Repaying The Life Debt
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This was not what Severus expected when he confronted Hermione Weasley about payment of his life debt.
This is my response for the Dictionary Drabbles Fun Challenge for March 22.
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I love to write. A dreamer, a creator and filled with wonder, imagination and life. Sometimes I get lost in the other worlds I've read and in some I create. It's all good, I’m in good company.
“Imagination does not become great until human beings, given the courage and the strength, use it to create.”― Maria Montessori
“Our imagination flies -- we are its shadow on the earth.”― Vladimir Nabokov
“Imagination is everything. It is the preview of life's coming attractions.”― Albert Einstein
“Imagination will often carry us to worlds that never were, but without it we go nowhere.” ― Carl Sagan
Reviews for Repaying The Life Debt
Hermione is clever witch.Severus is not so clever as he thinks he is.She's got him right where she wants him... going on a date. Very clever witch.Beth
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Repaying The Life Debt)
Yep, she does. Thank you for the review. I hope you saw the review bonus!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Repaying The Life Debt)
Yep, she does. Thank you for the review. I hope you saw the review bonus!
Never mind that from his position, she was showing him the soft swell of her breasts every time she reached for a book, turned a page or otherwise moved thank in part to the curve of the neckline of her T-shirt. He didn't' have to look if he didn't want to see. Ah, but, you see, he does want to see. Teehee.
First he dreams about her breasts, and now he's looking at them. He's a falling head over heels, isn't he?Beth
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Repaying The Life Debt)
Yep. You prety much got the gist of what's happening. Too bad Severus isn't as quick on the uptake!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Repaying The Life Debt)
Yep. You prety much got the gist of what's happening. Too bad Severus isn't as quick on the uptake!
Something's happening......? Snape is upset...with himself. Hermione wants to get drunk... And Ron is being a prat... SNAFU And still loads of FUN!!!Beth
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Repaying The Life Debt)
Yes, it is. You've pretty much got it all nailed again! I'm very glad you like this. Have you seen the bonus bits?
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Repaying The Life Debt)
Yes, it is. You've pretty much got it all nailed again! I'm very glad you like this. Have you seen the bonus bits?
Severus smiled. He’d let the impertinence slide, this time. He was wearing her down. Silly man..... 
Fun! Fun!! Fun!!!Beth
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Repaying The Life Debt)
Yep, he thinks he's wearing her down! 
I'd say it's the other way around. Thank you for the review.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Repaying The Life Debt)
Yep, he thinks he's wearing her down! I'd say it's the other way around. Thank you for the review.
Now he's dreaming about her pert breasts, her naked body, her plush lips slightly parted as if asking for his kiss…He's got it ba-ad. A very entertaining creation you have here!Beth
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Repaying The Life Debt)
LOL oh, yes, and he's fighting it. Thank you for the review. I'm enjoying reading your opinion.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Repaying The Life Debt)
LOL oh, yes, and he's fighting it. Thank you for the review. I'm enjoying reading your opinion.
Severus doesn't yet realize what he's gotten himself into. Hermione is really on her game, and things are moving along nicely!I so enjoy reading this story! It puts a smile on my face.Beth
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Repaying The Life Debt)
Thank you very much. I'm glad it's making you happy. Don't forget to check the reveiws for the hidden bonuses!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Repaying The Life Debt)
Thank you very much. I'm glad it's making you happy. Don't forget to check the reveiws for the hidden bonuses!
Cute, I don't blame Hermione for being suspitious.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Repaying The Life Debt)
LOL nope. Thank you for the review.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Repaying The Life Debt)
LOL nope. Thank you for the review.
“As my apprentice we would be spending countless long hours together. Many of the potions I brew take weeks, and it would necessitate that you be close by, even sleep at my home to tend to your potions.” If he thought that would discourage her, he was grossly mistaken. That was exactly what she had in mind. “I accept.”
Cracked up when I read this! Hermione really is a Slytherin, isn' t she? Severus hardly knew what hit him!Well done. I'm lovin' it!Beth
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Repaying The Life Debt)
LOL Nope, she's just simply a bright witch going after exactly what she wants. He just happens to be the target!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Repaying The Life Debt)
LOL Nope, she's just simply a bright witch going after exactly what she wants. He just happens to be the target!
I'm so fascinated of how you manage to use all these words in a perfectly working context while still making an interesting and readworthy story! Great job!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Repaying The Life Debt)
Wow, that's so kind of you to say. Thank you.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Repaying The Life Debt)
Wow, that's so kind of you to say. Thank you.
Oh! He is getting rather flirty with her now.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Repaying The Life Debt)
Yes he is - finally!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Repaying The Life Debt)
Yes he is - finally!
I really liked the last line of that.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Repaying The Life Debt)
Thank you.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Repaying The Life Debt)
If you liked the last line... Here is one you might like as well - the bonus!!~ * ~ The next morning Hermione stretched and yawned, turning on the cot and waking the wizard next to her. She smiled when she realized she was waking up, curled up in his arms. She was utterly exhausted and hoped he didn’t want to get up yet. They’d kissed nearly all night between the steps of the potion, and his hands had wandered a little, gently caressing her as he slyly explored her body. It had been incredible. But she’d literally fallen asleep with her head on his shoulder when the potion was finished.He stirred, his arm tightening around her as he pulled her back into his arms. Hermione smiled, feeling his nose on the back of her head. “Morning,” she said with a yawn. “Time to get up?”She tried twisting so she could face him, but he held onto her too tightly. “No, not yet,” he snarled softly as he nuzzled her cheek, kising her once before relaxing. Hermione relaxed, grinning as she lay in his arms. She'd give him another half hour or so, then wake him.
Response from blue artemis (Reviewer)
Excellent! Yay! I got the bonus. That was quite sweet.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Repaying The Life Debt)
Thank you.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Repaying The Life Debt)
If you liked the last line... Here is one you might like as well - the bonus!!~ * ~ The next morning Hermione stretched and yawned, turning on the cot and waking the wizard next to her. She smiled when she realized she was waking up, curled up in his arms. She was utterly exhausted and hoped he didn’t want to get up yet. They’d kissed nearly all night between the steps of the potion, and his hands had wandered a little, gently caressing her as he slyly explored her body. It had been incredible. But she’d literally fallen asleep with her head on his shoulder when the potion was finished.He stirred, his arm tightening around her as he pulled her back into his arms. Hermione smiled, feeling his nose on the back of her head. “Morning,” she said with a yawn. “Time to get up?”She tried twisting so she could face him, but he held onto her too tightly. “No, not yet,” he snarled softly as he nuzzled her cheek, kising her once before relaxing. Hermione relaxed, grinning as she lay in his arms. She'd give him another half hour or so, then wake him.
Response from blue artemis (Reviewer)
Excellent! Yay! I got the bonus. That was quite sweet.
I had to laughe at the image of Snape being followed around by a group of young fans, then him wanting to hex them all!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Repaying The Life Debt)
Yeah, he wouldn't have liked that kind of celbrity, would he? Thank you for the review.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Repaying The Life Debt)
Yeah, he wouldn't have liked that kind of celbrity, would he? Thank you for the review.
Very fun -- thank you for including the vocabulary lists at the end of each chapter. ;)
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Repaying The Life Debt)
Glad you enjoyed it. You're welcome for the list, I'm glad it helped. Thank you for readign and for the review.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Repaying The Life Debt)
Glad you enjoyed it. You're welcome for the list, I'm glad it helped. Thank you for readign and for the review.
Anonymous
Excellent! Go Hermione!
Love this story.
Author's Response: Thank you. Next up her POV....
Ahhh, another smile. Things are hopping here too. My husband and a friend created their own business and frankly I've been so busy with their stuff that I can just scream. I'm glad I was able to take a break from running an office to catch up on some reading. Now, if I could just get some time in to do a chapter of my story......
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Repaying The Life Debt)
Best of luck to your husband and his friend on their enterprise! I hope all works out well!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Repaying The Life Debt)
Best of luck to your husband and his friend on their enterprise! I hope all works out well!
Go, Hermione, go! :)
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Repaying The Life Debt)
Teeehehe, Oh she will.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Repaying The Life Debt)
Teeehehe, Oh she will.
It is so "he's got her just where she wants him" its almost a cliche. But that doesn't mean its not just as lucious to spy on.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Repaying The Life Debt)
It is probably more the old 'SHE's got HIM just where she wants him' But you know, what a girl wants. Be sure to check in the reviews for the tidbits! There a few hidden goodies!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Repaying The Life Debt)
It is probably more the old 'SHE's got HIM just where she wants him' But you know, what a girl wants. Be sure to check in the reviews for the tidbits! There a few hidden goodies!
Oh, very nice! I read it all now, and I am eagerly waiting the next. The words are soooo fun, I am trying to use them in my essays, hehehe!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Repaying The Life Debt)
Thank you. I'm just waiting for SW to give us the next list for June 28th. I already have plans! Lucius, Ginny and Ron! I have bits planned and jsut need my vocabulary words!Oh, btw - did you catch the hidden bits in the reveiws? If not - they are on my live journal under beaweasely2. My art is there, too.
Response from tialangela (Reviewer)
Wow! I've just visited your live journal. You are a talented artist, too! Great work. Ah, and I saw the hidden bits. Very interesting!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Repaying The Life Debt)
Thank you. I'm just waiting for SW to give us the next list for June 28th. I already have plans! Lucius, Ginny and Ron! I have bits planned and jsut need my vocabulary words!Oh, btw - did you catch the hidden bits in the reveiws? If not - they are on my live journal under beaweasely2. My art is there, too.
Response from tialangela (Reviewer)
Wow! I've just visited your live journal. You are a talented artist, too! Great work. Ah, and I saw the hidden bits. Very interesting!
Like the image of grumpy Severus being followed down the street by his fans. And Yay! She finally made a move that he won't be able to convince himself later that he misunderstood.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Repaying The Life Debt)
Yes, the thought of Severus being asked for autographs and recieving fan mail was an Image that actually came to me after hearing JK say Rita wrote a book about him - I finally got to use it!Yep. Kind of hard to misinterpret that kiss. He's in for it.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Repaying The Life Debt)
Yes, the thought of Severus being asked for autographs and recieving fan mail was an Image that actually came to me after hearing JK say Rita wrote a book about him - I finally got to use it!Yep. Kind of hard to misinterpret that kiss. He's in for it.
Severus is a long way from having the upper hand, Master of Potions or not. Heh!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Repaying The Life Debt)
I completely agree.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Repaying The Life Debt)
I completely agree.
Ron is doing a lovely job of ending the relationship all on his own. Wanker.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Repaying The Life Debt)
Yep. Teehehe not that he had a chance - not a real life long one at least. Thank you for the review.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Repaying The Life Debt)
Yep. Teehehe not that he had a chance - not a real life long one at least. Thank you for the review.
Oh, Merlin’s balls, this cannot be real! Wow! What the heck do you have to do to convince this guy you are attracted to him? I thought Hermione did an admirable job of making that painfully clear. Give it up, Snape! You are definitely going to lose this battle.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Repaying The Life Debt)
Oh, yes he is. Thank you for the reveiw.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Repaying The Life Debt)
Oh, yes he is. Thank you for the reveiw.
Well, I'm glad we cleared up that little confusion about her being Mrs. Weasley. I can see Ron being a big enough prat to not only propose in public, but neglect to correct anyone who thinks they were married. Too bad Severus believed what he had read and heard. Perhaps that will change his thinking a bit. That and the full out confession that she wanted to be his apprentice just to get to know him.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Repaying The Life Debt)
When the only information you have is lies you tend to believe they are the truth. Yes, her confesion might get him thinking.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Repaying The Life Debt)
When the only information you have is lies you tend to believe they are the truth. Yes, her confesion might get him thinking.
So when is it going to dawn on him that while she asked why he kissed her, she didn't make any complaints about it? She even kissed back. Maybe he should just turn it around on her and ask why she kissed him! No doubt the answer would be illuminating.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Repaying The Life Debt)
Some guys don't do hints well - that's why God gave women bricks! Thanks for the review.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Repaying The Life Debt)
Some guys don't do hints well - that's why God gave women bricks! Thanks for the review.
Well, she virtually threw herself at him! What was the poor man supposed to do? I love the argument he had with himself supplying all the answers to contradict his feable arguments against having a relationship with her.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Repaying The Life Debt)
Yes, well, he isn't sure he wants to have that 'relationship'. Thankfully Hermione is the kind of girl to stick it out. Thank you for the review.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Repaying The Life Debt)
Yes, well, he isn't sure he wants to have that 'relationship'. Thankfully Hermione is the kind of girl to stick it out. Thank you for the review.