerva is being Stoic and sensible, and since she won't talk to Siofre about it, Siofre's not about to give her advice. She's also just plain worried that Minerva will end up having a broken heart or have some other sadness in her life because of the relationship. She loves Minerva and doesn't want to see her hurt -- she cares about Albus, but Minerva's her granddaughter, so she's Siofre's priority in her heart, not Albus, even if she doesn't feel it's her place to bring up her worries with Minerva.As you know from LVS, Siofre and Johannes will eventually be happy together -- Johannes's policy of being steadfast and patient pay off, and Siofre will never have any worries that he did not come to her freely, or that he might have been better off with someone else. But there's a bit of story between now & then, so I'd better say no more -- I'm afraid I'll leak spoilers! LOL!Thanks for the review!
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Hi! Glad to give you a good birthday prezzie! :-)What Siofre is not thrilled with is Albus not marrying Minerva. It's not that she has objections to their not being married, but she's afraid that Minerva wants marriage & Albus ain't askin' -- and she's right, at this point. But Minerva is being Stoic and sensible, and since she won't talk to Siofre about it, Siofre's not about to give her advice. She's also just plain worried that Minerva will end up having a broken heart or have some other sadness in her life because of the relationship. She loves Minerva and doesn't want to see her hurt -- she cares about Albus, but Minerva's her granddaughter, so she's Siofre's priority in her heart, not Albus, even if she doesn't feel it's her place to bring up her worries with Minerva.As you know from LVS, Siofre and Johannes will eventually be happy together -- Johannes's policy of being steadfast and patient pay off, and Siofre will never have any worries that he did not come to her freely, or that he might have been better off with someone else. But there's a bit of story between now & then, so I'd better say no more -- I'm afraid I'll leak spoilers! LOL!Thanks for the review!
I didn't realize until just now how much I have truly missed this story. But I will be patient and constant. Also, yaaaaaaaaaaaaaay! CFP
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
Thank you! I'm glad you liked it. I've actually missed it, too.Thanks for ... um, I mean, CFR!
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
Thank you! I'm glad you liked it. I've actually missed it, too.Thanks for ... um, I mean, CFR!
YAY!!! I couldn't believe it when I got the message for the update, it's really here! A new chapter! :) Thank you! I loved it, the long wait was more than worth it because this chapter is just perfect. I always love when these two have their little moments, it's so cute. I loved getting to know a little more about Siofre's thoughts and feelings, I love that she's just as anxious and ready as Johannes is, I can't wait to see how they finally come together. I loved that he was firm about wanting to spend the afternoon with her and didn't let her get away with working alone. I can't wait for the next chapter, I hope it won't be too long a wait :)
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Hi! I'm so glad you enjoyed it!Yes, Johannes is becoming gradually more assertive, but without being pushy or aggressive about it, and always with Siofre's good in his mind. I, too, hope it will not be too long a wait for another chapter of CSG! Thanks for letting me know you enjoyed the chapter!
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
Hi! I'm so glad you enjoyed it!Yes, Johannes is becoming gradually more assertive, but without being pushy or aggressive about it, and always with Siofre's good in his mind. I, too, hope it will not be too long a wait for another chapter of CSG! Thanks for letting me know you enjoyed the chapter!
I'm not quite sure if Lydia has three children or only one - Bertrand - are her others Conner and someone else? I got a bit confused when Soifre was explaining her children - seemed to me she miscarried a lot and that Bertrand was the only child - but then you said he was the youngest, so I got confused.
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I need to reread the chapter & make sure that I haven't mis-typed something. If I have, I'll go in and make a correction! Thanks!Lydia has one child, Bertrand, and he has two children, Phoebe and Conner. Conner's married to Elisabeth and they have one boy, Liam (who grows up to be Eoghan's father).
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
I think the plethora of children, grandchildren, and other relatives may simply have overwhelmed the synapses. hee! In the previous chapter, Siofre does say that Bertrand was Lydia & Malcolm Tyree's only child, and then in this chapter, she speaks of Bertrand being married to Sally (Longbottom) and the two of them having Connor & Phoebe. Charles Prince is Bertrand's cousin (Charles's father was Bertrand Prince, Lydia's brother, for whom she named her son), and Charles is married to Sally's sister Louisa. (And this is why Severus is related to Eogan in two ways -- through the Princes & the Longbottoms. Bertrand's cousin and Sally's sister are Eileen Prince's grandparents, thus Severus's great-grandparents, and Bertrand and Sally themselves are Eoghan's great-grandparents.) Yeah, can get confusing!
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
I'll just take your word for it and go forward - it was confusing - whew! Thanks for explaining in simple terms - you know sometimes I need a map. *smirks*
*snip*“I may need to take additional measures,” Siofre said. “And the spells I cast will only be effective as long as they are in the house. From what I understand, he drinks, then comes home mean. On good nights, he passes out before he does more than shout and make a scene. The nosy neighbour turns a blind eye to the husband’s behaviour, though he surely must know of it. Any road, I did what I could to make sure that if he does come home drunk, he passes out straightaway upon crossing the threshold. If he tries to take a drink at home, he’ll become ill. Gwyneth claims that when he’s not drinking, he’s moody, but otherwise fine. Most of the spells I cast were aimed at his drinking—making the consequences miserable for him. I cast a few protective spells around Gwyneth, and I gave her an emergency Portkey, as well. If Cadoc becomes violent or frightens her in any way, she can Portkey to her brother and sister-in-law’s home.”“Why would she stay with such a brute?” Johannes asked.“She does love him, or the man she remembers marrying,” Siofre replied, “but she is expecting a baby. It was partly for her baby’s sake that I tried to persuade her to leave the man, but she . . . she has her reasons, I suppose.”“He hits her or hexes her and she is pregnant?” Johannes asked, even more appalled than he had been. “The man should be . . . he should be . . . I do not know a suitable punishment, but he does not deserve the family if he cannot treat them with the love and respect that he should. He should be their protector!”Siofre twitched a slight smile. “Perhaps a lecture in gentlemanly behaviour might do him some good . . . in a few weeks, after the man has ceased drinking. If we can manage that.” I hate to say it, but nothing fixes an abuser unless the abuser WANTS to be fixed - only THEY can truly heal themselves - all the abusee can do is leave - and the woman, in my opinion, is being foolish and selfish - and abusive to her unborn child. I can not STAND lazy, selfish women like this that would rather live in hell than do something better for their kids.
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
Okay, since we know that Lydia is Slytherin, and Johannes is Ravenclaw - I simply MUST know what our Siofre is, my guess, Ravenclaw or Gryffindor - or perhaps Slytherin.... but I'm putting my coin on Ravenclaw.
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
Yes, she's a Ravenclaw. :-)You're right about abusers. Siofre's trying to address some of the underlying causes of his drinking, hoping that that will help, as well as doing something about the drinking itself. We shall see what happens with that.Let's see . . . here's the passage from RaM ("A Spree") where Siofre and Johannes meet:Johannes laughed as the three witches all agreed that every wizard still had a little boy in him. Siofre looked up at the tall, sandy-haired wizard.“Don’t know you. You’re foreign, aren’t you?” The words were blunt, but her tone friendly.“I am from Germany, ma’am,” Johannes said in his friendly manner. “Johannes Birnbaum, at your service.”“Ah, the Herbology wizard. Ravenclaw Head of House, aren’t you? Heard good things about you. Siofre Tyree, Ravenclaw myself,” she said, holding out her hand, which Johannes took and bent over in a formal bow.As Johannes straightened, Minerva apologised. “I am sorry, Grandmother. I hadn’t realised that you two hadn’t met.”
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
Ah, I should have remembered this - well then, my coin was well placed - Ravenclaw indeed.
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
Indeed! You're a good 'claw spotter! ;-)
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
Am I? Seems I've been spoiled with a few good ones in my life. *winks*
*snip*A few moments later, the two stepped out into the sunshine, and Johannes saw that they had arrived at a gabled cottage of three stories. Unlike the main house with its towers and turrets, this house was not all stone. It was a combination of half-timbering and uncut natural stone of different colours—quite unusual for Scotland, in Johannes’s experience—but very lovely on this woody hill. It seemed half-grown from the land and the surrounding woods.Ok that right there is freaking AWESOME!
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*snip*“Hmph. Still, it is not hers, and it is desolate.” She looked around her. “This is . . . isolated and private, but not set apart the way that island is. And that other, that is Dumbledore’s island. Do you know its name? Eilean Tèarmunn. It means ‘Refuge Island.’ A sanctuary from the wizarding world. Not even a Post Owl can get through to it. That is fine as far as it goes, but for Minerva, I would like her to have a place she could come that is hers if she needs it, and not just that island of Dumbledore’s. She can use the cottage or not, as she likes—and bring Dumbledore with her if she wishes.”Ahhhhh, NOW I am starting to understand the Tyree witches... forward thinking, ahead of their time, true Gaelic women of power - equal power - no woman should rely on a man - yes, now I am seeing the true Soifre. Besides all that, I'm glad she is looking out for Minerva - though I know Dumbledore wouldn't dream of hurting his love, but still, Minerva should have her own place.... and if Soifre has the space, and buildings, why not? Makes perfect sense. I wish I could live here! I'm insainly jealous!
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
*snip*“You think Minerva might not want it? Even if she uses it seldom, it will be here for her. It can be a holiday cottage for now, if she likes, but she will want a family one day and a home to raise her children."*winces*
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The shell house is amazing, really amazing!
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
Hi,
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
! I'm glad you liked the cottage and the shell house. :-)Yes, typical of Tyree witches is that sense of independence, and Siofre has it in spades. She wants to help give Minerva opportunities and that home just of her own. As you say, she has the space, so why not?Yes, Siofre has no crystal ball to see into the future, and she does envision one with Minerva having children of her own. It's a wistful sort of moment for those of us who know what the future does hold for Minerva.
*snip*I hate maths. Maths makes me sleepy and I itch all over. I think I’m allergic,” Lydia said.Siofre barked a laugh. “And that is why I will do the calculations, as always. You’d think we didn’t do this every month.”“I do my very best to forget,” Lydia said pitifully.I can so relate to Lydia here... hate math... haaaaaaaate it.
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*snip*“I am keeping much rushes, though, here and along the edge opposite,” Johannes said, pointing. “They are good for the animals, for the fowl and fishes, to have them here.”He is absolutely correct - far too many people cut all the natural vegetation out of a pond and kill it, even putting up cement walls around it - turns the water into piss pea soup and basically kills it - thank you for keeping him realistic and knowledgable - a real herbologist! A naturalist!
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
LOL! Yes, I'm allergic to math, too -- but sadly have had to work for many years in jobs that required me to sit there and "itch" while using it. Unfortunately, although I hate it, I'm still not abysmal at it. Although I suppose that's good . . . to a point!Glad you like Johannes and his care for the natural balance and all the living things, plant and animal. One of the things he enjoys is knowing how plants fit into an ecosystem, and what plants can do for various critters. He loves to encourage life, so he certainly wouldn't deaden a pond by cutting out all the vegetation and putting in concrete! I'm glad you appreciate this aspect of the story. :-)
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I've seen far too many gardeners that remind me of some Wal-Mart version of a garden - potted plants that attract NO insects and some concrete and plastic fountain sitting on asphalt - and these 'gardens' are so alien to the natural surroundings and support no life and take up so .... here I am ranting - sorry - anyway, glad to see Johannes is a REAL naturalist/gardener.I also love the explanation of the alarm charms or wards that they are going to put around the pond to keep the babies from drowning - very cool!
Okay - so - lets see, I loved seeing Gertie again, and had to roll my eyes too at Malcolm's silliness - she's a good sport, putting up with him I think - and as usual, I always get embarassed when folks at the table have kissed others at the table but aren't with those at the table - as you know, so I had even more respect for Gertie for sitting through all that as Mal and Katherine talked about his kissing - eh... what else ... Katherine was interesting and I'd like to have learned more about her role in Grindelwald's defeat - as well as her work with Dumbledore but I know that's a minor thing here.I liked how Johannes stumbles around with his English and makes silly errors - chip off the old brick and such - and I like how you've made his speach a bit odd, which it should be, since English isn't his first language.I admit, I'd like to know more about why Grindelwald was after him - recruiting him, but perhaps we'll learn more about that as the story progresses.But most importantly, I'd really curious about WHY Siofre has captured his attention - its a bit of a puzzle to me - I guess I just don't see much of her personality yet or something - besides that she's a very commanding witch - got that alpha personality - perhaps that's it? At any rate, I'm sure I'll learn more as the story progresses.And as always, enjoying your writing, but then again I'd never have started reading Scottish Garden if I wasn't already completely taken with your writing - so no surprises there!
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
Yes, you'll eventually learn more about what happened to Johannes's family & why.It's partly the commanding personality, and partly just "chemistry" -- or maybe it's "magic," or magical resonance. Malcolm can be a trial, but usually in a funny way, so Gertrude actually enjoys it when he's "exasperating." haha!Glad you're enjoying it!
Oh dear, Malcolm is meddling already...
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
haha! His heart's in the right place!
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
Seems most of your characters, OC or Canon, are meddlesome! HAHA! I love EEET! For once it isn't Dumbledore meddling - thankfully - though I suppose right now he's too busy with Minerva to think about much else. *grins*
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
Yes, Dumbledore is busy between Minerva, Hogwarts, Minerva, the Ministry, Minerva . . . well, you get the idea!
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
Mmmmhmmmm - might have to go back and read RaM just to see how busy he is!
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
This is a bit post-RaM, but you're right: if you reread the end of RaM, you'll get an idea of what may be still be keeping him busy these days!
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
All good stuff if I remember correctly.
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
Oh, very good, indeed!
Morgan and Fiona had quads? What on earth? Magical fertility treatment or something? You simply MUST explain that!I am liking this, loving the timid flirtation from Johannes and the direct flirtation or demands of his time, from Siofre - pretty cute. I love romance in the RamVerse - I don't have to worry about rejection!
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
Yes, indeed! And everyone suspects they used potions or a spell or something, but they claim not. Minerva calls them "the litter." (Gareth mentioned that tidbit about Minerva's humor to Severus back in LVS somewhere. Severus liked it. hee!)I'm glad you're enjoying the romance. Johannes is rather smitten, and Siofre isn't indifferent, either! Thanks!
A very nice introduction and very cute to see Johannes having an eye on Siofre - looking forward to more Dumbledore and McGonagall!
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
Thanks! Glad you enjoyed it. Albus & Minerva will eventually make "personal appearances" in the fic, but not for a while yet -- although Minerva shows up by reference fairly frequently. And there's one of your favorite HP characters coming up soonish, too! :-)
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
Ooooh - Gertie???
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
Ah, she's a RaMverse character, but yes, she does, indeed, show up! And relatively soon, actually -- sooner than the canon HP character I was thinking of. In fact, there are two canon characters appearing together in that chapter who I'm pretty sure are among your faves. :-)
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Ooooh! I'm so excited!!!!!
I was very happy to see an update to this story! And what a fun chapter it was. Apparently Minerva isn't the only one who doubts Malcolm's stories. Poor Malcolm. I think Malcolm was holding back in the fight or he would have taken all of the other wizards out easily:). BTW-go Johannes! Loved the spell with the wood. I think he should have left Cam up on the wall. I imagine these lads are in trouble if Gertrude and/ Siofre hear about it. Thanks for a fun read.
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
Hi! Glad you enjoyed it! Yes, Malcolm could have easily taken them, but it wasn't until it got "serious" that he went ahead and took 'em out. Yes, Johannes might not be much with the traditional defensive spells, hexes, jinxes, and the like, but he's got some imagination and skill with wood, so he didn't do too badly!Thanks!
Well, that certainly wasn't how I was expecting the evening to end. Action packed for sure!!I loved the details you put in about the African dragons. It amazes me how you always come up with new and interesting ideas to add to the RaM universe.I can't believe how quickly the little bar conversation turned ugly. Cam certainly was a nasty bugger and I'm glad Johannes was the one to pin him to the wall. Poor Aberforth, though. I pity him having to clean up all that mess. hahaWonder what Siofre would think if she heard about all that drama??? lol
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
I do wonder what Siofre would think, too! Johannes and Malcolm don't want to find out, that's for sure! Somehow, I can imagine that that story might make its way to her ears, whether the "lads" want it to or not! Yes, Cam was just ready for a confrontation there, wasn't he? And pretty nasty in his comments and innuendos, too. Glad you liked Johannes's trick with the wood. He might not be much at fighting, but he is a clever wizard, nonetheless -- and experienced with wood, as well. Glad you liked the African dragons. I've been looking for an opportunity to stick those into a chapter with Malcolm since I wrote his "application letter" to Dumbledore back in RaM, so it was really fun to finally give them a bit of space and hear a small portion of the story of Malcolm's first dragon ride. Thanks very much for the review!
OMG!! an update!! I was so happy when I saw the email in my inbox! Thanks!I loved this chapter, Malcolm is always so much fun, poor Johannes I don't think he likes the kind of fun Malcolm brings lol. This was a very nice chapter, so funny! I can't wait to read more Siofre and Johannes, they are getting closer by the chapter! LOL.thank you for updatingSam
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter! You're right: Johannes doesn't have the same idea of "fun" that Malcolm does!Thanks for the review! (I was glad to finally be able to write & update! )
I had been holding off reading this chapter and "saving it" since you had mentioned your muse had left you, but tonight I caved in and I'm so glad I did. Johannes' vision of Siofre and his confession to Lydia was breath-taking. How apropos that the jerk that used and left Lydia was a Lockhart. She did much better with her Murdoch. It was a little jarring to read the name Severus back in this time period. I hope you find your muse again. I really miss the updates. Take care.
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I am currently struggling with writing a gift exchange fic that's finally beginning to sort of come together. I hope that once I have that written, maybe my muse will come back for the other stories. I miss them, too.I am glad that you enjoyed the chapter! Your review brought the characters back into my mind, and Lydia's story, so maybe that will help grease the wheels of the fanfic section of my brain! I figured that a Lockhart would be very good at cutting and running when the going got tough even back then. I thought it might be an interesting reminder of Severus' pureblooded side of the family, too, to have mention of the Prince relative he was named after, as well as the Princes' earlier tangles with the Tyree clan. We will also hear more about Eileen and her father in an upcoming chapter -- hmm, do I hear my muse tiptoeing about? LOL!Anyway, thank you very much for your review. I'm glad you enjoyed it -- and sorry that you haven't got another one to look forward to immediately, but I haven't vanished, and I do hope to continue with both this and LVS very soon. :-)
I'm really enjoying your story. Thank you for sharing your talent :)
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Hi,
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
! Thank you for your note! I appreciate it, and I'm really glad you're enjoying the story.
Ooo lovely chapter. I like the way you are building the sexual tension and bonds between them. Fascinating ritual; I'm curious about the artifact. I'm assuming/hoping it has greater meaning than is usual.
I see Malcolm is in the next chapter - thank you!
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Thanks,
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
!The next chapter has a bit more about the artifact -- and Siofre's curious about it, as well.I'm glad you're looking forward to seeing Malcolm again. I hope you enjoy it. He'll be popping in and staying for a couple chapters. :-)Thanks for the review!
LOL God Malcolm is amazing! lol, that tale and the show lol, he's great! I'm so glad he's back and I love it that Siofre calls Gertrude his witch! that's so sweet.
Now the most important part, OMG!! that was sooooo romantic, Johannes is very very romantic, his words to Siofre, the kiss, the pledge! oooohhhh I'm soooo happy right now!!! and Siofre! her reaction was amazing, I'm so pleased! lol. I loved it that she went from Magister to Honnie in less than a minute, she's giving in!
I really think his own private pledge to her has alot to do with the shape, color and markings of the artifact, I can't wait to find out! I'm so excited! Can't wait for the next chapter. GREAT, WONDERFUL writing!
Sam
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
Thank you! I enjoy writing Malcolm -- he seems to write himself -- and it's really fun to be able to step back into that period.I'm glad you enjoyed the romantic bits, as well. They are growing ever closer.Thank you very much for reviewing!
Fun chapter, indeedy!!!The conversation with Siofre and Bridie and then the one with her and Johannes warmed my heart fully. His declarations to her about his pledges, both verbal and in his heart, were very sweet. I'm sure she must know by now that he is truly enamoured with her. However, I can still see her giving him the time and space to come to her fully.LOVE, LOVE, LOVE MALCOLM!! He has me grinning from ear to ear with his tales to the wizard and his retelling of his meeting with him. He's such a hoot. And I'd have to agree with Siofre that his witch caught him well. haha.
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
I'm glad you enjoyed both the romance and the humor in this chapter. I think that Siofre is very aware now of his increasingly strong feelings for her. We'll see where that knowledge might lead.I'm glad that you found Malcolm and his tales a hoot. He's fun -- he practically writes himself.Thanks for the review!
Such an awesome chapter! I looooove it!!! The ceremony performed by Siofre was very special and I'm glad they didn't need any witnesses. I think some of the "magic" of the moment would have been lost if others had been around. And the artifact sounds very intriguing. I do hope we'll learn more about that as the story progresses. We are one step closer to having Siofre and Johannes together. SWEEEEET!!!!!Thanks for the update!
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
You're welcome! I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter! They are, indeed, closer now!
thank you, thank you, thank you!! I loved loved this chapter, it's very sweet and so interesting to learn all of this about Siofre and Tyree Clan. It was very funny that he was unsure about her wanting to adopt him lol, and I can't wait to find out what does the artifact mean, I'm sure it has to do something with their bond, I hope so at least!. I'm sooo glad Malcolm is going to be in the next chapter, I miss him! lol. Can't wait to read more, thanks!Sam
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
Yeah, he sure didn't want her thinking of him as her son! LOL! And she was glad that he was happy that he'd be closer to her than to any others in the clan. (Yay -- my javascript emoticons are working again! LOL!)It's been fun writing Malcolm in this coming chapter, so I hope you'll enjoy it.Thanks for the review!