Chapter Two: The Garden in the Morning
Chapter 2 of 32
MMADfanJohannes begins his work, and he and Siofre speak of the garden plans and other matters.
Chapter features Johannes, Siofre, and Lydia.
Chapter Two: The Garden in the Morning
Johannes stood from his crouch beside the bed of culinary herbs he had been cleaning up. This was only his second day on the job, and he was doing a lot of very basic work on the kitchen gardens. Madam Tyree had assigned two of her house-elves to help him, but until he had finished sorting out what he wanted done, he had told them to wait until he called for them. He had originally planned to hire a witch or wizard or two to help him...there were a few gardeners whom he worked with regularly...but Madam Tyree and her sister-in-law said they preferred not to have strangers working on the grounds unless it was absolutely necessary.
Johannes wiped his hands on his heavy apron before drawing his wand from its Charmed loop and casting a spell to get rid of the dead plants and other debris he had cleared that morning. Some might have used their wands to do the clearing, but Johannes felt that he got a better sense of the plants and the soil when he did most of it by hand, and he also felt that, regardless of what the wand-wavers might claim, he could be more selective when actually getting down on his knees and weeding and grooming the beds. He found it hardly any faster using his wand, either, and he preferred expending his magic on more sophisticated tasks. Besides, it was satisfying to smell the earth and to feel it between his fingers as he did the work, just casting occasional gloving charms on his hands when he needed to protect them.
He looked over the plots he had cleared, and nodded to himself. The herb garden looked better now, and he could see its original bones, but he thought that the layout could be both more aesthetically appealing and more useful. It was early spring, and although it was too early and too cold to plant a Muggle-style herb garden, with some judiciously applied light microclimate charms, he could plant some new annuals, and with some care, he could have the house-elves help him to move the perennials around.
Johannes turned to the stone table he had Transfigured from a rock earlier that morning, and unrolled the large parchments on it. He moved around so that he could both see the current herb garden and look down at the new plan for the garden that he had carefully drawn on the topmost parchment. After he'd cleared the primary portion of the garden the day before, he had sketched the current layout of the garden, and then that night at his kitchen table, he had drafted three new variations. The one he liked best, the one that he was looking at, changed the layout of the paths and included a few new features, including some raised beds of useful flowering plants. This was the version he planned to recommend to Madam Tyree, but he wanted to do so in the context of an overall plan for the gardens, and he wanted to be able to present the plan for the gardens in conjunction with a plan for the overall grounds. First, though, he had to have a clearer picture of those grounds, and of any existing plans and maps.
The previous day, Madam Tyree had told him that in the library, there were old plans for the house and grounds that he could consult. Johannes drew out his watch and snapped it open. Almost nine. Hopefully a decent enough hour to go up to the house. He had no idea what the witches' daily habits were like, but certainly a house-elf would be able to let him into the library.
Johannes took off his long work apron, quickly cast a few charms to clean up, and slipped on his loose burnt-umber-coloured over-robe. He left his broad-brimmed hat on the table with the work apron and headed up to the house, going to the backdoor off the large kitchen pantry.
He knocked, and a lilac-coloured house-elf wrapped in pink opened the door to him.
"Good morning, Professor!" the elf greeted cheerfully. "You be needing your breakfast?"
"No, thank you," Johannes replied. He heard voices and laughter coming from beyond the kitchen. "Is your mistress available?"
"Madam Siofre or Madam Lydia?"
Johannes hesitated, then said, "Madam Siofre, although if she is unavailable..."
"Please, if you comes through the kitchen, Madam Siofre is in the morning room. I let her know you wants to see her." The house-elf nodded and Disapparated, leaving Johannes to find his way. Although he had cast a cleaning charm on his clothes and hands, he wiped his boots on the coconut fibre mat before stepping into the pantry.
Following the sound of the voices, Johannes walked through the pantry, pushed open the swinging door into the kitchen, then looked around. There were four doors, two on the level and two that each had a few steps leading up to them. Johannes took the steps up to the door to his left, knocked lightly, then opened it to find himself in a bright, cheerful room painted pale blue above a white chair rail, with stencilled designs running along the wall near the ceiling, and large windows that looked out onto the herb gardens where he had just been working.
Siofre was smiling down at two very tiny house-elves who were standing beside her chair. The tartan-clad witch looked up at Johannes and nodded. "Good morning, Professor."
"Good morning, Madam Tyree."
"I was just having my midmorning tea; would you care to join me?"
"Thank you, I would." With a slight hesitation, Johannes chose a chair to Siofre's left, facing the largest bank of windows, but not directly beside her, where the little elves were standing.
"Professor, this is Kilbeena and her brother, Duster. I told these wee bairns that they might watch you work today after their mother has finished their lessons, but they must not be batherin' you, or they will have to stay inside. An you could find some little tasks for them, as well, it would be a kindness...ones not requiring very much magic."
The two tiny elves looked up at Johannes hopefully.
"That would be fine," Johannes said. He'd never worked with house-elf children before, and had never even seen one the entire time he had taught at Hogwarts.
The two elves bounced on their toes and smiled happily.
"Off with you now," Siofre said. "Tell your mammie I said you could play in the gardens with the magister later."
The two house-elves joined hands and scampered off to the kitchen, giggling excitedly and whispering nonsense words to each other. At least, Johannes thought it was nonsense.
"You would like something to eat, as well," Siofre said. "You have been working for a while."
"Do not trouble yourself," Johannes began.
"No trouble. Sorrel!"
The pink-clad house-elf who had answered the door stepped out of the corner. "Yes, ma'am?"
"Fetch something for Professor Birnbaum. Bannocks and cabbock...unless you'd prefer something else?" Siofre asked, looking over at Johannes.
"That would be fine, thank you." He hadn't the faintest idea what cabbock was, but he'd had bannocks before. He found they varied a lot in palatability, but they were filling.
When Sorrel had vanished, Siofre twitched her wand and Summoned a cup and saucer from the sideboard. "Milk and sugar?"
"Milk only, please."
Siofre handed him his cup. "You have accomplished much this morning."
"There is still a good deal to do, and I would like to survey the other gardens today," Johannes replied. "You also said that there were cold frames?"
"Aye, and the wee ones know where they are. They will feel useful if they can show you where they are," Siofre said. "The cold frames are what is remaining of a greenhouse that was here when I was a lass. My mother and grandmother were keen gardeners, but my brother and his wife were less so, and they removed the greenhouse. They did keep the cold frames and used them for hardening off vegetable seedlings for later transplanting into the gardens."
"Where did they start them? In the cold frames themselves?" Johannes asked. If they charmed the cold frames, they would do for starting the seeds.
"Nay, the conservatory, which you have not yet seen. Tastle and Mynok, whom you met yesterday, share the gardening duties. Tastle is in charge of the conservatory, and his brother Mynok has taken care of the grounds. They are both getting on in years, and I think that Fandenz, Gweller, and Multry do most of the actual work, but Tastle and Mynok will show you around when you are ready."
"I would appreciate to hear your views, however," Johannes said. He had hoped to spend some time with Siofre, partly in order to determine what kinds of garden plans would please her and partly just to get to know her.
"You will hear my views, I assure you of that," Siofre said with a little cackle. "You will likely grow tired of hearing my views, if the experience of others is any indicator!"
Johannes smiled slightly. "I came into the house to see the plans you spoke of yesterday, the original plans of the house and grounds. I would like to see those before I tour the grounds myself."
"I'll show them to you, then, after you have eaten."
As if that were a signal, Sorrel popped into the room with a tray of bannocks, butter, and soft white cheese.
"You like bannocks, lad?" Siofre asked after the house-elf had left.
"They are an interesting variation from my usual fare," Johannes said diplomatically.
Siofre chuckled at that. "If you'd prefer something else, you only need say. We may have a few baps left from supper."
Johannes took a wedge of the flatbread and cut off a bit of cheese, shaking his head. "These are fine, I am sure." He hadn't eaten since half past six, so even if the bannocks were hard and dry, washed down with some tea, they would tide him over until lunch. He bit into the bannock and chewed; his eyebrows rose and he nodded appreciatively. "These are good. They are not oaten, though, are they?"
"Beremeal...from Tiree Beag. My cousin's farm there."
"Bere? That is a barley, or?"
"Aye, like barley. Multry uses a lot of butter in her bannocks," Siofre added with a slight grin as Johannes took a second piece and topped it with some of the cheese. "We will have sweet bannocks for tea...she loads them with dried fruit, and they are never the same twice."
"Scones, then?"
"Aye...and some would call these scones, too," Siofre said, gesturing toward the rapidly disappearing bannocks.
The two chatted for a bit about the grounds and the way Siofre remembered them being during her childhood, then the main door to the morning room opened and Lydia stepped in.
"Good morning," Lydia said brightly. As the other two nodded their greetings, she called for Sorrel, who was there in a heartbeat.
"Good morning, Madam Lydia!" Sorrel said cheerfully. "Usual breakfast?"
"Yes, please, Sorrel, but coffee this morning, I think. Clear out my cobwebs!" she replied.
Johannes almost requested a cup of coffee, as well, but then he thought that Siofre might take it amiss...this wasn't a restaurant, after all...and the tea really was quite good, strong, brisk, and slightly tannic in a pleasant way . . . much like Siofre. No, he would not ask for coffee that day.
"Bring a cup for our guest, as well, Sorrel," Siofre said. Hazel eyes sparkling, she looked over at Johannes...to see his reaction, not to seek his approval.
His eyes crinkled and he nodded slightly at her. He liked this witch. As Sorrel Disapparated and Siofre quirked him a brief smile in return, the corners of Johannes's mouth turned up. He liked this witch very much.
"My English sister-in-law is a late riser, sad to say," Siofre said, breaking off a small corner of a bannock wedge and spreading butter on it.
"It's hard to get up before the sun, no matter how late that may be," Lydia grumbled, pulling out the chair between the two and sitting down with a thump.
"After eighty-five years, you should be used to it," Siofre countered. She glanced at the clock on the wall. "And the sun's long been up; Professor Birnbaum arrived with it."
Lydia shrugged and smiled sheepishly. "I was up too late reading my new novel. I just had to finish it."
A pot of coffee, pitcher of cream, and two coffee cups and saucers appeared on the table. Johannes reached for the pot and poured Lydia a cup of coffee.
She smiled at the wizard and poured cream into her cup before handing the pitcher to him. "What are your plans for the day, Professor?"
"He has already cleared the kailyaird of weeds and dead plants while you were still abed," Siofre said. "After he has his coffee, I'll show him the library and where to find the old plans for the grounds."
"Do you know anything about pipes?" Lydia asked.
"Pipes? Tobacco pipes?" Johannes asked, confused. "Irrigation pipes?" he guessed again as Lydia shook her head and took a sip of coffee. "Gutters?"
"Lydia, hen, we are not batherin' the magister with these household troubles," Siofre admonished.
"What pipes?" Johannes asked again.
"We will have young Malcolm look at them," Siofre said.
Lydia's breakfast of two soft-cooked eggs, toast, and bacon arrived in front of her. "I just thought that he might know what was wrong." Lydia neatly removed the top from her first egg and turned to Johannes. "The pipes in my wing of the house make a dreadful noise. I think they may be cursed." Seeing Siofre's sceptical brow, Lydia added, "They sound cursed. Moaning, whining, whistling, gurgling...and at all times of day, even in the middle of the night."
Johannes shook his head. "Do you have a ghoul?" he suggested.
"No. At least, the house-elves say we don't have a ghoul," Lydia said, "and I think they would know."
Johannes shrugged. "I have some small knowledge of drainage and irrigation pipes, but that is all. I am sorry."
"The man is here to work on the gardens," Siofre said to Lydia. "We will not be wasting his precious time with your skrechin pipes."
After Johannes finished his coffee, Siofre led him out into the main part of the house, pointing out the hallway that led to the conservatory. "The music room is just before the conservatory. We use those rooms, the dining room, and the sitting room quite frequently, but if you take a wrong turn, you may end in a part of the house that we do not often use." She gestured off to their right as they started up the stairs to the first floor. "There is a great hall that my father divided into a billiard room, a lounge, and a ballroom. He never played billiards, and we only ever used the ballroom and lounge a few times a year when we would have parties. Murdoch and Lydia came to use them a bit more, but those days of grand ceilidhs are lang syne gone. Lydia and I have had few family gatherings since I returned here to live, but we might change that. I like a good ceilidh. We do maintain one long-standing tradition in our family. Two, three times a year, we hold bonfire nights for family and friends. I would like you to look at the spot where we currently have the bonfires and think about whether there might not be a better location for them...and whether the landscaping around the area might be more . . . interesting. We'll be doing a Beltane fire, so if you have ideas that we might implement before then, I want to hear them."
Siofre waved her wand as they entered the library, bringing up some of the lamps and drawing the curtains back from the long windows on the far wall. The room was huge, with bookcases both along the walls and in banks perpendicular to them; a balcony ran around the room, with three wrought iron spiral staircases leading up to it and more bookcases. There were, however, several discrete areas of the room furnished with comfortable chairs, couches, tables, and lamps.
"My brother expanded the library a few decades ago by breaking through the ceiling and converting a few of the bedrooms," Siofre explained, gesturing toward the upper level. "We still haven't filled all of the shelves up there, even with the books I brought with me. The plans you're seeking are in that cabinet there and in those folios on that shelf. You may come up here and consult them whenever you need to."
"Thank you, Madam Tyree," Johannes said. He looked around himself. "It is an impressive library."
"We are fortunate." She went to a window and looked out across the grounds. "It is too big for just the two of us, but the children all have their own places...Maisie stayed on in our old house when I moved back here. Her father's house. Lydia's son and daughter-in-law live down in Silloth-on-Solway in Cumberland." She sighed and shook her head. "Tyrees in England. And raising their son Liam there. Perhaps one day they will move back here." She looked up at Johannes and brightened some. "They visit often, though, and young Liam loves this house and these hills. I had hopes that when Malcolm finally returned to settle down, he would come here, but he wishes to be in Hogsmeade within sight of Hogwarts and his witch. We have invited Morgan and Fiona to join us, though, and with four wee bairns, I think they are now inclined to accept."
Johannes smiled. "Yes, Minerva calls them 'the litter.'"
Siofre laughed. "Aye! And I believe that having quadruplets has fulfilled Fiona's wish for motherhood and there will be no more little ones joining them. It would be good to have children here again, though."
"It is a beautiful place," Johannes said, looking out over the grounds.
"And you can make it no more beautiful than it is?" Siofre asked.
"I would not presume," Johannes said, "but I can help you to showcase its beauty, perhaps add to it."
Siofre nodded. "Then I should let you get to work. The day is awasting!"
Johannes was opening the cabinet to look for the earliest plans when Siofre stopped at the door and turned.
"Lunch at noon, Professor."
Johannes turned and looked back at her, smiling. He nodded. "Danke sehr. Thank you, Madam Tyree."
"And . . . dinner is at six, if you would care to stay. You could tell me, us, about your recommendations."
"I would like that, but I do not know whether my recommendations will be complete yet."
"Your impressions, then."
He nodded. "My impressions." He could do that, if he were not entirely overwhelmed by his impression of his hostess. "Yes. Thank you, Madam Tyree."
She smiled. "Good. Don't forget the wee ones will be helping you in the gardens later. Call for Multry, their mother, if they become a nuisance."
Siofre left the library, and Johannes was smiling as he pulled a sheaf of parchments from the cabinet. He would need to impress this witch. Time to get to work.
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126 Reviews | 8.24/10 Average
Dear MMADfan, I love this story! Do you plan to write more chapters in the future? I would love to see it finished.
I really hope you update soon, you write such wonderful fanfiction and I find myself rereading some of the old ones hopefully your next update will be near in the future for this as well as LVS
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
Thank you! I do hope to update both stories soon!
I really hope you update soon, you write such wonderful fanfiction and I find myself rereading some of the old ones hopefully your next update will be near in the future for this as well as LVS
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Thank you very much,
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
!I will definitely try to get a few chapters of Charming the Scottish Garden and LVS posted this autumn. I'm sorry for the wait. It's very good to know that people are still reading them and will be here to read the new chapters when I (finally!) get them written. (Life's not been conducive to writing in the last couple years, sadly.)I really appreciate the note! I will do my best to get a new chapter up very soon.
Response from uma (Reviewer)
Yes I have been keeping up with your stories. I especially liked RAM itself , although I should let you know or perhaps you do know. But I read on ff.net and I usually keep with the newest MMAD fiction, I recently came across one that had taken a parts of your story and added it to theirs, I commented saying I read it before to which the author promptly deleted my comment. Just thought you should know as even though I am no writer I felt bad about something like that. However I shall eagerly await your next update :)
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
Would you mind emailing me or messaging me through ffnet to let me know which story it is, if you remember the title? I would appreciate it. I'm very glad that you like RAM!
Response from uma (Reviewer)
i do not have an account on FF.net :/ sorry, i usually just go as a guest i already signed up on alot of new pages. And i could read the stories just as easily, But the Name of the Story is Even in Death by Albus P.W.BDumbledore1891. You take a good look at chapter 5
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
Thanks very much! :-) I appreciate the tip!
First a new chapter of LVS and then CSG- I am in heaven! As much as I want to see Siofre and Johannes admit their feelings for each other, I enjoyed the "push-pull" of this chapter. The way the talk of age differences turned to them, Siofre wanting to take his hand but not, sitting close on the bench- all of it a wonderful buildup. 5 stars!
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
I'm glad it made you happy and you're liking the "push-pull"!I'm hoping to update at least two chapters a month -- more if I can -- alternating amongst the WIPs I have going. I am resisting the sudden onslaught of plot bunnies that are begging me to write more RaMverse fics set during the immediate post-RaM time period, like CSG is.Thanks for the review! It's encouraging!
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
I'm glad it made you happy and you're liking the "push-pull"!I'm hoping to update at least two chapters a month -- more if I can -- alternating amongst the WIPs I have going. I am resisting the sudden onslaught of plot bunnies that are begging me to write more RaMverse fics set during the immediate post-RaM time period, like CSG is.Thanks for the review! It's encouraging!
Best birthday present, ever!!! An update for this and it's a very shippy Siofre/Johannes chapter. woooo hoooI think this line was absolutely brilliant:Siofre found herself smiling back, and her heart beating faster at the sight of him. Could she really give him up to another witch?NOPE, she can't give him up to another because her heart already belongs to him and he holds hers as well. I wasn't too fond of the ADMM discussion. Siofre unnerves me when she speaks of Minerva and Albus's relationship, especially in this context. I know Malcolm is her favorite but it almost felt like she wasn't thrilled with Albus marrying Minerva, even though it's what makes her happiest and clearly they adore one another. sigh. Oh well ... I'm still happy for Siofre and Joannes, awwww.
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
Hi! Glad to give you a good birthday prezzie! :-)What Siofre is not thrilled with is Albus not marrying Minerva. It's not that she has objections to their not being married, but she's afraid that Minerva wants marriage & Albus ain't askin' -- and she's right, at this point. But Minerva is being Stoic and sensible, and since she won't talk to Siofre about it, Siofre's not about to give her advice. She's also just plain worried that Minerva will end up having a broken heart or have some other sadness in her life because of the relationship. She loves Minerva and doesn't want to see her hurt -- she cares about Albus, but Minerva's her granddaughter, so she's Siofre's priority in her heart, not Albus, even if she doesn't feel it's her place to bring up her worries with Minerva.As you know from LVS, Siofre and Johannes will eventually be happy together -- Johannes's policy of being steadfast and patient pay off, and Siofre will never have any worries that he did not come to her freely, or that he might have been better off with someone else. But there's a bit of story between now & then, so I'd better say no more -- I'm afraid I'll leak spoilers! LOL!Thanks for the review!
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
Hi! Glad to give you a good birthday prezzie! :-)What Siofre is not thrilled with is Albus not marrying Minerva. It's not that she has objections to their not being married, but she's afraid that Minerva wants marriage & Albus ain't askin' -- and she's right, at this point. But Minerva is being Stoic and sensible, and since she won't talk to Siofre about it, Siofre's not about to give her advice. She's also just plain worried that Minerva will end up having a broken heart or have some other sadness in her life because of the relationship. She loves Minerva and doesn't want to see her hurt -- she cares about Albus, but Minerva's her granddaughter, so she's Siofre's priority in her heart, not Albus, even if she doesn't feel it's her place to bring up her worries with Minerva.As you know from LVS, Siofre and Johannes will eventually be happy together -- Johannes's policy of being steadfast and patient pay off, and Siofre will never have any worries that he did not come to her freely, or that he might have been better off with someone else. But there's a bit of story between now & then, so I'd better say no more -- I'm afraid I'll leak spoilers! LOL!Thanks for the review!
I didn't realize until just now how much I have truly missed this story. But I will be patient and constant. Also, yaaaaaaaaaaaaaay! CFP
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
Thank you! I'm glad you liked it. I've actually missed it, too.Thanks for ... um, I mean, CFR!
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
Thank you! I'm glad you liked it. I've actually missed it, too.Thanks for ... um, I mean, CFR!
YAY!!! I couldn't believe it when I got the message for the update, it's really here! A new chapter! :) Thank you! I loved it, the long wait was more than worth it because this chapter is just perfect. I always love when these two have their little moments, it's so cute. I loved getting to know a little more about Siofre's thoughts and feelings, I love that she's just as anxious and ready as Johannes is, I can't wait to see how they finally come together. I loved that he was firm about wanting to spend the afternoon with her and didn't let her get away with working alone. I can't wait for the next chapter, I hope it won't be too long a wait :)
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
Hi! I'm so glad you enjoyed it!Yes, Johannes is becoming gradually more assertive, but without being pushy or aggressive about it, and always with Siofre's good in his mind. I, too, hope it will not be too long a wait for another chapter of CSG! Thanks for letting me know you enjoyed the chapter!
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
Hi! I'm so glad you enjoyed it!Yes, Johannes is becoming gradually more assertive, but without being pushy or aggressive about it, and always with Siofre's good in his mind. I, too, hope it will not be too long a wait for another chapter of CSG! Thanks for letting me know you enjoyed the chapter!
I'm not quite sure if Lydia has three children or only one - Bertrand - are her others Conner and someone else? I got a bit confused when Soifre was explaining her children - seemed to me she miscarried a lot and that Bertrand was the only child - but then you said he was the youngest, so I got confused.
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
I need to reread the chapter & make sure that I haven't mis-typed something. If I have, I'll go in and make a correction! Thanks!Lydia has one child, Bertrand, and he has two children, Phoebe and Conner. Conner's married to Elisabeth and they have one boy, Liam (who grows up to be Eoghan's father).
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
I think the plethora of children, grandchildren, and other relatives may simply have overwhelmed the synapses. hee! In the previous chapter, Siofre does say that Bertrand was Lydia & Malcolm Tyree's only child, and then in this chapter, she speaks of Bertrand being married to Sally (Longbottom) and the two of them having Connor & Phoebe. Charles Prince is Bertrand's cousin (Charles's father was Bertrand Prince, Lydia's brother, for whom she named her son), and Charles is married to Sally's sister Louisa. (And this is why Severus is related to Eogan in two ways -- through the Princes & the Longbottoms. Bertrand's cousin and Sally's sister are Eileen Prince's grandparents, thus Severus's great-grandparents, and Bertrand and Sally themselves are Eoghan's great-grandparents.) Yeah, can get confusing!
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
I'll just take your word for it and go forward - it was confusing - whew! Thanks for explaining in simple terms - you know sometimes I need a map. *smirks*
*snip*“I may need to take additional measures,” Siofre said. “And the spells I cast will only be effective as long as they are in the house. From what I understand, he drinks, then comes home mean. On good nights, he passes out before he does more than shout and make a scene. The nosy neighbour turns a blind eye to the husband’s behaviour, though he surely must know of it. Any road, I did what I could to make sure that if he does come home drunk, he passes out straightaway upon crossing the threshold. If he tries to take a drink at home, he’ll become ill. Gwyneth claims that when he’s not drinking, he’s moody, but otherwise fine. Most of the spells I cast were aimed at his drinking—making the consequences miserable for him. I cast a few protective spells around Gwyneth, and I gave her an emergency Portkey, as well. If Cadoc becomes violent or frightens her in any way, she can Portkey to her brother and sister-in-law’s home.”“Why would she stay with such a brute?” Johannes asked.“She does love him, or the man she remembers marrying,” Siofre replied, “but she is expecting a baby. It was partly for her baby’s sake that I tried to persuade her to leave the man, but she . . . she has her reasons, I suppose.”“He hits her or hexes her and she is pregnant?” Johannes asked, even more appalled than he had been. “The man should be . . . he should be . . . I do not know a suitable punishment, but he does not deserve the family if he cannot treat them with the love and respect that he should. He should be their protector!”Siofre twitched a slight smile. “Perhaps a lecture in gentlemanly behaviour might do him some good . . . in a few weeks, after the man has ceased drinking. If we can manage that.” I hate to say it, but nothing fixes an abuser unless the abuser WANTS to be fixed - only THEY can truly heal themselves - all the abusee can do is leave - and the woman, in my opinion, is being foolish and selfish - and abusive to her unborn child. I can not STAND lazy, selfish women like this that would rather live in hell than do something better for their kids.
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
Okay, since we know that Lydia is Slytherin, and Johannes is Ravenclaw - I simply MUST know what our Siofre is, my guess, Ravenclaw or Gryffindor - or perhaps Slytherin.... but I'm putting my coin on Ravenclaw.
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
Yes, she's a Ravenclaw. :-)You're right about abusers. Siofre's trying to address some of the underlying causes of his drinking, hoping that that will help, as well as doing something about the drinking itself. We shall see what happens with that.Let's see . . . here's the passage from RaM ("A Spree") where Siofre and Johannes meet:Johannes laughed as the three witches all agreed that every wizard still had a little boy in him. Siofre looked up at the tall, sandy-haired wizard.“Don’t know you. You’re foreign, aren’t you?” The words were blunt, but her tone friendly.“I am from Germany, ma’am,” Johannes said in his friendly manner. “Johannes Birnbaum, at your service.”“Ah, the Herbology wizard. Ravenclaw Head of House, aren’t you? Heard good things about you. Siofre Tyree, Ravenclaw myself,” she said, holding out her hand, which Johannes took and bent over in a formal bow.As Johannes straightened, Minerva apologised. “I am sorry, Grandmother. I hadn’t realised that you two hadn’t met.”
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
Ah, I should have remembered this - well then, my coin was well placed - Ravenclaw indeed.
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
Indeed! You're a good 'claw spotter! ;-)
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Am I? Seems I've been spoiled with a few good ones in my life. *winks*
*snip*A few moments later, the two stepped out into the sunshine, and Johannes saw that they had arrived at a gabled cottage of three stories. Unlike the main house with its towers and turrets, this house was not all stone. It was a combination of half-timbering and uncut natural stone of different colours—quite unusual for Scotland, in Johannes’s experience—but very lovely on this woody hill. It seemed half-grown from the land and the surrounding woods.Ok that right there is freaking AWESOME!
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*snip*“Hmph. Still, it is not hers, and it is desolate.” She looked around her. “This is . . . isolated and private, but not set apart the way that island is. And that other, that is Dumbledore’s island. Do you know its name? Eilean Tèarmunn. It means ‘Refuge Island.’ A sanctuary from the wizarding world. Not even a Post Owl can get through to it. That is fine as far as it goes, but for Minerva, I would like her to have a place she could come that is hers if she needs it, and not just that island of Dumbledore’s. She can use the cottage or not, as she likes—and bring Dumbledore with her if she wishes.”Ahhhhh, NOW I am starting to understand the Tyree witches... forward thinking, ahead of their time, true Gaelic women of power - equal power - no woman should rely on a man - yes, now I am seeing the true Soifre. Besides all that, I'm glad she is looking out for Minerva - though I know Dumbledore wouldn't dream of hurting his love, but still, Minerva should have her own place.... and if Soifre has the space, and buildings, why not? Makes perfect sense. I wish I could live here! I'm insainly jealous!
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*snip*“You think Minerva might not want it? Even if she uses it seldom, it will be here for her. It can be a holiday cottage for now, if she likes, but she will want a family one day and a home to raise her children."*winces*
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The shell house is amazing, really amazing!
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
Hi,
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
! I'm glad you liked the cottage and the shell house. :-)Yes, typical of Tyree witches is that sense of independence, and Siofre has it in spades. She wants to help give Minerva opportunities and that home just of her own. As you say, she has the space, so why not?Yes, Siofre has no crystal ball to see into the future, and she does envision one with Minerva having children of her own. It's a wistful sort of moment for those of us who know what the future does hold for Minerva.
*snip*I hate maths. Maths makes me sleepy and I itch all over. I think I’m allergic,” Lydia said.Siofre barked a laugh. “And that is why I will do the calculations, as always. You’d think we didn’t do this every month.”“I do my very best to forget,” Lydia said pitifully.I can so relate to Lydia here... hate math... haaaaaaaate it.
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*snip*“I am keeping much rushes, though, here and along the edge opposite,” Johannes said, pointing. “They are good for the animals, for the fowl and fishes, to have them here.”He is absolutely correct - far too many people cut all the natural vegetation out of a pond and kill it, even putting up cement walls around it - turns the water into piss pea soup and basically kills it - thank you for keeping him realistic and knowledgable - a real herbologist! A naturalist!
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LOL! Yes, I'm allergic to math, too -- but sadly have had to work for many years in jobs that required me to sit there and "itch" while using it. Unfortunately, although I hate it, I'm still not abysmal at it. Although I suppose that's good . . . to a point!Glad you like Johannes and his care for the natural balance and all the living things, plant and animal. One of the things he enjoys is knowing how plants fit into an ecosystem, and what plants can do for various critters. He loves to encourage life, so he certainly wouldn't deaden a pond by cutting out all the vegetation and putting in concrete! I'm glad you appreciate this aspect of the story. :-)
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I've seen far too many gardeners that remind me of some Wal-Mart version of a garden - potted plants that attract NO insects and some concrete and plastic fountain sitting on asphalt - and these 'gardens' are so alien to the natural surroundings and support no life and take up so .... here I am ranting - sorry - anyway, glad to see Johannes is a REAL naturalist/gardener.I also love the explanation of the alarm charms or wards that they are going to put around the pond to keep the babies from drowning - very cool!
Okay - so - lets see, I loved seeing Gertie again, and had to roll my eyes too at Malcolm's silliness - she's a good sport, putting up with him I think - and as usual, I always get embarassed when folks at the table have kissed others at the table but aren't with those at the table - as you know, so I had even more respect for Gertie for sitting through all that as Mal and Katherine talked about his kissing - eh... what else ... Katherine was interesting and I'd like to have learned more about her role in Grindelwald's defeat - as well as her work with Dumbledore but I know that's a minor thing here.I liked how Johannes stumbles around with his English and makes silly errors - chip off the old brick and such - and I like how you've made his speach a bit odd, which it should be, since English isn't his first language.I admit, I'd like to know more about why Grindelwald was after him - recruiting him, but perhaps we'll learn more about that as the story progresses.But most importantly, I'd really curious about WHY Siofre has captured his attention - its a bit of a puzzle to me - I guess I just don't see much of her personality yet or something - besides that she's a very commanding witch - got that alpha personality - perhaps that's it? At any rate, I'm sure I'll learn more as the story progresses.And as always, enjoying your writing, but then again I'd never have started reading Scottish Garden if I wasn't already completely taken with your writing - so no surprises there!
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Yes, you'll eventually learn more about what happened to Johannes's family & why.It's partly the commanding personality, and partly just "chemistry" -- or maybe it's "magic," or magical resonance. Malcolm can be a trial, but usually in a funny way, so Gertrude actually enjoys it when he's "exasperating." haha!Glad you're enjoying it!
Oh dear, Malcolm is meddling already...
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haha! His heart's in the right place!
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Seems most of your characters, OC or Canon, are meddlesome! HAHA! I love EEET! For once it isn't Dumbledore meddling - thankfully - though I suppose right now he's too busy with Minerva to think about much else. *grins*
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
Yes, Dumbledore is busy between Minerva, Hogwarts, Minerva, the Ministry, Minerva . . . well, you get the idea!
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Mmmmhmmmm - might have to go back and read RaM just to see how busy he is!
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
This is a bit post-RaM, but you're right: if you reread the end of RaM, you'll get an idea of what may be still be keeping him busy these days!
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All good stuff if I remember correctly.
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
Oh, very good, indeed!
Morgan and Fiona had quads? What on earth? Magical fertility treatment or something? You simply MUST explain that!I am liking this, loving the timid flirtation from Johannes and the direct flirtation or demands of his time, from Siofre - pretty cute. I love romance in the RamVerse - I don't have to worry about rejection!
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Yes, indeed! And everyone suspects they used potions or a spell or something, but they claim not. Minerva calls them "the litter." (Gareth mentioned that tidbit about Minerva's humor to Severus back in LVS somewhere. Severus liked it. hee!)I'm glad you're enjoying the romance. Johannes is rather smitten, and Siofre isn't indifferent, either! Thanks!
A very nice introduction and very cute to see Johannes having an eye on Siofre - looking forward to more Dumbledore and McGonagall!
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Thanks! Glad you enjoyed it. Albus & Minerva will eventually make "personal appearances" in the fic, but not for a while yet -- although Minerva shows up by reference fairly frequently. And there's one of your favorite HP characters coming up soonish, too! :-)
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Ooooh - Gertie???
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
Ah, she's a RaMverse character, but yes, she does, indeed, show up! And relatively soon, actually -- sooner than the canon HP character I was thinking of. In fact, there are two canon characters appearing together in that chapter who I'm pretty sure are among your faves. :-)
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Ooooh! I'm so excited!!!!!
I was very happy to see an update to this story! And what a fun chapter it was. Apparently Minerva isn't the only one who doubts Malcolm's stories. Poor Malcolm. I think Malcolm was holding back in the fight or he would have taken all of the other wizards out easily:). BTW-go Johannes! Loved the spell with the wood. I think he should have left Cam up on the wall. I imagine these lads are in trouble if Gertrude and/ Siofre hear about it. Thanks for a fun read.
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Hi! Glad you enjoyed it! Yes, Malcolm could have easily taken them, but it wasn't until it got "serious" that he went ahead and took 'em out. Yes, Johannes might not be much with the traditional defensive spells, hexes, jinxes, and the like, but he's got some imagination and skill with wood, so he didn't do too badly!Thanks!
Well, that certainly wasn't how I was expecting the evening to end. Action packed for sure!!I loved the details you put in about the African dragons. It amazes me how you always come up with new and interesting ideas to add to the RaM universe.I can't believe how quickly the little bar conversation turned ugly. Cam certainly was a nasty bugger and I'm glad Johannes was the one to pin him to the wall. Poor Aberforth, though. I pity him having to clean up all that mess. hahaWonder what Siofre would think if she heard about all that drama??? lol
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I do wonder what Siofre would think, too! Johannes and Malcolm don't want to find out, that's for sure! Somehow, I can imagine that that story might make its way to her ears, whether the "lads" want it to or not! Yes, Cam was just ready for a confrontation there, wasn't he? And pretty nasty in his comments and innuendos, too. Glad you liked Johannes's trick with the wood. He might not be much at fighting, but he is a clever wizard, nonetheless -- and experienced with wood, as well. Glad you liked the African dragons. I've been looking for an opportunity to stick those into a chapter with Malcolm since I wrote his "application letter" to Dumbledore back in RaM, so it was really fun to finally give them a bit of space and hear a small portion of the story of Malcolm's first dragon ride. Thanks very much for the review!
OMG!! an update!! I was so happy when I saw the email in my inbox! Thanks!I loved this chapter, Malcolm is always so much fun, poor Johannes I don't think he likes the kind of fun Malcolm brings lol. This was a very nice chapter, so funny! I can't wait to read more Siofre and Johannes, they are getting closer by the chapter! LOL.thank you for updatingSam
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter! You're right: Johannes doesn't have the same idea of "fun" that Malcolm does!Thanks for the review! (I was glad to finally be able to write & update! )
I had been holding off reading this chapter and "saving it" since you had mentioned your muse had left you, but tonight I caved in and I'm so glad I did. Johannes' vision of Siofre and his confession to Lydia was breath-taking. How apropos that the jerk that used and left Lydia was a Lockhart. She did much better with her Murdoch. It was a little jarring to read the name Severus back in this time period. I hope you find your muse again. I really miss the updates. Take care.
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I am currently struggling with writing a gift exchange fic that's finally beginning to sort of come together. I hope that once I have that written, maybe my muse will come back for the other stories. I miss them, too.I am glad that you enjoyed the chapter! Your review brought the characters back into my mind, and Lydia's story, so maybe that will help grease the wheels of the fanfic section of my brain! I figured that a Lockhart would be very good at cutting and running when the going got tough even back then. I thought it might be an interesting reminder of Severus' pureblooded side of the family, too, to have mention of the Prince relative he was named after, as well as the Princes' earlier tangles with the Tyree clan. We will also hear more about Eileen and her father in an upcoming chapter -- hmm, do I hear my muse tiptoeing about? LOL!Anyway, thank you very much for your review. I'm glad you enjoyed it -- and sorry that you haven't got another one to look forward to immediately, but I haven't vanished, and I do hope to continue with both this and LVS very soon. :-)
I'm really enjoying your story. Thank you for sharing your talent :)
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Hi,
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
! Thank you for your note! I appreciate it, and I'm really glad you're enjoying the story.
Ooo lovely chapter. I like the way you are building the sexual tension and bonds between them. Fascinating ritual; I'm curious about the artifact. I'm assuming/hoping it has greater meaning than is usual.
I see Malcolm is in the next chapter - thank you!
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Thanks,
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!The next chapter has a bit more about the artifact -- and Siofre's curious about it, as well.I'm glad you're looking forward to seeing Malcolm again. I hope you enjoy it. He'll be popping in and staying for a couple chapters. :-)Thanks for the review!
LOL God Malcolm is amazing! lol, that tale and the show lol, he's great! I'm so glad he's back and I love it that Siofre calls Gertrude his witch! that's so sweet.
Now the most important part, OMG!! that was sooooo romantic, Johannes is very very romantic, his words to Siofre, the kiss, the pledge! oooohhhh I'm soooo happy right now!!! and Siofre! her reaction was amazing, I'm so pleased! lol. I loved it that she went from Magister to Honnie in less than a minute, she's giving in!
I really think his own private pledge to her has alot to do with the shape, color and markings of the artifact, I can't wait to find out! I'm so excited! Can't wait for the next chapter. GREAT, WONDERFUL writing!
Sam
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
Thank you! I enjoy writing Malcolm -- he seems to write himself -- and it's really fun to be able to step back into that period.I'm glad you enjoyed the romantic bits, as well. They are growing ever closer.Thank you very much for reviewing!
Fun chapter, indeedy!!!The conversation with Siofre and Bridie and then the one with her and Johannes warmed my heart fully. His declarations to her about his pledges, both verbal and in his heart, were very sweet. I'm sure she must know by now that he is truly enamoured with her. However, I can still see her giving him the time and space to come to her fully.LOVE, LOVE, LOVE MALCOLM!! He has me grinning from ear to ear with his tales to the wizard and his retelling of his meeting with him. He's such a hoot. And I'd have to agree with Siofre that his witch caught him well. haha.
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I'm glad you enjoyed both the romance and the humor in this chapter. I think that Siofre is very aware now of his increasingly strong feelings for her. We'll see where that knowledge might lead.I'm glad that you found Malcolm and his tales a hoot. He's fun -- he practically writes himself.Thanks for the review!
Such an awesome chapter! I looooove it!!! The ceremony performed by Siofre was very special and I'm glad they didn't need any witnesses. I think some of the "magic" of the moment would have been lost if others had been around. And the artifact sounds very intriguing. I do hope we'll learn more about that as the story progresses. We are one step closer to having Siofre and Johannes together. SWEEEEET!!!!!Thanks for the update!
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You're welcome! I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter! They are, indeed, closer now!
thank you, thank you, thank you!! I loved loved this chapter, it's very sweet and so interesting to learn all of this about Siofre and Tyree Clan. It was very funny that he was unsure about her wanting to adopt him lol, and I can't wait to find out what does the artifact mean, I'm sure it has to do something with their bond, I hope so at least!. I'm sooo glad Malcolm is going to be in the next chapter, I miss him! lol. Can't wait to read more, thanks!Sam
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Yeah, he sure didn't want her thinking of him as her son! LOL! And she was glad that he was happy that he'd be closer to her than to any others in the clan. (Yay -- my javascript emoticons are working again! LOL!)It's been fun writing Malcolm in this coming chapter, so I hope you'll enjoy it.Thanks for the review!