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Potions Under Duress Repaying The Life Debt
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Repaying The Life Debt

1: Repaying The Life Debt

2: His New Apprentice

3: Only The Second Week!

4: The Third Week

5: Her Fourth Week

6: Her Fifth Week

7: Her Sixth Week

8: Her Seventh Week

9: Her Eighth Week

10: Her Ninth Week

11: Her Tenth Week

12: Her Eleventh Week

13: Her Twelfth Week

14: Her Thirteenth Week

15: Three Months And One Week

16: Her Fifteenth Week

17: A Friendly Confrontation

18: Her Sixteenth Week

19: Her Seventeenth Week – The Tides Turn

20: Her Eighteenth Week – She Gets What She Wanted

21: Apprentice No More

Repaying The Life Debt

beaweasley2

229 Reviews   |   229 Ratings, 0 Likes, 49 Favorites )

General Drabble/100-Word Alternate Universe Epilogue What Epilogue? Potions Under Duress 24,381 Words 21 Chapters Complete
Hermione Granger Severus Snape George Weasley Ginevra Weasley Harry Potter Neville Longbottom Ronald Weasley Lucius Malfoy Hestia Jones Horace Slughorn Luna Lovegood

This was not what Severus expected when he confronted Hermione Weasley about payment of his life debt.

This is my response for the Dictionary Drabbles Fun Challenge for March 22.

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Chapters (21)

Chapter 1: Repaying The Life Debt

Chapter 2: His New Apprentice

Chapter 3: Only The Second Week!

Chapter 4: The Third Week

Chapter 5: Her Fourth Week

Chapter 6: Her Fifth Week

Chapter 7: Her Sixth Week

Chapter 8: Her Seventh Week

Chapter 9: Her Eighth Week

Chapter 10: Her Ninth Week

Chapter 11: Her Tenth Week

Chapter 12: Her Eleventh Week

Chapter 13: Her Twelfth Week

Chapter 14: Her Thirteenth Week

Chapter 15: Three Months And One Week

Chapter 16: Her Fifteenth Week

Chapter 17: A Friendly Confrontation

Chapter 18: Her Sixteenth Week

Chapter 19: Her Seventeenth Week – The Tides Turn

Chapter 20: Her Eighteenth Week – She Gets What She Wanted

Chapter 21: Apprentice No More


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I love to write. A dreamer, a creator and filled with wonder, imagination and life. Sometimes I get lost in the other worlds I've read and in some I create. It's all good, I’m in good company. 

“Imagination does not become great until human beings, given the courage and the strength, use it to create.”― Maria Montessori
 “Our imagination flies -- we are its shadow on the earth.”― Vladimir Nabokov 
“Imagination is everything. It is the preview of life's coming attractions.”― Albert Einstein

“Imagination will often carry us to worlds that never were, but without it we go nowhere.” ― Carl Sagan

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10/10

aura

Ooo! I think I might be the first reviewer this time! Do I get a giftie? Love these drabbles! For how short they are, and considering they have to be short to be drabbles, they express so much. Like Hermione's shock at his statement, and especially that he said it first.

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Repaying The Life Debt)

Oh yes, you are! and Yes you do! But you have to share ... TeeheheheI'm so flattered that you like these, and I really appreciate your compliment. Thank you.Here you go:~*~ Hermione could hardly concentrate all day Saturday and Sunday, seriously looking forward to Monday. Even her professors noticed. Professor McGonagall even smiled at her when she’d admonished Hermione for her inattention. After lessons on Saturday, Hermione had hurriedly written her essays, completing the required length of parchments without her usually scrupulous handwriting and supplemental supportive paraphrasing from every possible book supporting her statements. It was the first time she’d ever written her essays simply based upon her own thoughts and suppositions, supported by examples, but not actually quoting the books. She hurried to the owlery at nearly eleven at night to send her letters: one to Ginny, the other to Luna. Her note had only said that she had great news to tell them and she’d see them Sunday night.   As soon as she’d completed her required work on Sunday, Hermione had run up to her dorm room, grabbed her overnight bag and ran from the castle. No sooner than she’d passed the gates, than she’d Disapparated, arriving at the Burrow and gasping for breath.  Ginny and Luna came running form the house even before she reached the door. “What happened?” Ginny asked excitedly. “We got your notes, but you were so vague! You could have told us something!” Even Luna was staring at her expectantly. Hermione laughed. “He told me that he loves me!” All three girls shrieked in delight, and Ginny and Luna both hugged Hermione.

Response from aura (Reviewer)

This extra is so cute!  And the other one...  Is he going to propose?!?  Looking forward to next week!  

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Repaying The Life Debt)

Oh yes, you are! and Yes you do! But you have to share ... TeeheheheI'm so flattered that you like these, and I really appreciate your compliment. Thank you.Here you go:~*~ Hermione could hardly concentrate all day Saturday and Sunday, seriously looking forward to Monday. Even her professors noticed. Professor McGonagall even smiled at her when she’d admonished Hermione for her inattention. After lessons on Saturday, Hermione had hurriedly written her essays, completing the required length of parchments without her usually scrupulous handwriting and supplemental supportive paraphrasing from every possible book supporting her statements. It was the first time she’d ever written her essays simply based upon her own thoughts and suppositions, supported by examples, but not actually quoting the books. She hurried to the owlery at nearly eleven at night to send her letters: one to Ginny, the other to Luna. Her note had only said that she had great news to tell them and she’d see them Sunday night.   As soon as she’d completed her required work on Sunday, Hermione had run up to her dorm room, grabbed her overnight bag and ran from the castle. No sooner than she’d passed the gates, than she’d Disapparated, arriving at the Burrow and gasping for breath.  Ginny and Luna came running form the house even before she reached the door. “What happened?” Ginny asked excitedly. “We got your notes, but you were so vague! You could have told us something!” Even Luna was staring at her expectantly. Hermione laughed. “He told me that he loves me!” All three girls shrieked in delight, and Ginny and Luna both hugged Hermione.

Response from aura (Reviewer)

This extra is so cute!  And the other one...  Is he going to propose?!?  Looking forward to next week!  

10/10

debjunk

It looks like someone is beginning to find someone else alluring!!

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Repaying The Life Debt)

Oh yes, and trying very hard to deny it, too.

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Repaying The Life Debt)

Oh yes, and trying very hard to deny it, too.

10/10

debjunk

I see Ron is being his obnoxious self.  What a jerk.

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Repaying The Life Debt)

Oh yes, but I'm not a Ron fan anyway.

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Repaying The Life Debt)

Oh yes, but I'm not a Ron fan anyway.

10/10

braye27

Severus must be giving in to his feelings for Hermione.  After all, he took her home to meet his family.  Woo hoo!Nice bonus in the reviews, too.  I love this story of yours.  Sometimes it just makes me melt.Beth

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Repaying The Life Debt)

Yep, he is giving in... although can a wall of protraits really count as 'meeting the family'? Teehehe Thank you for the sweet compliment.

Response from braye27 (Reviewer)

Well... maybe not a family... but at least she got to see his antecedents.

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Repaying The Life Debt)

Yep, he is giving in... although can a wall of protraits really count as 'meeting the family'? Teehehe Thank you for the sweet compliment.

Response from braye27 (Reviewer)

Well... maybe not a family... but at least she got to see his antecedents.

9/10

LillaQ

That's so sweet! I really enjoy the look into Severus family and home.

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Repaying The Life Debt)

Thank you very much.

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Repaying The Life Debt)

Thank you very much.

0/10

kimjo2

yay!  but, please, more kissy-poo!  thanks

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Repaying The Life Debt)

Oh, I can do better than that! But yes, more kissy-poo I shall do!

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Repaying The Life Debt)

Oh, I can do better than that! But yes, more kissy-poo I shall do!

10/10

murgy31

That was awesome!

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Repaying The Life Debt)

Thank you so very much.

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Repaying The Life Debt)

Thank you so very much.

10/10

murgy31

That was awesome!

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Repaying The Life Debt)

Thanks, did you see the next chapter? and the bonus?

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Repaying The Life Debt)

Thanks, did you see the next chapter? and the bonus?

10/10

sinbad

My only complaint is the chapter was too short!

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Repaying The Life Debt)

Sorry, but it is suppose to be a drabble - and I was told that they were getting to long. *shrugs* I do have more coming...

Response from sinbad (Reviewer)

I didn't know it is supposed to be a drabble, still I enjoyed it!

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Repaying The Life Debt)

Sorry, but it is suppose to be a drabble - and I was told that they were getting to long. *shrugs* I do have more coming...

Response from sinbad (Reviewer)

I didn't know it is supposed to be a drabble, still I enjoyed it!

9/10

CharmedForce

I love how Severus orders for Hermione and she doesn't even think twice about it.

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Repaying The Life Debt)

Actually, I know some older gentlemen who order for their dates/wives. Besides, Hermione had slipped away to the ladies room - she probably told Severus what she wanted in case Tom came to take their order. I've done that before.

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Repaying The Life Debt)

Actually, I know some older gentlemen who order for their dates/wives. Besides, Hermione had slipped away to the ladies room - she probably told Severus what she wanted in case Tom came to take their order. I've done that before.

10/10

blue artemis

Hm, Lucius is not a happy person, now is he? 

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Repaying The Life Debt)

well, he's not happy with the chnges in his life I suspect, nor the changes in the wizarding world. There's more - I just snuck it in the reveiw before yours...

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Repaying The Life Debt)

well, he's not happy with the chnges in his life I suspect, nor the changes in the wizarding world. There's more - I just snuck it in the reveiw before yours...

0/10

rachow

Another wonderful installment.  Let's see that bonus!

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Repaying The Life Debt)

Thank you very much. Here it is:~ * ~ Severus swirled the deep red liquor in his glass as he listened to Lucius talk about his community service he was required to perform as his retribution to wizarding society. “So about Miss Granger…” Severus carefully controlled his expression when Lucius changed the subject, amused that he’d finally brought up Hermione. “What about her?” “You’ve been seen publicly with her quite a bit as of late. Surely you are not socializing with this girl on a romantic level?” Lucius inquired, suppressing his sneer with a sip of his drink. Severus looked him straight in the eye. “And if I am?” Lucius met his gaze, unflinching. “At least she is well acknowledged as a war hero and as an exceptional witch,” he stated magnanimously. “I suppose you could do worse.” “You still can’t see past her birth, can you?” Severus asked pointedly. “I am finding that birth has very little weight anymore,” Lucius replied, unable to hide his scorn. “More is the pity.” Severus hid his smirk by smiling. “You know as well as I do that strength, talent and intelligence is not a direct collation of birth – look at Crabbe, Goyle, even Pettigrew. All worthless and complete nitwits. We had to deal with a fair few dunderheads in the Dark Lord’s circles.” “I know that blood has never held such a high priority in your mind,” Lucius said as he topped off their glasses. “No, it hasn’t,” Severus admitted. “Possibly. Because, unlike some, I have accepted my heritage and embraced my world. You do know that the Dark Lord himself was a half-blood. His father was a Muggle, or so he told Pettigrew and Potter in the graveyard the night he returned to power. I remember Pettigrew gossiping about it a number of times.” “I remember,” Lucius stated, taking a hefty drink from his glass. “So you like her?” “I do. This apprenticeship was a ruse – of her own design. However, I admit, I rather like having her around.” Severus took a drink before adding, “Is this going to be a problem?” “No, I suppose not. An adjustment,” Lucius stated, meeting his gaze once more. “Just as society has – so must we.”  “Good.”

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Repaying The Life Debt)

Thank you very much. Here it is:~ * ~ Severus swirled the deep red liquor in his glass as he listened to Lucius talk about his community service he was required to perform as his retribution to wizarding society. “So about Miss Granger…” Severus carefully controlled his expression when Lucius changed the subject, amused that he’d finally brought up Hermione. “What about her?” “You’ve been seen publicly with her quite a bit as of late. Surely you are not socializing with this girl on a romantic level?” Lucius inquired, suppressing his sneer with a sip of his drink. Severus looked him straight in the eye. “And if I am?” Lucius met his gaze, unflinching. “At least she is well acknowledged as a war hero and as an exceptional witch,” he stated magnanimously. “I suppose you could do worse.” “You still can’t see past her birth, can you?” Severus asked pointedly. “I am finding that birth has very little weight anymore,” Lucius replied, unable to hide his scorn. “More is the pity.” Severus hid his smirk by smiling. “You know as well as I do that strength, talent and intelligence is not a direct collation of birth – look at Crabbe, Goyle, even Pettigrew. All worthless and complete nitwits. We had to deal with a fair few dunderheads in the Dark Lord’s circles.” “I know that blood has never held such a high priority in your mind,” Lucius said as he topped off their glasses. “No, it hasn’t,” Severus admitted. “Possibly. Because, unlike some, I have accepted my heritage and embraced my world. You do know that the Dark Lord himself was a half-blood. His father was a Muggle, or so he told Pettigrew and Potter in the graveyard the night he returned to power. I remember Pettigrew gossiping about it a number of times.” “I remember,” Lucius stated, taking a hefty drink from his glass. “So you like her?” “I do. This apprenticeship was a ruse – of her own design. However, I admit, I rather like having her around.” Severus took a drink before adding, “Is this going to be a problem?” “No, I suppose not. An adjustment,” Lucius stated, meeting his gaze once more. “Just as society has – so must we.”  “Good.”

0/10

hgelman

Yea!  Very nice update!

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Repaying The Life Debt)

Thank you.

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Repaying The Life Debt)

Thank you.

0/10

sunny33

Well, that was a simple enough  request. I'm sure she was happy to oblige.

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Repaying The Life Debt)

Wouldn't you if he asked so nicely? Heck! I would!

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Repaying The Life Debt)

Wouldn't you if he asked so nicely? Heck! I would!

9/10

lmm

HG/SS, fun story and learning something new...who could ask for more!!!!!!!!!!!

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Repaying The Life Debt)

Thank you.

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Repaying The Life Debt)

Thank you.

10/10

blue artemis

I enjoyed that chapter, quite a bit. 

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Repaying The Life Debt)

Thank you very much.

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Repaying The Life Debt)

Thank you very much.

10/10

sinbad

Great work once again.  I actually had to read the definitions of some of the words from the list this week.

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Repaying The Life Debt)

Yes, some of them were rather unfamiliar to me too. Thank you for the review.

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Repaying The Life Debt)

Yes, some of them were rather unfamiliar to me too. Thank you for the review.

0/10

kimjo2

yay!!  more kissy-poo!  thanks so much

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Repaying The Life Debt)

You're welcome. More kissy-pooing forthcoming! and a bit more (suggested - I have a word limit)

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Repaying The Life Debt)

You're welcome. More kissy-pooing forthcoming! and a bit more (suggested - I have a word limit)

10/10

pookah

I'll be back later to see if you have added any extras in the reviews!  Thanks for another chapter.  Nice to see him finally admit his interest, even better to see him open up to Hermione.  Good chapter!

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Repaying The Life Debt)

Thank you for the reveiw. I'll be sticking in the bonus with the next chapter (which was going to be the second half of this one but the admins told me it wouldn't be a drabble - so I divided it.) Thank you for the compliment.

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Repaying The Life Debt)

Thank you for the reveiw. I'll be sticking in the bonus with the next chapter (which was going to be the second half of this one but the admins told me it wouldn't be a drabble - so I divided it.) Thank you for the compliment.

9/10

pookah

Hooray, another bonus bit in the reviews!  Thanks for that sweet addition, and this charming chapter where they both obsess about the other!

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Repaying The Life Debt)

Yes, I am having them get together! At least that is the goal!

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Repaying The Life Debt)

Yes, I am having them get together! At least that is the goal!

9/10

CharmedForce

Palaver is a word that always makes me giggle. I seem to remember a movie or SNL skit with that word in it.

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Repaying The Life Debt)

It was one of the words so I did my best with it. I'm glad you got a chuckle. Thank you for the reveiw.

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Repaying The Life Debt)

It was one of the words so I did my best with it. I'm glad you got a chuckle. Thank you for the reveiw.

9/10

Shadow

Funny that a night spent apart was spent thinking of the other the whole time. I just read the bonus in the reviews. What a truly romatic way to end the evening.

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Repaying The Life Debt)

Yes, they are in the dificult budding stages, I'm pleased to say. I'm really glad you found the bonus. Did you find the ones hidden before?

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Repaying The Life Debt)

Yes, they are in the dificult budding stages, I'm pleased to say. I'm really glad you found the bonus. Did you find the ones hidden before?

0/10

sunny33

cosmo could get her into a lot of trouble!

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Repaying The Life Debt)

Teehehe Yes, it could. But then again - it works, tight? not.

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Repaying The Life Debt)

Teehehe Yes, it could. But then again - it works, tight? not.

0/10

qui_quae_quod

Yay!  And another lovely chapter.  I'm really having fun seeing how creative you can be with this as well!  Cockaigne??  Really, how cool is it that I now know what 'Cockaigne' means as a result of your great story?

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Repaying The Life Debt)

Thank you so much. I'm having such a blast palying around with the words! Isn't Cocaigne a cool word? Thank you for the kind review.

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Repaying The Life Debt)

Thank you so much. I'm having such a blast palying around with the words! Isn't Cocaigne a cool word? Thank you for the kind review.

9/10

CharmedForce

Oh, he showed up and she didn't see! I hope she heard Hestia before she left.

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Repaying The Life Debt)

Oh, Sorry, no. find the bonus to find out...

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Repaying The Life Debt)

Oh, Sorry, no. find the bonus to find out...

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