So much for the poor girl to process. It's no wonder she's out of control.

Yes, it's me again. The one who refused to read this fic before because it's WIP, but once did couldn't stay away from it because she somehow managed to get addicted to it. And yes, I'm only at this chapter. Get to loose myself in another 22 chapters before waiting for an update... yippee!

God, I really really love your style. Seriously, I do. How you string every word into sentences, the words you choose, the smoothness of the plot. Everything is simply very well-written! You don't have to use bombastic words with long winded sentences to bring out your point. And yet, you manage to convey the depth of emotion and complexity of both Severus and Hermione. There is no one single boring moment. And you wrote Severus magnificently. I like the fact that he cared for her but still remain his snarky and surly side. And he'd soon hug Harry Potter than admit that he cared for her - verbally. I suspect she knew but perhaps couldn't bring herself to hope that he does. And Hermione was being right down bookish! It fits her exactly as how she was in canon.

And this chapter is simply wonderful. I'm edging to read more! I simply love Severus reaction when he worried for her, his sense of protectiveness over his wife (only Severus can say the word 'wife' and remain sexy).

If any non SS/HG fans asked me for fic to convince them of the possibility of this ship, I'd recommend yours.

Good job!

Excellent chapter, although the title did remind me of a clip I saw on potterpuppetpals.com. If you haven't seen it, I recommend you check it out at some point. It'll make you chuckle.

Hmm, most thought provoking.

Sh1t! Don't mess with Hermione! Where did that little display come from? So many questions raised in this chapter. Great stuff!

I need more hankies for this one. Damn, you can play the heart strings like a virtuoso!

*sniffle* Gosh, that is sooo romantic! In a twisted kind of way of course.

Aw! He's so sweet when he's being a knight in shining armour. Well, maybe not shining armour, but you get the idea.

Excellent. I'm really enjoying this fic. It's full of angst and suffering and plot thread woven into a rich tapestry of pain and self loathing and confusion. It's brilliant! Thanks!

Great stuff. The twisted little dance the slightly-less than-happy couple are performing is brilliant.

Sev is such a fallen angel. His internal conflict is really moving. And Hermione is so stoic and such a trooper. I love all this suffering. Keep it up!

Segregation is always a bad idea. But what about Doctor Sev? Bedside manner needs polish, but he could tend my wounds anyday!

Oh yeah, blubbin' like a baby!

Harsh! I think I'm gonna cry!

Fantastic and poignant as always!

Oh wow, that was good....  but need more!

Tangled webs indeed. I'd love to read on, but it's very late. I'll be back!

Layers of sub-plot going on in this fic! Love it!

Can't wait for Saturday! ;)

lol! Didn't see that coming! Aristocracy! Nice interactions too.

great update!  i enjoy the way you make hermione young but not too young and i think severus is spot on.  thanks so much

Excellent! Glad to see  Hermione growing up. I wish my lunch was a bit longer so I could read on, but sadly, the idiots are massing downstairs and I must lay down the law with them. I'll be back.

*chuckle* Poor Hermione, and poor Sev. Do either of them have a clue where they are headed? Or what they're doing?

You write characters with such insight and depth, it's amazing!  How do you do it?

Pendragon Parkinson is a vile and nasty man! I cant imagine a father offering his 13 year old daughter, just because Severus has a young bride. She is 18, not exactly a child anymore.

I hope he has not alienated her completely.