Repaying The Life Debt
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This was not what Severus expected when he confronted Hermione Weasley about payment of his life debt.
This is my response for the Dictionary Drabbles Fun Challenge for March 22.
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I love to write. A dreamer, a creator and filled with wonder, imagination and life. Sometimes I get lost in the other worlds I've read and in some I create. It's all good, I’m in good company.
“Imagination does not become great until human beings, given the courage and the strength, use it to create.”― Maria Montessori
“Our imagination flies -- we are its shadow on the earth.”― Vladimir Nabokov
“Imagination is everything. It is the preview of life's coming attractions.”― Albert Einstein
“Imagination will often carry us to worlds that never were, but without it we go nowhere.” ― Carl Sagan
Reviews for Repaying The Life Debt
The wonders you can do with those obnoxious words! True enough, the less frequent words would often be formal and regardless the meaning, Snape sounds like a person, who would use difficult and uncommon words on daily bases.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Repaying The Life Debt)
Thank you. These words just seemed to scream Snape and potions to me!
Good word usage. It's kind of what I imagined the first time I saw them, too. They screamed snape and potions! lol
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Repaying The Life Debt)
Thank you. These words were difficult this week. I didn't recognize any of them, but yes, they screamed Severus and potions gone amuck! Thnak you for the challenge nad the support. love you
Hermione's perkiness even annoyed me, so I can understand why Severus was so short with her after a rough morning.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Repaying The Life Debt)
Of which Herminoe had no idea he'd had one! Thank yu for the review
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Repaying The Life Debt)
Of which Herminoe had no idea he'd had one! Thank yu for the review
Another great chapter, can't wait for next week!gab
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Repaying The Life Debt)
Thank you. Next week - Hermione's POV! (At least that's the plan - it depends on the words!)
good chapter, but boy Severus is being difficult. Perhaps Hermione will smack him with a cauldren......
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Repaying The Life Debt)
Isn't difficult part of Severus' chaacter? and isn't being helpful hers? This is only her third week! Trust me - it may brew slowly, but this is a SS/HG ship and Hermione has an agenda. This one (and last week was his POV - Next week her POV!)
That was fun.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Repaying The Life Debt)
Thank you. Ole Sev is still trying and she's still coming around...
You've inspired me to begin a story with last week's words, and I think it will not be finished in only one chapter. It is certainly not finnished in only one week, part one languishes. But now I have decided not to try to cram it all into one week and one list of words. I hope to post part one sometime nest week. Good use of the words list, I daresay I will not be able to slip them in well.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Repaying The Life Debt)
I've made it my challenge to not only use the words each week, but try to use them in order and to make a story out of it, deplicting only every Friday of Hermione's apprentiship. If this inspires you to type a story - awesome!! Good luck and I hope you do! I'm flattered that I inspired you to try. I look forward to reading it.
That was cute. Is it a one shot?
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Repaying The Life Debt)
Thank you very much. Yes, it's a one-shot.
nice use of the words. and i am interested to see how this goes forward. and i try not to nag but - i hope this isn't keeping you from working on the self-writing parchment, as i am eagerly awaiting your next update of that story. ; )
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Repaying The Life Debt)
Thank you for the kind words. Sorry - no progression planned. It's a one-shot and I'm back to typing on Parchment. Sorry if that disappoints.
Response from kittylefish (Reviewer)
can't be disappointed if you are back to working on Parchment!
Oh, well done!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Repaying The Life Debt)
Thank you very much.
That showed a panoply of sesquipedalian vocabulary! :)
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Repaying The Life Debt)
Thank you. 
LOL I tried my best to use those words and actually creat a readable story. I hope you enjoyed the story.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Repaying The Life Debt)
Thank you. LOL I tried my best to use those words and actually creat a readable story. I hope you enjoyed the story.
Have enjoyed very muchly! 
About the only thing good about this coming to an end is that it means you'll have more time to spend on all your other stories! (I never like it when stories I like are actually over and done with... prefer them to go on forever... with regular updates, of course!) 
This was really cute. Well done! 
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Repaying The Life Debt)
Thank you very much. Yes, I will now have a little more time to shuffle onto other project demands. I'm really glad you liked the story.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Repaying The Life Debt)
Thank you very much. Yes, I will now have a little more time to shuffle onto other project demands. I'm really glad you liked the story.
“Because after you finish school, I want you to become my wife!” Woo hoo! There's gonna be a wedding! And lots of little Snapes toddling around the study and the lounge. And lot's of love making and all that good stuff.... And you will tell us all about it in a sequel, right?I have loved this story from the beginning! 
Well done! Beth
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Repaying The Life Debt)
a sequel. I can't believe this story is so well liked that you all want a sequel? oh gads!! nine months of school, a wedding and kids. How many weekly drabbles if that gonna be? I'll think about it.Oh, and thank you so much for all the fun reviews. I really appreciate them so much.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Repaying The Life Debt)
a sequel. I can't believe this story is so well liked that you all want a sequel? oh gads!! nine months of school, a wedding and kids. How many weekly drabbles if that gonna be? I'll think about it.Oh, and thank you so much for all the fun reviews. I really appreciate them so much.
This was a fun series! Thank you!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Repaying The Life Debt)
Thank you very much. I'm flattered. and you are most welcome.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Repaying The Life Debt)
Thank you very much. I'm flattered. and you are most welcome.
yay! a cheer for happy endings! thanks so much for this delightful ride. i enjoyed it immencely
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Repaying The Life Debt)
Thank you very much. I'm so glad that you liked this story.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Repaying The Life Debt)
Thank you very much. I'm so glad that you liked this story.
I have just caught up with this delightful tale. Thank you for all the chapters and the extras! I am sorry to see it end. I have enjoyed this challenge story so very much! Somehow a shouted wedding proposal suits Snape! A charming way to end a charming story! Thank you, one final time, for sharing this with us.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Repaying The Life Debt)
Thank you very much. I'm glad that you found the extra bits. I was worried that they'd be missed. Thank you for reading and the lovely reviews.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Repaying The Life Debt)
Thank you very much. I'm glad that you found the extra bits. I was worried that they'd be missed. Thank you for reading and the lovely reviews.
The end.. no no no no... i want hear all about the little Snape's lolGreat story.
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Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Repaying The Life Debt)
Yes, I was ending this. Your not the only one that wants this story to continue to kids. But will you be interesed in nine months of weekends, wedding and such... ?? I suppose I will have to think on this...Thank you so much for the compliment and the nice review.
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Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Repaying The Life Debt)
Yes, I was ending this. Your not the only one that wants this story to continue to kids. But will you be interesed in nine months of weekends, wedding and such... ?? I suppose I will have to think on this...Thank you so much for the compliment and the nice review.
That was adorable. I enjoyed the whole story.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Repaying The Life Debt)
Thank you so very much. I'm glad that you did.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Repaying The Life Debt)
Thank you so very much. I'm glad that you did.
He always has to confuse things. LOL.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Repaying The Life Debt)
Well, it wasn't something he - he did try and plan it, really. But she kinda got him riled up. He didn't mean to yell it out at her. He told me so.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Repaying The Life Debt)
Well, it wasn't something he - he did try and plan it, really. But she kinda got him riled up. He didn't mean to yell it out at her. He told me so.
Now that was the greatest Snape proposal I've ever read. Lol. Of course they'd yell at each other. Too funny. Oh, I thought you'd have this story go on forever!
It's not like there won't be a plethora of new words to choose from! All I can say is Sequel, sequel!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Repaying The Life Debt)
Wow, thank you. I know that wasn't the way he planned on asking her, but it worked. No, 
I'm sorry but I ended this one here. although I have been begged for a sequel. possibly. I'll think about it.Or a whole new story. I was thinking about writting a few weeks words as Severus' first days teaching. ?
possibly. Thank you for the sweet review, the cute icons and the lovely stars.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Repaying The Life Debt)
Wow, thank you. I know that wasn't the way he planned on asking her, but it worked. No, I'm sorry but I ended this one here. although I have been begged for a sequel. possibly. I'll think about it.Or a whole new story. I was thinking about writting a few weeks words as Severus' first days teaching. ? possibly. Thank you for the sweet review, the cute icons and the lovely stars.
Really enjoyed this offering, and I'm sorry it had to end. Also I'm going to miss enlarging my vocab in such an unforgettable manner! I'm British...and live just outside Oxford(never managed to see them filming there yet...but there's still time!),but even Prof.Richard Dawkins doesn't use that much vocab!and he's a Don at Oxford!Thanks for such a great story, will be waiting for any future fics from you.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Repaying The Life Debt)
Thank you very much. It was fun to write. I will write more of these in the future simply because I love the challenge of it. Sweetflag is doing one as well. I thought that in the meantime I'd work on my 3 WIPs. Thank you for the lovely review.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Repaying The Life Debt)
Thank you very much. It was fun to write. I will write more of these in the future simply because I love the challenge of it. Sweetflag is doing one as well. I thought that in the meantime I'd work on my 3 WIPs. Thank you for the lovely review.
Great story, I think Severus's inability to speak fluently about what he wanted was endearing. I'm glad it worked out for them.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Repaying The Life Debt)
Thank you. He managed to get it out though. Thank you for the review.
So... it's over. A happy ending for them. I loved this story, and I'm sad that it's ended. Thank you for writing it :)
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Repaying The Life Debt)
Yes, I brought the story to an end - a happy ending! Thank you very much and you are most welcome. Keep up with your dictionary challeng, I'm enjoying it very much.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Repaying The Life Debt)
Yes, I brought the story to an end - a happy ending! Thank you very much and you are most welcome. Keep up with your dictionary challeng, I'm enjoying it very much.
SEQUEL!!!! Oh, this DEFINTELY needs a sequel :D
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Repaying The Life Debt)
LOL Geeze, thank you. I guess you really liked this one. I was thinking about finishing Self-Writing Parchment, The Enchanted Tower Room, or possibly Plight-Trothed Bride - but I suppose they could wait...don't throw tomatoes at your computer!The seeds are really hard to get out of your keyboard!!
Response from hermione278 (Reviewer)
EEEEEWWWW!!!! Why are there tomatoes here? *sticks tongue out at the nasty things*Hmmm...I like when stories are updated, but I don't like when they're finished...it makes me sad :( But Self-Writing Parchment...I don't believe that I've read that one. I shall have to go investigate! But I am reading your other two. They're awesome! I especially like The Enchanted Tower Room, it's so different! :DAnyways, as long as you write a sequel to this at some point, I suppose I can wait until you finish one of your other fics. *hugh sigh*:DOH! And if you ever need a beta, I'm here! :DRebecca
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Repaying The Life Debt)
LOL Geeze, thank you. I guess you really liked this one. I was thinking about finishing Self-Writing Parchment, The Enchanted Tower Room, or possibly Plight-Trothed Bride - but I suppose they could wait...don't throw tomatoes at your computer!The seeds are really hard to get out of your keyboard!!
Response from hermione278 (Reviewer)
EEEEEWWWW!!!! Why are there tomatoes here? *sticks tongue out at the nasty things*Hmmm...I like when stories are updated, but I don't like when they're finished...it makes me sad :( But Self-Writing Parchment...I don't believe that I've read that one. I shall have to go investigate! But I am reading your other two. They're awesome! I especially like The Enchanted Tower Room, it's so different! :DAnyways, as long as you write a sequel to this at some point, I suppose I can wait until you finish one of your other fics. *hugh sigh*:DOH! And if you ever need a beta, I'm here! :DRebecca