Chapter Twenty: Of the Clan Tyree
Chapter 20 of 32
MMADfanSiofre performs an ancient ritual and brings Johannes into the clan.
ReviewedChapter Twenty: Of the Clan Tyree
"So you understand," Siofre said questioningly, "I can admit you to the wards easily with no great ado. With a mere pinprick to your finger, I'd bind you to the land, add you to the wards, and free you'd be to Apparate almost anywhere within these grounds once you are already anywhere on the estate, with no other measures necessary. But if I join you to the clan first, I may then admit you to the full family wards, and you could Apparate to whatever point you wish that is encompassed by this estate, from wherever you are, whether on or off the property, and you may likewise Apparate into or out of any of the dwellings or outbuildings on the estate, unless there is a separate Anti-Apparition ward in place. Do you wish to join the Clan Tyree, Magister?"
Johannes was silent for a moment, then he looked off over the grounds, taking in the vista before him. Siofre had Apparated him to the highest hill on the estate, where the remains of an ancient tower stood behind them. From that point, he could see the whole of the estate, all but what disappeared in the low, misty cloud to the far northeast, and if he turned his eyes to the west and the south, he could see the machairs and the field of bere he had planted, and beyond that, the coast and the sea. He looked again toward the large house not much below them, the stone castle with its towers and turrets, which had become his home over the past several weeks.
He shook his head slightly, and Siofre thought for a moment that he would refuse the offer or had not understood it, but he turned to face her fully, looking down into her eyes, his lips parted as he considered her.
"To join the clan . . . That is a most great honour you offer, Madam Tyree," he said softly. "I have heard something of this clan . . . from Minerva, from Malcolm, from others. The only solely wizarding Scottish clan, with a long history, strong roots, and many secrets, the clan whose witches are foremost." He reached out with one hand, and Siofre gave him hers. He bowed over it slowly, not perfunctorily. Straightening, he said, "Aye, I will join your clan, Madam Tyree, even though I do not completely understand it."
"Have you questions about the ritual?"
"It is like an adoption, yes?"
"A bit, but you belong to the clan, and the clan to you, not to a single family, and your loyalty to the clan and its many members is very important, though not paramount to your own conscience. If a Tyree...whether they bear that name or no...comes to you for assistance, you give it, unless the assistance requested goes against your conscience."
Johannes nodded. "I can do that."
"And it is unlike a usual adoption in that you do not have a mother, or a father, and you are not a . . . you are not a dependant, you understand, nor an heir to property, only to tradition."
Johannes smiled. "I am not a child for many years, Siofre."
Siofre chuckled. "You could still be adopted as a son and heir within a family, but you are not in this ritual. The clan and the family adoptions are usually performed as separate rites."
Johannes hesitated, looking uncomfortable.
"What is it?" Siofre asked.
"You do not wish to adopt me . . ." It was not quite a question.
Siofre blinked. "Nay." She shook her head.
Johannes breathed a sigh and relaxed. "Good. I would not wish to offend you by declining."
"You will be family in a sense, of course, and you will be closer to me than to any other, as I am the one to invite you, as well as the one to perform the ritual."
Johannes nodded. "That is good."
It was Siofre's turn to relax. "Aye. Any other questions?"
"Legally, within British wizarding law, what is the . . . the status of this ritual?"
Siofre quirked a crooked grin. "It is not sanctioned, not within British borders, as it is a blood ritual that does not fall within their narrowly prescribed list of legal blood magic. The clan joining, however, does have legal status, as contradictory as that may seem. If ever you are fleeing from the British wizarding authorities...though I canna imagine such a day...you have a right to seek refuge on the isle of Tiriodh Beag; that right is respected by the British Ministry and your clan membership is recognised. This is a centuries' old practice, and only once did any British minister or English wizarding chief attempt to violate that right. I will not alarm you with the details of their fates, but the English authorities did not succeed, and our power has not diminished with the years. When you are on Tiree, you are always safe from the English...or from anyone else. You may also legally add 'Tyree' just before your own family name and sign it that way in official documents, if you wish, or add 'of Tyree' after it. There are a few additional small details...some to do with the Muggle world...but I don't think any of them are pertinent at the moment."
"But if I commit a crime...and I would not...but if I committed one, should not the conscience of the Tyrees upon the island lead them to surrender me to the British Ministry?" Johannes asked, puzzled.
Siofre laughed. "Nay. Conscience might require them to try you themselves, if they believed the charges had merit, and to mete out their own justice, but not to surrender you."
"I see . . . and are there . . . I do not know how to ask this . . . are there obligations I have? Laws of the island, or of the Tyree clan?"
"No laws but those natural to us. Do not steal from another member of the clan, do not injure another unless in defence of self or other, do not murder another human, whether magic or Muggle. Defer to the judgment of the Tyree witches' comhairle...the witches' council...over that of any other wizarding council, gamot, or ministry. There were once more laws of obedience to the clan grandmothers, but they have become unnecessary, obsolete," Siofre said. "Other than that, there are only principles to aspire to. To be upright and to follow your conscience, to respect elders, to first seek Tyree counsel or aid in crisis, and to lend aid to any of the clan who request it, your conscience allowing."
"Do only witches sit on the council of Tiree?" Johannes asked curiously.
"There are three councils. The witches' comhairle, which is the primary council...the highest one, if you wish to put it in those terms...then the wizards' council of five elders, which deals with wizards' matters and handles some relations with those outside the clan, generally trade, and then there is a council of twelve that consists of witches and wizards who are chosen from among those who live on Tiree by the inhabitants of the island. They need only have reached thirty years of age, and they deal with minor questions and with . . . social events, you might say. Any member of the general council can bring an issue before the witches' comhairle for deciding, and the question must be addressed by the comhairle. They canna dismiss it from consideration as they might something brought them from some other clan member without that standing."
"Does not my clan membership require some approval by a council, then?" Johannes asked.
"Nay. I have authority to join you without any approval from any other. It is not lightly done, Honnie," she added.
"You are on this, um, witches' corya?" Johannes asked, struggling to pronounce the Gaelic.
Siofre suppressed her smile. "Aye, I am on the council. Third witch of nine."
"How are they selected?"
Siofre hesitated. "It is a witches' knowledge and witches' magic, what you ask about, you understand, but it is partly upon basis of age and experience. Beyond that . . ." Siofre shook her head.
Johannes nodded. "I understand."
"And so you are still willing to become a member of the Tyree clan?"
"Yes. Aye. As long as it does not require me to learn Scottish."
Siofre laughed at that. "Nay, no such thing! There are even some members born to the clan who do not speak it these days...Connor does not, no more than a few words, and Bertrand's Gaelic was never good."
Johannes smiled. "Good then. Do we do this now? Today?"
Siofre nodded and drew the sheathed knife from her pocket. "Much of the ritual is in Gaelic, and an ancient dialect...although there are a few sections that I will say in English for you...so you will not understand most of it. But it will bind your blood to the blood of the Clan Tyree through my blood, and your magic to the clan's magic through mine. There is a place for you to make agreement, an oath of sorts, to bind you willingly. That I will repeat in English for you."
"I am ready. What do you need of me?"
"Your left arm bared," Siofre instructed. "Just to the elbow suffices. You understand this is not a pinprick such as your Hogwarts ritual required when you became Head of Ravenclaw?"
Johannes's brow rose. "You know of that?"
Siofre cackled. "Of that little bit of magic, yes. Hogwarts is in Scotland, after all, even an we Tyrees often eschew its education. But you understand that more than a wee drop of your blood will flow?"
Johannes nodded. His arm was already bared to the elbow; he had removed his cloak and laid it upon a rock. His jacket had followed it, and then he rolled up his sleeve. He shivered slightly in the cool breeze. Siofre cast a warming charm on the air around him, and he smiled.
"You have done this before?" Johannes asked as Siofre drew the Charmed knife from its sheath and replaced the sheath in her robe pocket, putting the bare blade in her belt.
"Aye, several times, though I've not invited anyone myself before. Or I should say, I have never both performed the ritual and invited someone to join the clan. When I was a young witch, I asked that Collum McGonagall be joined to the clan, and that ritual was performed by Moira Tyree. So this is a bit different from the other rituals I've performed, since there are only we two here, and not a third, some other who made the request for the ritual and who would also participate in it, sponsoring you, so to speak."
"I see. And no witness is needed?"
"Nay. The magic and the blood provide a testament," Siofre replied. "Now, hold out your left arm to me. Become aware of the pulse of your magic flowing through your body and through your left hand and arm. You must now trust me, and do not stop me with any question. When you must do anything, I will tell you. You are ready?"
Johannes nodded. "Aye. And I trust you. Utterly." His eyes met hers, and Siofre felt his trust, and more.
Siofre quickly bared her own left arm, moving aside her cape to hang down her back and leaving both arms free, then rolling up the sleeve of her robe. She grasped his arm, placing her hand beneath his forearm so that his arm rested across hers, his hand near her elbow.
"You may take hold of me if you wish...now or when I use the blade. It may be somewhat uncomfortable...painful, actually...but do try not to flinch, or it will be worse. Remain still and just grip me harder if you need to do so."
Johannes nodded, but grasped her arm only lightly.
"One final question for you, Honnie: what is your full name? Have you any middle name?"
"Johannes Christian Maria Birnbaum."
"Maria?" Siofre asked, unable to stop herself.
"Aye. Unusual here, more common where I am from, and in my mother's family."
Siofre nodded and drew her wand. "And now to begin. You do agree freely to join the Clan Tyree, joining your magic to the clan's, your blood to ours, sharing in our strength and sharing your own?"
Johannes nodded. "I do, freely."
Siofre began to chant in Gaelic, and Johannes understood none of it, though twice, he did catch the name of Tyree, and once, his own name in full. Siofre waved her wand, moving it in a circle over their arms, and Johannes felt Siofre's magic flow over his forearm, seeming to wrap it, or encase it, then he felt an unusual sensation of tugging at his own magic, weaving it into the magic around their arms. He didn't resist, but he was somewhat alarmed by the physical reaction the intertwining of their magic was eliciting in him. The sensations of his magic flowing out and other magic joining it, then Siofre's magic working its way into his arm to flow through him, created a physical tingling that began in his arm but spread through his body, even into his groin, which interpreted the sensations as sexually arousing.
Johannes relaxed and reasoned that this was likely an expected side-effect of the ritual, at least when done between a witch and a wizard. He only hoped that the arousal would remain mild enough so that he wouldn't get a full erection...that might be noticeable and rather embarrassing. Siofre seemed wholly focussed on the spells she was casting, however, and her gaze was on their arms, now joined by a glowing shell of magic.
When the glow spread gossamer threads of light from their arms toward their bodies, Siofre pocketed her wand and drew out the long copper knife. She said a few more incomprehensible words, then, using the point of the sharp Charmed blade, she drew a long incision up her own inner arm, from wrist to elbow. The cut didn't graze any large veins, and her blood flowed gently from the incision, running over her arm and dripping onto the stony ground.
She wiped the long, curved edge of the Charmed blade through her blood, then she raised her eyes to meet Johannes's. He nodded, and she asked him a question in Gaelic, repeating it in English: "Do you, Johannes Christian Maria Birnbaum, join your blood freely with mine and with the blood of my kin, to be joined forever with our clan and to show your loyalty first to the Clan Tyree, but for the dictates of your conscience?"
"Aye, I join freely the Clan Tyree."
"And with your blood, your magic, also?"
Johannes nodded. His blood and his magic, joined to the clan and to Siofre, he thought. His first loyalty would always be to her, and then to her clan, for such were the dictates of his conscience. "Aye, my blood and my magic together."
Siofre smiled slightly and nodded. With one word, and tightening the grip of her left hand on his arm, she used the long, curved, bloodied blade to slice into the soft skin of his inner forearm. The long incision bled freely, but other than a slight initial burning sensation, Johannes found it surprisingly unpainful, and he loosened his own grip on Siofre's arm, which he had unconsciously tightened in anticipation.
Their blood seemed to swim and merge, swirling on their arms and in the air around them, joining the glowing aurora of magic surrounding their arms. Siofre chanted over the blood, describing figures in it with the point of the dagger, runes of some sort, Johannes thought. The symbols each glowed brightly for a moment before subsiding back into the shell of magic and blood, and Johannes felt each one as though it were hot candle wax against his skin, then seeping into his arm and integrating itself into his magic.
Siofre wiped the bloody blade against her arm, then replaced it in her belt. Her wand flew to her fingers. She breathed out slowly, creating a warm breeze from between her lips, as she tapped the tip of her wand once against the glowing, pulsing shell of magic. A sound rang out, like that of a clear bell, and the encasing magic fell away from their arms and dissipated. Siofre loosened her grip on Johannes's arm and flicked her wand once, casting a common healing charm, then she let go.
"There. Now you are of the Clan Tyree, Johannes. Welcome, cousin!"
Johannes smiled. "Thank you." He bowed slightly.
"And now, your first favour asked by a member of the clan to you as a member of the clan." Siofre held out her arm. "Would you heal my scratch, Honnie?"
Johannes immediately drew his wand and, holding her left hand in his, he cast a healing charm on the long, still bleeding cut, then cast a cleansing charm on her stained arm and hand. "That was all right? To clean it?"
"Aye, thank you. And you may clean your own arm, though we will need a bit more of your blood for the wards, so you may wish to wait. Just a wee drop this time, though," Siofre said. She bent and picked up something from the rock where their blood had dripped. She examined it closely, and Johannes thought that an odd expression of surprise flitted across her face.
"What is it?"
"It is the artifact from the ritual. One is always created. It drops from the blood and magic when the sleeve of magic is removed at the end there...when there was the ringing. Each is different."
"May I see it?"
Siofre handed it to him. "You may have it...though I would like the loan of it for a day or two, if I may."
Johannes nodded. "Of course."
He examined the artifact, which lay heavily in the palm of his hand. Never having seen one, he hadn't any idea what Siofre had found remarkable in it, or surprising. It was smooth and seemed made of gold, with veins of stone, blood red and deep malachite green. Impressed upon one side was an outlined figure that looked to Johannes like a cup or chalice with lines emerging from it, and the other side was smooth and rounded. He handed the artifact back to Siofre.
"Is it unusual?" Johannes asked.
"Each one is different, as I said, but this one . . . aye, it is unusual, I find." She slipped the stone into her pocket. "Come, time for the wards, then we'll go home for lunch, eh? I asked Multry for something special today. Something for you, to celebrate. She mentioned potato dumplings."
Author's Note: In the next chapter, Siofre visits wizarding Tiree Beag again, and later, Malcolm drops by. Characters will include Siofre, Johannes, Lydia, Malcolm, and Bridie.
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Dear MMADfan, I love this story! Do you plan to write more chapters in the future? I would love to see it finished.
I really hope you update soon, you write such wonderful fanfiction and I find myself rereading some of the old ones hopefully your next update will be near in the future for this as well as LVS
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
Thank you! I do hope to update both stories soon!
I really hope you update soon, you write such wonderful fanfiction and I find myself rereading some of the old ones hopefully your next update will be near in the future for this as well as LVS
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Thank you very much,
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
!I will definitely try to get a few chapters of Charming the Scottish Garden and LVS posted this autumn. I'm sorry for the wait. It's very good to know that people are still reading them and will be here to read the new chapters when I (finally!) get them written. (Life's not been conducive to writing in the last couple years, sadly.)I really appreciate the note! I will do my best to get a new chapter up very soon.
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Yes I have been keeping up with your stories. I especially liked RAM itself , although I should let you know or perhaps you do know. But I read on ff.net and I usually keep with the newest MMAD fiction, I recently came across one that had taken a parts of your story and added it to theirs, I commented saying I read it before to which the author promptly deleted my comment. Just thought you should know as even though I am no writer I felt bad about something like that. However I shall eagerly await your next update :)
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Would you mind emailing me or messaging me through ffnet to let me know which story it is, if you remember the title? I would appreciate it. I'm very glad that you like RAM!
Response from uma (Reviewer)
i do not have an account on FF.net :/ sorry, i usually just go as a guest i already signed up on alot of new pages. And i could read the stories just as easily, But the Name of the Story is Even in Death by Albus P.W.BDumbledore1891. You take a good look at chapter 5
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Thanks very much! :-) I appreciate the tip!
First a new chapter of LVS and then CSG- I am in heaven! As much as I want to see Siofre and Johannes admit their feelings for each other, I enjoyed the "push-pull" of this chapter. The way the talk of age differences turned to them, Siofre wanting to take his hand but not, sitting close on the bench- all of it a wonderful buildup. 5 stars!
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
I'm glad it made you happy and you're liking the "push-pull"!I'm hoping to update at least two chapters a month -- more if I can -- alternating amongst the WIPs I have going. I am resisting the sudden onslaught of plot bunnies that are begging me to write more RaMverse fics set during the immediate post-RaM time period, like CSG is.Thanks for the review! It's encouraging!
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
I'm glad it made you happy and you're liking the "push-pull"!I'm hoping to update at least two chapters a month -- more if I can -- alternating amongst the WIPs I have going. I am resisting the sudden onslaught of plot bunnies that are begging me to write more RaMverse fics set during the immediate post-RaM time period, like CSG is.Thanks for the review! It's encouraging!
Best birthday present, ever!!! An update for this and it's a very shippy Siofre/Johannes chapter. woooo hoooI think this line was absolutely brilliant:Siofre found herself smiling back, and her heart beating faster at the sight of him. Could she really give him up to another witch?NOPE, she can't give him up to another because her heart already belongs to him and he holds hers as well. I wasn't too fond of the ADMM discussion. Siofre unnerves me when she speaks of Minerva and Albus's relationship, especially in this context. I know Malcolm is her favorite but it almost felt like she wasn't thrilled with Albus marrying Minerva, even though it's what makes her happiest and clearly they adore one another. sigh. Oh well ... I'm still happy for Siofre and Joannes, awwww.
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
Hi! Glad to give you a good birthday prezzie! :-)What Siofre is not thrilled with is Albus not marrying Minerva. It's not that she has objections to their not being married, but she's afraid that Minerva wants marriage & Albus ain't askin' -- and she's right, at this point. But Minerva is being Stoic and sensible, and since she won't talk to Siofre about it, Siofre's not about to give her advice. She's also just plain worried that Minerva will end up having a broken heart or have some other sadness in her life because of the relationship. She loves Minerva and doesn't want to see her hurt -- she cares about Albus, but Minerva's her granddaughter, so she's Siofre's priority in her heart, not Albus, even if she doesn't feel it's her place to bring up her worries with Minerva.As you know from LVS, Siofre and Johannes will eventually be happy together -- Johannes's policy of being steadfast and patient pay off, and Siofre will never have any worries that he did not come to her freely, or that he might have been better off with someone else. But there's a bit of story between now & then, so I'd better say no more -- I'm afraid I'll leak spoilers! LOL!Thanks for the review!
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
Hi! Glad to give you a good birthday prezzie! :-)What Siofre is not thrilled with is Albus not marrying Minerva. It's not that she has objections to their not being married, but she's afraid that Minerva wants marriage & Albus ain't askin' -- and she's right, at this point. But Minerva is being Stoic and sensible, and since she won't talk to Siofre about it, Siofre's not about to give her advice. She's also just plain worried that Minerva will end up having a broken heart or have some other sadness in her life because of the relationship. She loves Minerva and doesn't want to see her hurt -- she cares about Albus, but Minerva's her granddaughter, so she's Siofre's priority in her heart, not Albus, even if she doesn't feel it's her place to bring up her worries with Minerva.As you know from LVS, Siofre and Johannes will eventually be happy together -- Johannes's policy of being steadfast and patient pay off, and Siofre will never have any worries that he did not come to her freely, or that he might have been better off with someone else. But there's a bit of story between now & then, so I'd better say no more -- I'm afraid I'll leak spoilers! LOL!Thanks for the review!
I didn't realize until just now how much I have truly missed this story. But I will be patient and constant. Also, yaaaaaaaaaaaaaay! CFP
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
Thank you! I'm glad you liked it. I've actually missed it, too.Thanks for ... um, I mean, CFR!
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
Thank you! I'm glad you liked it. I've actually missed it, too.Thanks for ... um, I mean, CFR!
YAY!!! I couldn't believe it when I got the message for the update, it's really here! A new chapter! :) Thank you! I loved it, the long wait was more than worth it because this chapter is just perfect. I always love when these two have their little moments, it's so cute. I loved getting to know a little more about Siofre's thoughts and feelings, I love that she's just as anxious and ready as Johannes is, I can't wait to see how they finally come together. I loved that he was firm about wanting to spend the afternoon with her and didn't let her get away with working alone. I can't wait for the next chapter, I hope it won't be too long a wait :)
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
Hi! I'm so glad you enjoyed it!Yes, Johannes is becoming gradually more assertive, but without being pushy or aggressive about it, and always with Siofre's good in his mind. I, too, hope it will not be too long a wait for another chapter of CSG! Thanks for letting me know you enjoyed the chapter!
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
Hi! I'm so glad you enjoyed it!Yes, Johannes is becoming gradually more assertive, but without being pushy or aggressive about it, and always with Siofre's good in his mind. I, too, hope it will not be too long a wait for another chapter of CSG! Thanks for letting me know you enjoyed the chapter!
I'm not quite sure if Lydia has three children or only one - Bertrand - are her others Conner and someone else? I got a bit confused when Soifre was explaining her children - seemed to me she miscarried a lot and that Bertrand was the only child - but then you said he was the youngest, so I got confused.
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
I need to reread the chapter & make sure that I haven't mis-typed something. If I have, I'll go in and make a correction! Thanks!Lydia has one child, Bertrand, and he has two children, Phoebe and Conner. Conner's married to Elisabeth and they have one boy, Liam (who grows up to be Eoghan's father).
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
I think the plethora of children, grandchildren, and other relatives may simply have overwhelmed the synapses. hee! In the previous chapter, Siofre does say that Bertrand was Lydia & Malcolm Tyree's only child, and then in this chapter, she speaks of Bertrand being married to Sally (Longbottom) and the two of them having Connor & Phoebe. Charles Prince is Bertrand's cousin (Charles's father was Bertrand Prince, Lydia's brother, for whom she named her son), and Charles is married to Sally's sister Louisa. (And this is why Severus is related to Eogan in two ways -- through the Princes & the Longbottoms. Bertrand's cousin and Sally's sister are Eileen Prince's grandparents, thus Severus's great-grandparents, and Bertrand and Sally themselves are Eoghan's great-grandparents.) Yeah, can get confusing!
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
I'll just take your word for it and go forward - it was confusing - whew! Thanks for explaining in simple terms - you know sometimes I need a map. *smirks*
*snip*“I may need to take additional measures,” Siofre said. “And the spells I cast will only be effective as long as they are in the house. From what I understand, he drinks, then comes home mean. On good nights, he passes out before he does more than shout and make a scene. The nosy neighbour turns a blind eye to the husband’s behaviour, though he surely must know of it. Any road, I did what I could to make sure that if he does come home drunk, he passes out straightaway upon crossing the threshold. If he tries to take a drink at home, he’ll become ill. Gwyneth claims that when he’s not drinking, he’s moody, but otherwise fine. Most of the spells I cast were aimed at his drinking—making the consequences miserable for him. I cast a few protective spells around Gwyneth, and I gave her an emergency Portkey, as well. If Cadoc becomes violent or frightens her in any way, she can Portkey to her brother and sister-in-law’s home.”“Why would she stay with such a brute?” Johannes asked.“She does love him, or the man she remembers marrying,” Siofre replied, “but she is expecting a baby. It was partly for her baby’s sake that I tried to persuade her to leave the man, but she . . . she has her reasons, I suppose.”“He hits her or hexes her and she is pregnant?” Johannes asked, even more appalled than he had been. “The man should be . . . he should be . . . I do not know a suitable punishment, but he does not deserve the family if he cannot treat them with the love and respect that he should. He should be their protector!”Siofre twitched a slight smile. “Perhaps a lecture in gentlemanly behaviour might do him some good . . . in a few weeks, after the man has ceased drinking. If we can manage that.” I hate to say it, but nothing fixes an abuser unless the abuser WANTS to be fixed - only THEY can truly heal themselves - all the abusee can do is leave - and the woman, in my opinion, is being foolish and selfish - and abusive to her unborn child. I can not STAND lazy, selfish women like this that would rather live in hell than do something better for their kids.
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
Okay, since we know that Lydia is Slytherin, and Johannes is Ravenclaw - I simply MUST know what our Siofre is, my guess, Ravenclaw or Gryffindor - or perhaps Slytherin.... but I'm putting my coin on Ravenclaw.
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
Yes, she's a Ravenclaw. :-)You're right about abusers. Siofre's trying to address some of the underlying causes of his drinking, hoping that that will help, as well as doing something about the drinking itself. We shall see what happens with that.Let's see . . . here's the passage from RaM ("A Spree") where Siofre and Johannes meet:Johannes laughed as the three witches all agreed that every wizard still had a little boy in him. Siofre looked up at the tall, sandy-haired wizard.“Don’t know you. You’re foreign, aren’t you?” The words were blunt, but her tone friendly.“I am from Germany, ma’am,” Johannes said in his friendly manner. “Johannes Birnbaum, at your service.”“Ah, the Herbology wizard. Ravenclaw Head of House, aren’t you? Heard good things about you. Siofre Tyree, Ravenclaw myself,” she said, holding out her hand, which Johannes took and bent over in a formal bow.As Johannes straightened, Minerva apologised. “I am sorry, Grandmother. I hadn’t realised that you two hadn’t met.”
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
Ah, I should have remembered this - well then, my coin was well placed - Ravenclaw indeed.
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
Indeed! You're a good 'claw spotter! ;-)
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
Am I? Seems I've been spoiled with a few good ones in my life. *winks*
*snip*A few moments later, the two stepped out into the sunshine, and Johannes saw that they had arrived at a gabled cottage of three stories. Unlike the main house with its towers and turrets, this house was not all stone. It was a combination of half-timbering and uncut natural stone of different colours—quite unusual for Scotland, in Johannes’s experience—but very lovely on this woody hill. It seemed half-grown from the land and the surrounding woods.Ok that right there is freaking AWESOME!
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*snip*“Hmph. Still, it is not hers, and it is desolate.” She looked around her. “This is . . . isolated and private, but not set apart the way that island is. And that other, that is Dumbledore’s island. Do you know its name? Eilean Tèarmunn. It means ‘Refuge Island.’ A sanctuary from the wizarding world. Not even a Post Owl can get through to it. That is fine as far as it goes, but for Minerva, I would like her to have a place she could come that is hers if she needs it, and not just that island of Dumbledore’s. She can use the cottage or not, as she likes—and bring Dumbledore with her if she wishes.”Ahhhhh, NOW I am starting to understand the Tyree witches... forward thinking, ahead of their time, true Gaelic women of power - equal power - no woman should rely on a man - yes, now I am seeing the true Soifre. Besides all that, I'm glad she is looking out for Minerva - though I know Dumbledore wouldn't dream of hurting his love, but still, Minerva should have her own place.... and if Soifre has the space, and buildings, why not? Makes perfect sense. I wish I could live here! I'm insainly jealous!
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*snip*“You think Minerva might not want it? Even if she uses it seldom, it will be here for her. It can be a holiday cottage for now, if she likes, but she will want a family one day and a home to raise her children."*winces*
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The shell house is amazing, really amazing!
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Hi,
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
! I'm glad you liked the cottage and the shell house. :-)Yes, typical of Tyree witches is that sense of independence, and Siofre has it in spades. She wants to help give Minerva opportunities and that home just of her own. As you say, she has the space, so why not?Yes, Siofre has no crystal ball to see into the future, and she does envision one with Minerva having children of her own. It's a wistful sort of moment for those of us who know what the future does hold for Minerva.
*snip*I hate maths. Maths makes me sleepy and I itch all over. I think I’m allergic,” Lydia said.Siofre barked a laugh. “And that is why I will do the calculations, as always. You’d think we didn’t do this every month.”“I do my very best to forget,” Lydia said pitifully.I can so relate to Lydia here... hate math... haaaaaaaate it.
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*snip*“I am keeping much rushes, though, here and along the edge opposite,” Johannes said, pointing. “They are good for the animals, for the fowl and fishes, to have them here.”He is absolutely correct - far too many people cut all the natural vegetation out of a pond and kill it, even putting up cement walls around it - turns the water into piss pea soup and basically kills it - thank you for keeping him realistic and knowledgable - a real herbologist! A naturalist!
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LOL! Yes, I'm allergic to math, too -- but sadly have had to work for many years in jobs that required me to sit there and "itch" while using it. Unfortunately, although I hate it, I'm still not abysmal at it. Although I suppose that's good . . . to a point!Glad you like Johannes and his care for the natural balance and all the living things, plant and animal. One of the things he enjoys is knowing how plants fit into an ecosystem, and what plants can do for various critters. He loves to encourage life, so he certainly wouldn't deaden a pond by cutting out all the vegetation and putting in concrete! I'm glad you appreciate this aspect of the story. :-)
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I've seen far too many gardeners that remind me of some Wal-Mart version of a garden - potted plants that attract NO insects and some concrete and plastic fountain sitting on asphalt - and these 'gardens' are so alien to the natural surroundings and support no life and take up so .... here I am ranting - sorry - anyway, glad to see Johannes is a REAL naturalist/gardener.I also love the explanation of the alarm charms or wards that they are going to put around the pond to keep the babies from drowning - very cool!
Okay - so - lets see, I loved seeing Gertie again, and had to roll my eyes too at Malcolm's silliness - she's a good sport, putting up with him I think - and as usual, I always get embarassed when folks at the table have kissed others at the table but aren't with those at the table - as you know, so I had even more respect for Gertie for sitting through all that as Mal and Katherine talked about his kissing - eh... what else ... Katherine was interesting and I'd like to have learned more about her role in Grindelwald's defeat - as well as her work with Dumbledore but I know that's a minor thing here.I liked how Johannes stumbles around with his English and makes silly errors - chip off the old brick and such - and I like how you've made his speach a bit odd, which it should be, since English isn't his first language.I admit, I'd like to know more about why Grindelwald was after him - recruiting him, but perhaps we'll learn more about that as the story progresses.But most importantly, I'd really curious about WHY Siofre has captured his attention - its a bit of a puzzle to me - I guess I just don't see much of her personality yet or something - besides that she's a very commanding witch - got that alpha personality - perhaps that's it? At any rate, I'm sure I'll learn more as the story progresses.And as always, enjoying your writing, but then again I'd never have started reading Scottish Garden if I wasn't already completely taken with your writing - so no surprises there!
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Yes, you'll eventually learn more about what happened to Johannes's family & why.It's partly the commanding personality, and partly just "chemistry" -- or maybe it's "magic," or magical resonance. Malcolm can be a trial, but usually in a funny way, so Gertrude actually enjoys it when he's "exasperating." haha!Glad you're enjoying it!
Oh dear, Malcolm is meddling already...
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haha! His heart's in the right place!
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Seems most of your characters, OC or Canon, are meddlesome! HAHA! I love EEET! For once it isn't Dumbledore meddling - thankfully - though I suppose right now he's too busy with Minerva to think about much else. *grins*
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Yes, Dumbledore is busy between Minerva, Hogwarts, Minerva, the Ministry, Minerva . . . well, you get the idea!
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Mmmmhmmmm - might have to go back and read RaM just to see how busy he is!
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This is a bit post-RaM, but you're right: if you reread the end of RaM, you'll get an idea of what may be still be keeping him busy these days!
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All good stuff if I remember correctly.
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Oh, very good, indeed!
Morgan and Fiona had quads? What on earth? Magical fertility treatment or something? You simply MUST explain that!I am liking this, loving the timid flirtation from Johannes and the direct flirtation or demands of his time, from Siofre - pretty cute. I love romance in the RamVerse - I don't have to worry about rejection!
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Yes, indeed! And everyone suspects they used potions or a spell or something, but they claim not. Minerva calls them "the litter." (Gareth mentioned that tidbit about Minerva's humor to Severus back in LVS somewhere. Severus liked it. hee!)I'm glad you're enjoying the romance. Johannes is rather smitten, and Siofre isn't indifferent, either! Thanks!
A very nice introduction and very cute to see Johannes having an eye on Siofre - looking forward to more Dumbledore and McGonagall!
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Thanks! Glad you enjoyed it. Albus & Minerva will eventually make "personal appearances" in the fic, but not for a while yet -- although Minerva shows up by reference fairly frequently. And there's one of your favorite HP characters coming up soonish, too! :-)
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Ooooh - Gertie???
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Ah, she's a RaMverse character, but yes, she does, indeed, show up! And relatively soon, actually -- sooner than the canon HP character I was thinking of. In fact, there are two canon characters appearing together in that chapter who I'm pretty sure are among your faves. :-)
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Ooooh! I'm so excited!!!!!
I was very happy to see an update to this story! And what a fun chapter it was. Apparently Minerva isn't the only one who doubts Malcolm's stories. Poor Malcolm. I think Malcolm was holding back in the fight or he would have taken all of the other wizards out easily:). BTW-go Johannes! Loved the spell with the wood. I think he should have left Cam up on the wall. I imagine these lads are in trouble if Gertrude and/ Siofre hear about it. Thanks for a fun read.
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Hi! Glad you enjoyed it! Yes, Malcolm could have easily taken them, but it wasn't until it got "serious" that he went ahead and took 'em out. Yes, Johannes might not be much with the traditional defensive spells, hexes, jinxes, and the like, but he's got some imagination and skill with wood, so he didn't do too badly!Thanks!
Well, that certainly wasn't how I was expecting the evening to end. Action packed for sure!!I loved the details you put in about the African dragons. It amazes me how you always come up with new and interesting ideas to add to the RaM universe.I can't believe how quickly the little bar conversation turned ugly. Cam certainly was a nasty bugger and I'm glad Johannes was the one to pin him to the wall. Poor Aberforth, though. I pity him having to clean up all that mess. hahaWonder what Siofre would think if she heard about all that drama??? lol
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I do wonder what Siofre would think, too! Johannes and Malcolm don't want to find out, that's for sure! Somehow, I can imagine that that story might make its way to her ears, whether the "lads" want it to or not! Yes, Cam was just ready for a confrontation there, wasn't he? And pretty nasty in his comments and innuendos, too. Glad you liked Johannes's trick with the wood. He might not be much at fighting, but he is a clever wizard, nonetheless -- and experienced with wood, as well. Glad you liked the African dragons. I've been looking for an opportunity to stick those into a chapter with Malcolm since I wrote his "application letter" to Dumbledore back in RaM, so it was really fun to finally give them a bit of space and hear a small portion of the story of Malcolm's first dragon ride. Thanks very much for the review!
OMG!! an update!! I was so happy when I saw the email in my inbox! Thanks!I loved this chapter, Malcolm is always so much fun, poor Johannes I don't think he likes the kind of fun Malcolm brings lol. This was a very nice chapter, so funny! I can't wait to read more Siofre and Johannes, they are getting closer by the chapter! LOL.thank you for updatingSam
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Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter! You're right: Johannes doesn't have the same idea of "fun" that Malcolm does!Thanks for the review! (I was glad to finally be able to write & update! )
I had been holding off reading this chapter and "saving it" since you had mentioned your muse had left you, but tonight I caved in and I'm so glad I did. Johannes' vision of Siofre and his confession to Lydia was breath-taking. How apropos that the jerk that used and left Lydia was a Lockhart. She did much better with her Murdoch. It was a little jarring to read the name Severus back in this time period. I hope you find your muse again. I really miss the updates. Take care.
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I am currently struggling with writing a gift exchange fic that's finally beginning to sort of come together. I hope that once I have that written, maybe my muse will come back for the other stories. I miss them, too.I am glad that you enjoyed the chapter! Your review brought the characters back into my mind, and Lydia's story, so maybe that will help grease the wheels of the fanfic section of my brain! I figured that a Lockhart would be very good at cutting and running when the going got tough even back then. I thought it might be an interesting reminder of Severus' pureblooded side of the family, too, to have mention of the Prince relative he was named after, as well as the Princes' earlier tangles with the Tyree clan. We will also hear more about Eileen and her father in an upcoming chapter -- hmm, do I hear my muse tiptoeing about? LOL!Anyway, thank you very much for your review. I'm glad you enjoyed it -- and sorry that you haven't got another one to look forward to immediately, but I haven't vanished, and I do hope to continue with both this and LVS very soon. :-)
I'm really enjoying your story. Thank you for sharing your talent :)
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Hi,
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! Thank you for your note! I appreciate it, and I'm really glad you're enjoying the story.
Ooo lovely chapter. I like the way you are building the sexual tension and bonds between them. Fascinating ritual; I'm curious about the artifact. I'm assuming/hoping it has greater meaning than is usual.
I see Malcolm is in the next chapter - thank you!
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Thanks,
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!The next chapter has a bit more about the artifact -- and Siofre's curious about it, as well.I'm glad you're looking forward to seeing Malcolm again. I hope you enjoy it. He'll be popping in and staying for a couple chapters. :-)Thanks for the review!
LOL God Malcolm is amazing! lol, that tale and the show lol, he's great! I'm so glad he's back and I love it that Siofre calls Gertrude his witch! that's so sweet.
Now the most important part, OMG!! that was sooooo romantic, Johannes is very very romantic, his words to Siofre, the kiss, the pledge! oooohhhh I'm soooo happy right now!!! and Siofre! her reaction was amazing, I'm so pleased! lol. I loved it that she went from Magister to Honnie in less than a minute, she's giving in!
I really think his own private pledge to her has alot to do with the shape, color and markings of the artifact, I can't wait to find out! I'm so excited! Can't wait for the next chapter. GREAT, WONDERFUL writing!
Sam
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
Thank you! I enjoy writing Malcolm -- he seems to write himself -- and it's really fun to be able to step back into that period.I'm glad you enjoyed the romantic bits, as well. They are growing ever closer.Thank you very much for reviewing!
Fun chapter, indeedy!!!The conversation with Siofre and Bridie and then the one with her and Johannes warmed my heart fully. His declarations to her about his pledges, both verbal and in his heart, were very sweet. I'm sure she must know by now that he is truly enamoured with her. However, I can still see her giving him the time and space to come to her fully.LOVE, LOVE, LOVE MALCOLM!! He has me grinning from ear to ear with his tales to the wizard and his retelling of his meeting with him. He's such a hoot. And I'd have to agree with Siofre that his witch caught him well. haha.
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I'm glad you enjoyed both the romance and the humor in this chapter. I think that Siofre is very aware now of his increasingly strong feelings for her. We'll see where that knowledge might lead.I'm glad that you found Malcolm and his tales a hoot. He's fun -- he practically writes himself.Thanks for the review!
Such an awesome chapter! I looooove it!!! The ceremony performed by Siofre was very special and I'm glad they didn't need any witnesses. I think some of the "magic" of the moment would have been lost if others had been around. And the artifact sounds very intriguing. I do hope we'll learn more about that as the story progresses. We are one step closer to having Siofre and Johannes together. SWEEEEET!!!!!Thanks for the update!
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You're welcome! I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter! They are, indeed, closer now!
thank you, thank you, thank you!! I loved loved this chapter, it's very sweet and so interesting to learn all of this about Siofre and Tyree Clan. It was very funny that he was unsure about her wanting to adopt him lol, and I can't wait to find out what does the artifact mean, I'm sure it has to do something with their bond, I hope so at least!. I'm sooo glad Malcolm is going to be in the next chapter, I miss him! lol. Can't wait to read more, thanks!Sam
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Yeah, he sure didn't want her thinking of him as her son! LOL! And she was glad that he was happy that he'd be closer to her than to any others in the clan. (Yay -- my javascript emoticons are working again! LOL!)It's been fun writing Malcolm in this coming chapter, so I hope you'll enjoy it.Thanks for the review!