Chapter Twenty-One: Wizard Tales
Chapter 21 of 32
MMADfanSiofre pays another visit to Bridie on wizarding Tiree Beag, and later, Malcolm drops by the Tyree estate.
Chapter features Siofre, Johannes, Lydia, and a good dose of Malcolm McGonagall.
Chapter Twenty-One: Wizard Tales
"I've never seen one at all like it, but I haven't done as many clan adoptions as you have," Siofre said. "I thought you might have."
Bridie put on her glasses and examined the stone, then she took them off and held it close, examining it minutely. "It is unusual. It is rare to have a stone of more than one colour, and I've only seen two with any metal, and those were of silver and tin." She looked up sharply at Siofre. "Did you test it? Is it metal as it appears? Is it indeed gold?"
"Aye, gold. Chiefly gold."
"Quite pure, then. And the red and green stone through it . . . these are not so uncommon, but usually you only see one or the other, as you have noticed. Sometimes two. I have never seen three materials, though . . . and then the symbol."
"I know. That puzzled me almost more than the rest."
"I have only seen three like it, and all three were witches, and none had these, these extra markings," Bridie said, indicating the few lines radiating from the cup.
"It is more complex than usual, as well, I thought. The wizards I have brought into the clan, or whose artifacts I have seen, have had crossed lines, arrows, parallel lines, cross-hatches, triangles, zigzags."
Bridie nodded. "I have seen many, and they are all also of that general type." Bridie shrugged and handed back the stone. "I am more interested now to meet this wizard. He will be at young Murdoch's party?"
"Aye. I will introduce you then."
"Good."
"You have nothing else to say of it?" Siofre asked.
"What would you say?" Bridie asked in return.
Siofre looked at the stone that lay in her palm. "It must have something to do with me, as well..."
"It always does, an' you know that, too," Bridie said.
"But . . . more than usual, I think. Perhaps because I invited him into the clan as well as performing the ritual. There was no third person there, no sponsor. It was only my own blood and magic that I used . . ."
"Aye, and that is the key. Your blood, your magic, his blood, his magic. An' this says something about your relationship to the man, and his to you...the relationship that goes beyond the binding ritual, beyond the kinship ties you created. The relationship that already existed between you, and perhaps which will exist in the future."
"Is the marking mine, then? The chalice? It is a witch's symbol," Siofre said. "But I've never heard of the binder's magic influencing it in this way. The symbol should be that of the one brought into the clan."
"There are also the rays, remember." Bridie shook her head. "I am no Diviner, Siofre hen. I canna tell you what these markings may mean, not beyond what I've already said. It could be his own symbol, simply influenced by you...your presence, your magic, his feelings toward you. Or it could be that the chalice is yours and the rays are his, though that is more doubtful. I have no answer for you. But if he is a gardener, as you say, a nurturer, I see no reason to discount the chalice as his. If he has a . . . a receptive soul, an open heart, that with his nearness to you and the warmth of his feelings could have created this symbol as his own."
"Will it remain a mystery, then?"
Bridie laughed. "You do like answers, I know that. You always have, since you were a bairn. Sometimes . . . sometimes the only answers are the ones we create. You will read that aright when the time comes an' it'll tell its tale, if that's even an interest for you then."
Siofre nodded, willing to wait. "Thank you, Bridie."
"How is your arm today?" Bridie asked, reaching out one hand.
Siofre twitched her right shoulder. "A wee bit sore, but the magister...that is, Johannes...cast the healing spell on it, an' it'll be fine in a day or so." She let Bridie push up her left sleeve and examine her arm. There was still a slight pink line reaching from near the wrist all the way up Siofre's forearm. "His seemed to heal a wee faster, but I likely have more practice with the charm."
"Aye, 'tis healing well, though. Good you did a clean cut," Bridie said with a nod of approval.
"I never have hesitated, not e'en the first time, you know that," Siofre said. "'Tis worse an it's not begun well and with determination."
"That is why Cousin Cait does not ever join any into the clan...after the first two, I decided it best she dinna. Especially for the two poor wizards who were in more pain for her hesitation than if she'd been quick and steady about it. She has a kindly heart, though."
"Johannes was steady, as well. I don't believe he e'en felt it much."
"Good, then." Bridie chuckled. "You know David Pugh...poor lad fainted the first time I tried to begin the ritual. His wife and I had to revive him, heal the wound, then start again. Saw his own blood, and down he went."
Siofre laughed. "Men are worse that way, I think, and often the most unlikely ones."
"Aye, you're right there, hen!"
Siofre drew her watch from around her neck. "I am off now. I need to go and see Lachina before I return home, but Malcolm sent an owl earlier today asking to see me, and he'll be coming for dinner. I don't know when he will arrive, but as it's Friday, it may be early. I told him to come as soon as he wished."
"He is doing well?"
"Aye, so it seems. He is still in Hogsmeade."
"And still in love."
"Aye, still in love. I don't believe that will change. This witch has caught him well."
"He is the one who introduced you to Johannes, isn't he?"
"Nay, that was Minerva, when they taught together, but they are friends, Malcolm and Johannes. Malcolm suggested that Johannes work on the estate gardens."
"I see . . . He knows you invited Johannes into the clan and performed the ritual yesterday?"
"Unless Johannes has told him, or Lydia, he does not. I have only spoken with you about it."
"So he is not coming about that."
"Nay. I am going to encourage him to take Johannes back to Hogsmeade with him this weekend, though, as long as he will be there this evening. Encourage the lad to have some fun, get away from the estate a wee, remember the world beyond it."
"Good plan, Siofre. He is young still, after all."
"Though not too young," Siofre said, though she sounded uncharacteristically hesitant.
"Nay, not too young," Bridie said with a smile. "Not with all he's done, all he's suffered. And he sounds like an old soul with a deep well of love."
"He is an excellent Herbology master. Next Saturday, I will have him give you a tour of the gardens he has planted."
Bridie chuckled. "That would be fine, hen. This excellent Herbology master may give me a tour. Tell young Malcolm that it has been too long since he has visited the island. He must come soon and visit his island cousins."
Siofre nodded. "I will."
Johannes had found Siofre in her study when he returned to the house and Sorrel told him that the mistress wished to see him.
"This is for you to keep," Siofre said, standing and reaching into her pocket. "I brought it to my cousin Lachina, who is a Lapidomancer and jeweller, and she set it in a circle of gold for you, and I put a gold chain with it. You may carry it or not, as you wish, or wear it around your neck. Collum used his as a fob for his watch. But others put them in a drawer or on a shelf." She handed him the ritual artifact, its chain flowing like water into his hand.
"Thank you, Siofre," Johannes said, unconsciously rubbing his thumb over the stone's smooth surface. "I think I shall wear it, at least for a while. It will remind me of my new clan." He smiled suddenly. "My clan. Yes, I will need to become accustomed to this." He laughed.
Siofre chuckled, herself. "Aye, that you will."
"Lydia said that Malcolm owled earlier this afternoon and that he's coming for dinner tonight."
"Aye, just after lunch. You had already gone out. The lad wished to see me about something, so..." she shrugged "...I invited him to come for dinner and stay the night. Then you two can return to Hogsmeade together in the morning."
"I have work..."
"I do not force you to leave, Honnie, but you should get out, leave the estate for the weekend. As Lydia always reminds me, there is more in life than work and responsibility. And speaking of responsibility, you must have business of your own that needs minding. But if you do stay here, you must not work."
Siofre thought that Johannes looked almost as astonished as a house-elf told to take a holiday from service, but then he nodded. "You are right, of course, but simply because I am . . . because I am busy in the gardens does not mean that I am working."
Siofre's eyebrows rose.
Johannes laughed and shook his head. "I may be working, but it is also . . . I enjoy it. It is not simply a job, you know."
"Good to hear, lad! I was wondering what our contract was for!" Siofre laughed.
"I work now for more than the contract," Johannes said softly. He looked down, then shook his head, considering his words. "I work for the land and for you, but you could burn the contract, and it would not alter my dedication to the work . . ." He raised his eyes to look into hers. "Nor my devotion to the mistress of the estate, to you," he whispered.
"Magister . . ." Her breath hitched.
Johannes turned the artifact in his hand and held it so that its chain fell free. "I will wear this now, and I will remember the Clan Tyree and the witch whose blood ran warm over my arm, whose magic entered my own, and to whom I made one pledge in words and a second in my heart, one pledge to clan and kin, and another . . . to you." He raised the stone to his lips and kissed it, then he quickly dropped the chain around his neck.
"Honnie . . ." Siofre reached out and touched the stone. "Honnie. Make no pledge to me."
Johannes took her hand and held it wrapped around the artifact. "It is done, and it could not be otherwise." Eyes closed, he bent his head and kissed her fingers before gently releasing her hand.
"You carry the stone as you wish, in whatever manner you desire," Siofre said briskly, stepping back. "Before the grandson arrives, I need to finish this petition to the Wizengamot on behalf of Butterworth and his horses."
"You will represent Mr Butterworth, then?"
Siofre nodded. "Aye. And the case will be heard in less than two weeks, on May fifth, so there is not much time to prepare. I will be busy this weekend with that."
"Bertrand and Sally will return next week, and then there is the bonfire, the guests, and then the party on Saturday. Will you have the time?"
"Aye, an I do not waste it," Siofre said, sitting down at her desk. "Therefore, I must work this weekend. But the same is not true of you, Johannes. Take time away. 'Twill be good for you."
Johannes looked doubtful, but he bowed slightly and left the room to allow Siofre to return to her work before Malcolm arrived.
Siofre let out a long, shaky breath when the door clicked shut behind her. She closed her eyes and calmed herself, trying to clear her mind to work. Johannes's warm hand around hers, his gentle lips, his quiet but unabashed declaration of devotion to her . . . she had almost forgotten herself and her own pledge to allow Johannes his freedom, and not simply for his sake, but because she only wanted him on that basis: to freely choose her and to freely bind himself to her. For no simple partnership, no common marriage, would satisfy her in this relationship. If she were to have him, she would have him wholly, completely. She would return his devotion with devotion of her own, unwavering. But not that day. Not yet.
She was just finishing the first draft of the petition to the Wizengamot, which she would submit on Monday morning, when she heard a resounding crack of a loud Apparition. Malcolm had arrived, and was either announcing his arrival noisily or had come from some distance, Siofre thought, since he was perfectly capable of Disapparating and Apparating with no more than a slight echoing click if he chose.
She quickly tidied her desk and placed her goose quill in its holder, hurrying but not rushing to leave her study. She approached the top of the stairs, and she heard Malcolm's voice in the hall, greeting Lydia, who was complaining about Malcolm's dramatic arrival.
"Bless me! That booming Apparition still has my heart pounding, Malcolm! I am going to need a cup of tea to calm myself."
"Nay, Auntie, not a cup of tea! Something a bit tastier...and stronger! I'd not mind a glass, myself," Malcolm replied. He looked up the stairs and grinned. "And Grandmother comes. She will join us, won't you, Grandmother?"
Rather than wait for her to come down the great, broad staircase, he bounded up to meet her halfway. He kissed her cheek, then as she stepped down onto the stair beside him, he put his arm around her shoulders and gave her a squeeze.
"I believe you've been a very busy witch these last days," Malcolm said, eyes sparkling, "but I had an interesting morning today, myself. And I'll tell you all about it...but where's Honnie? The man's not left for the day, has he?"
"He'll be along, I'm sure," Siofre said.
"He couldn't have failed to have heard your arrival even if he were down by the barley," Lydia added.
Indeed, they heard steps above them, coming down from the second floor where Johannes's rooms were. When he reached the first floor, Johannes smiled and trotted down more quickly to meet the others.
"Malcolm! Siofre said you would be here this evening," Johannes said, offering his hand.
Malcolm smiled and grasped Johannes's hand in his own. His smile froze on its way to his eyes, and then returned, though there was still a hint of puzzlement in his expression.
"I thought we'd have a drink in the teak lounge today," Lydia said. "I had Multry prepare some appetisers since you were coming, Malcolm."
Johannes hadn't yet seen the room which Lydia referred to, and followed the others. It was in the less-used part of the house, near the formal dining room and large parlour. The lounge was panelled in teak, as Lydia's name for it implied, and it had heavy, darker, more masculine furniture than that in the light, cheerful parlour or in the family sitting room. Large portraits of a few Tyrees hung along one wall, and tall brass sconces and three chandeliers were lit, warming the room with their candlelight, and a fire crackled cheerfully in the fireplace.
After they'd sat down and Malcolm had poured them each a glass of whisky...save Lydia, who sipped a sherry...their appetisers arrived, and Malcolm picked up three and gobbled them down.
"Laddie! Where are your manners! Egeria taught you better," Siofre scolded.
"Sorry, Grandmother." He waved his hand, and a tray of appetisers rose and floated over to Siofre. "I am famished, though that is no excuse for not offering the snacks around first."
The tray floated to each of the others, and as Johannes selected a small savoury pastry, he caught Malcolm looking at him curiously again, but then Malcolm turned to his grandmother.
"I had a very interesting commission today. Wizard wrote me in a panic yesterday. Sure he's been cursed, needs my help desperately, heard I'm the bee's knees, all that usual stuff, but he did sound more desperate than most, so I hopped on over to Cornwall bright and early this morning." Malcolm took a long swallow of whisky. "The man is in a state, pacing back and forth, hadn't slept the night before, and there wasn't a sensible word out of his mouth at first. I thought he might be a bit, you know, 'disturbed,' as they say," Malcolm said, tapping the side of his head. "His wife was making breakfast. I'd eaten already, but to be friendly and set the man at his ease, I sat down with him to a hearty breakfast of kidneys and salty porridge...actually rather nice...then told the lady of the house to have a seat and rest herself a bit. She looked about ready to pop. Must be nearing her fortieth week, easy. Thought I might be enlisted to deliver the bairn then and there, she's that close."
"Egeria will be pleased that you retain so much knowledge of midwifery," Siofre said drily.
"Well, she shouldn't have dragged me along with her all those years if she didn't want me to learn something. It was supposed to be educational, after all...even if I did enjoy my outings with you more," Malcolm said with a cheeky wink at his grandmother. "You're still my best lassie!"
Siofre shook her head and rolled her eyes.
"I know who you were seeing!" Lydia said excitedly.
"Indeed," Johannes agreed. "I believe we all do."
Malcolm gave them a crooked grin and turned to his grandmother. "So what have you been up to, Grandmother? I've never seen a man in such a swither over a few Temperance Charms placed on his threshold!"
"It wasn't only Temperance Charms I placed," Siofre replied.
"Nay, I could tell that, too. The entire house reeked of your magic...if you'll pardon the expression...and there's no magic like Siofre Tyree's. No mistaking it. I even found the wee hole you'd punched through his wards so you could Apparate into the kitchen, you sneaky old witch. But I listened to the man's tale of woe nonetheless. It was certain, he was, that some mysterious force had been following him the other day, too. Would that mighty force have been you?"
"Aye," Johannes said, "she followed Terwilliger on Wednesday, all day, from the time he left his house until he returned that evening."
Malcolm glanced over at Johannes, again seeming to look at him oddly.
"Did you tell him what the charms were?" Siofre asked.
"Nay, even before I recognised you there, I thought the man could do with a bit of temperance with a baby on the way. Thought there had to be a reason for the charms, and if he didn't know of them, the wife must have laid them, or had them cast for her, and I'd not deny a pregnant witch a sober husband."
"What did you tell him?" Lydia asked.
Malcolm smirked. "I thought I might help Grandmother along a little, so I told him quite honestly that I didn't detect a single trace of a curse on either him or his house, but that there was an unusual store of magic there. I said I'd seen it before, and suggested to him that we should have a little private talk out of earshot of his wife. I think she was a wee bit nervous then, but I had Cadoc help me clean up the breakfast dishes...I do believe he was thinking of leaving them to his wife, as if she were his house-elf or something...and we repaired to the sitting room. I made a great show of putting an Imperturbable on the room, then I sat him down for a wizard-to-wizard chat." Malcolm laughed. "I must say, I did have a bit of fun with this. Not quite sporting of me, maybe, but I told the fellow a few tall tales. Told him that it was a much hidden, highly guarded secret, and a rare occurrence, to boot, but that some wizards became magically pregnant as their wives' pregnancy progressed..."
Malcolm had to pause in his story to accommodate the others' laughter, Lydia whooping and slapping her knee, his grandmother chuckling, and even Johannes laughing and wiping tears of mirth from his eyes.
"Well, anyway, I told him that in cases of a wizard's magical pregnancy, the wizard's excess energy often transfers itself to his abode, whatever it might be, and that in the case of stone houses such as his, the magic could resonate for many years to come, but that it would also provide a special nurturing energy for his bairn as she grew. I said it was a rare honour for a wizard to be able to provide such protection for his family, but that there were some costs to be borne, such as a reduced tolerance for drink. I asked him whether he'd noticed any such side-effect, and he nodded eagerly, agreeing that in the last few weeks, he'd scarcely been able to hold his liquor. Drink taken in his home made him sick, he said, and if he came home after having more than a pint or two, he'd pass out as soon as he crossed the threshold. It was one of the things that had made him believe he was cursed."
"Oh, dear, laddie! What have you wrought! What if he tells his mates?"
"Took care of that...said that the Ministry doesn't like this to be common knowledge...made up some balderdash about that which he swallowed easily. I told him that this magic pervading the house meant that he would be a superlative father and that his daughter...or son...would be an outstanding witch or wizard who would bring him great pride. I told him that the consequences would be severe for him if he tried to ignore the magic and its nurturing imperative, then made up a few tales of woe about wizards living under bridges with trolls, only a single robe to their names, begging for Knuts, and said that's what happened to any wizard who rejected the call to abide in accordance with the pregnancy magic and nurture his child in partnership with his wife."
"And what did you say about the force he thought was following him?" Lydia asked excitedly.
"Ah, now that I told him was the result of his attempts to escape his fate, and that worse than that would follow him if he didn't become the family man his magic was calling him to be. I told him that great joy and fulfilment could come to him if he lived in harmony with his natural parental magic...though I told him there were no guarantees there, and that the outside world did exert forces upon him and his family, as well...but that if he chose to follow this rare and splendid opportunity, he could be a very happy man."
Lydia laughed. "Such stories you make up, Malcolm! And he believed you!"
"Aye, because he wanted to. I could tell he wasn't a bad sort, not really, just married a wee bit young, maybe, and a bit lacking in self-confidence. Besides, there was a kernel of truth to it all...fatherhood is a wonderful calling, I'm sure, and being a good father should be a reward in itself. Provided, of course, that the child doesn't turn out to be a miserable creature." Malcolm shrugged.
"Well, I do hope you did more good than harm with that story, lad," Siofre said.
"I think so. I told him not to let on to his wife about it all, just to tell her that all was well and that he was looking forward to being a daddy. I also told him that if there are other sources of stress in his life, he should find ways to deal with them in a practical and constructive manner. That's when he told me he hated his job and his boss but was afraid to quit because of the baby on the way. Naturally I told him not to quit until he found another job, but suggested that he begin looking for one after the baby was born. Told him to consult a Seer or Arithmancer who specialises in career advice. I gave him Gertrude's name and told him that she takes commissions for particularly worthy cases, and if he mentioned my name, she might be able to make time for him...he just got out of Hogwarts a few years ago, so he knows who she is, but he didn't take Arithmancy, so he doesn't know her at all well."
"You'd better tell your witch what tales you spun for the fellow so that she doesn't say anything that out-and-out contradicts you," Siofre said.
"I didn't give him any career advice, per se, so if she concentrates on that...or whatever Seer he might choose concentrates on his career...my little tales should remain intact."
"Well, you might want to mention the newspaper business to Gertrude. I sent Kiera with a letter to a friend of mine at the Prophet," Siofre said, "and mentioned that he might try to run into Terwilliger in a casual way and talk to him about the newspaper business."
"And this friend, he will do this?" Johannes asked curiously. "Simply . . . run into the man and discuss jobs with him?"
"Gerald Mackintosh owes me a favour or two, so he will. But not to discuss jobs. Just the business in general, and if Terwilliger sees an opportunity and tries for it, that depends upon him, and there is no obligation on Mackie to hire the man if he's not suited."
"I remember Gerald," Lydia said dreamily. "I haven't seen him in years, though. Wonder if he's still the same . . ."
"I ran into him in Diagon Alley a few months ago, Aunt Lydia, and he's still a bonny one!" Malcolm said with a grin. He added to Johannes, "You can count on Aunt Lydia to remember the good-looking men! Quite an appreciative eye, she has!"
"Oh, go on!" Lydia said. "You make me sound like some lecherous old hag!"
"Not at all, Auntie! You simply have an artist's appreciation for beauty! And if it happens to come in a masculine package, so much the better!" Malcolm teased. "I'm sure the others are in agreement with me, too, that no one could ever mistake you for a hag, lecherous or otherwise."
Johannes, though used to Malcolm's sense of humour and his gentle...or not so gentle...teasing, did feel compelled to defend Lydia. "She is, indeed, an artist, and, if I may speak so plainly," he said with a gentlemanly nod at Lydia, "she is also quite lovely herself, and in no way hag-like."
Malcolm laughed at that, and Lydia chuckled.
"Thank you, Johannes. You are a gentleman," Lydia said with a fond smile.
"I see why you two ladies like to keep the man here," Malcolm said with a smile. "But he is quite right, too." Malcolm got up from his chair, setting down his empty glass, and went over to Lydia. He bent and kissed her cheek. "You are lovely. But," he said as he straightened and turned to the others, "Honnie should remember that it was not I who compared her to a hag, but the lady herself."
A light, clear tone rang through the house, and Siofre set down her own glass and stood. "That would be dinner. Let us not keep Multry's meal waiting...especially as the grandson is likely still famished despite the dozen tidbits he ate...such tale-telling does work up an appetite!"
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Dear MMADfan, I love this story! Do you plan to write more chapters in the future? I would love to see it finished.
I really hope you update soon, you write such wonderful fanfiction and I find myself rereading some of the old ones hopefully your next update will be near in the future for this as well as LVS
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Thank you! I do hope to update both stories soon!
I really hope you update soon, you write such wonderful fanfiction and I find myself rereading some of the old ones hopefully your next update will be near in the future for this as well as LVS
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Thank you very much,
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
!I will definitely try to get a few chapters of Charming the Scottish Garden and LVS posted this autumn. I'm sorry for the wait. It's very good to know that people are still reading them and will be here to read the new chapters when I (finally!) get them written. (Life's not been conducive to writing in the last couple years, sadly.)I really appreciate the note! I will do my best to get a new chapter up very soon.
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Yes I have been keeping up with your stories. I especially liked RAM itself , although I should let you know or perhaps you do know. But I read on ff.net and I usually keep with the newest MMAD fiction, I recently came across one that had taken a parts of your story and added it to theirs, I commented saying I read it before to which the author promptly deleted my comment. Just thought you should know as even though I am no writer I felt bad about something like that. However I shall eagerly await your next update :)
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Would you mind emailing me or messaging me through ffnet to let me know which story it is, if you remember the title? I would appreciate it. I'm very glad that you like RAM!
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i do not have an account on FF.net :/ sorry, i usually just go as a guest i already signed up on alot of new pages. And i could read the stories just as easily, But the Name of the Story is Even in Death by Albus P.W.BDumbledore1891. You take a good look at chapter 5
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Thanks very much! :-) I appreciate the tip!
First a new chapter of LVS and then CSG- I am in heaven! As much as I want to see Siofre and Johannes admit their feelings for each other, I enjoyed the "push-pull" of this chapter. The way the talk of age differences turned to them, Siofre wanting to take his hand but not, sitting close on the bench- all of it a wonderful buildup. 5 stars!
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I'm glad it made you happy and you're liking the "push-pull"!I'm hoping to update at least two chapters a month -- more if I can -- alternating amongst the WIPs I have going. I am resisting the sudden onslaught of plot bunnies that are begging me to write more RaMverse fics set during the immediate post-RaM time period, like CSG is.Thanks for the review! It's encouraging!
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I'm glad it made you happy and you're liking the "push-pull"!I'm hoping to update at least two chapters a month -- more if I can -- alternating amongst the WIPs I have going. I am resisting the sudden onslaught of plot bunnies that are begging me to write more RaMverse fics set during the immediate post-RaM time period, like CSG is.Thanks for the review! It's encouraging!
Best birthday present, ever!!! An update for this and it's a very shippy Siofre/Johannes chapter. woooo hoooI think this line was absolutely brilliant:Siofre found herself smiling back, and her heart beating faster at the sight of him. Could she really give him up to another witch?NOPE, she can't give him up to another because her heart already belongs to him and he holds hers as well. I wasn't too fond of the ADMM discussion. Siofre unnerves me when she speaks of Minerva and Albus's relationship, especially in this context. I know Malcolm is her favorite but it almost felt like she wasn't thrilled with Albus marrying Minerva, even though it's what makes her happiest and clearly they adore one another. sigh. Oh well ... I'm still happy for Siofre and Joannes, awwww.
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Hi! Glad to give you a good birthday prezzie! :-)What Siofre is not thrilled with is Albus not marrying Minerva. It's not that she has objections to their not being married, but she's afraid that Minerva wants marriage & Albus ain't askin' -- and she's right, at this point. But Minerva is being Stoic and sensible, and since she won't talk to Siofre about it, Siofre's not about to give her advice. She's also just plain worried that Minerva will end up having a broken heart or have some other sadness in her life because of the relationship. She loves Minerva and doesn't want to see her hurt -- she cares about Albus, but Minerva's her granddaughter, so she's Siofre's priority in her heart, not Albus, even if she doesn't feel it's her place to bring up her worries with Minerva.As you know from LVS, Siofre and Johannes will eventually be happy together -- Johannes's policy of being steadfast and patient pay off, and Siofre will never have any worries that he did not come to her freely, or that he might have been better off with someone else. But there's a bit of story between now & then, so I'd better say no more -- I'm afraid I'll leak spoilers! LOL!Thanks for the review!
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Hi! Glad to give you a good birthday prezzie! :-)What Siofre is not thrilled with is Albus not marrying Minerva. It's not that she has objections to their not being married, but she's afraid that Minerva wants marriage & Albus ain't askin' -- and she's right, at this point. But Minerva is being Stoic and sensible, and since she won't talk to Siofre about it, Siofre's not about to give her advice. She's also just plain worried that Minerva will end up having a broken heart or have some other sadness in her life because of the relationship. She loves Minerva and doesn't want to see her hurt -- she cares about Albus, but Minerva's her granddaughter, so she's Siofre's priority in her heart, not Albus, even if she doesn't feel it's her place to bring up her worries with Minerva.As you know from LVS, Siofre and Johannes will eventually be happy together -- Johannes's policy of being steadfast and patient pay off, and Siofre will never have any worries that he did not come to her freely, or that he might have been better off with someone else. But there's a bit of story between now & then, so I'd better say no more -- I'm afraid I'll leak spoilers! LOL!Thanks for the review!
I didn't realize until just now how much I have truly missed this story. But I will be patient and constant. Also, yaaaaaaaaaaaaaay! CFP
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
Thank you! I'm glad you liked it. I've actually missed it, too.Thanks for ... um, I mean, CFR!
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
Thank you! I'm glad you liked it. I've actually missed it, too.Thanks for ... um, I mean, CFR!
YAY!!! I couldn't believe it when I got the message for the update, it's really here! A new chapter! :) Thank you! I loved it, the long wait was more than worth it because this chapter is just perfect. I always love when these two have their little moments, it's so cute. I loved getting to know a little more about Siofre's thoughts and feelings, I love that she's just as anxious and ready as Johannes is, I can't wait to see how they finally come together. I loved that he was firm about wanting to spend the afternoon with her and didn't let her get away with working alone. I can't wait for the next chapter, I hope it won't be too long a wait :)
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
Hi! I'm so glad you enjoyed it!Yes, Johannes is becoming gradually more assertive, but without being pushy or aggressive about it, and always with Siofre's good in his mind. I, too, hope it will not be too long a wait for another chapter of CSG! Thanks for letting me know you enjoyed the chapter!
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
Hi! I'm so glad you enjoyed it!Yes, Johannes is becoming gradually more assertive, but without being pushy or aggressive about it, and always with Siofre's good in his mind. I, too, hope it will not be too long a wait for another chapter of CSG! Thanks for letting me know you enjoyed the chapter!
I'm not quite sure if Lydia has three children or only one - Bertrand - are her others Conner and someone else? I got a bit confused when Soifre was explaining her children - seemed to me she miscarried a lot and that Bertrand was the only child - but then you said he was the youngest, so I got confused.
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I need to reread the chapter & make sure that I haven't mis-typed something. If I have, I'll go in and make a correction! Thanks!Lydia has one child, Bertrand, and he has two children, Phoebe and Conner. Conner's married to Elisabeth and they have one boy, Liam (who grows up to be Eoghan's father).
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
I think the plethora of children, grandchildren, and other relatives may simply have overwhelmed the synapses. hee! In the previous chapter, Siofre does say that Bertrand was Lydia & Malcolm Tyree's only child, and then in this chapter, she speaks of Bertrand being married to Sally (Longbottom) and the two of them having Connor & Phoebe. Charles Prince is Bertrand's cousin (Charles's father was Bertrand Prince, Lydia's brother, for whom she named her son), and Charles is married to Sally's sister Louisa. (And this is why Severus is related to Eogan in two ways -- through the Princes & the Longbottoms. Bertrand's cousin and Sally's sister are Eileen Prince's grandparents, thus Severus's great-grandparents, and Bertrand and Sally themselves are Eoghan's great-grandparents.) Yeah, can get confusing!
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
I'll just take your word for it and go forward - it was confusing - whew! Thanks for explaining in simple terms - you know sometimes I need a map. *smirks*
*snip*“I may need to take additional measures,” Siofre said. “And the spells I cast will only be effective as long as they are in the house. From what I understand, he drinks, then comes home mean. On good nights, he passes out before he does more than shout and make a scene. The nosy neighbour turns a blind eye to the husband’s behaviour, though he surely must know of it. Any road, I did what I could to make sure that if he does come home drunk, he passes out straightaway upon crossing the threshold. If he tries to take a drink at home, he’ll become ill. Gwyneth claims that when he’s not drinking, he’s moody, but otherwise fine. Most of the spells I cast were aimed at his drinking—making the consequences miserable for him. I cast a few protective spells around Gwyneth, and I gave her an emergency Portkey, as well. If Cadoc becomes violent or frightens her in any way, she can Portkey to her brother and sister-in-law’s home.”“Why would she stay with such a brute?” Johannes asked.“She does love him, or the man she remembers marrying,” Siofre replied, “but she is expecting a baby. It was partly for her baby’s sake that I tried to persuade her to leave the man, but she . . . she has her reasons, I suppose.”“He hits her or hexes her and she is pregnant?” Johannes asked, even more appalled than he had been. “The man should be . . . he should be . . . I do not know a suitable punishment, but he does not deserve the family if he cannot treat them with the love and respect that he should. He should be their protector!”Siofre twitched a slight smile. “Perhaps a lecture in gentlemanly behaviour might do him some good . . . in a few weeks, after the man has ceased drinking. If we can manage that.” I hate to say it, but nothing fixes an abuser unless the abuser WANTS to be fixed - only THEY can truly heal themselves - all the abusee can do is leave - and the woman, in my opinion, is being foolish and selfish - and abusive to her unborn child. I can not STAND lazy, selfish women like this that would rather live in hell than do something better for their kids.
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
Okay, since we know that Lydia is Slytherin, and Johannes is Ravenclaw - I simply MUST know what our Siofre is, my guess, Ravenclaw or Gryffindor - or perhaps Slytherin.... but I'm putting my coin on Ravenclaw.
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
Yes, she's a Ravenclaw. :-)You're right about abusers. Siofre's trying to address some of the underlying causes of his drinking, hoping that that will help, as well as doing something about the drinking itself. We shall see what happens with that.Let's see . . . here's the passage from RaM ("A Spree") where Siofre and Johannes meet:Johannes laughed as the three witches all agreed that every wizard still had a little boy in him. Siofre looked up at the tall, sandy-haired wizard.“Don’t know you. You’re foreign, aren’t you?” The words were blunt, but her tone friendly.“I am from Germany, ma’am,” Johannes said in his friendly manner. “Johannes Birnbaum, at your service.”“Ah, the Herbology wizard. Ravenclaw Head of House, aren’t you? Heard good things about you. Siofre Tyree, Ravenclaw myself,” she said, holding out her hand, which Johannes took and bent over in a formal bow.As Johannes straightened, Minerva apologised. “I am sorry, Grandmother. I hadn’t realised that you two hadn’t met.”
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
Ah, I should have remembered this - well then, my coin was well placed - Ravenclaw indeed.
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
Indeed! You're a good 'claw spotter! ;-)
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
Am I? Seems I've been spoiled with a few good ones in my life. *winks*
*snip*A few moments later, the two stepped out into the sunshine, and Johannes saw that they had arrived at a gabled cottage of three stories. Unlike the main house with its towers and turrets, this house was not all stone. It was a combination of half-timbering and uncut natural stone of different colours—quite unusual for Scotland, in Johannes’s experience—but very lovely on this woody hill. It seemed half-grown from the land and the surrounding woods.Ok that right there is freaking AWESOME!
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*snip*“Hmph. Still, it is not hers, and it is desolate.” She looked around her. “This is . . . isolated and private, but not set apart the way that island is. And that other, that is Dumbledore’s island. Do you know its name? Eilean Tèarmunn. It means ‘Refuge Island.’ A sanctuary from the wizarding world. Not even a Post Owl can get through to it. That is fine as far as it goes, but for Minerva, I would like her to have a place she could come that is hers if she needs it, and not just that island of Dumbledore’s. She can use the cottage or not, as she likes—and bring Dumbledore with her if she wishes.”Ahhhhh, NOW I am starting to understand the Tyree witches... forward thinking, ahead of their time, true Gaelic women of power - equal power - no woman should rely on a man - yes, now I am seeing the true Soifre. Besides all that, I'm glad she is looking out for Minerva - though I know Dumbledore wouldn't dream of hurting his love, but still, Minerva should have her own place.... and if Soifre has the space, and buildings, why not? Makes perfect sense. I wish I could live here! I'm insainly jealous!
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
*snip*“You think Minerva might not want it? Even if she uses it seldom, it will be here for her. It can be a holiday cottage for now, if she likes, but she will want a family one day and a home to raise her children."*winces*
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
The shell house is amazing, really amazing!
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
Hi,
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
! I'm glad you liked the cottage and the shell house. :-)Yes, typical of Tyree witches is that sense of independence, and Siofre has it in spades. She wants to help give Minerva opportunities and that home just of her own. As you say, she has the space, so why not?Yes, Siofre has no crystal ball to see into the future, and she does envision one with Minerva having children of her own. It's a wistful sort of moment for those of us who know what the future does hold for Minerva.
*snip*I hate maths. Maths makes me sleepy and I itch all over. I think I’m allergic,” Lydia said.Siofre barked a laugh. “And that is why I will do the calculations, as always. You’d think we didn’t do this every month.”“I do my very best to forget,” Lydia said pitifully.I can so relate to Lydia here... hate math... haaaaaaaate it.
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*snip*“I am keeping much rushes, though, here and along the edge opposite,” Johannes said, pointing. “They are good for the animals, for the fowl and fishes, to have them here.”He is absolutely correct - far too many people cut all the natural vegetation out of a pond and kill it, even putting up cement walls around it - turns the water into piss pea soup and basically kills it - thank you for keeping him realistic and knowledgable - a real herbologist! A naturalist!
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
LOL! Yes, I'm allergic to math, too -- but sadly have had to work for many years in jobs that required me to sit there and "itch" while using it. Unfortunately, although I hate it, I'm still not abysmal at it. Although I suppose that's good . . . to a point!Glad you like Johannes and his care for the natural balance and all the living things, plant and animal. One of the things he enjoys is knowing how plants fit into an ecosystem, and what plants can do for various critters. He loves to encourage life, so he certainly wouldn't deaden a pond by cutting out all the vegetation and putting in concrete! I'm glad you appreciate this aspect of the story. :-)
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
I've seen far too many gardeners that remind me of some Wal-Mart version of a garden - potted plants that attract NO insects and some concrete and plastic fountain sitting on asphalt - and these 'gardens' are so alien to the natural surroundings and support no life and take up so .... here I am ranting - sorry - anyway, glad to see Johannes is a REAL naturalist/gardener.I also love the explanation of the alarm charms or wards that they are going to put around the pond to keep the babies from drowning - very cool!
Okay - so - lets see, I loved seeing Gertie again, and had to roll my eyes too at Malcolm's silliness - she's a good sport, putting up with him I think - and as usual, I always get embarassed when folks at the table have kissed others at the table but aren't with those at the table - as you know, so I had even more respect for Gertie for sitting through all that as Mal and Katherine talked about his kissing - eh... what else ... Katherine was interesting and I'd like to have learned more about her role in Grindelwald's defeat - as well as her work with Dumbledore but I know that's a minor thing here.I liked how Johannes stumbles around with his English and makes silly errors - chip off the old brick and such - and I like how you've made his speach a bit odd, which it should be, since English isn't his first language.I admit, I'd like to know more about why Grindelwald was after him - recruiting him, but perhaps we'll learn more about that as the story progresses.But most importantly, I'd really curious about WHY Siofre has captured his attention - its a bit of a puzzle to me - I guess I just don't see much of her personality yet or something - besides that she's a very commanding witch - got that alpha personality - perhaps that's it? At any rate, I'm sure I'll learn more as the story progresses.And as always, enjoying your writing, but then again I'd never have started reading Scottish Garden if I wasn't already completely taken with your writing - so no surprises there!
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
Yes, you'll eventually learn more about what happened to Johannes's family & why.It's partly the commanding personality, and partly just "chemistry" -- or maybe it's "magic," or magical resonance. Malcolm can be a trial, but usually in a funny way, so Gertrude actually enjoys it when he's "exasperating." haha!Glad you're enjoying it!
Oh dear, Malcolm is meddling already...
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
haha! His heart's in the right place!
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
Seems most of your characters, OC or Canon, are meddlesome! HAHA! I love EEET! For once it isn't Dumbledore meddling - thankfully - though I suppose right now he's too busy with Minerva to think about much else. *grins*
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
Yes, Dumbledore is busy between Minerva, Hogwarts, Minerva, the Ministry, Minerva . . . well, you get the idea!
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
Mmmmhmmmm - might have to go back and read RaM just to see how busy he is!
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
This is a bit post-RaM, but you're right: if you reread the end of RaM, you'll get an idea of what may be still be keeping him busy these days!
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
All good stuff if I remember correctly.
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
Oh, very good, indeed!
Morgan and Fiona had quads? What on earth? Magical fertility treatment or something? You simply MUST explain that!I am liking this, loving the timid flirtation from Johannes and the direct flirtation or demands of his time, from Siofre - pretty cute. I love romance in the RamVerse - I don't have to worry about rejection!
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
Yes, indeed! And everyone suspects they used potions or a spell or something, but they claim not. Minerva calls them "the litter." (Gareth mentioned that tidbit about Minerva's humor to Severus back in LVS somewhere. Severus liked it. hee!)I'm glad you're enjoying the romance. Johannes is rather smitten, and Siofre isn't indifferent, either! Thanks!
A very nice introduction and very cute to see Johannes having an eye on Siofre - looking forward to more Dumbledore and McGonagall!
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
Thanks! Glad you enjoyed it. Albus & Minerva will eventually make "personal appearances" in the fic, but not for a while yet -- although Minerva shows up by reference fairly frequently. And there's one of your favorite HP characters coming up soonish, too! :-)
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
Ooooh - Gertie???
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
Ah, she's a RaMverse character, but yes, she does, indeed, show up! And relatively soon, actually -- sooner than the canon HP character I was thinking of. In fact, there are two canon characters appearing together in that chapter who I'm pretty sure are among your faves. :-)
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Ooooh! I'm so excited!!!!!
I was very happy to see an update to this story! And what a fun chapter it was. Apparently Minerva isn't the only one who doubts Malcolm's stories. Poor Malcolm. I think Malcolm was holding back in the fight or he would have taken all of the other wizards out easily:). BTW-go Johannes! Loved the spell with the wood. I think he should have left Cam up on the wall. I imagine these lads are in trouble if Gertrude and/ Siofre hear about it. Thanks for a fun read.
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
Hi! Glad you enjoyed it! Yes, Malcolm could have easily taken them, but it wasn't until it got "serious" that he went ahead and took 'em out. Yes, Johannes might not be much with the traditional defensive spells, hexes, jinxes, and the like, but he's got some imagination and skill with wood, so he didn't do too badly!Thanks!
Well, that certainly wasn't how I was expecting the evening to end. Action packed for sure!!I loved the details you put in about the African dragons. It amazes me how you always come up with new and interesting ideas to add to the RaM universe.I can't believe how quickly the little bar conversation turned ugly. Cam certainly was a nasty bugger and I'm glad Johannes was the one to pin him to the wall. Poor Aberforth, though. I pity him having to clean up all that mess. hahaWonder what Siofre would think if she heard about all that drama??? lol
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
I do wonder what Siofre would think, too! Johannes and Malcolm don't want to find out, that's for sure! Somehow, I can imagine that that story might make its way to her ears, whether the "lads" want it to or not! Yes, Cam was just ready for a confrontation there, wasn't he? And pretty nasty in his comments and innuendos, too. Glad you liked Johannes's trick with the wood. He might not be much at fighting, but he is a clever wizard, nonetheless -- and experienced with wood, as well. Glad you liked the African dragons. I've been looking for an opportunity to stick those into a chapter with Malcolm since I wrote his "application letter" to Dumbledore back in RaM, so it was really fun to finally give them a bit of space and hear a small portion of the story of Malcolm's first dragon ride. Thanks very much for the review!
OMG!! an update!! I was so happy when I saw the email in my inbox! Thanks!I loved this chapter, Malcolm is always so much fun, poor Johannes I don't think he likes the kind of fun Malcolm brings lol. This was a very nice chapter, so funny! I can't wait to read more Siofre and Johannes, they are getting closer by the chapter! LOL.thank you for updatingSam
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter! You're right: Johannes doesn't have the same idea of "fun" that Malcolm does!Thanks for the review! (I was glad to finally be able to write & update! )
I had been holding off reading this chapter and "saving it" since you had mentioned your muse had left you, but tonight I caved in and I'm so glad I did. Johannes' vision of Siofre and his confession to Lydia was breath-taking. How apropos that the jerk that used and left Lydia was a Lockhart. She did much better with her Murdoch. It was a little jarring to read the name Severus back in this time period. I hope you find your muse again. I really miss the updates. Take care.
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
I am currently struggling with writing a gift exchange fic that's finally beginning to sort of come together. I hope that once I have that written, maybe my muse will come back for the other stories. I miss them, too.I am glad that you enjoyed the chapter! Your review brought the characters back into my mind, and Lydia's story, so maybe that will help grease the wheels of the fanfic section of my brain! I figured that a Lockhart would be very good at cutting and running when the going got tough even back then. I thought it might be an interesting reminder of Severus' pureblooded side of the family, too, to have mention of the Prince relative he was named after, as well as the Princes' earlier tangles with the Tyree clan. We will also hear more about Eileen and her father in an upcoming chapter -- hmm, do I hear my muse tiptoeing about? LOL!Anyway, thank you very much for your review. I'm glad you enjoyed it -- and sorry that you haven't got another one to look forward to immediately, but I haven't vanished, and I do hope to continue with both this and LVS very soon. :-)
I'm really enjoying your story. Thank you for sharing your talent :)
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Hi,
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
! Thank you for your note! I appreciate it, and I'm really glad you're enjoying the story.
Ooo lovely chapter. I like the way you are building the sexual tension and bonds between them. Fascinating ritual; I'm curious about the artifact. I'm assuming/hoping it has greater meaning than is usual.
I see Malcolm is in the next chapter - thank you!
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
Thanks,
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
!The next chapter has a bit more about the artifact -- and Siofre's curious about it, as well.I'm glad you're looking forward to seeing Malcolm again. I hope you enjoy it. He'll be popping in and staying for a couple chapters. :-)Thanks for the review!
LOL God Malcolm is amazing! lol, that tale and the show lol, he's great! I'm so glad he's back and I love it that Siofre calls Gertrude his witch! that's so sweet.
Now the most important part, OMG!! that was sooooo romantic, Johannes is very very romantic, his words to Siofre, the kiss, the pledge! oooohhhh I'm soooo happy right now!!! and Siofre! her reaction was amazing, I'm so pleased! lol. I loved it that she went from Magister to Honnie in less than a minute, she's giving in!
I really think his own private pledge to her has alot to do with the shape, color and markings of the artifact, I can't wait to find out! I'm so excited! Can't wait for the next chapter. GREAT, WONDERFUL writing!
Sam
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
Thank you! I enjoy writing Malcolm -- he seems to write himself -- and it's really fun to be able to step back into that period.I'm glad you enjoyed the romantic bits, as well. They are growing ever closer.Thank you very much for reviewing!
Fun chapter, indeedy!!!The conversation with Siofre and Bridie and then the one with her and Johannes warmed my heart fully. His declarations to her about his pledges, both verbal and in his heart, were very sweet. I'm sure she must know by now that he is truly enamoured with her. However, I can still see her giving him the time and space to come to her fully.LOVE, LOVE, LOVE MALCOLM!! He has me grinning from ear to ear with his tales to the wizard and his retelling of his meeting with him. He's such a hoot. And I'd have to agree with Siofre that his witch caught him well. haha.
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
I'm glad you enjoyed both the romance and the humor in this chapter. I think that Siofre is very aware now of his increasingly strong feelings for her. We'll see where that knowledge might lead.I'm glad that you found Malcolm and his tales a hoot. He's fun -- he practically writes himself.Thanks for the review!
Such an awesome chapter! I looooove it!!! The ceremony performed by Siofre was very special and I'm glad they didn't need any witnesses. I think some of the "magic" of the moment would have been lost if others had been around. And the artifact sounds very intriguing. I do hope we'll learn more about that as the story progresses. We are one step closer to having Siofre and Johannes together. SWEEEEET!!!!!Thanks for the update!
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
You're welcome! I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter! They are, indeed, closer now!
thank you, thank you, thank you!! I loved loved this chapter, it's very sweet and so interesting to learn all of this about Siofre and Tyree Clan. It was very funny that he was unsure about her wanting to adopt him lol, and I can't wait to find out what does the artifact mean, I'm sure it has to do something with their bond, I hope so at least!. I'm sooo glad Malcolm is going to be in the next chapter, I miss him! lol. Can't wait to read more, thanks!Sam
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
Yeah, he sure didn't want her thinking of him as her son! LOL! And she was glad that he was happy that he'd be closer to her than to any others in the clan. (Yay -- my javascript emoticons are working again! LOL!)It's been fun writing Malcolm in this coming chapter, so I hope you'll enjoy it.Thanks for the review!