Enraptured
sshg316142 Reviews | 6.45/10 (142 Ratings, 0 Likes, 230 Favorites )
Having just announced her engagement to Ron Weasley, Hermione Granger is shocked when her friend, Luna Lovegood, gives a prophecy foretelling that she will fall madly in love with her soul mate - and it isn't Ron! One man knows for certain of whom the prophecy speaks, but he isn't telling. Who could it be, and will Hermione choose the right man? Winner for Best Fluff in Round Two of the Moste Potente Passions SS/HG Awards.
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Just an avid reader who somehow stumbled into HP fanfiction. I read and sometimes, I write.
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I loved the epilogue. I'm always for a Snape/Granger ending. And I liked the way you resolved the question of whether or not it was a prophecy. It was a prophecy and Luna was clever enough to repeat it. A Ravenclaw with Slytherin tendancies. I wonder if someone should warn Draco? I'll definitely be on the lookout for your Luna-Draco story.
Response from sshg316 (Author of Enraptured)
Thank you so much! I'm thrilled that you enjoyed the epilogue. Someone probably should warn Draco - but I think that would take the fun out of it for the rest of us. :)
Thanks, again!
Tenderly, he cupped her face in his hand and whispered, “I love you, Hermione.” He placed soft kisses on her cheeks – “I love you” – her forehead – “I love you” – her nose – “I love you.”
That is so from the movie Pride and prejudice isnt it! were mr Darcy kisses Lizzie and repeats "mrs Darcy"everytime!!!
And if it isnt, well you copied it nonetheless (A good thing too, as thats my favourite part!)
I LOVE THIS STORY THIS MUCH
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Cheers
-KarlaMarie
Response from sshg316 (Author of Enraptured)
Yes, a bit of a nod to one of my favorite movies. You caught me. :) I'm so glad you enjoyed the story! Thank you!!
I love that little twist! Hooray Luna! I am so glad that it was Luna-ishness that was going on all along. Wonderful! I totally enjoyed the story. Thank you so much for a delightful read. I am sorry to see it end.
Response from sshg316 (Author of Enraptured)
Thank you so much for all the lovely reviews - they are truly appreciated! I'm thrilled that you enjoyed the epilogue; it was the basis for the entire story. Once I knew that the prophecy was real - as well as a ploy by Luna - the rest fell into place. A bit of romantic fluff, yes, but with a bit of an unexpected plot. :) I'm so glad you liked it!
Thanks, again!
I tip my hat to one of the most consistently underrated Ravenclaws. Well done, Luna.
Response from sshg316 (Author of Enraptured)
She certainly does not receive the credit she is due. :) Thanks so much for the review!
Wonderful story, and I'm a bit sorry to see it end. Shall I send you a rabid plot bunny? I'd like to see more of your work.
Response from sshg316 (Author of Enraptured)
What a wonderful compliment. Thanks! And thank you so much for all the lovely reviews! They are much appreciated. :)
Ah, yes. Rabid plot bunnies. Pesky little things, aren't they? I'm currently writing Draco and Luna's story, but then have plans to return to SSHG to write a DH compliant fic. I'm really excited about that one as it will be completely different from anything else I've ever written. :)
Response from sinbad (Reviewer)
Good luck in your future endevors, I look forward to more of your work. With that I'm off for bed.
Oh, that was fun! I love happy endings and I love what you did with Luna and the prophecy. Thanks for your work!
Response from sshg316 (Author of Enraptured)
Thank you so much! I'm a sucker for happy endings. :) I'm so glad you liked the twist with Luna. I really enjoyed writing her character. Thanks, again!
Anonymous
Oooh, I'm totally looking forward to Heart and Soul!
Author's Response: I'm so glad! I've been working on it, and it's coming along. :) Thanks so much, and I'm glad you enjoyed the story!
AHA! I <i>thought</i> Luna being a seer was fishy, very fishy...you very cleverly worded the 'prophecy' so that it could be misinterpreted. I really enjoyed reading this, ssgh316. You did a lovely job with all aspects of this story!
Response from sshg316 (Author of Enraptured)
*grins* I'm so glad you enjoyed the story. This was my first multi-chaptered fic, and I was quite nervous about it. Thank you so much for all the lovely reviews - they were much appreciated! :)
Oh! Bless... *throws HUGE celebration party just for Luna*
What an awesome twist... though I'm not sure if I'd want to know my <i>own</i> future, like Luna does. Though finding out how something comes to pass, I guess would be an interesting and frustrating ride. Hmmm...
Thank you for the fast updates!
Response from sshg316 (Author of Enraptured)
Thank you! I'm so glad you enjoyed the twist! Yes, I agree, I wouldn't want to know my own future. However, Luna handles it just the way you would expect her to ... serenely. :)
Thanks for all the lovely reviews - they were much appreciated!
I'm glad Hermione threw a fit, and Severus made everyone look like idiots. Sometimes people need to be brought down a peg or two.
Response from sshg316 (Author of Enraptured)
You're absolutely right. :) I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter! Only the epilogue to go!
Thank you!
Heh... I knew the tears would come. I understand and I probably would have given him the 3rd degree because of everything. Lord, how love makes fools of us all! LOL
Response from sshg316 (Author of Enraptured)
Doesn't it just? :) I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter. The epilogue should post by Friday. Thank you so much!
I lay the blame for my silly grin completly on you! LOL! Great chapter. :D
Response from sshg316 (Author of Enraptured)
If it is any consolation, I now have a silly grin on my face, too. :)
Thank you! I'm so glad you enjoyed the chapter! The epilogue should post by Friday, if not sooner!. :)
I a so glad that things finally came to a head. It was rather convenient that Charlie was gay. It made things a whole lot easier for our favorite couple. I loved that last scene. Even when being romantic, Snape still maintains his snark factor. Great chapter.
Response from sshg316 (Author of Enraptured)
Thank you! Charlie being gay was the idea of one of my beta readers who felt all the loose ends needed to be tied up, and it certainly did help matters in the end. :) The last scene is one I worried over, as I wanted Severus to be romantic with Hermione, but still snarky with everyone else. I'm relieved you think I was able to accomplish that. Only the epilogue to go.
Yes, Awwwww, how sweet! But in a good way. I have no problem with a 'sweet' Severus. After all, he's been through enough at the pen of his creator. He deserves a break.
Response from sshg316 (Author of Enraptured)
Doesn't he, though? I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter! Thank you!
Damn, over so soon. I look forward to the epilogue, my dear. Oh, Charlie is gay. Excellent little twist there. :)*hugs*
Response from sshg316 (Author of Enraptured)
Thank you, dearest! I'm glad you enjoyed it. The epilogue will up Friday, if not sooner. I hope you like it! *hugs*
Anonymous
You stay,” he murmured quietly. “I will not be left here alone in a room full of Gryffindors and one crazy Ravenclaw.”
I LOVE THIS PART!
Author's Response: Thank you! I had so much fun writing the interactions between Severus and Draco in this story. Slytherins are just so much fun to write. :) I'm glad you enjoyed it!
OMG!!! You're really sneaky you are... I thought for a moment that all was lost for the two of them!!!! *smiles* but you brought it back, thank gods!
I look forward to reading the epilogue!
Response from sshg316 (Author of Enraptured)
*bows* Thank you, thank you! *grins* I did consider writing an entire chapter of angst, but it just didn't fit in with the fluffy romantic feel I had somehow created. So, I'm thrilled you enjoyed this chapter ... and I can't wait to hear what you think of the epilogue! :)
*Purrrrr* So sweet and wonderful! I'm really going to hate to see this one end! I'm definitely adding you to my favorite authors so that I can get updated when you write something else! Fantastic as always!
Response from sshg316 (Author of Enraptured)
Aw! What a lovely compliment. Thank you! 
I'm so glad you enjoyed this chapter! Only the epilogue to go! I'll upload it on Friday morning, if not sooner. Thanks, again!
Ohh, I love it!!!!!!
Response from sshg316 (Author of Enraptured)
Thank you! I'm so glad you enjoyed it! :)
OMG!!! *fans self* Wonderfully written, well done!!!
You have to update again soon... I mean, talk about having someone holding their breath... here I sit, blue face, waiting... *grin* I look forward to the next chapter!
Response from sshg316 (Author of Enraptured)
Thank you very much! I'm so glad (and relieved) you enjoyed this chapter - I've never written anything like it before, so I was somewhat nervous about it.
Oh, dear! No blue faces - you have to breathe! No worries, I'll be posting again on Wendesday morning. :)
Thanks, again!
I want someone to kiss me like that... *sigh* mind if I send you my next significant other? I think reading this chapter will have to be a prerequisite for my next relationship.As always I love the delicacy with which you write all your chapters, it makes for enjoyable reading. You are one of the few people I've read to not cause me to halt halfway through and think, "well that could have been handled more tastefully."
Response from sshg316 (Author of Enraptured)
Aw, you have me blushing and grinning! How lovely! I could just hug you - if I could via the internet, anyway. :) THANK YOU!!
"A cock of the head.""A twitch of the lips.""A smug smile.""A feral grin."Ah, you make me so happy.
Response from sshg316 (Author of Enraptured)
*Grins* YAY! I'm so glad you liked that part - I had so much fun writing it. Only Severus Snape could carry on an entire conversation solely via facial expressions. *happy sigh*
THANK YOU! :)
That was a beautiful chapter. The writing was impeccable. I particularly enjoyed the scene were Anape disabuses Hermione's idea of snogging. I am excited for the next chapter.
Response from sshg316 (Author of Enraptured)
Thank you so much! This was such a difficult chapter for me as it was different from everything else I'd ever written. I'm so pleased (and relieved) that you enjoyed it! Next chapter will be up on Wednesday! Thanks, again. :)
And then there's the issue of the steps! You wrote these bits only a few lines apart from each other:
' ...and the old worn steps had been replaced with new ones. They walked up the stone steps, ...'
Did Harry replace the steps outside with stone, or did he replace the multi-floored levels of steps inside ... or the ones down to the kitchen? Would replacement steps disappear with the rest of the house? These are very important elements, you know...Just being a bother;)
Response from sshg316 (Author of Enraptured)
You would notice that. LOL Yes, I mean the steps outside. :) You may be a bother - but you're a really lovely bother. *hugs* Hope you liked the rest of the chapter. ;)