Chapter Twenty-Nine: A Bit of Joukerie-Pawkerie
Chapter 29 of 32
MMADfanLydia announces a new guest who will be arriving for the weekend, causing Siofre some pause. Siofre has her schemes, and she speaks of one of them to Johannes.
Features Siofre Tyree, Lydia Prince Tyree, Johannes Birnbaum, Malcolm McGonagall, Lachina Tyree, Phoebe Tyree.
Chapter Twenty-Nine: A Bit of Joukerie-Pawkerie
"I have some news that might interest you, Lydia hen, about one of your Prince relations," Siofre said, setting down her wineglass as the soup bowls and spoons were house-elfishly removed and replaced with the next course and the appropriate silverware.
"Really? Which one...Drusus?" Lydia guessed.
"Nay, his daughter, Eileen. She is apparently engaged to someone so unsuitable as to be beyond the pale," Siofre said with a smirk, "which, to my way of thinking, can only be a good thing."
"A Weasley," Malcolm guessed immediately. "They're always wonderful for tweakin' a pureblooded snoot."
Siofre's smirk grew. "Nay, even worse."
"A Muggle-born, then," Phoebe guessed. "One of the things I was shocked by when I went to Hogwarts," she explained to Johannes beside her, "was the bizarre prejudice against Muggle-borns. I'd heard there was such a thing, but I'd never actually encountered anyone who had such a belief, myself, and so I thought it had to be something only a few very old-fashioned and ignorant people still believed in. I was quite surprised to see that there were a lot of my contemporaries who had been raised to think that way."
"A naivete that I must say speaks well of your parents," Lydia said with an approving nod, "even if one of them is my own son!"
"So, it was a Muggle-born?" Johannes asked.
"Worse still: a Muggle!" Siofre said, some glee in her face.
"A Muggle?" Lydia asked. "How did she ever even meet one?"
Siofre shrugged one shoulder. "Not a clue, but she's set to marry him, and her father's very unhappy about it. I overheard him with her today...the man has a violent, nasty temper, and she'd be well away from him...and it sounded to me as though his antipathy toward the lad only caused Eileen to become e'en more fond of him. In any case, the last thing I heard before I had to flicker away was her saying that if he tried to interfere with the wedding, she would just run away and marry the man anyway. Sadly, I did not hear his response to that, as Drusus was coming rather close to my little corner, and since I did choose to visit unannounced and unremarked, as well, I thought it most discreet to leave before I was noticed."
"You were in his house?" Phoebe asked, looking alarmed.
"Just outside it, getting a wee keek," Siofre said. "Dinna trespass exactly . . . simply didn't announce myself, jouked beneath the window, and then left without knocking...I doubt that anyone would have stayed after hearing that man thundering on so."
"I wish you would not do such things," Johannes said with a slight grimace. "It seems risky."
Siofre shrugged. "I thought I might learn something of value...and before I arrived, I had not decided not to knock. I thought I would simply see what the situation was before I stepped up to the door."
"And if he had seen you?" Lachina asked curiously. "What would you have said?"
"Just that I was stopping 'round to give him friendly advance notice that he'd be formally notified by the Wizengamot that I was defending Butterworth and would be calling for his neighbourly testimony," Siofre said. "But he dinna see me...and I was Disillusioned, in any case...and no excuse was necessary."
"Was it useful?" Johannes asked. "Did you learn anything you may use?"
Siofre paused to eat a bite of fish. "Not there. Not precisely. But it has helped me decide a course to take."
"What is that?" Lydia asked.
"We'll speak of it soon, we two, later. We dinna want to spoil our dinner with too much talk of such things. I would rather hear, anyhow, what you have done today, all your preparations for the week, and how Brian has got on with the plumbing so far."
Lydia said that Brian Mackintosh had worked about three hours on the plumbing, doing what he could with charms, and the skretchin seemed to be gone, but that Gweller would fetch him again the next day, and bring more pipe and other supplies. "He'll have a lot of the work done before Thursday, but he said he won't be able to finish until next week, after the party, and then he'll get a start on the new plumbing in the orchard cottage, as well."
"Very good," Siofre said, nodding. "And the other arrangements?"
Lydia recounted her latest activities in readying rooms and seeing to food procurement and preparation, as well as naming a few others who had decided at the last minute that they were also coming to the estate's bonfire rather than the celebration held on the island.
"The northie Tyrees will all be here...Donald is over his annual bout of the raging roupies, so he and Norma will be coming with old Rory and the others. Philomena's bringing her great-nephew along with her...a boy named . . . let me think . . . something a bit outlandish, it was . . . Dill? Basil? Alfalfa? No . . . ah, yes, Coriander. I think she wants him to meet some witches outside of pureblood society. She said he's a good lad, well-spoken and polite, educated at Beauxbatons, so I'm trusting her," Lydia added when Siofre raised an eyebrow. "Then Minerva owled this afternoon and said that Albus will actually be able to come on Thursday night, though he probably won't be able to stay overnight." She hesitated a moment, then, after taking a fortifying swallow of wine, Lydia added, "And another old friend of yours also sent an owl today saying he'd be here."
"Who, then?" Siofre asked after waiting a moment for the old friend's name to be added to the list.
"Sorley."
"Sorley Mòr?" Siofre asked, her fork stalled halfway to her mouth.
"Yes. He's coming Thursday afternoon. I think he plans to stay on for young Murdoch's party on Saturday, as well."
Siofre chewed her fish and nodded.
"I haven't seen Sorley Mòr in a long time," Phoebe said. "Not since . . . well, I think he came to Grandfather's funeral, but other than that, I think it must be at least ten years, maybe more."
"He's oft away," Siofre said.
"But he also spends a lot of time on the island still," Lachina said. "I see him now and again when I'm there. You must, too, Siofre."
Siofre picked up her bell and rang for the next course.
"Who is Sorley Mòr?" Johannes asked.
"One of the cousins." Malcolm smirked. "He used to call on Grandmother Siofre when I was a boy. That was before Herbert, of course. Seemed a good sort to me. Used to take me out to the standing stones on the island, and he'd play and sing and teach me some of the old songs. He gave me my first penny whistle, and I still have the drum he helped me to make when I was eight."
"Oh, do you have it here?" Phoebe asked. "I haven't heard you drum in years, it seems. You could play it this week!"
Malcolm shook his head. "Nay, it's down at the Cliffs. But I could pop down and fetch it. There will be better drummers here this week than I, though."
"Still, bring it along," Lachina said. "I especially love it when all the drummers come together and play...sends shivers all over me. Yours will add one more voice to the drumming."
"All right...and maybe we can teach this new Tyree to play a wee bit of something, eh? Start him on my drum!"
"Nein. No. I am not musical. I appreciate it only," Johannes said.
"A tune or two, then...a good song," Phoebe said, "something in German, perhaps?"
Johannes blinked. "I do not sing. I do not know lyrics. Only a few. Nothing for a party."
"Then it'll be dancing we'll have you at," Lachina said, grinning at Johannes. "Some good Scottish ceilidh dancing!"
Siofre chuckled at Johannes's expression. "Dinna perturb the lad. He'll have fun enough in his own way."
"So are you of Tyree now?" Phoebe asked, reaching for a cheese biscuit.
"Aye, but only since a few days." Johannes quirked a small smile. "I am like a newborn here."
"We'll have you feeling right at home at the party, won't we, Phoebe? You'll feel like a real member of the family by the end of the weekend," Lachina said. "We'll introduce you around. Siofre will certainly see to it that you are properly introduced to everyone, I'm sure, but we'll make sure that you meet everyone...or at least, the more enjoyable folk."
"We only invite the enjoyable ones," Lydia said. She thought for a moment, her brow furrowed. "Of course, sometimes others do come. Can't turn away family, after all. And it is open to any Tyree, always understood to be...at least the Beltane celebration is. Not everyone's staying for the birthday party on Saturday."
"But Sorley Mòr is?" Johannes asked, examining the figs and cheese on the plate that Phoebe had passed to him.
"I think so," Lydia replied. "He's a very old friend, as well as a Tyree...a Mackintosh, actually, but Tyree clan Mackintoshes, and his mother was a Tyree, too, wasn't she, Siofre? Your father's first cousin, if I remember right."
"Aye," Siofre said.
"I look forward to seeing him," Malcolm said. "I can show him my Singing Stones."
"Where hae you put him, then?" Siofre asked.
"He'll be staying over at the old gatehouse with a few other Mackintoshes and a couple Mackenzies," Lydia replied.
Siofre nodded. "He should be most comfortable there."
Lydia twitched a smile. "I thought so."
"Which Mackenzies are you putting up in the gatehouse?" Siofre asked.
"Douglas and Alasdair."
"I know them, I believe," Johannes said, "if they are the brothers I taught a few years ago."
"Aye, that's them," Siofre said. "A bit rowdy, but basically good lads. But good to have put them in the gatehouse, Lydia."
"I thought that Sorley Mòr might be a sobering influence on them," Lydia said with a twinkle in her eye.
At that, Siofre and Malcolm both laughed loudly, and Lachina grinned.
"If you want a good influence on those two Gryffies," Malcolm said, "better to put in old Bridie and Auntie Sara."
Siofre chuckled. "They'd likely just run away, affrighted of those two old witches."
"Hamish and Fern Mackintosh will be staying in the gatehouse, as well," Lydia said. "I thought that Sorley would enjoy spending a little time with his niece and nephew."
"It's their first anniversary soon," Phoebe said. "We should do something for them, maybe on Friday?"
Siofre shrugged. "An ye like. I'll leave that to Lydia to decide. I don't want anything to interfere with young Murdoch's party on Saturday, though. It's the first one we've celebrated here in twenty years, so I want it to be special for him."
"Of course," Phoebe said with a nod. "Their anniversary isn't for another few weeks, anyway. We could do something closer to the time."
"If they're not celebrating it just by themselves," Lydia said. "See what they'd want. They may simply want to spend the day alone together . . . celebrating." She winked.
Phoebe smiled. "I wouldn't want to interfere with their enjoyment of their anniversary, of course!"
"By the time you and Declan marry, you'll probably not even want a honeymoon," Lydia said with a sigh. "And your first anniversary...if I ever live to see it...will not still be filled with the flush of new love and discovery. You're already past that." She sighed again.
Phoebe smiled at her grandmother and reached over and patted her arm. "No, we're not past that yet, Grandma, and I'm sure you'll see us marry...in due course...and celebrate many anniversaries with us!"
"Besides," Lachina interjected, "Fern and Hamish knew each other from childhood, and they're still as eager a young couple as I've ever seen."
Siofre chuckled. "I remember their wedding. Seemed they could scarcely wait to be off and away from the rest of us."
Malcolm grinned. "Well, Fern had been insistent that they spend the month before the wedding apart, if you get my meaning, so they were rather keen to begin their honeymoon, Hamish especially."
The others laughed. As the desserts appeared on the table, though, there was a loud clap of thunder.
"We're getting a storm," Lachina said. "No more garden tours today, I'd say."
"I will be glad to continue them tomorrow," Johannes said. "You will be here?"
"In the afternoon. I have to go into the shop in the morning. I have a few commissions I'm working on, and I also have a large piece that I'm trying to finish in time for a show and competition in London this summer. But I'll return here straight from Aberdeen, then after lunch, we can have a nice afternoon, walking through the gardens."
"I'd love that," Phoebe said. "I do love this place, and Grandma tells me you've done a lot since you arrived...and just the little I've seen has been impressive."
"It is a beautiful place," Johannes said, "and your aunt has provided me with much guidance. I am pleased to be able to draw out some of the beauty that is already here and to add a little more where I can."
There was another bright flash of lightning followed almost immediately by a loud crack of thunder.
"I hope you don't plan to Apparate home tonight, Malcolm," Lydia said worriedly. "You might Splinch."
Malcolm shook his head. "I could have Gluffy bring me back, but we might as well stay the night."
"Excellent!" Lachina said. "Now that you're not in Aberdeen any longer, I hardly see you anymore...you might as well be off on your wanderings as at home here in Scotland."
Malcolm gave a crooked grin. "Well, Hogsmeade's as close to Aberdeen as Aberdeen is to Hogsmeade. You could always come by and see me!"
"True enough," Lachina said with a grin, "but I do miss you dropping by the shop and paying me surprise visits."
"You just miss some of the little gifts I'd bring you," Malcolm said.
"Gifts? The last I remember, I paid you a good ten Galleons for that piece of petrified wood you brought by."
"Aye, and that 'piece' was a nice-sized log, and it had some very pretty colours in it...and I challenge you to find any such prize anywhere for so little," Malcolm replied. "And I gave you a number of very nice crystals, too, and that Mackled Malaclaw shell."
"All right, you've got me there," Lachina said, laughing. "But I'm glad you'll be staying tonight."
"So am I," Lydia said. "Does everyone want to go into the music room now?" She looked around hopefully.
"Aye, that would be pleasant," Johannes said.
"Sounds good to me," Phoebe said, pushing back from the table.
"Malcolm had said something earlier about a piece you're writing for Bertrand and Sally...may we hear it?" Lachina asked.
"Of course! I am still polishing it a bit, and it's a pity that Morgan's not here, as there's a part for violin now, but you can have a listen and let me know what you think...Malcolm's joining on the recorder, too."
"I will go up to my study and finish some work," Siofre said, "but I may be down later."
"Must you, Aunt Siofre?" Phoebe asked.
"Weren't you working all day?" Malcolm added.
"She was, since very early," Johannes said.
"Then stay," Lachina urged.
"I still have things to do now, childer," Siofre said briskly. "Much of my work today will be for naught if I don't do more now...and that would be a waste."
"Come, now, leave Siofre be," Lydia said as Phoebe opened her mouth to protest. "She'll join us when she can. Let's just go into the music room now and let her get her work done."
"Come see me before you retire, Lydia, if I am not down afore then," Siofre said. "Just a thing or two to discuss with you."
~*~*~*~*~
Rain rattled against the windows as Siofre wrote in her journal, the one lamp on her desk providing the only illumination as her quill scratched away, outlining steps taken and plans laid, and including a row of figures tallying expenses. She was just subtracting those she had decided not to charge to Butterworth, as they were not strictly necessary to his defence...and some would call them excessively diligent...when she paused. There was another light rap on her door.
Siofre set her quill in its holder and raised her wand, flicking it as she swivelled her wooden desk chair to face the door. She had expected Lydia, but she guessed from the gentle tapping that this was not she.
"Honnie."
"Siofre. I thought you might come join us for a while. Phoebe is playing the piano, Lydia has pulled out a guitar, and Malcolm is playing his penny whistle and singing...not at the same time, of course. The audience is smaller than the performance, although Lachina knows many of the songs and sings along."
"Ach, Honnie, it has been a long day..."
"More reason to join us. If you do not, you will only work more and make the day longer. Surely you have finished what you must. Come down, sit with us, relax before bed. You will sleep the better for it," Johannes said.
"I still have just one or two more things I must do," Siofre said.
"In the morning, when you're fresh. Come down, join us. Sit beside me," Johannes replied.
Siofre hesitated.
"You received my letter?"
"Aye, yesterday evening. Kiera brought it straightaway."
Johannes stepped into the room and closed the door behind him, shutting off the sounds of distant song. "I hope I did not presume too much in my letter, but it was true that I missed you this weekend. It seemed you might also have become accustomed to my company, and glad to have it, too. I wished you to know that your company . . . it is what I will always seek and rather have than any other." In the warm lamplight, his blush was barely evident, but his eyes did not waver from hers.
"You did not presume too much, Honnie," Siofre said softly. She nodded. "I will come down for a while. The figures can wait, and perhaps the conversation with Lydia, as well."
"If I may ask, the conversation with Lydia, what does it concern? May I help in any way?" Johannes asked as Siofre turned and closed her large journal and then turned and faced him again.
"You may ask . . . but help, I dinna know. Perhaps, if Lydia wishes to speak about it. She may need someone to confide in." Siofre removed her glasses and set them down on a stack of books. She gestured toward the other chair, and Johannes sat. "I have decided to have Drusus Prince sent to Azkaban. It may not be my place to decide such a thing, to meddle in such a way, but . . ." She shook her head. "I do not have any prescience, but as I stood there, listening to Eileen and her father this afternoon, I thought that perhaps the only way the lass will ever find any happiness will be if she has some freedom from him now, if she can marry this Muggle lad who seems to love her, spend the first months of her married life in peace . . . p'raps she can break wholly free from Drusus, have her ain family with that nasty man nowhere nearby. I . . . I do not do this lightly, and I have many misgivings. It could be for the best, or I could be wreaking havoc on many lives. But I think that if Drusus is absent from her life for a while, Eileen might have an opportunity, at least. What she makes of it, that is up to her, though I think she'd do well not to let Drusus back into her life once he's out of it."
"And what of Drusus? I do not know how you can plan to send him to Azkaban when you have no direct say in such a thing, and yet I do believe that you could . . . you could manage it somehow. But if the man is sent to that prison, one of the worst in the wizarding world, what will that create for his life? And to decide such a thing"...Johannes shook his head..."do you know that he has committed crimes to warrant it?"
"I am certain that he has in the past, and if Drusus has changed his ways recently, then I will not find it possible to send him away. But if he still is dealing in Dark magic, as I believe, I have set things in motion for him to be exposed, my own wee bit o' joukerie-pawkerie. I have aye jaloused that Mabelle Prince's death was something other than a simple workshop accident, though whether his wife's death was merely a result of some carelessness on his part or was outright murder, I could not say; I only have suspicions. But he brings misery into lives and he willingly traffics in Dark objects used for nefarious and gruesome purposes. That is sufficient."
Johannes stood and held out his hand. "I was right. You need to come down and spend time with us. You do not want to fall asleep thinking of such things. Come, sit beside me, keep me company, and listen to Malcolm sing of drunken Glumbumbles and Hinkypunks in cranberry bogs. Then you will sleep well."
Siofre looked up at him and smiled. "You are right." She took his hand and stood. "I'll sit beside you and you'll learn the song of the drunken Glumbumble...you need not be able to sing well or remember many words, as it's meant to be remembered and sung e'en when you're more'n a wee bit stocious. It's one of Malcolm's, and complete nonsense, of course."
Johannes returned her smile. "Then precisely what you require tonight, I think."
"Lead on, Magister!"
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Dear MMADfan, I love this story! Do you plan to write more chapters in the future? I would love to see it finished.
I really hope you update soon, you write such wonderful fanfiction and I find myself rereading some of the old ones hopefully your next update will be near in the future for this as well as LVS
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
Thank you! I do hope to update both stories soon!
I really hope you update soon, you write such wonderful fanfiction and I find myself rereading some of the old ones hopefully your next update will be near in the future for this as well as LVS
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Thank you very much,
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
!I will definitely try to get a few chapters of Charming the Scottish Garden and LVS posted this autumn. I'm sorry for the wait. It's very good to know that people are still reading them and will be here to read the new chapters when I (finally!) get them written. (Life's not been conducive to writing in the last couple years, sadly.)I really appreciate the note! I will do my best to get a new chapter up very soon.
Response from uma (Reviewer)
Yes I have been keeping up with your stories. I especially liked RAM itself , although I should let you know or perhaps you do know. But I read on ff.net and I usually keep with the newest MMAD fiction, I recently came across one that had taken a parts of your story and added it to theirs, I commented saying I read it before to which the author promptly deleted my comment. Just thought you should know as even though I am no writer I felt bad about something like that. However I shall eagerly await your next update :)
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Would you mind emailing me or messaging me through ffnet to let me know which story it is, if you remember the title? I would appreciate it. I'm very glad that you like RAM!
Response from uma (Reviewer)
i do not have an account on FF.net :/ sorry, i usually just go as a guest i already signed up on alot of new pages. And i could read the stories just as easily, But the Name of the Story is Even in Death by Albus P.W.BDumbledore1891. You take a good look at chapter 5
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Thanks very much! :-) I appreciate the tip!
First a new chapter of LVS and then CSG- I am in heaven! As much as I want to see Siofre and Johannes admit their feelings for each other, I enjoyed the "push-pull" of this chapter. The way the talk of age differences turned to them, Siofre wanting to take his hand but not, sitting close on the bench- all of it a wonderful buildup. 5 stars!
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I'm glad it made you happy and you're liking the "push-pull"!I'm hoping to update at least two chapters a month -- more if I can -- alternating amongst the WIPs I have going. I am resisting the sudden onslaught of plot bunnies that are begging me to write more RaMverse fics set during the immediate post-RaM time period, like CSG is.Thanks for the review! It's encouraging!
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I'm glad it made you happy and you're liking the "push-pull"!I'm hoping to update at least two chapters a month -- more if I can -- alternating amongst the WIPs I have going. I am resisting the sudden onslaught of plot bunnies that are begging me to write more RaMverse fics set during the immediate post-RaM time period, like CSG is.Thanks for the review! It's encouraging!
Best birthday present, ever!!! An update for this and it's a very shippy Siofre/Johannes chapter. woooo hoooI think this line was absolutely brilliant:Siofre found herself smiling back, and her heart beating faster at the sight of him. Could she really give him up to another witch?NOPE, she can't give him up to another because her heart already belongs to him and he holds hers as well. I wasn't too fond of the ADMM discussion. Siofre unnerves me when she speaks of Minerva and Albus's relationship, especially in this context. I know Malcolm is her favorite but it almost felt like she wasn't thrilled with Albus marrying Minerva, even though it's what makes her happiest and clearly they adore one another. sigh. Oh well ... I'm still happy for Siofre and Joannes, awwww.
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Hi! Glad to give you a good birthday prezzie! :-)What Siofre is not thrilled with is Albus not marrying Minerva. It's not that she has objections to their not being married, but she's afraid that Minerva wants marriage & Albus ain't askin' -- and she's right, at this point. But Minerva is being Stoic and sensible, and since she won't talk to Siofre about it, Siofre's not about to give her advice. She's also just plain worried that Minerva will end up having a broken heart or have some other sadness in her life because of the relationship. She loves Minerva and doesn't want to see her hurt -- she cares about Albus, but Minerva's her granddaughter, so she's Siofre's priority in her heart, not Albus, even if she doesn't feel it's her place to bring up her worries with Minerva.As you know from LVS, Siofre and Johannes will eventually be happy together -- Johannes's policy of being steadfast and patient pay off, and Siofre will never have any worries that he did not come to her freely, or that he might have been better off with someone else. But there's a bit of story between now & then, so I'd better say no more -- I'm afraid I'll leak spoilers! LOL!Thanks for the review!
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Hi! Glad to give you a good birthday prezzie! :-)What Siofre is not thrilled with is Albus not marrying Minerva. It's not that she has objections to their not being married, but she's afraid that Minerva wants marriage & Albus ain't askin' -- and she's right, at this point. But Minerva is being Stoic and sensible, and since she won't talk to Siofre about it, Siofre's not about to give her advice. She's also just plain worried that Minerva will end up having a broken heart or have some other sadness in her life because of the relationship. She loves Minerva and doesn't want to see her hurt -- she cares about Albus, but Minerva's her granddaughter, so she's Siofre's priority in her heart, not Albus, even if she doesn't feel it's her place to bring up her worries with Minerva.As you know from LVS, Siofre and Johannes will eventually be happy together -- Johannes's policy of being steadfast and patient pay off, and Siofre will never have any worries that he did not come to her freely, or that he might have been better off with someone else. But there's a bit of story between now & then, so I'd better say no more -- I'm afraid I'll leak spoilers! LOL!Thanks for the review!
I didn't realize until just now how much I have truly missed this story. But I will be patient and constant. Also, yaaaaaaaaaaaaaay! CFP
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Thank you! I'm glad you liked it. I've actually missed it, too.Thanks for ... um, I mean, CFR!
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
Thank you! I'm glad you liked it. I've actually missed it, too.Thanks for ... um, I mean, CFR!
YAY!!! I couldn't believe it when I got the message for the update, it's really here! A new chapter! :) Thank you! I loved it, the long wait was more than worth it because this chapter is just perfect. I always love when these two have their little moments, it's so cute. I loved getting to know a little more about Siofre's thoughts and feelings, I love that she's just as anxious and ready as Johannes is, I can't wait to see how they finally come together. I loved that he was firm about wanting to spend the afternoon with her and didn't let her get away with working alone. I can't wait for the next chapter, I hope it won't be too long a wait :)
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Hi! I'm so glad you enjoyed it!Yes, Johannes is becoming gradually more assertive, but without being pushy or aggressive about it, and always with Siofre's good in his mind. I, too, hope it will not be too long a wait for another chapter of CSG! Thanks for letting me know you enjoyed the chapter!
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Hi! I'm so glad you enjoyed it!Yes, Johannes is becoming gradually more assertive, but without being pushy or aggressive about it, and always with Siofre's good in his mind. I, too, hope it will not be too long a wait for another chapter of CSG! Thanks for letting me know you enjoyed the chapter!
I'm not quite sure if Lydia has three children or only one - Bertrand - are her others Conner and someone else? I got a bit confused when Soifre was explaining her children - seemed to me she miscarried a lot and that Bertrand was the only child - but then you said he was the youngest, so I got confused.
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I need to reread the chapter & make sure that I haven't mis-typed something. If I have, I'll go in and make a correction! Thanks!Lydia has one child, Bertrand, and he has two children, Phoebe and Conner. Conner's married to Elisabeth and they have one boy, Liam (who grows up to be Eoghan's father).
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I think the plethora of children, grandchildren, and other relatives may simply have overwhelmed the synapses. hee! In the previous chapter, Siofre does say that Bertrand was Lydia & Malcolm Tyree's only child, and then in this chapter, she speaks of Bertrand being married to Sally (Longbottom) and the two of them having Connor & Phoebe. Charles Prince is Bertrand's cousin (Charles's father was Bertrand Prince, Lydia's brother, for whom she named her son), and Charles is married to Sally's sister Louisa. (And this is why Severus is related to Eogan in two ways -- through the Princes & the Longbottoms. Bertrand's cousin and Sally's sister are Eileen Prince's grandparents, thus Severus's great-grandparents, and Bertrand and Sally themselves are Eoghan's great-grandparents.) Yeah, can get confusing!
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I'll just take your word for it and go forward - it was confusing - whew! Thanks for explaining in simple terms - you know sometimes I need a map. *smirks*
*snip*“I may need to take additional measures,” Siofre said. “And the spells I cast will only be effective as long as they are in the house. From what I understand, he drinks, then comes home mean. On good nights, he passes out before he does more than shout and make a scene. The nosy neighbour turns a blind eye to the husband’s behaviour, though he surely must know of it. Any road, I did what I could to make sure that if he does come home drunk, he passes out straightaway upon crossing the threshold. If he tries to take a drink at home, he’ll become ill. Gwyneth claims that when he’s not drinking, he’s moody, but otherwise fine. Most of the spells I cast were aimed at his drinking—making the consequences miserable for him. I cast a few protective spells around Gwyneth, and I gave her an emergency Portkey, as well. If Cadoc becomes violent or frightens her in any way, she can Portkey to her brother and sister-in-law’s home.”“Why would she stay with such a brute?” Johannes asked.“She does love him, or the man she remembers marrying,” Siofre replied, “but she is expecting a baby. It was partly for her baby’s sake that I tried to persuade her to leave the man, but she . . . she has her reasons, I suppose.”“He hits her or hexes her and she is pregnant?” Johannes asked, even more appalled than he had been. “The man should be . . . he should be . . . I do not know a suitable punishment, but he does not deserve the family if he cannot treat them with the love and respect that he should. He should be their protector!”Siofre twitched a slight smile. “Perhaps a lecture in gentlemanly behaviour might do him some good . . . in a few weeks, after the man has ceased drinking. If we can manage that.” I hate to say it, but nothing fixes an abuser unless the abuser WANTS to be fixed - only THEY can truly heal themselves - all the abusee can do is leave - and the woman, in my opinion, is being foolish and selfish - and abusive to her unborn child. I can not STAND lazy, selfish women like this that would rather live in hell than do something better for their kids.
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Okay, since we know that Lydia is Slytherin, and Johannes is Ravenclaw - I simply MUST know what our Siofre is, my guess, Ravenclaw or Gryffindor - or perhaps Slytherin.... but I'm putting my coin on Ravenclaw.
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Yes, she's a Ravenclaw. :-)You're right about abusers. Siofre's trying to address some of the underlying causes of his drinking, hoping that that will help, as well as doing something about the drinking itself. We shall see what happens with that.Let's see . . . here's the passage from RaM ("A Spree") where Siofre and Johannes meet:Johannes laughed as the three witches all agreed that every wizard still had a little boy in him. Siofre looked up at the tall, sandy-haired wizard.“Don’t know you. You’re foreign, aren’t you?” The words were blunt, but her tone friendly.“I am from Germany, ma’am,” Johannes said in his friendly manner. “Johannes Birnbaum, at your service.”“Ah, the Herbology wizard. Ravenclaw Head of House, aren’t you? Heard good things about you. Siofre Tyree, Ravenclaw myself,” she said, holding out her hand, which Johannes took and bent over in a formal bow.As Johannes straightened, Minerva apologised. “I am sorry, Grandmother. I hadn’t realised that you two hadn’t met.”
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Ah, I should have remembered this - well then, my coin was well placed - Ravenclaw indeed.
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Indeed! You're a good 'claw spotter! ;-)
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Am I? Seems I've been spoiled with a few good ones in my life. *winks*
*snip*A few moments later, the two stepped out into the sunshine, and Johannes saw that they had arrived at a gabled cottage of three stories. Unlike the main house with its towers and turrets, this house was not all stone. It was a combination of half-timbering and uncut natural stone of different colours—quite unusual for Scotland, in Johannes’s experience—but very lovely on this woody hill. It seemed half-grown from the land and the surrounding woods.Ok that right there is freaking AWESOME!
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*snip*“Hmph. Still, it is not hers, and it is desolate.” She looked around her. “This is . . . isolated and private, but not set apart the way that island is. And that other, that is Dumbledore’s island. Do you know its name? Eilean Tèarmunn. It means ‘Refuge Island.’ A sanctuary from the wizarding world. Not even a Post Owl can get through to it. That is fine as far as it goes, but for Minerva, I would like her to have a place she could come that is hers if she needs it, and not just that island of Dumbledore’s. She can use the cottage or not, as she likes—and bring Dumbledore with her if she wishes.”Ahhhhh, NOW I am starting to understand the Tyree witches... forward thinking, ahead of their time, true Gaelic women of power - equal power - no woman should rely on a man - yes, now I am seeing the true Soifre. Besides all that, I'm glad she is looking out for Minerva - though I know Dumbledore wouldn't dream of hurting his love, but still, Minerva should have her own place.... and if Soifre has the space, and buildings, why not? Makes perfect sense. I wish I could live here! I'm insainly jealous!
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*snip*“You think Minerva might not want it? Even if she uses it seldom, it will be here for her. It can be a holiday cottage for now, if she likes, but she will want a family one day and a home to raise her children."*winces*
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The shell house is amazing, really amazing!
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
Hi,
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
! I'm glad you liked the cottage and the shell house. :-)Yes, typical of Tyree witches is that sense of independence, and Siofre has it in spades. She wants to help give Minerva opportunities and that home just of her own. As you say, she has the space, so why not?Yes, Siofre has no crystal ball to see into the future, and she does envision one with Minerva having children of her own. It's a wistful sort of moment for those of us who know what the future does hold for Minerva.
*snip*I hate maths. Maths makes me sleepy and I itch all over. I think I’m allergic,” Lydia said.Siofre barked a laugh. “And that is why I will do the calculations, as always. You’d think we didn’t do this every month.”“I do my very best to forget,” Lydia said pitifully.I can so relate to Lydia here... hate math... haaaaaaaate it.
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*snip*“I am keeping much rushes, though, here and along the edge opposite,” Johannes said, pointing. “They are good for the animals, for the fowl and fishes, to have them here.”He is absolutely correct - far too many people cut all the natural vegetation out of a pond and kill it, even putting up cement walls around it - turns the water into piss pea soup and basically kills it - thank you for keeping him realistic and knowledgable - a real herbologist! A naturalist!
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LOL! Yes, I'm allergic to math, too -- but sadly have had to work for many years in jobs that required me to sit there and "itch" while using it. Unfortunately, although I hate it, I'm still not abysmal at it. Although I suppose that's good . . . to a point!Glad you like Johannes and his care for the natural balance and all the living things, plant and animal. One of the things he enjoys is knowing how plants fit into an ecosystem, and what plants can do for various critters. He loves to encourage life, so he certainly wouldn't deaden a pond by cutting out all the vegetation and putting in concrete! I'm glad you appreciate this aspect of the story. :-)
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I've seen far too many gardeners that remind me of some Wal-Mart version of a garden - potted plants that attract NO insects and some concrete and plastic fountain sitting on asphalt - and these 'gardens' are so alien to the natural surroundings and support no life and take up so .... here I am ranting - sorry - anyway, glad to see Johannes is a REAL naturalist/gardener.I also love the explanation of the alarm charms or wards that they are going to put around the pond to keep the babies from drowning - very cool!
Okay - so - lets see, I loved seeing Gertie again, and had to roll my eyes too at Malcolm's silliness - she's a good sport, putting up with him I think - and as usual, I always get embarassed when folks at the table have kissed others at the table but aren't with those at the table - as you know, so I had even more respect for Gertie for sitting through all that as Mal and Katherine talked about his kissing - eh... what else ... Katherine was interesting and I'd like to have learned more about her role in Grindelwald's defeat - as well as her work with Dumbledore but I know that's a minor thing here.I liked how Johannes stumbles around with his English and makes silly errors - chip off the old brick and such - and I like how you've made his speach a bit odd, which it should be, since English isn't his first language.I admit, I'd like to know more about why Grindelwald was after him - recruiting him, but perhaps we'll learn more about that as the story progresses.But most importantly, I'd really curious about WHY Siofre has captured his attention - its a bit of a puzzle to me - I guess I just don't see much of her personality yet or something - besides that she's a very commanding witch - got that alpha personality - perhaps that's it? At any rate, I'm sure I'll learn more as the story progresses.And as always, enjoying your writing, but then again I'd never have started reading Scottish Garden if I wasn't already completely taken with your writing - so no surprises there!
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Yes, you'll eventually learn more about what happened to Johannes's family & why.It's partly the commanding personality, and partly just "chemistry" -- or maybe it's "magic," or magical resonance. Malcolm can be a trial, but usually in a funny way, so Gertrude actually enjoys it when he's "exasperating." haha!Glad you're enjoying it!
Oh dear, Malcolm is meddling already...
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haha! His heart's in the right place!
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
Seems most of your characters, OC or Canon, are meddlesome! HAHA! I love EEET! For once it isn't Dumbledore meddling - thankfully - though I suppose right now he's too busy with Minerva to think about much else. *grins*
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
Yes, Dumbledore is busy between Minerva, Hogwarts, Minerva, the Ministry, Minerva . . . well, you get the idea!
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Mmmmhmmmm - might have to go back and read RaM just to see how busy he is!
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
This is a bit post-RaM, but you're right: if you reread the end of RaM, you'll get an idea of what may be still be keeping him busy these days!
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All good stuff if I remember correctly.
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
Oh, very good, indeed!
Morgan and Fiona had quads? What on earth? Magical fertility treatment or something? You simply MUST explain that!I am liking this, loving the timid flirtation from Johannes and the direct flirtation or demands of his time, from Siofre - pretty cute. I love romance in the RamVerse - I don't have to worry about rejection!
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Yes, indeed! And everyone suspects they used potions or a spell or something, but they claim not. Minerva calls them "the litter." (Gareth mentioned that tidbit about Minerva's humor to Severus back in LVS somewhere. Severus liked it. hee!)I'm glad you're enjoying the romance. Johannes is rather smitten, and Siofre isn't indifferent, either! Thanks!
A very nice introduction and very cute to see Johannes having an eye on Siofre - looking forward to more Dumbledore and McGonagall!
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Thanks! Glad you enjoyed it. Albus & Minerva will eventually make "personal appearances" in the fic, but not for a while yet -- although Minerva shows up by reference fairly frequently. And there's one of your favorite HP characters coming up soonish, too! :-)
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Ooooh - Gertie???
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
Ah, she's a RaMverse character, but yes, she does, indeed, show up! And relatively soon, actually -- sooner than the canon HP character I was thinking of. In fact, there are two canon characters appearing together in that chapter who I'm pretty sure are among your faves. :-)
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Ooooh! I'm so excited!!!!!
I was very happy to see an update to this story! And what a fun chapter it was. Apparently Minerva isn't the only one who doubts Malcolm's stories. Poor Malcolm. I think Malcolm was holding back in the fight or he would have taken all of the other wizards out easily:). BTW-go Johannes! Loved the spell with the wood. I think he should have left Cam up on the wall. I imagine these lads are in trouble if Gertrude and/ Siofre hear about it. Thanks for a fun read.
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Hi! Glad you enjoyed it! Yes, Malcolm could have easily taken them, but it wasn't until it got "serious" that he went ahead and took 'em out. Yes, Johannes might not be much with the traditional defensive spells, hexes, jinxes, and the like, but he's got some imagination and skill with wood, so he didn't do too badly!Thanks!
Well, that certainly wasn't how I was expecting the evening to end. Action packed for sure!!I loved the details you put in about the African dragons. It amazes me how you always come up with new and interesting ideas to add to the RaM universe.I can't believe how quickly the little bar conversation turned ugly. Cam certainly was a nasty bugger and I'm glad Johannes was the one to pin him to the wall. Poor Aberforth, though. I pity him having to clean up all that mess. hahaWonder what Siofre would think if she heard about all that drama??? lol
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I do wonder what Siofre would think, too! Johannes and Malcolm don't want to find out, that's for sure! Somehow, I can imagine that that story might make its way to her ears, whether the "lads" want it to or not! Yes, Cam was just ready for a confrontation there, wasn't he? And pretty nasty in his comments and innuendos, too. Glad you liked Johannes's trick with the wood. He might not be much at fighting, but he is a clever wizard, nonetheless -- and experienced with wood, as well. Glad you liked the African dragons. I've been looking for an opportunity to stick those into a chapter with Malcolm since I wrote his "application letter" to Dumbledore back in RaM, so it was really fun to finally give them a bit of space and hear a small portion of the story of Malcolm's first dragon ride. Thanks very much for the review!
OMG!! an update!! I was so happy when I saw the email in my inbox! Thanks!I loved this chapter, Malcolm is always so much fun, poor Johannes I don't think he likes the kind of fun Malcolm brings lol. This was a very nice chapter, so funny! I can't wait to read more Siofre and Johannes, they are getting closer by the chapter! LOL.thank you for updatingSam
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Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter! You're right: Johannes doesn't have the same idea of "fun" that Malcolm does!Thanks for the review! (I was glad to finally be able to write & update! )
I had been holding off reading this chapter and "saving it" since you had mentioned your muse had left you, but tonight I caved in and I'm so glad I did. Johannes' vision of Siofre and his confession to Lydia was breath-taking. How apropos that the jerk that used and left Lydia was a Lockhart. She did much better with her Murdoch. It was a little jarring to read the name Severus back in this time period. I hope you find your muse again. I really miss the updates. Take care.
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I am currently struggling with writing a gift exchange fic that's finally beginning to sort of come together. I hope that once I have that written, maybe my muse will come back for the other stories. I miss them, too.I am glad that you enjoyed the chapter! Your review brought the characters back into my mind, and Lydia's story, so maybe that will help grease the wheels of the fanfic section of my brain! I figured that a Lockhart would be very good at cutting and running when the going got tough even back then. I thought it might be an interesting reminder of Severus' pureblooded side of the family, too, to have mention of the Prince relative he was named after, as well as the Princes' earlier tangles with the Tyree clan. We will also hear more about Eileen and her father in an upcoming chapter -- hmm, do I hear my muse tiptoeing about? LOL!Anyway, thank you very much for your review. I'm glad you enjoyed it -- and sorry that you haven't got another one to look forward to immediately, but I haven't vanished, and I do hope to continue with both this and LVS very soon. :-)
I'm really enjoying your story. Thank you for sharing your talent :)
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Hi,
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! Thank you for your note! I appreciate it, and I'm really glad you're enjoying the story.
Ooo lovely chapter. I like the way you are building the sexual tension and bonds between them. Fascinating ritual; I'm curious about the artifact. I'm assuming/hoping it has greater meaning than is usual.
I see Malcolm is in the next chapter - thank you!
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Thanks,
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!The next chapter has a bit more about the artifact -- and Siofre's curious about it, as well.I'm glad you're looking forward to seeing Malcolm again. I hope you enjoy it. He'll be popping in and staying for a couple chapters. :-)Thanks for the review!
LOL God Malcolm is amazing! lol, that tale and the show lol, he's great! I'm so glad he's back and I love it that Siofre calls Gertrude his witch! that's so sweet.
Now the most important part, OMG!! that was sooooo romantic, Johannes is very very romantic, his words to Siofre, the kiss, the pledge! oooohhhh I'm soooo happy right now!!! and Siofre! her reaction was amazing, I'm so pleased! lol. I loved it that she went from Magister to Honnie in less than a minute, she's giving in!
I really think his own private pledge to her has alot to do with the shape, color and markings of the artifact, I can't wait to find out! I'm so excited! Can't wait for the next chapter. GREAT, WONDERFUL writing!
Sam
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
Thank you! I enjoy writing Malcolm -- he seems to write himself -- and it's really fun to be able to step back into that period.I'm glad you enjoyed the romantic bits, as well. They are growing ever closer.Thank you very much for reviewing!
Fun chapter, indeedy!!!The conversation with Siofre and Bridie and then the one with her and Johannes warmed my heart fully. His declarations to her about his pledges, both verbal and in his heart, were very sweet. I'm sure she must know by now that he is truly enamoured with her. However, I can still see her giving him the time and space to come to her fully.LOVE, LOVE, LOVE MALCOLM!! He has me grinning from ear to ear with his tales to the wizard and his retelling of his meeting with him. He's such a hoot. And I'd have to agree with Siofre that his witch caught him well. haha.
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I'm glad you enjoyed both the romance and the humor in this chapter. I think that Siofre is very aware now of his increasingly strong feelings for her. We'll see where that knowledge might lead.I'm glad that you found Malcolm and his tales a hoot. He's fun -- he practically writes himself.Thanks for the review!
Such an awesome chapter! I looooove it!!! The ceremony performed by Siofre was very special and I'm glad they didn't need any witnesses. I think some of the "magic" of the moment would have been lost if others had been around. And the artifact sounds very intriguing. I do hope we'll learn more about that as the story progresses. We are one step closer to having Siofre and Johannes together. SWEEEEET!!!!!Thanks for the update!
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You're welcome! I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter! They are, indeed, closer now!
thank you, thank you, thank you!! I loved loved this chapter, it's very sweet and so interesting to learn all of this about Siofre and Tyree Clan. It was very funny that he was unsure about her wanting to adopt him lol, and I can't wait to find out what does the artifact mean, I'm sure it has to do something with their bond, I hope so at least!. I'm sooo glad Malcolm is going to be in the next chapter, I miss him! lol. Can't wait to read more, thanks!Sam
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Yeah, he sure didn't want her thinking of him as her son! LOL! And she was glad that he was happy that he'd be closer to her than to any others in the clan. (Yay -- my javascript emoticons are working again! LOL!)It's been fun writing Malcolm in this coming chapter, so I hope you'll enjoy it.Thanks for the review!