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One Vital Ingredient
cocoachristy452 Reviews | 7.21/10 (452 Ratings, 0 Likes, 281 Favorites )
A foul curse cast on Hermione and Ginny leaves them forced to search out one vital ingredient from their soul mates. Will Draco and Severus help them in their time of need? This is my response to a Potter Place Winter Prompt Challenge.
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Reviews for One Vital Ingredient
The stupid gits! Thank goodness for the timely intervention of everyone's favorite bald Auror! Great chapter.
Response from cocoachristy (Author of One Vital Ingredient)
Thanks Gwenog! Yep, and he didn't even realize it! Thanks for reading!
Why are men such stupid gits all of the time?! Arg!
Response from cocoachristy (Author of One Vital Ingredient)
Cause they are men!
This is really fabulous. I'm enjoying it immensely, but boy those men are idiots.
Response from cocoachristy (Author of One Vital Ingredient)
Thanks
Response from cocoachristy (Author of One Vital Ingredient)
! Yep, they are! ;-)
Men! Of course it is Snape and Draco...I'd find it hard to be angry for too long if one of those two wanted to apologize and make up. ;)
Response from cocoachristy (Author of One Vital Ingredient)
Oh heck yeah! me too! LOL! Thanks for reading!
I am so glad the guys found out. Grovel SS and DM!!!!Great story. I can't wait to see what happens next!
Response from cocoachristy (Author of One Vital Ingredient)
Thanks
Response from cocoachristy (Author of One Vital Ingredient)
! Yeah, they needed to! I am so glad you like it! Thanks for reading!
Very nice! I do believe if I was Jenny or Hermione, I would make them take a wizards oath to hear them out next time something goes wrong in their relationship.Looking foward to the next chapter!
Response from cocoachristy (Author of One Vital Ingredient)
LOL! Thanks stormi! Yeah, they should!
Grovel? Oh those boys need to do much better than grovel! What prats! I hope the girls make them jump through hoops and suffer!
Response from cocoachristy (Author of One Vital Ingredient)
Thanks
Response from cocoachristy (Author of One Vital Ingredient)
! They won't be forgiven very easy...
I would make those teo work for forgiveness, but just a little bit! *grin* The girls deserve more than a boring apology. Flowers and chocolates should probably be presented with the heartfelt groveling from the hubbies! LOL
Response from cocoachristy (Author of One Vital Ingredient)
Thanks
Response from cocoachristy (Author of One Vital Ingredient)
! Oh, it won't be easy! I think its time for some truth and feelings to come out! ;-) (Along with Groveling)
Thank you so much cause I've just learnt a new word tonight : grovel. And I'd really like to see the two of them do that. Honestly were I Ginny or Hermione I would'nt forgive before having a little fun (grovel seems very good for that ) and make them know THIS mustn't happen again. Waiting now for the next.
Response from cocoachristy (Author of One Vital Ingredient)
Thanks
Response from cocoachristy (Author of One Vital Ingredient)
! They will learn that too! Oh, they will be clear on that--no worries!
what a great story. oh I hope you make them pay.
Response from cocoachristy (Author of One Vital Ingredient)
Thanks so much
Response from cocoachristy (Author of One Vital Ingredient)
! Glad you're enjoying it! Don't worry, it won't be easy!
Oh this story is coming along so wonderfully. <3 I'm glad the guys finally realized their mistakes. Can't wait for more!
Response from cocoachristy (Author of One Vital Ingredient)
Thanks
Response from cocoachristy (Author of One Vital Ingredient)
!! I am so glad you're liking it! Yeah, now they can feel like scum! teehee
Wow, a great chapter!!! I hope you will let Severus and Draco stew a bit before they are forgiven. I know they where hurt and jelous, but the things they said and the lack of trust towards the ones they claim to love should not let forgiveness come easily! Poor Hermione and Ginny, not only attacked by Nott and Flint, but then betrayed and mistrusted by their husbands! I have no doubt that our two girls will realise that it was jelousy that caused their husbands misgivings, but what about the next time their "truly beloved" find a situation to misunderstand? Nope, Severus and Draco have a lot of forgivness to beg! Hermione and Ginny can't spend the rest of their lives proving they are trustworthy. S & D must grow up and realise what special women they have, and start to belive that they can be loved by someone who never will betray their trust. I do so look forward for your next chapter!!!
Response from cocoachristy (Author of One Vital Ingredient)
Thanks so much
Response from cocoachristy (Author of One Vital Ingredient)
! Oh, don't worry; I will! They will have to discuss that and what happens next. Thanks for reading!
~awaits next~
Response from cocoachristy (Author of One Vital Ingredient)
I am going to get started on that! ;-)
take that line from that funny scene in home alone 2 get down on your knees and tell me you love me.
Response from cocoachristy (Author of One Vital Ingredient)
LOL That would be funny! teehee!
Such cruel words enchanged!
Heh, and now Hermione and Ginny have something in common with Draco. *snort*
I really can't wait for the next chapter... the wait for this one was agonising. At least Hermione and Ginny will have their wands back so if they want they can hex the stubborn bastards!
Update soon, please!
Response from cocoachristy (Author of One Vital Ingredient)
Thanks
Response from cocoachristy (Author of One Vital Ingredient)
! I know, sometimes I get carried away with the angst! It gets better though, I promise!More coming up soon!
Wow, talk about trying to get a word edge-wise! They have some BIG holes to climb out of, don't they.
Response from cocoachristy (Author of One Vital Ingredient)
LOL
Response from cocoachristy (Author of One Vital Ingredient)
! Too right! Yep big ones indeed!
I think a couple of snarky Slytherins will be spending the night in Fluffy's doghouse, lol...Great story!
Response from cocoachristy (Author of One Vital Ingredient)
Thanks
Response from cocoachristy (Author of One Vital Ingredient)
! They should, shouldnt they! teehee Thanks for reading!
glad for the update!!!!!!!
Response from cocoachristy (Author of One Vital Ingredient)
Thanks DM!
Oh the angst! This story is addicting. I can't wait to see where it goes from here. Good job!
Response from cocoachristy (Author of One Vital Ingredient)
WOW! Thanks
Response from cocoachristy (Author of One Vital Ingredient)
! I am so happy you are enjoying it! More up soon!
Response from CharmedForce (Reviewer)
*does a happy dance*
HUH! stupid men, again if i were hermione i would have thrown copies of the pictures in their face that poppy took and said "now do you believe me i was almost raped because of you (insert swear word)" and that would have solved everything!
anywho i expect Hermione and Ginny to do some awful things to those wankers (well if i were the girls they would only be doing that for a long long time) Id take revenge. however i dont think thats a gryffindor thing to do (good thing I'd be a slytherin) so i doubt the girls will be doing alot of nasty things, but you better not let the husbands get off easy!
Response from cocoachristy (Author of One Vital Ingredient)
Thanks
Response from cocoachristy (Author of One Vital Ingredient)
! LOL They had their pride too. After a bit, they just said forget this. If they don't want to hear it, fine.They wont want revenge exactly, but they are not going to make things easier. Don't worry, they wont welcome them with open arms!
WOW!!! Talk about buggering yourself! Those boys have TONS of grovelling to do! I did like the way they found out though. It's the only thing that would have made it into their thick skulls. Poor girls. I expected to "hang" a little more (like another chapter at least) before you had the guys find out, but I'm not complaining in the least!! ^.^ Of course now I can't wait to see how they go about trying to make things better. Keep up the fantastic work you fabulous woman, you!!
Response from cocoachristy (Author of One Vital Ingredient)
LOL You're right
Response from cocoachristy (Author of One Vital Ingredient)
! They do! Yeah, it makes it worse that they found out from someone other than their wives I think. I had so many different things that I had planned and it would have drawn things out, but I figured that they would hear about it from someone and what I had planned would have taken too long. And my beta also thought that waiting would have made the situation between them worse, something that could not be fixed. I agreed. You made my day with your sweet review! ;-)
Lo how the mighty (and self-righteous) have fallen! What a sweetly appropriate way for those stubborn, stupid bastards to find out. Looking forward to finding out how the girls make them suffer.
Response from cocoachristy (Author of One Vital Ingredient)
Thanks, my dear! Yep, a very long and hard fall! Uh huh, I think it makes them feel much worse! More up soon!
Stubborn, pigheaded Boys! Why do they always get themselves into these messes by not listening? I know I just want to put them in a full body bind and hang them from the ceiling until they listen. I look forward to seeing how Ginny and Hermione handle this. Good Chapter; Great Story. Thanks, JoAnne
Response from cocoachristy (Author of One Vital Ingredient)
Thanks
Response from cocoachristy (Author of One Vital Ingredient)
! They are stubborn and always think they're right! I am so happy you're enjoying it!
Yes, let them sweat and grovel. They've really made arse of themselves.
Response from cocoachristy (Author of One Vital Ingredient)
Thanks! That they have and so they will! ;-)
Argh! If Hermione and Ginny don't smack them both, I just may! Severus is right, groveling is a good place to start, but only a place to start. Hmph. All of which translates to: awesome chapter! :-)
Response from cocoachristy (Author of One Vital Ingredient)
Thanks firefly! Well, Ginny did punch Draco! teehee They will have a hard time with the groveling, especially Draco as he's never had to before. Severus has had more experience, but that just may make it worse!SO happy you liked it! More coming soon!
Response from firefly124 (Reviewer)
True, Ginny did punch Draco already. I was thinking more of the sort of "I told you so" dope-slap once they finally admit to the error of their assumptions, but at least she does have a head start on that.
Why do I get the feeling Severus will find Hermione a more challenging grovelee than Voldemort? ;-)