Chapter Eight: Our Siofre
Chapter 8 of 32
MMADfanJohannes contemplates Siofre as he works, then later, we get a glimpse of Siofre's day. Lydia provides encouragement and some practical help.
Chapter features Lydia, Johannes, and Siofre.
Chapter Eight: Our Siofre
Lydia offered Johannes another sandwich, which he accepted. The two were having lunch in the morning room since it was just the two of them that day.
"So, it seems you and Siofre had a good time yesterday," Lydia remarked.
"We did. It was a most charming afternoon," Johannes replied, adding some mustard to his sandwich.
"I'll have to go take a look at the cottage soon. It's been years since I've been down there, I must confess. I just trust that the house-elves are keeping it up properly."
"It appeared so."
"And you two have plans, I understand?"
"I did agree to assist Ma, Siofre, with the redecoration," Johannes said, "but when she showed it to me, she said that she would value your assistance. She praised your decorating abilities highly."
"Did she?" Lydia smiled brightly. "She doesn't often say much about anything I've done around the house. But that wasn't what I meant...and I do think it's a brilliant idea to have you help, too...I meant that she said something about being gone with you on Saturday afternoon."
"Ah, yes. I did suggest . . . that I might reciprocate. Tea." Johannes hoped that Lydia was not feeling left out. "As a gesture, because she gave me tea yesterday." That sounded disingenuous, since he had often had tea with one or the other or both witches in the afternoon.
"That is wonderful. I don't think our Siofre gets out enough. Well, she gets out, and she probably sees many more people than I do, really, but she doesn't go out and just have fun very often. She claims those jaunts with Malcolm are fun, but really, it's just not the same, is it?"
"No, I suppose that it isn't."
"And even if they have their tea after, or lunch, it's not being taken out," Lydia continued.
Johannes didn't know what to say. He wondered whether he should invite Lydia to join them. He had been looking forward to bringing Siofre out, just the two of them.
"It's good for Siofre to have an outing with a gentleman."
Johannes blushed. "If you would like to join us..."
"Oh, heavens, no!" Lydia exclaimed. "That's completely out of the question. No, no, no! You must take Siofre out and see that she enjoys herself."
"Ah, well, perhaps another time," Johannes said, although he was relieved that Lydia had declined his offer; her vehemence, however, was a bit overwhelming.
"Have you decided where you will have your tea?"
"I am not sure . . ." He had already considered Madam Puddifoot's in Hogsmeade, but he felt unaccountably uncomfortable with that idea. He doubted that it was a Hogsmeade weekend, since the Easter holiday had only just ended and there usually wasn't another Hogsmeade weekend right after a holiday, but Hogsmeade was small and people gossiped. Not that there was anything to gossip about. But people could make up tales out of whole cloth.
"There are a couple places where she enjoys going . . ." Lydia thought for a moment. "Do you know that little tearoom in the Clypeum, the one just next to the bookshop?"
Johannes shook his head. "I do not know Glasgow at all. I have never been to the Clypeum."
"Pity, it's a nice little teahouse, and Siofre always enjoys their scones and cakes. It's called the Primrose Room."
Primroses were Siofre's favourite flower, Johannes remembered. He disliked having to ask Siofre for a Side-Along to the Clypeum to bring her to tea, however. Perhaps he might Floo to somewhere in the Clypeum and reconnoitre before their date...their afternoon tea. On the other hand, he could bring her to the Cailleachan Café in Edinburgh. Which was just steps from her grandson Murdoch's apothecary. He frowned.
"You know, if you like," Lydia said, "we could pop over there this afternoon and you could see whether it's suitable. Just pop over and pop back so you know how to get there. Or tomorrow morning. If you like. I know you have work this afternoon, but it would only take a few minutes."
"Perhaps sometime," Johannes said. "I think we can go to the Cailleachan Café on Saturday. I've often been to McTavish Street."
It was Lydia's turn to frown. "Their tea is fine, and their coffee is quite good, but . . . well, I suppose it is up to you."
"Does Siofre not like the café?" Johannes asked.
"It would be fine, no doubt."
Johannes thought a moment. "If we can leave immediately after lunch, I could see this tearoom and compare it. I really only know the café and Madam Puddifoot's...other than establishments in Diagon Alley, and I have the impression that Siofre does not like Diagon Alley very well."
"Eat up, then," Lydia said, "and we can take a quick trip and you can see if you like the tearoom."
A half hour later, Johannes was back working in the gardens, wearing a wide-brimmed straw hat with his work clothes. Fandenz and Gweller were both helping him that day, and Mynok had popped out for a few minutes to inspect the work of the younger elves and ask Johannes, whom he called "Master Professor," whether their service was adequate. Johannes had reassured the old tufty-eared house-elf that their work was exemplary, far better than adequate, and Mynok had Disapparated again, beaming with pride.
Johannes could hardly keep himself from beaming, either. The Primrose Room had been perfect. It was simple, elegant, and charming, and sunlight streamed in through the large front windows. The Cailleachan Café was atmospheric, but the café was very narrow and deep, and it tended to be dark, even in the afternoon. It could be romantic, but there was something cheerful and pleasant about the tearoom. The smell of scones had been tempting even though Johannes had just eaten lunch. Glad that he had slipped on a robe over his work trousers and jacket, Johannes had even inquired whether reservations were possible. The witch had hesitated a moment, then said that they did not usually reserve tables, but she could hold a table for them if they were prompt.
Setting a spade to turning the earth in the centre of the area he was working that afternoon, Johannes cast his attention on the spare outdoor furniture and the conveniently placed large rocks and boulders that ringed the lawn. He had promised Siofre that the area would be ready in time for the May Day eve bonfire and for the family picnic the first weekend in May. He didn't want to change the basic character of the spot, since the bonfire had been traditionally held there for years, but he did think that cleaning it up, rearranging things, and perhaps adding a few new pieces of furniture, could spruce it up. Since they always had music and singing...Morgan played the fiddle, Malcolm played the recorder and penny whistle, and there was always a Tyree or two with pipes...Johannes thought that having a slightly raised wooden platform for the musicians would be nice, as well. Before the next bonfire, he might make additional improvements, but May Day was in just two weeks, and for the time being, this would do.
Although his training had included a little about garden planning and garden architecture, that had not been its emphasis. There were few Herbologists who specialised in gardening per se, and some even looked down upon it as something one hired others to do, but Johannes enjoyed it, and although his greatest enjoyment came from the more magic-intensive tasks, such as creating microclimates, he also found satisfaction in deciding the layout of the gardens, what to plant and where to plant it. He had used the existing grounds layout as a base and had consulted the original garden plans...the large formal garden would be very much like one that had been designed in the mid-eighteenth century...but he had added many ideas of his own. He was looking forward to the new greenhouse, but that would not be erected until at least July, and he had not yet found a builder for it.
Johannes called Gweller and told him to finish preparing the area for the actual bonfire and to line the pit with stone, then he left for the artist's cottage that Siofre planned to give to Minerva. No time like the present to begin clearing out weeds and determining what to plant and how the soil might need to be treated. He thought that once he had a plan of action, perhaps Multry might find time to work on the weeding and basic preparation. She could bring Duster and Kilbeena with her, and they would have fun helping her with the work, he was sure. The two wee elves had spent time helping him in the gardens a few afternoons each week, and they had proved more useful than Johannes had anticipated, and it amused him to watch them as they worked, occasionally using house-elf magic with varying degrees of success.
He had learned that the nonsense they talked when they whispered and giggled together wasn't nonsense at all, but a house-elf language, for which Multry had scolded them when she caught them speaking it in the gardens with him there. Siofre explained that there was a house-elf taboo on speaking their language in front of humans...or in the presence of any other sentient beings who weren't house-elves. Until they were five or six years old, house-elf children often still spoke it together regardless of who they were with, and the taboo wasn't strictly enforced until they were eight, at which time house-elf children were viewed to be old enough to carry more of the responsibilities of an adult house-elf, including following the house-elf imposed taboos. By the time they were fourteen, they were considered old enough to serve as a fully adult house-elf, though Siofre explained that although the young elves were given many of the responsibilities of an adult, house-elves considered adulthood to begin at the age of twenty-two, and in a well-run household where the house-elves did not have other codes imposed upon them by their wizarding families, mating only occurred after passing that milestone...provided that a suitable mate was available.
Johannes Apparated to the cottage, but spent only a little time clearing away dead plants, fallen limbs, and weeds. As he worked, though, he envisioned what he could do with the area around the house that would be both attractive and productive, and yet also not require Minerva's on-going attention. He was sure that Siofre would spare an elf once a week or so to come down and do any maintenance that was needed, but he wanted to make the upkeep minimal.
Since he had brought no Charmed garden implements with him, Johannes used his wand to prune back the scraggly looking primrose bushes, then he cast a spell and incinerated the trimmings. He took his handkerchief from his pocket, waved his wand to create a small bag, and collected a soil sample to bring with him and test later. Finally, he selected a primrose that was healthiest and trimmed off a shoot. Although there were some fine primrose bushes in a few of the gardens nearer the house, Johannes felt a curious affection for these old primroses. He doubted that Siofre was speaking of these primrose bushes specifically when she said that the Scottish primrose was her favourite flower, but nonetheless, for what he had in mind, he wanted at least one cutting from these plants. He could transplant or start new plants from other clippings from the main gardens, but there would be one plant sprung from this garden.
Before he left, Johannes strolled around just outside the garden area, examining the surrounding trees, including the apple orchard. He found an old, neglected coppice, and made a mental note to ask Siofre how she wanted it treated. It was an overgrown mess, and he doubted that any of it had been cut in several decades. He wondered whether Siofre's uncle had used some of the coppiced wood to make charcoal for his kiln, or whether he had used the wood for some other purpose...perhaps for making some kind of bent-wood sculptures, or even for furniture or fencing. Siofre might remember.
Johannes smiled as he prepared to Disapparate for the main house. In two days, he would be taking Siofre to tea in the Clypeum. It was good to be making friends with the two witches...some clients whom he might have had could have been far less pleasant and amusing. Lydia was certainly amusing. And Siofre . . . there was something about her that made his heart beat faster, his skin tingle where she touched him, and his mind and heart and eye and ear all pause to capture her, to savour her. It seemed that his thoughts were constantly turning to her, and now, as he held his wand and Disapparated, her name was in his mind, on the tip of his tongue, the whisper of Siofre a breeze through his being.
He almost laughed as he opened his eyes and found himself gazing at the witch herself, coming up the walk toward the front doors. She smiled up at him as she approached.
"You had a good day, Professor?"
"I did, indeed, Madam Tyree," Johannes replied with a bow. "And you?"
"It was . . . eventful," Siofre said.
"Eventful? It sounds as though there is a story behind those words." He offered her his arm.
"Aye, there is. And perhaps you shall hear it," Siofre said, placing her hand on his wrist, her fingers grazing the back of his hand. "You are joining us for dinner this evening?"
As he attempted to respond, Johannes's breath caught at the sensation of her magic tingling from her fingertips. "Ah, ah, ja, ah, I eat dinner with you this evening." He tried to control the shudder in his breath.
"Good. I hope you will also join us in the sitting room later. Lydia enjoys your company, and she appreciates having a larger audience when she decides to play the piano after dinner."
"Lydia is accomplished," Johannes replied, opening the front door for them.
"She is," Siofre agreed with a nod. "You will join us?"
"I will . . . if you like." Johannes placed his free hand on Siofre's and caught her eyes with his own.
"It is not only Lydia who enjoys your company," Siofre said briskly, dropping her hand. "I will go see what Multry is planning for dinner. I'll see you later."
Johannes nodded, his nod becoming a slight bow. "Until then, Madam Tyree."
Siofre disappeared down the hall in the direction of the kitchen, and Johannes stepped up the stairs to his rooms. He entered his sitting room first. He had created a miniature greenhouse on a long table by one of the windows, and he took out his sprig of primrose and, after placing it in specially Charmed water, he put it in the glass enclosure. The small bag of soil he placed on the table next to the greenhouse. He could analyse it later that evening.
His rooms were spectacular, richly appointed and beautifully decorated. Even his rooms at Hogwarts had not been so beautiful. The fireplace was large, and the rich wood surround was intricately carved by some master artisan long ago. The heavy velvet draperies were a rich green with gold fringe and matching gold-tasselled tie-back sashes. The furniture was chiefly upholstered in similar hues, and the carpets' designs picked up the colours of the furniture and draperies. The walls, though, had hand-painted scenes depicting life in the Highlands. Above the large fireplace was a massive landscape with wall sconces on either side of its gold frame, three Everlasting Smoke-free Charmed Candles in each sconce. His bedroom was no simpler than the sitting room, and had Johannes been a hedonist, he would have been well-pleased with it; as it was, he was satisfied, and even felt somewhat spoiled by the lavish surroundings. It was quite a contrast with his simple but cozy flat in Hogsmeade.
Johannes went through his bedroom to his dressing room...he'd never had such a thing before and felt it was completely superfluous, but the house-elves had hung his robes in one of the wardrobes in the dressing room, and so he used it. Since it had a marble sink with a well-lit mirror, it was a convenient place to shave, though he also had his own separate bath and toilet. He doubted that royalty could be treated any better than he was there at the Tyree estate. He certainly was wanting for nothing and had more than he needed.
He disrobed, putting his clothes in the hamper provided, then he washed quickly, brushed his hair, and shaved, using just a bit of a sandlewood aftershave potion. Though he usually just wore his work clothes to lunch, he had taken to changing for dinner, at least cleaning up his trousers and putting on a fresh shirt and a different over-robe. That evening, Johannes selected his deep azure blue robes and his well-polished black boots. He examined himself in the mirror once more, then he took a blue ribbon, charmed it to be the same blue as his robes, and he tied his hair back using a slip knot. He felt tidier, but he still took just a smidgen of a hair potion and lightly smoothed back his hair at the sides. He shrugged at himself in the mirror, seeing no real difference in his appearance, and chuckled at his sudden attack of vanity. But then he recalled the sensation of Siofre's fingertips grazing his wrist, and he shivered involuntarily at the mere memory of her touch.
Johannes pushed the memory aside...and any connection it might have with his careful attention to his appearance...and returned to his sitting room to read until the dinner bell rang.
"You said that today was 'eventful,' Siofre," Johannes remarked as he set his soupspoon down.
"Aye." Siofre nodded and took another sip of her soup.
"Weren't you at the Terwilligers' today?" Lydia asked, pushing her soup plate away slightly. At Siofre's nod, she said, "I thought you said that it was going to be a simple spell-casting job. Lengthy but straightforward, you said."
Siofre finished her soup and rang the small bell by her place. The soup plates vanished and a moment later, their dinner plates appeared in front of them, followed by bowls and platters of food.
"'Twas supposed to be simple and straightforward, but Gwyneth has a fool of a neighbour. Bad enough the husband she has, but her neighbours are all fools, from the evidence I saw today." She offered the platter of fish to Johannes, who indicated that she should help herself first. She took a large piece, then passed the platter to him. He served Lydia, then took the last piece for himself as Lydia took the vegetables and passed them on to Siofre before helping herself to the potatoes.
"Don't keep us in suspense, Siofre," Lydia said. "Why are her neighbours fools?"
"Well, p'raps not all of them," Siofre said grudgingly, "but one wizard certainly is. Decided he wanted to know why I was there, but instead of coming up to the front door and knocking...we'd have sent him away with a flea in his ear if he had, of course...he decided to spy through the windows. Fool of a man." Siofre shook her head in disgust. "He didn't understand what he was seeing, and alerted the Ministry. The MLE was swarming all over the place, convinced we were performing some kind of Dark Magic. I should have been home by mid-afternoon, but they held everything up. They didn't appreciate that I wouldn't tell them precisely what I was doing and why, but they did finally leave, since they could find no evidence of Dark Magic, other than a pinprick on Gwyneth's finger, which could have been from anything. Fools everywhere."
"Were the spells effective?" Lydia asked.
Siofre twitched one shoulder. "I think they will be. But I will pop over tomorrow and see her, then again on Monday. The last thing I did before I left was owl Egeria to come and Heal her jaw. Gwyneth had tried to do it herself, but you could tell she hadn't completely healed it, and that was with a Glamour over it."
"He broke her jaw?" Lydia asked, eyes wide.
"Gwyneth said she 'fell.'" Siofre snorted. "As if a simple fall could break a witch's jaw! Believe me, even before today, I'd wanted her to leave Cadoc and report him to the Cornish regional gamot or to the MLE, but she wouldn't. She blames everything but her husband. She wouldn't even let me lay any spells directly on him. She remembers a different man, the one she married, and she wants that man back. We'll see how that goes . . ."
"You don't sound hopeful," Lydia said.
"I may need to take additional measures," Siofre said. "And the spells I cast will only be effective as long as they are in the house. From what I understand, he drinks, then comes home mean. On good nights, he passes out before he does more than shout and make a scene. The nosy neighbour turns a blind eye to the husband's behaviour, though he surely must know of it. Any road, I did what I could to make sure that if he does come home drunk, he passes out straightaway upon crossing the threshold. If he tries to take a drink at home, he'll become ill. Gwyneth claims that when he's not drinking, he's moody, but otherwise fine. Most of the spells I cast were aimed at his drinking...making the consequences miserable for him. I cast a few protective spells around Gwyneth, and I gave her an emergency Portkey, as well. If Cadoc becomes violent or frightens her in any way, she can Portkey to her brother and sister-in-law's home."
"Why would she stay with such a brute?" Johannes asked.
"She does love him, or the man she remembers marrying," Siofre replied, "but she is expecting a baby. It was partly for her baby's sake that I tried to persuade her to leave the man, but she . . . she has her reasons, I suppose."
"He hits her or hexes her and she is pregnant?" Johannes asked, even more appalled than he had been. "The man should be . . . he should be . . . I do not know a suitable punishment, but he does not deserve the family if he cannot treat them with the love and respect that he should. He should be their protector!"
Siofre twitched a slight smile. "Perhaps a lecture in gentlemanly behaviour might do him some good . . . in a few weeks, after the man has ceased drinking. If we can manage that."
"If you cannot?" Johannes asked.
"Then I will take other measures, if I canna' convince Gwyneth to leave him and go to her older brother. I believe that the Bowens would take her in. Dylan has a strong sense of family, and Violet seems a good witch. But if Gwyneth would not go to them, then . . . I may cast a few spells to directly effect Cadoc, whether Gwyneth would have it or no."
"Would that be . . . legal? Those spells?" Johannes asked.
Lydia laughed, and Siofre's eyebrow rose in amusement as she gave a narrow, crooked smile.
"I would not want to see you in trouble," Johannes said. "This man is bad, but I do not want to see you have trouble, neither from the Ministry nor from him."
"Don't worry about legality," Lydia said, reaching over and patting Johannes's hand. "Our Siofre will be just fine."
"And from that wizard? If he learns of it? If he hears that she was there today and guesses something? He could try to . . . to venge himself."
Lydia laughed again. "Then in that case, I do pity the man!"
Johannes cocked his head. He remembered well what he had learned from Minerva about Tyree witches and their reputation, but then he looked at Siofre, petite and slight of build...though not slight of magic...and he couldn't help but worry about her. Nonetheless, he did recognise that she could take care of herself, and take very good care of others, as well. It would be unwise to seem to suggest otherwise.
"I hope that you can help Mrs Terwilliger," Johannes said.
"Siofre will," Lydia said confidently.
"I hope to," Siofre said more moderately. "I usually find some way of achieving my aim . . . but not always."
"When was the last time you failed?" Lydia asked, apparently rhetorically, but Siofre looked at her seriously.
"You remember young Simon Hapsby-Fuller," Siofre replied. "I would say that I failed him."
"Yes, but he's out of Azkaban now, and from the letter you received from him last month, he has a very good life in Toronto now, a fiancée, a good job," Lydia said. "And if it hadn't been for you and your advocacy, I'm sure his Azkaban sentence would have been much longer than it was."
"Azkaban?" Johannes wondered what kinds of people Siofre commonly consorted with. He had a vague memory of a Hapsby-Fuller who had been a student the first couple years he taught at Hogwarts, but he had not taken NEWTs level Herbology and so Johannes hadn't come to know him.
"He very nearly killed his uncle," Lydia said. "But for good reason..."
"This is not talk for the dinner table," Siofre said softly.
"You're right, of course," Lydia agreed. "But Simon is happy now and doing well, and that's important to remember."
Johannes, despite his innate curiosity, was happy to leave the subject behind, particularly if it was one that made Siofre uncomfortable.
Their dessert arrived, and conversation turned to the imminent arrival of Morgan, Fiona, and the quads in just a few days. The house itself was ready, and Johannes had done much to start the kitchen gardens for Fiona, and he'd overseen the house-elves in trimming back the bushes and planting some annual flowers near the front door. Lydia had taken charge of renewing the paths and drive between the main house and the lodge. All that really remained was for the McGonagalls and their furniture to move in.
They rose from the table and started out of the dining room together.
"How would you feel about some nice, melodic Brahms this evening, Siofre? Or perhaps a little Liszt?" Lydia asked, putting her arm through her sister-in-law's. She gave her arm a squeeze. "After the day you've had, I think that might be just the ticket for you. A little romantic music and a nice novel, you'll forget all the worries of the day."
"I have work I was going to fetch from my study," Siofre said. "The income and expenses. There's the plumbing coming up..."
"No, no, not tonight," Lydia said firmly. "Read something light tonight." She looked up at Johannes and reached out with her free hand to take one of his. "You'll persuade our Siofre, won't you, dear? And no work for you, either! You're a pair, you two are! Working dawn to dusk isn't enough for you, you want to work half the night, too...well, not tonight! Tonight, you relax."
Johannes smiled and Siofre let out a good-natured groan of capitulation.
"Now, I'm going to go sort out the sheet music. You two run along and find something light to read...or not to read...whilst I play." Lydia stepped out in front of them and brought their hands together briefly before letting them go. "I'll expect to see you both in a few minutes, then!"
She bustled off through the sitting room to the music room, and Siofre looked up at Johannes with a wry grin. "I believe we have been given our orders, Professor."
"Indeed, just so, Madam Tyree," Johannes said. He touched her hand tentatively, letting his fingers just rest on the back of her hand. "Shall we fetch something to read?"
Siofre nodded. "There is a new book on the myths and history of the warrior witches of Skye that I bought three months ago and haven't started yet. It's by my bed, waiting for me to find the time for it."
"In my sitting room, I have a book I was reading before dinner. It is not light reading, as it is a new Herbology text on Dendromancy, but it is in German, so perhaps Lydia will not notice."
"Aye, she will notice," Siofre said, removing her hand from his, but placing it on his elbow and leading him toward the stairs. "She often reads novels and such in German. French and Italian, too. Lydia is quite clever in her way. Never underestimate a Slytherin, I say."
"Ah. Then I will find something different. I would not wish to disappoint her," Johannes said with a smile.
At the top of the stairs, they paused, and Siofre said, "I will meet you downstairs in a few minutes."
Johannes nodded, still smiling. He took her hand between his. "Light reading and melodic music, as Lydia promised us, 'aye,' Madam Tyree?"
"Aye, Professor, light reading and . . . romantic music." Siofre gave him a crooked grin, then turned quickly and walked away down the hall.
Author's Note: I posted a new one-shot, "It's not the heat," to the "Cheering Charms" set of drabbles and flashfics. I was suffering in a heat wave when I wrote it. Temps in the low 90s are very welcome "cool" weather at the moment, it was so hot and humid.
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Dear MMADfan, I love this story! Do you plan to write more chapters in the future? I would love to see it finished.
I really hope you update soon, you write such wonderful fanfiction and I find myself rereading some of the old ones hopefully your next update will be near in the future for this as well as LVS
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Thank you! I do hope to update both stories soon!
I really hope you update soon, you write such wonderful fanfiction and I find myself rereading some of the old ones hopefully your next update will be near in the future for this as well as LVS
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!I will definitely try to get a few chapters of Charming the Scottish Garden and LVS posted this autumn. I'm sorry for the wait. It's very good to know that people are still reading them and will be here to read the new chapters when I (finally!) get them written. (Life's not been conducive to writing in the last couple years, sadly.)I really appreciate the note! I will do my best to get a new chapter up very soon.
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Yes I have been keeping up with your stories. I especially liked RAM itself , although I should let you know or perhaps you do know. But I read on ff.net and I usually keep with the newest MMAD fiction, I recently came across one that had taken a parts of your story and added it to theirs, I commented saying I read it before to which the author promptly deleted my comment. Just thought you should know as even though I am no writer I felt bad about something like that. However I shall eagerly await your next update :)
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Would you mind emailing me or messaging me through ffnet to let me know which story it is, if you remember the title? I would appreciate it. I'm very glad that you like RAM!
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i do not have an account on FF.net :/ sorry, i usually just go as a guest i already signed up on alot of new pages. And i could read the stories just as easily, But the Name of the Story is Even in Death by Albus P.W.BDumbledore1891. You take a good look at chapter 5
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Thanks very much! :-) I appreciate the tip!
First a new chapter of LVS and then CSG- I am in heaven! As much as I want to see Siofre and Johannes admit their feelings for each other, I enjoyed the "push-pull" of this chapter. The way the talk of age differences turned to them, Siofre wanting to take his hand but not, sitting close on the bench- all of it a wonderful buildup. 5 stars!
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I'm glad it made you happy and you're liking the "push-pull"!I'm hoping to update at least two chapters a month -- more if I can -- alternating amongst the WIPs I have going. I am resisting the sudden onslaught of plot bunnies that are begging me to write more RaMverse fics set during the immediate post-RaM time period, like CSG is.Thanks for the review! It's encouraging!
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
I'm glad it made you happy and you're liking the "push-pull"!I'm hoping to update at least two chapters a month -- more if I can -- alternating amongst the WIPs I have going. I am resisting the sudden onslaught of plot bunnies that are begging me to write more RaMverse fics set during the immediate post-RaM time period, like CSG is.Thanks for the review! It's encouraging!
Best birthday present, ever!!! An update for this and it's a very shippy Siofre/Johannes chapter. woooo hoooI think this line was absolutely brilliant:Siofre found herself smiling back, and her heart beating faster at the sight of him. Could she really give him up to another witch?NOPE, she can't give him up to another because her heart already belongs to him and he holds hers as well. I wasn't too fond of the ADMM discussion. Siofre unnerves me when she speaks of Minerva and Albus's relationship, especially in this context. I know Malcolm is her favorite but it almost felt like she wasn't thrilled with Albus marrying Minerva, even though it's what makes her happiest and clearly they adore one another. sigh. Oh well ... I'm still happy for Siofre and Joannes, awwww.
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Hi! Glad to give you a good birthday prezzie! :-)What Siofre is not thrilled with is Albus not marrying Minerva. It's not that she has objections to their not being married, but she's afraid that Minerva wants marriage & Albus ain't askin' -- and she's right, at this point. But Minerva is being Stoic and sensible, and since she won't talk to Siofre about it, Siofre's not about to give her advice. She's also just plain worried that Minerva will end up having a broken heart or have some other sadness in her life because of the relationship. She loves Minerva and doesn't want to see her hurt -- she cares about Albus, but Minerva's her granddaughter, so she's Siofre's priority in her heart, not Albus, even if she doesn't feel it's her place to bring up her worries with Minerva.As you know from LVS, Siofre and Johannes will eventually be happy together -- Johannes's policy of being steadfast and patient pay off, and Siofre will never have any worries that he did not come to her freely, or that he might have been better off with someone else. But there's a bit of story between now & then, so I'd better say no more -- I'm afraid I'll leak spoilers! LOL!Thanks for the review!
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
Hi! Glad to give you a good birthday prezzie! :-)What Siofre is not thrilled with is Albus not marrying Minerva. It's not that she has objections to their not being married, but she's afraid that Minerva wants marriage & Albus ain't askin' -- and she's right, at this point. But Minerva is being Stoic and sensible, and since she won't talk to Siofre about it, Siofre's not about to give her advice. She's also just plain worried that Minerva will end up having a broken heart or have some other sadness in her life because of the relationship. She loves Minerva and doesn't want to see her hurt -- she cares about Albus, but Minerva's her granddaughter, so she's Siofre's priority in her heart, not Albus, even if she doesn't feel it's her place to bring up her worries with Minerva.As you know from LVS, Siofre and Johannes will eventually be happy together -- Johannes's policy of being steadfast and patient pay off, and Siofre will never have any worries that he did not come to her freely, or that he might have been better off with someone else. But there's a bit of story between now & then, so I'd better say no more -- I'm afraid I'll leak spoilers! LOL!Thanks for the review!
I didn't realize until just now how much I have truly missed this story. But I will be patient and constant. Also, yaaaaaaaaaaaaaay! CFP
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
Thank you! I'm glad you liked it. I've actually missed it, too.Thanks for ... um, I mean, CFR!
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
Thank you! I'm glad you liked it. I've actually missed it, too.Thanks for ... um, I mean, CFR!
YAY!!! I couldn't believe it when I got the message for the update, it's really here! A new chapter! :) Thank you! I loved it, the long wait was more than worth it because this chapter is just perfect. I always love when these two have their little moments, it's so cute. I loved getting to know a little more about Siofre's thoughts and feelings, I love that she's just as anxious and ready as Johannes is, I can't wait to see how they finally come together. I loved that he was firm about wanting to spend the afternoon with her and didn't let her get away with working alone. I can't wait for the next chapter, I hope it won't be too long a wait :)
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
Hi! I'm so glad you enjoyed it!Yes, Johannes is becoming gradually more assertive, but without being pushy or aggressive about it, and always with Siofre's good in his mind. I, too, hope it will not be too long a wait for another chapter of CSG! Thanks for letting me know you enjoyed the chapter!
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
Hi! I'm so glad you enjoyed it!Yes, Johannes is becoming gradually more assertive, but without being pushy or aggressive about it, and always with Siofre's good in his mind. I, too, hope it will not be too long a wait for another chapter of CSG! Thanks for letting me know you enjoyed the chapter!
I'm not quite sure if Lydia has three children or only one - Bertrand - are her others Conner and someone else? I got a bit confused when Soifre was explaining her children - seemed to me she miscarried a lot and that Bertrand was the only child - but then you said he was the youngest, so I got confused.
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
I need to reread the chapter & make sure that I haven't mis-typed something. If I have, I'll go in and make a correction! Thanks!Lydia has one child, Bertrand, and he has two children, Phoebe and Conner. Conner's married to Elisabeth and they have one boy, Liam (who grows up to be Eoghan's father).
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
I think the plethora of children, grandchildren, and other relatives may simply have overwhelmed the synapses. hee! In the previous chapter, Siofre does say that Bertrand was Lydia & Malcolm Tyree's only child, and then in this chapter, she speaks of Bertrand being married to Sally (Longbottom) and the two of them having Connor & Phoebe. Charles Prince is Bertrand's cousin (Charles's father was Bertrand Prince, Lydia's brother, for whom she named her son), and Charles is married to Sally's sister Louisa. (And this is why Severus is related to Eogan in two ways -- through the Princes & the Longbottoms. Bertrand's cousin and Sally's sister are Eileen Prince's grandparents, thus Severus's great-grandparents, and Bertrand and Sally themselves are Eoghan's great-grandparents.) Yeah, can get confusing!
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
I'll just take your word for it and go forward - it was confusing - whew! Thanks for explaining in simple terms - you know sometimes I need a map. *smirks*
*snip*“I may need to take additional measures,” Siofre said. “And the spells I cast will only be effective as long as they are in the house. From what I understand, he drinks, then comes home mean. On good nights, he passes out before he does more than shout and make a scene. The nosy neighbour turns a blind eye to the husband’s behaviour, though he surely must know of it. Any road, I did what I could to make sure that if he does come home drunk, he passes out straightaway upon crossing the threshold. If he tries to take a drink at home, he’ll become ill. Gwyneth claims that when he’s not drinking, he’s moody, but otherwise fine. Most of the spells I cast were aimed at his drinking—making the consequences miserable for him. I cast a few protective spells around Gwyneth, and I gave her an emergency Portkey, as well. If Cadoc becomes violent or frightens her in any way, she can Portkey to her brother and sister-in-law’s home.”“Why would she stay with such a brute?” Johannes asked.“She does love him, or the man she remembers marrying,” Siofre replied, “but she is expecting a baby. It was partly for her baby’s sake that I tried to persuade her to leave the man, but she . . . she has her reasons, I suppose.”“He hits her or hexes her and she is pregnant?” Johannes asked, even more appalled than he had been. “The man should be . . . he should be . . . I do not know a suitable punishment, but he does not deserve the family if he cannot treat them with the love and respect that he should. He should be their protector!”Siofre twitched a slight smile. “Perhaps a lecture in gentlemanly behaviour might do him some good . . . in a few weeks, after the man has ceased drinking. If we can manage that.” I hate to say it, but nothing fixes an abuser unless the abuser WANTS to be fixed - only THEY can truly heal themselves - all the abusee can do is leave - and the woman, in my opinion, is being foolish and selfish - and abusive to her unborn child. I can not STAND lazy, selfish women like this that would rather live in hell than do something better for their kids.
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
Okay, since we know that Lydia is Slytherin, and Johannes is Ravenclaw - I simply MUST know what our Siofre is, my guess, Ravenclaw or Gryffindor - or perhaps Slytherin.... but I'm putting my coin on Ravenclaw.
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
Yes, she's a Ravenclaw. :-)You're right about abusers. Siofre's trying to address some of the underlying causes of his drinking, hoping that that will help, as well as doing something about the drinking itself. We shall see what happens with that.Let's see . . . here's the passage from RaM ("A Spree") where Siofre and Johannes meet:Johannes laughed as the three witches all agreed that every wizard still had a little boy in him. Siofre looked up at the tall, sandy-haired wizard.“Don’t know you. You’re foreign, aren’t you?” The words were blunt, but her tone friendly.“I am from Germany, ma’am,” Johannes said in his friendly manner. “Johannes Birnbaum, at your service.”“Ah, the Herbology wizard. Ravenclaw Head of House, aren’t you? Heard good things about you. Siofre Tyree, Ravenclaw myself,” she said, holding out her hand, which Johannes took and bent over in a formal bow.As Johannes straightened, Minerva apologised. “I am sorry, Grandmother. I hadn’t realised that you two hadn’t met.”
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
Ah, I should have remembered this - well then, my coin was well placed - Ravenclaw indeed.
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
Indeed! You're a good 'claw spotter! ;-)
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
Am I? Seems I've been spoiled with a few good ones in my life. *winks*
*snip*A few moments later, the two stepped out into the sunshine, and Johannes saw that they had arrived at a gabled cottage of three stories. Unlike the main house with its towers and turrets, this house was not all stone. It was a combination of half-timbering and uncut natural stone of different colours—quite unusual for Scotland, in Johannes’s experience—but very lovely on this woody hill. It seemed half-grown from the land and the surrounding woods.Ok that right there is freaking AWESOME!
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*snip*“Hmph. Still, it is not hers, and it is desolate.” She looked around her. “This is . . . isolated and private, but not set apart the way that island is. And that other, that is Dumbledore’s island. Do you know its name? Eilean Tèarmunn. It means ‘Refuge Island.’ A sanctuary from the wizarding world. Not even a Post Owl can get through to it. That is fine as far as it goes, but for Minerva, I would like her to have a place she could come that is hers if she needs it, and not just that island of Dumbledore’s. She can use the cottage or not, as she likes—and bring Dumbledore with her if she wishes.”Ahhhhh, NOW I am starting to understand the Tyree witches... forward thinking, ahead of their time, true Gaelic women of power - equal power - no woman should rely on a man - yes, now I am seeing the true Soifre. Besides all that, I'm glad she is looking out for Minerva - though I know Dumbledore wouldn't dream of hurting his love, but still, Minerva should have her own place.... and if Soifre has the space, and buildings, why not? Makes perfect sense. I wish I could live here! I'm insainly jealous!
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
*snip*“You think Minerva might not want it? Even if she uses it seldom, it will be here for her. It can be a holiday cottage for now, if she likes, but she will want a family one day and a home to raise her children."*winces*
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
The shell house is amazing, really amazing!
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
Hi,
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
! I'm glad you liked the cottage and the shell house. :-)Yes, typical of Tyree witches is that sense of independence, and Siofre has it in spades. She wants to help give Minerva opportunities and that home just of her own. As you say, she has the space, so why not?Yes, Siofre has no crystal ball to see into the future, and she does envision one with Minerva having children of her own. It's a wistful sort of moment for those of us who know what the future does hold for Minerva.
*snip*I hate maths. Maths makes me sleepy and I itch all over. I think I’m allergic,” Lydia said.Siofre barked a laugh. “And that is why I will do the calculations, as always. You’d think we didn’t do this every month.”“I do my very best to forget,” Lydia said pitifully.I can so relate to Lydia here... hate math... haaaaaaaate it.
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*snip*“I am keeping much rushes, though, here and along the edge opposite,” Johannes said, pointing. “They are good for the animals, for the fowl and fishes, to have them here.”He is absolutely correct - far too many people cut all the natural vegetation out of a pond and kill it, even putting up cement walls around it - turns the water into piss pea soup and basically kills it - thank you for keeping him realistic and knowledgable - a real herbologist! A naturalist!
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
LOL! Yes, I'm allergic to math, too -- but sadly have had to work for many years in jobs that required me to sit there and "itch" while using it. Unfortunately, although I hate it, I'm still not abysmal at it. Although I suppose that's good . . . to a point!Glad you like Johannes and his care for the natural balance and all the living things, plant and animal. One of the things he enjoys is knowing how plants fit into an ecosystem, and what plants can do for various critters. He loves to encourage life, so he certainly wouldn't deaden a pond by cutting out all the vegetation and putting in concrete! I'm glad you appreciate this aspect of the story. :-)
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
I've seen far too many gardeners that remind me of some Wal-Mart version of a garden - potted plants that attract NO insects and some concrete and plastic fountain sitting on asphalt - and these 'gardens' are so alien to the natural surroundings and support no life and take up so .... here I am ranting - sorry - anyway, glad to see Johannes is a REAL naturalist/gardener.I also love the explanation of the alarm charms or wards that they are going to put around the pond to keep the babies from drowning - very cool!
Okay - so - lets see, I loved seeing Gertie again, and had to roll my eyes too at Malcolm's silliness - she's a good sport, putting up with him I think - and as usual, I always get embarassed when folks at the table have kissed others at the table but aren't with those at the table - as you know, so I had even more respect for Gertie for sitting through all that as Mal and Katherine talked about his kissing - eh... what else ... Katherine was interesting and I'd like to have learned more about her role in Grindelwald's defeat - as well as her work with Dumbledore but I know that's a minor thing here.I liked how Johannes stumbles around with his English and makes silly errors - chip off the old brick and such - and I like how you've made his speach a bit odd, which it should be, since English isn't his first language.I admit, I'd like to know more about why Grindelwald was after him - recruiting him, but perhaps we'll learn more about that as the story progresses.But most importantly, I'd really curious about WHY Siofre has captured his attention - its a bit of a puzzle to me - I guess I just don't see much of her personality yet or something - besides that she's a very commanding witch - got that alpha personality - perhaps that's it? At any rate, I'm sure I'll learn more as the story progresses.And as always, enjoying your writing, but then again I'd never have started reading Scottish Garden if I wasn't already completely taken with your writing - so no surprises there!
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
Yes, you'll eventually learn more about what happened to Johannes's family & why.It's partly the commanding personality, and partly just "chemistry" -- or maybe it's "magic," or magical resonance. Malcolm can be a trial, but usually in a funny way, so Gertrude actually enjoys it when he's "exasperating." haha!Glad you're enjoying it!
Oh dear, Malcolm is meddling already...
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
haha! His heart's in the right place!
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
Seems most of your characters, OC or Canon, are meddlesome! HAHA! I love EEET! For once it isn't Dumbledore meddling - thankfully - though I suppose right now he's too busy with Minerva to think about much else. *grins*
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
Yes, Dumbledore is busy between Minerva, Hogwarts, Minerva, the Ministry, Minerva . . . well, you get the idea!
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
Mmmmhmmmm - might have to go back and read RaM just to see how busy he is!
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
This is a bit post-RaM, but you're right: if you reread the end of RaM, you'll get an idea of what may be still be keeping him busy these days!
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
All good stuff if I remember correctly.
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
Oh, very good, indeed!
Morgan and Fiona had quads? What on earth? Magical fertility treatment or something? You simply MUST explain that!I am liking this, loving the timid flirtation from Johannes and the direct flirtation or demands of his time, from Siofre - pretty cute. I love romance in the RamVerse - I don't have to worry about rejection!
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
Yes, indeed! And everyone suspects they used potions or a spell or something, but they claim not. Minerva calls them "the litter." (Gareth mentioned that tidbit about Minerva's humor to Severus back in LVS somewhere. Severus liked it. hee!)I'm glad you're enjoying the romance. Johannes is rather smitten, and Siofre isn't indifferent, either! Thanks!
A very nice introduction and very cute to see Johannes having an eye on Siofre - looking forward to more Dumbledore and McGonagall!
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
Thanks! Glad you enjoyed it. Albus & Minerva will eventually make "personal appearances" in the fic, but not for a while yet -- although Minerva shows up by reference fairly frequently. And there's one of your favorite HP characters coming up soonish, too! :-)
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
Ooooh - Gertie???
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
Ah, she's a RaMverse character, but yes, she does, indeed, show up! And relatively soon, actually -- sooner than the canon HP character I was thinking of. In fact, there are two canon characters appearing together in that chapter who I'm pretty sure are among your faves. :-)
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
Ooooh! I'm so excited!!!!!
I was very happy to see an update to this story! And what a fun chapter it was. Apparently Minerva isn't the only one who doubts Malcolm's stories. Poor Malcolm. I think Malcolm was holding back in the fight or he would have taken all of the other wizards out easily:). BTW-go Johannes! Loved the spell with the wood. I think he should have left Cam up on the wall. I imagine these lads are in trouble if Gertrude and/ Siofre hear about it. Thanks for a fun read.
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
Hi! Glad you enjoyed it! Yes, Malcolm could have easily taken them, but it wasn't until it got "serious" that he went ahead and took 'em out. Yes, Johannes might not be much with the traditional defensive spells, hexes, jinxes, and the like, but he's got some imagination and skill with wood, so he didn't do too badly!Thanks!
Well, that certainly wasn't how I was expecting the evening to end. Action packed for sure!!I loved the details you put in about the African dragons. It amazes me how you always come up with new and interesting ideas to add to the RaM universe.I can't believe how quickly the little bar conversation turned ugly. Cam certainly was a nasty bugger and I'm glad Johannes was the one to pin him to the wall. Poor Aberforth, though. I pity him having to clean up all that mess. hahaWonder what Siofre would think if she heard about all that drama??? lol
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
I do wonder what Siofre would think, too! Johannes and Malcolm don't want to find out, that's for sure! Somehow, I can imagine that that story might make its way to her ears, whether the "lads" want it to or not! Yes, Cam was just ready for a confrontation there, wasn't he? And pretty nasty in his comments and innuendos, too. Glad you liked Johannes's trick with the wood. He might not be much at fighting, but he is a clever wizard, nonetheless -- and experienced with wood, as well. Glad you liked the African dragons. I've been looking for an opportunity to stick those into a chapter with Malcolm since I wrote his "application letter" to Dumbledore back in RaM, so it was really fun to finally give them a bit of space and hear a small portion of the story of Malcolm's first dragon ride. Thanks very much for the review!
OMG!! an update!! I was so happy when I saw the email in my inbox! Thanks!I loved this chapter, Malcolm is always so much fun, poor Johannes I don't think he likes the kind of fun Malcolm brings lol. This was a very nice chapter, so funny! I can't wait to read more Siofre and Johannes, they are getting closer by the chapter! LOL.thank you for updatingSam
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter! You're right: Johannes doesn't have the same idea of "fun" that Malcolm does!Thanks for the review! (I was glad to finally be able to write & update! )
I had been holding off reading this chapter and "saving it" since you had mentioned your muse had left you, but tonight I caved in and I'm so glad I did. Johannes' vision of Siofre and his confession to Lydia was breath-taking. How apropos that the jerk that used and left Lydia was a Lockhart. She did much better with her Murdoch. It was a little jarring to read the name Severus back in this time period. I hope you find your muse again. I really miss the updates. Take care.
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
I am currently struggling with writing a gift exchange fic that's finally beginning to sort of come together. I hope that once I have that written, maybe my muse will come back for the other stories. I miss them, too.I am glad that you enjoyed the chapter! Your review brought the characters back into my mind, and Lydia's story, so maybe that will help grease the wheels of the fanfic section of my brain! I figured that a Lockhart would be very good at cutting and running when the going got tough even back then. I thought it might be an interesting reminder of Severus' pureblooded side of the family, too, to have mention of the Prince relative he was named after, as well as the Princes' earlier tangles with the Tyree clan. We will also hear more about Eileen and her father in an upcoming chapter -- hmm, do I hear my muse tiptoeing about? LOL!Anyway, thank you very much for your review. I'm glad you enjoyed it -- and sorry that you haven't got another one to look forward to immediately, but I haven't vanished, and I do hope to continue with both this and LVS very soon. :-)
I'm really enjoying your story. Thank you for sharing your talent :)
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
Hi,
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
! Thank you for your note! I appreciate it, and I'm really glad you're enjoying the story.
Ooo lovely chapter. I like the way you are building the sexual tension and bonds between them. Fascinating ritual; I'm curious about the artifact. I'm assuming/hoping it has greater meaning than is usual.
I see Malcolm is in the next chapter - thank you!
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
Thanks,
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
!The next chapter has a bit more about the artifact -- and Siofre's curious about it, as well.I'm glad you're looking forward to seeing Malcolm again. I hope you enjoy it. He'll be popping in and staying for a couple chapters. :-)Thanks for the review!
LOL God Malcolm is amazing! lol, that tale and the show lol, he's great! I'm so glad he's back and I love it that Siofre calls Gertrude his witch! that's so sweet.
Now the most important part, OMG!! that was sooooo romantic, Johannes is very very romantic, his words to Siofre, the kiss, the pledge! oooohhhh I'm soooo happy right now!!! and Siofre! her reaction was amazing, I'm so pleased! lol. I loved it that she went from Magister to Honnie in less than a minute, she's giving in!
I really think his own private pledge to her has alot to do with the shape, color and markings of the artifact, I can't wait to find out! I'm so excited! Can't wait for the next chapter. GREAT, WONDERFUL writing!
Sam
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
Thank you! I enjoy writing Malcolm -- he seems to write himself -- and it's really fun to be able to step back into that period.I'm glad you enjoyed the romantic bits, as well. They are growing ever closer.Thank you very much for reviewing!
Fun chapter, indeedy!!!The conversation with Siofre and Bridie and then the one with her and Johannes warmed my heart fully. His declarations to her about his pledges, both verbal and in his heart, were very sweet. I'm sure she must know by now that he is truly enamoured with her. However, I can still see her giving him the time and space to come to her fully.LOVE, LOVE, LOVE MALCOLM!! He has me grinning from ear to ear with his tales to the wizard and his retelling of his meeting with him. He's such a hoot. And I'd have to agree with Siofre that his witch caught him well. haha.
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
I'm glad you enjoyed both the romance and the humor in this chapter. I think that Siofre is very aware now of his increasingly strong feelings for her. We'll see where that knowledge might lead.I'm glad that you found Malcolm and his tales a hoot. He's fun -- he practically writes himself.Thanks for the review!
Such an awesome chapter! I looooove it!!! The ceremony performed by Siofre was very special and I'm glad they didn't need any witnesses. I think some of the "magic" of the moment would have been lost if others had been around. And the artifact sounds very intriguing. I do hope we'll learn more about that as the story progresses. We are one step closer to having Siofre and Johannes together. SWEEEEET!!!!!Thanks for the update!
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
You're welcome! I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter! They are, indeed, closer now!
thank you, thank you, thank you!! I loved loved this chapter, it's very sweet and so interesting to learn all of this about Siofre and Tyree Clan. It was very funny that he was unsure about her wanting to adopt him lol, and I can't wait to find out what does the artifact mean, I'm sure it has to do something with their bond, I hope so at least!. I'm sooo glad Malcolm is going to be in the next chapter, I miss him! lol. Can't wait to read more, thanks!Sam
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
Yeah, he sure didn't want her thinking of him as her son! LOL! And she was glad that he was happy that he'd be closer to her than to any others in the clan. (Yay -- my javascript emoticons are working again! LOL!)It's been fun writing Malcolm in this coming chapter, so I hope you'll enjoy it.Thanks for the review!