Her Tenth Week
Chapter 11 of 21
beaweasley2Severus’ thoughts dwelled on Hermione nearly all day. Nevertheless, it was the subtle touch of her hand and an unexpected action on her part that really surprised him the most, completely catching him off-guard.
This is my response for the Dictionary Drabbles Fun Challenge for May 31.
This is my response for the Dictionary Drabbles Fun Challenge for March 22.
May 31
Severus paced about his storeroom, trying to find the bottle of magnesium, finding his beryllium and boron on the shelf, but not what he was looking for. He finally found the empty magnesium jar in a box on the floor, along with many other valuable ingredients, including his piscidermis pods and wood-lily rhizomes.
Damn, blast-ended witch! Hermione had placed several jars and bottles in the box, most being ingredients that he'd collected himself. She had no right! Two months of this! No, that's not accurate. He looked at his calendar, mentally counting off the days she'd been here. Fifty days, not counting the weekends! That's a full two months and two weeks, and I still haven't made her scurry away. Not that he'd actually been trying as vehemently as he could have. The truth of it was that she was quite helpful when she didn't reorganize his shelves and remove valuable ingredients.
He picked up the jar of knotgrass, about to set it on the shelf, and noticed it was molding. He picked up the next jar, noticing that the frog parts were unusable, as were the jaberknoll parts, puffer-fish, lion-fish, Lacewings flies, Antlions, seaside billy witches and spang beetles... He quickly assessed each item in the box, nearly reaching the end when he spied a slip of parchment. It was a list of each ingredient, what was wrong with it, and the expiration date from each container, many of which shouldn't have expired yet. And she couldn't have put this on top of the box? he grumbled.
Well, I was going to the Apothecary today anyway. He didn't bother checking the rest of the shelves. Ms. Granger had apparently already done it for him. No point forgoing the inevitable. The question is do I take my apprentice with me. She will have to learn how to select the best quality ingredients from the mediocre. Besides, I like trading ribald jokes with Jenson, the man has a great repertoire of them, and it will be amusing to see if Ms. Granger can appreciate them.
The potions Severus required Hermione to brew were of reasonable quality, some he'd even rate as excellent, even by his own exacting standards. Jenson at the Apothecary in Diagon Alley had been quite pleased with them, offering top Galleon for his apprentice's work, which satisified Severus greatly. However, Plitheroa in the Cartwright Apothecary on The Promenade was refusing Ms. Granger's potions because of her blood status, even her Alexindora Potion, which most of the ladies paid dearly for. Somewhere out there are some truly witless purebloods refusing Hermione's potions simply because they refuse to believe that she's more capable than most of the nitwits I've had to teach all these years. His contention with such nonsense was tinged with schadenfreude for such idiocy. It's their own downfall over their complete inability to accept reality.
When he left the storeroom and entered the lab to tell Ms. Granger she'd be accompanying him, he saw her bent over his desk, obviously using some type of cleaning wax. It's not that he cared about the patina on his desk, but seeing her leaning over his desk like that definitely elicited those thoughts he'd been trying so desperately to suppress, never mind the way his body reacted.
She'd been so listless before lunch, not indolent, but certainly not her usual voluble self. However, after his sharp rebuke, she'd just shrugged, saying something about an article in the Daily Prophet having been ludicrous. "Lucius Malfoy apparently still harbors delusions of being a wizard grandee and is attempting to influence Ministry politics again," she'd said as she handed him her essays.
Now it seemed she was hell bent to drive him mad with her insistent cleaning.
She stood and looked at him. "I'll be in the sitting room reshelving the books, all right?" she said, her hand touching his chest as she passed.
"Granger!" he yelled for her.
With one arm on the doorframe, she swung around into the doorway, nearly colliding into him, but their faces touched, his lips to hers.
Without thinking, he cupped her head and tightened his arm around her waist, pulling her off balance so that she leaned against him as he deepened the kiss.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~Later that night~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
What in the bloody hell was I thinking! Severus chastised himself as he lay in bed, staring at the ceiling. I kissed her! I bloody kissed her!
The kiss had lasted only a few minutes. He'd been standing on the single step that separated his house from his potions lab when she'd swung through the door and kissed him. He'd reacted without thought or reason and embraced her. Well, if I hadn't the girl would have knocked me backwards on my bum, he rationalized. Still, he'd wrapped his arm around her waist and grasped her head, deepening the kiss when she'd lost her balance and literally fell into his embrace. She definitely hugged me back, or it could have just been that she was trying to grab onto me to steady herself but she did not push away. She kissed me back. She kissed me... She's a child! Okay, that was a lie, she was a young woman, but that fact he wasn't ready to admit to himself.
I'm twenty years older than she is! Which was the average age difference in most pureblood marriages up until the last few decades or so. Nevertheless, it was still an acceptable age difference in the wizarding world.
I was her professor, and now she's my apprentice. Not that that would really matter in the social mores of their world.
She is the Potter's best friend and socializes with the Weasleys, Longbottoms, and Lovegoods. All now considered pillars of the wizarding community. She was a bane of my existence her entire school years! Which was true, she had really tested his patience, skills and fortitude countless of times. Not to mention Ms. Granger's friends all of them! But the golden trio and members of the Dumbledore's Army were exalted heroes of the war.
Moreover, she's even considered an honorary member of the Order even though the girl was too young to have joined and they will all flay me alive for seducing her. Besides, she was Weasley's wife, albeit briefly if you believe the press surrounding the girl. I'll have all of the Weaselys to contend with! Well, according to the Daily Prophet, but they were not always accurate with their facts.
Oh, this just cannot happen! I have to end this! I just simply cannot have an apprentice that that I want to sleep with! Severus looked at the clock on his bedside table. Three bloody in the morning! Bugger. Bugger. Bugger.
~~~~~~~~earlier~~~~~~~~
"Ginny, I did it! I kissed him and he kissed me back!" Hermione said as soon as she'd dragged her friend into the lounge.
"You did? Where?" Ginny asked, pulling Hermione's hand so that she'd sit on the sofa with her.
Hermione followed, eager to tell Ginny everything. "On the lips...in the doorway to the lab!" she said excitedly.
"You kissed who?" Ron asked, entering the room, scowling at Hermione.
"No one!" both girls exclaimed, then looked at each other and started giggling.
Ron crossed his arms, frowning so hard he looked comical. "Fine, if you don't want to tell me...fine!" he said as he turned and stormed out.
"Ron, what's wrong?" the girls heard Harry ask from the entryway.
"Nothing. Hermione's snogging someone," Ron answered, trying to push his way past.
Harry looked into the lounge and then quickly turned around. "She's not snogging anyone...that's Ginny."
"Well then you ask her because that's what she said...she kissed him!" Ron snarled. A few seconds later, a door slammed.
Harry looked at the girls, but they both only shrugged and looked back at him with blank expressions. As soon as Harry left, Ginny turned back to Hermione. "Okay, now give. What happened?"
~TBC~
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Authors Notes:
The cockchafer (or may bug, as it is colloquially called, or sometimes billy witch or spang beetle, particularly in East Anglia) is a European beetle of the genus Melolontha, in the family Scarabaeidae. Once abundant throughout Europe and a major pest in the periodical years of "mass flight", it has been decimated in the middle of the 20th century through extensive use of pesticides and has even been locally exterminated in many regions. However, since a change in pest control beginning in the 1980's, its numbers have started to grow again. As they don't tolerate pollution well, their presence is usually a marker of low pollution levels. Their use in potions is not canon and is my own assumption used for this story. http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Cockchafer
Thank you, Southern_Witch_69, for not only agreeing to beta each one of my drabbles in this saga, but for also giving us the list of vocabulary words so I can play with them! I'm really having a fun time seeing just how creative I can be with this!
The word list (swiped from the past week's list from dictonary.com) :
1. listless
2. vehement
3. ribald
4. forgo
5. schadenfreude
6. grandee
7. patina
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listless \LIST-lis\, adjective:
Having no desire or inclination; indifferent; heedless; spiritless.
-- listlessly, adverb listlessness, noun
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vehement \VEE-uh-muhnt\ , adjective:
1. Characterized by intensity of emotions or convictions, or forcefulness of expression.
2. Characterized by or acting with great force or energy; strong.
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ribald \RIB-uhld; RY-bawld\, adjective:
1. Characterized by or given to vulgar humor; coarse.
2. A ribald person; a lewd fellow.
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forgo \for-GO\, transitive verb;
1. Inflected forms: forwent, forgone, forgoing, forgoes:
2. To abstain from; to do without.
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schadenfreude \SHOD-n-froy- duh\, noun:
A malicious satisfaction obtained from the misfortunes of others.
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grandee \gran-DEE\, noun:
1. A man of elevated rank or station.
2. In Spain or Portugal, a nobleman of the first rank.
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patina \PAT-n-uh; puh-TEEN-uh\ , noun:
1. The color or incrustation which age gives to works of art; especially, the green rust which covers ancient bronzes, coins, and medals.
2. The sheen on any surface, produced by age and use.
3. An appearance or aura produced by habit, practice, or use.
4. A superficial layer or exterior.
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I really enjoyed this story. You have a real gift for taking those words and weaving them into your plot seamlessly. Well done.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Repaying The Life Debt)
Thank you very much. I'ts fun to do these. I try to inspire others to try. It's not hard. Thank you for the review.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Repaying The Life Debt)
Thank you very much. I'ts fun to do these. I try to inspire others to try. It's not hard. Thank you for the review.
This story just gets better and better. The innocence of new love and the tender ground being broken. The last bit in the posted chapter practically had me dancing around my desk like a mad woman!
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Thank you very much. Did you see the extra bonuses? If not, check in the reviews!!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Repaying The Life Debt)
Thank you very much. Did you see the extra bonuses? If not, check in the reviews!!
How wonderful that Severus has become comfortable enough with her to show her his ancestral home and his family!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Repaying The Life Debt)
Yep, he is. I'm glad you are enjoying this one. Thank you for the review.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Repaying The Life Debt)
Yep, he is. I'm glad you are enjoying this one. Thank you for the review.
That wizard sounds really strange.I loved this bonus. It was just so sweet, the beginnings of a relationship...
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Repaying The Life Debt)
Teehehe I'm glad you're enjoying this. So glad you found the bonuses! Thank you for the review.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Repaying The Life Debt)
Teehehe I'm glad you're enjoying this. So glad you found the bonuses! Thank you for the review.
Hmmm.... I wonder what sneaky old Lucius is up to? Thanks for the bonus!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Repaying The Life Debt)
He's peripheral, and ran into a bit of a curse. Do read the reviews, most of the chapters have the bonus or two. If you can't find them, you can see them on my LJ
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Repaying The Life Debt)
He's peripheral, and ran into a bit of a curse. Do read the reviews, most of the chapters have the bonus or two. If you can't find them, you can see them on my LJ
It is great to see Hermione and Severus getting so comfortable with each other. As for that moment before the kiss....
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Repaying The Life Debt)
Thank you. Yes, nothing like the slow budding of friendship turning into romance. Thank you for the review.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Repaying The Life Debt)
Thank you. Yes, nothing like the slow budding of friendship turning into romance. Thank you for the review.
LOL. I like that he doesn't want to outright admit how good the pepermint idea is. And I simply love that you depicted Ron as competent and smart. He isn't exactly my favourite character, but I don't like to see him bashed either. Thanks for that.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Repaying The Life Debt)
Thankyou for the reivew. Nope, he's not ready to take advise from a former student, even if she's right. I chose to make Ron have a bit more of a brain than I ususaly type him, but he has his moments too. (Hint: start checking the reviews. This story has hidden bonuses in the reviews. Don't want you to miss them!)
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Repaying The Life Debt)
Thankyou for the reivew. Nope, he's not ready to take advise from a former student, even if she's right. I chose to make Ron have a bit more of a brain than I ususaly type him, but he has his moments too. (Hint: start checking the reviews. This story has hidden bonuses in the reviews. Don't want you to miss them!)
Lovely. I really like their interaction.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Repaying The Life Debt)
Thank you very much.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Repaying The Life Debt)
Thank you very much.
This is a very promising beginning. I hope Severus knows what he got himself into. *g*
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Repaying The Life Debt)
Thank you very much. I'm glad you are enjoyingthis attempt at taking vocab words and making a story out of them. Thank you for the review.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Repaying The Life Debt)
Thank you very much. I'm glad you are enjoyingthis attempt at taking vocab words and making a story out of them. Thank you for the review.
I've just caught up with the reading that has been sadly neglected recently. I can't say much I adore this story. It's just brilliant. Thank you for writing it.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Repaying The Life Debt)
Thank you very much. There is one more chapter to this story. Thank you so much for the review.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Repaying The Life Debt)
Thank you very much. There is one more chapter to this story. Thank you so much for the review.
Wow, he told her he loved her! That's so great! I wasn't expecting it for a while, knowing our dear Severus. Yay, I'm finally caught up. Thanks for keeping me up so late, by the way. Ye gads, it's midnight!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Repaying The Life Debt)
Yep, he loves her, and finally admitted it. I'm sorry I kept you up so late.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Repaying The Life Debt)
Yep, he loves her, and finally admitted it. I'm sorry I kept you up so late.
I liked his introduction of his family. They seem like an odd group. Lol
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Repaying The Life Debt)
Thank you. I know I made them sound like an odd group but it was the words - really! The words made me do it!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Repaying The Life Debt)
Thank you. I know I made them sound like an odd group but it was the words - really! The words made me do it!
Great last line. Lol
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Repaying The Life Debt)
Thank you, I like that one two.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Repaying The Life Debt)
Thank you, I like that one two.
Lucius is definitely a troublemaker. It's nice that Hermione and Severus are together. They are cute together.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Repaying The Life Debt)
Oh course Severus and Hermione are ging to stay togerther! Severus was just standing up to his prejudiced friend. Besides, he would have a hard time getting rid of her, wouldn't he?
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Repaying The Life Debt)
Oh course Severus and Hermione are ging to stay togerther! Severus was just standing up to his prejudiced friend. Besides, he would have a hard time getting rid of her, wouldn't he?
She was so forward with him! It was great. Oh, and of course, masterful use of the vocabulary, as usual.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Repaying The Life Debt)
Thank you so very much. I really tried. Yep, she is going for what she wants - him.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Repaying The Life Debt)
Thank you so very much. I really tried. Yep, she is going for what she wants - him.
Ah, finally a minute to myself so I can catch up on my reading (and if Merlin allows my writing). Wonderful chapter how on Earth do you manage to write a story using a word challange without being obvious? Hat's off to you g/f.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Repaying The Life Debt)
Wow, thank you. I'm not obvious? That compliment means a lot to me. I was simply trying to use the words and create a story worth reading, I'm flattered that you like it. *waves* Thank you very much.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Repaying The Life Debt)
Wow, thank you. I'm not obvious? That compliment means a lot to me. I was simply trying to use the words and create a story worth reading, I'm flattered that you like it. *waves* Thank you very much.
All I could say was "Awwwwwwwwww...." So lovely! and the bonuses are both exciting and cuuuuute!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Repaying The Life Debt)
Thank you very much. I'm very flattered that you liked the story and the bonuses.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Repaying The Life Debt)
Thank you very much. I'm very flattered that you liked the story and the bonuses.
Yay, he woke up!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Repaying The Life Debt)
Thank you. Yes he did. And about time too! Stubborn fool.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Repaying The Life Debt)
Thank you. Yes he did. And about time too! Stubborn fool.
Lol, clever witch, and oh so conniving.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Repaying The Life Debt)
Thank you. Yes she is, isn't she?
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Repaying The Life Debt)
Thank you. Yes she is, isn't she?
He actually told her he loved her! Yay!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Repaying The Life Debt)
Yep! I hope you check out the bonuses in the reviews! You'll love them!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Repaying The Life Debt)
Yep! I hope you check out the bonuses in the reviews! You'll love them!
He loves her!!! HE LOVES HER!!!And he told her before she said anything. OMG!"Who would have ever thought she of all people would find that protuberance kissable." Well, I don't know any woman in this ship that would pass up a chance to kiss Severus ... on his nose, one his ear, on his lips, on his ..... well, we won't go there just now. *sigh* Tee hee.I love this story and giggle everytime I get an email telling me you have posted an update.Beth
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Repaying The Life Debt)
Yep, he told her he loved her! and Yes, he was first.I'm so glad you like the story, Beth. I hope you'll come back and check out the review bonuses. Thank you so much for your support.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Repaying The Life Debt)
Oh and I forgot!!~ * ~Severus finished his rounds, delivering his potions. Jenson in the Apothecary in Diagon Alley had requested a large order of complicated potions and paid handsomely for the potions Severus delivered. He inquired after Hermione, smiling when he told Severus that her work was top quality, complimenting him on her training. Even Plitheroa at the Cartwright Apothecary on The Promenade had relented that Hermione’s potions were of an acceptable quality, requesting more of Hermione’s Alexindora Potion and Deliquesce Embrocation and paying the exuberant rate for which he charged her for them. Severus put the Galleons Hermione had earned with her potions in a separate pocket to give to her. He walked down The Promenade slowly with a contented smile on his face. He entered Rourke McCloud’s Bijouterie, thinking he might just get Hermione a small token. The tall, thin wizard looked up from his workbench when Severus entered the shop. “Let me know if you’d like to see anything.” Severus nodded as he walked along the displays and glass counters. Nothing struck him as being something she’d like or that suited her personality, until an object caught his eye. His palms started to sweat, his heart seemed to beat erratically, and there was a huge lump in his throat. The shopkeeper appeared before him as if summoned. “Did ya find something then?” he asked. “I’d like to see that one,” Severus said, pointing. The shopkeeper handed it to Severus with a smile. “You’ve fine taste, sir.” It was perfect: simple, elegant… expensive.
Response from braye27 (Reviewer)
Two bonuses in two replies for the same chapter!!! Wheeeee....I check for the bonuses every time I post a reply and then again a few days later just to make sure I don't miss one.Now, just what can this "simple, elegant... expensive" and small token be? A ring perhaps? I love this story!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Repaying The Life Debt)
Yep, he told her he loved her! and Yes, he was first.I'm so glad you like the story, Beth. I hope you'll come back and check out the review bonuses. Thank you so much for your support.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Repaying The Life Debt)
Oh and I forgot!!~ * ~Severus finished his rounds, delivering his potions. Jenson in the Apothecary in Diagon Alley had requested a large order of complicated potions and paid handsomely for the potions Severus delivered. He inquired after Hermione, smiling when he told Severus that her work was top quality, complimenting him on her training. Even Plitheroa at the Cartwright Apothecary on The Promenade had relented that Hermione’s potions were of an acceptable quality, requesting more of Hermione’s Alexindora Potion and Deliquesce Embrocation and paying the exuberant rate for which he charged her for them. Severus put the Galleons Hermione had earned with her potions in a separate pocket to give to her. He walked down The Promenade slowly with a contented smile on his face. He entered Rourke McCloud’s Bijouterie, thinking he might just get Hermione a small token. The tall, thin wizard looked up from his workbench when Severus entered the shop. “Let me know if you’d like to see anything.” Severus nodded as he walked along the displays and glass counters. Nothing struck him as being something she’d like or that suited her personality, until an object caught his eye. His palms started to sweat, his heart seemed to beat erratically, and there was a huge lump in his throat. The shopkeeper appeared before him as if summoned. “Did ya find something then?” he asked. “I’d like to see that one,” Severus said, pointing. The shopkeeper handed it to Severus with a smile. “You’ve fine taste, sir.” It was perfect: simple, elegant… expensive.
Response from braye27 (Reviewer)
Two bonuses in two replies for the same chapter!!! Wheeeee....I check for the bonuses every time I post a reply and then again a few days later just to make sure I don't miss one.Now, just what can this "simple, elegant... expensive" and small token be? A ring perhaps? I love this story!
lovely...but you stopped too soon! thanks so much
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Repaying The Life Debt)
I know! But they are supposed to be a Drabble! (That's why I put extra in the reviews! I have to make it short!! Oh, and you're welcome.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Repaying The Life Debt)
I know! But they are supposed to be a Drabble! (That's why I put extra in the reviews! I have to make it short!! Oh, and you're welcome.
“Oh, yes, you are one who truly enjoys all the finer things. Your house reeks of excessive ostentation.”--Great line.Bellwether, now that's one I haven't ever heard.Severus should know that Hermione wouldn't suggest something, especially from Ron, if she didn't suspect that it would work.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Repaying The Life Debt)
I know I keep getting these words and I"m like, OMG and I have to use that? Then read the dictionary for the meaning and play with the word a few tries until something clicks. But I'm telling you - this is fun!I think he's just considering the source, and contemplating what she meant by the suggestion. In the end - he did trust her.Thank you for the review.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Repaying The Life Debt)
I know I keep getting these words and I"m like, OMG and I have to use that? Then read the dictionary for the meaning and play with the word a few tries until something clicks. But I'm telling you - this is fun!I think he's just considering the source, and contemplating what she meant by the suggestion. In the end - he did trust her.Thank you for the review.
She's spunky. I like that.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Repaying The Life Debt)
Yes, this time I wrote a spunky Hermione for a change. I'm glad you approve!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Repaying The Life Debt)
Yes, this time I wrote a spunky Hermione for a change. I'm glad you approve!
Wow, I look at these every week and say, "There's no way I could write a story with all of these words included," and you've done it for multiple chapters in one story. How cool is that?
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Repaying The Life Debt)
Thank you. If you were ever interested in giving a go at it, email me and I'll give you some starting tips. It's not really that hard. It actually really fun. But I do really appreciate the compliment, and I'm flattered that you like the story.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Repaying The Life Debt)
Thank you. If you were ever interested in giving a go at it, email me and I'll give you some starting tips. It's not really that hard. It actually really fun. But I do really appreciate the compliment, and I'm flattered that you like the story.