i hope severus is not going to sleeping with other women. scine draco said he would not do that to ginny

LOL!! OMG! On the couch already! I loved it!!

somebody actually took my challenge! And its cocoachristy of all authors! *faints* wow, taking on both girls, i cant wait to see where this goes. :) I am so excited for this story. you've done such a wonderful job with this first chapter.

Great start. I look forward to the next chapter.

Glad to see you're posting this already! Looking forward to more, as soon as it's ready.

Hugs to you!

I really loved that.  Thanks for a lovely story. 

Yeah! Keep up the great work!

Woohoo! A dreary december day got a whole lot better thanks to your story. Definitely one for my archive, when melancholy starts kicking in and I need something good, nice and warm to pick me up.

I enjoyed this story very much. You weave and excellent tale.

very enjoyable and quite touching at moments

cute ending:-)

This is an amazing, awesome story.It really kept my attention all the way through and I liked teh way the development of relationships came around.Lucius going through the traumatic death of his wife and the evolution of his person was awesome.And Peter was so Snarky!Slytherin it was painful. And an auror! Squee! (And I never squee)Severus naming their daughter his name when Hermione passed out was hilarious.

Poor wee Peter!OMG I feel for that kid!

“I took your broom and flew to the top of the castle and then jumped. It was an exhilarating flight on the way down.” “Oh, well, I hope you had a nice time.”Classic.

Aw. I kind of liked slimy Lucius, but agnsty Lucius is sweet as well.Pansy and the orphans are a really nice touch and using it as a motive to bring Harry and her together is brilliant.

Lucius is such a delicious scumbag.Harry/Pansy is interesting.Ron/Luna is awesome.

Why do I see all those boys getting called to the carpet for this?Hee but it was satisfying!

I am so happy this is the way this chapter went. Again, I am really enjoying this story.And the girls reactions were awesome.Go chickas!

The part after Kingsly showing up was great. I appreciate the way you wrote the Ministry handling things and the way Draco and Severus reacted after finding out the truth.The fighting between the couples seemed to drag out. If the boys weren't going to listen they're not going to stand around discussing why they're not going to listen. They're going to tune the girls out and disapear or one of the girls is going to blurt out 'your death eater buddies tried to rape us' instead of reasoning why the men should listen.Other than this little part of this fic, I think this is a great story with an interesting premise. I like the chemistry between the couples because they seem to have their own thing going on and aren't like each other.Poor Ginny. All the sick and no belly to show off :P

So there's a bit of squawking and the surors show up, yet a domestic dispute with public displays of physical abuse aren't even noted?

I am a bad person for thinking Big Bad Draco was way hotter than smoochy Draco.Lucius was awesome. Seriously awesome.Freaking fabulous.

silly inexperienced Hermione!Get used it, sweetie!

Ha! A great end to the chapter.

Oh my! I was so frustrated when I read this chapter. I kept having to stop and yell at Snape and Malfloy for not letting them explain! Fantastic job writing this chapter, and for that matter, the story. I look forward to reading the rest of it.
-Flierfly

Thanks for the update!  It looks as though ol' Lucius may become a responsible citizen after all (shutters at the thought).  I'm glad Draco and Pansy made up.  Great job!