Chapter Ten: News from Abroad
Chapter 10 of 32
MMADfanA Post Owl arrives with a storm.
Features Siofre, with Lydia and Johannes.
Chapter Ten: News from Abroad
With the distant sound of Lydia at the piano downstairs, Siofre closed her journal and set down her quill, having entered her notes about the new charms she had cast on the Terwilliger house and the potion she was planning to have Murdoch brew for Gwyneth. The last thing that she wrote, though, was "J.B., tomorrow at 15.30. A date for tea with the gardener."
Aye. Tea with the gardener. Master Herbologist, Professor Johannes Birnbaum.
She looked out the window of her study and saw the magister, as she liked to refer to him, working quite a distance away from the house, but still a tall and impressive figure, his back to her. It was a warm afternoon, and he had been working hard. Johannes had shed not only his work apron, but even his waistcoat, and she could see where his braces met in a Y on his back, dark against a white shirt, its sleeves rolled up. He was waving his wand, and although Siofre did not know what he was after doing, she saw shimmering lines lay themselves down on the turf, bright and shining, subsiding to a chalky white. He looked like a conductor before an orchestra.
A tiny figure appeared suddenly beside him...Sorrel, she thought it was, from the shade of pink the house-elf was clad in...and the magister stopped what he was doing and turned to the elf, speaking to him, then getting down on one knee and examining the contents of the basket the elf offered him. Unaccountably, the sight of the tall wizard kneeling in front of the house-elf brought a lump to Siofre's throat. Johannes nodded to the elf, who Disapparated, then Johannes stood and carried the basket over to the small worktable he had set up for himself.
Siofre watched as Johannes poured tea from a flask into a mug, but then her own tea arrived, brought to her on a tray by Multry, and when next she looked out the window, Johannes was back at work, his mug of tea in one hand, his wand in the other, laying down the shimmering white lines where some new garden would be. Clouds were gathering in the west, and no doubt they would bring a hard rain with them when they arrived. Likely that was why Johannes was back at work again, taking sips of tea in between spells cast, wanting to get as much done as he could before he had to quit for the day. The bright chalky lines would survive a rain, Siofre was sure, otherwise the magister would not still be casting them. Lines, arcs, helixes, glowing brilliantly, then still bright white even after fading into the grass: the sight of them forming and fading seemed to mesmerise her.
The wind picked up, almost taking Johannes's hat, but he pulled it down further on his brow, slipped his wand into the wand pocket of his trousers, and turned toward his worktable. As he walked toward it, he took one final long swallow from his mug, draining it, then he carefully packed the basket back up, shrugged on his waistcoat, buttoned it, pulled on his dun-coloured over-robe, then packed up his gardening things in his large canvas bag. He shouldered the bag, picked up the basket, then just as a flash of lightning tore through the sky, he turned to head towards the house, thunder cracking over head.
Good that the gardener was staying for dinner, Siofre thought as she took a sip of tea. Apparating even the relatively short distance to Hogsmeade would not be wise during a thunderstorm. She could hear the door to the kitchen open and then close with a clatter. One corner of her mouth twitched upward. It was good to have Johannes in the house.
She had liked the man from their first meeting, but she wouldn't have guessed then that she might invite him to stay at the estate; even after she had hired him late that winter, it never entered her mind. He was far from family, after all. He was just a wizard contracted to do some work for them, and yet he brought a sense of steadiness and peace with him. His presence in a room always made it seem warmer, somehow, and anchored . . . But that was foolishness. It was not as though the rooms would just fly off the face of the earth without him there. They simply . . . seemed curiously empty.
The previous weekend, Lydia had commented several times about how very odd it felt not to have Johannes there, which in itself was odd, Siofre thought...despite sharing the sentiment, though not giving it voice. After all, most of the man's work took him out-of-doors; it wasn't as if he was even in the house very much.
She was glad that Lydia liked him. Lydia was a sort of people-person, as the expression went, and it was good to have a man about the place, another person to keep Lydia company. Siofre hoped that, now that he knew more about her past, Johannes would treat Lydia no differently than he had done. She doubted that he would. Still, it had been indiscreet of her, and Siofre chided herself for allowing herself so much comfort and freedom with the wizard, however solid and kind he might appear. As she had told Lydia all those weeks before, he was, after all, only a man.
Rain now fell in heavy drops, and thunder seemed to rumble from the hills themselves. A large Eagle Owl, desperate, it seemed, flew against the glass of the window, saving itself and swooping down before flying back up as Siofre leaned forward, wand in hand, and opened the window to the bird.
"Ach, poor thing!" She closed the window before taking the rolled parchment from the owl. "You stay here a while, then we'll find you a place to bide the storm. And for your trouble . . ." Siofre reached into her drawer and pulled out several large rabbit-flavoured owl treats and scattered them on the floor for the creature.
There were two parchments, Siofre saw now that she could take a good look at them, sent by international relay post, tied together with a bit of ribbon and a strong sticking charm. She removed the dark navy ribbon, then used her wand to release the charm. One letter for her, the other for Lydia. Her eyebrow rose. A peculiar coincidence, it was, that she should speak of her nephew the morning of the very day they received letters from him. Siofre didn't hesitate to break the seal on her letter. Lydia was still playing in the music room, the music stopping, starting, then stopping again, phrases repeated, varied, then repeated again.
Auckland, NZ
Tuesday, 14 April 1959
Dear Auntie Siofre,
Sally and I are well, and we hope that you and Mammie haven't kilt each other yet! (Sally says I must not be flippant!)
So in all seriousness, we hope you are both well. Mammie's last letter sounded cheerful, but they usually do. She says you have found a new gardener to whip the old place into shape. I hope the house-elves like him and do not find they have to chase him off, with you cursing his bollocks off sorry, Sally says that's rude with you rendering his family jewels into dull little pebbles. Is that polite enough, Auntie? Sally says I should get on with the letter, so I will.
We are making our way home. We plan to arrive on the 29th (that's this month, April), but we haven't commissioned the Portkeys yet. We have accumulated quite a lot of stuff, though, and we are sending said stuff on ahead of us, since we still have to settle things here and tie up loose ends. The trunks and cartons should arrive at Hogsmeade station by the regular evening train on the 24th. That's what they promise, anyway. I asked them to have a "notify" letter sent with the trunks, and they're supposed to notify you by owl when they arrive. That's why I'm writing early, besides letting you know we're coming home. Can you have someone pick them up for us? They have to be signed for by a witch or wizard. I gave them several names of people who can collect them. After they're accepted, maybe old Mynok or one of the other elves could get them home for us. These are the people who we said could sign: you (of course), Mammie, Minerva, Malcolm (is he still in Hogsmeade? that could be convenient), Murdoch, Maisie, Connor and Liz, Phoebe, and little Melina, though I guess she's not so little now. Didn't include Morgan and Fiona, since they probably haven't got the time to sleep, with four wee ones (did they use potions, or what?), or Dorcas, since it sounds like she still wanders about in a fog most of the time. Sorry to put you in charge, Auntie, but you always manage everything so well, and the station will charge two Galleons a day storage if they aren't picked up within twelve hours of arrival. And the station isn't open at night, so that means they have to be fetched that evening.
Do me a favour, if you read your letter first, don't tell Mammie we're coming home. I'm sending her a letter with this one, and I want to be the one to surprise her!
We can't wait to meet little Liam and don't worry, Sally's writing Connor and Liz a letter, too, so they'll have the news, and another to Phoebe and Declan. (Sally says now they have no excuse not to marry, since we'll definitely be able to make it to the wedding!) Feel free to let anyone else in the family know, if you like, or Mammie can. She'll be happy to, I'm sure. If we wrote every friend and relation to announce the news, we'd never make the first Portkey!
I hope we'll be in time for the Tyree Bealltainn bonfire! We will be doing one, won't we? It's something we've missed.
Oh, and Sally says I should say that we hope we're not putting you out, and that if we can't stay at the estate, we'll get a room in Hogsmeade, but of course we both know that's just foolishness, but Sally still insists I say it.
Looking forward to seeing you, more every day now that we're actually returning soon!
With love,
your nephew,
Bertrand
PS Hi, Aunt Siofre! I'm looking forward to seeing you, too. And if we're having the bonfire, we'll both help any way we can. Sally
Siofre smiled and set the letter down. So Bertrand and Sally were coming home. It sounded like they meant to stay, too. What they would do with themselves once they'd settled down, Siofre hadn't a clue, but she'd let them worry about that. She picked up the second sealed letter. Time to deliver Lydia's post.
The Eagle Owl had fallen asleep on the back of a chair. Siofre called Gweller and asked him to bring the owl someplace more suitable than her study, then she made her way down to the music room to find Lydia.
Siofre waited until Lydia had finished adding notation to the manuscript paper she was working on.
"Letter for you, hen."
"Oh! Who from?" Lydia scanned the staves and ran her fingers lightly over the piano keys, but without depressing them.
"Bertrand."
Lydia's attention immediately shifted from the piano to her sister-in-law. "From Bertrand! Oh, wonderful! I haven't had one from him in almost a month!" She snatched the parchment from Siofre's outstretched hand, then broke the seal impatiently.
Siofre watched as Lydia's eyes scanned the first lines of the letter. Lydia's expression changed from one of happiness to one of sheer delight.
"He's coming home! He and Sally are coming home! In less than two weeks...there's so much to do! Oh, my, and I have to tell everyone!" Her hands shook with excitement as she continued reading the letter.
Johannes stepped into the music room, dressed now in black trousers, a white shirt, black waistcoat, narrow black bow tie, and a satiny black over-robe open down the front and flowing out behind him. Siofre thought he looked quite handsome. He had brushed his hair out after his work, but had not tied it back again, and Siofre liked the way his soft, sandy hair swept his shoulders.
"It is good news?" Johannes asked, seeing Lydia's expression as she read her letter.
"Oh, it is wonderful news!" Lydia exclaimed. She finished reading the last lines of the second sheet of the letter, then she turned to Siofre. "They're coming home!" She grabbed Siofre in an embrace, almost hopping up and down. Siofre smiled and patted her back.
Lydia then turned to Johannes and threw her arms around him, squeezing him exuberantly. "He's coming home, Johannes! My boy, my son, he and Sally are coming home!"
Johannes smiled and returned her embrace, then put his hands on her arms and looked down into her face. "I am very happy for you. Siofre has spoken to me of your son and his long absence."
Lydia stepped back and plopped down onto the piano bench, taking in a deep breath and letting it out. "I don't know what to think! Where to begin! Oh, my, I must write everyone. I wonder if they have written to Charles and Louisa?" She looked at her letter again. "He doesn't say. Do you think Sally wrote her sister, Siofre?"
"He didnae mention them in his letter to me. I believe he is leaving that to you, though I may be mista'en. Bertrand only mentioned that Sally was writing the childer, Connor and Phoebe."
"He may have written his cousin...he didn't tell you?" Lydia asked.
"Nay, he said aught about Charles or Louisa."
"Do you think we should invite them to the bonfire? Or to the picnic and Murdoch's party?"
Siofre's brow furrowed. "They ne'er seem sair couthy at our ceilidhs. Not their kind o' thing an' all. Indeed, I'm sure Bertrand and Sally will make time to visit them in a wee." Siofre turned to Johannes. "Lydia's nephew Charles married Sally's sister Louisa," she explained.
"Ah. Close family ties, then," Johannes observed.
"Aye, so a body would think," Siofre said drily.
"When do your son and his wife return?" Johannes asked Lydia.
"He says that he expects to arrive on the twenty-ninth, although they aren't sure about the Portkeys. They may be a day or so earlier, or perhaps a day later. Since it takes a while for correspondence to get here, even using international relay post, I don't know whether we'll know for certain until they actually arrive! Oh, I must tell Gweller...he and Bertie were always close when Bertrand was a boy...and let the other house-elves know, too. We will have to get their rooms ready for them! Oh, and we should have a party for them . . ."
"They'll be here for the May Day celebration...which is also Murdoch's birthday party. I think we can wait to have another party for a while. And you know we're having Maisie's party here in June."
"Still..."
"Let's wait and see what they would like, eh, hen?" Siofre suggested gently. "And you forget that Connor or Phoebe may wish to do something for their parents."
A smile split Lydia's face. "Oh, Liam will be so very excited! He'll be meeting his Tyree grandparents!" She looked out the window at the rain and dark skies. "I wish it weren't storming so! I would Apparate right to them now!"
"Maisie said it will clear overnight," Siofre said. "Why don't you write letters to everyone else tonight, and then in the morn, you can pop down and see Connor and Elisabeth first thing and talk about your plans with them."
"Yes, I'll get up early and go see them," Lydia agreed, adding doubtfully, "I think I'll have to write to Phoebe, though. I don't fancy trying to Apparate to Ireland and back."
"'Tis a bit far," Siofre agreed. "P'raps I could go, though. I thought I might nip over to Tiree Beag this weekend, anyway. I could go there forenoon, then just skiddle across and see Phoebe. You could send a letter wi' me, an she's away, I'll leave it. Tell her to call by here when she has time during the week."
"Would you, then? Oh, that's a relief!" Lydia glanced up at Johannes. "Siofre's much better at long-distance Apparition than I am. Actually, she could Apparate to London and back several times in one day and not be in the leastwise winded! I find it hard to do a single round trip without a nice break in between. And don't ask me to Apparate far over water! I almost Splinch just thinking of it!"
Siofre chuckled. "Then dinna think on it, hen. We need you whole. Go speak with the elves. This time o' day, they're likely all in the kitchen."
Lydia bustled off, letter tightly held in her hand.
"So, and you are happy too?" Johannes asked Siofre.
"Aye, that I am. I think they plan to stay now...although I do not know if they will live here or elsewhere." Siofre gestured toward the door to the sitting room, and Johannes followed her into that room. "They're welcome, of course, but they may prefer to live in town...Glasgow, p'raps. Or even down near Connor and his family, though the wizarding neighbourhood they live in is quite small, just a cluster of cul-de-sacs, really. They might have to live in a Muggle neighbourhood if they were to move to Silloth-on-Solway, and I don't know how they'd feel about that. It can become quite complicated, I understand. The Coopers, Elisabeth's family, are Muggles, and they live there."
"Ah. It is probably good for Connor and Elisabeth to live near them, then." Johannes knew that some Muggle-borns lost touch with their Muggle families when they married into the wizarding world, which thought saddened him. "Liam can know his Muggle grandparents."
"Indeed. They are good folk."
"For English?" Johannes asked with a teasing twinkle in his eye.
Siofre chuckled good-naturedly. "Aye. For English. For anyone, actually. They are both schoolteachers. Intelligent, modest, open-minded folk with a sense of humour."
They each took a seat in the sitting room, and Siofre waved her wand to close the curtains, then flicked it at the fireplace, lighting the logs in the grate.
"We will have to look to cutting wood soon so that it will be ready in the autumn."
"Speaking of wood, do you remember an old coppice down by the cottage?" Johannes asked. At Siofre's nod, he said, "It has not been tended in a long time. It is an unsightly mess, and the woodland is suffering for it. It is sad now. Would you like the coppice to be renewed, or would you prefer it to be thinned out through singling and made into an ordinary grove of trees?"
"I do not know . . . I must consider that. However, whichever we do...or whichever you do for us...we can use some of the cut wood from there, certainly, and leave several cords for Minerva, as well. It was a very large coppice, an I remember right. It had several sections, so a different portion would be harvested every year. Would it be a lot of work to restore it?"
"Ja, actually, yes. It could be begun this year, and the entire area prepared, but if it is to be sectioned so there is always a yearly harvest . . . that would take as many years as it takes a single coppiced wood to mature. Do you remember the cycle? It was eighteen years, perhaps?"
"Nay. I do remember that some trees were on a short seven-year cycle, but others were on a much longer cycle. Thirty years? Fifty?" Siofre shook her head. "I am sorry. I don't remember."
"That is fine. I will make a survey of the trees. The types will tell me their cycles. I saw no oak, but they would have a long cycle."
"Good. That is something I would enjoy helping you with. I would like to learn more about it, and how to properly tend it."
Johannes smiled. "I would enjoy your assistance. We can take a look at it together next week. How was your visit with your daughter?"
"It was good. Dorcas came home for lunch, in fact, and she sends her regards."
"Ah, yes, how is she? She is still at the Ministry?"
"Aye, and right miserable, too. I think she should try some other type of work, though I don't know what would suit her."
"I am sorry to hear that. She seemed very bright at school, but I think the structure of the Ministry would not suit her. She is probably also not challenged."
"She also dreams too much. She gets twice the work done in half the time that it takes others, but it does not matter if she does not appear to be working the rest of the time." Siofre sighed. "I sometimes think it may have been better if Jonathan...that was her father...had married Maisie for the sake of the child, but he was a ne'er-do-well and a layabout. Probably not a good model of a wizard, and not a good husband."
"I will see if I can think of anything that might suit Dorcas better, and I will speak to Professor Flitwick, as well. He has many contacts. He may even know of something in the Ministry itself that would be better for her talents."
"Ach, thank you, Professor, but you needn't..."
"You call me 'Professor,' but do you forget why? I was her Head of House. I shall be most pleased to help her if I can, and I am certain that Professor Flitwick also feels that way, though he did not teach her."
Siofre smiled softly. "All right, then, but you already do so much for us. Thank you, Johannes."
"It is, as I said, my pleasure, Siofre. You know . . ." He hesitated before continuing. "You know you may call on me for anything. The contract is for the grounds, but beyond the grounds, beyond that time I spend, and spend gladly to make this place beautiful and productive for you, beyond that, I hope I can also be a friend to you. It would please me if it were so."
Siofre felt herself uncharacteristically fighting a warmth rising in her cheeks, but she nodded. "You have been, indeed. And tomorrow we take tea."
Johannes smiled warmly. "Aye, and it will be my reward for being diligent and checking the Melliflua mandrake garden! I look forward to it. It is an honour that you do me, Siofre."
Siofre chuckled and shook her head. "Not so. But I look forward to it, too."
The dinner bell sounded, and Siofre was surprised to look up at the mantle clock and see the time.
"Shall we?" Johannes rose and offered her his arm.
Siofre placed her hand on his wrist and stood. "I believe I know the topic of conversation for tonight," she said.
"Would that be the return of a son?" Johannes asked with a smile.
"Aye, the beloved son and his wife," Siofre replied. "I hope that Lydia stops talking long enough to enjoy her dinner!"
Johannes chuckled, and the two walked together to the family dining room, where they heard Lydia already there, chattering to one of the house-elves about new mattresses. Siofre and Johannes looked at one another and smiled.
Author's Note: Thank you to everyone who has been reviewing this little fic. It has been very encouraging, and I truly appreciate it! I am glad you're enjoying it.
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Dear MMADfan, I love this story! Do you plan to write more chapters in the future? I would love to see it finished.
I really hope you update soon, you write such wonderful fanfiction and I find myself rereading some of the old ones hopefully your next update will be near in the future for this as well as LVS
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
Thank you! I do hope to update both stories soon!
I really hope you update soon, you write such wonderful fanfiction and I find myself rereading some of the old ones hopefully your next update will be near in the future for this as well as LVS
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Thank you very much,
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
!I will definitely try to get a few chapters of Charming the Scottish Garden and LVS posted this autumn. I'm sorry for the wait. It's very good to know that people are still reading them and will be here to read the new chapters when I (finally!) get them written. (Life's not been conducive to writing in the last couple years, sadly.)I really appreciate the note! I will do my best to get a new chapter up very soon.
Response from uma (Reviewer)
Yes I have been keeping up with your stories. I especially liked RAM itself , although I should let you know or perhaps you do know. But I read on ff.net and I usually keep with the newest MMAD fiction, I recently came across one that had taken a parts of your story and added it to theirs, I commented saying I read it before to which the author promptly deleted my comment. Just thought you should know as even though I am no writer I felt bad about something like that. However I shall eagerly await your next update :)
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Would you mind emailing me or messaging me through ffnet to let me know which story it is, if you remember the title? I would appreciate it. I'm very glad that you like RAM!
Response from uma (Reviewer)
i do not have an account on FF.net :/ sorry, i usually just go as a guest i already signed up on alot of new pages. And i could read the stories just as easily, But the Name of the Story is Even in Death by Albus P.W.BDumbledore1891. You take a good look at chapter 5
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Thanks very much! :-) I appreciate the tip!
First a new chapter of LVS and then CSG- I am in heaven! As much as I want to see Siofre and Johannes admit their feelings for each other, I enjoyed the "push-pull" of this chapter. The way the talk of age differences turned to them, Siofre wanting to take his hand but not, sitting close on the bench- all of it a wonderful buildup. 5 stars!
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
I'm glad it made you happy and you're liking the "push-pull"!I'm hoping to update at least two chapters a month -- more if I can -- alternating amongst the WIPs I have going. I am resisting the sudden onslaught of plot bunnies that are begging me to write more RaMverse fics set during the immediate post-RaM time period, like CSG is.Thanks for the review! It's encouraging!
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
I'm glad it made you happy and you're liking the "push-pull"!I'm hoping to update at least two chapters a month -- more if I can -- alternating amongst the WIPs I have going. I am resisting the sudden onslaught of plot bunnies that are begging me to write more RaMverse fics set during the immediate post-RaM time period, like CSG is.Thanks for the review! It's encouraging!
Best birthday present, ever!!! An update for this and it's a very shippy Siofre/Johannes chapter. woooo hoooI think this line was absolutely brilliant:Siofre found herself smiling back, and her heart beating faster at the sight of him. Could she really give him up to another witch?NOPE, she can't give him up to another because her heart already belongs to him and he holds hers as well. I wasn't too fond of the ADMM discussion. Siofre unnerves me when she speaks of Minerva and Albus's relationship, especially in this context. I know Malcolm is her favorite but it almost felt like she wasn't thrilled with Albus marrying Minerva, even though it's what makes her happiest and clearly they adore one another. sigh. Oh well ... I'm still happy for Siofre and Joannes, awwww.
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
Hi! Glad to give you a good birthday prezzie! :-)What Siofre is not thrilled with is Albus not marrying Minerva. It's not that she has objections to their not being married, but she's afraid that Minerva wants marriage & Albus ain't askin' -- and she's right, at this point. But Minerva is being Stoic and sensible, and since she won't talk to Siofre about it, Siofre's not about to give her advice. She's also just plain worried that Minerva will end up having a broken heart or have some other sadness in her life because of the relationship. She loves Minerva and doesn't want to see her hurt -- she cares about Albus, but Minerva's her granddaughter, so she's Siofre's priority in her heart, not Albus, even if she doesn't feel it's her place to bring up her worries with Minerva.As you know from LVS, Siofre and Johannes will eventually be happy together -- Johannes's policy of being steadfast and patient pay off, and Siofre will never have any worries that he did not come to her freely, or that he might have been better off with someone else. But there's a bit of story between now & then, so I'd better say no more -- I'm afraid I'll leak spoilers! LOL!Thanks for the review!
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
Hi! Glad to give you a good birthday prezzie! :-)What Siofre is not thrilled with is Albus not marrying Minerva. It's not that she has objections to their not being married, but she's afraid that Minerva wants marriage & Albus ain't askin' -- and she's right, at this point. But Minerva is being Stoic and sensible, and since she won't talk to Siofre about it, Siofre's not about to give her advice. She's also just plain worried that Minerva will end up having a broken heart or have some other sadness in her life because of the relationship. She loves Minerva and doesn't want to see her hurt -- she cares about Albus, but Minerva's her granddaughter, so she's Siofre's priority in her heart, not Albus, even if she doesn't feel it's her place to bring up her worries with Minerva.As you know from LVS, Siofre and Johannes will eventually be happy together -- Johannes's policy of being steadfast and patient pay off, and Siofre will never have any worries that he did not come to her freely, or that he might have been better off with someone else. But there's a bit of story between now & then, so I'd better say no more -- I'm afraid I'll leak spoilers! LOL!Thanks for the review!
I didn't realize until just now how much I have truly missed this story. But I will be patient and constant. Also, yaaaaaaaaaaaaaay! CFP
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
Thank you! I'm glad you liked it. I've actually missed it, too.Thanks for ... um, I mean, CFR!
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
Thank you! I'm glad you liked it. I've actually missed it, too.Thanks for ... um, I mean, CFR!
YAY!!! I couldn't believe it when I got the message for the update, it's really here! A new chapter! :) Thank you! I loved it, the long wait was more than worth it because this chapter is just perfect. I always love when these two have their little moments, it's so cute. I loved getting to know a little more about Siofre's thoughts and feelings, I love that she's just as anxious and ready as Johannes is, I can't wait to see how they finally come together. I loved that he was firm about wanting to spend the afternoon with her and didn't let her get away with working alone. I can't wait for the next chapter, I hope it won't be too long a wait :)
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
Hi! I'm so glad you enjoyed it!Yes, Johannes is becoming gradually more assertive, but without being pushy or aggressive about it, and always with Siofre's good in his mind. I, too, hope it will not be too long a wait for another chapter of CSG! Thanks for letting me know you enjoyed the chapter!
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
Hi! I'm so glad you enjoyed it!Yes, Johannes is becoming gradually more assertive, but without being pushy or aggressive about it, and always with Siofre's good in his mind. I, too, hope it will not be too long a wait for another chapter of CSG! Thanks for letting me know you enjoyed the chapter!
I'm not quite sure if Lydia has three children or only one - Bertrand - are her others Conner and someone else? I got a bit confused when Soifre was explaining her children - seemed to me she miscarried a lot and that Bertrand was the only child - but then you said he was the youngest, so I got confused.
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
I need to reread the chapter & make sure that I haven't mis-typed something. If I have, I'll go in and make a correction! Thanks!Lydia has one child, Bertrand, and he has two children, Phoebe and Conner. Conner's married to Elisabeth and they have one boy, Liam (who grows up to be Eoghan's father).
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I think the plethora of children, grandchildren, and other relatives may simply have overwhelmed the synapses. hee! In the previous chapter, Siofre does say that Bertrand was Lydia & Malcolm Tyree's only child, and then in this chapter, she speaks of Bertrand being married to Sally (Longbottom) and the two of them having Connor & Phoebe. Charles Prince is Bertrand's cousin (Charles's father was Bertrand Prince, Lydia's brother, for whom she named her son), and Charles is married to Sally's sister Louisa. (And this is why Severus is related to Eogan in two ways -- through the Princes & the Longbottoms. Bertrand's cousin and Sally's sister are Eileen Prince's grandparents, thus Severus's great-grandparents, and Bertrand and Sally themselves are Eoghan's great-grandparents.) Yeah, can get confusing!
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I'll just take your word for it and go forward - it was confusing - whew! Thanks for explaining in simple terms - you know sometimes I need a map. *smirks*
*snip*“I may need to take additional measures,” Siofre said. “And the spells I cast will only be effective as long as they are in the house. From what I understand, he drinks, then comes home mean. On good nights, he passes out before he does more than shout and make a scene. The nosy neighbour turns a blind eye to the husband’s behaviour, though he surely must know of it. Any road, I did what I could to make sure that if he does come home drunk, he passes out straightaway upon crossing the threshold. If he tries to take a drink at home, he’ll become ill. Gwyneth claims that when he’s not drinking, he’s moody, but otherwise fine. Most of the spells I cast were aimed at his drinking—making the consequences miserable for him. I cast a few protective spells around Gwyneth, and I gave her an emergency Portkey, as well. If Cadoc becomes violent or frightens her in any way, she can Portkey to her brother and sister-in-law’s home.”“Why would she stay with such a brute?” Johannes asked.“She does love him, or the man she remembers marrying,” Siofre replied, “but she is expecting a baby. It was partly for her baby’s sake that I tried to persuade her to leave the man, but she . . . she has her reasons, I suppose.”“He hits her or hexes her and she is pregnant?” Johannes asked, even more appalled than he had been. “The man should be . . . he should be . . . I do not know a suitable punishment, but he does not deserve the family if he cannot treat them with the love and respect that he should. He should be their protector!”Siofre twitched a slight smile. “Perhaps a lecture in gentlemanly behaviour might do him some good . . . in a few weeks, after the man has ceased drinking. If we can manage that.” I hate to say it, but nothing fixes an abuser unless the abuser WANTS to be fixed - only THEY can truly heal themselves - all the abusee can do is leave - and the woman, in my opinion, is being foolish and selfish - and abusive to her unborn child. I can not STAND lazy, selfish women like this that would rather live in hell than do something better for their kids.
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Okay, since we know that Lydia is Slytherin, and Johannes is Ravenclaw - I simply MUST know what our Siofre is, my guess, Ravenclaw or Gryffindor - or perhaps Slytherin.... but I'm putting my coin on Ravenclaw.
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Yes, she's a Ravenclaw. :-)You're right about abusers. Siofre's trying to address some of the underlying causes of his drinking, hoping that that will help, as well as doing something about the drinking itself. We shall see what happens with that.Let's see . . . here's the passage from RaM ("A Spree") where Siofre and Johannes meet:Johannes laughed as the three witches all agreed that every wizard still had a little boy in him. Siofre looked up at the tall, sandy-haired wizard.“Don’t know you. You’re foreign, aren’t you?” The words were blunt, but her tone friendly.“I am from Germany, ma’am,” Johannes said in his friendly manner. “Johannes Birnbaum, at your service.”“Ah, the Herbology wizard. Ravenclaw Head of House, aren’t you? Heard good things about you. Siofre Tyree, Ravenclaw myself,” she said, holding out her hand, which Johannes took and bent over in a formal bow.As Johannes straightened, Minerva apologised. “I am sorry, Grandmother. I hadn’t realised that you two hadn’t met.”
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Ah, I should have remembered this - well then, my coin was well placed - Ravenclaw indeed.
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Indeed! You're a good 'claw spotter! ;-)
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Am I? Seems I've been spoiled with a few good ones in my life. *winks*
*snip*A few moments later, the two stepped out into the sunshine, and Johannes saw that they had arrived at a gabled cottage of three stories. Unlike the main house with its towers and turrets, this house was not all stone. It was a combination of half-timbering and uncut natural stone of different colours—quite unusual for Scotland, in Johannes’s experience—but very lovely on this woody hill. It seemed half-grown from the land and the surrounding woods.Ok that right there is freaking AWESOME!
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*snip*“Hmph. Still, it is not hers, and it is desolate.” She looked around her. “This is . . . isolated and private, but not set apart the way that island is. And that other, that is Dumbledore’s island. Do you know its name? Eilean Tèarmunn. It means ‘Refuge Island.’ A sanctuary from the wizarding world. Not even a Post Owl can get through to it. That is fine as far as it goes, but for Minerva, I would like her to have a place she could come that is hers if she needs it, and not just that island of Dumbledore’s. She can use the cottage or not, as she likes—and bring Dumbledore with her if she wishes.”Ahhhhh, NOW I am starting to understand the Tyree witches... forward thinking, ahead of their time, true Gaelic women of power - equal power - no woman should rely on a man - yes, now I am seeing the true Soifre. Besides all that, I'm glad she is looking out for Minerva - though I know Dumbledore wouldn't dream of hurting his love, but still, Minerva should have her own place.... and if Soifre has the space, and buildings, why not? Makes perfect sense. I wish I could live here! I'm insainly jealous!
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*snip*“You think Minerva might not want it? Even if she uses it seldom, it will be here for her. It can be a holiday cottage for now, if she likes, but she will want a family one day and a home to raise her children."*winces*
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The shell house is amazing, really amazing!
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
Hi,
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
! I'm glad you liked the cottage and the shell house. :-)Yes, typical of Tyree witches is that sense of independence, and Siofre has it in spades. She wants to help give Minerva opportunities and that home just of her own. As you say, she has the space, so why not?Yes, Siofre has no crystal ball to see into the future, and she does envision one with Minerva having children of her own. It's a wistful sort of moment for those of us who know what the future does hold for Minerva.
*snip*I hate maths. Maths makes me sleepy and I itch all over. I think I’m allergic,” Lydia said.Siofre barked a laugh. “And that is why I will do the calculations, as always. You’d think we didn’t do this every month.”“I do my very best to forget,” Lydia said pitifully.I can so relate to Lydia here... hate math... haaaaaaaate it.
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*snip*“I am keeping much rushes, though, here and along the edge opposite,” Johannes said, pointing. “They are good for the animals, for the fowl and fishes, to have them here.”He is absolutely correct - far too many people cut all the natural vegetation out of a pond and kill it, even putting up cement walls around it - turns the water into piss pea soup and basically kills it - thank you for keeping him realistic and knowledgable - a real herbologist! A naturalist!
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LOL! Yes, I'm allergic to math, too -- but sadly have had to work for many years in jobs that required me to sit there and "itch" while using it. Unfortunately, although I hate it, I'm still not abysmal at it. Although I suppose that's good . . . to a point!Glad you like Johannes and his care for the natural balance and all the living things, plant and animal. One of the things he enjoys is knowing how plants fit into an ecosystem, and what plants can do for various critters. He loves to encourage life, so he certainly wouldn't deaden a pond by cutting out all the vegetation and putting in concrete! I'm glad you appreciate this aspect of the story. :-)
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I've seen far too many gardeners that remind me of some Wal-Mart version of a garden - potted plants that attract NO insects and some concrete and plastic fountain sitting on asphalt - and these 'gardens' are so alien to the natural surroundings and support no life and take up so .... here I am ranting - sorry - anyway, glad to see Johannes is a REAL naturalist/gardener.I also love the explanation of the alarm charms or wards that they are going to put around the pond to keep the babies from drowning - very cool!
Okay - so - lets see, I loved seeing Gertie again, and had to roll my eyes too at Malcolm's silliness - she's a good sport, putting up with him I think - and as usual, I always get embarassed when folks at the table have kissed others at the table but aren't with those at the table - as you know, so I had even more respect for Gertie for sitting through all that as Mal and Katherine talked about his kissing - eh... what else ... Katherine was interesting and I'd like to have learned more about her role in Grindelwald's defeat - as well as her work with Dumbledore but I know that's a minor thing here.I liked how Johannes stumbles around with his English and makes silly errors - chip off the old brick and such - and I like how you've made his speach a bit odd, which it should be, since English isn't his first language.I admit, I'd like to know more about why Grindelwald was after him - recruiting him, but perhaps we'll learn more about that as the story progresses.But most importantly, I'd really curious about WHY Siofre has captured his attention - its a bit of a puzzle to me - I guess I just don't see much of her personality yet or something - besides that she's a very commanding witch - got that alpha personality - perhaps that's it? At any rate, I'm sure I'll learn more as the story progresses.And as always, enjoying your writing, but then again I'd never have started reading Scottish Garden if I wasn't already completely taken with your writing - so no surprises there!
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Yes, you'll eventually learn more about what happened to Johannes's family & why.It's partly the commanding personality, and partly just "chemistry" -- or maybe it's "magic," or magical resonance. Malcolm can be a trial, but usually in a funny way, so Gertrude actually enjoys it when he's "exasperating." haha!Glad you're enjoying it!
Oh dear, Malcolm is meddling already...
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haha! His heart's in the right place!
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
Seems most of your characters, OC or Canon, are meddlesome! HAHA! I love EEET! For once it isn't Dumbledore meddling - thankfully - though I suppose right now he's too busy with Minerva to think about much else. *grins*
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
Yes, Dumbledore is busy between Minerva, Hogwarts, Minerva, the Ministry, Minerva . . . well, you get the idea!
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Mmmmhmmmm - might have to go back and read RaM just to see how busy he is!
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
This is a bit post-RaM, but you're right: if you reread the end of RaM, you'll get an idea of what may be still be keeping him busy these days!
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All good stuff if I remember correctly.
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
Oh, very good, indeed!
Morgan and Fiona had quads? What on earth? Magical fertility treatment or something? You simply MUST explain that!I am liking this, loving the timid flirtation from Johannes and the direct flirtation or demands of his time, from Siofre - pretty cute. I love romance in the RamVerse - I don't have to worry about rejection!
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Yes, indeed! And everyone suspects they used potions or a spell or something, but they claim not. Minerva calls them "the litter." (Gareth mentioned that tidbit about Minerva's humor to Severus back in LVS somewhere. Severus liked it. hee!)I'm glad you're enjoying the romance. Johannes is rather smitten, and Siofre isn't indifferent, either! Thanks!
A very nice introduction and very cute to see Johannes having an eye on Siofre - looking forward to more Dumbledore and McGonagall!
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Thanks! Glad you enjoyed it. Albus & Minerva will eventually make "personal appearances" in the fic, but not for a while yet -- although Minerva shows up by reference fairly frequently. And there's one of your favorite HP characters coming up soonish, too! :-)
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Ooooh - Gertie???
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
Ah, she's a RaMverse character, but yes, she does, indeed, show up! And relatively soon, actually -- sooner than the canon HP character I was thinking of. In fact, there are two canon characters appearing together in that chapter who I'm pretty sure are among your faves. :-)
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Ooooh! I'm so excited!!!!!
I was very happy to see an update to this story! And what a fun chapter it was. Apparently Minerva isn't the only one who doubts Malcolm's stories. Poor Malcolm. I think Malcolm was holding back in the fight or he would have taken all of the other wizards out easily:). BTW-go Johannes! Loved the spell with the wood. I think he should have left Cam up on the wall. I imagine these lads are in trouble if Gertrude and/ Siofre hear about it. Thanks for a fun read.
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Hi! Glad you enjoyed it! Yes, Malcolm could have easily taken them, but it wasn't until it got "serious" that he went ahead and took 'em out. Yes, Johannes might not be much with the traditional defensive spells, hexes, jinxes, and the like, but he's got some imagination and skill with wood, so he didn't do too badly!Thanks!
Well, that certainly wasn't how I was expecting the evening to end. Action packed for sure!!I loved the details you put in about the African dragons. It amazes me how you always come up with new and interesting ideas to add to the RaM universe.I can't believe how quickly the little bar conversation turned ugly. Cam certainly was a nasty bugger and I'm glad Johannes was the one to pin him to the wall. Poor Aberforth, though. I pity him having to clean up all that mess. hahaWonder what Siofre would think if she heard about all that drama??? lol
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I do wonder what Siofre would think, too! Johannes and Malcolm don't want to find out, that's for sure! Somehow, I can imagine that that story might make its way to her ears, whether the "lads" want it to or not! Yes, Cam was just ready for a confrontation there, wasn't he? And pretty nasty in his comments and innuendos, too. Glad you liked Johannes's trick with the wood. He might not be much at fighting, but he is a clever wizard, nonetheless -- and experienced with wood, as well. Glad you liked the African dragons. I've been looking for an opportunity to stick those into a chapter with Malcolm since I wrote his "application letter" to Dumbledore back in RaM, so it was really fun to finally give them a bit of space and hear a small portion of the story of Malcolm's first dragon ride. Thanks very much for the review!
OMG!! an update!! I was so happy when I saw the email in my inbox! Thanks!I loved this chapter, Malcolm is always so much fun, poor Johannes I don't think he likes the kind of fun Malcolm brings lol. This was a very nice chapter, so funny! I can't wait to read more Siofre and Johannes, they are getting closer by the chapter! LOL.thank you for updatingSam
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Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter! You're right: Johannes doesn't have the same idea of "fun" that Malcolm does!Thanks for the review! (I was glad to finally be able to write & update! )
I had been holding off reading this chapter and "saving it" since you had mentioned your muse had left you, but tonight I caved in and I'm so glad I did. Johannes' vision of Siofre and his confession to Lydia was breath-taking. How apropos that the jerk that used and left Lydia was a Lockhart. She did much better with her Murdoch. It was a little jarring to read the name Severus back in this time period. I hope you find your muse again. I really miss the updates. Take care.
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I am currently struggling with writing a gift exchange fic that's finally beginning to sort of come together. I hope that once I have that written, maybe my muse will come back for the other stories. I miss them, too.I am glad that you enjoyed the chapter! Your review brought the characters back into my mind, and Lydia's story, so maybe that will help grease the wheels of the fanfic section of my brain! I figured that a Lockhart would be very good at cutting and running when the going got tough even back then. I thought it might be an interesting reminder of Severus' pureblooded side of the family, too, to have mention of the Prince relative he was named after, as well as the Princes' earlier tangles with the Tyree clan. We will also hear more about Eileen and her father in an upcoming chapter -- hmm, do I hear my muse tiptoeing about? LOL!Anyway, thank you very much for your review. I'm glad you enjoyed it -- and sorry that you haven't got another one to look forward to immediately, but I haven't vanished, and I do hope to continue with both this and LVS very soon. :-)
I'm really enjoying your story. Thank you for sharing your talent :)
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Hi,
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! Thank you for your note! I appreciate it, and I'm really glad you're enjoying the story.
Ooo lovely chapter. I like the way you are building the sexual tension and bonds between them. Fascinating ritual; I'm curious about the artifact. I'm assuming/hoping it has greater meaning than is usual.
I see Malcolm is in the next chapter - thank you!
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Thanks,
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!The next chapter has a bit more about the artifact -- and Siofre's curious about it, as well.I'm glad you're looking forward to seeing Malcolm again. I hope you enjoy it. He'll be popping in and staying for a couple chapters. :-)Thanks for the review!
LOL God Malcolm is amazing! lol, that tale and the show lol, he's great! I'm so glad he's back and I love it that Siofre calls Gertrude his witch! that's so sweet.
Now the most important part, OMG!! that was sooooo romantic, Johannes is very very romantic, his words to Siofre, the kiss, the pledge! oooohhhh I'm soooo happy right now!!! and Siofre! her reaction was amazing, I'm so pleased! lol. I loved it that she went from Magister to Honnie in less than a minute, she's giving in!
I really think his own private pledge to her has alot to do with the shape, color and markings of the artifact, I can't wait to find out! I'm so excited! Can't wait for the next chapter. GREAT, WONDERFUL writing!
Sam
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
Thank you! I enjoy writing Malcolm -- he seems to write himself -- and it's really fun to be able to step back into that period.I'm glad you enjoyed the romantic bits, as well. They are growing ever closer.Thank you very much for reviewing!
Fun chapter, indeedy!!!The conversation with Siofre and Bridie and then the one with her and Johannes warmed my heart fully. His declarations to her about his pledges, both verbal and in his heart, were very sweet. I'm sure she must know by now that he is truly enamoured with her. However, I can still see her giving him the time and space to come to her fully.LOVE, LOVE, LOVE MALCOLM!! He has me grinning from ear to ear with his tales to the wizard and his retelling of his meeting with him. He's such a hoot. And I'd have to agree with Siofre that his witch caught him well. haha.
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I'm glad you enjoyed both the romance and the humor in this chapter. I think that Siofre is very aware now of his increasingly strong feelings for her. We'll see where that knowledge might lead.I'm glad that you found Malcolm and his tales a hoot. He's fun -- he practically writes himself.Thanks for the review!
Such an awesome chapter! I looooove it!!! The ceremony performed by Siofre was very special and I'm glad they didn't need any witnesses. I think some of the "magic" of the moment would have been lost if others had been around. And the artifact sounds very intriguing. I do hope we'll learn more about that as the story progresses. We are one step closer to having Siofre and Johannes together. SWEEEEET!!!!!Thanks for the update!
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You're welcome! I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter! They are, indeed, closer now!
thank you, thank you, thank you!! I loved loved this chapter, it's very sweet and so interesting to learn all of this about Siofre and Tyree Clan. It was very funny that he was unsure about her wanting to adopt him lol, and I can't wait to find out what does the artifact mean, I'm sure it has to do something with their bond, I hope so at least!. I'm sooo glad Malcolm is going to be in the next chapter, I miss him! lol. Can't wait to read more, thanks!Sam
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Yeah, he sure didn't want her thinking of him as her son! LOL! And she was glad that he was happy that he'd be closer to her than to any others in the clan. (Yay -- my javascript emoticons are working again! LOL!)It's been fun writing Malcolm in this coming chapter, so I hope you'll enjoy it.Thanks for the review!