I had thought to mention in the previous review (but TPP had a spasm and ate part of it) that your portrayal of Minerva and Albus' tender passion was very stirring and authentic.I'm enthralled by the way you are building Severus and Minerva's  comfort with each other.

I don't think I ever thought I'd be reading Albus/Minerva lemons, but I think you've handled them very well and very believably.  But uh oh, did she disrupt Albus' Imperturbable Charm when she went into the bathroom?  I hope Severus didn't hear all that!

My God! It's a good thing you divided this chapter in half. Otherwise I think my heart may burst and I'm sure my computer screen would need a bit of cooling down. I don't think I have EVER read a more passioante and loving lemon for Albus and Minerva than the ones written here in this chapter. The sheer power, energy, and emotion described in this chapter is beyong believable.The way that Albus, at Minerva's insistence, reclaims what is his was very touching and endearing. I love how he was hesitant but only for a split second once he realized that hearing those words was exactly what Minerva needed to start her on the path to being a whole person again. And once he said it a few times, it took on a whole new meaning for him as well. He was giving her the power to heal herself while coming to the understanding that she was truly his and always had been, despite the turmoil of the previous days with Snape.Albus' gift to Minerva of the polyjuice potion and his restored hand brought a tear to my eyes. He has to be the most thoughtful and loving gesture but I think it served a dual purpose. Not only did it bring Minerva immense pleasure, but it also took care of some of his demons about not being able to take care of her needs properly. It was simply beautiful to read.I am most definitely looking forward to the continuation of Albus and Minerva's time together. Surely with as much passion as they've just shared, there's more in store for the next day. And I for one can't wait to see what it is!!!! Hurry and SEND US MORE ADMM!!!

I like the idea that Severus may have more than one abiding love in his lifetime, especially if they manage to come up with one soon.

This is fascinating.  I've had it on my to-read list for a while, and I forgot even what the summary is, so I'm reading it without bias or the forknowledfe of the summary.  I like it so far.  It's all so authentic.  I hope I have time to read it all this weekend.

Hehe, quite an assortment of visitors. It's nice to see Snape and Hermione getting along. At least Albus is taking some time off to be with Minnie. Good chapter.

Well, it sounds like that was an uncomfortable spell for Severus to be hit by, and in more ways than one. I certainly wouldn't want to be Pansy after she cast that spell of hers! A Actus Adfectus Amor Verissimus isn't a spell to throw around lightly, and this particular spell has consequences that she can't have imagined. I wonder who will be Severus's temporary replacement as Defence teacher? Moody wouldn't be the best choice, considering that he and Severus aren't on the best of terms. Remus might be a better pick, as he has taken the job before, he was a popular teacher, and he isn't as antagonistic as Moody is towards Snape. Moody might be a bit reluctant, too, considering what happened the last time he accepted a job at Hogwarts.It's good to see that Albus is such a help to Severus, because this is such a stressful situation for him, and probably Minerva, too. His relationship with Hermione is promising, too - considering her knowledge of magic, the "Know-It-All Gryffindor" might be a lot of use to him.

I would like to review to whole chapter here. I enjoyed whole part of this story and love the story line. I couldn't help feeling OOC little bit in those three characters especially Minerva. She was brave and she would do anything once she decided to do without Albus's approval or sympathy, Albus would understand and be patient when she needs his support as you have described in that part. But your characterizations are fit nicelyto your story and make things so real. As a MM/SS shipper, I enjoyed the part Severus worshiped Minerva and my heart was tore at the last part of the story she could not accept his feelings... she only offered friend ship. I am wondering if you think the sequel to this story how their new friendship would turn...we all know what happened in HBP after this.

I am looking forward the Epilogue how Albus and Minerva deal this issue, but please don't say it is Granger that you think Severus 's next partner ...I am sorry but I never ever like SS/HG, so I am a helpless MM/SS shipper.

I do not want to think Severus could take another woman short after this story and I can't help hoping Minerva could accept his love someday, even though it would be 40 years later as she had mentioned to Albus (hopefully it comes earlier than 10 years *smile bitterly*). I know it would be nearly impossible that Minerva and Severus become together after HBP...

Thank you for sharing this story.

Love the story.  I prefer the Severus stuff and somehow the Albus/Minerva sex isn't really something I want to read about more than one or two times.  LOL.  But that's just me.  It's all well written, however.

OK, I absolutely loved this chapter, the language flowed, the speech was perfect and the Severus we saw in this was more like I remeber him being once. Beautiful, keep going!xxStellaxx

Wow. What else indeed is there to say?xxStellaxx

Oh dear, must you torture me so?? I can honestly say I've never read something so wonderful that I wish I didn't want to read, but as you can obviously see, I feel I simply must finish what you have began. You're writing draws me in and surrounds me. I have trouble drawing away from it!xxStellaxx

Wow, I can hardly bring myself to review this because it's torturing me so. As repulsive as the idea of Severus and Minerva is to me, (to me, just my opinion) it certainly makes for an interesting story line. Albus and me are both going through hell! Great writing, and need I tell you to keep going?xxStellaxx

wow, this is heart-wrenching.  Poor Severus.

OMG, I could KILL Pansy Parkinson.Yes, I'm am extremely caught up in this story.  Excellent!  Excruciating, but excellent.

Wow, this is so painful.  Wonderful and painful.  Poor Severus.

Poor Severus!!!  Wonderful story so far.

Severus has more issues than a whole periodicals section. :-)

Loved chaps 9 & 10.  I actually read the last two installments via the web browser on my smartphone rather than waiting til I was back to my regular computer.

Poor Albus!  He is doing so well!  I do worry about what will have to come later in the year.  Obviously Severus is worrying too.  Epilogue!  Epilogue!  :-)

Whoever is Severus next partner really ought to send Minerva a thank-you note. She took a rank amateur and taught him how to be a fairly decent lover.  Maybe he should get a little therapy.  The man's got issues!I look forward to the conclusion of the story.

Oh my goodness.  Minerva is giving Severus lessons in lovemaking.  Talk about being a friend to the guy (LOL).  He may not need the Employee Assistance Program afterall!You do a good job of portraying the spells effect of manic depression.  He's on a continual rollercoaster of bliss that turns into black depression in moments.

Snape has practically decompensated with the effects of that nasty spell.  I hope Hogwarts has an Employee Assistance Plan, because when this situation is resolved, Snape is going to need some serious psychotherapy to put himself back together.  That or a whole lot of Obliviate.It is good that he has an ally in Hermione, giving him more support than just Minerva and Albus.

Well... what exactly can I say? I don't usually review risque chapters, as I never knwo what to say but I had to tell you this was one of the best I've read. Well done.xxStellaxx

Oh dear, I have to feel for Severus. He does seem in rather a hopeless situation. Your writing is fluent, graceful and rather like JKR's herself. I can only congratulate you and hope for more soon!xxStellaxx

Wow, those last few chapters were very well done. The interactions and the introspection were despairing and hopeful and well written overall. I'm glad that Severus got his cure and was man enough to apologize after treating Minerva like crap when they woke up. I'm curious to read the epilogue now and find out what happens next. Good work!

Very tangy and poor Severus.Excellent work. I'm looking forward to reading more.Truly