I didn't notice you'd updated... *sigh* again. Great chapter, and I hope all works out for Peter!

Love it!

this is so sweet and maybe a little too smooth. All is getting too good. something has to happen, something bad like a kidnapping or an argument... I left it up to you *huge grin*

i luv this fic,harry and pansy is an unusual pairing but i like it.plz update soon!

You must know how I love updates. Pickles sent this to me, and I usually wait until stories are finished any more because I am to impatiant to wait when I am into a good story, but I started reading dispite my self and got lost in it. Well waiting for another update. Thanks. Bill

Yes indeed, tying up very nicely.  Keep up the good work.  Is this one of the Winter Prompt Response stories?

More I say!  I really love this story!  I'm happy that you threw a little HP/PP and LL/RW in here too.  I love the plot and all of the characters.  Wonderful.  Keep going and I'll definitely come back for more. :)

First, a little niggling bug:

"shagged to him" doesn't make sense. 'Shagged him' would be the way to put it if you had to use the word 'shag'. But it is more for slang usage. I feel "slept with him" or something along those lines would have been more appropriate. But at least get rid of the "to".

Apart from that, fantastic chapter! I'm enjoying seeing more of the orphanage, and in so doing, getting to know Pansy better. Not to mention seeing that glipse of Severus caring for a child he doesn't really even know.

And Hermione and Ginny being that tad bit horny... *snort*... I can see some amusing situations coming about. Like patronuses (can't for the life of me remember if that's the right spelling, *grin*) being sent to Draco and Severus whilst they are teaching... lol.

I'll stop there before I start writing my own story *smile* I look forward to your next update!

I love this story, especially Severus and Hermione. I,m also looking forward to more Luna and Ron and  as you said , the orphanage.

I giggled when I read that Hermione had unknowingly been apprenticing to Pince all of this time. Rather clever little bit there. :) Very nice chapter, hon.

Ohh nice lemony bits spread about.  Lemon curd anyone?Funny bit about distracted Husbands and Hermione's attention test.

I always associate Take My Breath Away with Top Gun.  I really liked the chapter, and I can't wait to see where you go with it.  I like that Ron and Harry have found others that seem to be good for them.  

Well everyone seems to be coming together nicely, with a few bumps here and there of course, I am actually interested in the orphanage story at this point so can't wait for more on that end, the Ron and Luna portion is really not my forte' but it is nice that Ron has a suitable partner too I suppose even if I don't like it, I think it is the Luna character that turns me off, I never have liked her, not even in canon. If only the authors tailored their stories just for me, lol. Watching in slow motion as you turn to me and sayyyy,   lalalala. . .  I actually like this one for a change.

Beautiful!  I love this story and where it's going.

Ah yes, I remember that very brief period of time during pregnancy when you don't feel like puking and don't yet feel as big as a house. The sensations were fantastic, too bad they go away. May Hermione enjoy it while it lasts. Ginny seems to be having a rougher pregnancy, although she has had to deal with more emotional upheveal than Hermione.

Hmm, Lucius could use a charitable activity to keep himself busy, and the orphanage could use help, and Peter could use a male role model...  So Charlie and Josie eloped, eh?  That could make Weasley family dinners "interesting" when Draco and Ginny have to sit with them.  Thanks for the new chapter!

Lots of progress made with this chapter.  I wonder if Lucius will find someone; he's not too bad in this fic and deserves a chance.  I'm glad your Ingredient characters are still getting along.  Thanks for the chapter!  Cheers!!

LOL - I love it when "things" come together, too. Especially when it involves SS & HG. Why do they all find love so confusing? Well, Ron and Luna = Clueless and Cluelesser! But I think they go well together.

Oh, things do seem to be coming together nicely.  Yet another enjoyable chapter!

This must bee one of the best chapters so far, and thats saying quite a bit since I have loved this story from the beginning!!! I loved that you manage to give us some of all our couples, and I have never thought I would say so, but "Well done Ron"!!!! Finally he was able to see what a treassure he has in Luna. Harry and Pancy is brilliant too, I love to see what plans you have for the orphanage and what plans Harry has to help Pancy out. I hope they all will be able to help that poor boy Peter. Both Severus and Harry are comming from abusive homes and should have some insight to what Peter is going through. Great work, brilliantly done, keep up writing I will wait patiently for the next chapter!

Another great chapter. You are really good at showing the development of the people in your stories, not just main ones, but in this one you are outstanding!!!I can not wait to see how you will bring everyone together at the orphanage, it should be fun, and perhaps a little sad as well. because of Peter.Am looking forward to the next chapter.

When an author of a great story says 'things are tying up nicely' I get a little sad.  I am really enjoying this story and anticipating the next chapter.  I know when the story is done I can read it as often as I wish, but the anticipation will be gone.  If I hadn't said it yet I am in remiss, this story has entertained me very much and I will miss updates when its over.

Wow, what a chapter! You had me laughing, crying, and biting my nails. My favorite scene was with Ron ~ finally he gets it! Great Job! 

I agree with Southern ... "WHEEEEE!!!"This was such a great chapter.  Ron & Luna were so cute.  Their coming together was just sweet as can be.Poor Ginny and her hormones.  Draco is handling her well tho.  ^.~I like how Hermione got her apprenticeship "unawares".  Funny.  And her time with Severus was great.  How she tried to get his attention - too funny - to how she "REALLY" got his attention - woo HOT!But I guess my favorite this time was Harry & Pansy.  One can't blame her too much for "guarding her heart" but she certainly needs to try to get over that instinct.  And Harry had a bit of a right to be angry with her over that.  But when he burst back in and took her crying body into his arms??  -  GUH!!!!  So sexy and sweet and caring and all those other words.  Now I just can't wait to see what his idea for the orphanage is.  ^.^Another wonderful chappie.  Thanks so much!!

Oh , look! Almost everyone got some lovin' today! :)

The Luna/Ron you've created is wonderful. I enjoyed their interaction in this chapter, especially how Luna allowed Ron to talk through his feelings on his own. Perfection.

Again, I absolutely love your Harry/Pansy. I still can't believe you have me all atwitter about HARRY!  That's really saying something. LOL

And of course, our two main couples appear to be moving along very nicely. I'm so glad to see them so very much in love.

As always, I look forward to what comes next - especially with the orphanage and Harry/Pansy!

I have enjoyed reading all of your stories, but I must admit this one is quickly becoming my favorite out of all of them. Nicely done!