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One Vital Ingredient
cocoachristy452 Reviews | 7.21/10 (452 Ratings, 0 Likes, 281 Favorites )
A foul curse cast on Hermione and Ginny leaves them forced to search out one vital ingredient from their soul mates. Will Draco and Severus help them in their time of need? This is my response to a Potter Place Winter Prompt Challenge.
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If I go there will be trouble and if I stay it will be double. Excellent song choice for this chapter. I giggled when Snape apologized to Hermione but she wasn’t done being angry at him. I think I have done something similar in my own life. Tee hee. I don’t feel the least bit sorry for Draco. Ginny does not have the depth of character that Hermione has. Draco is going to have to work harder to get past this. As well he should twitchy ferret boy.
Response from cocoachristy (Author of One Vital Ingredient)
Now you've got to let me know...Thanks! Glad you liked it! Yeah, she was still to hurt!Right, and also, Ginny's attack was worse, I think. She goes more with emotion where Hermione goes more with logic. TeeHee! I have something planned for them!
You did a great job with this chapter, it was very true in its presentation of all involved. If Ron is Smart he will stay away, but of course he wont. Up date soon please.
Response from cocoachristy (Author of One Vital Ingredient)
Thanks so much just Harry! I am so happy you liked it! No, Ron is a hot head, like his sister!
I like what you've done. I'm not surprised that Hermione is already starting to 'talk'. The nightmare fit very well with the victimization. If you need any insight there I'd be happy to help as I have post tramatic stress disorder. I am 'over' it but I can certainly give you insite if you need it. Looking forward to next chapter.
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Thank you
Response from cocoachristy (Author of One Vital Ingredient)
! Right, Hermione is more logical and works things out. I appreciate that! More coming soon!
Aww. It's gonna be hard for all of them to move on, but at least the boys are making an effort. And it's nice that Hermione can be rational enough to realise that she was doing the same thing back to Severus... although I'm sure that the potion had something to do with her relaxed state and her being more willing to listen. ;)
Response from cocoachristy (Author of One Vital Ingredient)
Thanks, doll! Yes, they now they are the ones who messed up. I can see her thinking things through. Yes, the potion relaxed her! ;-)
That was a sad story about Severus and Lily. I suppose Draco has an equally strong reason for his reaction, but Ginny's needs come first - she was the original kidnap target, and is now daughter-in-law of Lucius who put Riddle's diary in her life, so she has a lot of stuff to be afraid of. But Ron and Harry won't help with their hot tempers, which they need to control to be good Aurors as well as friends. Plus there's still all that newlywed adjustment stuff, including in-laws. I can see you've got plenty of angst ahead for our couples! Thanks for ending this chapter on a positive note for Severus and Hermione.
Response from cocoachristy (Author of One Vital Ingredient)
Thanks June! Yeah, but girls do that all the time I think. In my mind, she really cared for Severus, but her heart belonged to James.Yep, Ginnys needs do come first, I agree. Harry and Ron see it as protecting their friends. Its hard for them.More coming soon!
Another good one, doll. :)
Response from cocoachristy (Author of One Vital Ingredient)
Thanks, sweetie!
Hermione and Ginny told them! But I am glad that Hermione and Severus made up at the end. Draco is going to have a lot of work to do!
Response from cocoachristy (Author of One Vital Ingredient)
Well, they tried to! Yep, Draco will, but don't rule him out! ;-)
Well you said before that you thought of Severus and Hermione as the "more mature" couple and this chapter sort of proves that. (Although like most men he can exhibit his childish tendencies at the drop of a hat!) At least they've begun the talking. Poor Draco and Ginny seem to be a long way from that.Lovely chapter. Can't wait for more. ....but I will ^.^
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Thanks
Response from cocoachristy (Author of One Vital Ingredient)
. Yes, I see them as the mature ones--logical ones. I see Draco and Ginny as the emotional ones. Thanks for reading!
Another great chapter. It's a relief to see some progress happening for Hermione and Severus. It seems it will be a bit harder for Ginny and Draco.
Response from cocoachristy (Author of One Vital Ingredient)
Thanks firefly! Yep, something needed to give somewhere! teehee. It will be harder, but not impossible.
I have had a wonderful time reading this brilliant story all over again. It is timeless and I know that in a couple of years, I will revisit:-)
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Thank you so much!
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OUCH! Talk about screwing up big time!
Can't wait to see how you resolve this! Somehow I don't see the girls being too quick to forgive completely...
Author's Response: Thanks for reading! Right, they won't be ;-)
can't wait to see the gentlemen grovel....it should be quite interesting...update soon...i love all your stories
Response from cocoachristy (Author of One Vital Ingredient)
Thanks so much! I am working on it now!
Nothing quite like an insanely jealous man to really screw up their own relationship. Looking forward to more--to see if the girls turn the screws to the two of them.
Response from cocoachristy (Author of One Vital Ingredient)
LOL you got that right! More coming soon. I am working on it now.
Oh boy, do they have to eat crow now! This should be an interesting conversation, I can't wait to find out how it goes!
Response from cocoachristy (Author of One Vital Ingredient)
Uh huh they do! More coming soon!
Im all out of love I cant live without youuuuuuuSnape and Draco are pinheads. They deserve every minute of their suffering. And it they better be suffering, none of this immediate forgiveness shit! Write on girlfriend!
Response from cocoachristy (Author of One Vital Ingredient)
I know you were right, believing for so long!No, it's not and it won't be! ;-) Thanks for reading!
Serves them right! *evil grin*
But I trully and honestly hope that all four of them will be able to make this through.Severus and Draco should surely suffer, but please, make them redeem themselves.
Response from cocoachristy (Author of One Vital Ingredient)
Ahh, no worries! I have it all thought out in my head! ((Now, as long as my bunnie doesn't hop on another path... >;) )
Hmph. Idiots. I kinda wish you hadn't dragged it out that long, but it wasn't too bad. Silly men. What were they thinking? I hope Hermione and Ginny do make them grovel...
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Thanks
Response from cocoachristy (Author of One Vital Ingredient)
! LOL I had a few that said it wasn't long enough! They won't make it easy on them!
I just read all 6 chapters! So good. I love this. I really don't like Ginny/Draco pairings but I LOVE them in this story. They are so sweet. I can't wait to read more!
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Thanks so much
Response from cocoachristy (Author of One Vital Ingredient)
! Most my fics pair them, only a couple have her with Harry! (Love those bad boys, eh?) Working on 7 now!
Men are so dense! Severus could have tried occlumancy.SW69 is right, it will be funto see the apology. The gals are holding it together realitively well considering the cricumstances.
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Thanks
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! Well, coming up, we're going to see the aftermath of the attacks. Apologies coming up next, and the wives reaction...
You seem to treat the ladies' reaction to being physically attacked --well, not at all. That trauma alone should consume just as much of their emotions as their idiot husbands' inability to get their heads out of their respective butts.
Response from cocoachristy (Author of One Vital Ingredient)
Thanks for reading! At the time, they were shocked and more than a little confused about the husbands reactions. Then, that was foremost in their minds. They will have reactions to the attacks, I promise. I am not brushing that off, don't worry!
What a mess those two are in! I'm absolutely loving this story and can't wait to see how Hermione and Ginny react to their newly enlightened husbands (I'd make them suffer!).
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Thanks
Response from cocoachristy (Author of One Vital Ingredient)
! So happy you're enjoying it! No worries, it won't be easy!
It's toobad for the boys that their wives are no where near materialistic enough for expensive jewelery to work. For this, I think that nthing less that the entire first month's worth of late night feeding duty will suffice.
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Thanks
Response from cocoachristy (Author of One Vital Ingredient)
! Yep, expensive things won't work, this was too important!
" Not even married to the chit, and shes already got me sleeping on the couch"
That line is priceless. A very good start, I didn't want to pause reading to leave a review.
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Thanks
Response from cocoachristy (Author of One Vital Ingredient)
! I like when someone points out a particular thing they've enjoyed! Glad you're enjoying!
Open mouth. Insert foot. Two very insecure men and their actions. I look forward to seeing how the ladies react. Something tells me that they will be far more gracious than their husband's. :)
Response from cocoachristy (Author of One Vital Ingredient)
Exactly right Jade! Thanks! Yes. they will be not so forgiving at first.
I'm a bit surprised the women didn't put the men in a body bind.
I think the men should be literally crawling back and asking forgiveness that is if the ladies haven't already found a cute little four bedroom for them and the babies.
great chapter. waiting for more.
Have a Happy Easter.
Response from cocoachristy (Author of One Vital Ingredient)
Thanks P! Remember, they didn't have their wands!Oh, it wont be easy. They are all too prideful--one of the seven deadlies!Thanks! Happy Easter to you, too!