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One Vital Ingredient
cocoachristy452 Reviews | 452 Ratings, 0 Likes, 281 Favorites )
A foul curse cast on Hermione and Ginny leaves them forced to search out one vital ingredient from their soul mates. Will Draco and Severus help them in their time of need? This is my response to a Potter Place Winter Prompt Challenge.
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Sweet Draco, Thanks for writing this. I hope you'll finish this on time so that I could vote for it.
Response from cocoachristy (Author of One Vital Ingredient)
Thanks! I should be finished--I am going to try to post a chapter a week until I am done. :D
I'm really glad that Malfoy and Ginny came to an understanding.Humm, what would I do if I learned my DH had been part of a threesome?So, Lucius missed the final battle? I'm glad Snape didn't enlighten him as to why Draco married. That should come from Draco.Look forward to more.
Response from cocoachristy (Author of One Vital Ingredient)
Thanks Timestep! Glad you liked my D/G!LOL HG doesn't get the threesome! ;)More on Lucius and the FB later in the fic.
I think you've done a great job, sweets. I'm interested in what happens next of course. :) Muahahhaa
Response from cocoachristy (Author of One Vital Ingredient)
Thanks, my dear! >:)
I'm wondering about the same thing as SW, what will Hermione do with the info. she overheard? Granted, they are married to each other... but she must understand that he does have a past, sexually speaking of course. Being jealous of other women that have crossed his path, would be a tad, um, awkward.... and asking for trouble. He didn't ask who she had bedded, did he? (Yep, but it would add fuel to the relationship issues hat are bound to creep up, since they barely know each other.)Ginny and Draco seem to have passed one hurdle, though Lucius might be a whole other kettle of fish. What god awful things he 'might' say or do in front of her will certainly be of interest. Smells like a future meltdown between son and father is inevitable. Great setup up till now... wouldn't miss the next chapter for nothing. Cheers!
Response from cocoachristy (Author of One Vital Ingredient)
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Response from cocoachristy (Author of One Vital Ingredient)
! Hermione and Severus will talk about the threesome, but not until chapter 5. >:)!CocoaChristy!She won't jealous, per se... but she will ask a lot of questions. You know her!Right, D/G got over this first one, there is more to come and there is going to be a HUGE misunderstanding for both couples that actually won't involve Lucius...So happy you are enjoying it!
Response from mmesnape (Reviewer)
One HUGE misunderstanding that won't involve Lucius? Oooo, that sounds promissing... Wicked! Can't wait to see that. *rubs hands together* Bring it on, ladies! Cheers!
Well I am glad that the misunderstandings seem to have gotten worked out, can't wait for more.
Response from cocoachristy (Author of One Vital Ingredient)
Thanks wilder! More up soon!
I was rather disappointed in the way Ginny was with Lucius. She just had a few life altering experiences; the virgin, shy and all that... walks out with just a towel wrapped around her otherwise naked self and she isn't surprised, shocked, embarrassed. Here I Am Naked With Just A Towel On In Front Of Lucius. I could see her holding her ground if she had a bathrobe on, but to be so bold in just a towel was strange. It didn't even have to be Lucius, I should think any man other than her husband [whom she isn't used to yet] would have caused her to retreat back into the bedroom to dress. But she has issues with Lucius and he is her new father-in-law.
Response from cocoachristy (Author of One Vital Ingredient)
The reason we don't know how Ginny feels about it is because it's not from her POV. I've already covered that in the next chapter when she gets the chance to express herself about it. I am uncertain what more you could have wanted from their mingling though. Her speech broke off the instant she saw him, and she stiffened, as she does loathe the man for his past offenses against her. Still in shock over the awkwardness she tells him her name and then is obviously uncomfortable about his leer and flees the room to get dressed. If I would have had her either rage against him or running off right away, I don't know that I would have been true to my Ginny in this instance (she's been blunt and frightened at the same time as I tried to show with Draco). She doesn't mind saying what she feels (stating that it's not the first time they'd met), but she won't be too feisty either. Surprise to find him there had much to do with it. Ever been rooted to a spot before? That's the situation I was going for. I can only hope that you won't be disappointed in the future, but I feel my characterization is what I wanted it to be. Hopefully the explanation will do the reasoning justice when you read it. :)
I realized when I didn't see this chapter on Wednesday, as I had convinced myself it would be there, that this has become my favorite story to follow. I love stories with multiple couples and this one has good balance. They are in similar situations, but they are not the same. You are a very good dialogue writer, and for me that is a great bonus. I also was somehow not expecting the Lucius aspect of the story. That was a surpise and it has really enhanced the dynamics with/between the couples and I look forward to his interference. Thanks for sharing and I hope to read more soon. -- JoAnne
Response from cocoachristy (Author of One Vital Ingredient)
Wow JoAnne! Thanks! :D You've made me smile! I did want the actions of each couple to be different and I am happy that is coming through. To be honest, Lucius was something that popped into my head as I was writing the chapter. I'm glad it seemed to work! More next week!
And the rollercoaster ride continues! =DGreat that Draco & Ginny turned out ok. They both had reason to be upset but at least it was all smooth by the end.LOVE that Hermione and Severus have actually talked something out already. Big step for the two of them. But the "info" that he knows she "overheard" is definitely ammunition for a huge explosion. Can't wait to see how it all works out.And Lucius. What can we say about Lucius? He's the posterboy for "easy living". As much of a troublemaker as he's being at least he's FUN. ^.^Love it all. Can't wait for more.
Response from cocoachristy (Author of One Vital Ingredient)
*Throws hands in the air* WEEE!To me, Hermione and Severus are the more... I want to say mature? couple so I could see them actually talking over things. Moreso than D/G.You just gotta love Lucius! So glad you like it so far!
Hmmm, this is a nice story. I'm glad that Ginny was able to enjoy her wedding night in the end. And great time for Hermione to break into their conversation. I will look forward to how you set up the misunderstandings.
Response from cocoachristy (Author of One Vital Ingredient)
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Response from cocoachristy (Author of One Vital Ingredient)
! Its been very hard and confusing for Ginny, but she'll do okay. ;) Yes, Hermione was afraid she may hear somthing else she didn't want to!
Introducing Lucius in this brings an interesting spin to your story.
Response from cocoachristy (Author of One Vital Ingredient)
Thanks Septentrion! Glad you like my Lucius!
Response from cocoachristy (Author of One Vital Ingredient)
Can't wait for the talk regarding SS threesome past...Scheming or not Lucius was entertaining in this chapter.
Response from cocoachristy (Author of One Vital Ingredient)
Thank you
Response from cocoachristy (Author of One Vital Ingredient)
! That won't come up until chapter 5... ;-) I always like Severus to have a good friend in a story, and it seems Lucius fits the bill.
Draco seems like he will be devoted. Severus is looking a little more colorful now. Well, it's not like Hermione had any real options. Perhaps he has grown out of Lucius' negative influence.
Response from cocoachristy (Author of One Vital Ingredient)
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Response from cocoachristy (Author of One Vital Ingredient)
. Yeah, Draco already wanted Ginny when they married, so that makes it easier for him. Severus won't stray either! ;-)
Well, all I can say is "thank you" that you didn't have Hermione misunderstanding Severus' actions for chapters at a time!? I'm horrible at suspense and can't stand it when those two don't get along!? But, jeez, can't Lucius just go away and leave everyone alone?? No, I guess not.? ;) I was very happy to see the update ... and thanks for your work!?
Response from cocoachristy (Author of One Vital Ingredient)
Thanks Cerydden! Well... I hate to tell you that starting with chapter 5 (I believe) there is going to be a huge misunderstanding and some angst for both couples. Lucius is here to stay, I'm afraid! :D Glad you like it so far.
Response from cocoachristy (Author of One Vital Ingredient)
P.S. ((I LOVE angst--as long as the ending is a happy one ;-) ))
Prescription for Severus: eat lots of humble pie, give wife chocolate cake, footrubs, toe-kissing... and use a few strong shield charms for when Hermione hexes you! Time to ban Lucius from Ginny's presence? Grrr.....
Thanks for the new chapter!Response from cocoachristy (Author of One Vital Ingredient)
Thank you June! LOL Yeah, he's hoping Lucius was wrong and she didn't hear any of that! ;) Glad you liked it!
Great story. I bet SS is ging to be sorry HG overheard! Glad all of them are trying to make it work.
Response from cocoachristy (Author of One Vital Ingredient)
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Response from cocoachristy (Author of One Vital Ingredient)
! SS is hoping she didn't! LOL More coming soon!
Oh, that was wonderful! So many happy endings, and after such an awful beginning. Brava!
Response from cocoachristy (Author of One Vital Ingredient)
LOL! For some reason, I thought you'd read this before! Glad you liked it!
I saw, I read, I reviewed... yes, really. :)
Sorry that it took me so long, though. You've done a nice job so far and I'm looking forward to what you have in store for them next. I imagine that Ginny's gonna be in quite a bit more pain by tomorrow morning. Tsk.
Response from cocoachristy (Author of One Vital Ingredient)
Yay! You read! ;-) Glad you like it so far. Poor Ginny--and Draco I say!
Misunderstandings, the best way to start any marriage. Very good chapter.
Response from cocoachristy (Author of One Vital Ingredient)
LOL I hear that! Thanks
Response from cocoachristy (Author of One Vital Ingredient)
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Well I adore this and hope to read more very soon. As I'm actually fond of the pairing SS/HG I'm surprised to be interested with the Draco/Ginny pairing. I really wonder what would happen next betwenn the two of them. I hope she will apologise to him and get what she need from him ... and more
Response from cocoachristy (Author of One Vital Ingredient)
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Response from cocoachristy (Author of One Vital Ingredient)
! The next chapter is finished and with my beta. What Ginny and Draco do after this is up first in the next chapter! ;-) Glad you are enjoying them.
This is really good so far! Can't wait for the next update. :)
Response from cocoachristy (Author of One Vital Ingredient)
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Response from cocoachristy (Author of One Vital Ingredient)
! Won't be long now.
I know it's dating me, but of course I noticed that you're using 80's song titles for chapter headings . Very cool. Poor Ginny; at least Sev and Hermione had a reasonable wedding night.
Response from cocoachristy (Author of One Vital Ingredient)
Thanks! Yeah, they were 80's! Not sure the others will be though, I just thought those two really suited the chapters! Uh huh I felt bad for both Ginny and Draco!
I just love the pairing of two of Gryffindor House's finest w/two notorious Slytherins--esp. these 4 individuals. Maybe it would have been more helpful for the girls if McG cast the soulmate-reveal spell privately, w/o everyone watching.
Response from cocoachristy (Author of One Vital Ingredient)
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Response from cocoachristy (Author of One Vital Ingredient)
! Glad you are enjoying it. I don't think at that moment anyone except the girls was worried about that. Nobody had any idea it would be Severus and Draco! LOL
Excellent start to this story. Misunderstandings all around however -- I'm looking forward to reading more to see if that gets fixed or if more turmoil gets piled on top.
Response from cocoachristy (Author of One Vital Ingredient)
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Response from cocoachristy (Author of One Vital Ingredient)
! Well, I don't know if you've read any of my other fics, but with me, there is always turmoil! LOL Glad you liked it!