Chapter Fourteen: Pleasant Inconvenience
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MMADfanJohannes invites Siofre to lunch. They encounter a pleasant inconvenience.
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Johannes was up before dawn. He dressed quickly and went down to the kitchen, thinking to make himself a cup of coffee before going out to his garden, but Multry caught him looking through the cupboards for the coffee, and she scolded him. Johannes apologised, explaining that he hadn't wanted to disturb anyone so early in the morning.
Multry tutted at that explanation, but allowed Johannes to have a seat in the kitchen and watch as she prepared his coffee. She also insisted he have breakfast, and made him an egg and cheese sandwich to eat with his coffee. As Johannes ate, Multry fixed herself a pot of tea.
"You's out earlier than usual," she observed. "Busy busy week after a busy busy weekend?"
Johannes nodded, but then realised that Multry couldn't see him. "Yes. I have much to do before the bonfire. I want the grounds to look nice when the guests arrive, and now that Madam Lydia's son and daughter-in-law are returning, I would like to have more finished for their arrival next week. And I still have to work in my own garden and in the kailyard."
"The Master Professor should leave the kailyard and the other vegetable gardens to us. You do's new work this week. Fandenz and Gweller work the herbs and vegetables. Mynok watches them. Then the Master Professor checks the house-elf work later. Yes?"
"Yes," Johannes agreed. "Please send Mynok to me so that I can tell him what I need done. And if Tastle and Gweller can assist me later today, that would be good, too. If Madam Siofre or Madam Lydia have no other tasks for them."
"Sorrel helps Madam Lydia today with preparations for Master Bertie and Madam Sally's return. Madam Siofre doesn't tell me yet what she does today."
"You will be left with a lot of work, all alone."
"No, Sorrel works hard, and Penty and Kaffrom can help, too. Shoolie watches the babies in the lodge with Lollie. Lollie is Shoolie's daughter's daughter," Multry said, sitting down at her little table. "Shoolie can teach Lollie more about babies. Lollie is a good elf."
"I am sure she is." Johannes finished his cup of coffee, and Multry immediately refilled it for him.
"Duster and Kilbeena be's very happy to help the Master Professor," Multry said.
"They are good children. I am glad to have them help."
"They helps you this morning, then?"
"No, not this morning, or not until later in the morning. I will be in my garden early. It is not safe for little ones. When they are older...if I am here," Johannes corrected himself quickly. "That is, if they were older, they could help me. There are some dangerous plants. I would have to watch them closely."
"I tell them they help the Master Professor another time," Multry said with a nod.
"Thank you for breakfast, Multry."
"It is always a pleasure to serve you," Multry replied.
Johannes stepped through the pantry and out into the kitchen garden. It was a chilly morning, but he would warm up quickly enough once he began working.
A half hour later, as he crouched beside a bed of immature Mandragora, he heard the gate to his garden open and the crunch of a step on the fine gravel path. He rolled back to sit on his heels and glanced over his shoulder. When he saw who it was, he stood and brushed his hands off on his apron.
"Siofre! Good morning! You are out early."
"As are you. I was surprised to come down to breakfast and learn from Multry you had already eaten and begun work."
"I wished to spend time in my own garden today," Johannes explained, "so I needed an early start."
"You never neglect any other work. Don't feel you must rise early simply to work in your garden," Siofre replied.
"I enjoy the early morning hours."
"I do, too," Siofre said. "How are your Mandragora?"
"Doing very well. Next spring, we shall be able to harvest them . . . Of course, that will require transplanting them . . . somewhere."
"Transplant them? You could put them in the greenhouse, I suppose. They would do better wintering over in the greenhouse, I am sure."
Johannes hesitated. "It would be good of you to allow me to keep them in your greenhouse. I could remove them elsewhere. I could find another solution before then. And with a Charmed cold frame built around them, they can even winter outdoors."
"Why move them anywhere, then, except to the greenhouse, if they would do better there?" Siofre asked. "This is your garden, and it will be yours next spring, and for as long as you wish it."
"I . . ."
"Honestly, Johannes, we have no lack of land. You deprive us of nothing by using this wee parcel. You could have more, and we would only be enriched."
Johannes chuckled and shook his head slightly. "Enriched?"
"Aye. We enjoy your presence here, you know. If you keep a garden here, we will be ensured of your continued visits," Siofre said with a smile. "A bit of . . . blackmail, perhaps?"
Johannes laughed. "Nay, no blackmail required. I would visit, anyway, whenever you wished. And I will continue to look after your gardens and grounds for you for as long as you require. I would return regularly."
"Good," Siofre replied with a nod of approval. "Now, may I lend a hand here? I have to pay another visit to Gwyneth Terwilliger later this morning, but I have time until then."
"Ah . . . I would offer you to soothe the Leaping Toadstools, but I will save that pleasure for myself," Johannes said, smiling, remembering her adventures with those lively fungi.
Siofre laughed. "I could learn something from you, no doubt."
"I am placing a bit of this potion in with each mandrake root," Johannes said, gesturing toward a tub of fine granular potion that looked like black sand. "It only needs a little...a quarter teaspoon per root. It is best done manually...would you like gloves?"
Siofre shook her head. "What about their crying?"
"I have cast a . . . a sort of sleep over them. They are also very young, and even if they were to cry, it would only make you feel uncomfortable. We only clear a little earth to one side, too, and we do not pull them. But if you would like, I could Transfigure some earplugs for you."
Siofre shook her head. "I trust the magister." She knelt beside him. "Show me how much potion."
For the next hour, the two worked together in Johannes's small garden, and when Johannes looked up at Siofre from across a bed of chamomile just as she looked up at him, he felt his breath catch and his heart beat faster. Her sparkling eyes seemed exceptionally bright that morning, and he didn't know when he had ever felt so much life streaming through a person. He would return to the Tyree estate as often as he could for as long as he was welcome . . . If he could stay, he would never leave. Siofre smiled at him, and Johannes felt a blush creep over his cheeks as he returned her smile. He felt she must be able to see it in his eyes, his pleasure in her company, his undeniable pull toward her, his immense regard for her . . .
"I should go in and change now," Siofre said, "and then I must go into Edinburgh and pay a visit to the grandson before I Apparate to Cornwall to see Madam Terwilliger."
"You are going to the apothecary?"
"Aye. There is a potion that I want Murdoch to brew for this job. 'Tis an old Tyree potion, not a standard. I haven't had an opportunity to drop it by until today."
"You could have owled it to him," Johannes said, standing. "Or I could have brought it on Saturday."
"I would trust you to bring it...and to explain that's it's not to be sold or passed on...but I'd like to speak with Murdoch in person, in any case."
"I need to go to Edinburgh today, myself. May I accompany you?"
"Aye, that you may. Where do you go?"
Johannes removed his work apron and cast a cleansing charm on his hands. "I am going to the bookshop, and then I am Apparating to the Mayfield Charmed Glassworks to speak with Madam Mayfield about the greenhouse materials, the number of square feet of glass, the support materials, the charms she will lay on the glass, the pricing, and so forth."
"I should be with you then." Siofre frowned with thought. "Can you make your visit to the bookshop after meeting with Caroline?"
"Yes, that is not a problem."
"Good, then we will go to the apothecary and then to Mayfield Glassworks, and then I can go on to Cornwall from there, and you can return to Edinburgh. I apologise for interfering with your plans."
Johannes shook his head. "I simply told Madam Mayfield that I would be there sometime this morning. I was not specific. And the bookshop has a book that I ordered. They could send it, but I enjoy bookshops. Browsing."
"I enjoy that, too," Siofre replied, "but I rarely make the time."
"You should. We could stop there before we go to Mayfield's."
Siofre shook her head. "I would like to, but I told Gwyneth I would be there to see her by eleven. I don't want to be late."
"Then afterward," Johannes suggested. "We could meet after you are finished in Cornwall. Have lunch in McTavish Street and then go to the bookshop and browse. You said you were not going to take on much work this week or next..."
"Because we need to prepare for Bertrand and Sally..."
"Lydia seems to be handling that well, and it seems there's not much more to do. And Morgan and Fiona are settled. If they need anything from the main house, Lydia is here, and the house-elves. You said to me earlier that I do not neglect my work; neither do you. We can work later this afternoon. Come to lunch with me." Johannes almost held his breath waiting for her response.
"I dinna know . . . I suppose we can discuss the plans for the bonfire and for the grandson's birthday . . ."
"Or we could discuss those things later, when we work in the afternoon. You will meet me for lunch?"
Siofre gave a little laugh. "Very well, I will meet you for lunch. Best I meet you at the bookshop, though. I believe I should be able to meet you at half past twelve, but if I am later, I do not wish to leave you sitting alone in a café."
Johannes grinned. "Good. Very good. But meet me here. We can leave from here. Twelve-thirty. I will meet you at the house at twelve-thirty."
"Aye. It's a date, then."
Johannes's face grew warm. "Aye, a date."
"Let's go meet with Caroline Egidius, then, and discuss glass."
Siofre returned from Cornwall at quarter to twelve, surprised to find that Johannes was not at the house, and Lydia told her that he was not out on the grounds, either.
"We were meeting for lunch in Edinburgh," Siofre said. "I thought we were meeting here at the house, but p'raps we are meeting in the bookshop."
"No, Johannes said he would be back at twelve-thirty," Lydia said. "You're just early."
"All right, then. I'll go make my notes. I'll be in my study."
"If I see him when he gets back, I'll tell him," Lydia said. "By the way, I'm going out to the cottage this afternoon with Multry. Sorrel will be taking care of supper...we thought something light tonight at about seven. Does that suit you?"
"Fine. You are starting on the decorating?"
"Just getting the place prepared for it. Seeing what's salvageable and cleaning away the rest. Gweller may join us at some point, although I know that Johannes wanted some help in the gardens this afternoon. I told him he could have Fandenz, if you haven't another job for him."
"That sounds fine. I'm going to have Brian start the plumbing out there next week, so bear that in mind. I think that all the existing pipes will need replacing, and we need to modernise the bathroom and put a loo in on the ground floor, as well. Don't do anything that will just need to be redone after the plumbing's in."
"Not to worry, sister, I am leaving the kitchen and bathroom for last, anyway. I'll find a good spot for the downstairs loo...perhaps off the kitchen."
Siofre went upstairs to her study. After making her notes in her journal, she paged back over the previous weeks' entries. She had done too much work for which she had deferred payment, she realised. At least the Smethwyck arbitration had been both lucrative and paid in full. The job for Gwyneth Terwilliger, however, would cost her not only time, but money, and more than the few Galleons that she had accepted from Gwyneth. Siofre knew that Gwyneth was concerned about her husband learning that she had been spending money on something he knew nothing about, so she had told the witch that if she were successful, and if Gwyneth still felt inclined to do so at the time, then when her child entered Hogwarts, happy, healthy, and with a father who did not mistreat mother or child, she could pay the balance at that time.
Siofre recognised that she waived or lowered fees far too frequently to be a good business woman, and that she had her own obligations to her home and immediate family...in which she included more than just her children and her sister-in-law...but she could not turn a witch away whom she could help simply because the woman didn't have much money.
Johannes's plan to make more money from the estate itself seemed an excellent solution. The estate hadn't sold any produce, grain, lumber, or anything else, on a regular basis since Siofre's father had passed away. When Murdoch had been alive, he had never taken in more than a hundred Galleons a year from the sale of produce, and usually quite a bit less. No doubt, it would take a few years before they could generate a good income from the estate, but she thought that within the next five years, they could make the place quite profitable. She hoped that Johannes would continue to manage that aspect of the estate. He had said he would check on the gardens and grounds regularly, but that wasn't the same as overseeing it.
The thought of Johannes leaving the estate saddened Siofre, but life was filled with changes, with gains and losses. She knew that the magister wished to have his own bit of land with a greenhouse and establish himself as an independent Herbologist. Perhaps she could lease him a bit of the estate. There was some nice land to the south of the main house, and there had been a house there once, its foundations still standing not far from an old hill fort. It was picturesque, if a bit removed from anything, but she doubted that Johannes would mind that. He could always maintain an office of some sort in Hogsmeade or the Clypeum, somewhere like that. Of course, perhaps he had planned to move someplace else entirely, buy a piece of land in England and not stay in Scotland. Siofre couldn't imagine wanting to live in England once knowing the Highlands, but she recognised that she was biassed.
At about quarter past twelve, Siofre heard a crack. Someone was Disapparating...a house-elf, she thought. Johannes would be arriving soon, but she didn't want to appear to be waiting for him, so she resisted the urge to go downstairs. It was obvious to Siofre now, although it hadn't been unnoticeable before, that Johannes had a very distinct reaction to her presence and her touch. There was something rather nice about knowing that her mere touch, even unaccompanied by any tickling of her magic, caused him to blush and feel attracted to her. He clearly enjoyed it, too. If it made him at all uncomfortable, it was not in a way to make him avoid her...quite the opposite, in fact.
She never ought to have called their lunch a date as she had. He might misconstrue the word, imbue it with more meaning than it had. A wave of remorse swept over her. She ought not be so careless with his feelings. The dear man had had more than enough difficulty in his life without her toying with him...whether she had meant to in that moment or not.
Perhaps Malcolm had been right, and she was doing the youthful Herbologist a disservice in keeping him there at the estate, persuading him even to give up his weekends to her. She would make sure that he went to his home the coming weekend. It might not be a bad idea to encourage Malcolm to take the lad out for drinks. The following weekend, of course, was a different matter. There was the Beltane bonfire and the party the next day, and Johannes would be there as a guest, not as the estate's Herbologist gardener. There would be several single witches there, as well.
Despite...or perhaps because of...Lydia's incredulous questions about inviting Lachina to come to the estate a few days early, Siofre had asked her young kinswoman to come to visit for the week, ostensibly to keep Phoebe company and spend time with Fiona, Morgan, and the babies. Lachina had written back agreeing to come to stay at the estate, although she couldn't make it a complete holiday, and would have to spend a few hours each day at the jeweller's where she was one of three master jewellers and gem charmers. It would still give her and Johannes an opportunity to become acquainted.
Siofre put her journal away in its drawer and left her study, crossing the hall to her sitting room, from where she could see the front drive. As she gazed out the window and waited for Johannes, she reflected on her own feelings for the magister. Her feelings were not as simple as Lydia drew them. It was not merely a matter of finding the wizard handsome or enjoying his company, and her feelings for him went beyond simple affection and appreciation. More than that, she cared about his welfare. He clearly valued family, and it obviously had taken him a long time to recover from the tragic loss of his own. Siofre wanted him to have a new chance at a family. Yet she would not deny that she found Johannes more than handsome, and more than just a theoretically attractive man. She was more strongly attracted to Johannes than she had been to any man in many, many decades, and she was more than slightly fond of him.
She was falling in love for the first time since she was a girl, Siofre recognised, and if Johannes were a different sort of man with a different sort of history...and if he weren't so much younger than she, much younger even than her own son, though older than her daughter by at least a decade...then she wouldn't hesitate to draw him in and to fall in love, herself. She wanted to give him a chance to make another choice before she made one for him...for once she decided to allow Johannes to pursue her, she would catch him and she would keep him.
Until then, she would have to try to restrain herself. Reining in some of her inappropriately suggestive remarks would be a good place to begin. By the standards of the day, suggesting that they were having a date was hardly anything at all. Siofre chuckled drily to herself. Even by the standards of her own girlhood, it was hardly anything at all, but for Johannes, such remarks would surely bring him around to thinking of her as something far more than his employer, more than Malcolm's grandmother, and more than his friend. He was already sliding in that direction as it was.
There was a dull snap, and Siofre looked out the window. There was Johannes, changed from the clothes he had worn to their meeting with Caroline Egidius Mayfield that morning. He was still wearing cuffed brown trousers and smooth brown leather boots, but it looked as though he had changed his shirt and waistcoat, and he was wearing a deep green over-robe, open down the front, and a matching green hat with a creased crown and a broad brim.
Johannes strode up the drive, and Siofre turned from the window and left her study. As she walked down the flight of stairs to the entry hall, she Summoned her cloak and hat. She caught them, and the door opened below her. Johannes stepped through and immediately looked up to see her. His smile was instantaneous and warm, and Siofre returned it.
"Good afternoon, Madam Tyree," Johannes said, still smiling. "You are ready for lunch?"
"Aye, indeed, Professor."
"Then let us depart." Johannes gestured toward the still-open door behind him and bowed slightly.
"I could Apparate us this time," Siofre offered, quickly adding, "if you would like. Or we could meet there, in the small park."
"Nay." Johannes tried to suppress his smile, but he was clearly very pleased. "We do not return to McTavish Street," he explained as Siofre stepped through the door.
"We aren't? Where are we going?"
"You will soon see," Johannes replied, his eyes sparkling. He closed the door with a wave of his hand.
Siofre took his arm. "Very well, Honnie, I will trust you and let you surprise me." She smiled up at him.
A few moments later, she found herself in the back garden of the flat that Johannes rented in Hogsmeade.
"I remembered you said you were not particularly fond of eating out in restaurants," Johannes said, opening the door that led into his kitchen, "therefore, I thought I might spend my meagre culinary skills today...although I have had a little help."
Siofre stepped into the kitchen to find his table set for two, a brightly patterned tablecloth covering the plain wooden kitchen table and two new blue cushions on the wooden chair seats. Sorrel, dressed in a candy-striped set of towels, was hovering beside the cook stove, looking into a pot. He replaced the lid as they entered.
"Everything still nice nice, Master Professor!" Sorrel pronounced. "Nothing overdone...and I passes a little charm over your fish," he added in a whisper, "so's it stays bee-yew-tee-ful."
Johannes grinned at the house-elf's whisper. "Good, thank you, Sorrel." He turned to Siofre and took her hat and cloak. "Sorrel was kind enough to agree to watch the food whilst I fetched you. I did not wish to leave it untended."
"You cooked? How lovely!" Siofre felt genuinely and deeply touched by Johannes's effort...regardless of how the meal would taste. She took a sniff. It actually smelled quite nice, although the aroma of cooked fish did predominate. "What is on the menu, other than fish?"
"You shall see," Johannes said as he held her chair for her. "I hope you will find it . . . enjoyable."
"I am already enjoying myself," Siofre replied.
"Thank you for your help, Sorrel. You may return to the house now. And thank Madam Lydia for me, as well."
Sorrel nodded, smiling, and Disapparated from the kitchen.
"May I offer you a glass of wine?" Johannes asked. "It is a dry Sylvaner."
"Yes, I would like to try it. I've never had that before."
"It is a little similar, I think, to Riesling. It is from a friend in Germany," Johannes replied, pouring the wine into one of the glasses by Siofre's place. "It will go well with our meal, I hope."
He poured himself a glass, set down the bottle, then raised his glass to Siofre. "To you and your good health."
"And to yours," Siofre said, adding, "Slàinte."
Johannes grinned. "Slàinte mhor!"
Siofre laughed. "You have been drinking with the grandson!"
Johannes shrugged and smiled. "That and 'ceilidh' are the only words I have." He put his glass down and turned to the cooker.
"What is it in German? What would you say for a general toast to the health of the drinker?"
"I would say, 'zum Wohl,'" Johannes said, lifting the lid from the pot and pouring some cream into it.
"Tsum Vohl," Siofre repeated carefully. "What is that you're stirring?"
"Our first course. Sorrel soup...of the vegetative variety, not house-elf," he said, looking over his shoulder at Siofre and smiling.
She laughed. "I have not had that. We sometimes had sorrel in salads when I was a lass."
"This is something my mother would make us," Johannes said as he ladled out the soup. "I hoped it would be a refreshing start for our meal. In summer, it is nice served cold." He placed Siofre's soup bowl in front of her, then set his own down. "Oh, I forget the rolls...these are not from me," he said standing and retrieving the rolls and butter from the counter. "Multry provided them."
"Thank you, Johannes." She took a sip of the soup. "Very nice. Tart and lovely."
"The following course is fish, asparagus, and potatoes," Johannes said.
"Then I will skip the bread, enjoy the soup, and be sure to have room for the rest of the meal. Oh, this is good soup!"
"There is more, if you like."
"I am tempted. This soup and some rolls alone would have made a wonderful meal. I do not remember the last time that someone cooked a meal just for me...other than the house-elves, of course. Thank you."
"I hope you do not mind the setting. It is not..."
"It is very comfortable. And I like the cushions. Are they new?"
Johannes nodded as he swallowed his soup. "Found them this morning in a Muggle shop that I know. I liked the bright colour."
"Very cheerful," Siofre agreed.
"More soup?" When Siofre declined, he picked up the soup bowls. "Then the next course. It is trout with dill weed and lemon. The asparagus has a Hollandaise sauce, and there are small potatoes with butter and parsley."
Siofre smiled. "It sounds wonderful."
"You always seem to enjoy fish. I hope this preparation is to your taste."
As Siofre took her first taste of the trout, prepared to be polite if it were merely edible, she let out an involuntary sigh of pleasure. When she had swallowed and flaked off another forkful of fish, she said, "This is very good, Johannes, truly. It is more than just dill and lemon."
"There is also a little white wine, a little butter, shallots, some ground white pepper, but really, very simple. Just a home recipe. Another of my mother's dishes. I always think hers was better. But I do not cook often now."
"Save a bit for Multry and tell her how you made it. We can have her make it...if you don't mind sharing it."
"Not at all. I will write it down for her, too."
"And the sorrel soup?"
Johannes laughed. "Yes, and the sorrel soup. Sorrel laughed when I told him it was sorrel soup. He said that he should learn to make it."
"The asparagus and the potatoes are very nice, as well."
"I am glad my choices were good ones."
"Excellent. This was a wonderful surprise and a delicious meal. Much better than a restaurant," Siofre said.
"The atmosphere is not as good."
"It is not 'as good': it is better," Siofre said. She smiled and leaned back, picking up her wineglass. "I am quite comfortable in your kitchen, in your company."
Johannes smiled happily. "I am glad. How was your morning after we parted? How is Madam Terwilliger?"
"She is doing well. The charms are working as planned. Cadoc has trouble becoming drunk, anyway...or at least, trouble becoming a mean drunk. He seems to be calming in some respects, but now he is irritable because he can't drink without getting sick or passing out as soon as he crosses his home's threshold."
"That is an improvement?"
"Aye," Siofre said with a nod. "But not enough. I wish to observe him this week. I plan to follow him from his home on Wednesday morning, and then..."
"You cannot do that...what I mean is, is that not dangerous? Following that man?" Johannes corrected himself hastily.
Siofre raised an eyebrow. "Nay. If someone else tried, p'raps then. But he'll never know I'm there."
Johannes was quiet for a moment, cutting a small potato into even smaller pieces. "Should you bring someone with you?"
"If I did that, it would be more likely he'd notice us." Recognising Johannes's worry and his reluctance to say anything negative to her, Siofre reached across the table and patted his hand. "Do not worry, Honnie. When I do have a case where it might be better to have help, I can ask Malcolm. But this isn't such a case. I just want to see the wizard . . . evaluate him. I shan't be casting any charms on the man...or hexes."
"And the potion that you are having Murdoch brew?"
Siofre laughed. "I won't be slipping that into his tea. 'Twould likely only make him rather sick to his stomach...although if he hasn't destroyed his sense of taste, he'd spit it out before he swallowed it. The potion isn't for him. It's for Gwyneth, and it isn't meant to be ingested. It's to be spread about the house. I'll do the first application, to the windowsills and the floorboards whilst casting a few charms, and then leave it with her to use as she's doing the housecleaning. Rub it into the furniture as she dusts, put it in the laundry, that sort of thing. Should relax her, at the very least, and hopefully it will pacify and . . . cheer Cadoc and anyone else in the home."
"Oh, I see. And . . . and . . . I am sorry, but I am worried. You are sure it is safe? To follow Terwilliger, I mean."
"As houses, lad."
Johannes looked puzzled.
"Safe as houses...safe as can be. Dinna worry, Johannes. I'll be home for dinner and tell you and Lydia all of the dull quotidian details of the man's life."
Johannes sighed and nodded. "Very well. But do . . . do take care."
"I shall. You know that Lydia's begun the work down at Minerva's cottage?" Siofre asked, changing the subject.
"Yes. She said she is getting it ready to decorate."
"As soon as the plumbing is done, I want to finish the decorating as quickly as we can. I would like to present it to Minerva before the end of the Hogwarts school year. She seemed . . . tired on Sunday. Didn't you think she did?"
"Yes, she did. But it is a busy time of year, after Easter, before the final examinations of the year, and as the Deputy Headmistress, she has new responsibilities this year that she hasn't had before."
Siofre nodded. "I hope that she can come for the bonfire and stay for the weekend, but it will not be a surprise if she comes for only a few hours on Saturday. I was surprised that she arrived yesterday, actually. I could see that Morgan and Fiona were surprised, as well."
"It was good to see her, though, and I think she wanted to see the babies. They grow fast, as she says." Johannes quirked a smile. "I think she was surprised to become the new target for David's vegetables."
Siofre laughed. "Aye, but it was funny. We shouldn't encourage the lad to throw his food, but it is still amusing."
"I think he does not like sprouts," Johannes said. "Either that, or he has decided that they make very good missiles."
"I think he will be a Chaser," Siofre replied. "He's just refining his aim."
"Aiden never minds, either. It is funny. He just laughs." Johannes shook his head in amusement. "I was surprised to see that Morgana eats pickled gherkins. They do not seem a food for babies."
Siofre chuckled. "It was one of her first solid foods. She'd steal them from her mother's plate. She'd ignore her own steamed carrot sticks and boiled broccoli and happily gum away on a sour gherkin."
"I would prefer a gherkin to boiled broccoli, myself, but not now. I have made dessert, if you would like pudding. There is more asparagus and potato, though."
"I think the sweet would be nice. I am looking forward to seeing what you have...although biscuits and tea would be fine."
"It is not biscuits. It is, I think you call it fruit soup, but it seems not like soup to me. Rote Grütze, with fresh cream over it. I made it with mixed berries. A kind of cold pudding. It is best in summer, when the weather is warm, but I like it all the time."
"It sounds lovely." Siofre cocked her head, listening. "Is that thunder?"
There was another, louder crack of thunder.
Johannes looked up as he began to clear the table. "Hm. Yes, I suppose it was. I thought it was not supposed to rain until tonight." Rain began to beat against the kitchen windows.
"No work in the garden this afternoon," Siofre said. Another loud clap of thunder reverberated through the surrounding hills. "No Apparating back in this, either."
"Then after dessert, we can discuss the greenhouse, the bonfire, the party . . . and I have another bottle of Sylvaner." Johannes smiled. "Join me in the sitting room?"
"It is times like this when I do see the convenience of being on the Floo Network," Siofre said, but then she smiled. "This afternoon, however, I think I prefer to be inconvenienced here with you . . ."
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Dear MMADfan, I love this story! Do you plan to write more chapters in the future? I would love to see it finished.
I really hope you update soon, you write such wonderful fanfiction and I find myself rereading some of the old ones hopefully your next update will be near in the future for this as well as LVS
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
Thank you! I do hope to update both stories soon!
I really hope you update soon, you write such wonderful fanfiction and I find myself rereading some of the old ones hopefully your next update will be near in the future for this as well as LVS
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
Thank you very much,
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
!I will definitely try to get a few chapters of Charming the Scottish Garden and LVS posted this autumn. I'm sorry for the wait. It's very good to know that people are still reading them and will be here to read the new chapters when I (finally!) get them written. (Life's not been conducive to writing in the last couple years, sadly.)I really appreciate the note! I will do my best to get a new chapter up very soon.
Response from uma (Reviewer)
Yes I have been keeping up with your stories. I especially liked RAM itself , although I should let you know or perhaps you do know. But I read on ff.net and I usually keep with the newest MMAD fiction, I recently came across one that had taken a parts of your story and added it to theirs, I commented saying I read it before to which the author promptly deleted my comment. Just thought you should know as even though I am no writer I felt bad about something like that. However I shall eagerly await your next update :)
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
Would you mind emailing me or messaging me through ffnet to let me know which story it is, if you remember the title? I would appreciate it. I'm very glad that you like RAM!
Response from uma (Reviewer)
i do not have an account on FF.net :/ sorry, i usually just go as a guest i already signed up on alot of new pages. And i could read the stories just as easily, But the Name of the Story is Even in Death by Albus P.W.BDumbledore1891. You take a good look at chapter 5
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
Thanks very much! :-) I appreciate the tip!
First a new chapter of LVS and then CSG- I am in heaven! As much as I want to see Siofre and Johannes admit their feelings for each other, I enjoyed the "push-pull" of this chapter. The way the talk of age differences turned to them, Siofre wanting to take his hand but not, sitting close on the bench- all of it a wonderful buildup. 5 stars!
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
I'm glad it made you happy and you're liking the "push-pull"!I'm hoping to update at least two chapters a month -- more if I can -- alternating amongst the WIPs I have going. I am resisting the sudden onslaught of plot bunnies that are begging me to write more RaMverse fics set during the immediate post-RaM time period, like CSG is.Thanks for the review! It's encouraging!
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
I'm glad it made you happy and you're liking the "push-pull"!I'm hoping to update at least two chapters a month -- more if I can -- alternating amongst the WIPs I have going. I am resisting the sudden onslaught of plot bunnies that are begging me to write more RaMverse fics set during the immediate post-RaM time period, like CSG is.Thanks for the review! It's encouraging!
Best birthday present, ever!!! An update for this and it's a very shippy Siofre/Johannes chapter. woooo hoooI think this line was absolutely brilliant:Siofre found herself smiling back, and her heart beating faster at the sight of him. Could she really give him up to another witch?NOPE, she can't give him up to another because her heart already belongs to him and he holds hers as well. I wasn't too fond of the ADMM discussion. Siofre unnerves me when she speaks of Minerva and Albus's relationship, especially in this context. I know Malcolm is her favorite but it almost felt like she wasn't thrilled with Albus marrying Minerva, even though it's what makes her happiest and clearly they adore one another. sigh. Oh well ... I'm still happy for Siofre and Joannes, awwww.
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
Hi! Glad to give you a good birthday prezzie! :-)What Siofre is not thrilled with is Albus not marrying Minerva. It's not that she has objections to their not being married, but she's afraid that Minerva wants marriage & Albus ain't askin' -- and she's right, at this point. But Minerva is being Stoic and sensible, and since she won't talk to Siofre about it, Siofre's not about to give her advice. She's also just plain worried that Minerva will end up having a broken heart or have some other sadness in her life because of the relationship. She loves Minerva and doesn't want to see her hurt -- she cares about Albus, but Minerva's her granddaughter, so she's Siofre's priority in her heart, not Albus, even if she doesn't feel it's her place to bring up her worries with Minerva.As you know from LVS, Siofre and Johannes will eventually be happy together -- Johannes's policy of being steadfast and patient pay off, and Siofre will never have any worries that he did not come to her freely, or that he might have been better off with someone else. But there's a bit of story between now & then, so I'd better say no more -- I'm afraid I'll leak spoilers! LOL!Thanks for the review!
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
Hi! Glad to give you a good birthday prezzie! :-)What Siofre is not thrilled with is Albus not marrying Minerva. It's not that she has objections to their not being married, but she's afraid that Minerva wants marriage & Albus ain't askin' -- and she's right, at this point. But Minerva is being Stoic and sensible, and since she won't talk to Siofre about it, Siofre's not about to give her advice. She's also just plain worried that Minerva will end up having a broken heart or have some other sadness in her life because of the relationship. She loves Minerva and doesn't want to see her hurt -- she cares about Albus, but Minerva's her granddaughter, so she's Siofre's priority in her heart, not Albus, even if she doesn't feel it's her place to bring up her worries with Minerva.As you know from LVS, Siofre and Johannes will eventually be happy together -- Johannes's policy of being steadfast and patient pay off, and Siofre will never have any worries that he did not come to her freely, or that he might have been better off with someone else. But there's a bit of story between now & then, so I'd better say no more -- I'm afraid I'll leak spoilers! LOL!Thanks for the review!
I didn't realize until just now how much I have truly missed this story. But I will be patient and constant. Also, yaaaaaaaaaaaaaay! CFP
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
Thank you! I'm glad you liked it. I've actually missed it, too.Thanks for ... um, I mean, CFR!
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
Thank you! I'm glad you liked it. I've actually missed it, too.Thanks for ... um, I mean, CFR!
YAY!!! I couldn't believe it when I got the message for the update, it's really here! A new chapter! :) Thank you! I loved it, the long wait was more than worth it because this chapter is just perfect. I always love when these two have their little moments, it's so cute. I loved getting to know a little more about Siofre's thoughts and feelings, I love that she's just as anxious and ready as Johannes is, I can't wait to see how they finally come together. I loved that he was firm about wanting to spend the afternoon with her and didn't let her get away with working alone. I can't wait for the next chapter, I hope it won't be too long a wait :)
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
Hi! I'm so glad you enjoyed it!Yes, Johannes is becoming gradually more assertive, but without being pushy or aggressive about it, and always with Siofre's good in his mind. I, too, hope it will not be too long a wait for another chapter of CSG! Thanks for letting me know you enjoyed the chapter!
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
Hi! I'm so glad you enjoyed it!Yes, Johannes is becoming gradually more assertive, but without being pushy or aggressive about it, and always with Siofre's good in his mind. I, too, hope it will not be too long a wait for another chapter of CSG! Thanks for letting me know you enjoyed the chapter!
I'm not quite sure if Lydia has three children or only one - Bertrand - are her others Conner and someone else? I got a bit confused when Soifre was explaining her children - seemed to me she miscarried a lot and that Bertrand was the only child - but then you said he was the youngest, so I got confused.
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
I need to reread the chapter & make sure that I haven't mis-typed something. If I have, I'll go in and make a correction! Thanks!Lydia has one child, Bertrand, and he has two children, Phoebe and Conner. Conner's married to Elisabeth and they have one boy, Liam (who grows up to be Eoghan's father).
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
I think the plethora of children, grandchildren, and other relatives may simply have overwhelmed the synapses. hee! In the previous chapter, Siofre does say that Bertrand was Lydia & Malcolm Tyree's only child, and then in this chapter, she speaks of Bertrand being married to Sally (Longbottom) and the two of them having Connor & Phoebe. Charles Prince is Bertrand's cousin (Charles's father was Bertrand Prince, Lydia's brother, for whom she named her son), and Charles is married to Sally's sister Louisa. (And this is why Severus is related to Eogan in two ways -- through the Princes & the Longbottoms. Bertrand's cousin and Sally's sister are Eileen Prince's grandparents, thus Severus's great-grandparents, and Bertrand and Sally themselves are Eoghan's great-grandparents.) Yeah, can get confusing!
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
I'll just take your word for it and go forward - it was confusing - whew! Thanks for explaining in simple terms - you know sometimes I need a map. *smirks*
*snip*“I may need to take additional measures,” Siofre said. “And the spells I cast will only be effective as long as they are in the house. From what I understand, he drinks, then comes home mean. On good nights, he passes out before he does more than shout and make a scene. The nosy neighbour turns a blind eye to the husband’s behaviour, though he surely must know of it. Any road, I did what I could to make sure that if he does come home drunk, he passes out straightaway upon crossing the threshold. If he tries to take a drink at home, he’ll become ill. Gwyneth claims that when he’s not drinking, he’s moody, but otherwise fine. Most of the spells I cast were aimed at his drinking—making the consequences miserable for him. I cast a few protective spells around Gwyneth, and I gave her an emergency Portkey, as well. If Cadoc becomes violent or frightens her in any way, she can Portkey to her brother and sister-in-law’s home.”“Why would she stay with such a brute?” Johannes asked.“She does love him, or the man she remembers marrying,” Siofre replied, “but she is expecting a baby. It was partly for her baby’s sake that I tried to persuade her to leave the man, but she . . . she has her reasons, I suppose.”“He hits her or hexes her and she is pregnant?” Johannes asked, even more appalled than he had been. “The man should be . . . he should be . . . I do not know a suitable punishment, but he does not deserve the family if he cannot treat them with the love and respect that he should. He should be their protector!”Siofre twitched a slight smile. “Perhaps a lecture in gentlemanly behaviour might do him some good . . . in a few weeks, after the man has ceased drinking. If we can manage that.” I hate to say it, but nothing fixes an abuser unless the abuser WANTS to be fixed - only THEY can truly heal themselves - all the abusee can do is leave - and the woman, in my opinion, is being foolish and selfish - and abusive to her unborn child. I can not STAND lazy, selfish women like this that would rather live in hell than do something better for their kids.
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
Okay, since we know that Lydia is Slytherin, and Johannes is Ravenclaw - I simply MUST know what our Siofre is, my guess, Ravenclaw or Gryffindor - or perhaps Slytherin.... but I'm putting my coin on Ravenclaw.
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
Yes, she's a Ravenclaw. :-)You're right about abusers. Siofre's trying to address some of the underlying causes of his drinking, hoping that that will help, as well as doing something about the drinking itself. We shall see what happens with that.Let's see . . . here's the passage from RaM ("A Spree") where Siofre and Johannes meet:Johannes laughed as the three witches all agreed that every wizard still had a little boy in him. Siofre looked up at the tall, sandy-haired wizard.“Don’t know you. You’re foreign, aren’t you?” The words were blunt, but her tone friendly.“I am from Germany, ma’am,” Johannes said in his friendly manner. “Johannes Birnbaum, at your service.”“Ah, the Herbology wizard. Ravenclaw Head of House, aren’t you? Heard good things about you. Siofre Tyree, Ravenclaw myself,” she said, holding out her hand, which Johannes took and bent over in a formal bow.As Johannes straightened, Minerva apologised. “I am sorry, Grandmother. I hadn’t realised that you two hadn’t met.”
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
Ah, I should have remembered this - well then, my coin was well placed - Ravenclaw indeed.
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
Indeed! You're a good 'claw spotter! ;-)
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
Am I? Seems I've been spoiled with a few good ones in my life. *winks*
*snip*A few moments later, the two stepped out into the sunshine, and Johannes saw that they had arrived at a gabled cottage of three stories. Unlike the main house with its towers and turrets, this house was not all stone. It was a combination of half-timbering and uncut natural stone of different colours—quite unusual for Scotland, in Johannes’s experience—but very lovely on this woody hill. It seemed half-grown from the land and the surrounding woods.Ok that right there is freaking AWESOME!
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
*snip*“Hmph. Still, it is not hers, and it is desolate.” She looked around her. “This is . . . isolated and private, but not set apart the way that island is. And that other, that is Dumbledore’s island. Do you know its name? Eilean Tèarmunn. It means ‘Refuge Island.’ A sanctuary from the wizarding world. Not even a Post Owl can get through to it. That is fine as far as it goes, but for Minerva, I would like her to have a place she could come that is hers if she needs it, and not just that island of Dumbledore’s. She can use the cottage or not, as she likes—and bring Dumbledore with her if she wishes.”Ahhhhh, NOW I am starting to understand the Tyree witches... forward thinking, ahead of their time, true Gaelic women of power - equal power - no woman should rely on a man - yes, now I am seeing the true Soifre. Besides all that, I'm glad she is looking out for Minerva - though I know Dumbledore wouldn't dream of hurting his love, but still, Minerva should have her own place.... and if Soifre has the space, and buildings, why not? Makes perfect sense. I wish I could live here! I'm insainly jealous!
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
*snip*“You think Minerva might not want it? Even if she uses it seldom, it will be here for her. It can be a holiday cottage for now, if she likes, but she will want a family one day and a home to raise her children."*winces*
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
The shell house is amazing, really amazing!
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
Hi,
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
! I'm glad you liked the cottage and the shell house. :-)Yes, typical of Tyree witches is that sense of independence, and Siofre has it in spades. She wants to help give Minerva opportunities and that home just of her own. As you say, she has the space, so why not?Yes, Siofre has no crystal ball to see into the future, and she does envision one with Minerva having children of her own. It's a wistful sort of moment for those of us who know what the future does hold for Minerva.
*snip*I hate maths. Maths makes me sleepy and I itch all over. I think I’m allergic,” Lydia said.Siofre barked a laugh. “And that is why I will do the calculations, as always. You’d think we didn’t do this every month.”“I do my very best to forget,” Lydia said pitifully.I can so relate to Lydia here... hate math... haaaaaaaate it.
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
*snip*“I am keeping much rushes, though, here and along the edge opposite,” Johannes said, pointing. “They are good for the animals, for the fowl and fishes, to have them here.”He is absolutely correct - far too many people cut all the natural vegetation out of a pond and kill it, even putting up cement walls around it - turns the water into piss pea soup and basically kills it - thank you for keeping him realistic and knowledgable - a real herbologist! A naturalist!
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
LOL! Yes, I'm allergic to math, too -- but sadly have had to work for many years in jobs that required me to sit there and "itch" while using it. Unfortunately, although I hate it, I'm still not abysmal at it. Although I suppose that's good . . . to a point!Glad you like Johannes and his care for the natural balance and all the living things, plant and animal. One of the things he enjoys is knowing how plants fit into an ecosystem, and what plants can do for various critters. He loves to encourage life, so he certainly wouldn't deaden a pond by cutting out all the vegetation and putting in concrete! I'm glad you appreciate this aspect of the story. :-)
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
I've seen far too many gardeners that remind me of some Wal-Mart version of a garden - potted plants that attract NO insects and some concrete and plastic fountain sitting on asphalt - and these 'gardens' are so alien to the natural surroundings and support no life and take up so .... here I am ranting - sorry - anyway, glad to see Johannes is a REAL naturalist/gardener.I also love the explanation of the alarm charms or wards that they are going to put around the pond to keep the babies from drowning - very cool!
Okay - so - lets see, I loved seeing Gertie again, and had to roll my eyes too at Malcolm's silliness - she's a good sport, putting up with him I think - and as usual, I always get embarassed when folks at the table have kissed others at the table but aren't with those at the table - as you know, so I had even more respect for Gertie for sitting through all that as Mal and Katherine talked about his kissing - eh... what else ... Katherine was interesting and I'd like to have learned more about her role in Grindelwald's defeat - as well as her work with Dumbledore but I know that's a minor thing here.I liked how Johannes stumbles around with his English and makes silly errors - chip off the old brick and such - and I like how you've made his speach a bit odd, which it should be, since English isn't his first language.I admit, I'd like to know more about why Grindelwald was after him - recruiting him, but perhaps we'll learn more about that as the story progresses.But most importantly, I'd really curious about WHY Siofre has captured his attention - its a bit of a puzzle to me - I guess I just don't see much of her personality yet or something - besides that she's a very commanding witch - got that alpha personality - perhaps that's it? At any rate, I'm sure I'll learn more as the story progresses.And as always, enjoying your writing, but then again I'd never have started reading Scottish Garden if I wasn't already completely taken with your writing - so no surprises there!
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
Yes, you'll eventually learn more about what happened to Johannes's family & why.It's partly the commanding personality, and partly just "chemistry" -- or maybe it's "magic," or magical resonance. Malcolm can be a trial, but usually in a funny way, so Gertrude actually enjoys it when he's "exasperating." haha!Glad you're enjoying it!
Oh dear, Malcolm is meddling already...
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
haha! His heart's in the right place!
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
Seems most of your characters, OC or Canon, are meddlesome! HAHA! I love EEET! For once it isn't Dumbledore meddling - thankfully - though I suppose right now he's too busy with Minerva to think about much else. *grins*
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
Yes, Dumbledore is busy between Minerva, Hogwarts, Minerva, the Ministry, Minerva . . . well, you get the idea!
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
Mmmmhmmmm - might have to go back and read RaM just to see how busy he is!
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
This is a bit post-RaM, but you're right: if you reread the end of RaM, you'll get an idea of what may be still be keeping him busy these days!
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
All good stuff if I remember correctly.
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
Oh, very good, indeed!
Morgan and Fiona had quads? What on earth? Magical fertility treatment or something? You simply MUST explain that!I am liking this, loving the timid flirtation from Johannes and the direct flirtation or demands of his time, from Siofre - pretty cute. I love romance in the RamVerse - I don't have to worry about rejection!
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
Yes, indeed! And everyone suspects they used potions or a spell or something, but they claim not. Minerva calls them "the litter." (Gareth mentioned that tidbit about Minerva's humor to Severus back in LVS somewhere. Severus liked it. hee!)I'm glad you're enjoying the romance. Johannes is rather smitten, and Siofre isn't indifferent, either! Thanks!
A very nice introduction and very cute to see Johannes having an eye on Siofre - looking forward to more Dumbledore and McGonagall!
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
Thanks! Glad you enjoyed it. Albus & Minerva will eventually make "personal appearances" in the fic, but not for a while yet -- although Minerva shows up by reference fairly frequently. And there's one of your favorite HP characters coming up soonish, too! :-)
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
Ooooh - Gertie???
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
Ah, she's a RaMverse character, but yes, she does, indeed, show up! And relatively soon, actually -- sooner than the canon HP character I was thinking of. In fact, there are two canon characters appearing together in that chapter who I'm pretty sure are among your faves. :-)
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
Ooooh! I'm so excited!!!!!
I was very happy to see an update to this story! And what a fun chapter it was. Apparently Minerva isn't the only one who doubts Malcolm's stories. Poor Malcolm. I think Malcolm was holding back in the fight or he would have taken all of the other wizards out easily:). BTW-go Johannes! Loved the spell with the wood. I think he should have left Cam up on the wall. I imagine these lads are in trouble if Gertrude and/ Siofre hear about it. Thanks for a fun read.
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
Hi! Glad you enjoyed it! Yes, Malcolm could have easily taken them, but it wasn't until it got "serious" that he went ahead and took 'em out. Yes, Johannes might not be much with the traditional defensive spells, hexes, jinxes, and the like, but he's got some imagination and skill with wood, so he didn't do too badly!Thanks!
Well, that certainly wasn't how I was expecting the evening to end. Action packed for sure!!I loved the details you put in about the African dragons. It amazes me how you always come up with new and interesting ideas to add to the RaM universe.I can't believe how quickly the little bar conversation turned ugly. Cam certainly was a nasty bugger and I'm glad Johannes was the one to pin him to the wall. Poor Aberforth, though. I pity him having to clean up all that mess. hahaWonder what Siofre would think if she heard about all that drama??? lol
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
I do wonder what Siofre would think, too! Johannes and Malcolm don't want to find out, that's for sure! Somehow, I can imagine that that story might make its way to her ears, whether the "lads" want it to or not! Yes, Cam was just ready for a confrontation there, wasn't he? And pretty nasty in his comments and innuendos, too. Glad you liked Johannes's trick with the wood. He might not be much at fighting, but he is a clever wizard, nonetheless -- and experienced with wood, as well. Glad you liked the African dragons. I've been looking for an opportunity to stick those into a chapter with Malcolm since I wrote his "application letter" to Dumbledore back in RaM, so it was really fun to finally give them a bit of space and hear a small portion of the story of Malcolm's first dragon ride. Thanks very much for the review!
OMG!! an update!! I was so happy when I saw the email in my inbox! Thanks!I loved this chapter, Malcolm is always so much fun, poor Johannes I don't think he likes the kind of fun Malcolm brings lol. This was a very nice chapter, so funny! I can't wait to read more Siofre and Johannes, they are getting closer by the chapter! LOL.thank you for updatingSam
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter! You're right: Johannes doesn't have the same idea of "fun" that Malcolm does!Thanks for the review! (I was glad to finally be able to write & update! )
I had been holding off reading this chapter and "saving it" since you had mentioned your muse had left you, but tonight I caved in and I'm so glad I did. Johannes' vision of Siofre and his confession to Lydia was breath-taking. How apropos that the jerk that used and left Lydia was a Lockhart. She did much better with her Murdoch. It was a little jarring to read the name Severus back in this time period. I hope you find your muse again. I really miss the updates. Take care.
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
I am currently struggling with writing a gift exchange fic that's finally beginning to sort of come together. I hope that once I have that written, maybe my muse will come back for the other stories. I miss them, too.I am glad that you enjoyed the chapter! Your review brought the characters back into my mind, and Lydia's story, so maybe that will help grease the wheels of the fanfic section of my brain! I figured that a Lockhart would be very good at cutting and running when the going got tough even back then. I thought it might be an interesting reminder of Severus' pureblooded side of the family, too, to have mention of the Prince relative he was named after, as well as the Princes' earlier tangles with the Tyree clan. We will also hear more about Eileen and her father in an upcoming chapter -- hmm, do I hear my muse tiptoeing about? LOL!Anyway, thank you very much for your review. I'm glad you enjoyed it -- and sorry that you haven't got another one to look forward to immediately, but I haven't vanished, and I do hope to continue with both this and LVS very soon. :-)
I'm really enjoying your story. Thank you for sharing your talent :)
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
Hi,
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
! Thank you for your note! I appreciate it, and I'm really glad you're enjoying the story.
Ooo lovely chapter. I like the way you are building the sexual tension and bonds between them. Fascinating ritual; I'm curious about the artifact. I'm assuming/hoping it has greater meaning than is usual.
I see Malcolm is in the next chapter - thank you!
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
Thanks,
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
!The next chapter has a bit more about the artifact -- and Siofre's curious about it, as well.I'm glad you're looking forward to seeing Malcolm again. I hope you enjoy it. He'll be popping in and staying for a couple chapters. :-)Thanks for the review!
LOL God Malcolm is amazing! lol, that tale and the show lol, he's great! I'm so glad he's back and I love it that Siofre calls Gertrude his witch! that's so sweet.
Now the most important part, OMG!! that was sooooo romantic, Johannes is very very romantic, his words to Siofre, the kiss, the pledge! oooohhhh I'm soooo happy right now!!! and Siofre! her reaction was amazing, I'm so pleased! lol. I loved it that she went from Magister to Honnie in less than a minute, she's giving in!
I really think his own private pledge to her has alot to do with the shape, color and markings of the artifact, I can't wait to find out! I'm so excited! Can't wait for the next chapter. GREAT, WONDERFUL writing!
Sam
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
Thank you! I enjoy writing Malcolm -- he seems to write himself -- and it's really fun to be able to step back into that period.I'm glad you enjoyed the romantic bits, as well. They are growing ever closer.Thank you very much for reviewing!
Fun chapter, indeedy!!!The conversation with Siofre and Bridie and then the one with her and Johannes warmed my heart fully. His declarations to her about his pledges, both verbal and in his heart, were very sweet. I'm sure she must know by now that he is truly enamoured with her. However, I can still see her giving him the time and space to come to her fully.LOVE, LOVE, LOVE MALCOLM!! He has me grinning from ear to ear with his tales to the wizard and his retelling of his meeting with him. He's such a hoot. And I'd have to agree with Siofre that his witch caught him well. haha.
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
I'm glad you enjoyed both the romance and the humor in this chapter. I think that Siofre is very aware now of his increasingly strong feelings for her. We'll see where that knowledge might lead.I'm glad that you found Malcolm and his tales a hoot. He's fun -- he practically writes himself.Thanks for the review!
Such an awesome chapter! I looooove it!!! The ceremony performed by Siofre was very special and I'm glad they didn't need any witnesses. I think some of the "magic" of the moment would have been lost if others had been around. And the artifact sounds very intriguing. I do hope we'll learn more about that as the story progresses. We are one step closer to having Siofre and Johannes together. SWEEEEET!!!!!Thanks for the update!
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
You're welcome! I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter! They are, indeed, closer now!
thank you, thank you, thank you!! I loved loved this chapter, it's very sweet and so interesting to learn all of this about Siofre and Tyree Clan. It was very funny that he was unsure about her wanting to adopt him lol, and I can't wait to find out what does the artifact mean, I'm sure it has to do something with their bond, I hope so at least!. I'm sooo glad Malcolm is going to be in the next chapter, I miss him! lol. Can't wait to read more, thanks!Sam
Response from MMADfan (Author of Charming the Scottish Garden)
Yeah, he sure didn't want her thinking of him as her son! LOL! And she was glad that he was happy that he'd be closer to her than to any others in the clan. (Yay -- my javascript emoticons are working again! LOL!)It's been fun writing Malcolm in this coming chapter, so I hope you'll enjoy it.Thanks for the review!