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One Vital Ingredient
cocoachristy452 Reviews | 7.21/10 (452 Ratings, 0 Likes, 281 Favorites )
A foul curse cast on Hermione and Ginny leaves them forced to search out one vital ingredient from their soul mates. Will Draco and Severus help them in their time of need? This is my response to a Potter Place Winter Prompt Challenge.
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Firstly, I'd to apologise for reviewing so late, all of my bookmarked stories had been sent to my email, but no links were usable. Now, of course this is fixed.I have to say this is a very enjoyable story, I feel sorry for the couples not being able to court, but admire the men for insisting that things are done right. Single parent really do have it much harder than married parents, especially in unplaned teenage pregnancies. Although I am not saying people in abusive or unhappy marriages have to stay together either. I guess in a perfect world both parents should be together if it is a realistic possablity. Children need the influence of their parents. I also love how you are forshadowing the danger headding Ginny's way. I'm looking forward to seeing how that pans out. Good luck with your story!
Response from cocoachristy (Author of One Vital Ingredient)
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Response from cocoachristy (Author of One Vital Ingredient)
! Yeah, there was no time for courting, but they are getting to know one another. Draco is courting in his own way with the gifts. Severus just never thought of it. He will though. The men wanted to be married more for the child than the women, although Draco was already half in love with Ginny when they married.
Response from cocoachristy (Author of One Vital Ingredient)
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Response from cocoachristy (Author of One Vital Ingredient)
! Yeah, there was no time for courting, but they are getting to know one another. Draco is courting in his own way with the gifts. Severus just never thought of it. He will though. The men wanted to be married more for the child than the women, although Draco was already half in love with Ginny when they married.
Blimey, can't they let it rest? Poor Ginny. And Draco will go totally mental. Wonder how Lucius will take it?
Response from cocoachristy (Author of One Vital Ingredient)
Well, what the motive is is money. Not payback so much as $$$!
Response from Gardengirl (Reviewer)
And Lucius didn't want him married to her, but since her father is the putative next Minister... will his prejudice or his self-interest win out?
Great job. I love how feelings are building for both couples. I really loved the SS/HG scene. Can't wait for more.
Response from cocoachristy (Author of One Vital Ingredient)
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Response from cocoachristy (Author of One Vital Ingredient)
! More coming soon!
Eeps!!! I wonder how these two nasty Death Eaters view Lucius, and if they are friends with him. Hmmm, can't guess who they are. Thanks for giving our two fave couples a nice time, and please hurry with the next chapter!
Response from cocoachristy (Author of One Vital Ingredient)
Thanks Ms. June! More on the DE in the next... or possibly the next chapter after! ;-) Working on five now!
Yup...Sheena Easton...from a James Bond movie at that. It's a shame you couldn't have made more mention of spying in this chapter. *giggle*
Waiting for more...Update soon, please!
Response from cocoachristy (Author of One Vital Ingredient)
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Response from cocoachristy (Author of One Vital Ingredient)
! You're right! I didn't even think of that! Glad you liked it! More soon!
Hmm.. would like to see more soon.. and what the blue blazes is Lucius still around? I though he died in the final battle?
Response from cocoachristy (Author of One Vital Ingredient)
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Response from cocoachristy (Author of One Vital Ingredient)
, gonna upload today! No, Narcissa died, but not Lucius.
good story so far and i have noticed that all the chapter titles so far are song titles. can't wait to see what hermione does with her newly known info. i would have to agree that lucius is up to no good at all and is a big time trouble maker. he'll get his in the end i'm sure. i was also glad to see that draco didn't hurt ginny...would have been very bad of him if he had. poor harry and ron .... losing their women LOL.
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Response from cocoachristy (Author of One Vital Ingredient)
! Yep, song titles. I thought of the first, and then Sun thought of the second, so I decided to continue on with them. Lucius is a little troublemaker for sure! Draco cares about Ginny, and did before he married her. ;-) Harry and Ron will be all right!
Glad to see an update so soon! (Never soon enough of course). Great job with Ron and Harry's reactions, realistic without making them seem immature. The wedding nite for both couples was well done.The part where Molly redid the spell behind their backs made me smile.
Response from cocoachristy (Author of One Vital Ingredient)
Thanks! Glad you liked it! I worked on the Ron and Harry part, and I am glad it was okay, as well as the wedding night.Yeah, isn't that so Molly? ;-)
Wow, I just love it when I get introduced to new stories. I found out about it through my email and decided to give it a whirl. Very interesting, its too bad Ginny pushed Draco away, but I'm sure she won't die from the curse Malfoy's tend to protect teir own! lol I enjoyed this story very much and am very much looking forward to the next chapter!
Response from cocoachristy (Author of One Vital Ingredient)
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Response from cocoachristy (Author of One Vital Ingredient)
! No, Ginny won't die! What happens will be in the next chapter... Glad you like it! My other story, Coerced Salvation that I am co-writing with Southern_Witch_69 has been updated today as well!
Response from sinbad (Reviewer)
Thank's I'm going to check that out too!
I think Ginny needs some Calming draught and a good talking too. Maybe her mum? Or an older, more experienced witch. She won't be doing much 'binding' with Draco at the rate she's going. lolHermione and Snape... feels like a cat and dog trying to understand each other, but they obviously are not talking the same language. Mixed signals I think.Great chapter, looking forward to the next chapter. Cheers!
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Response from cocoachristy (Author of One Vital Ingredient)
! Yes, Ginny is having a hard time, but think. WHat if you were a virgin, have basically loved one guy (even though I know she's dated others) since you were 10, and then found out that you were going to die if you didn't have a baby with the one guy you have hated and loathed since you've known him? It would be tough! ;-)Yeah, Hermione and Snape's problem is that they think they know each other well enough to know what the other is thinking about them, and really they just know each other as student-teacher.Glad you like it so far!
Response from mmesnape (Reviewer)
I agree with you about Ginny, she is between a rock and a hard place. She loves one boy/man for what seemed like forever, but has to switch gears to adapt to another emotional/physical reality that was not her doing. Its a big step that few have to live, even less at such a young age. Hence my reference to her getting together with an older witch with experience that can help her figure out what to do... not tell her what to do. (I doubt that Ginny would like being told what to do in the first place.)(Gee whiz, I'm talking like a mom here... I hope I never get to have that kind of conversation with my own teenage daughters.) *cough* ;)
Lovely! I did enjoy all their interactions, quite believable from the strange situation they have been placed in. Am enjoying this and am looking forward to where you will take our two couples!
Response from cocoachristy (Author of One Vital Ingredient)
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Response from cocoachristy (Author of One Vital Ingredient)
! I am so happy you think its believable! Almost finished with chapter 3, hopefully it will be up next week!
Very different yet realistic responses here. I feel sad for everyone here. I can't wait for more!
Response from cocoachristy (Author of One Vital Ingredient)
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Response from cocoachristy (Author of One Vital Ingredient)
! It was a sad chapter. There are a lot of people going to have to get used to a very different way of life! I am happy you like it!
This was a good chapter, very realistically done. I like that this story doesn't try to make a serious situation into something fluffy or trivial. Also, Ron and Harry's reactions were just what they should have been. They see the necessity and want the girls to live--but can't be around it. One small thing though - I think spell-check failed you: in the sentance, "She pulled the covers up to her chin and made sure all of the candles and been distinguished." I think you meant extinguished...Can't wait to read the next installment!
Response from cocoachristy (Author of One Vital Ingredient)
Thank you ormirian! There are a lot of emotions going on! LOL! Glad you enjoyed my Ron and Harry!Yep, messed up on that "sentence" there. Gonna fix!More up soon!
Response from orm irian (Reviewer)
Opps! Too bad there's no spell-check for reviews! LOL.
I am glad we are through the part where Ron & Harry get to rant and rave. They get the girls in canon, cant we just kill them off in fanfic? Seems like Ginny has some apologizing to do and Hermione and Snape have a misunderstanding. Oh the road to love is never easy. Sighs. More 80s music chapter titles please.
Response from cocoachristy (Author of One Vital Ingredient)
:) Glad you like my chapter titles! I did feel bad for Ron, but I just don't see them together! ((The road is never easy in my fics, that's for sure! I'm an angst queen, as long as the ending is a happy one!)) Working on 3 now!
I'm happy that you're already done with chpater three, as I'm curious to know what the heck's happend since! LOL And sorry about missing those quotation marks, which I see someone's kindly pointed out to you publicly. Anyway, I adore this chapter, and you know my feelings on it already. Good work.
Response from cocoachristy (Author of One Vital Ingredient)
Thanks my sweetie. I haven't seen that review yet... sigh! You're the best!
Having two couples experience the same situation simultaneously is a brilliant opportunity to explore different approaches to deal with it, as seen with Ginny and Hermione. It seems to come more naturally for the Snapes, whereas the road seems rather rocky for the Malfoys. It almost seemed as if Draco is a closet romantic. It isn't his first time, too, is it? I'm curious about the morning after for both couples.
Response from cocoachristy (Author of One Vital Ingredient)
Thanks! The one major difference between Hermione and Ginny is the fact that Ginny is a virgin, and she has to have sex for the first time with someone she absolutely has hated the whole time she's known him. And while Hermione may not have liked Snape, imho, she's always respected him. Draco is not a virgin, but I could see him wanting it to be more special because she is actually his wife. :D
Whew! Quite the eventful chapter. The emotions!!! Lovingly presented though they may be, I sure am glad I'm not in the middle of it!! HAHA! But reading it suffices very nicely. ^.~
Response from cocoachristy (Author of One Vital Ingredient)
LOL! Thanks! I know, me too! So glad you liked my rollercoster ride!
This story is turning out beautifully. I loved the Ginny/Draco interaction. They seemed completely in character. Perfect. I feel bad for him, but its easy to understand her reservations about it.
Doesn't Hermione know guys always fall asleep after? lol. ;)
my only issue with this chappie is: “Yes,” Hermione answered. We’d like to see some wedding bands please. The quote marks are missing in the last bit. Other than that tiny thing, its perfection on paper. well, not really paper. oh you know what i mean.
Response from cocoachristy (Author of One Vital Ingredient)
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Response from cocoachristy (Author of One Vital Ingredient)
! RIght I don't think it would be so easy for her. I will fix the quotation marks, thanks! So happy you enjoyed it!
Draco added, “He’d planned to make some followers have children to build his armies. This was a way to ensure the women would go along with it—have a child to be raised in his service or die a horrid death.”Sorry, but one thought didn't leave me alone. Voldemort could never have used this curse to build his army. It can only be stopped by one single person, the soul mate. Well, what would have been the odds that this one person was a follower as well as a pureblood? Using this curse would either reduce his army by having the women die or having their precious bloodlines tainted.Oh well, I can ignore this. It is a nice premise for a story and I simply enjoy reading your stories. Therefore.... *impatiently waiting for more*
Response from cocoachristy (Author of One Vital Ingredient)
Thank you
Response from cocoachristy (Author of One Vital Ingredient)
! But remember, not all Death Eaters are purebloods. Snape himself is half. And I meant here that he didn't care if they were married or not, they had to reproduce with their soul mate. Of course, they would have to do that spell before they cursed the people--the curse was just to ensure they reproduced. Like, either you have a child or die. ;-)So happy you've enjoyed my stories!
I liked the way you've described people's reactions. My, aren't those people gifted for angst?
Response from cocoachristy (Author of One Vital Ingredient)
Well... I <b>am</b> the angst queen! HA HA HA Glad you enjoyed.
I feel bad for Ron, but Harry's really being a self centered prat. He should just suck it up and deal with the fact that Hermione is marrying Snape and that it doesn't really have anything to do with him.
Poor Draco and Ginny, coming at the marriage from opposite ends of the emotional/willingness spectrum and just not able to meet in the middle. Severus and Hermione's issue seems to be a bit easier to resolve but let's see how long it takes them to actually talk about it. :) Looking forward to more.
Response from cocoachristy (Author of One Vital Ingredient)
Thanks! I feel bad for both boys. It's so hard! Harry will have to learn to live with it though.Yeah, it was hard for Ginny and Draco was very hurt. More coming next week, I hope!
What a great start! I had not heard of this challenge and love the premise. I liked the mixture of a scared Hermione vs. the one that talks back to Severus. You did that really well. Looking forward to an update!
Response from cocoachristy (Author of One Vital Ingredient)
Thank you
Response from cocoachristy (Author of One Vital Ingredient)
! I am so happy you liked it. There were a lot of great prompts, and I may have to do more than one! ;) Yeah, in my opinion, Hermione is naturally bossy, so I tried to make her start, and then realize that maybe she shouldn't try that so much with Severus! LOL
I agree with SW69- this is a great start! I am looking forward to the next chapter. Very nice spell/ hex work.
Response from cocoachristy (Author of One Vital Ingredient)
Thanks so much! I am happy that you enjoyed my start!
This is both funny and sad given the situation.
Response from cocoachristy (Author of One Vital Ingredient)
Thanks Droxy! Yes. I agree.
Loved it! Can't wait for more.
Response from cocoachristy (Author of One Vital Ingredient)
Thanks! Working on chapter 3 now!