Conversations at a Party
Chapter 7 of 10
sshg316Having just announced her engagement to Ron Weasley, Hermione Granger is shocked when her friend, Luna Lovegood, gives a prophecy foretelling that she will fall madly in love with her soul mate - and it isn't Ron! One man knows for certain of whom the prophecy speaks, but he isn't telling. Who could it be, and will Hermione choose the right man? Winner for Best Fluff in Round Two of the Moste Potente Passions SS/HG Awards.
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Chapter 7
Conversations at a Party
The music blaring from the Wizarding Wireless Network filled the Burrow, and combined with the brightly-coloured lanterns and party streamers, created a festive atmosphere. The small stone dwelling, with its haphazardly added stories, had been expanded upon since the end of the war; Arthur Weasley's status as a war hero had garnered him a higher position within the Ministry and with it a higher salary. Even so, it was a tight fit with all the people presently congregated within the Burrow's walls.
This evening was a special one they were celebrating the completion of Hermione's university studies. Hermione Granger was now officially a Potions mistress.
Hermione smiled to herself as she looked around the room at the people who had become her surrogate family. She had been pleasantly surprised by the Weasleys' offer to throw her a celebratory dinner, especially under the circumstances.
Molly and Arthur had been disappointed when she and Ron had informed them that their wedding was cancelled, but Hermione had been surprised at their level of understanding. A small part of her had feared that the break-up of her romantic relationship with Ron would also signal an end to her relationship with his parents, as well. After all, Molly had all but disowned her after reading Rita Skeeter's filthy lies about her and Harry during the Tri-Wizard Tournament. However, this time Molly had simply embraced her and let her know in no uncertain terms that she would always think of Hermione as another daughter, whether it was official or not.
And so now, she stood a proud recipient of her Potions mastery chatting and laughing in the midst of the lively party celebrating her achievement. The only thing that could possibly make it even more perfect would be if ...
The kitchen door opened and in walked Luna, who immediately located Hermione amidst the crowd. Hermione smiled as her closest female friend made her way across the room to embrace her.
"Hermione! I'm so sorry I'm late! There was a sighting of a herd of stampeding Griffleback Snorflunks and Daddy insisted that we investigate. Turns out they weren't stampeding but were more meandering," Luna said in a rush, her large eyes appearing even larger in her excitement, "but I came as soon as I could. I'm just so thrilled for you!"
Hermione laughed and returned the hug. "Thank you, Luna! I'm so glad you're here it wasn't the same without you. Have you eaten? Let's get you something to eat and grab some punch. I'm parched!"
The two friends manoeuvred their way to the table, and whilst Luna filled her plate with food, Hermione grabbed two glasses of punch. They chatted as Luna ate, Hermione laughing as Luna regaled her with stories about her "investigative reporting" duties for The Quibbler.
"So then," Luna said in her usual serene way, "I hid behind this really bushy tree I don't know what kind of tree it was, but it was unusually bushy, with really large leaves that had these strange brown spots with a red centre. I think it was red, it may have been more of reddish-purple colour ... well, that's not important, I suppose. Anyway, I was hiding behind this tree and I thought I saw something move and I heard this really strange sound 'wackawoo wackawoo.' That's the call of the Griffleback Snorflunk, you know. So I reached down to grab my camera it was around my neck only to find that somehow it had become tangled in the leaves of the really bushy tree and ..."
Luna continued to talk about how she had just missed getting a picture of the ever-elusive Griffleback Snorflunk, but Hermione was no longer listening. She had caught Severus' eye from across the room where he was speaking with Draco and Remus. He raised his glass to her, the smirk she knew so well gracing his lips lips she had yet to feel pressed against her own, although the bastard had teased her by kissing her cheek or the palm of her hand at every possible opportunity. She watched as the smirk eased into a small smile, and he cocked an eyebrow as she brazenly stared at his mouth. Realising what she was doing, Hermione blushed, inhaling softly and returning her gaze to Luna as she shook her head; she had blushed more in the past few weeks than in her entire life. She sipped the chilled punch, hoping it would cool her ardour as well as quench her thirst.
"So," Luna said, her tone nonchalant, "what's going on between you and Mr Snape?"
Hermione choked and sputtered, punch dribbling out of the corner of her mouth. Shocked at Luna's blunt question although she didn't know why, as Luna often exhibited an uncanny ability to see things that others did not Hermione wiped her mouth with a napkin, then grabbed Luna's plate and placed it on the table alongside her glass of punch. She pulled Luna by the sleeve into a vacant corner.
"I don't ... I mean we ... I've been ... Is it that obvious?" Hermione couldn't help but sneak another peek at Severus.
Luna giggled. "Probably only if someone were really watching you. How long has this been going on?" she whispered as both girls waved a greeting to Harry and Ron who were passing by on their way to the table of food.
"Not long," Hermione answered, her face aglow with happiness, "a month or so."
"A month!" Luna exclaimed softly, her silvery-grey eyes tinged with hurt. "You tell me right now what is going on, Hermione Granger. I can't believe you've been seeing someone for so long without telling me. Me!"
Hermione had the grace to look chagrined. "Oh, Luna, I'm sorry! I didn't mean to make you feel badly. Truly! I wasn't sure if anything was going to come of it, and well, with the prophecy and all, I wasn't sure how you would take my seeing someone other than Charlie. The very last thing I would ever want to do is hurt your feelings."
Luna sighed and then grasped Hermione's hand. "The prophecy does make it sound as if Charlie might be your soul mate, but whether he is or isn't, I'll be the first to admit that it could be years or decades before it comes to pass. Who am I to begrudge you whatever happiness you find in the meantime?"
Hermione's eyes glistened with unshed tears. "Thank you. Thank you for understanding. I was so worried you would feel I was slighting you in some way."
"I know you love me as if I were your very own sister, and I feel the same about you. Nothing will ever change that. All right?"
Hermione nodded, clutching Luna's hand tightly as she sniffed, then composed herself. She hadn't realised just how worried she had been about offending Luna until now, and she was overcome with relief that her decision to ignore the prophecy did not bother her friend in the slightest.
With a speculative gleam in her eyes and with a nod in Severus' direction, Luna asked, "So ... is anything going to come of it?"
Hermione sighed dreamily and dared a quick glance at Severus. "I think so."
Luna giggled at the uncharacteristic expression on Hermione's face, then matter-of-factly commented, "You're falling for him."
"Oh, it's too soon for ..."
"You are! I can tell. Look! You can't stop staring at him!"
A becoming flush spread across Hermione's cheeks as a silly smile emerged. Wishing to keep the conversation private, she surreptitiously removed her wand and cast a quick Muffliato.
"All right; yes, I think I am. It seems so sudden, but when you take into account that we've been friends for almost four years well, it just feels right. When I'm with him, I feel completely at ease completely myself. I feel as if he accepts me just as I am, and it's wonderful!"
Luna smiled widely. "I'm so happy for you! You deserve nothing less, dearest." She paused a moment, her eyes taking on a mischievous glint. "So you've been going out like on dates?"
A large grin lit up Hermione's face. "Oh, yes! We've been spending quite a bit of time together. We haven't been able to go out all that often due to my exams, but we've been to the Muggle cinema, and last week he took me to a wizarding museum in Edinburgh. He even went on a picnic with me."
"He did not!" Luna gasped before bursting into giggles with Hermione as they huddled together in the corner.
"He did! I swear it! Not that he had much choice, really."
Puzzled by that remark, Luna asked, "What do you mean by that?"
"Well," Hermione explained, "we've been going to lunch several times a week when I'm at work, you see and then a few weeks ago, he invited me to go with him to visit a Muggle art gallery in London. He agreed that I could pick the next outing, and I chose a picnic."
"And he actually ate whilst sitting on the ground?" Luna was struggling to grasp the concept of the rigid and proper man she had come to know sitting on a blanket in the middle of a field somewhere.
Hermione rolled her eyes. "Yes, he did. The point is he that didn't have to. He could have refused, and probably would have done if anyone else had asked him."
Luna nodded at that. "True. You had a nice time, then on the picnic?"
"Oh, yes. It was just lovely. I found an isolated spot at a beautiful tree-filled park it was perfect for a picnic and went ahead of time to prepare things as a surprise." Hermione laughed as she remembered the look on Severus' face when he had seen her "surprise."
"Here we are!"
"A picnic." Severus sneered at the sight before him; a pale blue blanket was laid upon the ground, and a picnic basket was set off to one side, the dishes having already been removed. Cheese, fruit, bread, a variety of meats, a bottle of wine, and two glasses completed the picture.
"Yes, Severus. A picnic." She beamed at him in her excitement, obviously delighted with her little scheme.
"I do not eat whilst sitting on the ground."
"You will today."
He pinched the bridge of his nose, his eyes closing in exasperation. "Hermione, I "
"You said I could choose the outing, Severus, and I have chosen a picnic. Of course, I could always choose Madam Puddifoot's for tea, if you'd rather," she offered cheekily.
His dark eyes narrowed. "Resorting to blackmail, Miss Granger? How very Slytherin of you," he murmured as he nodded his head toward her in mock approval.
She simply continued to smile at him as she seated herself on the blanket, demurely tucking her legs beneath her. "Come and eat with me. Please."
With a sigh, Severus acquiesced, carefully lowering his tall frame onto the blanket. He stretched his long legs out in front of him, crossing them at the ankle. His black attire stood out in stark relief against the pale blue of the blanket. Arching an eyebrow at her, he folded his arms across his chest and asked, "Happy now?"
"Inordinately," she responded, desperately trying to hold back her laughter at his obvious discomfort.
He rolled his eyes. "Go ahead and get it out of your system now."
She instantly dissolved into a fit of giggles, her hand covering her mouth as her brown eyes danced with mirth. Gasping for breath, she choked out, "I'm so sorry, Severus. It's just you look so ... so ... unlike you!"
"Yes, well, if you are quite finished, may we eat now?"
They continued to chat as they ate, and before long the food was gone; then dishes were placed back into the basket. The bottle of wine was half-empty, and the two companions were stretched out upon the blanket, each on their sides, elbows propped as they faced one another, talking about whatever came to mind.
Eventually, Hermione plopped down onto her back, her hands linked behind her head as she stared at the sky. Bemused, Severus followed suit and asked, "What are we doing now, Hermione?"
"Cloud-watching."
"Cloud-watching?"
"Yes. Look that one right there," she said, pointing to a large fluffy cloud, "looks just like a cauldron."
"A cauldron?" He glanced at her as if he thought she might be mocking him, but her attention was wholly focussed on the clouds.
"Yes," she answered, her tone solemn, but her face filled with humour. "Don't you think so?"
"Tell me, do you often resort to such pastimes?"
Her expression sobered as she considered her answer. "My mother used to tell me that I was far too serious. She often tried to get me to lie with her in the back garden and cloud-watch. 'Just forget the world for a bit, dearest,' she would say. Sometimes, she would manage to get me outside, but whilst she watched the clouds, I would sit there with my nose in a book," she said self-mockingly. "After she ... after my parents were killed ... well, let's just say I have a greater appreciation of her advice to enjoy the little things." A lone tear dropped from the corner of her eye, sliding down her temple into her hair.
"Such as cloud-watching," he murmured softly.
She turned her head to look at him. "Yes. Like cloud-watching."
They looked at each other for what seemed like an eternity, an understanding passing between them that neither had expected. She removed one hand from behind her head to tuck a strand of hair behind her ear, then allowed her arm to fall by her side. She smiled tremulously at him before turning her head to look at the sky once more.
She wasn't at all surprised to feel his fingers wipe away the wetness at her temple; nor was she when his warm hand found hers. Lying side by side, fingers entwined, they watched the clouds together, the rest of the world forgotten.
Luna sighed as Hermione completed her tale. "It's so romantic!" she declared, her own eyes even more dreamy than was usual for the eccentric witch.
Hermione nodded her agreement, her eyes once again seeking out Severus in the crowded room.
"And you're certain you have no feelings whatsoever for Charlie? You know, what with the prophecy and all? I mean, what if Charlie shows up and declares his love for you?"
"For the last time, I have no interest whatsoever in Charlie Weasley," Hermione replied firmly. "Even if he were to appear this very minute and pledge his undying devotion, it would not matter one whit to me. He would only be doing it because of the prophecy. It would be absolutely mortifying to have a man show romantic interest in me only because he believes he's fated to do so." She waved a dismissive hand. "Anyway, it doesn't matter. I'm with Severus now, and the more time we spend together, the more convinced I am that he's the one for me. I don't care what the prophecy says."
***
Severus knew he was staring, but he was unwilling or unable to keep his eyes from her. Lupin and Draco had cornered him the minute he entered the room, wanting his opinion on some trivial matter that did not interest him in the slightest. Dragging his gaze away from the object of his newly-found affections, he attempted to concentrate on the conversation at hand, but soon he found himself glancing in her direction again.
Hermione. She was radiant this evening, her happiness readily apparent upon her face. Her hair was down again she had been wearing it that way more and more often and her casual Muggle attire allowed him an unhindered view of her seductive curves.
Suddenly, her eyes met his, and Severus raised his glass to her in acknowledgement. He smirked, realising that she was as unable to resist his presence as he was hers. He felt his mouth relax into a smile as he watched Hermione's eyes drop to his mouth and linger there for several moments before her cheeks reddened and she returned to her conversation with Miss Lovegood.
So, she was fascinated by his mouth. Good. Severus was well aware that he had been tempting his little witch, allowing himself only to brush his lips against her cheek or the occasional kiss in her palm. Soon, my dear, he thought, watching as she laughed with her friend. Very soon.
His thoughts were interrupted when Lupin grasped his arm as he moved to pass him, a peculiar expression upon his face. "I'll speak with you later, Severus when you aren't so distracted."
Severus glared at the back of the werewolf's head as he walked away, his mouth curling into a familiar sneer. He absentmindedly raised his glass to his lips, grimacing at the sickly-sweet taste of the fruity concoction.
"So," Draco drawled, "what's going on with you and Granger?"
Inhaling sharply, Severus aspirated his drink, causing him to cough violently. Draco began pounding him on the back, completely unaffected by the Potions master's glare, his own patrician features smug with the knowledge he had caught his former Head of House unawares.
Once he was able to breathe normally, Severus glowered at the younger wizard, his dark eyes narrowing dangerously. "What are you on about now, boy?"
Draco rolled his eyes. "Oh, come on, Severus. You know very well that those withering looks no longer affect me."
Severus' face relaxed and he snorted. "You have been keeping company with too many Gryffindors, to be so brave."
A deep chuckle escaped Draco before he schooled his features once again into their usual state of indifference. "Too true. Of course, I am not the only one fraternising with Gryffindors lately although you seem to prefer the company of one Gryffindor in particular."
The Potions master stared at his former student for several moments, then muttered, "You are either far too observant or I have lost my touch."
The blond wizard simply regarded him silently until Severus heaved a dramatic sigh. "Fine. Exactly what is it that you wish to know?"
Draco's stoic expression remained unchanged, but his grey eyes betrayed his feeling of triumph. "You have not been able to keep your eyes from her all evening, and as far as I can see, she can't stop staring at you, either."
Severus arched an eyebrow in response.
"You're interested in her."
A cock of the head.
"She's interested in you."
A twitch of the lips.
"You're courting her."
A smug smile.
"She's letting you!"
A feral grin.
"What about that prophecy and Charlie Weasley?"
Severus scowled. "Charlie Weasley is not a concern."
"He's not? But the prophecy said ..."
Lowering his voice and leaning slightly forward, Severus murmured, "I am well aware of what the prophecy said, Draco. As a Slytherin, you should know that Gryffindors often fail to examine all of the possibilities and jump to conclusions which lead them to erroneous suppositions."
Severus observed silently as the other wizard carefully considered his words, certain that the young man would be able to decipher his meaning. After only a few moments, Draco's grey eyes widened in surprise, his indifferent façade slipping as the implications of Severus' words became clear.
"You!" he whispered. "Does she know?"
"No. Not yet. I trust I can count on your silence in the matter." Severus fingered his wand, a silent threat that did not go unnoticed by the young Malfoy.
"Of course," Draco managed to respond, his voice low to avoid being overheard. "And you actually care for her?"
"I do."
"And she returns your sentiments even with the prophecy?"
"Hermione has decided to ignore the prophecy at this point in time a decision that currently works in my favour."
Draco appeared to be puzzled by that statement. "Why? Wouldn't it be easier to tell her that it's you and not Weasley?"
Severus glared at the younger wizard. "Do you think I want a woman to come to me because she believes she has no other choice? No. I will make her mine on my own terms, prophecy or no prophecy."
***
Ron Weasley sat at the small table in the corner of the Burrow's new sitting room playing wizard chess with Harry. The party had started to die down, and most of the guests had either already left or were preparing to leave. Ron glanced across the room at Hermione, who was sitting with Ginny and Luna on the sofa. She seemed really happy, her face all aglow as she laughed and talked. He was glad to see her in such high spirits. Their break-up could have been a complete disaster, but the two of them had been friends for too long to let the end of their romantic relationship end their friendship, too.
"Your turn, Ron."
Ron turned his attention back the chess board and looked to see which piece Harry had moved. "Hermione looks happy," he said as he considered his next move.
Harry looked in Hermione's direction. "Yeah, she does. That's good, right?"
"Oh, yeah. If anyone deserves to be happy, it's Hermione." Ron moved a knight and then sat back in his chair. He watched Hermione hug Luna and Ginny before walking toward him.
"Hey, Ron. I'm going to go say good-bye to your parents, then I'm heading home," she said, giving him a quick hug before turning to her other best friend. "Bye, Harry. I'll see you soon."
Harry nodded absent-mindedly, muttering a good-bye as he studied the board.
Hermione laughed and bent down to place quick kiss on Harry's cheek. "Good luck with the game looks like you'll need it."
Harry responded with a two-fingered salute, sending Hermione and the other girls into peals of laughter. Ron's eyes followed the girls as they walked to the kitchen. It had been over three months since he and Hermione called off their engagement. He wondered if she was interested in meeting up with Charlie yet. There was only one way to find out.
"I think I'm going to go walk her to the gate. I'll be right back no cheating!"
Harry scratched his head as he considered his strategy. "Yeah, sure thing, mate."
Ron entered the kitchen as Hermione was speaking with his parents.
"Thank you both so much," Hermione said as she embraced Molly. "This meant the world to me."
"We're just so proud of you, dearie," Molly said, Arthur murmuring his agreement as he received his own hug from the young witch.
Farewells and hugs were shared all around, and the room cleared of all but Ron, Hermione and Luna. He waited as the girls said their good-byes and made plans to meet for lunch the next week. When Hermione appeared as if she were ready to leave, Ron moved forward; he had to talk to her about Charlie.
"Wait up, Hermione, and I'll walk you to the gate," he said, gesturing toward to the door.
"That will not be necessary, Mr Weasley. I will be escorting Miss Granger back to Grimmauld Place."
Ron jumped at the sound of Snape's familiar drawl the man really did know how to sneak up on people.
"Thanks, anyway, Ron. I'll see you soon," Hermione said, standing up on her toes to place a chaste kiss on his cheek.
"Uh, yeah, Hermione, sure. Bye." Ron's confused gaze swung repeatedly between Snape and Hermione.
Hermione gave a little wave as she exited the Burrow, Snape following close behind. Moving to the window, Ron watched the pair as they walked down the garden path to the gate. His brow furrowed in confusion as he saw Snape place his hand at the small of Hermione's back. Why was he touching her? And why was she looking up at him like that - like she liked him?
"And why is he taking Hermione home?" he wondered aloud, forgetting that Luna was still in the room.
Luna joined him at the window, watching as Snape, who was looking particularly pleased with himself, pulled a smiling Hermione to him and Disapparated. "They're seeing each other."
"What?!"
The blonde witch rolled her protuberant eyes, and enunciating clearly, repeated her explanation. "They're seeing each other as in dating."
"But the prophecy said she and Charlie ...." Ron gestured, waving his hand back and forth in front of him. "You know."
Luna shrugged. "Hermione said she doesn't intend to live her life waiting around for this prophecy to be fulfilled. You can't fault her for that. She has every right to seek out her own happiness. After all, 'love is a fruit that is always in season.'"
Ron stared quizzically at the loony witch. "Doesn't that mean ... never mind," he said, running a shaky hand through his bright red locks.
He was not swayed by Luna's words. Hermione was seeing someone, and not just any someone, either she was seeing Snape. "Bloody hell. We'll just see about that," he muttered under his breath. There was absolutely no way this could be allowed to happen. He turned back to the window, glaring out into the darkness. She doesn't want to wait around for the prophecy to be fulfilled. Fine. I'll make sure it gets fulfilled right now.
Pushing past a confused Luna, he left the kitchen and stormed into his father's new study. He yanked out a piece of parchment and a quill, grabbed a jar of ink, and began to write.
Charlie,
Get your arse to London. NOW! The greasy git is trying to steal away your soul mate ...
A/N: The Griffleback Snorflunk is a complete figment of my Dr. Seuss-influenced imagination.
Luna misquotes the phrase "Love is a fruit in season at all times, and within reach of every hand," by Mother Teresa.
Up next ... Hermione and Severus spend some time alone, and each has a realization about their relationship.
My continued thanks to my fabulous betas!
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142 Reviews | 6.45/10 Average
Lovely & charming bit of fluff. Really good for the soul. The best part is the revelation of Luna - utterly briiliant! Very clever.
Response from sshg316 (Author of Enraptured)
Thank you so much!
Hehe, I loved the ending- I'd privately wondered if Luna was just making something up at first, since she didn't think they should marry, but I guess since there was a real prophesy, it still counts. ;)
Also, curious why you chose to talk about the paintings in Tate that you did. Any specific reason for each one?
Response from sshg316 (Author of Enraptured)
Thank you for reviewing!You know, there was a reason for each painting chosen, but I wrote the story so long ago, that I'm afraid I don't recall the specifics. I know the Lady Hamilton portrait reminded me of Hermione, and the story behind it intrigued me. The others I think caught my attention because of the stories attached, but I can't remember exactly. I know I spent hours looking through the Tate Britain website looking for just the right the ones. lolThanks again!
Severus is making a real effort to open up, and Hermione ts responding, on to the Tate.
Looks like Severus will be going,"a wooing" sooner than he thinks.
Severus is not the problem, Hermione is not one to let go of a dream easily, and that is what the reationship with Ron is , a dream of how she wants it to be.l
Oh Hermione, you touched a nerve.
Luna is a very wise person, but I don't think Hermione will listen to her.
I love this!!!! XD
What a lovely, well-written story!!
Delightful story, beautifully told. I love this Snape, I've always thought of his snarky nature as a guise to prevent anyone getting close enough to find out his long held secrets. I think it would have made him lonely, but I always thought he would be a kind lover, not a cruel one.
I have thoroughly enjoyed the story, many thanks for writing it.
Wonderful! Loved all the high-jinx, even though the 'adults' were rather rude, lol
Ruh-roh! Oh Ron...
I'm in the middle of the story, and I have to tell you, I really didn't like this chapter. Hermione was an idiot! I don't see how she couldn't believe in her prophecy. Stubbornness, I guess? I mean, she's saying Luna isn't a seer, well, what makes a person a seer if not a prophecy? Like, does she think someon'e supposed to get a license or an honorary membership card? Does it show up in their Xrays? "Authentic Seer". I don't know how she knows for certain Luna's not.
And crying like that? It was John Lennon who sang "Life is what happens when you're busy making other plans". Sorry Hermione, but you DO NOT control everything that happens to you in your own life just because you want things to happen a certain way. She's very narrow minded in her perspective and comes off childish because of it.
Great twist at the end! Lovely, lovely little story!!
Such a cute story!!!! Ver sweet!
:)
ooh I loved this chapter being from Luna's pov
Response from sshg316 (Author of Enraptured)
Thank you! I had a great time writing Luna in this fic. I enjoyed it so much, I wrote the epilogue from her POV, too, and then gave her her own story. LOL She's so much fun to write! I'm so glad you enjoyed her.
Response from sshg316 (Author of Enraptured)
Thank you! I had a great time writing Luna in this fic. I enjoyed it so much, I wrote the epilogue from her POV, too, and then gave her her own story. LOL She's so much fun to write! I'm so glad you enjoyed her.
Great chapter. I need to come read it again.
Response from sshg316 (Author of Enraptured)
Thank you! This story was my first multi-chaptered, and I remember agonizing over this chapter, wanting Snape to be just right. I'm so glad you enjoyed it. :)
What a delightful story! I like your take on Luna. Too often, she comes off as either just weird, or a goody-two-shoes. In this story, she's still has a warm, open heart, but a bit of a crafty mind :D
Response from sshg316 (Author of Enraptured)
Thank you so much! I'm so glad you liked my Luna. I had such a great time writing her -- she's just so much fun, espeically when given a bit of a cunning streak. ;)Thanks, again!
Response from sshg316 (Author of Enraptured)
Thank you so much! I'm so glad you liked my Luna. I had such a great time writing her -- she's just so much fun, espeically when given a bit of a cunning streak. ;)Thanks, again!
I love your depiction of Luna! Who would have thought there was so much to the lovely Loony Luna Lovegood? She is a very clever witch, she is.Severus and Hermione have found each other, and Luna and Draco have embarked on their own journey together. The perfect ending to a perfect story!I really enjoyed this tale of love found and brought to completion. Along the way, when I read some of the discussions among the other members of the Order, I remember wondering if Ginny had written the wrong word when she wrote "sun." Surely the word could have been "son." And that would have made a world of difference! You see, I am partial to our Potions Master, and I want only the very best for him. AND that is precisely what you have given me -- and Severus and Hermione!Thank you for a throughly enjoyable story!! Well done!!Beth
Response from sshg316 (Author of Enraptured)
Thank you so much for all the lovely reviews and comments throughout. Luna was just so much fun to write; so much, in fact, that I decided to write her story. I'm still in the midst of writing it, but the first four chapters are posted here at TPP. I'm truly glad you enjoyed reading the story! Thanks, again!
Response from sshg316 (Author of Enraptured)
Thank you so much for all the lovely reviews and comments throughout. Luna was just so much fun to write; so much, in fact, that I decided to write her story. I'm still in the midst of writing it, but the first four chapters are posted here at TPP. I'm truly glad you enjoyed reading the story! Thanks, again!
Charlie is gay? Well, I certainly didn't see that coming. You are just full of surprises!I got chills when I read this passage:“Take me home, Severus,” she whispered.He leant back to see her face. “Home?” he asked.Hermione nodded. “Yes, to your flat, to my room, to the cottage in Dorset …. It doesn’t matter; wherever you are is home to me.”The scene in the library was brilliant! It has it all -- fear followed by confusion, followed by hope, followed by realization, followed by certainty. Wore me out, I tell you!Nice, nice, NICE!Beth
Response from sshg316 (Author of Enraptured)
Thank you so much! I'm really glad you enjoyed the conclusion! :D
Response from sshg316 (Author of Enraptured)
Thank you so much! I'm really glad you enjoyed the conclusion! :D
The unhurried pace with which you have Severus minister to Hermione's needs is perfect. He is sincere in his want of her, but patient in his pursuit of her, mindful of her needs and wants. His delicate treatment of her, of being sure that he understands exactly want she wants, is so comforting. With unthreatening questions, Severus helps her to voice exactly what she wants, the better to meet her needs, not to merely service his own. He is such a patient lover -- considerate, kind, unhurried, and passionate. The following passage shows just how much he wants to please her, to meet her needs and wants, not just his own:Hermione’s nervous babbling broke him from his reverie. “It’s been a while since I’ve been here – last summer I believe. Sorry about the bit of dust. Erm … this is obviously the sitting room – it is my favourite room in the house – and the kitchen is through that door over there. There is a small study over this way, and up the stairs are two b-bedrooms.”Severus covered his amused smile with his hand as he listened to Hermione stumble over the word. Perhaps it was time to determine her expectations for this holiday.“It is already three o’clock,” he said. “Why don’t we unpack and settle in a bit. We can go exploring tomorrow.” He was careful to keep both his tone and expression completely neutral.“Oh, of course! Yes, an excellent idea, really,” she mumbled, fidgeting with her hands. She raised a slightly unsteady hand toward the staircase, her cheeks a lovely shade of pink, before she hastened up the steps and into the hallway, Severus following closely behind her.“This is my room,” Hermione said, indicating the door to his immediate right. “Across the hall is the guest room, and the other door is the loo.” Severus said nothing; instead he simply nodded, the ornery side of him wanting to see what she would say or do next. He was not to be disappointed.“You may put your things in whichever room you like.” His lips twitched as she steadfastly looked anywhere but at him, the pink in her cheeks deepening to a flaming red. He needed to know more, however.“Exactly what is it you want, Hermione?” he asked, intentionally deepening his voice to a devastating purr.She appeared as if she wished the floor would open up and swallow her whole. Her eyes were screwed tightly shut, and her blush spread down her neck to the exposed skin of her chest. She took a deep breath and straightened her spine; she then opened her eyes to resolutely meet his gaze. “I want us to share a bed.”Well, that was better, if not quite specific.Wishing to ease some of her discomfort, Severus pulled her into his arms, gratified at the ease with which she came to him. Stroking her back soothingly, Severus buried his nose in her hair and asked, “You wish to lie with me?”He felt Hermione nod against his chest. With a small smile, he threaded the fingers of one hand into her hair, and with a gentle tug, tilted back her head. Tenderly, he kissed her. “I believe that can be arranged.”The way you have written their joining is perfect in its depth of feeling and in showing how much Severus wants Hermione to know she is loved. No schoolboy rutting for release, he is gentle and reassuring in his love making, and she responds willingly.A very well written chapter! Thank you!Beth
Response from sshg316 (Author of Enraptured)
Thank you so much for the lovely review! I'm so glad you enjoyed this chapter--I remember being so nervous while writing it, but really wanting the scenes to be meaningful, not just "insert tab A into slot B." It's so nice to hear that I was able to accomplish that. Thanks, again!
Response from sshg316 (Author of Enraptured)
Thank you so much for the lovely review! I'm so glad you enjoyed this chapter--I remember being so nervous while writing it, but really wanting the scenes to be meaningful, not just "insert tab A into slot B." It's so nice to hear that I was able to accomplish that. Thanks, again!
Why oh why can't Ron contain himself? *Sigh*Well, I think Severus will be up to any challenge!Great story!!!Beth
Response from sshg316 (Author of Enraptured)
Isn't that always the question? LOL Thank you!!
Response from sshg316 (Author of Enraptured)
Isn't that always the question? LOL Thank you!!
Dear Merlin, she thought, what is happening to me?Dear Merlin, he thought, what is happening to me?See how much alike they are? This just feels right!Ice cream and a date -- who could ask for more?Lovely chapter!Beth
Response from sshg316 (Author of Enraptured)
Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter! :D
Response from sshg316 (Author of Enraptured)
Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter! :D
I enjoy the little details you include in your narrative, such as: "He saw his wall clock reflected in the glass and smiled inwardly." These seemingly small details flesh out a story wonderfully well, I think.And I am so happy that Severus and Hermione have begun "lunch dates," and now they are on their way to Tate Britain. Sweet Merlin! Nice.Beth
Response from sshg316 (Author of Enraptured)
You have me grinning from ear to ear, I tell you! Thank you so much for noticing those small details! :DThe next chapter is my favorite, I think. I hope you enjoy it!
Response from sshg316 (Author of Enraptured)
You have me grinning from ear to ear, I tell you! Thank you so much for noticing those small details! :DThe next chapter is my favorite, I think. I hope you enjoy it!
I like the way you have written Luna's character. I always liked her, and it is good to "see" this side of her.Hermione and Ron's decision to end their engagement was sad for both of them, but I know, just like they do, it was the only right thing to do.Now ..... it's time for SEVERUS !!! I just love Severus the bestest of all.And I love this story! Beth
Response from sshg316 (Author of Enraptured)
Thank you so much! I really grew to love Luna while writing this story, so I'm so glad you're enjoying her. I had a great time fleshing out her character.Yes, Ron and Hermione just weren't meant to be. And it's definitely time for Severus! Woo hoo!Thanks, again! :D
Response from sshg316 (Author of Enraptured)
Thank you so much! I really grew to love Luna while writing this story, so I'm so glad you're enjoying her. I had a great time fleshing out her character.Yes, Ron and Hermione just weren't meant to be. And it's definitely time for Severus! Woo hoo!Thanks, again! :D