Beautiful ending. You wrapped up all the possible arcs in a pleasant bow. Well done!

Wow.  I started reading this with a bit of skepticism (some of the stories for this prompt were, in my opinion, rather ridiculous), but you wove in and out of both canon and the prompt so deftly, not to mention creating a story that was intense, satisfying and intriguing.  Beautifully done. *bows to you*

Oh, wow, and so they find their happy ending.Lovely twist on the prompt.  I enjoyed it so much!

What a great story. That was a fantastic ending. I taught hermionie might not do it but i'm glad she did.

Awesome story! This was the perfect ending! Perfect!

Very lovely story! I liked it very much. Thanks for writing it and sharing.

I'm so glad the story ended that way (I'm addicted to happy endings).My romantic heart is finally satisfied : both Ron and Hermione can be themselves, and that's why they can stay friends. it was a great story and the last chapter finally answered all our questions.

That was a fantastic story! I loved it!!! Yay Severus and Mione!!!

Wow.  A splendid chapter - a real tearjerker; a moral dilemma; some amazing time-turner reasonong.  I love this.

Just got around to reading this story - what a wonderful tale! I felt so bad for Hermione (and even worse for Luna). Can't wait to see what she'll make of the second chance; this was quite a cliffie.

As soon as Severus offered Hermione that chance, I thought about Luna, and how it would help her, too.  Free her from a sad marraige.  And I beleive the same thing about souls, that they will be born into one family or another.  This is turning out so interesting!  How incredibly clever of you to have made it both canon compliant (including epilogue) and 'Snape-lives.'This is so neat!  I almost stopped reading when it got so dark, with Hermione and Luna both unhappy, but I am so glad I gave it the chance.  Thank you for this excellent story!

a second chance to get it right, wouldn't a lot of people like that!

I can understand how hard this choice would be for Hermione. I think that poor Luna's death would really send her over the edge on deciding. Now let's see if she does manage to change things and how her life turns out from there.

This one looks like it's going to be a lot of fun. Thanks for sharing.

Poor Hermione. I can see Snape having so many difficulties with social niceties and how he would drive her to drink. And I love the flying part. Very nice touch.

Nicely done. I really like that he does ask her why and she doesn't really have a good answer. Got to love Hermione and her Gryffindor sensibilities. :D

Oooh, what a wonderful twist, Snape not only returned from the supposed dead, but that Hermione was the one to help him. Now the guilt is going to switch places. Though I am very intrigued about his question about whether she would want the time back or not. Enquiring minds want to know and are moving on to the next chapter as fast the mouse clicks will allow. LOL

Oh, poor Hermione. Stuck by a simple mistake with an old book. And I love how Lucius is still pulling strings, getting his way. I really do feel sorry for Hermione. Ginny had it right, she and Ron aren't meant for each other and want different things out of life and this just really shows that.

Oh, very steamy. I can see why he modified her memories now. And very well done. It felt very real about it getting there. I also love how he still can't be completely nice, that his nice involves insults and other barbs. :D

Very nice how you start at the end of the chapter and then go back to the beginning and bring us back around to the explosion. And I love the reaction of the guys. LOL

I am so glad Hermione gets a chance to go back and that she makes that decision, that leap of faith, for her children, Luna, even Ron in a side-wise sort of way in short out of love for others as well as herself.  Very scary.  I don't know if I could have done it (better the devil you know and all that), but love is after all a choice.  Amor vincit omnia et nos cedamus amori (Love conquers all therefore let us yield to love ), Virgil. 

So she'd going back... I wonder if she'll marry Ron all over again or if she really will wait for Sev - or at least be with him in the end. I also wonder (if she changes her future) what mark she will make on the world. I would imagine, as I guess many do since fanfic is filled with this, that Hermione would have quite an impact on the wizarding world due to her high intellegence. Looking forward to seeing what becomes of our Gryffindor in her new future.

oh boy!  this is getting better and better.  i await the next installment with bated breath.  thanks so much

well, i certainly did not see that coming, but i like it.  i liked how you explained about time and space and souls and birth and all of that sort of metaphysical stuff.  i'm glad she is going back, for many reasons, not least of which is to make things right for luna, too.  this was a very moving chapter, and i'm really looking forward to seeing what hermione makes/made of her life in the next.

ok cool she is going back but will they end up together i hope so