Twenty-Four: The Prince Family Past Meets the Tyree Clan
Chapter 24 of 32
MMADfanSiofre, Malcolm, Johannes, and Lydia picnic, and Lydia tells Johannes more about the Prince family.
ReviewedTwenty-Four: The Prince Family Past Meets the Tyree Clan
Johannes waved his wand and cast a warming charm.
"Oh, thank you, Johannes," Lydia said in appreciation, pulling her fluffy pink shawl closer around her shoulders and draping her long bright blue cloak so it covered her legs more. "It is quite a cool breeze up here...but beautiful."
"We could walk," Johannes suggested. "It might warm us up a bit." He gestured over the ridge. "We could see if we can find Malcolm and Siofre and catch up with them. They should be easy enough to see." There were only a few scrubby trees and some bushes on that side of the hill...or mountain...and on the slope facing it, so it was not difficult to spot someone else clambering around on the hillside, and even to see boats approaching the coastline. It was easy to see why this hill fort had been built.
"Oh, we could, but Malcolm jumps around so, particularly when he's in his collie form," Lydia replied.
"We don't have to catch up with them, then." Johannes stood and held out his hand.
Lydia reached up and took it, pulling herself to her feet. "Thank you. All right. I'm sure you'd prefer to be walking with Siofre, though. You could have gone with them. I wouldn't have minded."
Johannes shrugged. "I believe that Malcolm was glad to have some time with his grandmother. And I enjoy your company. I would not have wished to leave you alone, either."
"Alone with a chocolate walnut cake?" Lydia asked with a laugh. "That wouldn't have been a trial, believe me!"
"It was delicious," Johannes agreed.
Lydia drew her wand and cast a charm over their picnic area. "Saving the rest from the birds or other animals," she explained, hooking her arm through his. "We might want a little more later."
"So, Malcolm was about to tell me the name of this mountain when he became distracted by the meat pies," Johannes said. "Do you know it?"
"Yes, it's an easy one: Ben Tyree. It's the highest mountain on the estate, over three thousand feet, and it has the oldest fortification. It also is one of the bordering points of the estate. If you look to the southeast, that land is part of a Muggle conservation project."
"What do the Muggles think of this land?" Johannes asked.
"I wouldn't know, although I gather it's of no interest to them and they barely remark its existence. There are very old charms and wards protecting the estate. Except, of course, for the Summer Walkers. They've been allowed access to parts of the property for a long time, and there's a spot to the northeast of here where they traditionally camp when they pass through."
"Summer Walkers?" Johannes asked.
"Highland Travellers. Like . . . Tinkers." When Johannes looked at her blankly and shook his head, Lydia said, "They're like Scottish gypsies. Muggles sometimes have problems with them, I understand. Wizarding folk, too, I suppose." Lydia shrugged. "But the Tyrees have always welcomed them. Anyway, this mountain is Ben Tyree, and that valley to the northwest there," she said, pointing, "is Glen Tyree."
"It was always called Ben Tyree?"
"I don't think so. I think it had some other name a long time ago, but I don't remember it. If you look at some of the oldest maps of the estate, it may be there. But it's been Ben Tyree for at least seven hundred years, I think."
"The fort is old?"
"Almost two thousand years, I think. They weren't Tyrees on this land then. But there may have been some ancestors to the clan among them. Tyrees kept the fort in good shape for a long time, though, this one and a couple others, since they were very good lookout points. When there were troubles with Muggles or the English. Thankfully, those times are a long time since, as Siofre might say."
"The way that Siofre speaks, though, the troubles with the English are not so long ago. She sometimes speaks as if they might come to the gates and try to take the estate."
Lydia laughed. "It has been more than two hundred years, but her great-grandfather fought off some pureblood English wizards who thought they'd take advantage of the union between Muggle Britain and Scotland to take some Scottish wizarding lands. The Tyrees had to fight hard to keep this land from being stolen from them, and appeal to the British Ministry for Magic brought them no relief. The Ministry wasn't interested in what was right...they probably would have been just as happy if the Highland Tyree lands were taken by English wizards. The Tyree children, including Siofre's grandfather, were hidden in the castle's tunnels and then evacuated to the island until the English finally were driven off. The Tyrees also lost relatives, both Muggle and wizarding, during the Muggle battles of seventeen forty-five and forty-six. Some of them were murdered outright by British soldiers, murdered in their homes and fields, not killed on a battlefield. Siofre was raised on those stories. And it wasn't that long ago, really, not in terms of generations."
"I see . . . Do you know the English families that tried to take the estate? Which ones?"
Lydia chuckled softly. "Oh, yes. Prince. Malfoy. Rosier. Those were the main ones."
"Prince? Your family?"
"Yes. But the Tyrees welcomed me warmly when Murdoch brought me home and married me. They were more than just gracious, you understand. It was more than simple good manners...though their manners would have had them treat me civilly, in any case. And perhaps some wouldn't recognise the warmth behind their words and actions...Siofre is positively effusive compared to her father, though her mother was more open with her feelings...but they were welcoming, and far more than my own family were at the time, though Bertrand did try."
"Siofre told me that you had been in London for a while, that you were studying music?"
"Yes, music and acting. I worked in . . . well, not to put too fine a point on it, I worked playing piano wherever I could get paid to. So I played piano in a small theatre, and I played in a pub, and sometimes I played in what one might politely term a house of pleasure."
"In a, I do not know the English, in einem Bordel?"
"A brothel, yes." She looked up at him, a very slight smile on her face. "You are shocked?"
"Ah, surprised."
"That was the only entertainment I provided, you understand, Johannes. I played piano in the bar there. And I only did that a short time, when I . . . well, I needed the money. My brother sent me some a few weeks after I began working there. I believe someone told my family he'd seen me, or that I was seen there . . . anyway, I quit that job. It wasn't so bad, I suppose, although I did get a little unwanted attention occasionally. I was rather a pretty girl then."
"You still are pretty," Johannes said.
Lydia laughed. "No, not really. A bit too plump, and a bit too old, to still be pretty."
"You are pretty still. And your age, it is fine. For the figure, you are . . . comfortable, yes? Not fat. And your face, that is lovely, with a beautiful smile."
"You know, Johannes, you are good for a witch" Lydia said, squeezing his arm. "But back then, I was also young, and youth has its own attractions..."
"As does age, with some. With some, age only can increase them."
"That is true. But I was young, and I was pretty, and I had many, many dreams. I would work, and I would scrimp and save, and I would take classes at the Academy of Magical Musical and Dramatic Arts...that was before they separated and WADA stayed in London whilst MAMA moved to Cardiff..."
"WADA and MAMA?"
"Wizarding Academy of Dramatic Arts and Magical Academy of Musical Arts. I think it's a pity they divided, but they both survived. Anyway, I took classes when I could, and I even eventually had a few private students in piano . . . I had several wonderful, exciting years, then I made a very foolish mistake, the mistake of a very naive young witch who thinks she's very worldly. I fell in love."
"Falling in love can be a very good thing."
"It can be, yes, but I fell in love with an older man who . . . he said the right things, you know. All the sweet words and phrases a girl wishes to hear from her lover. But he didn't love me, and he didn't care that I loved him, except that there were advantages to him."
"I am sorry."
"Well, I was so enamoured of this wizard, I didn't care for anything else. I thought that my entire life revolved around him and always would. That he barely noticed me in his orbit except when he wanted something, I didn't see. I was glad for what time he would spare me . . . I . . . I truly believed that it was only a matter of time before we would marry...or if not marry, then live together as husband and wife. He had already set me up in nicer rooms than the one I'd had over a pub. I thought we were quite bohemian, the two of us together . . . but we weren't really together. And I became pregnant. When I told him, I was so happy. He was shocked, but then feigned happiness. He left my rooms to purchase champagne, and he never returned. He vanished from London.
"I was alone. I didn't know what to do. I wrote my brother and told him that I had to see him. Bertrand came down to London. I told him . . . he was upset, but he wished to help me. He spoke to my parents, but they wanted nothing to do with me. He sent me a little money, but truly, it was so little, it almost made me more desperate. But his own wife was pregnant, and although we were pureblood, we never had the same standing as the Malfoys or Blacks, and Father held a tight fist around the family purse, such as it was. I knew that Bertrand had sent all that he could afford, and likely against my parents' wishes, as well."
"It is hard to imagine what you must have been enduring," Johannes said.
"That is when Murdoch came to me and proposed marriage. At first, although I was desperate, I refused him. But he had always liked me, he said, and he claimed that he believed that no other witch could ever make him a happier husband. So I married him and I fell in love with him. I believe that I did make him happy. I certainly was, even if my life was not what I had dreamed of when I was a girl. I had so wanted to be a performer, an artist . . ."
"You still are an artist," Johannes said. "Your touch is everywhere in the house. Siofre comments on it. And your music is beautiful, whether you play what you have written or something else."
"Thank you. It does bring me some happiness and satisfaction," Lydia said. "Anyway, after we married, only a few weeks, actually, I lost the child."
"I am very sorry."
"I grieved and I felt guilty. But Murdoch was very good to me, and Bridget was so kind. She became like my own mother then, but better, even if that sounds a wicked thing to say."
"No. Your own mother did not treat you as a mother should a daughter."
"But despite the circumstances under which I entered their household, and the fact that my great-grandfather would have gladly killed any Tyree and taken their lands, Bridget and Séaghán welcomed me warmly as their son's bride, and they both remained as good to me as ever, and they were glad to see their son happy with me."
"I am glad. The man, the wizard who left you, did you ever see him again?"
Lydia nodded. "He returned to London several years later with a French wife in tow. A very young, very wealthy French wife, an orphan, whose guardian was pleased to have her marry a handsome Englishman. They did have a family, but from what I learned from friends, he was not a good husband to her. I have seen him at times over the years, though I have never spoken to him. He behaved as if I were a stranger to him, and so he has remained to me. He has become quite fat, and his face has fallen apart, all blotchy red and sagging as if made of slowly melting wax. Still dresses like a popinjay, though."
"It is indiscreet of me to ask, but now I am curious about his identity."
Lydia smiled crookedly. "Well, I did whet your curiosity, so I suppose it wouldn't be fair to leave a Ravenclaw in that state of ignorance. His name is Eustacio Lockhart."
"My first years teaching, I taught a Meretricio Lockhart, a tall, blond wizard."
"That is his grandson."
"Hm." Johannes caught sight of Siofre and Malcolm on a hillside opposite them, Malcolm in his smooth collie form, sable, black, and white, racing back and forth. "What is it that they are doing?"
"Playing fetch, I believe," Lydia said.
"Malcolm plays fetch?" Johannes asked, looking amused.
Lydia laughed.
"I do not see a stick or a ball," Johannes said, watching puzzled as Malcolm raced off after nothing.
"Siofre Disillusions it."
"She Disillusions it? Why?"
"Seems more sporting, I suppose. A challenge for Malcolm. And it amuses Siofre," Lydia said with a laugh.
"I cannot imagine being an Animagus," Johannes said as they ambled down the hill, looking for a way to join the others on the hillside opposite. "It must be an unsettling experience the first time, or for the first dozen times."
"Malcolm was very keen on it," Lydia said. "He hoped he'd be something he termed 'exciting,' but I don't think he was disappointed when he found his form. He certainly enjoys it!"
"I remember. He was working with Minerva on it during that year he taught Defence...my final year at Hogwarts. He kept mentioning things like hippogriffs and dragons," Johannes said with a chuckle. "I do not believe that Minerva had much hope that he would achieve it, but he did."
"I think we all should have guessed he'd be a dog of some sort...it suits him."
"It is funny that the house-elves call him like an Animagus all of the time," Johannes remarked as he helped Lydia down a short but steep drop.
"You mean, Little Collie? They have always called him that, since he was a child. I think it is a play on his name, Malcolm, Colm, Collie. His grandfather was Collum." Lydia shrugged and put her arm through Johannes's again. "Perhaps he took his form from his nickname, at least partly."
Johannes laughed. "That is funny. Maybe they could see the collie in him."
Lydia shook her head. "I don't know. House-elves are funny creatures. You never know what they're capable of. I think they hide a lot . . . but they love us. Ours do, anyway."
"We never had house-elves," Johannes said. "I did not know any until I taught at Hogwarts."
"My Uncle Severus had one, but she was old when I was a girl. She never mated, and when she died, that was the last of the Prince house-elves. Drusus hoped that when he married Mabelle, they'd get one of the Black house-elves, but I don't think they ever did. I know he's hoping that Eileen will marry Giles Black, bring in some of the Black family fortune...or at least some of the Black social standing, even though Giles isn't the most prominent among them...but Philomena told me that there are rumours going around that Eileen's rejected Giles. There's even talk that she's seeing a Muggleborn, or a Muggle-lover, or something. Someone her father would find unsuitable, anyway."
"Good for her. I hope that she finds some happiness."
"If Drusus keeps out of her life, she might," Lydia said. "If she's as lucky as I was, she will lead such an unsuitable life, her Prince family won't want to have anything to do with her. Then maybe she'll be as happy as I have been, find a new family, have wonderful children, grandchildren, great-grandchildren . . ."
"It doesn't seem as though Eileen has quite your spirit, though, your joie de vivre. I do not know if she could defy her father's wishes and create her own life. But she might be able to find some happiness. We will both hope for that for her."
"I wish I knew her . . . other than a few times from a distance in Diagon Alley, I haven't seen her since she was, well, since shortly after she was born. I think that was the last time I saw Drusus, too, at least to speak to. It's as though all the worst Prince traits were distilled in him. A pity, too, since Louisa, his mother, she used to be nice enough. Not as likeable as Sally, but . . . well, it isn't fair to compare sisters, I think. I am looking forward to seeing Sally and Bertrand next week, though. I'm glad there are so many things going on right now, with preparing for the party, and now Malcolm's impromptu visit, or I'd just be a bundle of nerves, just waiting for them to arrive!"
"I look forward to meeting them both. When is the last time you saw them?" Johannes asked.
"About seven years ago. After Murdoch died. I just needed to see our boy, you know? So a couple months after the funeral, I went out to New Zealand and visited them both for a few weeks. They said then that they thought they'd be back within the next year or so . . . but they were so involved in things there. They were happy. But oh, I am very glad they're returning now!"
"Siofre is, too, I believe."
Lydia nodded. "I know. I'll be glad to have you meet more of the family, as well. Phoebe will be arriving on Monday, and Siofre has invited Lachina to come stay all week...she and Phoebe are quite close friends."
"Lachina . . . that is another cousin of Siofre's, yes?"
"Yes. One of her younger cousins...a rather distant cousin, but a Tyree. She's about Minerva's age, a couple years older, I think. She's a jeweller in Aberdeen. She does metal and gem charming, as well as jewellery design...Phoebe is also a metal charmer. But Lachina is a very talented witch, and Siofre is quite fond of her."
"I look forward to meeting them, then...and Connor and Elisabeth and their son. The only visit they have made recently, I was not here."
"Liam loves the estate. I know he would enjoy it if you would show him some of the gardens."
"He is five?"
"Six."
"I will show him the gardens he might most enjoy, and I will bring him to the quads' garden and ask him if he has any ideas for it. He might have an idea of things he would enjoy, too."
"That is kind of you."
"Not at all. I like children." Johannes gestured toward Siofre and Malcolm. "I believe Malcolm and Siofre are done with their games now." Malcolm had returned to his ordinary form, and the two were climbing over some large rocks, though it looked as though it would have been easier to go around them. Malcolm reached up a hand to help Siofre down. She looked very small and fragile to Johannes, though he knew she was strong and sturdy despite her height. "I hope that Malcolm does not allow Siofre to fall."
"No, I'm sure he won't. And Siofre's quite agile. She scrambles about these hills in almost all weather. I do worry about her a bit more now that old Jag isn't around to go with her. I think they're coming over to meet us...why don't we find a nice place to sit and wait for them?"
Johannes removed his loden cloak, casting a charm to keep it dry, and spread it on the somewhat damp ground. He cast a warming charm as Lydia took a seat, folding her legs under her. Johannes, though, stood, watching the other two approaching, but his eyes focussed on Siofre. Lydia was right: Siofre was agile, light and lithe. To Johannes, it seemed that Siofre's feet barely touched the ground, and to him, she was the most beautiful thing within view. The most beautiful thing he had ever seen. She had removed her short peaked cap and stuffed it in the pocket of her tweedy brown and green cloak, and her hair seemed to float about her head with the wind as she sped over the rocks and through the bracken. Her tartan skirts with their many pleats were shortened to mid-calf to ease her clambering about on the hills. Siofre was beautiful, intelligent, talented, and breathtakingly alive, and at that moment, Johannes wanted to cross the green grass and grey rock between them and catch her in his arms and hold her.
"You look happy, Johannes," Lydia said, looking up at him.
Pulled from his thoughts, Johannes looked down. He blinked and nodded, then sat beside her, one foot tucked under him, resting one arm on his other raised bent knee, but still watching Siofre.
"Yes. I am. I am happy."
"And in love?" Lydia asked.
"Perilously so, but happily, and I would not change it. She has me, Lydia," Johannes said softly. "Forever. Whether she knows it or ever acknowledges it. It does not matter. I will love her and honour her and serve her with all my being for as long as we both walk this earth."
"You are a romantic, Johannes."
Johannes turned his head and looked at her, smiling slightly. "If I were not before, love for Siofre has made me one."
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126 Reviews | 8.24/10 Average
Dear MMADfan, I love this story! Do you plan to write more chapters in the future? I would love to see it finished.
I really hope you update soon, you write such wonderful fanfiction and I find myself rereading some of the old ones hopefully your next update will be near in the future for this as well as LVS
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
Thank you! I do hope to update both stories soon!
I really hope you update soon, you write such wonderful fanfiction and I find myself rereading some of the old ones hopefully your next update will be near in the future for this as well as LVS
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
Thank you very much,
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
!I will definitely try to get a few chapters of Charming the Scottish Garden and LVS posted this autumn. I'm sorry for the wait. It's very good to know that people are still reading them and will be here to read the new chapters when I (finally!) get them written. (Life's not been conducive to writing in the last couple years, sadly.)I really appreciate the note! I will do my best to get a new chapter up very soon.
Response from uma (Reviewer)
Yes I have been keeping up with your stories. I especially liked RAM itself , although I should let you know or perhaps you do know. But I read on ff.net and I usually keep with the newest MMAD fiction, I recently came across one that had taken a parts of your story and added it to theirs, I commented saying I read it before to which the author promptly deleted my comment. Just thought you should know as even though I am no writer I felt bad about something like that. However I shall eagerly await your next update :)
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
Would you mind emailing me or messaging me through ffnet to let me know which story it is, if you remember the title? I would appreciate it. I'm very glad that you like RAM!
Response from uma (Reviewer)
i do not have an account on FF.net :/ sorry, i usually just go as a guest i already signed up on alot of new pages. And i could read the stories just as easily, But the Name of the Story is Even in Death by Albus P.W.BDumbledore1891. You take a good look at chapter 5
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
Thanks very much! :-) I appreciate the tip!
First a new chapter of LVS and then CSG- I am in heaven! As much as I want to see Siofre and Johannes admit their feelings for each other, I enjoyed the "push-pull" of this chapter. The way the talk of age differences turned to them, Siofre wanting to take his hand but not, sitting close on the bench- all of it a wonderful buildup. 5 stars!
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
I'm glad it made you happy and you're liking the "push-pull"!I'm hoping to update at least two chapters a month -- more if I can -- alternating amongst the WIPs I have going. I am resisting the sudden onslaught of plot bunnies that are begging me to write more RaMverse fics set during the immediate post-RaM time period, like CSG is.Thanks for the review! It's encouraging!
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
I'm glad it made you happy and you're liking the "push-pull"!I'm hoping to update at least two chapters a month -- more if I can -- alternating amongst the WIPs I have going. I am resisting the sudden onslaught of plot bunnies that are begging me to write more RaMverse fics set during the immediate post-RaM time period, like CSG is.Thanks for the review! It's encouraging!
Best birthday present, ever!!! An update for this and it's a very shippy Siofre/Johannes chapter. woooo hoooI think this line was absolutely brilliant:Siofre found herself smiling back, and her heart beating faster at the sight of him. Could she really give him up to another witch?NOPE, she can't give him up to another because her heart already belongs to him and he holds hers as well. I wasn't too fond of the ADMM discussion. Siofre unnerves me when she speaks of Minerva and Albus's relationship, especially in this context. I know Malcolm is her favorite but it almost felt like she wasn't thrilled with Albus marrying Minerva, even though it's what makes her happiest and clearly they adore one another. sigh. Oh well ... I'm still happy for Siofre and Joannes, awwww.
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
Hi! Glad to give you a good birthday prezzie! :-)What Siofre is not thrilled with is Albus not marrying Minerva. It's not that she has objections to their not being married, but she's afraid that Minerva wants marriage & Albus ain't askin' -- and she's right, at this point. But Minerva is being Stoic and sensible, and since she won't talk to Siofre about it, Siofre's not about to give her advice. She's also just plain worried that Minerva will end up having a broken heart or have some other sadness in her life because of the relationship. She loves Minerva and doesn't want to see her hurt -- she cares about Albus, but Minerva's her granddaughter, so she's Siofre's priority in her heart, not Albus, even if she doesn't feel it's her place to bring up her worries with Minerva.As you know from LVS, Siofre and Johannes will eventually be happy together -- Johannes's policy of being steadfast and patient pay off, and Siofre will never have any worries that he did not come to her freely, or that he might have been better off with someone else. But there's a bit of story between now & then, so I'd better say no more -- I'm afraid I'll leak spoilers! LOL!Thanks for the review!
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
Hi! Glad to give you a good birthday prezzie! :-)What Siofre is not thrilled with is Albus not marrying Minerva. It's not that she has objections to their not being married, but she's afraid that Minerva wants marriage & Albus ain't askin' -- and she's right, at this point. But Minerva is being Stoic and sensible, and since she won't talk to Siofre about it, Siofre's not about to give her advice. She's also just plain worried that Minerva will end up having a broken heart or have some other sadness in her life because of the relationship. She loves Minerva and doesn't want to see her hurt -- she cares about Albus, but Minerva's her granddaughter, so she's Siofre's priority in her heart, not Albus, even if she doesn't feel it's her place to bring up her worries with Minerva.As you know from LVS, Siofre and Johannes will eventually be happy together -- Johannes's policy of being steadfast and patient pay off, and Siofre will never have any worries that he did not come to her freely, or that he might have been better off with someone else. But there's a bit of story between now & then, so I'd better say no more -- I'm afraid I'll leak spoilers! LOL!Thanks for the review!
I didn't realize until just now how much I have truly missed this story. But I will be patient and constant. Also, yaaaaaaaaaaaaaay! CFP
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
Thank you! I'm glad you liked it. I've actually missed it, too.Thanks for ... um, I mean, CFR!
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
Thank you! I'm glad you liked it. I've actually missed it, too.Thanks for ... um, I mean, CFR!
YAY!!! I couldn't believe it when I got the message for the update, it's really here! A new chapter! :) Thank you! I loved it, the long wait was more than worth it because this chapter is just perfect. I always love when these two have their little moments, it's so cute. I loved getting to know a little more about Siofre's thoughts and feelings, I love that she's just as anxious and ready as Johannes is, I can't wait to see how they finally come together. I loved that he was firm about wanting to spend the afternoon with her and didn't let her get away with working alone. I can't wait for the next chapter, I hope it won't be too long a wait :)
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
Hi! I'm so glad you enjoyed it!Yes, Johannes is becoming gradually more assertive, but without being pushy or aggressive about it, and always with Siofre's good in his mind. I, too, hope it will not be too long a wait for another chapter of CSG! Thanks for letting me know you enjoyed the chapter!
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
Hi! I'm so glad you enjoyed it!Yes, Johannes is becoming gradually more assertive, but without being pushy or aggressive about it, and always with Siofre's good in his mind. I, too, hope it will not be too long a wait for another chapter of CSG! Thanks for letting me know you enjoyed the chapter!
I'm not quite sure if Lydia has three children or only one - Bertrand - are her others Conner and someone else? I got a bit confused when Soifre was explaining her children - seemed to me she miscarried a lot and that Bertrand was the only child - but then you said he was the youngest, so I got confused.
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
I need to reread the chapter & make sure that I haven't mis-typed something. If I have, I'll go in and make a correction! Thanks!Lydia has one child, Bertrand, and he has two children, Phoebe and Conner. Conner's married to Elisabeth and they have one boy, Liam (who grows up to be Eoghan's father).
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
I think the plethora of children, grandchildren, and other relatives may simply have overwhelmed the synapses. hee! In the previous chapter, Siofre does say that Bertrand was Lydia & Malcolm Tyree's only child, and then in this chapter, she speaks of Bertrand being married to Sally (Longbottom) and the two of them having Connor & Phoebe. Charles Prince is Bertrand's cousin (Charles's father was Bertrand Prince, Lydia's brother, for whom she named her son), and Charles is married to Sally's sister Louisa. (And this is why Severus is related to Eogan in two ways -- through the Princes & the Longbottoms. Bertrand's cousin and Sally's sister are Eileen Prince's grandparents, thus Severus's great-grandparents, and Bertrand and Sally themselves are Eoghan's great-grandparents.) Yeah, can get confusing!
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
I'll just take your word for it and go forward - it was confusing - whew! Thanks for explaining in simple terms - you know sometimes I need a map. *smirks*
*snip*“I may need to take additional measures,” Siofre said. “And the spells I cast will only be effective as long as they are in the house. From what I understand, he drinks, then comes home mean. On good nights, he passes out before he does more than shout and make a scene. The nosy neighbour turns a blind eye to the husband’s behaviour, though he surely must know of it. Any road, I did what I could to make sure that if he does come home drunk, he passes out straightaway upon crossing the threshold. If he tries to take a drink at home, he’ll become ill. Gwyneth claims that when he’s not drinking, he’s moody, but otherwise fine. Most of the spells I cast were aimed at his drinking—making the consequences miserable for him. I cast a few protective spells around Gwyneth, and I gave her an emergency Portkey, as well. If Cadoc becomes violent or frightens her in any way, she can Portkey to her brother and sister-in-law’s home.”“Why would she stay with such a brute?” Johannes asked.“She does love him, or the man she remembers marrying,” Siofre replied, “but she is expecting a baby. It was partly for her baby’s sake that I tried to persuade her to leave the man, but she . . . she has her reasons, I suppose.”“He hits her or hexes her and she is pregnant?” Johannes asked, even more appalled than he had been. “The man should be . . . he should be . . . I do not know a suitable punishment, but he does not deserve the family if he cannot treat them with the love and respect that he should. He should be their protector!”Siofre twitched a slight smile. “Perhaps a lecture in gentlemanly behaviour might do him some good . . . in a few weeks, after the man has ceased drinking. If we can manage that.” I hate to say it, but nothing fixes an abuser unless the abuser WANTS to be fixed - only THEY can truly heal themselves - all the abusee can do is leave - and the woman, in my opinion, is being foolish and selfish - and abusive to her unborn child. I can not STAND lazy, selfish women like this that would rather live in hell than do something better for their kids.
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
Okay, since we know that Lydia is Slytherin, and Johannes is Ravenclaw - I simply MUST know what our Siofre is, my guess, Ravenclaw or Gryffindor - or perhaps Slytherin.... but I'm putting my coin on Ravenclaw.
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
Yes, she's a Ravenclaw. :-)You're right about abusers. Siofre's trying to address some of the underlying causes of his drinking, hoping that that will help, as well as doing something about the drinking itself. We shall see what happens with that.Let's see . . . here's the passage from RaM ("A Spree") where Siofre and Johannes meet:Johannes laughed as the three witches all agreed that every wizard still had a little boy in him. Siofre looked up at the tall, sandy-haired wizard.“Don’t know you. You’re foreign, aren’t you?” The words were blunt, but her tone friendly.“I am from Germany, ma’am,” Johannes said in his friendly manner. “Johannes Birnbaum, at your service.”“Ah, the Herbology wizard. Ravenclaw Head of House, aren’t you? Heard good things about you. Siofre Tyree, Ravenclaw myself,” she said, holding out her hand, which Johannes took and bent over in a formal bow.As Johannes straightened, Minerva apologised. “I am sorry, Grandmother. I hadn’t realised that you two hadn’t met.”
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
Ah, I should have remembered this - well then, my coin was well placed - Ravenclaw indeed.
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
Indeed! You're a good 'claw spotter! ;-)
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
Am I? Seems I've been spoiled with a few good ones in my life. *winks*
*snip*A few moments later, the two stepped out into the sunshine, and Johannes saw that they had arrived at a gabled cottage of three stories. Unlike the main house with its towers and turrets, this house was not all stone. It was a combination of half-timbering and uncut natural stone of different colours—quite unusual for Scotland, in Johannes’s experience—but very lovely on this woody hill. It seemed half-grown from the land and the surrounding woods.Ok that right there is freaking AWESOME!
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
*snip*“Hmph. Still, it is not hers, and it is desolate.” She looked around her. “This is . . . isolated and private, but not set apart the way that island is. And that other, that is Dumbledore’s island. Do you know its name? Eilean Tèarmunn. It means ‘Refuge Island.’ A sanctuary from the wizarding world. Not even a Post Owl can get through to it. That is fine as far as it goes, but for Minerva, I would like her to have a place she could come that is hers if she needs it, and not just that island of Dumbledore’s. She can use the cottage or not, as she likes—and bring Dumbledore with her if she wishes.”Ahhhhh, NOW I am starting to understand the Tyree witches... forward thinking, ahead of their time, true Gaelic women of power - equal power - no woman should rely on a man - yes, now I am seeing the true Soifre. Besides all that, I'm glad she is looking out for Minerva - though I know Dumbledore wouldn't dream of hurting his love, but still, Minerva should have her own place.... and if Soifre has the space, and buildings, why not? Makes perfect sense. I wish I could live here! I'm insainly jealous!
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
*snip*“You think Minerva might not want it? Even if she uses it seldom, it will be here for her. It can be a holiday cottage for now, if she likes, but she will want a family one day and a home to raise her children."*winces*
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
The shell house is amazing, really amazing!
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
Hi,
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
! I'm glad you liked the cottage and the shell house. :-)Yes, typical of Tyree witches is that sense of independence, and Siofre has it in spades. She wants to help give Minerva opportunities and that home just of her own. As you say, she has the space, so why not?Yes, Siofre has no crystal ball to see into the future, and she does envision one with Minerva having children of her own. It's a wistful sort of moment for those of us who know what the future does hold for Minerva.
*snip*I hate maths. Maths makes me sleepy and I itch all over. I think I’m allergic,” Lydia said.Siofre barked a laugh. “And that is why I will do the calculations, as always. You’d think we didn’t do this every month.”“I do my very best to forget,” Lydia said pitifully.I can so relate to Lydia here... hate math... haaaaaaaate it.
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
*snip*“I am keeping much rushes, though, here and along the edge opposite,” Johannes said, pointing. “They are good for the animals, for the fowl and fishes, to have them here.”He is absolutely correct - far too many people cut all the natural vegetation out of a pond and kill it, even putting up cement walls around it - turns the water into piss pea soup and basically kills it - thank you for keeping him realistic and knowledgable - a real herbologist! A naturalist!
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
LOL! Yes, I'm allergic to math, too -- but sadly have had to work for many years in jobs that required me to sit there and "itch" while using it. Unfortunately, although I hate it, I'm still not abysmal at it. Although I suppose that's good . . . to a point!Glad you like Johannes and his care for the natural balance and all the living things, plant and animal. One of the things he enjoys is knowing how plants fit into an ecosystem, and what plants can do for various critters. He loves to encourage life, so he certainly wouldn't deaden a pond by cutting out all the vegetation and putting in concrete! I'm glad you appreciate this aspect of the story. :-)
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
I've seen far too many gardeners that remind me of some Wal-Mart version of a garden - potted plants that attract NO insects and some concrete and plastic fountain sitting on asphalt - and these 'gardens' are so alien to the natural surroundings and support no life and take up so .... here I am ranting - sorry - anyway, glad to see Johannes is a REAL naturalist/gardener.I also love the explanation of the alarm charms or wards that they are going to put around the pond to keep the babies from drowning - very cool!
Okay - so - lets see, I loved seeing Gertie again, and had to roll my eyes too at Malcolm's silliness - she's a good sport, putting up with him I think - and as usual, I always get embarassed when folks at the table have kissed others at the table but aren't with those at the table - as you know, so I had even more respect for Gertie for sitting through all that as Mal and Katherine talked about his kissing - eh... what else ... Katherine was interesting and I'd like to have learned more about her role in Grindelwald's defeat - as well as her work with Dumbledore but I know that's a minor thing here.I liked how Johannes stumbles around with his English and makes silly errors - chip off the old brick and such - and I like how you've made his speach a bit odd, which it should be, since English isn't his first language.I admit, I'd like to know more about why Grindelwald was after him - recruiting him, but perhaps we'll learn more about that as the story progresses.But most importantly, I'd really curious about WHY Siofre has captured his attention - its a bit of a puzzle to me - I guess I just don't see much of her personality yet or something - besides that she's a very commanding witch - got that alpha personality - perhaps that's it? At any rate, I'm sure I'll learn more as the story progresses.And as always, enjoying your writing, but then again I'd never have started reading Scottish Garden if I wasn't already completely taken with your writing - so no surprises there!
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
Yes, you'll eventually learn more about what happened to Johannes's family & why.It's partly the commanding personality, and partly just "chemistry" -- or maybe it's "magic," or magical resonance. Malcolm can be a trial, but usually in a funny way, so Gertrude actually enjoys it when he's "exasperating." haha!Glad you're enjoying it!
Oh dear, Malcolm is meddling already...
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
haha! His heart's in the right place!
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
Seems most of your characters, OC or Canon, are meddlesome! HAHA! I love EEET! For once it isn't Dumbledore meddling - thankfully - though I suppose right now he's too busy with Minerva to think about much else. *grins*
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
Yes, Dumbledore is busy between Minerva, Hogwarts, Minerva, the Ministry, Minerva . . . well, you get the idea!
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
Mmmmhmmmm - might have to go back and read RaM just to see how busy he is!
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
This is a bit post-RaM, but you're right: if you reread the end of RaM, you'll get an idea of what may be still be keeping him busy these days!
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
All good stuff if I remember correctly.
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
Oh, very good, indeed!
Morgan and Fiona had quads? What on earth? Magical fertility treatment or something? You simply MUST explain that!I am liking this, loving the timid flirtation from Johannes and the direct flirtation or demands of his time, from Siofre - pretty cute. I love romance in the RamVerse - I don't have to worry about rejection!
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
Yes, indeed! And everyone suspects they used potions or a spell or something, but they claim not. Minerva calls them "the litter." (Gareth mentioned that tidbit about Minerva's humor to Severus back in LVS somewhere. Severus liked it. hee!)I'm glad you're enjoying the romance. Johannes is rather smitten, and Siofre isn't indifferent, either! Thanks!
A very nice introduction and very cute to see Johannes having an eye on Siofre - looking forward to more Dumbledore and McGonagall!
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
Thanks! Glad you enjoyed it. Albus & Minerva will eventually make "personal appearances" in the fic, but not for a while yet -- although Minerva shows up by reference fairly frequently. And there's one of your favorite HP characters coming up soonish, too! :-)
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
Ooooh - Gertie???
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
Ah, she's a RaMverse character, but yes, she does, indeed, show up! And relatively soon, actually -- sooner than the canon HP character I was thinking of. In fact, there are two canon characters appearing together in that chapter who I'm pretty sure are among your faves. :-)
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
Ooooh! I'm so excited!!!!!
I was very happy to see an update to this story! And what a fun chapter it was. Apparently Minerva isn't the only one who doubts Malcolm's stories. Poor Malcolm. I think Malcolm was holding back in the fight or he would have taken all of the other wizards out easily:). BTW-go Johannes! Loved the spell with the wood. I think he should have left Cam up on the wall. I imagine these lads are in trouble if Gertrude and/ Siofre hear about it. Thanks for a fun read.
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
Hi! Glad you enjoyed it! Yes, Malcolm could have easily taken them, but it wasn't until it got "serious" that he went ahead and took 'em out. Yes, Johannes might not be much with the traditional defensive spells, hexes, jinxes, and the like, but he's got some imagination and skill with wood, so he didn't do too badly!Thanks!
Well, that certainly wasn't how I was expecting the evening to end. Action packed for sure!!I loved the details you put in about the African dragons. It amazes me how you always come up with new and interesting ideas to add to the RaM universe.I can't believe how quickly the little bar conversation turned ugly. Cam certainly was a nasty bugger and I'm glad Johannes was the one to pin him to the wall. Poor Aberforth, though. I pity him having to clean up all that mess. hahaWonder what Siofre would think if she heard about all that drama??? lol
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
I do wonder what Siofre would think, too! Johannes and Malcolm don't want to find out, that's for sure! Somehow, I can imagine that that story might make its way to her ears, whether the "lads" want it to or not! Yes, Cam was just ready for a confrontation there, wasn't he? And pretty nasty in his comments and innuendos, too. Glad you liked Johannes's trick with the wood. He might not be much at fighting, but he is a clever wizard, nonetheless -- and experienced with wood, as well. Glad you liked the African dragons. I've been looking for an opportunity to stick those into a chapter with Malcolm since I wrote his "application letter" to Dumbledore back in RaM, so it was really fun to finally give them a bit of space and hear a small portion of the story of Malcolm's first dragon ride. Thanks very much for the review!
OMG!! an update!! I was so happy when I saw the email in my inbox! Thanks!I loved this chapter, Malcolm is always so much fun, poor Johannes I don't think he likes the kind of fun Malcolm brings lol. This was a very nice chapter, so funny! I can't wait to read more Siofre and Johannes, they are getting closer by the chapter! LOL.thank you for updatingSam
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter! You're right: Johannes doesn't have the same idea of "fun" that Malcolm does!Thanks for the review! (I was glad to finally be able to write & update! )
I had been holding off reading this chapter and "saving it" since you had mentioned your muse had left you, but tonight I caved in and I'm so glad I did. Johannes' vision of Siofre and his confession to Lydia was breath-taking. How apropos that the jerk that used and left Lydia was a Lockhart. She did much better with her Murdoch. It was a little jarring to read the name Severus back in this time period. I hope you find your muse again. I really miss the updates. Take care.
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
I am currently struggling with writing a gift exchange fic that's finally beginning to sort of come together. I hope that once I have that written, maybe my muse will come back for the other stories. I miss them, too.I am glad that you enjoyed the chapter! Your review brought the characters back into my mind, and Lydia's story, so maybe that will help grease the wheels of the fanfic section of my brain! I figured that a Lockhart would be very good at cutting and running when the going got tough even back then. I thought it might be an interesting reminder of Severus' pureblooded side of the family, too, to have mention of the Prince relative he was named after, as well as the Princes' earlier tangles with the Tyree clan. We will also hear more about Eileen and her father in an upcoming chapter -- hmm, do I hear my muse tiptoeing about? LOL!Anyway, thank you very much for your review. I'm glad you enjoyed it -- and sorry that you haven't got another one to look forward to immediately, but I haven't vanished, and I do hope to continue with both this and LVS very soon. :-)
I'm really enjoying your story. Thank you for sharing your talent :)
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
Hi,
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
! Thank you for your note! I appreciate it, and I'm really glad you're enjoying the story.
Ooo lovely chapter. I like the way you are building the sexual tension and bonds between them. Fascinating ritual; I'm curious about the artifact. I'm assuming/hoping it has greater meaning than is usual.
I see Malcolm is in the next chapter - thank you!
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
Thanks,
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
!The next chapter has a bit more about the artifact -- and Siofre's curious about it, as well.I'm glad you're looking forward to seeing Malcolm again. I hope you enjoy it. He'll be popping in and staying for a couple chapters. :-)Thanks for the review!
LOL God Malcolm is amazing! lol, that tale and the show lol, he's great! I'm so glad he's back and I love it that Siofre calls Gertrude his witch! that's so sweet.
Now the most important part, OMG!! that was sooooo romantic, Johannes is very very romantic, his words to Siofre, the kiss, the pledge! oooohhhh I'm soooo happy right now!!! and Siofre! her reaction was amazing, I'm so pleased! lol. I loved it that she went from Magister to Honnie in less than a minute, she's giving in!
I really think his own private pledge to her has alot to do with the shape, color and markings of the artifact, I can't wait to find out! I'm so excited! Can't wait for the next chapter. GREAT, WONDERFUL writing!
Sam
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
Thank you! I enjoy writing Malcolm -- he seems to write himself -- and it's really fun to be able to step back into that period.I'm glad you enjoyed the romantic bits, as well. They are growing ever closer.Thank you very much for reviewing!
Fun chapter, indeedy!!!The conversation with Siofre and Bridie and then the one with her and Johannes warmed my heart fully. His declarations to her about his pledges, both verbal and in his heart, were very sweet. I'm sure she must know by now that he is truly enamoured with her. However, I can still see her giving him the time and space to come to her fully.LOVE, LOVE, LOVE MALCOLM!! He has me grinning from ear to ear with his tales to the wizard and his retelling of his meeting with him. He's such a hoot. And I'd have to agree with Siofre that his witch caught him well. haha.
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
I'm glad you enjoyed both the romance and the humor in this chapter. I think that Siofre is very aware now of his increasingly strong feelings for her. We'll see where that knowledge might lead.I'm glad that you found Malcolm and his tales a hoot. He's fun -- he practically writes himself.Thanks for the review!
Such an awesome chapter! I looooove it!!! The ceremony performed by Siofre was very special and I'm glad they didn't need any witnesses. I think some of the "magic" of the moment would have been lost if others had been around. And the artifact sounds very intriguing. I do hope we'll learn more about that as the story progresses. We are one step closer to having Siofre and Johannes together. SWEEEEET!!!!!Thanks for the update!
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
You're welcome! I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter! They are, indeed, closer now!
thank you, thank you, thank you!! I loved loved this chapter, it's very sweet and so interesting to learn all of this about Siofre and Tyree Clan. It was very funny that he was unsure about her wanting to adopt him lol, and I can't wait to find out what does the artifact mean, I'm sure it has to do something with their bond, I hope so at least!. I'm sooo glad Malcolm is going to be in the next chapter, I miss him! lol. Can't wait to read more, thanks!Sam
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
Yeah, he sure didn't want her thinking of him as her son! LOL! And she was glad that he was happy that he'd be closer to her than to any others in the clan. (Yay -- my javascript emoticons are working again! LOL!)It's been fun writing Malcolm in this coming chapter, so I hope you'll enjoy it.Thanks for the review!