happy that the girls had their happy ending...epecially luna & hermione... what happen to draco's life (do u find happiness too?

a hard decision for hermione to make.. to have a different life... maybe it for best, since she so unhappy with ron..what about her children?

what is wrong with luna? interesting flashblack- that hermione help heal severus and he was in hiding..

i feel for for luna and hermione! they both in unwanted marriage.. the blackmail that kinglsey and arthur are under, sad that lucius still the power of money and power!!

I am ashamed to admit that this is the first time I've ever read this story. I don't know why; perhaps I thought I had read it before, but no - I would have remembered this fantastic fic if I'd read it before. Nevermind - it was an incredible treat to read it now. It was perfect. Beautiful, poignant, heartstoppingly perfect. You are such an amazing writer.

That was one of the loveliest things I've read. I enjoy how descriptive your writing is, and how believable the characters are.

yippie!I'm so glad I found this story again, and it's finished, too.What a fabulous read!Loved the premise. Brewing scenes - so funny! Ron's "Mr. Porky" got stuck in my head. Aaarrgh! Oblivate me now! Snape was bril - loved his tea tirades. And the romance was very sweet. Agreeing with Herm on "crowd control" comment.Poor Luna! Better luck the second time around, I hope.Sorry for choppiness, supposed to be out the door 10 min ago.Love and choc biscuits, dark.M.

aww I loved it. At first I was worried about hermione abandoning her kids but I'm glad that it worked out for the better. I'm also really impressed how you set everything up so nicely. All the little details in the beginning chapters that paid off in the end (the wind in the room, Hermione's comfort with calling Snape Severus, etc.) well done.

I really enjoyed this story.  Well deserved nomination for SSHG Awards.  Congratulations!

Loved it!!!

I am so glad I found this story here! Complete!

Touching in all the right places, if slightly disheartening (in the first reality, when Hermione married Ron and completely destroyed her own chances of happiness). An excellent read, lovely characterisation, and beautiful dialogue/time sequence.

Fantastic!  I love it :D  I love that she had to live those 19 years, and that they had to each fulfill their dreams -- and then refind each other (or rather, he to find her).  I really enjoyed the parallel sections that you wrote, this time with a different slant and different outcome.  So well done!  Thank you!

This is a fascinating premise -- I've always been fascinated by the idea of parallel universes.  I especially appreciate the idea that it would be Hermione's sacrifice, not having those children, that would be significant... that the children would be born to others, and hopefully be in a more loving home. 

This is such an earthy, visceral chapter.  It's wonderful!  You've given such vivid pictures of not only the concrete details, but the sensations, the emotions, and the impact of all that has gone on... Now, onward -- what goes awry?  How will they fix it... *runs to read more

Oh wow,  that was brilliant! Beautiful! I need a Kleenex now. :-)

Nice progression here... they are eyeing each other... :)

This is well woven -- nicely paced and filled with details that I imagine will be relevant to us later in the story.  What power there is in his gaze... *shivers...

A very charming story

OMG.... *sob... this is wonderful!  Oh, the pain of her life now, the *wrongness* -- and now... what did she do?  What did he do?  What will they do?  Ack!

Oh, dear.  What a bleak picture this is.  Ouch... I'm eager to see how they can extricate themselves from this one...

Thank you so much for your story!  I can't believe I became so emotionally invested in eight chapters.  My heart broke for Hermione!  So relieved it was a happy ending, as well!

Outstanding start.  (Yes, I'm way behind on my reading...but yay for me, I get to read this complete! :D).  I really like how you're characterizing these three and that it's not Hermione taking the lead, here. 

Simply wonderful tale, couldn't stop reading once I started!

Very fun, flawless, and entertaining read. The small details with the time travel fit nicely. I found myself constantly bursting out laughing.

I do believe this is the first DH canon story I have read. I had sadly avoided them for fear of depression, but I loved the way this was done.