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One Vital Ingredient
cocoachristy452 Reviews | 7.21/10 (452 Ratings, 0 Likes, 281 Favorites )
A foul curse cast on Hermione and Ginny leaves them forced to search out one vital ingredient from their soul mates. Will Draco and Severus help them in their time of need? This is my response to a Potter Place Winter Prompt Challenge.
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Men! Jealous, stupid, arrogant, ignorant GITS!! They totally deserve it if Hermione and Ginny don't let them come crawling back contritely. Hermione & Ginny should let them sweat it out a bit.
Response from cocoachristy (Author of One Vital Ingredient)
Thanks
Response from cocoachristy (Author of One Vital Ingredient)
! Don't worry, they will!
Make them sweat, hell...they would have divorce papers before the end of the day. And damn sure no forgiveness ever!
Response from cocoachristy (Author of One Vital Ingredient)
Wow! You would be beyond pissed I'd say! teehee
Let the grovelling commence! Hehe..
Response from cocoachristy (Author of One Vital Ingredient)
And they're off!
Wel, how the mighty have fallen. They both should be horsewhipped or hexed into next year. However, since they are slytherines I suspect they'll crawl back and slither their way into forgiveness. Great chapter except for 1 thing. Sexual assault victims tend to have negative feeling and emotions, crying jags, depression fearfulnes and the like. I know they are 'in cannon' but the situation wasn't. But it was still a very enjoyable chapter, if you wanted to there is such a thing as delayed reactions, but that is for you to decide. Great work, I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
Response from cocoachristy (Author of One Vital Ingredient)
Thanks
Response from cocoachristy (Author of One Vital Ingredient)
! Yep, fallen hard! Yeah, they'll slyther back in--eventually. Maybe I will have some sort of delayed reaction... Thanks.
That's what they (the men) get for not listening. A little groveling will do them good.
Response from cocoachristy (Author of One Vital Ingredient)
Exactly! I agee! ;-) thanks for reading!
Well, one thing is certain...Slytherin House is represented by a serpent for a very good reason! Whenever a Serpent is feeling insecure or threatened, that's when the fangs really come out and bite right down to the bone. Frankly, my sympathies lie entirely with Ginny and Hermione at this point (although Ginny went just a tad too far in my book by punching Draco) -- and if I were Hermione, I'd be having serious second thoughts about staying with Severus (Slytherin Sex God or no). He'd better prepare to do some very serious groveling even if he simply wants to get back in Hermione's good graces, never mind her bed!
Response from cocoachristy (Author of One Vital Ingredient)
You are exactly right,
Response from cocoachristy (Author of One Vital Ingredient)
! Thank you! They do strick out, fangs and all! They won't readily accept them back. Some soul searching on all sides will happen.
I'd make them sweat bullets! Bucketfuls! Get'im, Hermie! Get'im, Ginny! Rah, rah, rah! *evil grin*Let's see how this mess plays out in the next chapter. Cheers!
Response from cocoachristy (Author of One Vital Ingredient)
Don't worry
Response from cocoachristy (Author of One Vital Ingredient)
! It won't be easy! More up soon!
Oh they definately need to eat some crow, I would make them suffer a little bit, but not too much cause I want them together. Can't wait for the next update.
Response from wilder0511 (Reviewer)
Ok, I don't know how I got two of these on here. I followed the return to story instructions and don't think I hit the back button. You can either delete it or count it as I like your story so much I need to say it twice, lol
Response from cocoachristy (Author of One Vital Ingredient)
Hey, the more the merrier I say! teehee
Oh they definately need to eat some crow, I would make them suffer a little bit, but not too much cause I want them together. Can't wait for the next update.
Response from cocoachristy (Author of One Vital Ingredient)
Thanks! Yep, they do! They will suffer and feel guilty, as they should! More up soon!
At least they know the truth now... after they made total arses out of themselves.
Perhaps it's time to woo their wives with chocolate and expensive jewellery... and lots of it. ;)
Response from cocoachristy (Author of One Vital Ingredient)
True, very true!Yep, SOMETHING! teehee Thank, my dear!
I agree with Sun. What berks. I'm glad the girls had the spines to say they weren't going to put up with that shit. Now I hope that they aren't too understanding. I don't want to see them go easy on the guys. No matter how understandable the guys' points of view are, that doesn't excuse the things they said. It may justify their innitial reaction, but it doesn't excuse refusing to listen or the horrible things they said and the way they treated the girls.
I like my heroines with willpower, damnit! lol I don't want to see the men forgiven too easily. Eventually, yes, but the first time they try to apologize, maybe even a few after that, the girls should turn them out on their arses. lol Then they can see how it feels when someone refuses to listen to a word they say.
Awesome chapter! You've got me all worked up, and I can't wait for the next installment. Get to work, missy!
:-D ~SB
Response from cocoachristy (Author of One Vital Ingredient)
Thanks, doll! They are berks! teehee They wont put up with it, and they will (eventually) talk it out. The women will have willpower. They stand up for themselves. It won't be easy for the men.Glad you liked it! More up soon!You too! I want another chapter of your fic!**taps foot impatiently**
Woo hoo! So now they know the truth - the dunderheads. I agree with Southern - they deserve to sweat a bit. I would guess the ladies' reaction will be directly related to how their husbands handle this. Things should go much easier on them if they are open and honest about why they flew off the handle like they did.
Let the groveling commence! :)
Response from cocoachristy (Author of One Vital Ingredient)
Thanks
Response from cocoachristy (Author of One Vital Ingredient)
! They will sweat, don't fret! They won't fly off this time, they do feel very guilty. As they should!
Yes it is a fine mess. Oh the guilt and the anger that will ensue!
Response from cocoachristy (Author of One Vital Ingredient)
You're exactly right! It won't be too much longer, SW has it now!
ut oh! Excellent story! Love the pacing and suspense and tension. SS/HG was very sweet. Love it love it love it.
Response from cocoachristy (Author of One Vital Ingredient)
Thanks so much! It means a lot to me coming from an author I respect! Glad you're enjoying it!
Oh the twists, you had me very scared with Draco. SS is in deep doo-doo. LOL
Response from cocoachristy (Author of One Vital Ingredient)
Thanks, Droxy! I wanted to try something different! ;-) Yeah, Hermione does not like the idea of a threesome! teehee
This chapter is extremely heart wrenching. You really had Ginny pulling at my heart. And Ron, the poor boy is really devastated and I don't see him being a prat at all with his behavior.
Response from cocoachristy (Author of One Vital Ingredient)
Thank you! I didn't want to make Ron a prat this time. I wanted eveyone to feel bad for each of the characters here. Ron loves Hermione. She loves him too, but she will discover its not the kind of love that it would take to make a marriage work! Thanks for reading!
Oh, what a fine mess. Draco and Severus are being pricks. But, if you look at their personalities, this is feasible... unfortunately. Hopefully they'll be able to work through things soon. :)
Response from cocoachristy (Author of One Vital Ingredient)
Thanks my dear! They will eventually--but not in chapter six! LOL You know me!
do i hope that your will not going to detail in chapter 5 on what hermione and severus talk about threesomes. and severus better not go see that slut that lucies is see after he see what hermione dose in that chapter you told me about.
Response from cocoachristy (Author of One Vital Ingredient)
No don't worry. He won't. No details about it either--rest assured! You can keep on reading.
*giggle* I can guess when you were growing up. *snicker* Love the 80s song titles you are using as chapter titles.
Enjoying this thoroughly...can't wait to see the fireworks next time Severus and Hermione are together.
Now...UPDATE!!!
Response from cocoachristy (Author of One Vital Ingredient)
Uh huh--you guessed right! *smirk* I am so happy you like it
Response from cocoachristy (Author of One Vital Ingredient)
! She won't mention it... in chapter 4! :D More coming next week!
Tina Turner, Air Supply, and J. Geils band. Love the chapter titles and the story can't wait to read more
Response from cocoachristy (Author of One Vital Ingredient)
Thanks vicki! I am so happy you're enjoying my fic!
glad Draco & Ginny 'kissed & made up.' Does Severus care that Hermione heard him & Malfoy talking about their past sexual exploits?? Will he apologize? I hope so. An Angered Hermione is no small threat And Malfoy Sr.--
Response from cocoachristy (Author of One Vital Ingredient)
Thanks
Response from cocoachristy (Author of One Vital Ingredient)
! Well, Hermione won't be angry really, it happened before her. I think she thinks it's digusting more than anything. They won't actually speak about it until chapter 5 though!Glad you liked my Lucius!
I love happy endings! I know I read this story before, and probably reviewed when it was first done, but I still enjoyed revisiting!
Response from cocoachristy (Author of One Vital Ingredient)
Thanks! Me too, gotta have 'em! Glad you enjoyed the revisit!
Response from cocoachristy (Author of One Vital Ingredient)
Thanks! Me too, gotta have 'em! Glad you enjoyed the revisit!
Definately a fine mess! I loved how they jumped to conclusions, leaped in an arguement and came up with all the wrong conclusions!
Response from cocoachristy (Author of One Vital Ingredient)
Teehee! Uh huh! You know me--queen of angst! ;-)
Response from cocoachristy (Author of One Vital Ingredient)
Teehee! Uh huh! You know me--queen of angst! ;-)
I had to chuckle at Hermione's reaction to the conversation, it was funny.
Response from cocoachristy (Author of One Vital Ingredient)
LOL I know! Could you imagine?
Response from cocoachristy (Author of One Vital Ingredient)
LOL I know! Could you imagine?
I remember this story! Even better, I'm enjoying it again for another read.
Response from cocoachristy (Author of One Vital Ingredient)
Thanks! I do that too, re-read fics I liked but haven't read in awhile! ;-)
Response from cocoachristy (Author of One Vital Ingredient)
Thanks! I do that too, re-read fics I liked but haven't read in awhile! ;-)