yeah lemons and ones between serveus and hermione thankignyou for sparing me ones between ron and her this is quite the little storry i am really enjoying it

Oh thankgoodness you are back! This story has haunted me. I think you did an incredible job explaining non linear time and what will happen to Hermione's children's souls. That little bit with Hugo was a perfect note. I hope when Hermione goes back in time she can save Luna, launch her career and somehow be available for Severus in 19 years. That seems like such a big risk. I am on pins and needles for the next chapter! I think I know who you are!!

o goody they could have kissed and she has to go and get sick lol well at least his refexes are getting better

"Severus in a pair of jeans and a Black Sabbath T-shirt"Well that is a beautiful mental picture I wont be letting go of any time soon. He was a teenager in the 70s. I thought the sex was surprisingly realistic. I hope the morning after isnt too awkward.

What a brilliant twist! Gah, I just love the thought of her being able to set things right, and the transmigration of souls you included. I really look forward to the next chapter!

I love this story. Hermione made the right decision in my opinion because there is Luna's life at stakes; I'm sure her death has something to di with her Husband or her father-in-law.Update soon please, I really want to know what happens next.

yeah not only is he alive she helped him wtg hermione yippie likeing this story

Wicked cliffhanger!  I'm quite curious to see if Hermione succeeds, and if she waits for Severus the second time around (assuming she does it).

Argh!!! This is a great story! I can't wait to see what happens next!

I can't believe I was holding my breathe the whole time.  lol.  That was hot and intense.  WOW

Wow. What a hard choice for her to make! I'm really enjoying this fic - your ideas are incredibly creative and your writing has been really solid. I'm looking forward to what happens next!

yeah serveus is back maybe a happily ever after for hermione after all yeah

lmao this is comical draco gay and ron wanting lav lav i do feel bad for hermione she should be sble to at least become a lawyer it is all she wants doesnt she deserve a little happiness in the arrangment

Extremely interesting. I fear what you have planned for Hermione's second attempt at life. I love this anticipation, whatever it is. This story is a rare treat.

Well - this is not what I expected.  I was sure that Severus would figure out a way to break the enchantment.  I feel a little torn about Hermione leaving her kids - I think it was wise to include Luna's death.  All in all - a good chapter!

ok cute beginning you got me i am going to read on now thanks

That was an awesome chapter!

Well, at least this way Hermione has a chance to relive her life Ron free. I can only hope that this time she finds some sort of true happiness.PS: What an evil cliffie!!

OK, I've read this chapter so many times, had it been in a book, the pages would have fallen out.  (I even type in an unknown tongue just thinking about it!) Please update and let Snape come to the rescue (all in due time, of course)  (Yeh, right!)  ^_^

Very good, Had a hard time reading Ch 2 but the rest has been quite enjoyable. Looking forward to more of the story. Especially Severus figuring a way to get her out of her marriage with Ron. I'm not sure a mother would chose for a time travel that would make ehr kids vanish...Am curious as to how you will accomplish that.

Jeannie

I just found this story - I've read the first three chaptersstraight through, and have to stop and congratulate youon your excellent writing.  I'm looking forward to Hermione recovering her memories, but how on earth canshe escape the fact that she's a mother of eight?  It'sheartbreaking (and I thought JKR's Epilogue was bad).I also feel sad for poor Luna, one of my favouritecharacters - I hope you can write a happier ending forher.

I love that you included the little mishaps that happen then first time between a couple- it isn't like a romance novel where everything is just perfect. Well done!

Wow.  Amazing.

Okay I just read the whole thing in one shot and I must say I love it!!!  Well except for the part of her being stuck with one Ronald Weasley and his need for seven children.  Plight or no plight I'd have told him to shove it in Lavender and I'm only have two.

oh lordy...this yumminess is going to make returning to the present even harder!  lovely lemony goodness.  thanks so much!