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Potions Under Duress Second Life
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Second Life

1: Chapter One

2: Chapter Two

3: Chapter Three

4: Chapter Four

5: Chapter Five

6: Chapter Six

7: Chapter Seven

8: Chapter Eight

9: Chapter Nine

10: Chapter Ten

11: Chapter Eleven

12: Chapter Twelve

13: Chapter Thirteen

14: Chapter Fourteen

15: Chapter Fifteen

16: Chapter Sixteen

17: Chapter Seventeen

18: Chapter Eighteen

19: Chapter Nineteen

20: Chapter Twenty

21: Chapter Twenty-One

22: Chapter Twenty-Two

23: Chapter Twenty-Three

24: Chapter Twenty-Four

25: Chapter Twenty-Five

26: Chapter Twenty-Six

27: Chapter Twenty-Seven

28: Chapter Twenty-Eight

29: Chapter Twenty-Nine

30: Chapter Thirty

31: Chapter Thirty-One

32: Chapter Thirty-Two

33: Chapter Thirty-Three

34: Chapter Thirty-Four

35: Chapter Thirty-Five

36: Chapter Thirty-Six

37: Chapter Thirty-Seven

38: Chapter Thirty-Eight

39: Chapter Thirty-Nine

40: Chapter Forty

41: Chapter Forty-One

42: Chapter Forty-Two

43: Chapter Forty-Three

44: Chapter Forty-Four

45: Chapter Forty-Five

46: Chapter Forty-Six

47: Chapter Forty-Seven

48: Chapter Forty-Eight

Second Life

Lariope

3,012 Reviews   |   3,012 Ratings, 1 Like, 1,269 Favorites )

Drama Angst Romance Potions Under Duress 235,067 Words 53 Chapters Complete
Hermione Granger Severus Snape

Hermione is forced to lead a double life when she agrees to Dumbledore's plan to protect Professor Snape. Inspired by the Marriage Law. Warning for student/teacher relationship, though Hermione is of age.

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Chapters (48)

Chapter 1: Chapter One

Chapter 2: Chapter Two

Chapter 3: Chapter Three

Chapter 4: Chapter Four

Chapter 5: Chapter Five

Chapter 6: Chapter Six

Chapter 7: Chapter Seven

Chapter 8: Chapter Eight

Chapter 9: Chapter Nine

Chapter 10: Chapter Ten

Chapter 11: Chapter Eleven

Chapter 12: Chapter Twelve

Chapter 13: Chapter Thirteen

Chapter 14: Chapter Fourteen

Chapter 15: Chapter Fifteen

Chapter 16: Chapter Sixteen

Chapter 17: Chapter Seventeen

Chapter 18: Chapter Eighteen

Chapter 19: Chapter Nineteen

Chapter 20: Chapter Twenty

Chapter 21: Chapter Twenty-One

Chapter 22: Chapter Twenty-Two

Chapter 23: Chapter Twenty-Three

Chapter 24: Chapter Twenty-Four

Chapter 25: Chapter Twenty-Five

Chapter 26: Chapter Twenty-Six

Chapter 27: Chapter Twenty-Seven

Chapter 28: Chapter Twenty-Eight

Chapter 29: Chapter Twenty-Nine

Chapter 30: Chapter Thirty

Chapter 31: Chapter Thirty-One

Chapter 32: Chapter Thirty-Two

Chapter 33: Chapter Thirty-Three

Chapter 34: Chapter Thirty-Four

Chapter 35: Chapter Thirty-Five

Chapter 36: Chapter Thirty-Six

Chapter 37: Chapter Thirty-Seven

Chapter 38: Chapter Thirty-Eight

Chapter 39: Chapter Thirty-Nine

Chapter 40: Chapter Forty

Chapter 41: Chapter Forty-One

Chapter 42: Chapter Forty-Two

Chapter 43: Chapter Forty-Three

Chapter 44: Chapter Forty-Four

Chapter 45: Chapter Forty-Five

Chapter 46: Chapter Forty-Six

Chapter 47: Chapter Forty-Seven

Chapter 48: Chapter Forty-Eight


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Reviews for Second Life

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10/10

Mazzy

I love that you've put them back together :) I love that Severus will wake up to her in his arms - even though he may be his snarky self again when it happens ?? Lovely, simply lovely!

Response from Lariope (Author of Second Life)

I'm glad you know me well enough to know that even though they'll wake up together doesn't mean he won't be snarky. :)Thank you so much,

Response from Lariope (Author of Second Life)

!

Response from Lariope (Author of Second Life)

I'm glad you know me well enough to know that even though they'll wake up together doesn't mean he won't be snarky. :)Thank you so much,

Response from Lariope (Author of Second Life)

!

0/10

real_life

Poor Hermione..I can't help but feel sorry for her and Snape. So what's next for our (can I call them that or are they yours?) lovely couple?Please don't keep us waiting for long. This is an amazing story, as I've said before.

Response from Lariope (Author of Second Life)

I won't ever keep you waiting that long again, real life. I'm so sorry about it! And as for what's next, I'm not telling! You'll have to wait and see. And of course they're yours. I'm just borrowing them. I don't claim ownership. :)Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. I'm glad you're still enjoying it!

Response from Lariope (Author of Second Life)

I won't ever keep you waiting that long again, real life. I'm so sorry about it! And as for what's next, I'm not telling! You'll have to wait and see. And of course they're yours. I'm just borrowing them. I don't claim ownership. :)Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. I'm glad you're still enjoying it!

10/10

sc010f

*sobs*Exciting, and beautiful! Oh, I'm so in love with this! :DBut you knew that already. . .

Response from Lariope (Author of Second Life)

Thank you so much, Scoffy! I'm so glad you liked it! xoxox

Response from Lariope (Author of Second Life)

Thank you so much, Scoffy! I'm so glad you liked it! xoxox

10/10

Camillo

Fantastic chapter.

Response from Lariope (Author of Second Life)

Thank you,

Response from Lariope (Author of Second Life)

. :)

Response from Lariope (Author of Second Life)

Thank you,

Response from Lariope (Author of Second Life)

. :)

0/10

whynot

Whee! So glad you have posted a new chapter. I had the pleasure of reading the first 38 chapters in one go. Now it kills me to have to wait for more. But glad to hear you plan to post more often now.

Response from Lariope (Author of Second Life)

I'm so sorry about that dreadful wait. I hope that will never ever happen again. Usually I post faithfully every Tuesday. I can't believe you read 38 chapters in one go, seriously. I wrote the damned thing and I don't think I could do that. I'm very impressed!And thank you for reading and reviewing!

Response from Lariope (Author of Second Life)

I'm so sorry about that dreadful wait. I hope that will never ever happen again. Usually I post faithfully every Tuesday. I can't believe you read 38 chapters in one go, seriously. I wrote the damned thing and I don't think I could do that. I'm very impressed!And thank you for reading and reviewing!

10/10

pythia_delphi

And here I was thinking that once the War was over, all would be hunky-dory and sunshine and roses. You really know how to put us through the ringer, don't you?Exceptional, as usual, m'dear!

Response from Lariope (Author of Second Life)

Hi,

Response from Lariope (Author of Second Life)

! Come on, it's me we're talking about. The angst queen! More ringerdom ahead, I'm afraid, but I'll try to get to the sunshine before too long. Thank you for reading and reviewing! xoxox

Response from pythia_delphi (Reviewer)

Fuck, I think I made a typo- is it ringer or wringer? Perhaps I'm allowed a typo at 3.30am, eh? At any rate, you really are projecting your post-Portus blues onto the poor couple, aren't you? Well, enough already, woman! Haven't they suffered enough? Have you no heart? I want sunshine and roses NOW! *g*

Response from Lariope (Author of Second Life)

Hi,

Response from Lariope (Author of Second Life)

! Come on, it's me we're talking about. The angst queen! More ringerdom ahead, I'm afraid, but I'll try to get to the sunshine before too long. Thank you for reading and reviewing! xoxox

Response from pythia_delphi (Reviewer)

Fuck, I think I made a typo- is it ringer or wringer? Perhaps I'm allowed a typo at 3.30am, eh? At any rate, you really are projecting your post-Portus blues onto the poor couple, aren't you? Well, enough already, woman! Haven't they suffered enough? Have you no heart? I want sunshine and roses NOW! *g*

10/10

MollysSister

Oh I adore that Arthur was able to be the voice of reason. He is an under utilized character for sure. I felt Snape's dispair, his POV was almost painful. And Hermione's almost catatonic behavior was creepy as well. Another emotional ringer of a chapter toots. Thank good I am on valium or I really would have been crying. Keep up the good work.

Response from Lariope (Author of Second Life)

He is the voice of reason, isn't he? I don't write him very often because he's like... God to me. I'm glad you used the word 'catatonia' because that's exactly where I saw her, here. Not that I blame her--after 36 hours without sleep, Gringotts, the final battle, and seeing both her husband and best friend die and be resurrected, I expect she's a little overwhelmed. Thank god for valium! Love you.

Response from MollysSister (Reviewer)

Or its cheap generic version fluxotine. $5/month and I am a happy stable person. Who could ask for more?

Response from Lariope (Author of Second Life)

He is the voice of reason, isn't he? I don't write him very often because he's like... God to me. I'm glad you used the word 'catatonia' because that's exactly where I saw her, here. Not that I blame her--after 36 hours without sleep, Gringotts, the final battle, and seeing both her husband and best friend die and be resurrected, I expect she's a little overwhelmed. Thank god for valium! Love you.

Response from MollysSister (Reviewer)

Or its cheap generic version fluxotine. $5/month and I am a happy stable person. Who could ask for more?

0/10

absolutanjul

"Tonight, she would take what comfort she could, whether it was willingly given or not."

Absolutely beautiful! I love your Hermione and can feel her emotions through your words. Kudos!

Response from Lariope (Author of Second Life)

Thank you so much! I'm really glad that you like my Hermione. That means a lot to me.

Response from Lariope (Author of Second Life)

Thank you so much! I'm really glad that you like my Hermione. That means a lot to me.

0/10

vanityfair

Looking forward to more.  Excellent job!

Response from Lariope (Author of Second Life)

Thank you! More very soon!

Response from Lariope (Author of Second Life)

Thank you! More very soon!

0/10

makaem

This chapter is perfect.

Response from Lariope (Author of Second Life)

Wow. I'm speechless. Thank you so much.

Response from makaem (Reviewer)

I haven't reviewed before this because I simply didn't feel that I had anything to add to what had already been said.  But this chapter was so wonderful, I had to comment.  The conversation with Ron's dad may become my favorite part of the story.  I can't wait to see where the next chapters take this story. This is amazing.MA

Response from Lariope (Author of Second Life)

Wow. I'm speechless. Thank you so much.

Response from makaem (Reviewer)

I haven't reviewed before this because I simply didn't feel that I had anything to add to what had already been said.  But this chapter was so wonderful, I had to comment.  The conversation with Ron's dad may become my favorite part of the story.  I can't wait to see where the next chapters take this story. This is amazing.MA

0/10

mischievous_t

The emotional depth of this chapter is amazing.  I am breathing it and surrounded by it.  Truly beautiful.  

Response from Lariope (Author of Second Life)

Thank you so much, snapeaddiction. I'm glad that for you the wait didn't seem that long and that you liked the new one! More coming soon. I'm very lucky to have gotten you for a reader. xoxo

Response from Lariope (Author of Second Life)

Thank you so much, snapeaddiction. I'm glad that for you the wait didn't seem that long and that you liked the new one! More coming soon. I'm very lucky to have gotten you for a reader. xoxo

10/10

wilder0511

I have been checking daily for an update and I am so glad you got a chapter to us finally, I hope the next one will be faster in the making. As always I love the story and can't wait for me.

Response from Lariope (Author of Second Life)

Again, my heartfelt apologies for the wait on this chapter. Portus was quite an experience, and it took a lot of my writing time from me. I hope that I never, ever make you wait that long again! But I do thank you for sticking with me. The new one will be on schedule! Thank you so much for reading and reviewing.

Response from Lariope (Author of Second Life)

Again, my heartfelt apologies for the wait on this chapter. Portus was quite an experience, and it took a lot of my writing time from me. I hope that I never, ever make you wait that long again! But I do thank you for sticking with me. The new one will be on schedule! Thank you so much for reading and reviewing.

10/10

Prof M McGonagall

Well, Lariope.  First off, welcome back.  I'm so glad you updated; I've been trying to be patient knowing that you would have a lot of catching up to do after Portus.Once more, a lovely chapter.  I could totally understand Severus feelings of... what?  Even he doesn't know.  He feels as though he's done nothing because he couldn't make his ultimate heroic sacrifice.  His whole world has changed and he doesn't know what to do with it because he can still see some tough times ahead.And then Hermione... to realize that underneath it all Severus expected and almost welcomed death just added to her previous guilt about not saving the potion for Harry, not living up to Severus's trust in her.I loved Arthur, of course.  He was a much needed character in this scene because we needed someone to bring all of us back to actual reality instead of the world of Severus and Hermione's emotions, and he did it with such understanding and wisdom.I thought Harry and Ron were great too, Harry especially.  After seeing Snape's memories in the Pensieve, he seems totally accepting of the situation between Severus and Hermione.  Severus's love was something he could not deny after seeing that, and Hermione's love for that unknown person had been clear to him since before Ron's return.There were so many things to love about this chapter!  I'm eagerly looking forward to the next.  Happy writing!

Response from Lariope (Author of Second Life)

Hi! Thank you for the welcome home. I missed you guys while I was gone as much as I now miss my new Portus friends. Generally, just a whole lot of missing going on. And thank you for waiting so patiently. I hope that I never, ever go that long again. It almost hurt. I'm so glad that you liked Mr Weasley. He is such a rock, so honest and solid. I love him very much. And I'm very glad that you were able to accept a Harry who doesn't freak out, who maybe doesn't understand everything, but trusts Hermione (and Snape's memories) enough to believe. More very soon! Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!

Response from Lariope (Author of Second Life)

Hi! Thank you for the welcome home. I missed you guys while I was gone as much as I now miss my new Portus friends. Generally, just a whole lot of missing going on. And thank you for waiting so patiently. I hope that I never, ever go that long again. It almost hurt. I'm so glad that you liked Mr Weasley. He is such a rock, so honest and solid. I love him very much. And I'm very glad that you were able to accept a Harry who doesn't freak out, who maybe doesn't understand everything, but trusts Hermione (and Snape's memories) enough to believe. More very soon! Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!

10/10

Hypnobarb

God bless Arthur Weasley for being kind and understanding when so many other people won't.  Dare we hope that Severus and Hermione will reach an immediate understanding that together is the best of all places to be when facing whatever comes next?Nah.  He's too stubborn and determined to punish himself.  Hermione's too stubborn and determined to save him.  However they react, I'm betting you're going to do it really well!Any hope that you're coming to Terminus?

Response from Lariope (Author of Second Life)

God Bless Arthur Weasley, indeed. I want a bumper sticker that says that. Oh, you have no idea how much I wish I were going to Terminus! Portus was amazing, and I have massive con-letdown! I hope you have a wonderful time! And bring back pictures!Thank you for your faith in Severus and Hermione. I'm not saying anything about what will happen, but I hope you will find it honest.xoxox

Response from Lariope (Author of Second Life)

God Bless Arthur Weasley, indeed. I want a bumper sticker that says that. Oh, you have no idea how much I wish I were going to Terminus! Portus was amazing, and I have massive con-letdown! I hope you have a wonderful time! And bring back pictures!Thank you for your faith in Severus and Hermione. I'm not saying anything about what will happen, but I hope you will find it honest.xoxox

10/10

blue artemis

How tragic.  I want to bring Albus back to kill him again. 

Response from Lariope (Author of Second Life)

God, me too. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!

Response from Lariope (Author of Second Life)

God, me too. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!

10/10

sinbad

Touching chapter, good command of the emotions of the people.

Response from Lariope (Author of Second Life)

Thank you! I really appreciate that.

Response from Lariope (Author of Second Life)

Thank you! I really appreciate that.

10/10

LioSaoirse

Ahhhh yay!!! Its here go mione!!! Glad u had fun at portus...w/o moi haha jk!! More more more!! Lio

Response from Lariope (Author of Second Life)

Yay! It's so good to be home and posting again. I'm glad you liked it. :) More soon!

Response from Lariope (Author of Second Life)

Yay! It's so good to be home and posting again. I'm glad you liked it. :) More soon!

10/10

Lady K

Oh I'm so glad you're back! That was a fantastic chapter. And I agree with Hermione. How dare anyone consider Severus Snape tame! :)

Response from Lariope (Author of Second Life)

Thank you! I'm glad to be back too. The weirdest part of Portus was spending all this time with people I only know from online... and missing the community at the same time!I'm really glad you liked the chapter, and I'm sorry for the wait. And Severus? Tame? Never. ;)

Response from Lariope (Author of Second Life)

Thank you! I'm glad to be back too. The weirdest part of Portus was spending all this time with people I only know from online... and missing the community at the same time!I'm really glad you liked the chapter, and I'm sorry for the wait. And Severus? Tame? Never. ;)

10/10

Gardengirl

Wow, very intense, almost heartbreaking. Please sort it all out soon?

Response from Lariope (Author of Second Life)

Soon is relative, I guess, but given that we're through 41 chapters, and there are probably only 8 or 9 left, I guess it will be soon :)I'm sorry for the heartbreak. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!

Response from Lariope (Author of Second Life)

Soon is relative, I guess, but given that we're through 41 chapters, and there are probably only 8 or 9 left, I guess it will be soon :)I'm sorry for the heartbreak. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!

10/10

Darque Hart

Gads, I feel like I've been dragged through the wringer, reading this!I doubt things will get much better in the next chapter or three ... but at least for now, they are together. I almost said safe, but one can never be sure!

Response from Lariope (Author of Second Life)

I know; it's been very intense lately. I'm afraid that won't let up for a bit. But I'm really glad you're still with me,

Response from Lariope (Author of Second Life)

! Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. xoxox

Response from Lariope (Author of Second Life)

I know; it's been very intense lately. I'm afraid that won't let up for a bit. But I'm really glad you're still with me,

Response from Lariope (Author of Second Life)

! Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. xoxox

0/10

lyn_f

This was amazing!!!  The emotions poured into this chapter, embracing everyone, but especially Snape and Hermione ... I love how you made Harry and Arthur very understanding, and that Hermione whilst speaking with Arthur finally put two and two together and realised that Snape was at Spinner's End, and that it was her turn to go to him.So wonderfully written ... on one hand, I am looking forward to seeing Snape exonerated, and he and Hermione finally able to enjoy their marriage and one another ... but on the other hand, I am dreading the end because this means no more updates on this most wonderful story.  Major kudos to you, Lariope.

Response from Lariope (Author of Second Life)

Thank you so much, lyn f. I'm incredibly touched by your review. It's funny how other people's words can sometimes clarify a particular emotion for me in my own writing. "It was her turn to go to him." That's really beautiful. Thank you for that. It will stay at the top of my mind as I write. I hope that you will like the next chapters. At one a week, we've still got at least 8 weeks to go! Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. xoxo

Response from Lariope (Author of Second Life)

Thank you so much, lyn f. I'm incredibly touched by your review. It's funny how other people's words can sometimes clarify a particular emotion for me in my own writing. "It was her turn to go to him." That's really beautiful. Thank you for that. It will stay at the top of my mind as I write. I hope that you will like the next chapters. At one a week, we've still got at least 8 weeks to go! Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. xoxo

10/10

veronica28

An absolutely beautiful chapter.  So thrilled to see an update, and it was more than worth the wait.  Your Arthur was perfectly written.  I continue to be astonished by this story.  Thank you for sharing it.

Response from Lariope (Author of Second Life)

Thank you so much, and I apologize for the wait. That was too long for everyone, me included!! I felt like the story was going to come busting out of my skin!I'm so glad that you liked Arthur Weasley. He is an amazing character--he sees right through to the truth of things. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!

Response from Lariope (Author of Second Life)

Thank you so much, and I apologize for the wait. That was too long for everyone, me included!! I felt like the story was going to come busting out of my skin!I'm so glad that you liked Arthur Weasley. He is an amazing character--he sees right through to the truth of things. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!

0/10

rachow

Wonderful chapter.  Are we going to see the outcome of the trial or whatever path Severus chooses to take?  You could have ended the story, I think, but there's much more to be told.

Response from Lariope (Author of Second Life)

No, we'll see the trial and the outcome and everything. It won't be huge--not a twenty chapter section, like the other two were, but at least 8 more, I think. I'm glad that you're willing to keep going!Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!

Response from Lariope (Author of Second Life)

No, we'll see the trial and the outcome and everything. It won't be huge--not a twenty chapter section, like the other two were, but at least 8 more, I think. I'm glad that you're willing to keep going!Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!

10/10

helshez

Man, I had to stop reading for a moment there, tears were totally clouding my vision and making a hell of a mess on my keyboard. I wanted to hug Arthur, he's such a decent bloke. God bless him! And poor Sev. Any chance of an update before I go on my jols at the weekend? *pleads*

Response from Lariope (Author of Second Life)

I wish I could get you one before the weekend,

Response from Lariope (Author of Second Life)

, I really do, but I think the chances are slim to none. Stupid job! Why can't fandom be my job???I'm sorry for the tears, but so glad you were feeling the characters emotions. ANd I'm so happy that you liked Arthur. I have such faith in him as a character. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!

Response from Lariope (Author of Second Life)

I wish I could get you one before the weekend,

Response from Lariope (Author of Second Life)

, I really do, but I think the chances are slim to none. Stupid job! Why can't fandom be my job???I'm sorry for the tears, but so glad you were feeling the characters emotions. ANd I'm so happy that you liked Arthur. I have such faith in him as a character. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!

0/10

sunny33

Lovely, poignant chapter, with some hope in Arthur, Harry, and Ron's support. He knows he needs her on one level, and tries to push her away on another, hopefully the husband will outweigh the martyr.

Response from Lariope (Author of Second Life)

Thank you, Sunny33. That's a fine way of putting it, and an excellent reading of Snape's character as I see him. They'll need all the support they can get, I fear. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!

Response from Lariope (Author of Second Life)

Thank you, Sunny33. That's a fine way of putting it, and an excellent reading of Snape's character as I see him. They'll need all the support they can get, I fear. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!

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