Enraptured
sshg316142 Reviews | 6.45/10 (142 Ratings, 0 Likes, 230 Favorites )
Having just announced her engagement to Ron Weasley, Hermione Granger is shocked when her friend, Luna Lovegood, gives a prophecy foretelling that she will fall madly in love with her soul mate - and it isn't Ron! One man knows for certain of whom the prophecy speaks, but he isn't telling. Who could it be, and will Hermione choose the right man? Winner for Best Fluff in Round Two of the Moste Potente Passions SS/HG Awards.
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Hmm... I have the impression that Severus knows more about this prophecy. Waiting anxiously for the next chapter.
Response from sshg316 (Author of Enraptured)
Hmm ... you may be right. :) I'm so glad you're enjoying it! The next chapter is in the queue, and should be up in a few days.
Thank you!
Cool idea here, and different. I love what I read so far and I imagine Severus is off licking his wounds......
Response from sshg316 (Author of Enraptured)
Thank you! I'm glad you're enjoying it. We'll see what Severus is thinking in the next chapter! :)
So just how long has Severus been in love with Hermione? And does he know it yet? Very nice chapter. I look forward to the next piece of the puzzle. Thanks, JoAnne
Response from sshg316 (Author of Enraptured)
Very perceptive! Those questions are answered in the next chapter. :) I'm glad you're enjoying the story thus far! Thank you!
hehe *rubs hands* heating up niceley, my dear. Can't wait for more :) What, indeed, does Severus think about it all?Loving it!
Response from sshg316 (Author of Enraptured)
Thank you! If you think things are heating up now ... LOL
More to come very soon! I'm so glad you're enjoying it. :)
*gasp* Why didn't you tell me you were writing something longer. And you really must give me a poke when you update as I'm just dying to know what happens next. Love it. And I just love your Luna. She's so hard to do well, and you hit the nail on the head, my dear.
Response from sshg316 (Author of Enraptured)
I'm so glad to see you found this, despite my negligence! This is my sshg exchange piece ... it's complete and will post as fast as I can get through the queue. I'll be sure to poke you when it updates. :)
Thank you so much, dearest! I had never written Luna before, but grew to adore her. I'm thrilled that you thought I did her justice. 
Good start! I'm looking forward to reading more.
Response from sshg316 (Author of Enraptured)
Thank you! The next chapter is in the queue and should be up soon. :)
Well geez! You had to go and leave it there. I'm suprised that you're using your evil cliffie quota so early on in the fic. Great start! I really like what you have so far. I adore your Luna and am excited to see what she will predict.
Response from sshg316 (Author of Enraptured)
It was evil of me, wasn't it? 
I had to hook you in, though. See? Now you'll read the next chapter ... right? 
Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed Luna. I had never written her character before, and I grew to love her. The next chapter is in the queue! :)Thanks, again!
I adore the stories that have all the Order together after the war is over. I love the notion that they will continue to come together to find solace and comfort. I like that you have made Hermione Severus' friend - on more of an equal plane with him.
BUT HOW CAN YOU HAVE HERMIONE ENGAGED TO RON????
Sorry, sorry - I know you're gonna fix it.
Response from sshg316 (Author of Enraptured)
Thank you, dearest!
I will fix everything, I promise. All will be well! 
What a great take on Luna -- actually coherent and intelligent! Thanks for that. Looking forward to the next nine chapterst. JoAnne
Response from sshg316 (Author of Enraptured)
Thank you so much! I had never written Luna before, and I grew to adore her character. I'm so glad you enjoyed her! Next chapter is in the queue. :)
Thanks, again!
Lovely story, thank you!
The story was fantastic! I enjoyed reading about a more human and not so twisted Snape. The characters personalities really meshed well. It was drama and comedy combined in the best ways . Hope you follow up with a story about Draco and Luna falling in love. Thanks again for the story! MM
*shrieks with joy*OMG! this is perfect! there was something nagging me about luna, and i didn't want to say anything in case i just read something wrong, but the lack of detail about the prophecy telling itself (especially when you have great description about everything else) seemed to mark a red flag for me... bravo!
Response from sshg316 (Author of Enraptured)
Hi! I am so glad that you enjoyed the story, and especially the twist at the end! Luna was a riot to write, so I'm thrilled that you liked her. Thanks so much for the lovely review!
Aww, this was such a delightful story! The Hermione/Severus romance was absolutely lovely and the twist at the end with Luna and her being behind it all was just brilliant! I love that she faked being a Seer, but that the prophecy was real and that Dumbledore knew it. Ha! Didn't see that coming at all!
Really wonderful job with this, I enjoyed it immensely! Thanks for writing!!
Relly lovely!!! I enjoyed it pretty much. Severus is so sweet in this fic, the way he deals with Hermione is just adoreble! Luna was really smart with her plain... Congratulations =]
I absolutelylove this story. I believe that Luna isn't incorporated into many fics, and that is extremely sad since she's such a universal character and people can on some plane relate to her at some point in their life, besides that fact the she's so hilarious. Anyways, you did a marvelous job with this plot and the characters, especially the grammer you used. Well, good luck with your writing and hope to read more of your works.
Response from sshg316 (Author of Enraptured)
Thank you so much for your lovely review! I'm so glad you enjoyed the story! Luna was so much fun to write -- I'm thrilled that you enjoyed her. In fact, I liked writing her so much, I decided to write a sequel to this story, titled Heart and Soul. It's the story of Luna and Draco. You can find the first two chapters here at TPP if you're interested.
Thanks, again! :)
Lovely, lovely fic! What an enjoyable read!
Response from sshg316 (Author of Enraptured)
Thank you so much! I'm thrilled that you enjoyed it! :D
sigh- sooooo romantic. This is what romance is!
Response from sshg316 (Author of Enraptured)
Oh, thanks so much,
Response from sshg316 (Author of Enraptured)
! What a lovely compliment! 
Awesome job!Can't wait to read Luna's story now...oohhhh Luna's mum was a Slytherin...Lol!Draco should appreciate that bit...lol
Response from sshg316 (Author of Enraptured)
Thank you! I am so glad you enjoyed it! I hope you like Luna and Draco's story. She is just too much fun to write! :)
Just wanted to say that I really loved this story. It was well written and I enjoyed how things ended up so well. Great job!
Very, very nice. Excellent story.Truly
Response from sshg316 (Author of Enraptured)
Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it! :)
I really enjoyed that, it was sweet. And the epilogue really cracked me up, I hadn't expected that:)
Response from sshg316 (Author of Enraptured)
Thank you! I'm so glad you enjoyed the twist at the end. Luna is just too much fun! :)
Oooh, I like the idea of Draco and Luna, they'll make a delightful couple.
The epilogue gave a nice finish to the story, it was nice to see the prophecy thing explained in a credible way.
I loved your story - it left me with a warm and fuzzy feeling.
Response from sshg316 (Author of Enraptured)
Thank you! Warm and fuzzy is exactly the feeling I wanted for this fic, so I'm thrilled that you found it to be so. :) I'm glad you enjoyed the story! Thanks, again!
Aww! That was so sweet! I loved this little peek into Luna's mind.
Response from sshg316 (Author of Enraptured)
Thank you! I'm so glad you enjoyed that bit. Luna was so much fun to write. :)
hehe I loved it!
Response from sshg316 (Author of Enraptured)
I'm so glad you enjoyed it! Thank you!
What fun. Not only the finishing touches on this delightful story but another one to look forward to as well. You show a deft hand at plotting and character revelations. I liked that Ron & Hermione came to the same conclusions about thier relationship and decided it was for the best. That shows there is hope for Ron after all. I love both your take on Luna and Charlie. Even in thier short appearences they seem to have full characters. I look for to many more stories. Thanks for posting, JoAnne
Response from sshg316 (Author of Enraptured)
Thank you so much for all the lovely reviews, especially this one. They are truly appreciated. This was my first multi-chaptered fic, and I was a bit nervous about it. I'm thrilled that you found the minor characters to be so engaging. I had never written Luna before, nor really considered her much prior to writing this story. I grew to love her, and she was so much fun to write that I can't help but want to give her a story of her own. :)
Thank you, again!