Her Ninth Week
Chapter 10 of 21
beaweasley2Severus has a visit from a private customer requesting an unusual potion. Returning from The Promenade, a posh alternative to Diagon Alley, Hermione pieces together some information regarding Severus’ alternative potion line and realizes she’s been entrusted with a secret.
May 23
Severus had ushered Ms. Granger away for the evening after he'd received a note by owl. He'd firmly told her he would not tolerate a tirade from her, but she'd tried pleading with him that her potion would be ruined if she didn't finish the last two steps. Nevertheless, he'd put his foot down, insisting she was to leave and not return until the following morning. It had amused him how adamant she'd been to see the conclusion of the tricky potion. But he knew that the success of the potion could not be determined until the last ingredient was added, simply because the color change only happened at the end, and there was no indication if the potion had been brewed properly before that.
Severus had been reading alone, waiting patiently in the sitting room as the clock chimed six, when a tap on his door announced his expected visitor. "Prompt as always," he said, opening the door. "Your note said that this was urgent. Please come in."
"I really hate to intrude on your blissful evening, but I couldn't meet with you somewhere more respectable," Lucius said as he entered the small room as if entering a wizard's club. "I'd much rather meet with you at the Greengrass Pub or the Madam Lovelle's Gentlewizards Club, but this is a matter of some delicacy."
"Lucius, you are a true boulevardier," Severus replied. "May I offer you something to drink?"
Lucius smiled at the offer but politely declined. He studied the room as he removed his gloves. "I do not understand why you insist on maintaining this residence. It is such a misrepresentation of your true talents. Surely you could unload the place for a more suitable accommodation for your laboratory?"
"It suits my purpose. Besides if I should have an accidental explosion, I don't have to worry about blowing up the neighbors," Severus replied amiably.
"I should certainly hope not," Lucius said smoothly before his brow furrowed. "Are there actually people living in the domicile next to you?"
"Next to me, no," Severus said, indicating he should sit. "To what do I owe this visit?"
"I came in order to cadge upon you a small favor regarding a rather delicate matter that needs someone of your caliber in order for it to be done properly," Lucius said, sitting on the offered chair. "Suffice it to say, money is of no object if I can rely on your discretion. Not that I need to ask for your confidentiality, as we've always been discreet wizards."
"I pride myself on maintaining full sub rosa for my clients, especially those who are latitudinarian in regards to certain questionable potions," Severus said smoothly, effectively hiding his curiosity.
"I believe you understand me aright," Lucius stated, pulling a piece of parchment from his pocket and handing it to Severus. "Here is the potion I request."
Severus read the slip without so much as a flicker of expression. "One week, thirty-five Galleons."
Lucius nodded without flinching at Severus fee. "Fine. I shall return in a week." He rose to leave, stopping to face Severus' before reaching the door. "Let me ruminate," he said, his grey eyes becoming frosty as he stared at Severus a moment before continuing. "I would appreciate an understanding that your apprentice will not know the true nature of my request or if she should discern its use, that you will Oblivate her."
"My apprentice will not be a problem," Severus assured him.
Lucius nodded and exited the house, leaving Severus alone to ponder Lucius' need for the Exfoliative Potion.
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May 24
That morning, Severus had taken Hermione with him to The Promenade to purchase potion ingredients and necessary supplies.
Returning to lab, Severus dropped his packages on the worktable, turning to face Hermione, before she once again started asking questions. "Before you resume your voluble tirade of the night before, let me remind you that as my apprentice, there is on occasion the necessity for your obedience."
"Far for it to me to obtrude on your business affairs, but I was nearly finished, and I wanted to see what color the potion would take," she said with just a slight hint of a pout. "Wouldn't it have sufficed if I had stayed in your lab while you met your client? Besides, as your apprentice, it would have been all right to expect me to tend the potions while you..."
"Enough," he said forcefully. "No. If I require you to vacate the premises, I have my reasons. Let me explain, if you are going to continue as my apprentice, you must understand that I have my private customers as well as my general clientele, many whom wish to remain nameless and unknown, even by you." He pulled off his traveling cloak, throwing it on his chair. "Now if I could cadge upon you to put the supplies away, preferably without any further lamenting, I need to begin my base."
"I understand, sir," she replied, carrying her bags to the storeroom. "Sir, if you want to be so discreet, why were we shopping at Madam Jacqueline's and Cartwright Apothecary on The Promenade?"
"Why do you think?" he snapped. "Because they carry what I required."
"You've never struck me as a boulevardier, yet that is exactly the clientele I saw there, that and the prices were outrageous," she stated as she continued storing away his purchases. "In fact the entire scene was more like a Potemkin village, in my book."
"What, exactly, are you suggesting?" he asked. Damn she's just too bright and curious for her own good.
"It's a false front, a posh equivalent of Knockturn Alley, where nothing is as it seems and everything you could want is available for a price," she stated.
Severus was impressed despite himself. "Very good," he said smoothly. "In those shops you can, if you know the proprietors, and which questions to ask, obtain all manner of supplies unavailable by general means, things not always available in either Diagon Alley or Knockturn Alley."
She nodded, saying, "I understand, sir," as she turned her back and carefully levitated a large jar to the top shelf.
"Besides, the reason you were with me is that if I need to send you to The Promenade, I wanted to be assured that the proprietors would conduct business with you and not snub you as inconsequential," he said smoothly. Hermione turned, her eyes wide. "I see you understand my implication. However, understand that if, and I mean if, I entrust you to procure items for me there, you will not to divulge information to anyone. Do I make myself plain?"
"Yes, sir," she answered, smiling.
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~TBC~
Authors Notes:
Thank you, Southern_Witch_69, for not only agreeing to beta each one of my drabbles in this saga, but for also giving us the list of vocabulary words so I can play with them! I'm really having a fun time seeing just how creative I can be with this!
Exfoliative dermatitis (or ED) is a definitive term that refers to a scaling erythematous dermatitis involving 90% or more of the skin surface of the body.
The word list (swiped from the past week's list from dictonary.com) :
1. tirade
2. obtrude
3.Potemkin village
4. boulevardier
5. cadge
6. aright
7. ruminate
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tirade \TY-raid; tih-RAID\, noun:
A long angry speech; a violent denunciation; a prolonged outburst full of censure or abuse.
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obtrude \uhb-TROOD; ob-\, transitive verb:
1. To thrust out; to push out.
2. To force or impose (one's self, remarks, opinions, etc.) on others with undue insistence or without solicitation.
3. To thrust upon a group or upon attention; to intrude.
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Potemkin village \puh-TEM(P)- kin\, noun:
An impressive facade or display that hides an undesirable fact or state; a false front.
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boulevardier \boo-luh-var- DYAY; bul-uh-\, noun:
1. A frequenter of city boulevards, especially in Paris.
2. A sophisticated, worldly, and socially active man; a man who frequents fashionable places; a man-about-town.
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cadge \KAJ\, transitive verb:
1. To beg or obtain by begging; to sponge.
2. To beg; to sponge.
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aright \uh-RYT\, adverb:
Rightly; correctly; properly; in a right way or manner.
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ruminate \ROO-muh-nayt\ , intransitive verb:
1. To chew the cud; to chew again what has been slightly chewed and swallowed. "Cattle free to ruminate." --Wordsworth.
2. To think again and again; to muse; to meditate; to ponder; to reflect.
3. To chew over again.
4. To meditate or ponder over; to muse on.
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I really enjoyed this story. You have a real gift for taking those words and weaving them into your plot seamlessly. Well done.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Repaying The Life Debt)
Thank you very much. I'ts fun to do these. I try to inspire others to try. It's not hard. Thank you for the review.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Repaying The Life Debt)
Thank you very much. I'ts fun to do these. I try to inspire others to try. It's not hard. Thank you for the review.
This story just gets better and better. The innocence of new love and the tender ground being broken. The last bit in the posted chapter practically had me dancing around my desk like a mad woman!
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How wonderful that Severus has become comfortable enough with her to show her his ancestral home and his family!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Repaying The Life Debt)
Yep, he is. I'm glad you are enjoying this one. Thank you for the review.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Repaying The Life Debt)
Yep, he is. I'm glad you are enjoying this one. Thank you for the review.
That wizard sounds really strange.I loved this bonus. It was just so sweet, the beginnings of a relationship...
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Teehehe I'm glad you're enjoying this. So glad you found the bonuses! Thank you for the review.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Repaying The Life Debt)
Teehehe I'm glad you're enjoying this. So glad you found the bonuses! Thank you for the review.
Hmmm.... I wonder what sneaky old Lucius is up to? Thanks for the bonus!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Repaying The Life Debt)
He's peripheral, and ran into a bit of a curse. Do read the reviews, most of the chapters have the bonus or two. If you can't find them, you can see them on my LJ
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He's peripheral, and ran into a bit of a curse. Do read the reviews, most of the chapters have the bonus or two. If you can't find them, you can see them on my LJ
It is great to see Hermione and Severus getting so comfortable with each other. As for that moment before the kiss....
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Repaying The Life Debt)
Thank you. Yes, nothing like the slow budding of friendship turning into romance. Thank you for the review.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Repaying The Life Debt)
Thank you. Yes, nothing like the slow budding of friendship turning into romance. Thank you for the review.
LOL. I like that he doesn't want to outright admit how good the pepermint idea is. And I simply love that you depicted Ron as competent and smart. He isn't exactly my favourite character, but I don't like to see him bashed either. Thanks for that.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Repaying The Life Debt)
Thankyou for the reivew. Nope, he's not ready to take advise from a former student, even if she's right. I chose to make Ron have a bit more of a brain than I ususaly type him, but he has his moments too. (Hint: start checking the reviews. This story has hidden bonuses in the reviews. Don't want you to miss them!)
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Repaying The Life Debt)
Thankyou for the reivew. Nope, he's not ready to take advise from a former student, even if she's right. I chose to make Ron have a bit more of a brain than I ususaly type him, but he has his moments too. (Hint: start checking the reviews. This story has hidden bonuses in the reviews. Don't want you to miss them!)
Lovely. I really like their interaction.
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Thank you very much.
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Thank you very much.
This is a very promising beginning. I hope Severus knows what he got himself into. *g*
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Thank you very much. I'm glad you are enjoyingthis attempt at taking vocab words and making a story out of them. Thank you for the review.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Repaying The Life Debt)
Thank you very much. I'm glad you are enjoyingthis attempt at taking vocab words and making a story out of them. Thank you for the review.
I've just caught up with the reading that has been sadly neglected recently. I can't say much I adore this story. It's just brilliant. Thank you for writing it.
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Thank you very much. There is one more chapter to this story. Thank you so much for the review.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Repaying The Life Debt)
Thank you very much. There is one more chapter to this story. Thank you so much for the review.
Wow, he told her he loved her! That's so great! I wasn't expecting it for a while, knowing our dear Severus. Yay, I'm finally caught up. Thanks for keeping me up so late, by the way. Ye gads, it's midnight!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Repaying The Life Debt)
Yep, he loves her, and finally admitted it. I'm sorry I kept you up so late.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Repaying The Life Debt)
Yep, he loves her, and finally admitted it. I'm sorry I kept you up so late.
I liked his introduction of his family. They seem like an odd group. Lol
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Repaying The Life Debt)
Thank you. I know I made them sound like an odd group but it was the words - really! The words made me do it!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Repaying The Life Debt)
Thank you. I know I made them sound like an odd group but it was the words - really! The words made me do it!
Great last line. Lol
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Repaying The Life Debt)
Thank you, I like that one two.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Repaying The Life Debt)
Thank you, I like that one two.
Lucius is definitely a troublemaker. It's nice that Hermione and Severus are together. They are cute together.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Repaying The Life Debt)
Oh course Severus and Hermione are ging to stay togerther! Severus was just standing up to his prejudiced friend. Besides, he would have a hard time getting rid of her, wouldn't he?
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Repaying The Life Debt)
Oh course Severus and Hermione are ging to stay togerther! Severus was just standing up to his prejudiced friend. Besides, he would have a hard time getting rid of her, wouldn't he?
She was so forward with him! It was great. Oh, and of course, masterful use of the vocabulary, as usual.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Repaying The Life Debt)
Thank you so very much. I really tried. Yep, she is going for what she wants - him.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Repaying The Life Debt)
Thank you so very much. I really tried. Yep, she is going for what she wants - him.
Ah, finally a minute to myself so I can catch up on my reading (and if Merlin allows my writing). Wonderful chapter how on Earth do you manage to write a story using a word challange without being obvious? Hat's off to you g/f.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Repaying The Life Debt)
Wow, thank you. I'm not obvious? That compliment means a lot to me. I was simply trying to use the words and create a story worth reading, I'm flattered that you like it. *waves* Thank you very much.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Repaying The Life Debt)
Wow, thank you. I'm not obvious? That compliment means a lot to me. I was simply trying to use the words and create a story worth reading, I'm flattered that you like it. *waves* Thank you very much.
All I could say was "Awwwwwwwwww...." So lovely! and the bonuses are both exciting and cuuuuute!
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Thank you very much. I'm very flattered that you liked the story and the bonuses.
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Yay, he woke up!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Repaying The Life Debt)
Thank you. Yes he did. And about time too! Stubborn fool.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Repaying The Life Debt)
Thank you. Yes he did. And about time too! Stubborn fool.
Lol, clever witch, and oh so conniving.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Repaying The Life Debt)
Thank you. Yes she is, isn't she?
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Repaying The Life Debt)
Thank you. Yes she is, isn't she?
He actually told her he loved her! Yay!
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He loves her!!! HE LOVES HER!!!And he told her before she said anything. OMG!"Who would have ever thought she of all people would find that protuberance kissable." Well, I don't know any woman in this ship that would pass up a chance to kiss Severus ... on his nose, one his ear, on his lips, on his ..... well, we won't go there just now. *sigh* Tee hee.I love this story and giggle everytime I get an email telling me you have posted an update.Beth
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Repaying The Life Debt)
Yep, he told her he loved her! and Yes, he was first.I'm so glad you like the story, Beth. I hope you'll come back and check out the review bonuses. Thank you so much for your support.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Repaying The Life Debt)
Oh and I forgot!!~ * ~Severus finished his rounds, delivering his potions. Jenson in the Apothecary in Diagon Alley had requested a large order of complicated potions and paid handsomely for the potions Severus delivered. He inquired after Hermione, smiling when he told Severus that her work was top quality, complimenting him on her training. Even Plitheroa at the Cartwright Apothecary on The Promenade had relented that Hermione’s potions were of an acceptable quality, requesting more of Hermione’s Alexindora Potion and Deliquesce Embrocation and paying the exuberant rate for which he charged her for them. Severus put the Galleons Hermione had earned with her potions in a separate pocket to give to her. He walked down The Promenade slowly with a contented smile on his face. He entered Rourke McCloud’s Bijouterie, thinking he might just get Hermione a small token. The tall, thin wizard looked up from his workbench when Severus entered the shop. “Let me know if you’d like to see anything.” Severus nodded as he walked along the displays and glass counters. Nothing struck him as being something she’d like or that suited her personality, until an object caught his eye. His palms started to sweat, his heart seemed to beat erratically, and there was a huge lump in his throat. The shopkeeper appeared before him as if summoned. “Did ya find something then?” he asked. “I’d like to see that one,” Severus said, pointing. The shopkeeper handed it to Severus with a smile. “You’ve fine taste, sir.” It was perfect: simple, elegant… expensive.
Response from braye27 (Reviewer)
Two bonuses in two replies for the same chapter!!! Wheeeee....I check for the bonuses every time I post a reply and then again a few days later just to make sure I don't miss one.Now, just what can this "simple, elegant... expensive" and small token be? A ring perhaps? I love this story!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Repaying The Life Debt)
Yep, he told her he loved her! and Yes, he was first.I'm so glad you like the story, Beth. I hope you'll come back and check out the review bonuses. Thank you so much for your support.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Repaying The Life Debt)
Oh and I forgot!!~ * ~Severus finished his rounds, delivering his potions. Jenson in the Apothecary in Diagon Alley had requested a large order of complicated potions and paid handsomely for the potions Severus delivered. He inquired after Hermione, smiling when he told Severus that her work was top quality, complimenting him on her training. Even Plitheroa at the Cartwright Apothecary on The Promenade had relented that Hermione’s potions were of an acceptable quality, requesting more of Hermione’s Alexindora Potion and Deliquesce Embrocation and paying the exuberant rate for which he charged her for them. Severus put the Galleons Hermione had earned with her potions in a separate pocket to give to her. He walked down The Promenade slowly with a contented smile on his face. He entered Rourke McCloud’s Bijouterie, thinking he might just get Hermione a small token. The tall, thin wizard looked up from his workbench when Severus entered the shop. “Let me know if you’d like to see anything.” Severus nodded as he walked along the displays and glass counters. Nothing struck him as being something she’d like or that suited her personality, until an object caught his eye. His palms started to sweat, his heart seemed to beat erratically, and there was a huge lump in his throat. The shopkeeper appeared before him as if summoned. “Did ya find something then?” he asked. “I’d like to see that one,” Severus said, pointing. The shopkeeper handed it to Severus with a smile. “You’ve fine taste, sir.” It was perfect: simple, elegant… expensive.
Response from braye27 (Reviewer)
Two bonuses in two replies for the same chapter!!! Wheeeee....I check for the bonuses every time I post a reply and then again a few days later just to make sure I don't miss one.Now, just what can this "simple, elegant... expensive" and small token be? A ring perhaps? I love this story!
lovely...but you stopped too soon! thanks so much
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Repaying The Life Debt)
I know! But they are supposed to be a Drabble! (That's why I put extra in the reviews! I have to make it short!! Oh, and you're welcome.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Repaying The Life Debt)
I know! But they are supposed to be a Drabble! (That's why I put extra in the reviews! I have to make it short!! Oh, and you're welcome.
“Oh, yes, you are one who truly enjoys all the finer things. Your house reeks of excessive ostentation.”--Great line.Bellwether, now that's one I haven't ever heard.Severus should know that Hermione wouldn't suggest something, especially from Ron, if she didn't suspect that it would work.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Repaying The Life Debt)
I know I keep getting these words and I"m like, OMG and I have to use that? Then read the dictionary for the meaning and play with the word a few tries until something clicks. But I'm telling you - this is fun!I think he's just considering the source, and contemplating what she meant by the suggestion. In the end - he did trust her.Thank you for the review.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Repaying The Life Debt)
I know I keep getting these words and I"m like, OMG and I have to use that? Then read the dictionary for the meaning and play with the word a few tries until something clicks. But I'm telling you - this is fun!I think he's just considering the source, and contemplating what she meant by the suggestion. In the end - he did trust her.Thank you for the review.
She's spunky. I like that.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Repaying The Life Debt)
Yes, this time I wrote a spunky Hermione for a change. I'm glad you approve!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Repaying The Life Debt)
Yes, this time I wrote a spunky Hermione for a change. I'm glad you approve!
Wow, I look at these every week and say, "There's no way I could write a story with all of these words included," and you've done it for multiple chapters in one story. How cool is that?
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Repaying The Life Debt)
Thank you. If you were ever interested in giving a go at it, email me and I'll give you some starting tips. It's not really that hard. It actually really fun. But I do really appreciate the compliment, and I'm flattered that you like the story.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Repaying The Life Debt)
Thank you. If you were ever interested in giving a go at it, email me and I'll give you some starting tips. It's not really that hard. It actually really fun. But I do really appreciate the compliment, and I'm flattered that you like the story.