Chapter Seven: A Folly
Chapter 7 of 32
MMADfanA folly, tea, and poppyseed cakes.
Chapter features Siofre and Johannes.
Chapter Seven: A Folly
Siofre and Johannes walked through the woods, making their way through bracken and over fallen tree branches and lichen-covered rocks.
"There was a good path here, once upon a time," Siofre said. "I will have to set Fandenz to fixing that. Just clear a bit away so the walking is easier, of course, not make a formal path."
"That is good. Walking through the trees like this, it is so pleasant, very natural. It would distract to have a path of stone, I believe. The pine needles make a lovely path."
"Aye, they're springy," Siofre agreed.
The two continued to walk and talk, and after about twenty minutes, Johannes stopped and looked around. "This is an old orchard."
"'Tis what remains of the apple orchard here. Since we have orchards closer to the house, we don't maintain it," Siofre said. "We are near our goal now." She pointed, and Johannes could just make out a structure ahead of them.
A few moments later, the two stepped out into the sunshine, and Johannes saw that they had arrived at a gabled cottage of three stories. Unlike the main house with its towers and turrets, this house was not all stone. It was a combination of half-timbering and uncut natural stone of different colours...quite unusual for Scotland, in Johannes's experience...but very lovely on this woody hill. It seemed half-grown from the land and the surrounding woods.
"This was my great-uncle's home," Siofre said. "He was an artist, a sculptor, and he wanted his own house away from everyone. He built this, designed it himself. No one has lived in it since he died back in . . . ninety-three. But the elves come down a few times a year and do maintenance, cleaning, and so on. Still, it is quite old-fashioned. Not really livable yet."
"You have plans to live here?" Johannes asked, puzzled.
"Nay, not for myself and Lydia, of course not. We will stay at the house, as always. But I have been thinking a lot about my granddaughter recently. Not Dorcas...she lives with Maisie, and that's probably best for them both...but Minerva."
"Minerva?"
"Aye. She is at that school of hers almost the whole year long. She used to have a flat in London when she worked at the Ministry, but now she has nowhere to call her own. An independent witch such as Minerva should not feel reliant on others. She is always welcome at home with Merwyn and Egeria, of course, and she visits Melina or Murdoch or other relatives, and comes to visit me, as well, but . . . I thought a place to call her own. This place." Siofre looked up at Johannes, waiting for his response.
"Ah. I see . . . yes." Johannes nodded.
"What are you not saying, Professor?"
"Ah, it is not for me to say anything."
"Come, come, Professor! I would not bring you here and ask for your opinion if I did not want it."
"I believe that Minerva is pleased to spend her time at Hogwarts, and also there is a place, an island, that Professor Dumbledore has. I believe that during holidays, she spends much time there."
"Aye, his island. It is a land out of time and awareness, Professor. It is not a home where one can invite visitors casually...have you ever been invited there or known anyone whom Minerva has invited?"
"I believe that Malcolm and Gertrude visited for a day last summer," Johannes said tentatively.
"Hmph. Still, it is not hers, and it is desolate." She looked around her. "This is . . . isolated and private, but not set apart the way that island is. And that other, that is Dumbledore's island. Do you know its name? Eilean Tèarmunn. It means 'Refuge Island.' A sanctuary from the wizarding world. Not even a Post Owl can get through to it. That is fine as far as it goes, but for Minerva, I would like her to have a place she could come that is hers if she needs it, and not just that island of Dumbledore's. She can use the cottage or not, as she likes...and bring Dumbledore with her if she wishes."
Johannes twitched a smile and quickly suppressed it. He had heard Minerva's grumbling the previous year when she and Albus had returned to Hogwarts from a visit to her Grandmother Siofre. Not only had Siofre given them separate bedrooms, which would have been appropriate and understandable, but she had put them in far distant parts of the house. Not that that could have stopped Albus and Minerva from spending the night together if they had wanted to, but Minerva had taken offence at it. Johannes had the impression that Albus had been merely amused.
"It is a fine offer for her," Johannes said. "I do not doubt that she will appreciate it."
"I think she will appreciate it more once the place is fixed up. It needs a new kitchen, and the plumbing is antiquated . . . I suppose that when we have the plumbing at the main house re-charmed, I will have the wizard redo all of the plumbing here, too." Malcolm had been able to quiet Lydia's pipes, but he said that the plumbing charms were deteriorating and they should have a specialist come out and look at them before they either had no water pumping into the house or, worse, had a back-up.
"Perhaps you should let Minerva decide whether she wishes to accept your offer before you invest in the decorating," Johannes said.
"You think Minerva might not want it? Even if she uses it seldom, it will be here for her. It can be a holiday cottage for now, if she likes, but she will want a family one day and a home to raise her children. Knowing that she has this house will open up more possibilities for her, I am sure. I will do some redecorating, too, of course. I thought . . . perhaps you might assist. I'd like the gardens redone." Siofre walked toward some brambly looking plants and reached out one hand to them. "There used to be primrose everywhere. So beautiful. Now they are just . . . scraggly. Primrose, Scottish primrose, is my favourite flower. Could you do that? Bring them back? And do some gardens? An herb garden and flowers?"
"Ja, natürlich, and the primrose is easy to bring back to health." Johannes crouched and felt of the soil. He crumbled some in his left hand and passed his right hand over it. "The soil is only tired. We will wake it up," he said, standing and turning to her with a smile. "Your primroses will again be beautiful."
"And perhaps you would help with the redecorating? I know that it isn't gardening, and it isn't a part of your job, but I would value your assistance and advice. Minerva will want to change some things, I am sure, but I would like it to be comfortable for her right from the start. Would you mind?"
"I would enjoy that very much, Madam Tyree."
Siofre's expression brightened. "Lydia will no doubt wish to help, as well, when I speak to her about it. She enjoys such things. You haven't seen the formal dining room yet, but she redid that a few years ago with new colours and patterns, and it is a most pleasing room. And I believe you have seen her suite...including her bedroom," she said with a smirk, "and those she decorated herself, as well. She has a nice sense of colour and of comfort. I think she will be rather excited to have a new project, and one where she may have a bit freer rein than she does in the main house, where tradition dictates certain parameters."
"You haven't spoken with Madam Lydia yet?" Johannes asked.
"I will. We can discuss it tonight at supper. Come, let's go in and take a quick look around before we go on to our next destination."
Siofre gave Johannes a quick tour of the house, which was well laid out, though almost bare of any furniture. The ground floor included a wing that extended behind the cottage and contained the usual kitchen and pantry, but also a sort of atelier, a studio where the artist had created his sculptures. Siofre opened a door that led out of the studio to the back garden, and showed Johannes a large kiln.
"I haven't any idea what to do with this," she said. "I suppose we will just leave it and let Minerva decide."
"It is a nice cottage," Johannes said. "I believe that Minerva will be pleased. You are right, though: it needs work."
"It will be a birthday present. It will be her thirty-fifth birthday this year. Her birthday is in October, so we have time, but I hope we are finished sooner so that she may have use of it this summer." Siofre drew out a watch from around her neck and looked at it. "We don't have more time now, though." She looked up at Johannes. "I had wanted to walk the way down, but . . . I will Apparate us part of the way."
Johannes nodded his assent, and Siofre took his arm and stepped closer. He tried not to notice how warm her hands were, or how close she was standing. He placed his right hand on her left arm and closed his eyes, and the sensation of Side-Along Apparition came over him. It was a smooth Apparition, though, and perhaps the most comfortable Side-Along he had ever experienced.
"You can open your eyes now, laddie, we're there!" Siofre said with a smile.
Opening his eyes, Johannes could feel himself blushing, and he let go of her arm, which he had been grasping more tightly than he realised.
Siofre didn't seem to notice, however, and gestured broadly at the area around them. "So . . . what does the Herbologist think? We really should have waited until May, but we can return then."
Johannes looked around them. "It is beautiful." He crouched and touched some of the delicate-looking plants, gently fingering through them, caressing the small buds. "Such variety."
Siofre knelt beside him. "Machair."
"Pardon?"
"It is called a machair," Siofre explained. "This area here above the beach, beyond the bog behind us, these plants . . ." Her hand brushed the surface of the plants, and her fingertips met Johannes's hand. Johannes felt the heat rise in his face.
Siofre glanced at him a moment, then stood. "There is a book in the library that I can show you, today or tomorrow, with a chapter on the flora and geology of the machair."
Johannes rose from his crouch, looking away across the machair, certain that his blush was evident and hoping that the cool sea breeze would hide it. "It is very beautiful. I do recognise a few. Butter flowers...no, buttercups they are called. And there are orchids here. It must be wonderful when it all is in full bloom."
"We will return in a few weeks, then," Siofre said briskly. "But this is not our ultimate destination today."
"No?"
"We shall walk the rest of the way," Siofre said. She looked up at him, a teasing sparkle in her eyes. "You do wish to accompany me, don't you, Professor?"
He bowed slightly. "Indeed."
She raised her hand, and he offered her his arm. Resting her hand lightly on his elbow, Siofre led Johannes down the beautifully carpeted machair toward the beach.
"This is wonderfully fertile country," Siofre said. "There is another area, similar to this, where my father grew bere...that barley you like. It was the best bere you could ever taste, sweetly nutty, with a lovely texture. Now, though, the machair has been returned to nature. That was a long time since."
"Perhaps we...you...might grow bere again. What you do not use, I am certain you could sell."
"It would improve the estate's coffers," Siofre said with a nod. "But I do not know . . . I have a green thumb and do well enough with a vegetable garden, but I never learned very much about farming. I believe it takes special skills. So my cousin Martin always tells me when I visit and admire his fields."
"There are certain skills required," Johannes agreed, "but you could learn them. And you have house-elves who would lighten your work quite a bit. Fandenz is quite talented with plants of all sorts, it seems. If you require cash crops, I am certain you could generate a good income. Even this summer, you will have more produce from the kailyaird than you and Madam Lydia could possibly use, even sharing it with friends and neighbours. There are, no doubt, restaurants or shops that would appreciate your vegetables and be glad to purchase them."
Siofre looked up at him. "It would be good to have another source of income. Not that we are wanting, of course. But there are expenses, you know, and it is good to put something aside for the family's future."
"Then I will earn my keep and my commission and find you a market for your produce. We can begin immediately...there are many lovely greens that are ready now. And the bere? You would like to grow that again?"
"Aye, perhaps . . . but not here on this machair. I will show you the other sometime. And we can discuss it." Siofre sounded doubtful.
"I had a farm in Germany, as well as the greenhouse. We grew cabbages, potatoes, and such. I did not grow a grain, but when I was a boy, I would help my uncle with his farm, and he grew wheat. I believe I could start the bere crop for you."
"We will think about it. I will discuss it with Lydia and ask Merwyn's advice, too."
"It is a large investment," Johannes said. "It is good to consider it carefully."
"And here we are," Siofre said as the rounded the base of a small hill.
"Very charming," Johannes said with a smile. "It is a . . . a . . . what do they call them?" He wanted to say it was a silly, but he knew that didn't sound quite right.
"It is a folly. A shell house." Siofre smiled at Johannes's reaction. "My grandfather had it built for my grandmother for their fifth wedding anniversary in seventeen eighty-two. Come. I'll show you."
The two walked up the shell-inlaid path to the small stone and shell house. It consisted of three rounded sections, and shells decorated the window frames and the doorframe. The shutters were closed, but Siofre waved her wand and opened the shutters and the door. As they stepped into the tiny house, Siofre waved her wand again and opened all of the windows, which swung outward, letting in a fresh breeze.
Inside, the little house was divided neatly into three rooms; each floor was inlaid with both shells and glittering stones in pleasing patterns, geometric and figurative. The centre room, which was the largest, had Poseidon with his trident, surrounded by dolphins, sea serpents, and white-crested waves. The floors of the two rooms on either side each had different scenes of selkies and sea-witches, and fish, dolphins, seabirds, and seals.
The tables, chairs, and benches were all decorated with shells, as were the walls, window frames, fireplaces, and even the ceiling. It was wonderfully whimsical, and Johannes was smiling widely in delight as he gazed at it all.
"This is one part of the grounds we never neglect," Siofre said. "We enjoy it most in the summer, but even in winter, with fires in the fireplaces and the lamps lit, their light glittering off the mother-of-pearl and the other shells, some warm rugs and soft cushions, it is a beautiful place for a casual supper. The waves crash, the wind blows, and in here, it is warm and cosy . . ."
"And romantic. I mean to say, I am sure it must be," Johannes added hastily.
"It is." Siofre ran her hand along one of the shell-encrusted window sills. "My grandmother loved the sea, and this was my grandfather's gift to her, so that she could come down and enjoy the machair, the beach, and the water, no matter the weather. We sometimes have our midsummer bonfire on the beach down below. The last one we had here was a year or two before Mother died. We had fireworks, too. She enjoyed it very much, and it was good for her to be able to come inside and watch from the shelter of the shell house."
"You will do a bonfire here again this year?" Johannes asked.
Siofre shook her head. "I don't know. I haven't thought about it. Now let's see if Multry and her wee ones . . . yes, here we are," she said, opening a shell-inlaid cupboard door. She pulled out a basket and looked into it. "Tea, Professor? We have tea . . . poppyseed cakes . . . and here, some cold milk."
"Yes, thank you," Johannes said. He took the bright blue napkins from the basket and placed them on the nearest small round table, then he helped Siofre set out cups, saucers, and cake plates. He held her chair for her, then he sat down opposite as she poured the tea.
"This is lovely, Madam Tyree. It is kind of you." He put a poppyseed cake on each little plate.
"Nonsense. We need our tea, and you need a bite to eat, too, after working in the fresh air. And we both had a long walk." She stirred her tea. "It has been a good afternoon. I should thank you."
"I enjoyed it very much." He looked at her over the rim of his cup as he took a sip of tea. She was lovely, her hair slightly windblown, her cheeks rosy, and her eyes so bright. He smiled at her. She had enjoyed his company, it seemed, and he most assuredly had enjoyed hers. He took a steadying breath. "I will be forever grateful to Malcolm for referring me to you. Working here is a pleasure beyond the work itself. I am very glad that I have made your acquaintance, yours and Madam Lydia's."
Siofre nodded. "I am, too. And although it may be a convenience for you to distinguish between the two Madam Tyrees by referring to us as Madam Lydia and Madam Siofre, perhaps you might simplify it."
Johannes raised his eyebrows inquiringly.
"I would not be offended if you simply used my first name," Siofre said, "and I doubt that Lydia would mind if you addressed her so, either. It would be easier." Her cheek twitched as she gave a crooked smile. "And you would sound a bit less like one of our house-elves . . . and more like a friend."
"I accept. Thank you. And you must call me by my Christian name," Johannes said.
"Johannes. That is like John, isn't it?"
"Ja. It is one version of John."
Siofre smiled. "I like the way you pronounce that. 'Tchon.' It is charming."
Johannes blushed.
"Really, I do," Siofre said. "You know, I have heard Malcolm call you something else...Honnie?"
"Yes. It is a sort of nickname a few friends use."
Siofre chuckled. "The first time he said it, I thought he was calling you 'honey'! I was a wee bit taken aback."
Johannes laughed at that. "No, just Honnie."
She nodded. "Would you like another cake?"
"No, thank you."
"More tea?"
He nodded, and she poured.
"May we do something like this again?" Johannes asked. "Perhaps this weekend . . . on Saturday afternoon, I am going to visit a garden I worked on last year. I need only spend a few minutes. If there is work to be done, I will return some other time. Perhaps afterward, I might be able to bring you to tea? If you are not busy, of course."
"I would enjoy that. Thank you." Siofre's eyes sparkled at him from across the table, and Johannes felt exhilarated by her smile.
"It will be my pleasure, Madam Tyree . . . Siofre." Her name seemed a gentle breeze from his lips. He smiled softly. It would be his pleasure.
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Dear MMADfan, I love this story! Do you plan to write more chapters in the future? I would love to see it finished.
I really hope you update soon, you write such wonderful fanfiction and I find myself rereading some of the old ones hopefully your next update will be near in the future for this as well as LVS
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
Thank you! I do hope to update both stories soon!
I really hope you update soon, you write such wonderful fanfiction and I find myself rereading some of the old ones hopefully your next update will be near in the future for this as well as LVS
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
Thank you very much,
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
!I will definitely try to get a few chapters of Charming the Scottish Garden and LVS posted this autumn. I'm sorry for the wait. It's very good to know that people are still reading them and will be here to read the new chapters when I (finally!) get them written. (Life's not been conducive to writing in the last couple years, sadly.)I really appreciate the note! I will do my best to get a new chapter up very soon.
Response from uma (Reviewer)
Yes I have been keeping up with your stories. I especially liked RAM itself , although I should let you know or perhaps you do know. But I read on ff.net and I usually keep with the newest MMAD fiction, I recently came across one that had taken a parts of your story and added it to theirs, I commented saying I read it before to which the author promptly deleted my comment. Just thought you should know as even though I am no writer I felt bad about something like that. However I shall eagerly await your next update :)
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
Would you mind emailing me or messaging me through ffnet to let me know which story it is, if you remember the title? I would appreciate it. I'm very glad that you like RAM!
Response from uma (Reviewer)
i do not have an account on FF.net :/ sorry, i usually just go as a guest i already signed up on alot of new pages. And i could read the stories just as easily, But the Name of the Story is Even in Death by Albus P.W.BDumbledore1891. You take a good look at chapter 5
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
Thanks very much! :-) I appreciate the tip!
First a new chapter of LVS and then CSG- I am in heaven! As much as I want to see Siofre and Johannes admit their feelings for each other, I enjoyed the "push-pull" of this chapter. The way the talk of age differences turned to them, Siofre wanting to take his hand but not, sitting close on the bench- all of it a wonderful buildup. 5 stars!
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
I'm glad it made you happy and you're liking the "push-pull"!I'm hoping to update at least two chapters a month -- more if I can -- alternating amongst the WIPs I have going. I am resisting the sudden onslaught of plot bunnies that are begging me to write more RaMverse fics set during the immediate post-RaM time period, like CSG is.Thanks for the review! It's encouraging!
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
I'm glad it made you happy and you're liking the "push-pull"!I'm hoping to update at least two chapters a month -- more if I can -- alternating amongst the WIPs I have going. I am resisting the sudden onslaught of plot bunnies that are begging me to write more RaMverse fics set during the immediate post-RaM time period, like CSG is.Thanks for the review! It's encouraging!
Best birthday present, ever!!! An update for this and it's a very shippy Siofre/Johannes chapter. woooo hoooI think this line was absolutely brilliant:Siofre found herself smiling back, and her heart beating faster at the sight of him. Could she really give him up to another witch?NOPE, she can't give him up to another because her heart already belongs to him and he holds hers as well. I wasn't too fond of the ADMM discussion. Siofre unnerves me when she speaks of Minerva and Albus's relationship, especially in this context. I know Malcolm is her favorite but it almost felt like she wasn't thrilled with Albus marrying Minerva, even though it's what makes her happiest and clearly they adore one another. sigh. Oh well ... I'm still happy for Siofre and Joannes, awwww.
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
Hi! Glad to give you a good birthday prezzie! :-)What Siofre is not thrilled with is Albus not marrying Minerva. It's not that she has objections to their not being married, but she's afraid that Minerva wants marriage & Albus ain't askin' -- and she's right, at this point. But Minerva is being Stoic and sensible, and since she won't talk to Siofre about it, Siofre's not about to give her advice. She's also just plain worried that Minerva will end up having a broken heart or have some other sadness in her life because of the relationship. She loves Minerva and doesn't want to see her hurt -- she cares about Albus, but Minerva's her granddaughter, so she's Siofre's priority in her heart, not Albus, even if she doesn't feel it's her place to bring up her worries with Minerva.As you know from LVS, Siofre and Johannes will eventually be happy together -- Johannes's policy of being steadfast and patient pay off, and Siofre will never have any worries that he did not come to her freely, or that he might have been better off with someone else. But there's a bit of story between now & then, so I'd better say no more -- I'm afraid I'll leak spoilers! LOL!Thanks for the review!
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
Hi! Glad to give you a good birthday prezzie! :-)What Siofre is not thrilled with is Albus not marrying Minerva. It's not that she has objections to their not being married, but she's afraid that Minerva wants marriage & Albus ain't askin' -- and she's right, at this point. But Minerva is being Stoic and sensible, and since she won't talk to Siofre about it, Siofre's not about to give her advice. She's also just plain worried that Minerva will end up having a broken heart or have some other sadness in her life because of the relationship. She loves Minerva and doesn't want to see her hurt -- she cares about Albus, but Minerva's her granddaughter, so she's Siofre's priority in her heart, not Albus, even if she doesn't feel it's her place to bring up her worries with Minerva.As you know from LVS, Siofre and Johannes will eventually be happy together -- Johannes's policy of being steadfast and patient pay off, and Siofre will never have any worries that he did not come to her freely, or that he might have been better off with someone else. But there's a bit of story between now & then, so I'd better say no more -- I'm afraid I'll leak spoilers! LOL!Thanks for the review!
I didn't realize until just now how much I have truly missed this story. But I will be patient and constant. Also, yaaaaaaaaaaaaaay! CFP
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
Thank you! I'm glad you liked it. I've actually missed it, too.Thanks for ... um, I mean, CFR!
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
Thank you! I'm glad you liked it. I've actually missed it, too.Thanks for ... um, I mean, CFR!
YAY!!! I couldn't believe it when I got the message for the update, it's really here! A new chapter! :) Thank you! I loved it, the long wait was more than worth it because this chapter is just perfect. I always love when these two have their little moments, it's so cute. I loved getting to know a little more about Siofre's thoughts and feelings, I love that she's just as anxious and ready as Johannes is, I can't wait to see how they finally come together. I loved that he was firm about wanting to spend the afternoon with her and didn't let her get away with working alone. I can't wait for the next chapter, I hope it won't be too long a wait :)
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
Hi! I'm so glad you enjoyed it!Yes, Johannes is becoming gradually more assertive, but without being pushy or aggressive about it, and always with Siofre's good in his mind. I, too, hope it will not be too long a wait for another chapter of CSG! Thanks for letting me know you enjoyed the chapter!
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
Hi! I'm so glad you enjoyed it!Yes, Johannes is becoming gradually more assertive, but without being pushy or aggressive about it, and always with Siofre's good in his mind. I, too, hope it will not be too long a wait for another chapter of CSG! Thanks for letting me know you enjoyed the chapter!
I'm not quite sure if Lydia has three children or only one - Bertrand - are her others Conner and someone else? I got a bit confused when Soifre was explaining her children - seemed to me she miscarried a lot and that Bertrand was the only child - but then you said he was the youngest, so I got confused.
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
I need to reread the chapter & make sure that I haven't mis-typed something. If I have, I'll go in and make a correction! Thanks!Lydia has one child, Bertrand, and he has two children, Phoebe and Conner. Conner's married to Elisabeth and they have one boy, Liam (who grows up to be Eoghan's father).
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
I think the plethora of children, grandchildren, and other relatives may simply have overwhelmed the synapses. hee! In the previous chapter, Siofre does say that Bertrand was Lydia & Malcolm Tyree's only child, and then in this chapter, she speaks of Bertrand being married to Sally (Longbottom) and the two of them having Connor & Phoebe. Charles Prince is Bertrand's cousin (Charles's father was Bertrand Prince, Lydia's brother, for whom she named her son), and Charles is married to Sally's sister Louisa. (And this is why Severus is related to Eogan in two ways -- through the Princes & the Longbottoms. Bertrand's cousin and Sally's sister are Eileen Prince's grandparents, thus Severus's great-grandparents, and Bertrand and Sally themselves are Eoghan's great-grandparents.) Yeah, can get confusing!
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
I'll just take your word for it and go forward - it was confusing - whew! Thanks for explaining in simple terms - you know sometimes I need a map. *smirks*
*snip*“I may need to take additional measures,” Siofre said. “And the spells I cast will only be effective as long as they are in the house. From what I understand, he drinks, then comes home mean. On good nights, he passes out before he does more than shout and make a scene. The nosy neighbour turns a blind eye to the husband’s behaviour, though he surely must know of it. Any road, I did what I could to make sure that if he does come home drunk, he passes out straightaway upon crossing the threshold. If he tries to take a drink at home, he’ll become ill. Gwyneth claims that when he’s not drinking, he’s moody, but otherwise fine. Most of the spells I cast were aimed at his drinking—making the consequences miserable for him. I cast a few protective spells around Gwyneth, and I gave her an emergency Portkey, as well. If Cadoc becomes violent or frightens her in any way, she can Portkey to her brother and sister-in-law’s home.”“Why would she stay with such a brute?” Johannes asked.“She does love him, or the man she remembers marrying,” Siofre replied, “but she is expecting a baby. It was partly for her baby’s sake that I tried to persuade her to leave the man, but she . . . she has her reasons, I suppose.”“He hits her or hexes her and she is pregnant?” Johannes asked, even more appalled than he had been. “The man should be . . . he should be . . . I do not know a suitable punishment, but he does not deserve the family if he cannot treat them with the love and respect that he should. He should be their protector!”Siofre twitched a slight smile. “Perhaps a lecture in gentlemanly behaviour might do him some good . . . in a few weeks, after the man has ceased drinking. If we can manage that.” I hate to say it, but nothing fixes an abuser unless the abuser WANTS to be fixed - only THEY can truly heal themselves - all the abusee can do is leave - and the woman, in my opinion, is being foolish and selfish - and abusive to her unborn child. I can not STAND lazy, selfish women like this that would rather live in hell than do something better for their kids.
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
Okay, since we know that Lydia is Slytherin, and Johannes is Ravenclaw - I simply MUST know what our Siofre is, my guess, Ravenclaw or Gryffindor - or perhaps Slytherin.... but I'm putting my coin on Ravenclaw.
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
Yes, she's a Ravenclaw. :-)You're right about abusers. Siofre's trying to address some of the underlying causes of his drinking, hoping that that will help, as well as doing something about the drinking itself. We shall see what happens with that.Let's see . . . here's the passage from RaM ("A Spree") where Siofre and Johannes meet:Johannes laughed as the three witches all agreed that every wizard still had a little boy in him. Siofre looked up at the tall, sandy-haired wizard.“Don’t know you. You’re foreign, aren’t you?” The words were blunt, but her tone friendly.“I am from Germany, ma’am,” Johannes said in his friendly manner. “Johannes Birnbaum, at your service.”“Ah, the Herbology wizard. Ravenclaw Head of House, aren’t you? Heard good things about you. Siofre Tyree, Ravenclaw myself,” she said, holding out her hand, which Johannes took and bent over in a formal bow.As Johannes straightened, Minerva apologised. “I am sorry, Grandmother. I hadn’t realised that you two hadn’t met.”
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Ah, I should have remembered this - well then, my coin was well placed - Ravenclaw indeed.
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
Indeed! You're a good 'claw spotter! ;-)
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
Am I? Seems I've been spoiled with a few good ones in my life. *winks*
*snip*A few moments later, the two stepped out into the sunshine, and Johannes saw that they had arrived at a gabled cottage of three stories. Unlike the main house with its towers and turrets, this house was not all stone. It was a combination of half-timbering and uncut natural stone of different colours—quite unusual for Scotland, in Johannes’s experience—but very lovely on this woody hill. It seemed half-grown from the land and the surrounding woods.Ok that right there is freaking AWESOME!
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*snip*“Hmph. Still, it is not hers, and it is desolate.” She looked around her. “This is . . . isolated and private, but not set apart the way that island is. And that other, that is Dumbledore’s island. Do you know its name? Eilean Tèarmunn. It means ‘Refuge Island.’ A sanctuary from the wizarding world. Not even a Post Owl can get through to it. That is fine as far as it goes, but for Minerva, I would like her to have a place she could come that is hers if she needs it, and not just that island of Dumbledore’s. She can use the cottage or not, as she likes—and bring Dumbledore with her if she wishes.”Ahhhhh, NOW I am starting to understand the Tyree witches... forward thinking, ahead of their time, true Gaelic women of power - equal power - no woman should rely on a man - yes, now I am seeing the true Soifre. Besides all that, I'm glad she is looking out for Minerva - though I know Dumbledore wouldn't dream of hurting his love, but still, Minerva should have her own place.... and if Soifre has the space, and buildings, why not? Makes perfect sense. I wish I could live here! I'm insainly jealous!
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*snip*“You think Minerva might not want it? Even if she uses it seldom, it will be here for her. It can be a holiday cottage for now, if she likes, but she will want a family one day and a home to raise her children."*winces*
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The shell house is amazing, really amazing!
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
Hi,
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
! I'm glad you liked the cottage and the shell house. :-)Yes, typical of Tyree witches is that sense of independence, and Siofre has it in spades. She wants to help give Minerva opportunities and that home just of her own. As you say, she has the space, so why not?Yes, Siofre has no crystal ball to see into the future, and she does envision one with Minerva having children of her own. It's a wistful sort of moment for those of us who know what the future does hold for Minerva.
*snip*I hate maths. Maths makes me sleepy and I itch all over. I think I’m allergic,” Lydia said.Siofre barked a laugh. “And that is why I will do the calculations, as always. You’d think we didn’t do this every month.”“I do my very best to forget,” Lydia said pitifully.I can so relate to Lydia here... hate math... haaaaaaaate it.
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*snip*“I am keeping much rushes, though, here and along the edge opposite,” Johannes said, pointing. “They are good for the animals, for the fowl and fishes, to have them here.”He is absolutely correct - far too many people cut all the natural vegetation out of a pond and kill it, even putting up cement walls around it - turns the water into piss pea soup and basically kills it - thank you for keeping him realistic and knowledgable - a real herbologist! A naturalist!
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
LOL! Yes, I'm allergic to math, too -- but sadly have had to work for many years in jobs that required me to sit there and "itch" while using it. Unfortunately, although I hate it, I'm still not abysmal at it. Although I suppose that's good . . . to a point!Glad you like Johannes and his care for the natural balance and all the living things, plant and animal. One of the things he enjoys is knowing how plants fit into an ecosystem, and what plants can do for various critters. He loves to encourage life, so he certainly wouldn't deaden a pond by cutting out all the vegetation and putting in concrete! I'm glad you appreciate this aspect of the story. :-)
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I've seen far too many gardeners that remind me of some Wal-Mart version of a garden - potted plants that attract NO insects and some concrete and plastic fountain sitting on asphalt - and these 'gardens' are so alien to the natural surroundings and support no life and take up so .... here I am ranting - sorry - anyway, glad to see Johannes is a REAL naturalist/gardener.I also love the explanation of the alarm charms or wards that they are going to put around the pond to keep the babies from drowning - very cool!
Okay - so - lets see, I loved seeing Gertie again, and had to roll my eyes too at Malcolm's silliness - she's a good sport, putting up with him I think - and as usual, I always get embarassed when folks at the table have kissed others at the table but aren't with those at the table - as you know, so I had even more respect for Gertie for sitting through all that as Mal and Katherine talked about his kissing - eh... what else ... Katherine was interesting and I'd like to have learned more about her role in Grindelwald's defeat - as well as her work with Dumbledore but I know that's a minor thing here.I liked how Johannes stumbles around with his English and makes silly errors - chip off the old brick and such - and I like how you've made his speach a bit odd, which it should be, since English isn't his first language.I admit, I'd like to know more about why Grindelwald was after him - recruiting him, but perhaps we'll learn more about that as the story progresses.But most importantly, I'd really curious about WHY Siofre has captured his attention - its a bit of a puzzle to me - I guess I just don't see much of her personality yet or something - besides that she's a very commanding witch - got that alpha personality - perhaps that's it? At any rate, I'm sure I'll learn more as the story progresses.And as always, enjoying your writing, but then again I'd never have started reading Scottish Garden if I wasn't already completely taken with your writing - so no surprises there!
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
Yes, you'll eventually learn more about what happened to Johannes's family & why.It's partly the commanding personality, and partly just "chemistry" -- or maybe it's "magic," or magical resonance. Malcolm can be a trial, but usually in a funny way, so Gertrude actually enjoys it when he's "exasperating." haha!Glad you're enjoying it!
Oh dear, Malcolm is meddling already...
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
haha! His heart's in the right place!
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
Seems most of your characters, OC or Canon, are meddlesome! HAHA! I love EEET! For once it isn't Dumbledore meddling - thankfully - though I suppose right now he's too busy with Minerva to think about much else. *grins*
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
Yes, Dumbledore is busy between Minerva, Hogwarts, Minerva, the Ministry, Minerva . . . well, you get the idea!
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Mmmmhmmmm - might have to go back and read RaM just to see how busy he is!
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
This is a bit post-RaM, but you're right: if you reread the end of RaM, you'll get an idea of what may be still be keeping him busy these days!
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All good stuff if I remember correctly.
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
Oh, very good, indeed!
Morgan and Fiona had quads? What on earth? Magical fertility treatment or something? You simply MUST explain that!I am liking this, loving the timid flirtation from Johannes and the direct flirtation or demands of his time, from Siofre - pretty cute. I love romance in the RamVerse - I don't have to worry about rejection!
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
Yes, indeed! And everyone suspects they used potions or a spell or something, but they claim not. Minerva calls them "the litter." (Gareth mentioned that tidbit about Minerva's humor to Severus back in LVS somewhere. Severus liked it. hee!)I'm glad you're enjoying the romance. Johannes is rather smitten, and Siofre isn't indifferent, either! Thanks!
A very nice introduction and very cute to see Johannes having an eye on Siofre - looking forward to more Dumbledore and McGonagall!
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
Thanks! Glad you enjoyed it. Albus & Minerva will eventually make "personal appearances" in the fic, but not for a while yet -- although Minerva shows up by reference fairly frequently. And there's one of your favorite HP characters coming up soonish, too! :-)
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Ooooh - Gertie???
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
Ah, she's a RaMverse character, but yes, she does, indeed, show up! And relatively soon, actually -- sooner than the canon HP character I was thinking of. In fact, there are two canon characters appearing together in that chapter who I'm pretty sure are among your faves. :-)
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Ooooh! I'm so excited!!!!!
I was very happy to see an update to this story! And what a fun chapter it was. Apparently Minerva isn't the only one who doubts Malcolm's stories. Poor Malcolm. I think Malcolm was holding back in the fight or he would have taken all of the other wizards out easily:). BTW-go Johannes! Loved the spell with the wood. I think he should have left Cam up on the wall. I imagine these lads are in trouble if Gertrude and/ Siofre hear about it. Thanks for a fun read.
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
Hi! Glad you enjoyed it! Yes, Malcolm could have easily taken them, but it wasn't until it got "serious" that he went ahead and took 'em out. Yes, Johannes might not be much with the traditional defensive spells, hexes, jinxes, and the like, but he's got some imagination and skill with wood, so he didn't do too badly!Thanks!
Well, that certainly wasn't how I was expecting the evening to end. Action packed for sure!!I loved the details you put in about the African dragons. It amazes me how you always come up with new and interesting ideas to add to the RaM universe.I can't believe how quickly the little bar conversation turned ugly. Cam certainly was a nasty bugger and I'm glad Johannes was the one to pin him to the wall. Poor Aberforth, though. I pity him having to clean up all that mess. hahaWonder what Siofre would think if she heard about all that drama??? lol
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I do wonder what Siofre would think, too! Johannes and Malcolm don't want to find out, that's for sure! Somehow, I can imagine that that story might make its way to her ears, whether the "lads" want it to or not! Yes, Cam was just ready for a confrontation there, wasn't he? And pretty nasty in his comments and innuendos, too. Glad you liked Johannes's trick with the wood. He might not be much at fighting, but he is a clever wizard, nonetheless -- and experienced with wood, as well. Glad you liked the African dragons. I've been looking for an opportunity to stick those into a chapter with Malcolm since I wrote his "application letter" to Dumbledore back in RaM, so it was really fun to finally give them a bit of space and hear a small portion of the story of Malcolm's first dragon ride. Thanks very much for the review!
OMG!! an update!! I was so happy when I saw the email in my inbox! Thanks!I loved this chapter, Malcolm is always so much fun, poor Johannes I don't think he likes the kind of fun Malcolm brings lol. This was a very nice chapter, so funny! I can't wait to read more Siofre and Johannes, they are getting closer by the chapter! LOL.thank you for updatingSam
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter! You're right: Johannes doesn't have the same idea of "fun" that Malcolm does!Thanks for the review! (I was glad to finally be able to write & update! )
I had been holding off reading this chapter and "saving it" since you had mentioned your muse had left you, but tonight I caved in and I'm so glad I did. Johannes' vision of Siofre and his confession to Lydia was breath-taking. How apropos that the jerk that used and left Lydia was a Lockhart. She did much better with her Murdoch. It was a little jarring to read the name Severus back in this time period. I hope you find your muse again. I really miss the updates. Take care.
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I am currently struggling with writing a gift exchange fic that's finally beginning to sort of come together. I hope that once I have that written, maybe my muse will come back for the other stories. I miss them, too.I am glad that you enjoyed the chapter! Your review brought the characters back into my mind, and Lydia's story, so maybe that will help grease the wheels of the fanfic section of my brain! I figured that a Lockhart would be very good at cutting and running when the going got tough even back then. I thought it might be an interesting reminder of Severus' pureblooded side of the family, too, to have mention of the Prince relative he was named after, as well as the Princes' earlier tangles with the Tyree clan. We will also hear more about Eileen and her father in an upcoming chapter -- hmm, do I hear my muse tiptoeing about? LOL!Anyway, thank you very much for your review. I'm glad you enjoyed it -- and sorry that you haven't got another one to look forward to immediately, but I haven't vanished, and I do hope to continue with both this and LVS very soon. :-)
I'm really enjoying your story. Thank you for sharing your talent :)
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Hi,
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
! Thank you for your note! I appreciate it, and I'm really glad you're enjoying the story.
Ooo lovely chapter. I like the way you are building the sexual tension and bonds between them. Fascinating ritual; I'm curious about the artifact. I'm assuming/hoping it has greater meaning than is usual.
I see Malcolm is in the next chapter - thank you!
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Thanks,
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
!The next chapter has a bit more about the artifact -- and Siofre's curious about it, as well.I'm glad you're looking forward to seeing Malcolm again. I hope you enjoy it. He'll be popping in and staying for a couple chapters. :-)Thanks for the review!
LOL God Malcolm is amazing! lol, that tale and the show lol, he's great! I'm so glad he's back and I love it that Siofre calls Gertrude his witch! that's so sweet.
Now the most important part, OMG!! that was sooooo romantic, Johannes is very very romantic, his words to Siofre, the kiss, the pledge! oooohhhh I'm soooo happy right now!!! and Siofre! her reaction was amazing, I'm so pleased! lol. I loved it that she went from Magister to Honnie in less than a minute, she's giving in!
I really think his own private pledge to her has alot to do with the shape, color and markings of the artifact, I can't wait to find out! I'm so excited! Can't wait for the next chapter. GREAT, WONDERFUL writing!
Sam
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
Thank you! I enjoy writing Malcolm -- he seems to write himself -- and it's really fun to be able to step back into that period.I'm glad you enjoyed the romantic bits, as well. They are growing ever closer.Thank you very much for reviewing!
Fun chapter, indeedy!!!The conversation with Siofre and Bridie and then the one with her and Johannes warmed my heart fully. His declarations to her about his pledges, both verbal and in his heart, were very sweet. I'm sure she must know by now that he is truly enamoured with her. However, I can still see her giving him the time and space to come to her fully.LOVE, LOVE, LOVE MALCOLM!! He has me grinning from ear to ear with his tales to the wizard and his retelling of his meeting with him. He's such a hoot. And I'd have to agree with Siofre that his witch caught him well. haha.
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
I'm glad you enjoyed both the romance and the humor in this chapter. I think that Siofre is very aware now of his increasingly strong feelings for her. We'll see where that knowledge might lead.I'm glad that you found Malcolm and his tales a hoot. He's fun -- he practically writes himself.Thanks for the review!
Such an awesome chapter! I looooove it!!! The ceremony performed by Siofre was very special and I'm glad they didn't need any witnesses. I think some of the "magic" of the moment would have been lost if others had been around. And the artifact sounds very intriguing. I do hope we'll learn more about that as the story progresses. We are one step closer to having Siofre and Johannes together. SWEEEEET!!!!!Thanks for the update!
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
You're welcome! I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter! They are, indeed, closer now!
thank you, thank you, thank you!! I loved loved this chapter, it's very sweet and so interesting to learn all of this about Siofre and Tyree Clan. It was very funny that he was unsure about her wanting to adopt him lol, and I can't wait to find out what does the artifact mean, I'm sure it has to do something with their bond, I hope so at least!. I'm sooo glad Malcolm is going to be in the next chapter, I miss him! lol. Can't wait to read more, thanks!Sam
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Yeah, he sure didn't want her thinking of him as her son! LOL! And she was glad that he was happy that he'd be closer to her than to any others in the clan. (Yay -- my javascript emoticons are working again! LOL!)It's been fun writing Malcolm in this coming chapter, so I hope you'll enjoy it.Thanks for the review!