Enraptured
sshg316142 Reviews | 142 Ratings, 0 Likes, 230 Favorites )
Having just announced her engagement to Ron Weasley, Hermione Granger is shocked when her friend, Luna Lovegood, gives a prophecy foretelling that she will fall madly in love with her soul mate - and it isn't Ron! One man knows for certain of whom the prophecy speaks, but he isn't telling. Who could it be, and will Hermione choose the right man? Winner for Best Fluff in Round Two of the Moste Potente Passions SS/HG Awards.
Start ReadingChapters (10)
About sshg316
Author
sshg316
Member Since 2006 | 20 Stories | Favorited by 376 | 199 Reviews Written | 1,365 Review Responses
Just an avid reader who somehow stumbled into HP fanfiction. I read and sometimes, I write.
Reviews for Enraptured
What a sweet story! I love how you've used Luna and the prophecy to start HG and SS on the road to each other (the slow buildup is perfect) and I adore your Severus and the fact that he's opening up to her and love. I'm really looking forward to your updates!
Response from sshg316 (Author of Enraptured)
Thank you so much for your lovely review! After writing this story, I love Luna - she's just so much fun. I'm thrilled that you're enjoying the slow buildup, and saying that you adore my Severus is the best compliment! Thank you!
Severus is certainly taking his slow, sweet time. Let's see if he changes his approach when Charlie shows up to test the soul-mate waters.
Response from sshg316 (Author of Enraptured)
We shall certainly see. :)
Thank you so much for the review! I hope you enjoy the rest of the story!
I'm so glad that Severus is starting to open up to Hermione. I can't wait to see what will happen when they are no longer in the work/Order context. I, like Severus and Hermione, am quite looking forward to the trip to the museum.
Response from sshg316 (Author of Enraptured)
Thank you! He has definitely set his plan in motion, I think. The trip to the museum is perhaps my favorite chapter of the story. I do hope you enjoy it. *bites nails nervously* It is in the queue, so it should be up in a few days. :) Thanks, again!
Haha, humming while brewing! I love it. I am thoroughly enjoying your Snape here, most in charateresque I must say--though with some cute add-ons of course. When I read the interaction on the rain, I was definitely toying with the image of Snape leaping from lamposts and twirling and singing whilst enjoying a watery stroll with Hermione. Yours is better, I must say. Loving your story, I'll be checking back frequently.
Response from sshg316 (Author of Enraptured)
Thank you so much for your lovely review! Now I shall be picturing Snape doing a little "Singing in the Rain" number. LOL I am so glad you're enjoying his characterization, and the story thus far. :)
Thanks, again!
Simply wonderful writing. The story was well constructed and the characters rang very true. Great job. I look forward to reading your other stories.
Response from sshg316 (Author of Enraptured)
Thank you very much! I'm so glad you enjoyed the story, and I hope you like the others, too! :)
Response from sshg316 (Author of Enraptured)
Thank you very much! I'm so glad you enjoyed the story, and I hope you like the others, too! :)
Wow, I loved your story! Great job :)
It was the fluffiest fluff ever and I LOVED IT! Sigh!
I love how it starts with Luna and ends with Luna. I adore her. Great writing in this story especially the dialogue. I love Draco and Luna together and have been following Heart and Soul not realizing this came before. I look forward to a Heart and Soul update.
Response from sshg316 (Author of Enraptured)
Thank you! I fell in love with writing Luna during this story -- she's difficult to capture but so much fun! A Heart and Soul update? How about now? ;)
I love a great turn of a phrase and this line “I will not be left here alone in a room full of Gryffindors and one crazy Ravenclaw.” just sings. I am enjoying the story.
Response from sshg316 (Author of Enraptured)
Thank you! That's oen of my favorite lines. :) I'm glad you're enjoying the story -- it was my first multi-chaptered fic, so I'm a bit sentimental about it.
So many people underestimate Luna, quite forgetting that she is after all, a Ravenclaw, and now she has her sights set on Draco, Luna Malfoy mmm sounds good.
Response from sshg316 (Author of Enraptured)
Thank you so much for the lovely reviews! I'm glad you enjoyed hte story.Yes, people do underestimate her. I loved writing her so much that I had to give her a story of her own. lol She's too fun!
For a moment there, I thought Ron was going to end up with a face full of canarys. I loved Hermione's speech and Severus putting Minerva in her place.
Lovely and romantic chapter, Severus' love for Hermione, and hers for him comes shining through.
I love the parallel Slytherin, Griffindor Ravenclaw, conversation. Poor Ron, he can't seem to get away from his inner prat, can he?
Excellent twist in the epilogue! i also love the stories that show Draco in a better light. i wisk JK had gotten more of that in, but then it wouldn't really be Draco, would it?
Response from sshg316 (Author of Enraptured)
Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed the story, especially the epilogue. If you're interested in reading more about Draco and Luna, the sequel to this story, Heart and Soul, can be found in my profile. :)
What a lovely day, the first of many hopefully.
Bwhahahah! Clever Luna! :) What a wonderful story.
Oh, I loved this! I tend to really respect anything that includes a loony INTELLIGENT (she WAS in Ravenclaw) Luna Lovegood. Especially when she's written as believable.
And, as always, I love Severus Snape as a strong sure seductive man.
Love it!